Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[Lone survivor]

Beautiful update bhai

Thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

mast update dear

Thank you

 

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Zordar

Thank you

 

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Mere liye aapka ye ab tak ka best Update tha Lone survivor bhai. Quki aapne isme is story ke tino cutest logo ko mila diya. Lakin usase bhi jayada mujhe ye baat pasand aayi ki aapne is moment ko jldi se ya short me nahi nipta diya. Is pure ek Update ko specialy in tino ke liye hi bana diya. Inki feelings ko ek dusre ke liye bahut ache se show kiya aapne aur yebaat mujhe bahut jyada achhi lagi. Aur sath me aapne aur must aur update dene ka bhi kah diya hai jisme ye sub bahar ghumne jayenge.
Mujhe us update ka bhi bahut besabri se wait rahega.

Bhai esko short me nipata sahi nahi laga
Mujhe abhi bhi lagta hai en par aur jada likha ja sakta hai lekin fir story pause ho jayegi esliye jitna ache se likh sakta likh dita

 

[Lone survivor]

Awesome update... Bichara lucifer fir fas gaya

Thank you bhai

 

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Nice

Thanks

 

[Lone survivor]

Nyc update bhai lajawab

Thank you bhai

 

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Waah to Madhuri ki family almost poori ho gayi hai ek ki jagah do bachche mil gaye hai usko ab. Ab do do rishte ho gaye hai uske, chachu aur mammu. Alia bhi smart aur mast bachchi hai, Naag ko sahi lapet diya. Very nice update

Puri kaha hue hai bhai?
Aadmi ki jarurat hai vaha

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice on bro

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Finally Maadhuri ko uska beta mil hi gaya, aur saath mein ek aur beti bhi mil gayi... Yaani jo Family drawing Alia ne banayi thi, wo ab poori ho chuki hai aur saath hi Alia ko bhi eka pne jaisi hi ladki mil gayi hai... I guess, ab Maadhuri ka ghar ek consultation centre bhi ban sakta hai, Muskaan aur Alia se zyada samajhdari bhari baatein aur koyi kar sakta hai bhala..?

Bilkul banaya ja sakta hai Alia aur muskaan sahi therapy degi logo ko

But, ye sab utni bhi aasani se nahi hua, Maadhuri ka pati bhi apna ek syndicate chalata hai, aise mein itni aasani se wo apni haar kubool karne waala to tha nahi... Especially jab baat uske ego aur ahankar ki ho, wo Rahul ko maarta – peet ta tha, isi baat se saabit ho chuka hai ki Rahul se wo koyi pyaar nahi karta tha, use apne paas usne apne ahankar ke chalte hi rakha tha... But, galat jagah panga le liya usne, abhi kuchh hi Updates pehle Jaise Malik ke aadmiyon ki kutayi huyi thi, wahi hua yahaan bhi...

Usne kaha hi liya bhai?
Vo to sayad lucifer ko janta bhi nahi tha

Lucifer, saala insaan ko bhi gaajar - mooli ki tarah kaatta firta hai, In every sense of the word, Lucifer is a true Devil... But abhi bhi kaam adhoora hi hai, Lucifer ne Maadhuri ko uska parivaar poori tarah dilwa diya hai, Muskaan ko insaaf mil chuka hai aur ye sab bilkul waise hi hua jaise Maadhuri chaahti thi, yaani - legally... Par ab shayad samay hai Lucifer ki adaalat ke shuru hone ka, jo maybe shuru ho bhi chuki hogi... Abhi tak apne flat par nahi lauta hai Lucifer yaani ho sakta hai ki wo Maadhuri ke Pati ka hi hisaab kar raha ho..?

Insaaf to hoga hi bhai lekin kab? Ye pata nahi

Idhar, Lucifer sabhi gundon ko maarne – kaatne ke baad, Kaashvi se milne chala gaya tha, aur wahaan usne Kaashvi ko kiss bhi kar diya... Iske oopar Kaashvi ka kya reaction tha ye abhi tak pata nahi chala hai, par jo bhi ho, I think gussa vagerah to nahi hi huyi hogi wo... Uske just baad hi Trisha aur Lucifer ka past scene bhi dekhne ko mila, jismein Lucifer ne uski jagah apni life mein bataayi... Seems like Kaashvi ke Trisha hone ka ek aur saboot tha wo, kyonki abhi tak kaafi baar aisa laga hai ki Kaashvi baaki sabse bohot zyada jaanti hai Lucifer ke baare mein...

Kaashvi janti to hai lekin abhi ke liye sabse jada
Kya future me bhi aisa hi rahega?

Is beech Muskaan aur Rahul ne Maadhuri se kaha hai ki wo dono Lucifer ko Maamu bulaane waale hain... Ab Incest ho jaayega yahaan bhai ...

Not really a fan of incest

Waise to mujhe bilkul nahi lagta ki Lucifer aur Maadhuri ke beech aage chalkar relation banne waala hai, relation yaani wo jo Lucifer ko sabse zyada pasand hai, par dekhte hain ki Maadhuri aage kya karegi, especially tab jab wo guilt mein hai... Use bhi realise ho chuka hai ki Lucifer ko kiss karne ki pehal usne khud hi ki thi, ismein Lucifer ki galti thi hi kahaan, oopar se ab use apna beta bhi mil gaya hai Lucifer ke hi karaan... Dekhte hain kya faisla leti hai wo..?

Kuch galat fasla le le tab maja aaega

Ab shayad kahani ek naye chapter ki taraf badh rahi hai, pichhle kuchh updates mein pehle Malik aur ab Maadhuri ka Pati, donon ka hi patta almost cut ho chuka hai... Yaani ki filhaal, Raichand ke alawa koyi bhi negative prospect kahani mein hai nahin, aur Raichand ghanta kuchh karne laayak bacha nahi hai... Means, ki shayad jald hi Lucifer ke saamne ek naya threat aa sakta hai, shayad wo musibat jiski baat Supreme aur Guruji kar rahe the, jiske liye Lucifer abhi taiyaar nahi hai...

Ab se asli threats aayenge abhi tak to mazaak chal raha tha

Meanwhile, ab shayad sabhi ladkiyon ke saath bhi Lucifer ka rishta aage badhne waala hai, kyonki ginti ke hisab se present mein to 7 ho hi gayi hain... Yaani ki ab aage maybe aur kisi important ladki, arthat Lucifer ki premika ki entry honi nahi hai... After this insane build-up to the story, I think ki jald hi kahani raftaar pakadne waali hai... Btw. Aghor jo bada ghaav dene waala tha Lucifer ko, uska abhi bhi intezar hai bhai ...

Suruvaat to bahut pehle ho gaye bhai thoda socho sayad sahi samjh aa jaye

All the three Updates were really beautiful bhai, as I said that the build-up to the story has been insane... 138 Updates ho gaye hain, aur ab kuchh do teen Update pehle hi us aakhiri ladki ki entry huyi hai (guarantee nahi hai ki wo bhi aakhiri hai ya nahi), but still the kind of plot you've made here, is literally unbelievable... Bohot zyada potential hai kahani mein, jiska kaaran hai kayi tarah ke sub plots jo saath – saath chal rahen hain, past ka suspense, Supreme ka Lucifer ko is nark mein jhonkne ka kaaran, Eda aur Raaj ki kahani, aur yahan Earth par Lucifer ke saath judi anekon ladkiyon ka apna – apna past... Just unbelievable story Men!

Yehi dikkat bhi to hai bhai
Sabki simple sadi story chahiye aur etne sare plots dekh kar to sab vaise hi bhaag jate hai but this story will keep Going like this only
Let the genuine readers use little bit of their brain

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Thank you bhai
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