Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[Lone survivor]

Awesome update

Thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice update bro keep updating the post

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Awesome story! With Little bit funny twists

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Madhuri ko kya Pata uska hubby ka kya hal hone vala hai wo to bichari yehi samjh rahi he k usne jail se farar ho gya hai ...wo bichari dari hui hai lucifer usko dhyan rakhe ga ...​

Lucifer sabka dhayan rakega

Arohi ne lucifer ko jija man Liya hai payal b thoda lgta lucifer ke Pyar me hai dekhte lucifer kya krta hai ...​

Lucifer kya karega?
Ek hi kaam aata hai usse

Ashmita v Jan gaya hai lucifer uske bap ke sath fir kuch galat karega....Tara ka or lucifer ka 36 ka akhda hai fir ashmita bol rahi hai k Tara lucifer ko pyar krne lagi hai ​

Kabhi kabhi nafarat wale insaan se pyaar ho jata hai

 

[Thakur008]

Lone survivor bhai kaab taak aane wala h update?

 

[Lone survivor]

Ashmita, Tara, Payal... Teeno hi kuchh samay se kahani mein dikhayi nahi di thi, and finally is update mein teeno ke hi darshan ho gaye... Inaaya is still missing but I think uska scene seedhe Lucifer ke saath hi aayega... Ashmita aur Lucifer mein last time jab baat huyi thi tab Lucifer ne indirectly kaha tha us se ki jald hi Suresh ki aur bhi kutayi honi hai, aur usi baat ko lekar Ashmita pareshan hai... Is baar Suresh ko kaisi bhi punishment de Lucifer, I don't think ki Ashmita ya even Tara ko koyi fark padega... Seedha sa reason iska yahi hai ki is baar Lucifer ke paas jo reason hai wo bohot bada hai, would be looking forward to see how both the sisters would react on knowing the truth of Anisha,

Ha ye dekhna to interesting hoga jab unhe sachae ka pata chalega lekin anisha ko jab sach pata chalega tab kya hoga?

waise ye madam bhi gaayab hain na..?

Kya Gul khila rahi hai vo?

Aarohi aur Ashmita bichauliye jaisi kyon lag rahi hain between... Ashmita pehle apni to setting kar le, tab jaake Tara ki help karne ki sochni chahiye, yahaan to madam share karne ki baat tak pahunch gayi hain ...

Usse setting karni hi nahi ho to?
Vo to apni behan ko bas rasta dikha rahi thi

Idhar Aarohi bhi Payal ka dhyan baar – baar Lucifer ki taraf hi mod rahi hai, ye pehle hi saaf hai ki Payal bhi Lucifer ko pasand karne lagi hai, ab ye pasand pyaar hai ya nahi, ye to baad mein hi pata chalega, let's see Lucifer kab milta hai is se...

Jab ye bulayegi

Maadhuri aur Lucifer ke beech ye aakhiri kuchh baatein, kaafi kuchh keh gayi... Firstly, Maadhuri cares a lot for Lucifer, ye ab jag jaahir ho chuka hai, but kahin na kahin ab ye bhi lagne laga hai ki Maadhuri bhi Lucifer ke liye wo feelings rakhti hai, jis se actual mein wo bachna chahti thi...

Mujhe bhi aisa hi lag raha hai

Lucifer ko apni maut dikhayi de rahi hai, aur ye sunkar Maadhuri ka jaisa reaction expected tha wahi hua... Haalanki, Lucifer hurt ho gaya uski baaton se parantu jis position mein filhaal Maadhuri hai uski koyi galti nahi thi wahaan par... Lucifer ne jis tarah uski problems solve kar uski family ko dobara ikkatha kiya hai, uska ehsan wo alag se paale baithi hai... Dekhte hain dono ka rishta aage kya roop lega... Ye to pakka hai ki bach to shayad naa hi paaye Maadhuri Lucifer ke charm se...

Pehle to aapko ye nahi lag raha tha ab kyu lagne lag gaya bhai?

Beharhal, Lucifer ne kaha ki wo apne ant ko feel kar paa raha hai, shayad uski baat sahi hi thi, lagta yahi hai ki Lucifer ki kahani apne aakhiri padaav par hai... Pichhle kuchh samay mein baar – baar wo zakhmi ho raha hai, uska khoon behna koyi chhoti baat to hai nahi...

Kya pata khoon kisi aur reason se bah raha ho?

Idhar Annika ne bhi jab Lucifer par hamla kiya to kaafi achha asar hua tha Lucifer par uska, chaahe kitni hi powerful kyon na ho Annika par Lucifer ko khadedna aasan nahi...

Ye to sach hai

Aghor ka hi effect pada hua hai kya Lucifer par..?

Ab Maadhuri ko bhi khabar mil gayi hai ki uska Pati jail se faraar ho chuka hai, par wo bechari nahi jaanti ki wo khud bhi maut ke munh mein baitha hua hai... Lucifer akela kam tha jo ab ye Annika bhi uske pichhe aa gayi... Usne kaha tha ki Maadhuri ke pati ne uski zindagi barbaad kar di hai, kya Annika ki family se bhi koyi uske racket ka shikaar bana tha? Sawaal ye bhi hai ki Annika ke paas ye powers aayi kahaan se? Kyonki abhi tak jitni bhi ladkiyan nazar aayi hain kahani mein wo sabhi normal humans hi lagi hain... Kaashvi ke baare mein zaroor socha jaa sakta hai, ki shayad wo apni powers abhi tak chhupa rahi ho... But, dekhte hain aage Annika kya karti hai... Abhi ke liye to dono mein sulah ho hi gayi hai...

Dono me sulah to bilkul nahi hue hai
Vo kahte hai na dusman ka dusman dost hota hai vo wala lag raha hai mujhe to

Is beech ye bhi pata chal gaya ki Naag ki kya importance hai Lucifer ke liye... Muskaan, Alia aur Rahul, teeno ka hi school bhi shuru hone waala hai, finally in bachon ki life mein bhi kuchh khushiyan aayi hain... Ab dekhna ye hai ke Lucifer Maadhuri ke pati ke saath kya karega, aur Annika ki back story to shayad baad mein hi saamne aayegi...

Kya pata jaldi bhi aajaye

Inaaya ka intezar rahega...

Thoda aur karna padega abhi

All the three updates were really amazing... Pichhle kuchh samay mein action ki maatra kaafi zyada thi kahani mein aur in teen updates mein wo balance ho gayi hai... Emotional part kaafi strong tha in teen updates mein, especially Maadhuri aur uske bachon waala... Lucifer ka Alia ke ek baar kehne par maan jaana, aur un teeno ko ghumane le jaana... Ashmita - Tara aur Payal - Aarohi ki conversations... A good mix of emotions & humour...

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Thank you so much bhai
Keep supporting

 

[Lone survivor]

Lone survivor bhai kaab taak aane wala h update?

Aa Raha hai bhai kyu tension le rahe ho

 

[Lone survivor]

Bohot hi sundar update bhai jann


Luci ko bhi feeling samaj aarhi hey ye acha hey lekin ye madhuri ka scene nhi samaj nhi aa रहा hey

Lucifer ko feeling samjh aane lag gaye aur aapko Madhuri ka scene nahi samjh raha??

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice update

Thank you