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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

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Past

Trisha- kab tak yaha vaha bhatakte rahoge?
Khud ko khoj kyu nahi lete?
Lucifer- agar main yehi tumse puchu to?

Trisha- mujhe to maloom hai main kon hu
Lucifer- kya tumko maloom hai?

Trisha- ha mujhe maloom hai
Main vohi kar rahi hu jiske liye main bani thi
Lucifer- apni jawani barbaad karne ke liye bani thi kya tum?

Trisha- bhatke hue ko rasta dikhane ke liye bani hu main
Lucifer- kitno ko dikha chuki ho rasta?

Trisha- shankhya abhi khafi kam hai
Lucifer- jada hogi bhi kaise?
Hell me bath kar logo ko rasta dikhane jo bathi ho?

Trisha- hell heaven sab myth hai
Naam hai ye sab jo humne apne man se banaye hai
Lucifer- sare naam hum apne man se hi banate hai

Trisha- lekin unki vaykhaya bhi to bana lete hai?
Ek baat batao kya fark hai hell heaven me?
Kon aata hai hell me aur kon jata hai heaven me?
Lucifer- jinki takdeer me main likha hota hu vo aate hai hell me

Trisha- aur tum kyu aaye?
Lucifer- hell ki takdeer me main likha tha

Trisha- kuch to aisa raha hoga ki ek angel ko hell me bhatakna pad raha hai
Lucifer- abhi tumne bola hell heaven kuch nahi hota aur ab bol rahi ho ki main yaha bhatak raha hu?
Tumhre according to hell heaven sab same hai na?

Trisha- usme bhi log rahte hai aur esme bhi
To fark kaise hua?
Lucifer- jaise ameer gareeb me fark hota hai vaise hi yaha fark hai

Trisha- vaha aish ki jindagi aur yaha peeda
Bas etna hi fark hai na?
Lucifer- sayad

Trisha- to agar tum chaho to yaha ki jindagi bhi achi kar sakte ho?
Sahi kah rahi hu na main?
Lucifer- main hi to achi kar raha hu unki jindagi
Mere se bada dhaanveer kaha milega?

Trisha- kab tak aise apne aapko dilasa dete rahoge?
Kabhi to sach bol do?
Lucifer- agar tum ye bolti "kabhi to sach bol bhosdike" to main sayad kuch soch bhi leta

Trisha- har chhij mazak thodi hota hai?
Lucifer- ye jindagi hi mazak hai
Aur jo gyan dete hai vo to sabse bade mazak hai

Trisha- mera naam leke bhi bol sakte ho main bura nahi manugi
Lucifer- kya tumhre bura manane se mujhe bura lagega?
Manana hai 10 baar mano bura

Trisha- aakhiri baar jab mile tab kuch dikha tha aapko
Vapas kosis karni hai kya?
Lucifer- nahi

Trisha- kyu?
Lucifer- ankhen khuli hai dimag chal raha hai
Sab dekh sakta hu samjh sakta hu

Trisha- fir yaha kyu aaye ho?
Lucifer- tumhe bhogne

Trisha- main koe bhoj thode hu
Lucifer- kisi lajavab bhoj se kam bhi to nahi ho
Ek baar apne aap ko dekhna kasam se khud sarma jaogi

Trisha- main apne aapko bahut dekh chuki hu
Koe nae baat nahi hai
Lucifer- kapde utaar ke dekhna

Trisha- jab hum sach ka samna nahi kar pate to baat hi badal dete hai
Lucifer- tum shaving vagra to nahi karti hogi
Ya fir karti ho?
Jungle to nahi bana rakha vaha?
Mujhe pasand nahi hai

Trisha lucifer ki baaton par sirf muskura di jaise vo lucifer ke maksad ko jan gaye hai

Trisha- main sirf tumhri madad karna chahti hu
Lucifer- aur agar mujhe madat ki jarurat hi na ho to?

Trisha- vo aapki marji lekin agar kabhi aapko lage ki aapko jarurat hai to main yahi milungi
Lucifer- vo to dikh raha hai
Aur kaha jaogi tum yehi hai tumhra thikana

Trisha- esliye hi bata rahi hu aur kahi nahi jana yahi mil jaungi
Lucifer- mil jana fir jab jungle saaf ho jaye tab main intezaar karunga****

Present

Lucifer- chal tujhe ghuma kar lata hu
Ashmita- bahut kaam hai mujhe vaise bhi etne dino se sab kharab hi ho raha hai vo sab bhi sambhalana hai

Lucifer- main tujhe bata raha hu ki hum ja rahe hai
Ashmita- bacho ki tarah jid mat kiya kar
Kaam hai mujhe

Lucifer- main tujhe utha kar le chalta lekin tu bahut moti hai esliye tujhe khud hi chalna padega
Ashmita- aur kaha ja rahe hai hum?

Lucifer- surprise hai
Ashmita- not interested

Lucifer- interesting karne ka waqt nahi aaya hai abhi
Ashmita- aayega bhi nahi mr. boring

Lucifer- kapde pahan le jaldi se
Ashmita- main tujhe nangi lag rahi hu?

Lucifer- dekha nahi na ki tu nangi kaisi lagti hai esliye bata nahi sakta
Ashmita- dekhega bhi nahi

Lucifer- ek din tu meri bahoo me hogi
Ashmita- le aa gaye teri bahoo me ab?
Ashmita lucifer ke galle lagte hue bolti hai

Lucifer- to kya?
Main tujhe bahoo me bhar lunga
Ashmita- bas fat gaye?

Lucifer- ha fat gaye
Ashmita- badi badi baatein kara lo bas

Lucifer- tu kapde pahan rahi hai ya nahi?
Ashmita- maine kapde pahan rakhe hai lucifer

Lucifer- ache kapde pahan
Khaas jagah ja rahe hai
Ashmita- aise hi chalna hai to bata nahi to rahne de

Lucifer- jaisi teri marji baad me mat bolna ki maine bataya nahi
Ashmita- tu vaise bhi kya hi batata hai?

Lucifer- lad mat
Ja jake tara ko bula la
Ashmita- didi ko kyu?

Lucifer- sara maja khud hi karna chahti hai?
Etni jealousy apni hi badi behan se theek nahi hai
Ashmita- tu na apna muh band rakha kar
Jab bhi kholta hai bas hugta rahta hai

Lucifer- tu hug na
Mujhe dekhna hai vo moti moti lindi nikalte time kaisa lagta hai
Ashmita- chhhhhhhiiiiiiiii Lucifer
Bhaag yaha se

Lucifer- ja bula la tara ko
Late mat kar
Ashmita- tu ja
Main kapde badal leti hu nahi to rota rahega pure din

Lucifer- main jaunga to late ho jayenge
Tujhe to pata hi hai teri behan ruk nahi payegi mujhe dekh kar
Out of control ho jati hai vo
Ashmita- mujhe nahi sunana
Aur tu ja aaega tab tak main ready ho chuki hongi

Lucifer ashmita ko chhod kar tara ke room ki tataf chal deta hai

Lucifer apni aadat anusaar bina knock kiye hi room me ghus gaya aur tara apni life me pehli baar bina gate lock kiye naha kar aaye thi aur abhi sirf towel lapete lucifer ke samne khadi thi

Lucifer ko vaha dekhne matar se uska pura chehra laal pad gaya tha aur jab apni halaat ke bare me yaad aaya to sarm se chehra apne aap niche ho gaya

Ab lucifer me na to etna dimag hai aur na vo sareef hai ki vaha se chhup chhap chala jaye
Esliye bhai apna sidha tara ki taraf chal diya aur lucifer ke har ek uski taraf aate kadam se tara ki heart beat badhne lagi

Jab lucifer bahut pass pahuch gaya to usse tara ke sareer se aate hu binni binni sugand aane lagi jo lucifer ko pagal karne ke liye kafi thi

Lucifer- ohh boy meri kismat
Vo tara ke najdeek aate hi bas etna bola ki tara ke chehra apne aap blush karne laga

Lucifer- us din tumhe theek se dekh nahi paya
Towel hatana mujhe dekhna hai ki chot abhi theek hue ya nahi
Lucifer bahut dheere aawaz me bol raha tha esliye nahi ki ashmita sun legi balki vo jaan bujh kar aisa kar raha tha tara ko excite karne ke liye

Tara- tumhe bahar aajao mujhe change karna hai
Vo bhi utni hi dheeme aawaz me badi muskil se boli

Lucifer- tumhe pani ka jada shok hai sayad
Chalo aaj fir sath nahate hai
Main aah nahaya nahi hu
Pani aur nahana sunte hi tara ke sareer me rongte khade hone lage usse vo raat yaad aane lagi jab un dono ne pani me aag lagaye thi

Lucifer- chalo na
Tara ke bilkul pass aakar bola etna pass ki ab unke beech koe jagah nahi bachi thi

Tara ne bhi himmat karke aapni aankhen utha kar lucifer ki taraf dekh hi liya aur bas etna kafi tha dono ki aag vapas chhedne ke liye

Dheere dheere tara ka face lucifer ke face ki taraf jhukta chala gaya aur dono ke honth aapas me mil gaye

Bade pyaar se smoothly dono kiss karne me lag gaye

Us din ki tarah aaj dono me se kisi ne na to jaldbaji dikhae aur na wild hue

Bas pyaar se ek dusre ke jism ko feel karte hue kiss karne lage

Tara ke hath lucifer ki shirt tak pahuch gaye aur apne aap button kholne lage vahi lucifer tara ki nangi peeth par apni ungliya chalane laga

Tara ka towel aur lucifer ki shirt khulne hi wali thi ki

Ashmita- tujhe didi ko bulane bejha tha ya yaha..... ashmita ke sabad uske muh me hi rah gaye jab usne samne ka najara dekha

"Sorry" vo kuch seconds baad boli aur vapas mud kar chali gaye

Bechari tara jiski abhi samjh me nahi aaya ki kya react kare aur etna sab ho gaya
Ashmita ne un dono ki asleel halaat me dekh liya vo to sukar hai tara ke jiddi towel ka jo abhi tak niche nahi gira tha nahi to bechari kaise samna karti ashmita ka

Lucifer ko to jhaat kuch fark nahi padne wala tha usne vapas tara ko apni bahoo me bharna chaha lekin ab tak tara bahut sambhal gaye thi aur lucifer kuch karta us se pehle hi tara ne usse dhakka deke apne room se nikal diya aur gate band kar liya

Lucifer- jaldi aajana sundar ban kar
Hum bahar ja rahe hai ghumne
Etna bol kar lucifer to chala gaya lekin tara ke chehre par ek alag hi laali chhod gaya....
Excellent update
 

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Trisha- kab tak yaha vaha bhatakte rahoge?
Khud ko khoj kyu nahi lete?
Lucifer- agar main yehi tumse puchu to?

Trisha- mujhe to maloom hai main kon hu
Lucifer- kya tumko maloom hai?

Trisha- ha mujhe maloom hai
Main vohi kar rahi hu jiske liye main bani thi
Lucifer- apni jawani barbaad karne ke liye bani thi kya tum?

Trisha- bhatke hue ko rasta dikhane ke liye bani hu main
Lucifer- kitno ko dikha chuki ho rasta?

Trisha- shankhya abhi khafi kam hai
Lucifer- jada hogi bhi kaise?
Hell me bath kar logo ko rasta dikhane jo bathi ho?

Trisha- hell heaven sab myth hai
Naam hai ye sab jo humne apne man se banaye hai
Lucifer- sare naam hum apne man se hi banate hai

Trisha- lekin unki vaykhaya bhi to bana lete hai?
Ek baat batao kya fark hai hell heaven me?
Kon aata hai hell me aur kon jata hai heaven me?
Lucifer- jinki takdeer me main likha hota hu vo aate hai hell me

Trisha- aur tum kyu aaye?
Lucifer- hell ki takdeer me main likha tha

Trisha- kuch to aisa raha hoga ki ek angel ko hell me bhatakna pad raha hai
Lucifer- abhi tumne bola hell heaven kuch nahi hota aur ab bol rahi ho ki main yaha bhatak raha hu?
Tumhre according to hell heaven sab same hai na?

Trisha- usme bhi log rahte hai aur esme bhi
To fark kaise hua?
Lucifer- jaise ameer gareeb me fark hota hai vaise hi yaha fark hai

Trisha- vaha aish ki jindagi aur yaha peeda
Bas etna hi fark hai na?
Lucifer- sayad

Trisha- to agar tum chaho to yaha ki jindagi bhi achi kar sakte ho?
Sahi kah rahi hu na main?
Lucifer- main hi to achi kar raha hu unki jindagi
Mere se bada dhaanveer kaha milega?

Trisha- kab tak aise apne aapko dilasa dete rahoge?
Kabhi to sach bol do?
Lucifer- agar tum ye bolti "kabhi to sach bol bhosdike" to main sayad kuch soch bhi leta

Trisha- har chhij mazak thodi hota hai?
Lucifer- ye jindagi hi mazak hai
Aur jo gyan dete hai vo to sabse bade mazak hai

Trisha- mera naam leke bhi bol sakte ho main bura nahi manugi
Lucifer- kya tumhre bura manane se mujhe bura lagega?
Manana hai 10 baar mano bura

Trisha- aakhiri baar jab mile tab kuch dikha tha aapko
Vapas kosis karni hai kya?
Lucifer- nahi

Trisha- kyu?
Lucifer- ankhen khuli hai dimag chal raha hai
Sab dekh sakta hu samjh sakta hu

Trisha- fir yaha kyu aaye ho?
Lucifer- tumhe bhogne

Trisha- main koe bhoj thode hu
Lucifer- kisi lajavab bhoj se kam bhi to nahi ho
Ek baar apne aap ko dekhna kasam se khud sarma jaogi

Trisha- main apne aapko bahut dekh chuki hu
Koe nae baat nahi hai
Lucifer- kapde utaar ke dekhna

Trisha- jab hum sach ka samna nahi kar pate to baat hi badal dete hai
Lucifer- tum shaving vagra to nahi karti hogi
Ya fir karti ho?
Jungle to nahi bana rakha vaha?
Mujhe pasand nahi hai

Trisha lucifer ki baaton par sirf muskura di jaise vo lucifer ke maksad ko jan gaye hai

Trisha- main sirf tumhri madad karna chahti hu
Lucifer- aur agar mujhe madat ki jarurat hi na ho to?

Trisha- vo aapki marji lekin agar kabhi aapko lage ki aapko jarurat hai to main yahi milungi
Lucifer- vo to dikh raha hai
Aur kaha jaogi tum yehi hai tumhra thikana

Trisha- esliye hi bata rahi hu aur kahi nahi jana yahi mil jaungi
Lucifer- mil jana fir jab jungle saaf ho jaye tab main intezaar karunga****

Present

Lucifer- chal tujhe ghuma kar lata hu
Ashmita- bahut kaam hai mujhe vaise bhi etne dino se sab kharab hi ho raha hai vo sab bhi sambhalana hai

Lucifer- main tujhe bata raha hu ki hum ja rahe hai
Ashmita- bacho ki tarah jid mat kiya kar
Kaam hai mujhe

Lucifer- main tujhe utha kar le chalta lekin tu bahut moti hai esliye tujhe khud hi chalna padega
Ashmita- aur kaha ja rahe hai hum?

Lucifer- surprise hai
Ashmita- not interested

Lucifer- interesting karne ka waqt nahi aaya hai abhi
Ashmita- aayega bhi nahi mr. boring

Lucifer- kapde pahan le jaldi se
Ashmita- main tujhe nangi lag rahi hu?

Lucifer- dekha nahi na ki tu nangi kaisi lagti hai esliye bata nahi sakta
Ashmita- dekhega bhi nahi

Lucifer- ek din tu meri bahoo me hogi
Ashmita- le aa gaye teri bahoo me ab?
Ashmita lucifer ke galle lagte hue bolti hai

Lucifer- to kya?
Main tujhe bahoo me bhar lunga
Ashmita- bas fat gaye?

Lucifer- ha fat gaye
Ashmita- badi badi baatein kara lo bas

Lucifer- tu kapde pahan rahi hai ya nahi?
Ashmita- maine kapde pahan rakhe hai lucifer

Lucifer- ache kapde pahan
Khaas jagah ja rahe hai
Ashmita- aise hi chalna hai to bata nahi to rahne de

Lucifer- jaisi teri marji baad me mat bolna ki maine bataya nahi
Ashmita- tu vaise bhi kya hi batata hai?

Lucifer- lad mat
Ja jake tara ko bula la
Ashmita- didi ko kyu?

Lucifer- sara maja khud hi karna chahti hai?
Etni jealousy apni hi badi behan se theek nahi hai
Ashmita- tu na apna muh band rakha kar
Jab bhi kholta hai bas hugta rahta hai

Lucifer- tu hug na
Mujhe dekhna hai vo moti moti lindi nikalte time kaisa lagta hai
Ashmita- chhhhhhhiiiiiiiii Lucifer
Bhaag yaha se

Lucifer- ja bula la tara ko
Late mat kar
Ashmita- tu ja
Main kapde badal leti hu nahi to rota rahega pure din

Lucifer- main jaunga to late ho jayenge
Tujhe to pata hi hai teri behan ruk nahi payegi mujhe dekh kar
Out of control ho jati hai vo
Ashmita- mujhe nahi sunana
Aur tu ja aaega tab tak main ready ho chuki hongi

Lucifer ashmita ko chhod kar tara ke room ki tataf chal deta hai

Lucifer apni aadat anusaar bina knock kiye hi room me ghus gaya aur tara apni life me pehli baar bina gate lock kiye naha kar aaye thi aur abhi sirf towel lapete lucifer ke samne khadi thi

Lucifer ko vaha dekhne matar se uska pura chehra laal pad gaya tha aur jab apni halaat ke bare me yaad aaya to sarm se chehra apne aap niche ho gaya

Ab lucifer me na to etna dimag hai aur na vo sareef hai ki vaha se chhup chhap chala jaye
Esliye bhai apna sidha tara ki taraf chal diya aur lucifer ke har ek uski taraf aate kadam se tara ki heart beat badhne lagi

Jab lucifer bahut pass pahuch gaya to usse tara ke sareer se aate hu binni binni sugand aane lagi jo lucifer ko pagal karne ke liye kafi thi

Lucifer- ohh boy meri kismat
Vo tara ke najdeek aate hi bas etna bola ki tara ke chehra apne aap blush karne laga

Lucifer- us din tumhe theek se dekh nahi paya
Towel hatana mujhe dekhna hai ki chot abhi theek hue ya nahi
Lucifer bahut dheere aawaz me bol raha tha esliye nahi ki ashmita sun legi balki vo jaan bujh kar aisa kar raha tha tara ko excite karne ke liye

Tara- tumhe bahar aajao mujhe change karna hai
Vo bhi utni hi dheeme aawaz me badi muskil se boli

Lucifer- tumhe pani ka jada shok hai sayad
Chalo aaj fir sath nahate hai
Main aah nahaya nahi hu
Pani aur nahana sunte hi tara ke sareer me rongte khade hone lage usse vo raat yaad aane lagi jab un dono ne pani me aag lagaye thi

Lucifer- chalo na
Tara ke bilkul pass aakar bola etna pass ki ab unke beech koe jagah nahi bachi thi

Tara ne bhi himmat karke aapni aankhen utha kar lucifer ki taraf dekh hi liya aur bas etna kafi tha dono ki aag vapas chhedne ke liye

Dheere dheere tara ka face lucifer ke face ki taraf jhukta chala gaya aur dono ke honth aapas me mil gaye

Bade pyaar se smoothly dono kiss karne me lag gaye

Us din ki tarah aaj dono me se kisi ne na to jaldbaji dikhae aur na wild hue

Bas pyaar se ek dusre ke jism ko feel karte hue kiss karne lage

Tara ke hath lucifer ki shirt tak pahuch gaye aur apne aap button kholne lage vahi lucifer tara ki nangi peeth par apni ungliya chalane laga

Tara ka towel aur lucifer ki shirt khulne hi wali thi ki

Ashmita- tujhe didi ko bulane bejha tha ya yaha..... ashmita ke sabad uske muh me hi rah gaye jab usne samne ka najara dekha

"Sorry" vo kuch seconds baad boli aur vapas mud kar chali gaye

Bechari tara jiski abhi samjh me nahi aaya ki kya react kare aur etna sab ho gaya
Ashmita ne un dono ki asleel halaat me dekh liya vo to sukar hai tara ke jiddi towel ka jo abhi tak niche nahi gira tha nahi to bechari kaise samna karti ashmita ka

Lucifer ko to jhaat kuch fark nahi padne wala tha usne vapas tara ko apni bahoo me bharna chaha lekin ab tak tara bahut sambhal gaye thi aur lucifer kuch karta us se pehle hi tara ne usse dhakka deke apne room se nikal diya aur gate band kar liya

Lucifer- jaldi aajana sundar ban kar
Hum bahar ja rahe hai ghumne
Etna bol kar lucifer to chala gaya lekin tara ke chehre par ek alag hi laali chhod gaya....
Ye vicious cycle kab khatam hone waali hai, har cycle mein same characters different personalities ke saath waapas aa jate hai.

Ye chutiya bina knock ke kahin bhi ghus jaata hai aur bina lock kiye kahin bhi shuru ho jaata hai. Bechri Tara aur Ashmita ab ek doosre se nazar bhi nahi mila payengi? Upper se ye saala surprise wo bhi Lucii ka, pakka surprise ki jagah dono bahno ko shock lagne waala hai.

Kahin Ashmita aur Tara ki mom aur uske bachpan ke dost se to milwaane to nahi le jaa raha hai. Mast update
 

Thakur

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Sahi response?
Mazak kar rahe ho bhai?
700+ pages par 15 comments nahi aate hai aur jo aate hai usme bhi 90% nice update ke aate hai
Give me 20 genuine review jo bataye kya acha hai kya bura and I will give you daily updates
Jada to nahi expect kar raha main?
That's real what a genuine writer wants :approve: lekin ye nice update bro, great update ke chodo ke maath buddhi me thodi ghusega :verysad:
Anyway you're doing great and I'll always encourage writers like you :yourock:
 
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Ye bidu ashmita ko mai soch raha hun side heroine ke liye appeal karu
Na khud kuch karti hai na karne deti hai
Ye luci sabki isse fatti hai iski ashmita se
Batao v kya scene ban raha thaa tara ke saath jhalli ne disturb kar diya

Waise surprise ke liye hum v wait kar rahe hai lone sir ek surprise update ka
Uske liye waiting for next update
 

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Trisha- kab tak yaha vaha bhatakte rahoge?
Khud ko khoj kyu nahi lete?
Lucifer- agar main yehi tumse puchu to?

Trisha- mujhe to maloom hai main kon hu
Lucifer- kya tumko maloom hai?

Trisha- ha mujhe maloom hai
Main vohi kar rahi hu jiske liye main bani thi
Lucifer- apni jawani barbaad karne ke liye bani thi kya tum?

Trisha- bhatke hue ko rasta dikhane ke liye bani hu main
Lucifer- kitno ko dikha chuki ho rasta?

Trisha- shankhya abhi khafi kam hai
Lucifer- jada hogi bhi kaise?
Hell me bath kar logo ko rasta dikhane jo bathi ho?

Trisha- hell heaven sab myth hai
Naam hai ye sab jo humne apne man se banaye hai
Lucifer- sare naam hum apne man se hi banate hai

Trisha- lekin unki vaykhaya bhi to bana lete hai?
Ek baat batao kya fark hai hell heaven me?
Kon aata hai hell me aur kon jata hai heaven me?
Lucifer- jinki takdeer me main likha hota hu vo aate hai hell me

Trisha- aur tum kyu aaye?
Lucifer- hell ki takdeer me main likha tha

Trisha- kuch to aisa raha hoga ki ek angel ko hell me bhatakna pad raha hai
Lucifer- abhi tumne bola hell heaven kuch nahi hota aur ab bol rahi ho ki main yaha bhatak raha hu?
Tumhre according to hell heaven sab same hai na?

Trisha- usme bhi log rahte hai aur esme bhi
To fark kaise hua?
Lucifer- jaise ameer gareeb me fark hota hai vaise hi yaha fark hai

Trisha- vaha aish ki jindagi aur yaha peeda
Bas etna hi fark hai na?
Lucifer- sayad

Trisha- to agar tum chaho to yaha ki jindagi bhi achi kar sakte ho?
Sahi kah rahi hu na main?
Lucifer- main hi to achi kar raha hu unki jindagi
Mere se bada dhaanveer kaha milega?

Trisha- kab tak aise apne aapko dilasa dete rahoge?
Kabhi to sach bol do?
Lucifer- agar tum ye bolti "kabhi to sach bol bhosdike" to main sayad kuch soch bhi leta

Trisha- har chhij mazak thodi hota hai?
Lucifer- ye jindagi hi mazak hai
Aur jo gyan dete hai vo to sabse bade mazak hai

Trisha- mera naam leke bhi bol sakte ho main bura nahi manugi
Lucifer- kya tumhre bura manane se mujhe bura lagega?
Manana hai 10 baar mano bura

Trisha- aakhiri baar jab mile tab kuch dikha tha aapko
Vapas kosis karni hai kya?
Lucifer- nahi

Trisha- kyu?
Lucifer- ankhen khuli hai dimag chal raha hai
Sab dekh sakta hu samjh sakta hu

Trisha- fir yaha kyu aaye ho?
Lucifer- tumhe bhogne

Trisha- main koe bhoj thode hu
Lucifer- kisi lajavab bhoj se kam bhi to nahi ho
Ek baar apne aap ko dekhna kasam se khud sarma jaogi

Trisha- main apne aapko bahut dekh chuki hu
Koe nae baat nahi hai
Lucifer- kapde utaar ke dekhna

Trisha- jab hum sach ka samna nahi kar pate to baat hi badal dete hai
Lucifer- tum shaving vagra to nahi karti hogi
Ya fir karti ho?
Jungle to nahi bana rakha vaha?
Mujhe pasand nahi hai

Trisha lucifer ki baaton par sirf muskura di jaise vo lucifer ke maksad ko jan gaye hai

Trisha- main sirf tumhri madad karna chahti hu
Lucifer- aur agar mujhe madat ki jarurat hi na ho to?

Trisha- vo aapki marji lekin agar kabhi aapko lage ki aapko jarurat hai to main yahi milungi
Lucifer- vo to dikh raha hai
Aur kaha jaogi tum yehi hai tumhra thikana

Trisha- esliye hi bata rahi hu aur kahi nahi jana yahi mil jaungi
Lucifer- mil jana fir jab jungle saaf ho jaye tab main intezaar karunga****

Present

Lucifer- chal tujhe ghuma kar lata hu
Ashmita- bahut kaam hai mujhe vaise bhi etne dino se sab kharab hi ho raha hai vo sab bhi sambhalana hai

Lucifer- main tujhe bata raha hu ki hum ja rahe hai
Ashmita- bacho ki tarah jid mat kiya kar
Kaam hai mujhe

Lucifer- main tujhe utha kar le chalta lekin tu bahut moti hai esliye tujhe khud hi chalna padega
Ashmita- aur kaha ja rahe hai hum?

Lucifer- surprise hai
Ashmita- not interested

Lucifer- interesting karne ka waqt nahi aaya hai abhi
Ashmita- aayega bhi nahi mr. boring

Lucifer- kapde pahan le jaldi se
Ashmita- main tujhe nangi lag rahi hu?

Lucifer- dekha nahi na ki tu nangi kaisi lagti hai esliye bata nahi sakta
Ashmita- dekhega bhi nahi

Lucifer- ek din tu meri bahoo me hogi
Ashmita- le aa gaye teri bahoo me ab?
Ashmita lucifer ke galle lagte hue bolti hai

Lucifer- to kya?
Main tujhe bahoo me bhar lunga
Ashmita- bas fat gaye?

Lucifer- ha fat gaye
Ashmita- badi badi baatein kara lo bas

Lucifer- tu kapde pahan rahi hai ya nahi?
Ashmita- maine kapde pahan rakhe hai lucifer

Lucifer- ache kapde pahan
Khaas jagah ja rahe hai
Ashmita- aise hi chalna hai to bata nahi to rahne de

Lucifer- jaisi teri marji baad me mat bolna ki maine bataya nahi
Ashmita- tu vaise bhi kya hi batata hai?

Lucifer- lad mat
Ja jake tara ko bula la
Ashmita- didi ko kyu?

Lucifer- sara maja khud hi karna chahti hai?
Etni jealousy apni hi badi behan se theek nahi hai
Ashmita- tu na apna muh band rakha kar
Jab bhi kholta hai bas hugta rahta hai

Lucifer- tu hug na
Mujhe dekhna hai vo moti moti lindi nikalte time kaisa lagta hai
Ashmita- chhhhhhhiiiiiiiii Lucifer
Bhaag yaha se

Lucifer- ja bula la tara ko
Late mat kar
Ashmita- tu ja
Main kapde badal leti hu nahi to rota rahega pure din

Lucifer- main jaunga to late ho jayenge
Tujhe to pata hi hai teri behan ruk nahi payegi mujhe dekh kar
Out of control ho jati hai vo
Ashmita- mujhe nahi sunana
Aur tu ja aaega tab tak main ready ho chuki hongi

Lucifer ashmita ko chhod kar tara ke room ki tataf chal deta hai

Lucifer apni aadat anusaar bina knock kiye hi room me ghus gaya aur tara apni life me pehli baar bina gate lock kiye naha kar aaye thi aur abhi sirf towel lapete lucifer ke samne khadi thi

Lucifer ko vaha dekhne matar se uska pura chehra laal pad gaya tha aur jab apni halaat ke bare me yaad aaya to sarm se chehra apne aap niche ho gaya

Ab lucifer me na to etna dimag hai aur na vo sareef hai ki vaha se chhup chhap chala jaye
Esliye bhai apna sidha tara ki taraf chal diya aur lucifer ke har ek uski taraf aate kadam se tara ki heart beat badhne lagi

Jab lucifer bahut pass pahuch gaya to usse tara ke sareer se aate hu binni binni sugand aane lagi jo lucifer ko pagal karne ke liye kafi thi

Lucifer- ohh boy meri kismat
Vo tara ke najdeek aate hi bas etna bola ki tara ke chehra apne aap blush karne laga

Lucifer- us din tumhe theek se dekh nahi paya
Towel hatana mujhe dekhna hai ki chot abhi theek hue ya nahi
Lucifer bahut dheere aawaz me bol raha tha esliye nahi ki ashmita sun legi balki vo jaan bujh kar aisa kar raha tha tara ko excite karne ke liye

Tara- tumhe bahar aajao mujhe change karna hai
Vo bhi utni hi dheeme aawaz me badi muskil se boli

Lucifer- tumhe pani ka jada shok hai sayad
Chalo aaj fir sath nahate hai
Main aah nahaya nahi hu
Pani aur nahana sunte hi tara ke sareer me rongte khade hone lage usse vo raat yaad aane lagi jab un dono ne pani me aag lagaye thi

Lucifer- chalo na
Tara ke bilkul pass aakar bola etna pass ki ab unke beech koe jagah nahi bachi thi

Tara ne bhi himmat karke aapni aankhen utha kar lucifer ki taraf dekh hi liya aur bas etna kafi tha dono ki aag vapas chhedne ke liye

Dheere dheere tara ka face lucifer ke face ki taraf jhukta chala gaya aur dono ke honth aapas me mil gaye

Bade pyaar se smoothly dono kiss karne me lag gaye

Us din ki tarah aaj dono me se kisi ne na to jaldbaji dikhae aur na wild hue

Bas pyaar se ek dusre ke jism ko feel karte hue kiss karne lage

Tara ke hath lucifer ki shirt tak pahuch gaye aur apne aap button kholne lage vahi lucifer tara ki nangi peeth par apni ungliya chalane laga

Tara ka towel aur lucifer ki shirt khulne hi wali thi ki

Ashmita- tujhe didi ko bulane bejha tha ya yaha..... ashmita ke sabad uske muh me hi rah gaye jab usne samne ka najara dekha

"Sorry" vo kuch seconds baad boli aur vapas mud kar chali gaye

Bechari tara jiski abhi samjh me nahi aaya ki kya react kare aur etna sab ho gaya
Ashmita ne un dono ki asleel halaat me dekh liya vo to sukar hai tara ke jiddi towel ka jo abhi tak niche nahi gira tha nahi to bechari kaise samna karti ashmita ka

Lucifer ko to jhaat kuch fark nahi padne wala tha usne vapas tara ko apni bahoo me bharna chaha lekin ab tak tara bahut sambhal gaye thi aur lucifer kuch karta us se pehle hi tara ne usse dhakka deke apne room se nikal diya aur gate band kar liya

Lucifer- jaldi aajana sundar ban kar
Hum bahar ja rahe hai ghumne
Etna bol kar lucifer to chala gaya lekin tara ke chehre par ek alag hi laali chhod gaya....
Bahut kub Lone survivor bhai acha Update tha maja aagaya. Lucifer ne ek baar fir se tara ki le hi li thi. Wahhh mast maja aagaya.
 
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