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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

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UPDATE-36
Inaaya- hogya tumhra kaam?
Ab khush to ho
Naag- thank you so much

Inaaya- ladki ko koe dukh nahi hona chahiye
Naag- kabhi nahi hona
Uski aankhon me sirf khushi ke ashu hi aayege aur kuch nahi

Inaaya- main dua karti hu ki aisa hi ho
Naag- aisa hi hoga

Inaaya- agar koe aur help chahiye es matter par to call karna lekin sirf essi chhij ke liye karna aur kisi ke liye nahi
Naag- okay
Thanks one again

Inaaya- lucifer tumhe jana chahiye
Lucifer- kaha?

Inaaya- ashmita sayad tumhra intezaar Kar rahi hai
Lucifer- mera kyu intezaar karegi?
Main bol ke aaya hu

Inaaya- jao to pata chal jayega
Lucifer- chala jaunga
Aur agar usse kaam hoga to vo khud bhi aa sakti hai

Inaaya- tumhe humari deal to yaad hai na?
Lucifer- yaddast achi hai meri
Baar baar same chhij repeat karne ka koe matlab nahi hai

Inaaya- OK nahi karti
Main ja rahi hu aur sayad tumhe bhi jana chahiye
Inaaya ne etni baar jane ke liye bol diya ki lucifer chhid kar gaya hi nahi

Vo naag ke sath farmhouse par aagya aur dono party karne lage

Aaj pura gunda group nashe me jhum raha tha aur ho bhi kyu na humare naag ki shadi pakki hue hai

Vaise naag dikhta bhi acha tha aur jab inaaya ne khud bol diya ki uska business partner hai to koe mana karega bhi kaise?
Inaaya naam hi etna bada tha bc

Lucifer aur baki sab puri raat party karte rahe aur jab tak karte rahe jab tak vo vahi dher nahi ho gaye

Lucifer abhi zinda tha lekin nashe me vo bhi khub hi tha esliye bechara rengte rengte apne flat pahucha aur vahi hall me hi gir gaya aur so gaya
Thodi bahut der shanti se soya hoga fir vohi bakchodi hue aur uth gaya

Nashe aur nind na aane ke karan usse gussa to bahut aa raha tha lekin vo kuch kar nahi sakta tha

Uth ke sabse pehle to shower liya kyuki sareer me se bas daru ki hi smell aa rahi thi aur fir chhilam leke bath gaya balcony me shanti se

Dusri jagah

Malik- kya pata chala?
Aadmi- boss vaha ki sabse badi gang ka to maine bataya hi tha naag naam ka banda chalata hai

Malik- ha aage bole
Aadmi- vo to bas ek puppet hai
Asli raaj to koe aur kar raha hai

Malik- koe aur?
Kon hai vo?
Aadmi- lucifer naam hai
Bilkul janwar jaisa dikhta hai
Meri to dekh ke hi fat gaye thi

Malik- aur?
Aadmi- vo din me ashmita ke sath rahta hai pure time aur raat me underworld dekhta hai

Malik- guard hai uska?
Aadmi- lagta to nahi hai
Kafi close hai dono

Malik- to Don se pyaar kiya hai ashmita ne?
Fir to usse ne mara hoga apne aadmiyo ko
Aadmi- uske alava koe nahi kar sakta

Malik- kitna powerful hai vo?
Aadmi- vo hi pure sehar ko chalata hai
Ek bahut badi gang hai
Weapons bhi bahut hai
Simple sa matlab ye hai ki uske marji ke bina vaha ek patta bhi nahi hilta

Malik- uski kamjori kya hai?
Aadmi- kuch bhi nahi pata chali
Yaha tak ye bhi nahi pata chala ki vo kon hai aur kaha se aaya hai?
Na hi uske family background ke bare me kuch pata hai

Malik- pata karo fir
Ussi ne humare aadmiyo ko mara hoga
Aadmi- mujhe bhi aisa hi lag raha hai

Malik- aur pata karo uske bare me
Es baar tayari puri karke jayenge
Aadmi- jee boss

Aise hi subah hogaye aur lucifer tayar hokar ashmita ke ghar chala gaya lekin vaha to alag hi bomb futa uske upar kyuki ashmita office ja chuki thi usse chhod kar
Lucifer fir man me galliya dete hue ki bc sach me esko dore hi padte hai sochte sochte khud bhi office chala gaya

Lekin vaha bhi ashmita nahi thi vo kisi meeting me chali gaye thi

To lucifer siya se baat karne lag gaya
Lucifer- ma'am kaha gaye tumhri?
Siya- unki kuch meetings hai aaj ki
Vahi gaye hai

Lucifer- mujhe kyu nahi pata meetings ke bare me?
Siya- ye main kaise bata sakti hu?

Lucifer- are tum sab kuch bata sakti ho
Bas mujhe batati nahi ho
Siya- kya matlab?

Lucifer- etni sunder ladki ho tum
Tumhe to sab bahut aasani se pata chal jata hoga to fir mujhe kyu nahi batati?
Siya- kyuki aap puchte nahi ho

Lucifer- ab puch raha hu
Batao
Siya- kya batau?

Lucifer- us din tumhe exercise nahi sikha paya
Aaj sikhogi?
Siya- nahi

Lucifer- kyu?
Siya- mujhe jarurat nahi hai aur Ma'am ne bhi mana kiya hai

Lucifer- konsi ma'am ne?
Siya- ashmita ma'am ne

Lucifer- usse kya matlab tumhri personal life se?
Siya- ma'am ne bola tha ki lucifer ke sath akele nahi jaogi kahi bhi

Lucifer- eski to gusse me apne man me bola

Lucifer- es office ke bahar bhi tumhri ek life hai aur us life par sirf tumhra hak hai
Uske bare me tumhe koe order nahi de sakta samjhi?
Siya- mujhe pata hai
Lekin yaha to ma'am hai na
Agar unhone mujhe nikal diya to main kya karungi?

Lucifer- job ki kami hai kya?
Siya- nahi lekin raichand group ek hi hai

Lucifer- aur rathore group bhi ek hi hai
Siya- kya matlab?

Lucifer- main vaha lagva dunga tumhe
Siya- I'm sorry mujhe kahi nahi jana
Aur aap bhi mujhse door raha karo
Ma'am fir mujh par gussa karti hai

Lucifer- tumhri ma'am ki hi class leta hu aaj main
Siya- mera naam mat lena please

Lucifer- tumhra hi naam lunga aur ye bhi bolunga ki siya mujhe dinner ke liye puch rahi thi aur ye bhi ki siya ko main kal se exercise sikhaunga
Siya- nahi nahi please aisa mat karna
Main ma'am ki bahut respect karti hu
Please mere career aur respect ke sath mat khelna

Lucifer- main to khelunga
Aur lucifer vaha se cabin me aajata hai

" bc esko kya hogya hai, pehle to ye bol rahi thi ki office ke baad kuch bhi karo mujhe fark nahi padta aur ab siya ko dhamki dene lag gaye?
Kuch to locha hai lucifer, kuch to locha hai
Karna padega ashmita ka ilaaz tab jake hi manegi ye
Aise to sala sukha pad jayega meri zindagi me aur fir kya main lucifer the great apne hath se kaam chalayega?
Nahi nahi nahi ye nahi hone dunga main
Etne bure din nahi aane dunga"
Lucifer vaha batha batha yehi soch raha tha aur time bit raha tha lekin ashmita nahi aaye

Lucifer ne call bhi ki lekin sayad meeting me hone ki vajah se call attend nahi ki
Subah se shayam hogaye aur ashmita ne na phone attend kiya aur na office aaye
Aur lucifer uske office me bakchodi kar raha tha

Fir kuch dimag me aaya aur socha ki kyu na eske cabin ko check kiya jaye aur dekhe kya milta hai

Vo sab kuch check karne laga aur jo chhij vaha rakhi hue thi usse exect same jagah par bhi rakh raha tha taki ashmita ko koe doubt na ho

Jada kuch nahi tha vaha par bas kaam ki files thi aur kuch nahi tabhi usse ek photo dikhi
Bahut purani photo thi ki bache ki lag rahi thi aur uske sath ek ladki bhi thi jo bahut khush lag rahi thi
Lucifer ne ye to pahchan liya tha ki ladki ashmita hai lekin ladke ka nahi pata chal raha tha
Usne photo apne phone me click ki aur vapas vahi rakh di
Aur kuch nahi mila usse vaha par

Fir time ho gaya tha vapas Jane ka to last me ek baar aur call ki ashmita ko lekin usne nahi attend ki
Kuch soch kar vo uske ghar ki taraf chal diya

Vo bilkul shant dimag se ja raha tha ki tabhi uske dimag me ek wild thought aaya ki kahi ashmita kisi musibaat me to nahi hai?
Usne shield to sirf ma'am ke liye banae thi aur agar human threat ma'am se door ashmita ke liye aaya to usse pata hi nahi chalega
Ye jaise hi uske dimag me aaya uski raftaar ek dam se tej hogaye aur vo lagbhag bhagte hue ashmita ke ghar ki taraf pahuchne laga

Raste bhar vo ashmita ko call kar raha tha uske pass baki kisi ke number to the nahi ki Tara se ya kisi aur se puch le

Ashmita ke ghar pahucha jaldi se gate khola aur samne dekha to ashmita khadi thi
Lucifer gusse me uske pass gaya aur
Ye sab kya hai?
Tumhe batana chahiye na ki kaha ho...

Chataaaak chaataaakkkkk chaataaak
Teen jor jor se thapad bade Lucifer ke gallo par
Lucifer ko to jaise tare dikhne lage aur dimag satakne laga

Vo gusse me kuch bolne hi wala tha ki

Ashmita- and I thought we were friends
Maine kya kuch nahi kiya tumhre liye?
Har time yehi sochti rahi ki kaise bhi karke tumhe tumhri yaadein vapas mil jaye, tumhe tumhre jawab mil jaye lekin badle me tumne kya kiya mere sath?
Kyu lucifer kyu?
Maine kya bigada tha tumhra?
Lucifer- what the fuck you are talking about?
Aur dobara mujhe galti se bhi marne ki kosis mat karna nahi to anjaam bahut bura hoga

Ashmita- kya anjaam?
Ha kya anjaam?
Mere jism aur rooh ko tabhah kar doge tum?
Lucifer- ashmita mujhe sidhe saaf sabdo me baat kiya karo
Kya kiya hai maine?

Ashmita- tumne mujhe dhokha diya hai
Aakhir nikle to tum bhi na baki sab ke tarah hi na
Lucifer- esse pehle ki main apna control khou mujhe es thapaad ka reason bata do

Ashmita ne gusse me ek recording chala di
Vohi recording to inaaya ne chhupke se ki thi Lucifer ke sath deal karte time jisme lucifer ashmita ko use karne ke liye ha kar raha tha

Jaise hi usne ye sab suna uske muh se sirf etna hi nikla " that bitch played me"

Ashmita- meri jindagi se chale jao lucifer aur vapas mujhe kabhi apni sakal tak mat dikhana
Lucifer- I'm sorry for this
I really didn't mean that

Ashmita- mujhe kuch nahi sunana
Main apni kasam tood rahi hu aur aaj se tum aazad ho
Lucifer- tumhe pata hai main aisa nahi kar sakta

Ashmita- tumhe aisa karna hi padega
Ab main ek second ke liye bhi tumhe apne aas pass nahi dekhna chahti
Lucifer- I'm sorry I can't do that

Ashmita- tumne hi kaha tha ki agar tum yaha chhod ke gaye to tumhe bahut kuch sahna padega
Congratulations maine tumhra kaam aasan kar diya
Ab tum nahi main tumhe chhod rahi hu aur jo bhi consequences honge usse main face karne ko tayar hu
Lucifer- aise nahi hota ashmita
Ek baar kasam kha li to fir vo etni aasani se nahi todi ja sakti
Aur main tumhe aisa karne nahi dunga

Ashmita- tum yaha se ja sakte ho ab
Lucifer- main nahi ja sakta
Meri majburi hai

Ashmita- ha tumhri majburi hi hai jiski vajah se tum kisi ki bhi life barbaad kar sakte ho
Hai na?
Lucifer- tumhe jo samjhna hai samjh lo lekin main nahi ja sakta

Ashmita- get the hell out of here lucifer
Please chale jao yaha se
Main tumhe aur barbadast nahi kar sakti ab
Lucifer- main tumhre sath kuch galat nahi karne wala tha
Inaaya ko maine sirf ha esliye boli thi ki vo mujhe sachae bata de Agar usse pata hai to
Tum mujhe galat samjh sakti hu
Aur koe bhi saja de sakti ho lekin mujhe jane ke liye mat bolo
Maine dekha hai kya hota hai jab koe apni kasme todta hai
Main tumhre sath vo sab nahi hone dunga
Chhod ke jaunga to main jaunga
Dard milega to mujhe milega aur narak bhi mera hi hai
Esliye main abhi ja raha hu apne flat lekin subah vapas aaunga
Ye story aise khatam nahi ho sakti
Main esse hone nahi dunga

Aur lucifer ek najar ashmita par dalta hai jo buri tarah se ro rahi thi, ro ro kar uski aankhen laal ho chuki thi lekin abhi es waqt lucifer kuch nahi kar sakta tha esliye usse vaha se jana hi theek laga

Aur vo chhup chhap vaha se nikal gaya uske jate hi ashmita aur jor jor se rone lag gaye
Vo to ye sab sun ke puri tarah toot hi chuki thi
Aisa nahi tha ki usse lucifer se pyaar hogya tha vo to bas uski help karna chahti thi as a friend aur etne sab me thoda bahut attraction hone normal tha
Esliye hi usse jada bura lag raha tha ki jiske liye usne etna sab kiya vo hi uske rooh ke sath khelna chahta hai

Ashmita hall se uthi aur apne room me chali gaye aur band karke vapas rone lagi.....
Yaha inaya great punishment deserve karti hai aur Lucifer usay punish na kar saka to jhand hai phir woh 1 number ka
 

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Bahut badhiya update hai bhai..... Lucifer shekar ko uske anjam dene ke liye jail se bahar nikala or naag or lucifer plan baana rahe the ki kaise uske gand dhoya jay...liken maaj raahte pe anika mil gwyi dono se...bechara naag to behosh ho geya.....dekhte hai lucifer konsa anaconda or konsa bill ki baat kahi hai anika se
Waiting for next update
Lucifer ek hi anaconda ki baat karta hai lekin bill bahut sare hai
 

Lone survivor

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E kya aafat aa gayi Sala lucifer ko power dikhati hai lucifer uski Maa chodega......anika ka kya hai shekar ne jo wo ise Marne chali aayi...naag ko chot aaya to lucifer jyada gusa ho gya dekhte hain wo kya krta hai....
Ab to sulah ho gaye na bhai
Ab kyu kuch karega lucifer?

Lucifer enjoy Maam ke family ke sath or last me jo bat kahi maam ne lucifer ko thoda hurt laga ....

Btw nyc update....
Thank you so much bhai
 

Lone survivor

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Jabardast update bhai maja aa gaya waiting for next update
Thank you bhai
 

Lone survivor

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Bhai bada accha aur unique concept laaye ho aur is story me bhi Sanavi aur hero ka chillam phukna yah sab common hai Life of Engineer se. Lekin suspenseful yah bhi pichli story se zada hain.
Are kaha the bhai aap?
Welcome bhai
Aur nashe to sari stories me common hi hote hai meri me
 

Lone survivor

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Yaha inaya great punishment deserve karti hai aur Lucifer usay punish na kar saka to jhand hai phir woh 1 number ka
Vo jhaad hi hai bhai
 
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