Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[Lone survivor]

Naag ki kismat par kabhi - kabhi taras aa jaata hai... Lucifer jaisa boss hai agle ka aur abhi to uske sasur ji ko uski sachayi tak nahi pata hai, jab pata chalegi tab bohot badhiya tareeke se lagne waali hai Naag ki... Khair, ab Muskaan ready ho gayi hai Maadhuri Ma'am ke paati ke kaale kaarnamo ki katha adaalat mein sunane ke liye... Dekha jaaye to bohot hi kam samay mein normal ho gayi hai Muskaan, warna jin dukhon se wo nikli hai, unki yaadon se baahar aana itna aasan nahi...

Sayad mansi ne bahut help ki hai uski

I think Muskaan kaafi practical hai, aur itni kam umra mein itna samajhdar hona sachmein hairaan kar deta hai... Par jab Lucifer aur Naag jaise be-akal log kahani mein maujood hon, to unhe balance karne ke liye Muskaan aur Alia jaison ki bhi zarurat to padti hi hai... Ab dekhna ye hai ki kya Muskaan safely court mein gawahi de paayegi... Kyonki Naag aur Lucifer andar nahin jaa sakte to aise mein kaafi risk paida ho jaata hai... But ye achha hai ki Maansi ke Pitaji wahaan jaa sakte hain... Meanwhile, Maansi ne apne pita ko yahi kaha hai ki Naag Rathore ka partner hai, waiting for truth disclosing in front of him...

Fir to naag ki gand ke sath lucifer ke alava bhi koe aur khelne lagega

Idhar past scene mein ye clear ho gaya ki Shreya bhi poori tarah Lucifer ke pyaar mein gir chuki thi... Aur haalat ye thi ki wo Lucifer se milne ke bachkane bahane bhi dhoondne mein lagi thi... Wahin Roshini naam ki ek ladki ki jhalak bhi dekhne ko mili past mein... I guess wo bike waali ladki ka hi past hai Roshini... One thing that can be inferred from the scene is that Roshini is the exactly the female version of Lucifer...

Noone is like lucifer bhai ha thodi bahut similarities to hogi dono me

Maadhuri aur Lucifer ke beech vo ho gaya jo shayad nahi hona chahiye tha... Waise to Maadhuri ne hi kiss ki thi use, Lucifer to apni taraf se maatra support hi kar raha tha, but jaisa ki hota hai Lucifer ko pehle teen laafe Maadhuri se mile aur fir kuchh baatein use Inaaya ne bhi sunayi... I think Maadhuri aur Lucifer ke beech kuchh hona abhi ki situation mein bohot mushkil hai, is kiss ke baad to aur bhi zyada...

Mujhe bhi aisa hi lag raha hai

Mujhe pehle bhi umeed kam hi thi ki Maadhuri aur Lucifer ke beech romantic relationship ho sakta hai aur ab kahin na kahin ispar mohar si lagti nazar aa rahi hai... Maadhuri ne bohot kuchh saha hai apni life mein, aur mujhe nahin lagta ki ab wo kisi bhi haalat mein koyi aisa faisla legi jis se aage chalkar Alia par bura asar pade... Ab kitni bhi koshish kyon na ki jaaye aisi baatein chhupaye nahin chhupti... Aur yadi Maadhuri aur Lucifer kareeb aaye to bhavishya mein ye baat khulte hi Alia ka future andheron mein jaa sakta hai...

Bilkul sahi kaha aapne vo alia ki taraf sabse pehle dekhegi kuch bhi karne se

Khair, ab dekhna ye hai ki Apne bete ko waapis paane ke baad Maadhuri kuchh hadh tak sambhal paayegi ya nahi... Ye to pakka hai ki Lucifer ke sang huyi ghatna ke baad wo disturbed hogi aur aise mein kewal apne bete ko waapis paakar hi wo normal ho sakti hai... Dekhte hain aage aur kya kya likha hai uski kismat mein...

Unki kismat me kya likha hoga jab lucifer mila hai to?

Beharhal, Ashmita aur Lucifer ke beech wahi hua jo Simran aur Lucifer ke past scenes mein hum dekhte aaye hain... Arthat, Lucifer ka use kiss karne ko kehna, par jaise hi Simran/Ashmita use kiss karne ko badhen, to uska khud hi pichhe hat jaana... Kaashvi ne sach hi kaha tha ki Ashmita bhale hi khud ko Lucifer ki premika na maane par pyaar to wo hadh se zyada karti hai Lucifer se... Ab wo Inaaya se bhi maafi maangne waali hai, yaani ki kuchh aur dhamake hone ki aashanka bhi dikhayi de rahi hai...

Vo pyaar to karti hi hai lekin kya sare pyaar pyaar vale pyaar hote hai?

All the three updates were really beautiful bhai... Maadhuri aur Lucifer ke beech chal rahe confusion ko bohot badhiya tareeke se narrate kar rahen hain aap... Aur saari tensions ke beech humour ka mixture kahani ko sachmein kaafi nikhaar deta hai...

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Thank you so much bhai
Keep supporting

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice update

Thanks

 

[Lone survivor]

Shandar update bhai
Lucifer muskan ko tayar kar liya hai gavahi dene ke liye aur dekhte hai wo court me gavahi de pati hai ki nhi aur uski surachha ke liye muskan ke pita se muskan ke jariye madad manga hai Lucifer
Aur ant me apni aadatanusar jate jate naag aur muskan ke beech aag lga ke gya

Thank you so much bhai
Keep supporting

 

[Lone survivor]

Bahot dino baad Lucifer ka devil room dekhne ko mila kia zaberdast kaat bachayi malik ko jab tak samajh aata tab tak uske haath pair kaat ker Lucifer nikal gaya waha se
Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai

Abhi to mila tha kuch update pehle bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Bahot behtareen shaandaar
Dono ladkiyan yaha pareshan haal h or woh bhai sahab pahoch gaye jungle Kashvi k paas sahi h chalo yeh achcha huwa kashvi n saari goliya nikal di or relax feel kerwa ker kuch achchi or kadi yaade dikhayi
Dekhte h aage kia hota h
Shaandaar update bhai

Goliyo se vaise bhi kuch nahi hota lucifer ko vo to kaashvi ne care dikha di bas

 

[Lone survivor]

Bahot khoob shaandaar update bhai
Inaya tow bahot jaldi maan gayi maan jana hi banta tha lekin Ashmita or Lucifer ki tu tu me me abhi thoda or chalegi
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h

Unki tu tu main main humesha chalti rahegi

 

[Lone survivor]

Bahot khoob
Shaandaar update bhai

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Today update bro

Aa jaega

 

[Lone survivor]

Oo bhai n tow kaand ker dia madam n mast chipkaya gaal per mast sunaya bhi lekin yeh bhai tas se mas na huwe or ooper madam ko kis ker daala wo alag
Inaya na achche se sunaya
Baherhal dekhte h madam ka beta ko lane kitne logo ko kat ta h
Badhiya shaandaar update bhai

Thank you so much bhai
Keep supporting

 

[Lone survivor]

Baba ki bato n Shreya k dimag ko thikane laga wo ab achcha achcha or dil se sochne lagi dekhte Lucifer se milne k baad kia hota h
Roshni n mast dhoya
Naag or mansi m bhi jhagda kerwa di sahi jaa rehe ho Lucifer bhai kaafi tarkki ker li
Baherhal dekhte h court m kia hota h kia muskaan sahi se jawab de payegi

Thank you so much bhai
Stay tuned