Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

[Lone survivor]

WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye

 

[Lone survivor]

Bahut maza aaya Bhai..... Anisha or lucifer ke bich milan ho geyi.....aari premikao me se do se to milan ho geyi baki ke logo se kya milan hoga....

Vo to waqt hi bataega bhai

ab supernatural fight hua to or bhi maza aayega

Karte hai kuch intezaam

Waiting for next update

Soon

 

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Wow so exotic update bhau beautiful

Thank you bhai

 

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Super erotic update and keep writing

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Nice update

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Payal ko ek aisi date par lekar gaya Lucifer jiski shayad Payal ko sabse zyada zaroorat thi... Payal aur Aarohi dono hi orphans hain aur definitely dono ka hi bachpan kuchh zyada achha guzra nahi hoga... Aarohi ko to fir bhi Payal ne ek behtar bachpan jeene ka mauka diya hi hoga, par wo khud... Lucifer bhi! Lucifer ka bachpan kaisa tha keh e ki zarurat nahi, shayad paida hote hi uski hatheliyon par lahu ke nishaan chhod diye gaye the... Un karmon ki saza bhogta aaya hai wo, jiska chayan usne kiya hi nahi tha... Khair, is date ke zariye dono ko mauka mila apna – apna bachpan kuchh palon ke liye jeene ka...

Dono ka to pata nahi lekin payal ne ache se jee liya hoga kuch ghanto me hi

Aarohi ko wahaan bulana bhi Lucifer ka hi plan tha... Aur kuchh ho na ho, par Aarohi ko khushi zaroor huyi hogi apni behen ko khush dekh kar...

Saalo baad payal khush jo dekhi thi usne

Beharhal, jo baat dekhne laayak rahi wo thi wo ek pankti, jismein aapne kaha ki Lucifer sabhi ki zindagi ko behtar banana chahta hai par is koshish mein wo sabhi ko ek dukh ke bhanvar mein dhakel raha hai... I think ki Lucifer ab theek se soch – samajh nahi paa raha hai situation ko, wo kuchh zyada hi ghoom chuka hai is chakravyuha mein aur ab jab use faisla lena hai to uske decisions shayad sahi nahi hain... Inaaya ke samay saaf dikhayi de raha tha ki wo uske kareeb jaane se katra raha tha kyonki wo hakeekat jaanta tha, par ab shayad wo paagal ho hi chuka hai...

Mujhe bhi kuch kuch aisa hi lag raha hai vo pehle inaaya se door bhaga fir aur door bhaga aur badi muskil se kaashvi ki vajah se vapas pass aaya lekin yaha sayad devil khel raha hai uske dimag se

Payal par is date ka kitna gehra effect pada hoga ye sochne waali baat hai... Lucifer ki double meaning baaton par uska normal reaction aur uski tareef par sharmana, flat to wo pehle hi ho chuki thi aur is date ke baad I think wo pyaar mein paagal bhi ho jaayegi... Yaani, jald hi Inaaya, Ashmita aur Anisha ke baad Payal ka bhi number lagne waala hai... Waise bhi kitne samay tak bachti ye Lucifer se!

Koe nahi bach sakta lucifer se

Idhar, Lucifer par ab devil ka prabhav badhne laga hai... Ye Aghor ka effect hai ya fir Lucifer ka ant nazdeek hone ka, ye samajh paana mushkil hai par ek baat saaf hai ki aage chalkar is badlav ke kaaran, Lucifer ko bohot si mushkilen ho sakti hain... Ye to Anisha thi isliye maamla sambhal gaya par agar Maadhuri hoti? Ya fir Ashmita? Shayad Lucifer ko gehrayi se analyse karna hoga is situation ko kyonki iska bhi koyi na koyi solution to hoga hi, jo shayad abhi Lucifer samajh naa paa raha ho...

Ashmita ke samne to devil ki bhi nahi chalti bhai ha Madhuri hoti to scene alag ban jata

Anisha ke saath jo hua wo unexpected tha... Ye to saaf hi tha ki aaj nahi to kal Anisha aur Lucifer ke beech bhi yahi rishta ban ne waala hai, par ye shayad kuchh jaldi hi ho gaya... I think Devil bhi ek kaaran tha ismein parantu Anisha.. wo shayad isi kaam ke liye soch kar aayi thi! Usne Priyanka se kaha tha ki Lucifer uski madad kar raha hai Raichand waale maamle mein, aur badle mein Lucifer ko wo milega jo wo chahta hai...

Mujhe nahi lagta vo es bare me baat kar rahi thi

Kya wo Arjun ki baat kar rahi thi ya fir isi ki? Anisha bhi shayad kaafi pehle hi Lucifer ke pyaar mein gir chuki thi bas usne zaahir nahi hone diya, aakhir uski personality baakiyon se alag jo hai...

Vo to hai hi alag

Meanwhile, waiting for Ashmita's reaction jab use is sabka pata chalega!

Jaldi hi dekhne ko milegi

Khair, ab sex to ho chuka hai lekin dekhna hai ki sex ke baad Anisha ki pratikriya kya rehti hai... Us samay Devil ke kaaran Lucifer ka behaviour aur saath hi jo spark uski kiss ke kaaran huyi, Anisha khud ko kaaboo nahi kar paayi hogi, lekin ab wo kya kehti hai, ye dekhna interesting rahega... Especially tab jab wo jaanti hai ki uski behen bhi Lucifer se hi pyaar karti hai, behen maane ya na maane, par is se rishta to nahi badal jaata...

Vo bhi jaldi hi pata chal jayega

Idhar Maadhuri aur Lucifer ki kahani ko bhi shayad ek decisive angle milne waala hai... Lucifer ki harkaton ke aage kab tak sambhli rehti aakhir wo bhi? Har chhoti – chhoti baat ka bakhoobi laabh liya hai Lucifer ne aur ismein koyi shanka nahi ki shayad raat mein hi ek aakhiri conversation ho dono ke beech, is rishte se judi... Kyonki Maadhuri ki baaton aur harkaton se to yahi laga ki ab wo pighal chuki hai, waise bhi kab tak wo akelepan mein jeeti rehti...

Usko lucifer ki care phinghala rahi hai sayad

Khair, Inaaya aur Anisha.. in dono ke saath sex ho chuka hai Lucifer ka, and I think ki abhi ke liye, in dono ki feelings Lucifer ke liye behad strong hain, baaki sabke comparison mein... Kyonki physical relation ban ne ke baad, shayad dooriyan aana, aur bhi kathin ho jaata hai...

Ye to sach hai

Ashmita ka to waise maamla hi alag hai, baaki jitni bachi hain, wo bachi hi rahen to hi unki bhalayi hai, kyonki baad mein shayad yahi kareebi unhen sabse zyada dukh de..

Nahi bach sakta koe lucifer se

. Btw. Shekhar zinda hai ya tapka diya Annika ne use?

Anika hi bataegi ye to

All the three updates were really beautiful bhai! Anisha's scene was unexpected and that's why it looked more real... Payal aur wo Mela.. one of the best update it was in this story...

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Thank you so much bhai
Keep supporting stay tuned

 

[Lone survivor]

Mast mast update bhai

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mast romantic wala updete

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Shandar update bhai aur Anisha ke sath kya seen tha awasome

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UPDATE-158
Subah ho chuki thi lekin abhi tak anisha nangi hi lucifer ki bahoo me so rahi thi

Lucifer puri tarah se jaga hua tha aisa lag raha tha jaise vo soya hi nahi ho aur kisi gehri soch me dooba hua ho

Vo kal jo hua aur kyu hua uske bare me soch raha tha aur kaise devil us par havi ho gaya?

Lucifer hi to devil hai to vo us par havi kaise ho sakta hai?
Yehi khayal lucifer ke dimag me chal rahe the aur kaise vo en sab ko rok sakta hai?

Kyuki agar aisa hi chalta raha to aaj nahi to kal lucifer ko badi problem ho sakti thi
Aur aisa na ho eske liye lucifer ko kuch na kuch to karna hi padega

Abhi uske dimag me solution naam ki koe chhij nahi thi vo bas problems me hi faisa hua tha

Tabhi uske dimag me ek second ke liye kaashvi aaye aur fir un dono ka vo kiss

Uske baad se abhi tak lucifer kaashvi se mila nahi tha aur ab aisa lag raha tha jaise kaashvi se milne ka time aagya hai kyuki abhi es waqt sirf kaashvi hi thi jo kuch madad kar sakti thi lucifer ki

Atleast vo uska dimag to shant kar hi sakti thi aur vohi chahiye tha lucifer kyuki jab tak uska dimag sahi se kaam nahi karega tab tak vo kuch nahi kar payega

Usne ek najar anisha par daali jiske chehre par ek bahut pyaari muskaan thi aur us muskaan ko dekh kar lucifer kuch seconds ke liye to sab bhul gaya usne niche jhuk kar anisha ke mathe par ek kiss kiye jiski vajah se anisha ke chehre ki muskaan thoda aur khil gaye aur vo lucifer se aur jada lipat gaye

Lucifer vapas sidha ho gaya aur ussi thought me chala gaya ki kaise vo apne aap ko sahi track par laye kyuki usse ye bhi pata chal gaya tha ki aaj nahi to kal madhuri ma'am ke sath bhi uske rishte kharab ho sakte hai ya hone hi wale hai esliye aisa ho us se pehle hi lucifer sambhal jaye to jada better rahega

Bahut der tak vo jo uske sath ho raha hai aur jo hone wala hai uske bare me sochta raha fir jab koe jawab nahi mila to uth kar kitchen me chala gaya

Usse anisha ko bhi uthana tha kyuki priyanka bhi to uska wait kar rahi hogi raat ko to usko bhi to kuch jawab dena tha anisha ko

Esliye kitchen me gaya aur ek cup coffee banane laga anisha ke liye aur khud vahi khada khada chhilam fukne laga

Fir khud ki chhilam khatam karke coffee leke anisha ke room me aagya jo abhi bhi vaise hi so rahi thi aur vahi chhadar par un dono ke milan ke saboot chhape hue the

Lucifer- anisha???
Anisha utho subah ho gaye
Usne halke se anisha ko hilaya to uski aankh bhi khul gaye

Jab samne lucifer ko khada dekha to chehre par halki smile aagaye

Anisha- good morning
Vo leti leti boli
Lucifer- morning
Uth jao ab dekho kitna late ho gaye hai aur coffee uski taraf badha di

Anisha ko abhi idea bhi nahi tha ki vo puri nangi hai aur aise hi jaise usne uthne ki kosis ki sareer me dard ka sanchaar hona suru ho gaya aur ahhhh nikli uske muh se

Lucifer ne cup side me rakha aur anisha ko sahara de kar usse batha diya

Lucifer- jada pain hai?
Anisha- nahi thank you
Aur cup utha liya

Lucifer bhi uske side me bath gaya

Do minute tak vaha shanti ho gaye kyuki anisha jab hosh me aaye to usse raat yaad aane lagi aur usse samjh me nahi aaya ki bole kya

Lucifer- aunty ko bata diya kya tumne?
Vo tension me hogi
Anisha- she is out of town
Vo bol kar vapas niche dekhne lagi

Lucifer- ohh acha to es baat ka fayda uthaya hai tumne?
Anisha kuch nahi boli bas blush karne lag gaye

Lucifer- suno anisha...
Anisha ne najar upar ki aur lucifer ko dekhne lagi

Lucifer- tum kapde pahan lo agar aise hi rahi to main control nahi kar paunga
Lucifer ne etna bola aur anisha ki najar apne sareer par chali gaye jo bilkul nangi lucifer ke samne bathi thi

Saram se uska chehra pura laal ho gaya aur usne jaldi se vahi padi chhadar apne sareer par daal li

Lucifer bhi thoda muskuraya

Lucifer- you're not feeling guilty right?
Anisha- i wanted this

Lucifer- kyu?
You know me and tumhe mere aur rishto ke bare me bhi pata hai
Anisha- mujhe bas mere bare me pata hai and that's it

Lucifer- tabhi etni wild rahti ho tum?
You're a strong girl
Anisha- lucifer...

Lucifer- hmmm
Anisha- i know tum pain me ho
Aur mujhe ye bhi pata hai ki hum me se koe kuch bhi nahi kar sakta
But i want you to know ki main humesha tumhre sath khadi hu
Humesha
I know it doesn't make much difference lekin main hu
Aur ab se we will find out everything about you
Hum sab curses ka pata lagayenge unhe kaise theek kar sakte hai uska pata lagayenge and most importantly how to get back you memories
Hum sath mil kar sab kuch pata kar lenge

Lucifer- wow
Mujhe nahi pata tha ye sab hum sath mil kar sakte hai nahi to main pehle hi apne anaconda ko tumhre bill me ghusa deta
Anisha vapas blush karne lag gaye

Anisha- don't worry
Ab tum akele nahi hu
We will make everything right
Every fucking thing
Lucifer- and what about you?

Anisha- what about me?
Lucifer- what are you doing to ashmita and tara?

Anisha- main kya kar rahi hu?
Lucifer- maine socha tha ki main tum behano ke bich me nahi bolunga aur aaj ke baad bolunga bhi nahi

Anisha- kya kahna chahte ho aap?
Lucifer- kabhi aap kabhi tum aise hi jindagi nikaal lenge

Anisha- kya kahna chahte ho tum?
Lucifer- jo raichand ne kiya usme ashmita aur tara ki koe galti nahi hai

Anisha- maine kab bola unki galti hai?
Lucifer- then why you're punishing them?

Anisha- when i punished them?
Lucifer- tum bahut intelligent ho anisha
Bahut jada
Lekin ye jo ho raha hai na ye maine bahut ache se dekha hai esliye main esse samjh sakta hu

Anisha- I'm not punishing them
Why would i do that?
I am just punishing raichand
Lucifer- you have choosed a wrong path

Anisha- i guess that makes us two
Lucifer- meri to jindagi hi yehi hai
But you can do better much better

Anisha- i know what I'm doing lucifer
Main kuch bhi bina soche samjhe nahi karti except that ki maine tumse pyaar kiya bina soche samjhe uske alava i have planned everything
Lucifer- thats what i am saying
Tum esse bahut better kar sakti ho

Knock knock
Gate baja

Anisha- shit kon aagya?
Lucifer- behan hai sayad tumhri

Anisha- youuuuu
Lucifer- maine kuch nahi bataya unhe
Vo to perfume ki smell se pata chal gaya aur dekho gate khul bhi gaya apne aap aur koe ander bhi aa raha hai

Mere ghar par sidha ander ashmita aur inaaya hi aati hai

Ashmita- lucifer vo main............
Vo bechari etna hi bol paye aur uski aankhen anisha par atak gaye
Usse goor se dekhne ke baad ashmita ne vahi ek flower pot uthaya aur gusse me lucifer ki taraf feka lekin lucifer en sab ke liye pehle se hi tayar tha esliye vo piche ludak kar bach gaya

Ashmita- kutte main teri jaan le lungi aaj hi
Vo gusse me lucifer ki taraf badhi

Lucifer- jaan to le lena lekin meri baat to sun
Ashmita abhi kuch sunane ke mood me thodi thi usne room me rakhi kaanch ki bottle utha li

Lucifer- dekh lag jayegi ashu
Mujhe chhot lagti hai teri presence me
Bakchodi mat kar baad me tu hi royegi
Ashmita- baad me ro lungi main
Aur vo bottle utha kar lucifer ki taraf bhagi

Lucifer- are vo anisha ko kya ho gaya?
Dekh usko
Ashmita ne jaise hi anisha ka naam suna usne piche mud ke dekha aur gusse me vo bottle bhi vahi tod di aur anisha ki taraf chali gaye

Vo bechari sarm se puri bedsheet ko jor se pakde hue thi kyuki uske niche to kuch pahna nahi tha vo aur chahe anisha mane ya na mane ashmita thi to uski badi behan hi na to kaise vo free ho jati?

Ashmita ne uske mathe par hath rakh kar temperature check kiya aur fir lucifer ko ghoor ke dekha kyuki aise sex ke baad aksar sareer garam hi rahta hai aur anisha ka bhi vaisa hi tha bilkul garam jal rahi thi

Lucifer- are ac nahi chal raha na esliye lag raha hai tujhe
Ashmita ne ac ki taraf dekha jo 16 pe tha aur usme bhi high cooling par

Lucifer- anisha se puch tu
Mujhe mat dekh meri gand fatati hai tere se
Anisha- ma'am main theek hu
Usse hi bechari ko bich me bolna pada kyuki lucifer se to loda ashmita nahi sambhal pati

Ashmita- esse kapde pahna kar bahar leke aa fir dekhti hu tum dono ko
Aur ashmita gusse me bahar chali gaye
Anisha- tumne kyu bulaya maam ko?
Anisha gussa hote hue boli

Lucifer- mujhe pagal kutte ne kaata hai jo main bulaunga?
Aur almira se apna ek shorts aur t shirt nikal kar anisha ko diya aur khud hi uska pahnaya bhi

Abhi anisha ko nanga dekh kar lucifer ne koe ulti sidhi harkat nahi ki aur karta bhi kaise bahar hi to sherni bathi thi

Jaldi si kapde pahna kar vo dono bahar aagaye
Lucifer ne anisha ko soffe par batha diya aur tab tak ashmita kitchen se kuch bana kar laye

Lucifer- thank you bahut bhukh lagi thi usne jaise hi hath aage kiya ashmita ne usse aise ghoor kar dekha ki uske hath apne aap piche chale gaye aur ashmita anisha ke pass pahuch gaye

Pata nahi kya bana kar laye thi vo aur khud se anisha ko khilane bhi lagi

Abhi ashmita etne gusse me thi ki na lucifer kuch bol raha tha aur na anisha
Usne bhi ek baar bhi mana nahi kiya ashmita ke hatho se khane ke liye
Dono ki gand hi aise fat rahi thi lucifer se

Knock knock
Firse gate baja

Lucifer- ab kon aagya behanchod
Lucifer frustration me bola
Ashmita- pharmacy wala hoga maine medicines mangvae hai le aa jake
Ashmita ne jaise lucifer ko order diya aur lucifer ne ek ache bache ki tarah vo order follow bhi kiya

Vo gaya medicines leke ashmita ko de di aur unse thodi door bath gaya

Lucifer- kitna pyaar hai dono behano me meri to aankhen hi bhar aaye
Lucifer door batha maja le raha tha kyuki pass jane me to usse khatra tha

Lucifer- khaas koe hume bhi pyaar karne wala hota
Ashmita- agar tune apna muh band nahi kiya to main tera muh tood dungi

Lucifer- tu bath ja mere muh par fir band ho jayega
ashmita- let tu pehle fir bathti hu main

Lucifer- fir kabhi
Ashmita- tum theek ho?

Anisha- jee
Ashmita- tu hot shower lelo tab tak main khana bana deti hu fir medicine leke so jana

Anisha- jee
Anisha ek achi chhoti behan ki tarah sab maan gaye

Fir dheere dheere chalte hue shower lene chali gaye

Ashmita- lucifer bachi hai vo tu insaan ban jaya kar?
Lucifer- insaan hi to ban gaya tha nahi to pata nahi kya ho jata

Ashmita- she is a kid lucifer
And i dont want her to face what I'm going to face
Lucifer- i understand
But main focus hi nahi kar pa raha hu main kya hi bolu yaar

Ashmita- tumhe ab focus karna padega
Ye tum bhi jante ho aur main bhi ki tum yaha humesha ke liye nahi rah sakte plus uske aur tumhri life time me bahut difference hai
Lucifer- mujhe sab pata hai
Main nahi rok sakta ab apne aapko
Mujhe kuch ho raha hai aur main samjh nahi pa raha hu ki kya ho raha hai

Ashmita- i know what is happening lucifer
Mere pass tumhre alava kya hai ye batao mujhe?
Anisha ke pass tumhre alava kya hai?
Inaaya ke pass tumhre alava kya hai?
Tum ek baar soch ke dekho hum sabki life kaise viraan ho jayegi tumhre bina
Lucifer- tumhe kya lagta hai maine socha nahi es bare me?

Ashmita- mujhe pata hai tumne socha hai lucifer lekin main jo bol rahi hu vo tum samjh nahi rahe ho
Hum sab ka ek center hai aur vo ho tum aur jab center hi nahi rahega to humare hone na hone ka kya hi matlab rah jayega?
You're the most important person in our life lucifer
The most important person
Lucifer- tum bata do mujhe kya karna hai main vohi kar dunga kyuki ab mere se aur kuch bardaast nahi hota
Main pareshan aagya hu har ek chhij se
Tujhe pata nahi hai ashu ki main kaise jee raha hu
Main har ek second apni maut ke liye prathana karta hu
Har ek second

Ashmita- main vohi bol rahi hu lucifer
Tumhri jaan ab sirf tumhri nahi rahi hai
Tum jitne rishte banaoge vo sab us se effect honge aur usme ab ek aur naam jud gaya hai
Main sirf etna bol rahi hu ki tumhe jo karna hai karo lekin uska consequences bhi dekh lo
Lucifer- main dhayan rakhunga aage se

Ashmita- aur meri behan ka dil nahi totna chahiye nahi to tumhra anaconda kabhi fan nahi maar payega aage se
Lucifer- bc etni badi dhamki

Ashmita- ja jake dekh theek hai na vo tab tak main kuch bana deti hu uske liye.....

 

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superb update dear