Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[Lone survivor]

Ab he priyanka ki bari lucifer se koi kese Bach skta hai usne bahut bada kand Kiya hai lgta hai ...
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Kya hi pata

Ashmita normal ho gya hai lakin Tara ka kya Hal hoga ....​

Vo Tara ka hoga jab pata chalega

Btw sandar update brother....​

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Congratulations lone bhai

Thank you so so much bhai
Much love

 

[Lone survivor]

शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Lone survivor bhai....
Nice and beautiful update.....

Thank you bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice update

Thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

Nice update bhai waiting for next update

Thank you bhai

 

[devil@07]

update kab tak aayega

 

[Lone survivor]

Pichhle dono updates mein Ashmita ke saamne uske baap ke ek aur kaarname ki hakeekat aayi hai aur iska wahi asar pada uspar jiski expectation kaafi samay se thi... Parantu lagta hai ki zindagi bhar apne ghatiya kaamon se sabka bura karne waale Raichand ki is harkat ke chalte, Inaaya aur Ashmita ke beech ki dooriyan shayad kam ho jaayengi...

Uski vajah se duriya bani uski vajah se duriya khatam hogi. Nice

Jo past saamne aaya hai us se saaf hai ki Raichand ne hi Ashmita ke dimaag mein kuchh na kuchh bhara hoga jiske kaaran usne Inaaya ko wahaan ignore kiya tha, parantu ismein Ashmita ki kya galti..? I think of all the story characters, except Lucifer, Ashmita has faced the most darkness in her life...

Maybe we haven't seen the back story of all the characters yet

Tara ko chhod den to shayad kuchh bhi nahi hai Ashmita ki zindagi mein... Inaaya bhale hi ab Ashmita se waapis pehle jaisa hi behave karne lage, means dono ki dosti waapis mazboot ho jaaye, par Lucifer ke jaane ki aahat jo Ashmita sun paa rahi hai, uska kya? Inaaya ki waapsi ki keemat ke taur par use Lucifer ko ganwana hoga, aur wo bhi tab jab poori ummeed hai ki maybe Lucifer ko mukti yaani maut Simran yaani Ashmita ke haathon hi milni hai... Dekhna hoga ki aur kya – kya sehna baaki hai Ashmita kw liye...

Abhi to suruvaat hai ashmita ke liye

Inaaya, Ashmita aur Lucifer teeno baahar gaye hain, kya Anisha se milne? I think Ashmita ko akele hi milne bolega Lucifer Anisha se, because dono ke beech jo baat cheet hogi, wo normal to shayad naa hi ho... Ashmita ki baaton se itna to saaf ho chuka hai ki wo apne baap ko nahi Anisha ki hi taraf hai, Tara Ashmita ki taraf hogi, ye bhi nischit hi hai, par dekhna ye hai ki Anisha kiski taraf hogi?

Ye acha question hai anisha kiski taraf hogi?

Anisha ne jo promise kiya hai Priyanka se ki sab kuchh aisa hi rahega, jaisa abhi hai, uska kya matlab hai..?

Nice observation

Kya Anisha koyi rishta nahi rakhne waali Ashmita aur Tara se? Ya fir Lucifer ko lekar kahi thi usne wo baat? Btw. Anisha se zyada to Priyanka yaad karyi hai Lucifer ko, Lucifer ne bhi kaha ki wo Priyanka se baat karna chahta hai, obviously uske ateet ke baare mein hi baat karega, jiske baare mein Lucifer shayad pehle se hi sab kuchh jaanta hai... But kya Anisha ko maaloom hai wo sab, shayad haan!

Ya sayad nahi

Yahi ummeed hai ki teeno behnen to at least saath aa jaayen, kyonki lagta yahi hai ki in behnon ki ginti future mein badhne waali hai...

Vaise enke baap me stamina to abhi bhi hai

Suresh ne aur kya – kya gul khilayen hain apne past mein ye to wahi jaane par Anisha ka Suresh ki beti hona kahani ke lihaaz se ek important point hai... Kyonki Payal aut shayad Annika bhi apne baap ki existence se anbhigya hi hon, clearly future mein aur bhi kayi raaz khulne hain Suresh aur uske kaarnamo se jude...

Suresh inaaya ka baap hai bhai raichand ashmita ka

Btw. Ashmita ki baat bhi gaur karne laayak hai, Lucifer sach mein kaafi sudhar gaya hai... Eda aur Raaj bhi yahi baat kar rahe the kaafi pehle ki Lucifer waisa ban raha hai jaisa Saanvi chahti thi... Shayad apne antim samay mein Lucifer samajh gaya hai ki apne pichhe jitniyo ko wo akela chhodkar jaayega, unke future ko secure karna bhi uski hi zimmedari hai...

Ho sakta hai

Chahe wo Inaaya ke baap ki problem solve karna ho, Ashmita ko uske baap ki hakikat dikhana ho, Anisha ko uski behno se milwana ki kavayad ho, ya fir Payal ki settle hone mein madad karna... Indirectly, Annika ki bhi madad hi kar raha tha wo, taaki wo apni nafrat aur gusse ko sahi tareeke se istemaal kar sake... Not to forget Maadhuri, uski hi to sabse badi madad ki hai Lucifer ne, ab dekhna ye hai ki Lucifer ke ant nazdeek to hai, par kitna nazdeek..?

Kya pata lucifer sirf sex ke liye kar raha ho?

Both the updates were really beautiful! Ashmita's breakdown touched the heart, you've quite beautifully portrayed the feelings of Ashmita and Inaaya/Anisha too... In the midst of all the seriousness and emotions, Ashmita calling Anisha as her little one, was the real highlight!

She is the little one of ashmita

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Thank you so much bhai

 

[Lone survivor]

Superb update...

Thank you

 

[Lone survivor]

Nyc update bhai

Thank you