Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[Surya_021]

Superb update bro

 

[Death Kiñg]

Annika ki kahani kya hai ye to abhi saamne nahi ayaa hai par lagta hai ki jis tarah Muskaan ko aghwa kiya tha Shekhar ne, kuchh waise hi shayad Annika ke saath kiya hoga... Important baat ye hai ki Annika ek orphan hai, ab uske parents ki mrityu kaise huyi ye bhi ek sawaal hai, kya Shekhar ka hi haath tha uske pichhe bhi? Dekhne waali baat ye hai ki Annika ka gussa normal nahi hai, ye shayad gussa nahi balki ataah nafrat hai... Aise mein possibilities badh jaati hain ki shayad Shekhar ne Annika ke kisi apne ko nuksaan pahunchaya ho...

Lucifer ne poora mauka diya Annika ko taaki wo apna gussa Shekhar par nikaal sake... Par dekha jaaye to abhi to bas ye sab shuru hi hua hai... Abhi tak to sirf Annika hi Shekhar ko saza de rahi hai, Lucifer aur Naag ne to shayad use ab tak ek jhaapad bhi nahin maara hoga... Koyi shakh nahi hai is baat mein ki jald hi Shekhar ko dharti par nark ke darshan hone waale hain... Is beech Lucifer ne Annika ko ek tarah se samjhane ki koshish ki hai ki gusse par kaaboo na rakh paane ke kya anjaam ho sakte hain... Lucifer bhugat chuka hai isiliye samjha paa raha hai, dekhna ye hai ki Annika par iska kya asar hota hai...

Jo past scene aaya tha Roshini ka uske mutabik wo ek Ghost Rider thi, past scene ki baaton se to bilkul hi Lucifer ki xerox lag rahi thi wo, at least soch mein... Abhi bhi Annika aur Lucifer ki soch kuchh zyada alag nahi hai... Dono hi brutal hain aur saamne waale par kisi bhi tarah se rehem nahi karte... Is beech Lucifer ne Annika se bhi wahi sab baatein ki jo wo har ek ladki se karta hi hai, parantu lagta nahi ki Annika itni aasani se Lucifer ke pyaar mein giregi, at least baakiyon se shayad thoda zyada time lagega ise...

Inaaya se abhi bhi nahi mil paaya hai Lucifer, kya wo naaraz hai Lucifer se? Ab to bohot time ho chuka hai use kahani mein dikhe huye, shayad kisi problem ya pareshani mein fansi ho wo... But Ashmita se mulaakat ho gayi hai Lucifer ki aur saath hi waapis se uske office bhi pahunch gaya Lucifer... Anisha se softly baat karne ka kehkar ek tarah se Lucifer ka usi aur ishara tha jo sach Ashmita ke saamne future mein aane waala hai... Dekhte hain Suresh ka number kab tak legega, shayad pehle Shekhar ki hi achhe se dhunayi hogi, aur uske baad...

Maadhuri bhi ab dheere – dheere track se utar rahi hai... Ab tak to wo ek dum sakhti se apne belief par chal rahi thi, parantu ab kuchh samay se uske kadam dagmagane lage hain... Lucifer ke saath wo kiss, uske baad use thappad maarna, Rahul ko ghar waapsi, aur end mein jo baatein Maadhuri aur Lucifer mein huyi, definitely achha – khaasa fark pada hai Maadhuri par is sabka... Dekhte hain kya faisla leti hai wo, lag raha hai ki jald hi Lucifer ka bhaagya use Maadhuri ke paas le jaane waala hai, par sawaal ye hai ki Maadhuri use gale lagayegi ya thappad maaregi..?

Ab lagta yahi hai ki kahani shayad speed pakadne waali hai, shayad ab Lucifer ko kuchh to pata chalega hi uske past se juda... Last time jab Saanvi ke baare mein wo jhalkiyan dikhi thi, use kaafi waqt beet chuka hai... Mere hisaab se to sabhi ladkiyon ko entry ho hi chuki hai kahani mein, to shayad ab story apne asli maksad ki taraf badhne waali hai, joki hai Lucifer ki maut..?

Teeno hi Updates bohot hi badhiya the... Serious moments mein kahani ka rukh humour ki taraf mod dena, aur wo bhi itni khubsurti se, definitely bohot hi kam writers aisa kar paate hain, and you're one of those! Btw. Intezar rahega Inaaya ka ...

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

 

[parkas]

UPDATE-144
Past

Lucifer- tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?
Roshini- yahi to aana tha mujhe

Lucifer- hell me?
Roshini- bolo to yehi ka gaya hai

Lucifer- kisne bola hai?
Roshini- yaha aane ka kon bol sakta hai?

Lucifer- enme kya hai?
Roshini- aatma hai

Lucifer- souls?
Roshini- hindi nahi aati?

Lucifer- nahi hawas wali language aati hai mujhe
Roshini- to mr. Hell lord ye hai bhagi hue aatma aur main enhe pakad kar layi hu

Lucifer- tum?
Roshini- main ladki hu to tum samjh rahe ho kamjor hu?

Lucifer- ladkiyo jitni powerful to koe nahi hoti
Roshini- fir shock kyu ho rahe ho?

Lucifer- main abhi tak samjha nahi
Kon ho tum?
Roshini- yaha ek job post khali hai main usse bharne aae hu

Lucifer- job karne galat jagah nahi aa gaye tum?
Roshini- mere hisaab se to ye best hai

Lucifer- kis job ke liye aae ho tum?
Roshini- main ghost rider hu
Yaha ka jo tha vo retire ho gaya esliye mujhe yaha bejha gaya hai

Lucifer- are bc
Ghost rider aur vo bhi ek ladki?
Roshini- nahi ho sakti?

Lucifer- bilkul ho sakti hai
Ab yaha man lagne lagega
Roshini- ha mera entertainment karne ke liye tum jo ho

Lucifer- ha main bahut ache se entertain karunga tumhe
Roshini- ander aajau to main?

Lucifer- ab kya mere ander aana hai tumhe?
Pehle hi to pura ghus chuka hai?
Roshini- tumhri kismat etni achi nahi hai

Lucifer- khud ki kismat par to bahut barosa hai mujhe
Tabhi to bol raha hu
Roshini- mat bolo to
En soul ka kya karna hai?

Lucifer- marna mat baki jo man kare karo
Roshini- maarna kyu hai?
Khelna hai enke sath

Lucifer- aisi baatein karti ho aur fir puchogi pyaar kyu hua?
Roshini- not impressed at all
Next time achi line ke sath aana

Lucifer- badi chhij chalegi impress karne ke liye?
Roshini- mujhe pata chala hai ki kuch aatamo ko hunt karna hai?

Lucifer- pata chala hai to karo
Lekin mere pass rote hue mat aana ki lucifer meri madad kar do souls ne meri bahut buri tarah maar li hai
Roshini- aisa jis din ho jayega us din main khud yaha se chali jaungi

Lucifer- ohh fir to do pal ki mahman ho tum
Roshini- waqt bataega

Lucifer- har chhij waqt par chhodna kaha se theek hai?
Roshini- tum par chhod du fir?

Lucifer- mere par apni booty chhod do fir main usko dance karaunga
Roshini- sahi kahte hai log tumhre bare me

Lucifer- galat bol kar marna thodi hai unhe
Roshini- galat hi matlab tha mera

Lucifer- maine compliment ki tarah le liya
Khush raho ab
Roshini- fuck you

Lucifer- ohh yeah fuck me please
Roshini lucifer ko ek ganda sa look deti hai fir vaha se ander ki aur chali jati hai****

Anika- uth raha hai uth raha hai
Lucifer- nahi abhi to batha hua hai

Anika- main eski baat kar rahi hu
Lucifer- ohh mujhe laga mere ki baat kar rahi ho
Us par mahnat karni padegi tabhi uthega vo

Anika- hath hai na tumhre pass kar mahnat
Lucifer- tere hath kar denge to maja doguna ho jayega

Anika- mere hath usko ukhaad kar fek dega
Lucifer- try karke dekh
Nikalu pant

Shekhar- main kaha hu?
Anika ke bolne se pehle hi shekar bol pada

Anika aur lucifer ek sath "hell me"

Abhi shekhar puri tarah hosh me nahi aaya tha esliye vo kabhi anika ko dekh raha tha kabhi lucifer ko aur hosh me aane ki kosis kar raha tha

Anika- pani feko eske muh par
Lucifer- moot du kya?

Anika- moot do
Lucifer- edar dekho mere taraf tab jada tej aaega

Anika- mere na mood ko aisi tasi mat karo
Ek to ye etne der se so raha hai aur vo bhi shanti se ki mujhe hazam nahi ho raha
Lucifer- mera bhi nahi hoga hazam tumhe

Anika ne lucifer ko ignore kiya aur shekhar par pani daal diya jis se vo jhatke se puri tarah hosh me aagya

Apni dono taraf dekha to ek taraf lucifer khada tha aur dusri taraf anika

Shekhar- tum kon ho?
Anika- tumhri maut
Aur ek gajab ka jhapat marti hai shekar ko

Ek banda jo abhi abhi hosh me aaya tha anika ke chamaat se vapas behoshi ke kagaar par pahuch gaya

Lucifer- sona mat vapas nahi to teri gand me bamboo daal dunga main
Lucifer gusse me bola

Shekhar- kya chahte ho tum?
Lucifer- mera to tujhe pata hi hai
Eska ye jane

Anika- pahchanta to hoga hi tu mujhe?
Shekhar- main nahi janta
Kon ho tum?
Kya chahti ho mere se?

Anika- main un bahut sari ladkiyo me se hu jinki jindagi tune kharab ki hai
Aur vapas ek thappad rakh deti hai shekhar ke gaal par

Lucifer- ab kya tujhe sote hi rahna hai?
Uth madarchod
Aur dekh apne kaal ko
Lucifer shekhar ki gardan pakad kar usse uthata hai aur ghasite hue bahar ki taraf le jane lagta hai

Bahar naag bhi mojud tha jo shekhar ko jaga dekh kar khush ho gaya

Naag- bhag nanga karke latka dete hai esko
Lucifer- aur vo bhi ulta
Fir dekhte hai eski mardangi

Shekhar- chhod do mujhe
Main tumhre pair pakadta hu chhod do mujhe
Lucifer- chhodne chudvane ka time gaya
Ab to gand marane ka waqt aagya hai

Aur lucifer usse bahar le aata hai jaha unhone raichand ko latkaya tha

Lucifer- es jagah ek aur insaan ki izzat utari thi aur essi jagah teri utregi
Naag latka madarchod ko

Lucifer shekhar ko chhod deta hai aur naag usse pakad kar badhne lagta hai

Shekhar jo bechara pehle se hi bahut jhakmi tha uski halaat ab aur kharab hone lag gaye thi
Vo ro raha tha, gidgida raha tha lekin yaha koe insaan to tha nahi jo pinghal jata

Sala sab ke sab to shataan the yaha aur upar se un shataano ka madhuri se bahut pyaara rishta bhi tha jiski vajah se vo apni havaniyat par utar aaye the

Naag ne shekhar ko nanga karke ulta latka diya tha

Anika- main start karungi
Aur anika ek rassi leke aaye aur aage se us par gaath bana kar usse moti kar di aur fir usse have me gumaya aur sidhe shekhar ke tatto par jakar lagi

Shekhar ki us waqt jo dardnaak chhikh nikali vo ache acho ka dil phingla kar rakh deti lekin yaha aisa kuch nahi hua

Kyuki ek ke baad ek ek ke baad ek shots us par padte gaye aur kuch hi minutes me vo fir se behosh ho gaya

Anika- uthao esko
Abhi nahi sona esko
Uthao esko
Lucifer- eski gand laal kar di tune aur ab soch rahi hai ye etni jaldi uth jayega?
Lamba gaya ye vapas

Anika- nahi ye vapas nahi behosh ho sakta
Aur anika gusse me betahasha kode barsane lagi shekhar par aur usse kisi ne roka bhi nahi

Jab vo thak ke chhur ho gaye to vahi jameen par bath gaye
Uski aankhon se abhi bhi bahut gussa jhalak raha tha lekin abhi vo kuch bol kar apna gussa shant nahi karna chahti thi

Lucifer- naag le ja esko ander aur marahm patti kara
Naag- bhai ye kuch jada jaldi nahi so gaya?

Lucifer- eske ande ab kabhi theek nahi ho payenge aur tujhe jada jaldi lag raha hai?
Naag- nahi mera matlab hum to maje kar hi nahi paaye?

Lucifer- ye nahi marega etni jaldi
Aur jab marega tab tak humara man bhar chuka hoga es se
Esliye le ja esse aur dawae vagra laga
Naag- jee bhai

Aur naag shekhar ko utha kar vaha se ander chala jata hai aur lucifer anika ke pass bath jata hai

Lucifer- apne gusse ko shant mat hone dena
Ye vohi gussa hai jo tumhe tum banaega
Esko apni kamjori nahi apni takaat banana
Maine bahut kuch khoya hai es gusse ke chakkar me esliye tumhe bata raha hu
Besak tum shekhar ke sath kuch bhi kar sakti ho lekin apne gusse ko galat jagah waste mat kar dena

Lucifer anika ke kandho par hath rakhta hai aur fir uth kar khud bhi ander chala jata hai....

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Lone survivor bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....

 

[Black soul]

Bhai phone se update deta hu
Post karte time bold apne aap normal ho jate hai

Oh! TU Kisi moderoter Sy setting kra lol bhaya Siraj Patel help krdo bhaya

 

[Siraj Patel]

Bhai phone se update deta hu
Post karte time bold apne aap normal ho jate hai

Oh! TU Kisi moderoter Sy setting kra lol bhaya Siraj Patel help krdo bhaya

Editor box mein content ko select karo (kisi bhi word ko select karke thoda hold karoge to option aa jaayega, jitna part select karna hai karlo yaa all select karlo) then editor box mein bold waale icon pe click karo ho jaayega.

 

[అరుణ్ కుమార్]

Nice update bro keep updating the post

 

[MEHAR1234]

Update

 

[devil@07]

update

 

[parkas]

Lone survivor bhai next update kab tak aayega?

 

[Shanu]

Mind-blowing update bhai