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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

nayak4118

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Lucifer naag aur bahut sare log court ke bahar hi khade the kyuki unhe pata tha ki kahi se bhi hamla ho sakta hai aur aise time me dono ladkiyo ko akela chhodna kahi ki bhi samjhdari nahi hai

Vaise to mansi ne apne baap se bol kar kafi acha intezaam karva diya tha lekin fir bhi lucifer ko trust nahi tha kisi par bhi aur jab baat madhuri ki ho to bilkul bhi nahi

Madhuri ko inaaya ne kaise bhi karke convince kiya aur usne jada mana bhi nahi kiya kyuki apne bete se badh kar kya tha uske liye?
Aur kuch had tak vo lucifer ke behavior se familiar bhi thi

Eska ye matlab nahi tha ki vo hurt nahi thi
Usse bahut bada sadma laga tha us kiss ki vajah se aur vo most of the time khud ko hi blame kar rahi thi ki agar vo aage se lucifer ko kiss nahi karti to baat etni jada badhti hi nahi

Vaise uska ye sochna bhi galat nahi tha agar vo khud se kiss nahi karti to lucifer bhi samne se kuch nahi karta
Ye baat to hai ki vo khub flirting karta tha lekin eska ye matlab nahi tha ki vo madhuri ke sath jabardasti karta

Us time to jab madhuri ke honth uske hontho se mile to vo kho gaya jiske bahut sare reason the

Lekin ha vo aage se kabhi aisa nahi karta

Madhuri kafi guilt me bhi thi ki uski vajah se ek bahut pyaara rishta tootne ki kagaar par aagya
Ab lucifer uske ghar nahi aayega, alia se nahi milega, uske bete se jaan pahchan nahi bana payega
Aur madhuri ko faltu ki baaton se hasa nahi payega

Pata nahi kitne hi khayal uske dimag me ghum rahe the

Aur vo fasla le nahi pa rahi thi
Ajeeb duvida me fas gaye thi vo

Khud se lucifer ko face kaise kare aur samne se lucifer aayega nahi

Etna sab hone ke baad bhi kahi na kahi vo lucifer ke vapas aane ki umeed lagaye bathi thi aur teen thapado ko marne ke liye bahut jada dukhi thi

Vo yehi soch rahi thi ki lucifer to humesha se aisa hi tha, usne kabhi fake banane ki kosis nahi ki aur jaise me us par hath uthana usko apni life ki ek bahut badi galti lag rahi thi
Specially last wala thapad jo kiss ke baad mara tha madhuri ne

Madhuri ye sab soch soch kar apna mood kharab kar rahi thi jab inaaya aaye uske pass

Ek second ke liye to madhuri ko laga ki lucifer ne bejha hai usko aur actually me to lucifer ne hi bejha tha lekin fir uske dimag me aaya ki lucifer kyu hi inaaya ko ye sab bataega?

Jab inaaya ne bola ki court chalna hai aur lucifer kyu nahi ja sakta uske liye koe bahana laga diya ki vo direct vahi milega

Madhuri bhi jaldi hi maan gaye aakhir beta ka moh hi aisa hai kaise nahi manti

Inaaya hi jaldi se muskaan ko leke commissioner ke sath court pahuch gaye

Yaha dekho inaaya ke partner hone ke kya kya fayde hai
Commissioner ek second me maan gaya usse le jane ke liye

Lekin bich me hi commissioner ne inaaya ko vapas bejh diya kyuki lucifer ne mansi ko sikhaya aur mansi ne apne baap ko ki etne badi ladki ka vaha hone uske liye safe nahi hai

Inaaya bhi samjh gaye ki ye sab lucifer ka hi plan hai esliye vo bhi jada nakhre nahi karte hue utar gaye

Ab court me pahuche madhuri, muskaan, commissioner aur kuch police wale

Muskaan abhi thodi dari hue thi lekin madhuri usse bahut ache se sambhal rahi thi
Experience bolta hai bacho ke waqt par vohi abhi ho raha tha

Agar madhuri ki jagah agar mansi ya koe aur hota to sayad muskaan ko etne ache se nahi sambhal pata

Lucifer ne baki to sari fielding laga hi rakhi thi
Muskaan ne gavahi de di aur court ne apna fasla madhuri ke paks me suna diya aur ye bhi bola ki madhuri ke ex husband par alag se child trafficking ka case darj kiya jaye aur usse turant giraft me liya jaye

Madhuri ko uska beta bhi mil gaya aur sab kuch bahut shant shant sa lag raha tha

Madhuri ki aankhon me aashu the bas aur uske siskiyo ki aawaz hi gunj rahi thi

Aur vo bhigi aankhon se apne bete ko dekhne ka intezaar kar rahi thi
Ek ek second aisi lag rahi thi usse jaise ek ek janam beet gaya ho us ek second me

Aisi hi to thadap hoti hai ek maa ki apne bacho ke liye

Rahul( madhuri ka beta) ko court lane me kafi time lag gaya tha kyuki vo ghar me kad tha
Police bejhni padi thi usse vaha se lane me

Tab tak madhuri ek hi pose me bathi bathi gate ko dekhti rahi ki kab aayega uska beta

Aur jab usk intezaar khatam hua aur samne Rahul khada dikha to uske sareer ne jawab de diya

Uthane ki himmat hi nahi bachi uske ander

Rahul hi mummy mummy chhilate hue uski bahoo me sama gaya

Madhuri ko to jaise viswas hi nahi ho raha tha ki uska beta uske etne pass hai
Rahul- mummy aap aagaye?
Maine bahut intezaar kiya aapka
Ab mujhe chhod kar kabhi mat jana
Mujhe aapke pass hi rahna hai
Vo bhi rote hue bol raha tha aur madhuri rote hue es moment ko feel kar rahi thi

Jab vo thoda hosh me aaye to rahul ka masoom chehra dekhne lagi aur fir uske pure chehre ko chumne lagi

Aaj to usse sare jahaan ki khushiya mil gaye thi

Kuch hi log the vaha jo ye sab dekh rahe the jinme muskaan bhi sameel thi jo door khadi muskurate hue ek maa ko apne bete se milte dekh rahi thi

Sayad es pal ka sabse jada ahsaas muskaan ko hi tha usse hi pata tha family ka milna kitna important hota hai kisi ki life me

Bahut der tak en dono ka aisa hi chalta raha fir commissioner ne aakar bola ki chalna chahiye sehar door hai yaha se

Tab unhe hosh aaya aur jab khade hue to muskaan door khadi dikhae di

Madhuri ne ishare se muskaan ko apne pass bulaya aur

Madhuri- ye muskaan hai
Eski hi vajah se aaj tum mujh se mil sake ho aur aaj se tum esse didi bologe aur tum mujhe maa(muskaan se)

Muskaan bachi jarur thi lekin samjhdar bahut vo ek second me es line ka matlab samjh gaye aur madhuri ke galle lag gaye

Muskaan rote hue thank you so much
Thank you so much aunty
Madhuri uske balo par hath firate hue aunty nahi maa aur main meri beti ko rote hue nahi dekh sakti esliye ab se koe rona dhona nahi

Muskaan- aur main apni maa ko rote nahi dekh sakti aur madhuri ke aashu saaf karne lagti hai

Uske baad tino vaha se nikal jate hai

Bahar naag mil jata hai to vo commissioner ko bol kar ek teeno ko apne sath le jata hai

Madhuri ki najar abhi bhi lucifer ko dund rahi thi lekin lucifer usse kahi dikh nahi raha tha

Vo puchna chahti thi naag se lekin puch nahi pa rahi thi aur aise time par muskaan ko pata nahi kya hua vo boli " bhaiya kaha hai?"

Naag- unko kuch urgent kaam aagya tha esliye nahi aa paye
Muskaan- vo jaan bujh kar nahi aaye

Madhuri- kyu?
Muskaan- kal to farmhouse par hi the
Vaha to unko kuch kaam nahi tha

Madhuri- kal kaha tha vo?
Muskaan- vahi farmhouse par to tha
Pure raat vahi the

Naag- are morning me kaam aagya tha
Ghar mil jayenge sayad
Rahul- kon bhaiya mummy?

Madhuri- tumhre bhaiya nahi hai tumhre chachu hai aur muskaan tumhre bhi chachu hai vo aaj se
Muskaan- okay mumma

Madhuri ko ab pura yakeen hogya tha ki lucifer uski vajah se vaha nahi aaya aur es vajah se vo thoda udaas ho gaye

Abhi vo kuch soch hi rahi thi ki naag ki najar mirror par padi jaha kafi sari ghadiya unhe follow kar rahi thi

Naag- hold tight
Aur usne accelerator par par rakh diya aur ek dam se ghadi ne speed pakad li

Vaise to naag ke sath bhi log the lekin piche bahut jada gadiya dikh rahi thi

Naag ne drive karte hue hi speaker par lucifer ko phone laga diya

Lucifer- hello
Jaise hi lucifer ki aawaz suni madhuri ke kaan khade ho gaye

Naag- bhai kuch log picha kar rahe hai
Lucifer- dekh raha hu main

Naag- kya karu?
Lucifer- rukna nahi hai
Tu apne log aur baki sab ko leke sidha farmhouse par pahuch jao

Naag- aur aap?
Lucifer- tujhe jo bola vo samjh nahi aata kya?
Tujhe rukna nahi hai aur es baar agar tune unko akela chhoda to sutega bahut mere se

Madhuri- lucifer please yaha rukna nahi
Please
Lucifer- naag speed badha aur nikal yaha se
Baki sab ko main dekh lunga

Aur phone kat gaya
Lucifer ne madhuri ki baat ka koe jawab diye bagar phone kaat diya

Naag ne bhi apne logo ko informe kar diya aur ab naag ki ghadi bich me aagaye aur uske aage piche uske log aur thoda jada piche baki ke dusman

Rahul- mumma ye kya ho raha hai?
Madhuri- kuch nahi ho raha beta
Lucifer hai na vo sab theek kar dega
Naag tum apne logo ko bolo lucifer ke sath rahne ko

Naag- ma'am vo mere nahi bhai ke log hai aur main unki baat nahi kaat sakta
Madhuri- main bol rahi hu na tumko?

Naag- unhe help ki jarurat nahi hai maam
Vo akele sambhal lenge lekin main aap logo ko nahi chhod sakta
Bhai ka order hai

Etne me unke ke ghadi dusre se takrati dikhae di
Jinme ek enki aur ek dusre gang ki thi

Naag- shit bhai kaha ho
Aur naag ne aur speed badha di

Abhi dusre ghadi bhidti es se pehle hi ek bahut tej speed me car aaye aur opposite gang ki ghadi ko vaha me uda diya

Ye madhuri ne dekha lekin dono bache nahi dekh paye

Usme se lucifer utara aur road rok par samne khada ho gaya

Madhuri bas lucifer ko dekhti rahi jab tak vo uski najaro se ojhal na ho gaya ho....

19th TAK UPDATES AND REPLY DELAY HO SAKTE HAI. MAIN TAB TAK BAHAR HU BUT KOSIS KARUNGA UPDATE TO AT LEAST DE DU BUT AGAR NA AAYE TO WAIT BHI MAT KARNA. EVERYTHING WILL BE REGULAR AFTER THAT.
Bhai eske bad ka update de do fir chahe 20 ke bad de dena
 

ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

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Lucifer naag aur bahut sare log court ke bahar hi khade the kyuki unhe pata tha ki kahi se bhi hamla ho sakta hai aur aise time me dono ladkiyo ko akela chhodna kahi ki bhi samjhdari nahi hai

Vaise to mansi ne apne baap se bol kar kafi acha intezaam karva diya tha lekin fir bhi lucifer ko trust nahi tha kisi par bhi aur jab baat madhuri ki ho to bilkul bhi nahi

Madhuri ko inaaya ne kaise bhi karke convince kiya aur usne jada mana bhi nahi kiya kyuki apne bete se badh kar kya tha uske liye?
Aur kuch had tak vo lucifer ke behavior se familiar bhi thi

Eska ye matlab nahi tha ki vo hurt nahi thi
Usse bahut bada sadma laga tha us kiss ki vajah se aur vo most of the time khud ko hi blame kar rahi thi ki agar vo aage se lucifer ko kiss nahi karti to baat etni jada badhti hi nahi

Vaise uska ye sochna bhi galat nahi tha agar vo khud se kiss nahi karti to lucifer bhi samne se kuch nahi karta
Ye baat to hai ki vo khub flirting karta tha lekin eska ye matlab nahi tha ki vo madhuri ke sath jabardasti karta

Us time to jab madhuri ke honth uske hontho se mile to vo kho gaya jiske bahut sare reason the

Lekin ha vo aage se kabhi aisa nahi karta

Madhuri kafi guilt me bhi thi ki uski vajah se ek bahut pyaara rishta tootne ki kagaar par aagya
Ab lucifer uske ghar nahi aayega, alia se nahi milega, uske bete se jaan pahchan nahi bana payega
Aur madhuri ko faltu ki baaton se hasa nahi payega

Pata nahi kitne hi khayal uske dimag me ghum rahe the

Aur vo fasla le nahi pa rahi thi
Ajeeb duvida me fas gaye thi vo

Khud se lucifer ko face kaise kare aur samne se lucifer aayega nahi

Etna sab hone ke baad bhi kahi na kahi vo lucifer ke vapas aane ki umeed lagaye bathi thi aur teen thapado ko marne ke liye bahut jada dukhi thi

Vo yehi soch rahi thi ki lucifer to humesha se aisa hi tha, usne kabhi fake banane ki kosis nahi ki aur jaise me us par hath uthana usko apni life ki ek bahut badi galti lag rahi thi
Specially last wala thapad jo kiss ke baad mara tha madhuri ne

Madhuri ye sab soch soch kar apna mood kharab kar rahi thi jab inaaya aaye uske pass

Ek second ke liye to madhuri ko laga ki lucifer ne bejha hai usko aur actually me to lucifer ne hi bejha tha lekin fir uske dimag me aaya ki lucifer kyu hi inaaya ko ye sab bataega?

Jab inaaya ne bola ki court chalna hai aur lucifer kyu nahi ja sakta uske liye koe bahana laga diya ki vo direct vahi milega

Madhuri bhi jaldi hi maan gaye aakhir beta ka moh hi aisa hai kaise nahi manti

Inaaya hi jaldi se muskaan ko leke commissioner ke sath court pahuch gaye

Yaha dekho inaaya ke partner hone ke kya kya fayde hai
Commissioner ek second me maan gaya usse le jane ke liye

Lekin bich me hi commissioner ne inaaya ko vapas bejh diya kyuki lucifer ne mansi ko sikhaya aur mansi ne apne baap ko ki etne badi ladki ka vaha hone uske liye safe nahi hai

Inaaya bhi samjh gaye ki ye sab lucifer ka hi plan hai esliye vo bhi jada nakhre nahi karte hue utar gaye

Ab court me pahuche madhuri, muskaan, commissioner aur kuch police wale

Muskaan abhi thodi dari hue thi lekin madhuri usse bahut ache se sambhal rahi thi
Experience bolta hai bacho ke waqt par vohi abhi ho raha tha

Agar madhuri ki jagah agar mansi ya koe aur hota to sayad muskaan ko etne ache se nahi sambhal pata

Lucifer ne baki to sari fielding laga hi rakhi thi
Muskaan ne gavahi de di aur court ne apna fasla madhuri ke paks me suna diya aur ye bhi bola ki madhuri ke ex husband par alag se child trafficking ka case darj kiya jaye aur usse turant giraft me liya jaye

Madhuri ko uska beta bhi mil gaya aur sab kuch bahut shant shant sa lag raha tha

Madhuri ki aankhon me aashu the bas aur uske siskiyo ki aawaz hi gunj rahi thi

Aur vo bhigi aankhon se apne bete ko dekhne ka intezaar kar rahi thi
Ek ek second aisi lag rahi thi usse jaise ek ek janam beet gaya ho us ek second me

Aisi hi to thadap hoti hai ek maa ki apne bacho ke liye

Rahul( madhuri ka beta) ko court lane me kafi time lag gaya tha kyuki vo ghar me kad tha
Police bejhni padi thi usse vaha se lane me

Tab tak madhuri ek hi pose me bathi bathi gate ko dekhti rahi ki kab aayega uska beta

Aur jab usk intezaar khatam hua aur samne Rahul khada dikha to uske sareer ne jawab de diya

Uthane ki himmat hi nahi bachi uske ander

Rahul hi mummy mummy chhilate hue uski bahoo me sama gaya

Madhuri ko to jaise viswas hi nahi ho raha tha ki uska beta uske etne pass hai
Rahul- mummy aap aagaye?
Maine bahut intezaar kiya aapka
Ab mujhe chhod kar kabhi mat jana
Mujhe aapke pass hi rahna hai
Vo bhi rote hue bol raha tha aur madhuri rote hue es moment ko feel kar rahi thi

Jab vo thoda hosh me aaye to rahul ka masoom chehra dekhne lagi aur fir uske pure chehre ko chumne lagi

Aaj to usse sare jahaan ki khushiya mil gaye thi

Kuch hi log the vaha jo ye sab dekh rahe the jinme muskaan bhi sameel thi jo door khadi muskurate hue ek maa ko apne bete se milte dekh rahi thi

Sayad es pal ka sabse jada ahsaas muskaan ko hi tha usse hi pata tha family ka milna kitna important hota hai kisi ki life me

Bahut der tak en dono ka aisa hi chalta raha fir commissioner ne aakar bola ki chalna chahiye sehar door hai yaha se

Tab unhe hosh aaya aur jab khade hue to muskaan door khadi dikhae di

Madhuri ne ishare se muskaan ko apne pass bulaya aur

Madhuri- ye muskaan hai
Eski hi vajah se aaj tum mujh se mil sake ho aur aaj se tum esse didi bologe aur tum mujhe maa(muskaan se)

Muskaan bachi jarur thi lekin samjhdar bahut vo ek second me es line ka matlab samjh gaye aur madhuri ke galle lag gaye

Muskaan rote hue thank you so much
Thank you so much aunty
Madhuri uske balo par hath firate hue aunty nahi maa aur main meri beti ko rote hue nahi dekh sakti esliye ab se koe rona dhona nahi

Muskaan- aur main apni maa ko rote nahi dekh sakti aur madhuri ke aashu saaf karne lagti hai

Uske baad tino vaha se nikal jate hai

Bahar naag mil jata hai to vo commissioner ko bol kar ek teeno ko apne sath le jata hai

Madhuri ki najar abhi bhi lucifer ko dund rahi thi lekin lucifer usse kahi dikh nahi raha tha

Vo puchna chahti thi naag se lekin puch nahi pa rahi thi aur aise time par muskaan ko pata nahi kya hua vo boli " bhaiya kaha hai?"

Naag- unko kuch urgent kaam aagya tha esliye nahi aa paye
Muskaan- vo jaan bujh kar nahi aaye

Madhuri- kyu?
Muskaan- kal to farmhouse par hi the
Vaha to unko kuch kaam nahi tha

Madhuri- kal kaha tha vo?
Muskaan- vahi farmhouse par to tha
Pure raat vahi the

Naag- are morning me kaam aagya tha
Ghar mil jayenge sayad
Rahul- kon bhaiya mummy?

Madhuri- tumhre bhaiya nahi hai tumhre chachu hai aur muskaan tumhre bhi chachu hai vo aaj se
Muskaan- okay mumma

Madhuri ko ab pura yakeen hogya tha ki lucifer uski vajah se vaha nahi aaya aur es vajah se vo thoda udaas ho gaye

Abhi vo kuch soch hi rahi thi ki naag ki najar mirror par padi jaha kafi sari ghadiya unhe follow kar rahi thi

Naag- hold tight
Aur usne accelerator par par rakh diya aur ek dam se ghadi ne speed pakad li

Vaise to naag ke sath bhi log the lekin piche bahut jada gadiya dikh rahi thi

Naag ne drive karte hue hi speaker par lucifer ko phone laga diya

Lucifer- hello
Jaise hi lucifer ki aawaz suni madhuri ke kaan khade ho gaye

Naag- bhai kuch log picha kar rahe hai
Lucifer- dekh raha hu main

Naag- kya karu?
Lucifer- rukna nahi hai
Tu apne log aur baki sab ko leke sidha farmhouse par pahuch jao

Naag- aur aap?
Lucifer- tujhe jo bola vo samjh nahi aata kya?
Tujhe rukna nahi hai aur es baar agar tune unko akela chhoda to sutega bahut mere se

Madhuri- lucifer please yaha rukna nahi
Please
Lucifer- naag speed badha aur nikal yaha se
Baki sab ko main dekh lunga

Aur phone kat gaya
Lucifer ne madhuri ki baat ka koe jawab diye bagar phone kaat diya

Naag ne bhi apne logo ko informe kar diya aur ab naag ki ghadi bich me aagaye aur uske aage piche uske log aur thoda jada piche baki ke dusman

Rahul- mumma ye kya ho raha hai?
Madhuri- kuch nahi ho raha beta
Lucifer hai na vo sab theek kar dega
Naag tum apne logo ko bolo lucifer ke sath rahne ko

Naag- ma'am vo mere nahi bhai ke log hai aur main unki baat nahi kaat sakta
Madhuri- main bol rahi hu na tumko?

Naag- unhe help ki jarurat nahi hai maam
Vo akele sambhal lenge lekin main aap logo ko nahi chhod sakta
Bhai ka order hai

Etne me unke ke ghadi dusre se takrati dikhae di
Jinme ek enki aur ek dusre gang ki thi

Naag- shit bhai kaha ho
Aur naag ne aur speed badha di

Abhi dusre ghadi bhidti es se pehle hi ek bahut tej speed me car aaye aur opposite gang ki ghadi ko vaha me uda diya

Ye madhuri ne dekha lekin dono bache nahi dekh paye

Usme se lucifer utara aur road rok par samne khada ho gaya

Madhuri bas lucifer ko dekhti rahi jab tak vo uski najaro se ojhal na ho gaya ho....

19th TAK UPDATES AND REPLY DELAY HO SAKTE HAI. MAIN TAB TAK BAHAR HU BUT KOSIS KARUNGA UPDATE TO AT LEAST DE DU BUT AGAR NA AAYE TO WAIT BHI MAT KARNA. EVERYTHING WILL BE REGULAR AFTER THAT.
Awesome update bhai💥
 

Lib am

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Next day

Lucifer naag aur bahut sare log court ke bahar hi khade the kyuki unhe pata tha ki kahi se bhi hamla ho sakta hai aur aise time me dono ladkiyo ko akela chhodna kahi ki bhi samjhdari nahi hai

Vaise to mansi ne apne baap se bol kar kafi acha intezaam karva diya tha lekin fir bhi lucifer ko trust nahi tha kisi par bhi aur jab baat madhuri ki ho to bilkul bhi nahi

Madhuri ko inaaya ne kaise bhi karke convince kiya aur usne jada mana bhi nahi kiya kyuki apne bete se badh kar kya tha uske liye?
Aur kuch had tak vo lucifer ke behavior se familiar bhi thi

Eska ye matlab nahi tha ki vo hurt nahi thi
Usse bahut bada sadma laga tha us kiss ki vajah se aur vo most of the time khud ko hi blame kar rahi thi ki agar vo aage se lucifer ko kiss nahi karti to baat etni jada badhti hi nahi

Vaise uska ye sochna bhi galat nahi tha agar vo khud se kiss nahi karti to lucifer bhi samne se kuch nahi karta
Ye baat to hai ki vo khub flirting karta tha lekin eska ye matlab nahi tha ki vo madhuri ke sath jabardasti karta

Us time to jab madhuri ke honth uske hontho se mile to vo kho gaya jiske bahut sare reason the

Lekin ha vo aage se kabhi aisa nahi karta

Madhuri kafi guilt me bhi thi ki uski vajah se ek bahut pyaara rishta tootne ki kagaar par aagya
Ab lucifer uske ghar nahi aayega, alia se nahi milega, uske bete se jaan pahchan nahi bana payega
Aur madhuri ko faltu ki baaton se hasa nahi payega

Pata nahi kitne hi khayal uske dimag me ghum rahe the

Aur vo fasla le nahi pa rahi thi
Ajeeb duvida me fas gaye thi vo

Khud se lucifer ko face kaise kare aur samne se lucifer aayega nahi

Etna sab hone ke baad bhi kahi na kahi vo lucifer ke vapas aane ki umeed lagaye bathi thi aur teen thapado ko marne ke liye bahut jada dukhi thi

Vo yehi soch rahi thi ki lucifer to humesha se aisa hi tha, usne kabhi fake banane ki kosis nahi ki aur jaise me us par hath uthana usko apni life ki ek bahut badi galti lag rahi thi
Specially last wala thapad jo kiss ke baad mara tha madhuri ne

Madhuri ye sab soch soch kar apna mood kharab kar rahi thi jab inaaya aaye uske pass

Ek second ke liye to madhuri ko laga ki lucifer ne bejha hai usko aur actually me to lucifer ne hi bejha tha lekin fir uske dimag me aaya ki lucifer kyu hi inaaya ko ye sab bataega?

Jab inaaya ne bola ki court chalna hai aur lucifer kyu nahi ja sakta uske liye koe bahana laga diya ki vo direct vahi milega

Madhuri bhi jaldi hi maan gaye aakhir beta ka moh hi aisa hai kaise nahi manti

Inaaya hi jaldi se muskaan ko leke commissioner ke sath court pahuch gaye

Yaha dekho inaaya ke partner hone ke kya kya fayde hai
Commissioner ek second me maan gaya usse le jane ke liye

Lekin bich me hi commissioner ne inaaya ko vapas bejh diya kyuki lucifer ne mansi ko sikhaya aur mansi ne apne baap ko ki etne badi ladki ka vaha hone uske liye safe nahi hai

Inaaya bhi samjh gaye ki ye sab lucifer ka hi plan hai esliye vo bhi jada nakhre nahi karte hue utar gaye

Ab court me pahuche madhuri, muskaan, commissioner aur kuch police wale

Muskaan abhi thodi dari hue thi lekin madhuri usse bahut ache se sambhal rahi thi
Experience bolta hai bacho ke waqt par vohi abhi ho raha tha

Agar madhuri ki jagah agar mansi ya koe aur hota to sayad muskaan ko etne ache se nahi sambhal pata

Lucifer ne baki to sari fielding laga hi rakhi thi
Muskaan ne gavahi de di aur court ne apna fasla madhuri ke paks me suna diya aur ye bhi bola ki madhuri ke ex husband par alag se child trafficking ka case darj kiya jaye aur usse turant giraft me liya jaye

Madhuri ko uska beta bhi mil gaya aur sab kuch bahut shant shant sa lag raha tha

Madhuri ki aankhon me aashu the bas aur uske siskiyo ki aawaz hi gunj rahi thi

Aur vo bhigi aankhon se apne bete ko dekhne ka intezaar kar rahi thi
Ek ek second aisi lag rahi thi usse jaise ek ek janam beet gaya ho us ek second me

Aisi hi to thadap hoti hai ek maa ki apne bacho ke liye

Rahul( madhuri ka beta) ko court lane me kafi time lag gaya tha kyuki vo ghar me kad tha
Police bejhni padi thi usse vaha se lane me

Tab tak madhuri ek hi pose me bathi bathi gate ko dekhti rahi ki kab aayega uska beta

Aur jab usk intezaar khatam hua aur samne Rahul khada dikha to uske sareer ne jawab de diya

Uthane ki himmat hi nahi bachi uske ander

Rahul hi mummy mummy chhilate hue uski bahoo me sama gaya

Madhuri ko to jaise viswas hi nahi ho raha tha ki uska beta uske etne pass hai
Rahul- mummy aap aagaye?
Maine bahut intezaar kiya aapka
Ab mujhe chhod kar kabhi mat jana
Mujhe aapke pass hi rahna hai
Vo bhi rote hue bol raha tha aur madhuri rote hue es moment ko feel kar rahi thi

Jab vo thoda hosh me aaye to rahul ka masoom chehra dekhne lagi aur fir uske pure chehre ko chumne lagi

Aaj to usse sare jahaan ki khushiya mil gaye thi

Kuch hi log the vaha jo ye sab dekh rahe the jinme muskaan bhi sameel thi jo door khadi muskurate hue ek maa ko apne bete se milte dekh rahi thi

Sayad es pal ka sabse jada ahsaas muskaan ko hi tha usse hi pata tha family ka milna kitna important hota hai kisi ki life me

Bahut der tak en dono ka aisa hi chalta raha fir commissioner ne aakar bola ki chalna chahiye sehar door hai yaha se

Tab unhe hosh aaya aur jab khade hue to muskaan door khadi dikhae di

Madhuri ne ishare se muskaan ko apne pass bulaya aur

Madhuri- ye muskaan hai
Eski hi vajah se aaj tum mujh se mil sake ho aur aaj se tum esse didi bologe aur tum mujhe maa(muskaan se)

Muskaan bachi jarur thi lekin samjhdar bahut vo ek second me es line ka matlab samjh gaye aur madhuri ke galle lag gaye

Muskaan rote hue thank you so much
Thank you so much aunty
Madhuri uske balo par hath firate hue aunty nahi maa aur main meri beti ko rote hue nahi dekh sakti esliye ab se koe rona dhona nahi

Muskaan- aur main apni maa ko rote nahi dekh sakti aur madhuri ke aashu saaf karne lagti hai

Uske baad tino vaha se nikal jate hai

Bahar naag mil jata hai to vo commissioner ko bol kar ek teeno ko apne sath le jata hai

Madhuri ki najar abhi bhi lucifer ko dund rahi thi lekin lucifer usse kahi dikh nahi raha tha

Vo puchna chahti thi naag se lekin puch nahi pa rahi thi aur aise time par muskaan ko pata nahi kya hua vo boli " bhaiya kaha hai?"

Naag- unko kuch urgent kaam aagya tha esliye nahi aa paye
Muskaan- vo jaan bujh kar nahi aaye

Madhuri- kyu?
Muskaan- kal to farmhouse par hi the
Vaha to unko kuch kaam nahi tha

Madhuri- kal kaha tha vo?
Muskaan- vahi farmhouse par to tha
Pure raat vahi the

Naag- are morning me kaam aagya tha
Ghar mil jayenge sayad
Rahul- kon bhaiya mummy?

Madhuri- tumhre bhaiya nahi hai tumhre chachu hai aur muskaan tumhre bhi chachu hai vo aaj se
Muskaan- okay mumma

Madhuri ko ab pura yakeen hogya tha ki lucifer uski vajah se vaha nahi aaya aur es vajah se vo thoda udaas ho gaye

Abhi vo kuch soch hi rahi thi ki naag ki najar mirror par padi jaha kafi sari ghadiya unhe follow kar rahi thi

Naag- hold tight
Aur usne accelerator par par rakh diya aur ek dam se ghadi ne speed pakad li

Vaise to naag ke sath bhi log the lekin piche bahut jada gadiya dikh rahi thi

Naag ne drive karte hue hi speaker par lucifer ko phone laga diya

Lucifer- hello
Jaise hi lucifer ki aawaz suni madhuri ke kaan khade ho gaye

Naag- bhai kuch log picha kar rahe hai
Lucifer- dekh raha hu main

Naag- kya karu?
Lucifer- rukna nahi hai
Tu apne log aur baki sab ko leke sidha farmhouse par pahuch jao

Naag- aur aap?
Lucifer- tujhe jo bola vo samjh nahi aata kya?
Tujhe rukna nahi hai aur es baar agar tune unko akela chhoda to sutega bahut mere se

Madhuri- lucifer please yaha rukna nahi
Please
Lucifer- naag speed badha aur nikal yaha se
Baki sab ko main dekh lunga

Aur phone kat gaya
Lucifer ne madhuri ki baat ka koe jawab diye bagar phone kaat diya

Naag ne bhi apne logo ko informe kar diya aur ab naag ki ghadi bich me aagaye aur uske aage piche uske log aur thoda jada piche baki ke dusman

Rahul- mumma ye kya ho raha hai?
Madhuri- kuch nahi ho raha beta
Lucifer hai na vo sab theek kar dega
Naag tum apne logo ko bolo lucifer ke sath rahne ko

Naag- ma'am vo mere nahi bhai ke log hai aur main unki baat nahi kaat sakta
Madhuri- main bol rahi hu na tumko?

Naag- unhe help ki jarurat nahi hai maam
Vo akele sambhal lenge lekin main aap logo ko nahi chhod sakta
Bhai ka order hai

Etne me unke ke ghadi dusre se takrati dikhae di
Jinme ek enki aur ek dusre gang ki thi

Naag- shit bhai kaha ho
Aur naag ne aur speed badha di

Abhi dusre ghadi bhidti es se pehle hi ek bahut tej speed me car aaye aur opposite gang ki ghadi ko vaha me uda diya

Ye madhuri ne dekha lekin dono bache nahi dekh paye

Usme se lucifer utara aur road rok par samne khada ho gaya

Madhuri bas lucifer ko dekhti rahi jab tak vo uski najaro se ojhal na ho gaya ho....

19th TAK UPDATES AND REPLY DELAY HO SAKTE HAI. MAIN TAB TAK BAHAR HU BUT KOSIS KARUNGA UPDATE TO AT LEAST DE DU BUT AGAR NA AAYE TO WAIT BHI MAT KARNA. EVERYTHING WILL BE REGULAR AFTER THAT.
Ohh man ye Lucii bhi naa Devil lord hai magar emotions ko kabhi kabhi insaano se jayada achcha samjhta hai tabhi to ek maa ko uske beta se milwa diya aur ek masoom bachchi ko maa dilwaa di. An Lucii in gundo ko dikhayega what is Hell and who is Hell lord. Bahut hi maza aayega next update mein jag doom dhadaam hogi sareaam. Beautiful update
 

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Lucifer naag aur bahut sare log court ke bahar hi khade the kyuki unhe pata tha ki kahi se bhi hamla ho sakta hai aur aise time me dono ladkiyo ko akela chhodna kahi ki bhi samjhdari nahi hai

Vaise to mansi ne apne baap se bol kar kafi acha intezaam karva diya tha lekin fir bhi lucifer ko trust nahi tha kisi par bhi aur jab baat madhuri ki ho to bilkul bhi nahi

Madhuri ko inaaya ne kaise bhi karke convince kiya aur usne jada mana bhi nahi kiya kyuki apne bete se badh kar kya tha uske liye?
Aur kuch had tak vo lucifer ke behavior se familiar bhi thi

Eska ye matlab nahi tha ki vo hurt nahi thi
Usse bahut bada sadma laga tha us kiss ki vajah se aur vo most of the time khud ko hi blame kar rahi thi ki agar vo aage se lucifer ko kiss nahi karti to baat etni jada badhti hi nahi

Vaise uska ye sochna bhi galat nahi tha agar vo khud se kiss nahi karti to lucifer bhi samne se kuch nahi karta
Ye baat to hai ki vo khub flirting karta tha lekin eska ye matlab nahi tha ki vo madhuri ke sath jabardasti karta

Us time to jab madhuri ke honth uske hontho se mile to vo kho gaya jiske bahut sare reason the

Lekin ha vo aage se kabhi aisa nahi karta

Madhuri kafi guilt me bhi thi ki uski vajah se ek bahut pyaara rishta tootne ki kagaar par aagya
Ab lucifer uske ghar nahi aayega, alia se nahi milega, uske bete se jaan pahchan nahi bana payega
Aur madhuri ko faltu ki baaton se hasa nahi payega

Pata nahi kitne hi khayal uske dimag me ghum rahe the

Aur vo fasla le nahi pa rahi thi
Ajeeb duvida me fas gaye thi vo

Khud se lucifer ko face kaise kare aur samne se lucifer aayega nahi

Etna sab hone ke baad bhi kahi na kahi vo lucifer ke vapas aane ki umeed lagaye bathi thi aur teen thapado ko marne ke liye bahut jada dukhi thi

Vo yehi soch rahi thi ki lucifer to humesha se aisa hi tha, usne kabhi fake banane ki kosis nahi ki aur jaise me us par hath uthana usko apni life ki ek bahut badi galti lag rahi thi
Specially last wala thapad jo kiss ke baad mara tha madhuri ne

Madhuri ye sab soch soch kar apna mood kharab kar rahi thi jab inaaya aaye uske pass

Ek second ke liye to madhuri ko laga ki lucifer ne bejha hai usko aur actually me to lucifer ne hi bejha tha lekin fir uske dimag me aaya ki lucifer kyu hi inaaya ko ye sab bataega?

Jab inaaya ne bola ki court chalna hai aur lucifer kyu nahi ja sakta uske liye koe bahana laga diya ki vo direct vahi milega

Madhuri bhi jaldi hi maan gaye aakhir beta ka moh hi aisa hai kaise nahi manti

Inaaya hi jaldi se muskaan ko leke commissioner ke sath court pahuch gaye

Yaha dekho inaaya ke partner hone ke kya kya fayde hai
Commissioner ek second me maan gaya usse le jane ke liye

Lekin bich me hi commissioner ne inaaya ko vapas bejh diya kyuki lucifer ne mansi ko sikhaya aur mansi ne apne baap ko ki etne badi ladki ka vaha hone uske liye safe nahi hai

Inaaya bhi samjh gaye ki ye sab lucifer ka hi plan hai esliye vo bhi jada nakhre nahi karte hue utar gaye

Ab court me pahuche madhuri, muskaan, commissioner aur kuch police wale

Muskaan abhi thodi dari hue thi lekin madhuri usse bahut ache se sambhal rahi thi
Experience bolta hai bacho ke waqt par vohi abhi ho raha tha

Agar madhuri ki jagah agar mansi ya koe aur hota to sayad muskaan ko etne ache se nahi sambhal pata

Lucifer ne baki to sari fielding laga hi rakhi thi
Muskaan ne gavahi de di aur court ne apna fasla madhuri ke paks me suna diya aur ye bhi bola ki madhuri ke ex husband par alag se child trafficking ka case darj kiya jaye aur usse turant giraft me liya jaye

Madhuri ko uska beta bhi mil gaya aur sab kuch bahut shant shant sa lag raha tha

Madhuri ki aankhon me aashu the bas aur uske siskiyo ki aawaz hi gunj rahi thi

Aur vo bhigi aankhon se apne bete ko dekhne ka intezaar kar rahi thi
Ek ek second aisi lag rahi thi usse jaise ek ek janam beet gaya ho us ek second me

Aisi hi to thadap hoti hai ek maa ki apne bacho ke liye

Rahul( madhuri ka beta) ko court lane me kafi time lag gaya tha kyuki vo ghar me kad tha
Police bejhni padi thi usse vaha se lane me

Tab tak madhuri ek hi pose me bathi bathi gate ko dekhti rahi ki kab aayega uska beta

Aur jab usk intezaar khatam hua aur samne Rahul khada dikha to uske sareer ne jawab de diya

Uthane ki himmat hi nahi bachi uske ander

Rahul hi mummy mummy chhilate hue uski bahoo me sama gaya

Madhuri ko to jaise viswas hi nahi ho raha tha ki uska beta uske etne pass hai
Rahul- mummy aap aagaye?
Maine bahut intezaar kiya aapka
Ab mujhe chhod kar kabhi mat jana
Mujhe aapke pass hi rahna hai
Vo bhi rote hue bol raha tha aur madhuri rote hue es moment ko feel kar rahi thi

Jab vo thoda hosh me aaye to rahul ka masoom chehra dekhne lagi aur fir uske pure chehre ko chumne lagi

Aaj to usse sare jahaan ki khushiya mil gaye thi

Kuch hi log the vaha jo ye sab dekh rahe the jinme muskaan bhi sameel thi jo door khadi muskurate hue ek maa ko apne bete se milte dekh rahi thi

Sayad es pal ka sabse jada ahsaas muskaan ko hi tha usse hi pata tha family ka milna kitna important hota hai kisi ki life me

Bahut der tak en dono ka aisa hi chalta raha fir commissioner ne aakar bola ki chalna chahiye sehar door hai yaha se

Tab unhe hosh aaya aur jab khade hue to muskaan door khadi dikhae di

Madhuri ne ishare se muskaan ko apne pass bulaya aur

Madhuri- ye muskaan hai
Eski hi vajah se aaj tum mujh se mil sake ho aur aaj se tum esse didi bologe aur tum mujhe maa(muskaan se)

Muskaan bachi jarur thi lekin samjhdar bahut vo ek second me es line ka matlab samjh gaye aur madhuri ke galle lag gaye

Muskaan rote hue thank you so much
Thank you so much aunty
Madhuri uske balo par hath firate hue aunty nahi maa aur main meri beti ko rote hue nahi dekh sakti esliye ab se koe rona dhona nahi

Muskaan- aur main apni maa ko rote nahi dekh sakti aur madhuri ke aashu saaf karne lagti hai

Uske baad tino vaha se nikal jate hai

Bahar naag mil jata hai to vo commissioner ko bol kar ek teeno ko apne sath le jata hai

Madhuri ki najar abhi bhi lucifer ko dund rahi thi lekin lucifer usse kahi dikh nahi raha tha

Vo puchna chahti thi naag se lekin puch nahi pa rahi thi aur aise time par muskaan ko pata nahi kya hua vo boli " bhaiya kaha hai?"

Naag- unko kuch urgent kaam aagya tha esliye nahi aa paye
Muskaan- vo jaan bujh kar nahi aaye

Madhuri- kyu?
Muskaan- kal to farmhouse par hi the
Vaha to unko kuch kaam nahi tha

Madhuri- kal kaha tha vo?
Muskaan- vahi farmhouse par to tha
Pure raat vahi the

Naag- are morning me kaam aagya tha
Ghar mil jayenge sayad
Rahul- kon bhaiya mummy?

Madhuri- tumhre bhaiya nahi hai tumhre chachu hai aur muskaan tumhre bhi chachu hai vo aaj se
Muskaan- okay mumma

Madhuri ko ab pura yakeen hogya tha ki lucifer uski vajah se vaha nahi aaya aur es vajah se vo thoda udaas ho gaye

Abhi vo kuch soch hi rahi thi ki naag ki najar mirror par padi jaha kafi sari ghadiya unhe follow kar rahi thi

Naag- hold tight
Aur usne accelerator par par rakh diya aur ek dam se ghadi ne speed pakad li

Vaise to naag ke sath bhi log the lekin piche bahut jada gadiya dikh rahi thi

Naag ne drive karte hue hi speaker par lucifer ko phone laga diya

Lucifer- hello
Jaise hi lucifer ki aawaz suni madhuri ke kaan khade ho gaye

Naag- bhai kuch log picha kar rahe hai
Lucifer- dekh raha hu main

Naag- kya karu?
Lucifer- rukna nahi hai
Tu apne log aur baki sab ko leke sidha farmhouse par pahuch jao

Naag- aur aap?
Lucifer- tujhe jo bola vo samjh nahi aata kya?
Tujhe rukna nahi hai aur es baar agar tune unko akela chhoda to sutega bahut mere se

Madhuri- lucifer please yaha rukna nahi
Please
Lucifer- naag speed badha aur nikal yaha se
Baki sab ko main dekh lunga

Aur phone kat gaya
Lucifer ne madhuri ki baat ka koe jawab diye bagar phone kaat diya

Naag ne bhi apne logo ko informe kar diya aur ab naag ki ghadi bich me aagaye aur uske aage piche uske log aur thoda jada piche baki ke dusman

Rahul- mumma ye kya ho raha hai?
Madhuri- kuch nahi ho raha beta
Lucifer hai na vo sab theek kar dega
Naag tum apne logo ko bolo lucifer ke sath rahne ko

Naag- ma'am vo mere nahi bhai ke log hai aur main unki baat nahi kaat sakta
Madhuri- main bol rahi hu na tumko?

Naag- unhe help ki jarurat nahi hai maam
Vo akele sambhal lenge lekin main aap logo ko nahi chhod sakta
Bhai ka order hai

Etne me unke ke ghadi dusre se takrati dikhae di
Jinme ek enki aur ek dusre gang ki thi

Naag- shit bhai kaha ho
Aur naag ne aur speed badha di

Abhi dusre ghadi bhidti es se pehle hi ek bahut tej speed me car aaye aur opposite gang ki ghadi ko vaha me uda diya

Ye madhuri ne dekha lekin dono bache nahi dekh paye

Usme se lucifer utara aur road rok par samne khada ho gaya

Madhuri bas lucifer ko dekhti rahi jab tak vo uski najaro se ojhal na ho gaya ho....

19th TAK UPDATES AND REPLY DELAY HO SAKTE HAI. MAIN TAB TAK BAHAR HU BUT KOSIS KARUNGA UPDATE TO AT LEAST DE DU BUT AGAR NA AAYE TO WAIT BHI MAT KARNA. EVERYTHING WILL BE REGULAR AFTER THAT.
शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann
 

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