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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

Lone survivor

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UPDATE-192


Anisha- aap kyu nahi jana chahte vapas?
Aapki puri family hai vaha
Kamna- ab kya karu vaha ja kar?
Kya bolu apne bacho ko?
Kaha tha main?
Kyu thi?
Etne salo tak mili kyu nahi?
Mere pass kisi sawal ka koe jawab nahi hai

Anisha- mujhe puri umeed hai vo dono aapse koe sawal nahi puchegi
Kamna- lekin unke dil me to rahenge hi sare sawal?

Anisha- abhi bhi to rahenge?
Unko pata hai aap jinda ho aur aise me agar aap nahi jaoge to bhi to sare sawal aise ke aise rakhe rahenge?
Kamna- main kabhi nahi chahti thi vo mere bare me jane
Ek bahut simple life adpot ki ki koe mujhe notice na kar paye
Kabhi vapas sehar ki taraf mud kar nahi dekha
Pata nahi kaise unko pata chal gaye?

Anisha- maine bataya unhe
Kamna- tumne?????
Kyuuuu

Anisha- mujhe badla chahiye tha
Kamna- kis chhij ka badla?
Jo raichand ne jyoti ke sath kiya uska badla?
Agar aise sab log badla lene aa gaye to raichand har roj mare
Uski kismat kale kagaz par khoon se likhi gaye hai aur vo usne khud likhi hai
Uske liye kisi aur ki life ke sath khelna bilkul sahi nahi hai

Anisha- mujhse galti ho gaye
Main andhi ho gaye thi gusse me
Kamna- gussa hi kaal ka karan banta hai
Maine to ussi din tumhe pahchan liya tha jab tum pehli baar yaha aaye thi
Ye nahi ki tum jyoti ki beti ho balki ye ki tum bahut cold ho

Anisha- maine sirf vohi kiya jo mujhe karna chahiye tha
No regret
Kamna- kya mila?
Hum badle ki rah me etna aage badh jate hai ki ye tak nahi soch pate ki badla pura hone ke baad hum kya karenge?
Jaise ab tumhre sath ho raha hai
Tumhra badla pura ho gaya ab tum kya karogi?
Kya ek normal life jee sakti ho tum?

Anisha- i dont know
Kamna- jab tum mujhe mili thi tab hi maine tumse kaha tha es daldal me mat faso
Kuch nahi rakha esme
Sach to main bhi bata sakti thi tumhe lekin tumne meri baat nahi mani

Anisha- mujhe kisi ke muh se sunana tha
Kamna- vohi to main puch rahi hu ki tumne uske muh se sun liya ab kya?
Kya tum ab khush ho?
Satisfied ho?
Kya ab life me kuch karne ko bacha bhi hai ya nahi?
Tum meri beti jaisi ho aur main nahi chahti meri beti ki halaat meri jaisi ho

Anisha- aapne bhi khud apna faisla liya tha aur maine bhi
Fark bas etna hai ki aapko apne decision par regret hai aur mujhe nahi

Kamna- regret etni jaldi nahi aata
Abhi to pura khatam nahi hua hai lekin jab sab khatam ho jayega tab hume realize hoga ki humne kya kiya kyu kiya aur uske consequence kitne the
Abhi to tumhe kuch galat nahi lagega

Anisha- at least maine apne bacho ko chhod kar to nahi bhagi
Kamna- apni behano ko chhod kar to aae ho

Anisha- main vapas ja sakti hu
Kamna- kya tum vapas jaogi?

Anisha- sayad ya sayad nahi
Kamna- beti ye dunia achi nahi hai esme tumhe apno ka sath chahiye jeene ke liye

Anisha- aap bhi to apno ke bagar jeeye the?
To main kyu nahi jee sakti?
Kamna- maine ye jivan jiya nahi kaata hai aur main nahi chahti ki tum bhi yehi karo

Anisha- aap unko chhod kar kyu aaye thi?
Kamna- mere pass aur koe rasta nahi tha

Anisha- humesha dusra rasta hota hai
Kamna- ye tum bol rahi ho?

Anisha- ha kyuki mere pass bhi tha aur maine usse nahi lene ka faisla kiya
Kamna- mere pass nahi tha

Anisha- aap apne decision ko justify kar rahe ho bas
Kamna- jaisa tumhe sochna hai tum soch sakti ho
Main kon hoti hu tumhe rokne wali

Anisha- acha batao kya reason tha
Kamna- jo baatein ho chuki unko jane bhi do
Kya rakha hai vo sab vapas jagane ka?

Anisha- mujhe janana hai
Aapne mujhe beti samjha hai to mujhe beti maan kar batao
Kamna- jidd kaha se li tumne?
Jyoti to aisi nahi thi

Anisha- aap jante the unhe?
Kamna- ha
She was the puriest among us

Anisha- among us??
Kamna-abhi bahut kuch baki hai aur esliye main bol rahi hu ki tum behano ko ek sath ek dusre ke liye rahna chahiye

Anisha- un behano ko ek maa ki jarurat hai
Kamna- main nahi ja sakti vapas

Anisha- to main bhi nahi ja sakti
Aur aap baatein ghuma rahe ho
Sidhe sidhe kyu nahi bata dete ki kya reasons the aapke?

Kamna- mera aur anil ka rishta sahi nahi chal raha tha
Es se pehle vo mujhse door hota main us se door ho gaye
Anisha- ye koe reason nahi hua
Rishta sahi nahi chal raha tha eska ye matlab to hai nahi ki aap apne bachho ko chhod do?

Kamna- tum samjh nahi rahi ho
Anisha- kyuki aap samjha nahi rahe ho

Kamna- anil har dusri jagah muh marta firta tha aur main us layak nahi thi ki apne bacho ko ek achi life de saku
Anisha- ye bhi juth hai
Aap abhi bhi sach nahi bata rahe ho

Kamna- ashmita aur tara dono ka bachpan bahut acha raha hai vaha
Unhe kisi chhij ki koe kami nahi rahi
Mere pass kya milta unhe?
Kuch bhi nahi
Ab un dono ke pass sab kuch hai

Ashmita- aap kaise kah sakti ho ki humara bachpan acha gujra hai?

Bahut der tak anisha aur kamna ki baat sunte sunte ab ashmita se raha nahi gaya aur vo bol hi padi

Pehle to vo intezaar me thi ki sayad kamna sach bata hi de ki kyu vo unhe chhod kar gaye lekin jab usse yakeen ho gaya ki kamna kuch nahi bataegi to usne kamaan apne hatho me le li

Ashmita- aapko kuch nahi pata hai
Kuch bhi nahi
Kitni aasani se bol diya aapne ki humare pass sab kuch tha
Kisi chhij ki koe kami nahi thi
Hum khush the
Aisa bolne wali aap koe nahi hoti
Aapko kuch nahi pata ki humne kaise gujare hai vo din
Chahe kuch bhi reason raha ho lekin sachae yehi hai ki aap apne bacho ko chhod kar bhag gaye thi aur uske baad kabhi unki taraf dekhne tak ki kosis nahi ki
Mujhe nahi pata Kya hoga mere sath aur lucifer ke sath ya fir anisha ke sath lekin jo aapne mere sath kiya hai uske samne sab fika hi lagega
Sab fika hi lagega

Ashmita ne apna sara gussa apne sabdo ke jariye nikal diya
Chehra par udasi ke bhaav to bahut pehle aa chuke the uske lekin ab gussa aur chhad chuka tha

Vahi tara bilkul shant khadi thi jaise situation ko samjhne ki kosis kar rahi ho

Lucifer ka pura dhayan kamna par thi aur vo ye sochne me laga hua tha ki aisa kya hai kamna me aur kya vo usse bata sakti hai apne bare me aur kyu vo kamna ke bare me pata nahi laga sakta?
Kae sare sawal chal rahe the uske dimag me jinke sayad usse jawab milne wale the

Vahi kamna bahut buri tarah shocked ho gaye thi ashmita aur tara ko vaha dekh kar

Guilt se pura chehra peela pad chuka tha uska aur abhi vo kuch bolne ki condition me nahi thi

Ashmita- bol kyu nahi rahi ab aap?
Etne der se to bahut baatein ghumae ja rahi thi
Ab kya hua?
Sach face karne ki himmat nahi rahi ya koe aur baat hai?
Tara- ashu aaram se

Ashmita- kuch aaram se nahi hoga ab
Ye kitni aasani se bol rahi thi didi ki humari jindagi me to kabhi koe problem aae hi nahi
Hum do behano ne bina maa ke kaise gujara kiya hai vo bas hum do hi jante hai aur yaha ye etni badi badi baatein kar rahi hai

Lucifer- anisha do bakre, ek murga, kuch boiled aur kuch fried eggs chawal aur rotiya le aao
Bahut bukh lagi hai

Anisha bahut relaxed lag rahi thi sayad vo janti thi ki ye hone wala hai ya fir usne hi ye sab kiya hai kuch bharosa nahi hai Anisha ka

Lucifer ke bolne ke baad vo ander chali gaye aur bahar fir kamna ko ashmita ki vo jawab puchte hue nighahe bolne nahi de rahi thi

Lucifer- ashu bath ja
Kab tak khadi rahegi?
Ashmita- mujhe bas jawab chahiye lucifer aur fir main chali jaungi yaha se

Lucifer- har koe yaha jawab mangne hi aaya hai
Bath ja
Aur lucifer ashmita ko pakad ke jabardasti batha deta hai tara apne aap bath jati hai

Kamna- tum lucifer ho?
Kamna ne pehli baar muh khola aur jo pucha usse sun kar to ashmita aur jada chhid gaye

Ashmita- ha ye lucifer hai
Aap agar hum sabko apni betiya mana hai to aapki sari betiyo ka pyaar hai ye
Aur kuch puchna hai eske bare?

Ashmita ke aise jawab ne kamna ko fir chhup kara diya

Tab tak anisha coffee leke aa gaye thi

Lucifer- ye kya hai?
Kya mangvaya tha aur kya leke aae?
Anisha- abhi ye lelo baad me sab mil jayega

Lucifer hi liya lekin ashmita ne anisha ki taraf dekhe bina hi mana kar diya
Tara ne bhi coffee le li

Aur anisha vahi bath gaye

Ashmita- didi sayad hume chalna chahiye
Humara yaha time waste hi ho raha hai
Kamna- ashu please
Bahut peeda wali aawaz nikali kamna ki lekin ashmita par koe asar nahi kar paye

Ashmita- mujhe ashu sirf mere pyaar karne wale bula sakte hai aap nahi
Tara- ashu shant hoja thodi der ke liye please
Mujhe sab process karne ke liye time chahiye

Ashmita- raste me kar lena
Hume vapas jana hai abhi
Lucifer- mere pass bahut sawal hai lekin pehle aap enko jawab de do
Waqt aapke pass hoga enke pass hoga lekin mere pass bilkul nahi hai aur jab tak enhe apne sawalo ke jawab nahi mil jate mujhe apno ke nahi milenge
Esliye main aapse request kar raha hu
Lucifer aaj request kar raha hai
Mujhe aur kuch karne par majbur mat karo
Please bata do

Kamna- devil request karte hue acha nahi lagta.....
 

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UPDATE-192


Anisha- aap kyu nahi jana chahte vapas?
Aapki puri family hai vaha
Kamna- ab kya karu vaha ja kar?
Kya bolu apne bacho ko?
Kaha tha main?
Kyu thi?
Etne salo tak mili kyu nahi?
Mere pass kisi sawal ka koe jawab nahi hai

Anisha- mujhe puri umeed hai vo dono aapse koe sawal nahi puchegi
Kamna- lekin unke dil me to rahenge hi sare sawal?

Anisha- abhi bhi to rahenge?
Unko pata hai aap jinda ho aur aise me agar aap nahi jaoge to bhi to sare sawal aise ke aise rakhe rahenge?
Kamna- main kabhi nahi chahti thi vo mere bare me jane
Ek bahut simple life adpot ki ki koe mujhe notice na kar paye
Kabhi vapas sehar ki taraf mud kar nahi dekha
Pata nahi kaise unko pata chal gaye?

Anisha- maine bataya unhe
Kamna- tumne?????
Kyuuuu

Anisha- mujhe badla chahiye tha
Kamna- kis chhij ka badla?
Jo raichand ne jyoti ke sath kiya uska badla?
Agar aise sab log badla lene aa gaye to raichand har roj mare
Uski kismat kale kagaz par khoon se likhi gaye hai aur vo usne khud likhi hai
Uske liye kisi aur ki life ke sath khelna bilkul sahi nahi hai

Anisha- mujhse galti ho gaye
Main andhi ho gaye thi gusse me
Kamna- gussa hi kaal ka karan banta hai
Maine to ussi din tumhe pahchan liya tha jab tum pehli baar yaha aaye thi
Ye nahi ki tum jyoti ki beti ho balki ye ki tum bahut cold ho

Anisha- maine sirf vohi kiya jo mujhe karna chahiye tha
No regret
Kamna- kya mila?
Hum badle ki rah me etna aage badh jate hai ki ye tak nahi soch pate ki badla pura hone ke baad hum kya karenge?
Jaise ab tumhre sath ho raha hai
Tumhra badla pura ho gaya ab tum kya karogi?
Kya ek normal life jee sakti ho tum?

Anisha- i dont know
Kamna- jab tum mujhe mili thi tab hi maine tumse kaha tha es daldal me mat faso
Kuch nahi rakha esme
Sach to main bhi bata sakti thi tumhe lekin tumne meri baat nahi mani

Anisha- mujhe kisi ke muh se sunana tha
Kamna- vohi to main puch rahi hu ki tumne uske muh se sun liya ab kya?
Kya tum ab khush ho?
Satisfied ho?
Kya ab life me kuch karne ko bacha bhi hai ya nahi?
Tum meri beti jaisi ho aur main nahi chahti meri beti ki halaat meri jaisi ho

Anisha- aapne bhi khud apna faisla liya tha aur maine bhi
Fark bas etna hai ki aapko apne decision par regret hai aur mujhe nahi

Kamna- regret etni jaldi nahi aata
Abhi to pura khatam nahi hua hai lekin jab sab khatam ho jayega tab hume realize hoga ki humne kya kiya kyu kiya aur uske consequence kitne the
Abhi to tumhe kuch galat nahi lagega

Anisha- at least maine apne bacho ko chhod kar to nahi bhagi
Kamna- apni behano ko chhod kar to aae ho

Anisha- main vapas ja sakti hu
Kamna- kya tum vapas jaogi?

Anisha- sayad ya sayad nahi
Kamna- beti ye dunia achi nahi hai esme tumhe apno ka sath chahiye jeene ke liye

Anisha- aap bhi to apno ke bagar jeeye the?
To main kyu nahi jee sakti?
Kamna- maine ye jivan jiya nahi kaata hai aur main nahi chahti ki tum bhi yehi karo

Anisha- aap unko chhod kar kyu aaye thi?
Kamna- mere pass aur koe rasta nahi tha

Anisha- humesha dusra rasta hota hai
Kamna- ye tum bol rahi ho?

Anisha- ha kyuki mere pass bhi tha aur maine usse nahi lene ka faisla kiya
Kamna- mere pass nahi tha

Anisha- aap apne decision ko justify kar rahe ho bas
Kamna- jaisa tumhe sochna hai tum soch sakti ho
Main kon hoti hu tumhe rokne wali

Anisha- acha batao kya reason tha
Kamna- jo baatein ho chuki unko jane bhi do
Kya rakha hai vo sab vapas jagane ka?

Anisha- mujhe janana hai
Aapne mujhe beti samjha hai to mujhe beti maan kar batao
Kamna- jidd kaha se li tumne?
Jyoti to aisi nahi thi

Anisha- aap jante the unhe?
Kamna- ha
She was the puriest among us

Anisha- among us??
Kamna-abhi bahut kuch baki hai aur esliye main bol rahi hu ki tum behano ko ek sath ek dusre ke liye rahna chahiye

Anisha- un behano ko ek maa ki jarurat hai
Kamna- main nahi ja sakti vapas

Anisha- to main bhi nahi ja sakti
Aur aap baatein ghuma rahe ho
Sidhe sidhe kyu nahi bata dete ki kya reasons the aapke?

Kamna- mera aur anil ka rishta sahi nahi chal raha tha
Es se pehle vo mujhse door hota main us se door ho gaye
Anisha- ye koe reason nahi hua
Rishta sahi nahi chal raha tha eska ye matlab to hai nahi ki aap apne bachho ko chhod do?

Kamna- tum samjh nahi rahi ho
Anisha- kyuki aap samjha nahi rahe ho

Kamna- anil har dusri jagah muh marta firta tha aur main us layak nahi thi ki apne bacho ko ek achi life de saku
Anisha- ye bhi juth hai
Aap abhi bhi sach nahi bata rahe ho

Kamna- ashmita aur tara dono ka bachpan bahut acha raha hai vaha
Unhe kisi chhij ki koe kami nahi rahi
Mere pass kya milta unhe?
Kuch bhi nahi
Ab un dono ke pass sab kuch hai

Ashmita- aap kaise kah sakti ho ki humara bachpan acha gujra hai?

Bahut der tak anisha aur kamna ki baat sunte sunte ab ashmita se raha nahi gaya aur vo bol hi padi

Pehle to vo intezaar me thi ki sayad kamna sach bata hi de ki kyu vo unhe chhod kar gaye lekin jab usse yakeen ho gaya ki kamna kuch nahi bataegi to usne kamaan apne hatho me le li

Ashmita- aapko kuch nahi pata hai
Kuch bhi nahi
Kitni aasani se bol diya aapne ki humare pass sab kuch tha
Kisi chhij ki koe kami nahi thi
Hum khush the
Aisa bolne wali aap koe nahi hoti
Aapko kuch nahi pata ki humne kaise gujare hai vo din
Chahe kuch bhi reason raha ho lekin sachae yehi hai ki aap apne bacho ko chhod kar bhag gaye thi aur uske baad kabhi unki taraf dekhne tak ki kosis nahi ki
Mujhe nahi pata Kya hoga mere sath aur lucifer ke sath ya fir anisha ke sath lekin jo aapne mere sath kiya hai uske samne sab fika hi lagega
Sab fika hi lagega

Ashmita ne apna sara gussa apne sabdo ke jariye nikal diya
Chehra par udasi ke bhaav to bahut pehle aa chuke the uske lekin ab gussa aur chhad chuka tha

Vahi tara bilkul shant khadi thi jaise situation ko samjhne ki kosis kar rahi ho

Lucifer ka pura dhayan kamna par thi aur vo ye sochne me laga hua tha ki aisa kya hai kamna me aur kya vo usse bata sakti hai apne bare me aur kyu vo kamna ke bare me pata nahi laga sakta?
Kae sare sawal chal rahe the uske dimag me jinke sayad usse jawab milne wale the

Vahi kamna bahut buri tarah shocked ho gaye thi ashmita aur tara ko vaha dekh kar

Guilt se pura chehra peela pad chuka tha uska aur abhi vo kuch bolne ki condition me nahi thi

Ashmita- bol kyu nahi rahi ab aap?
Etne der se to bahut baatein ghumae ja rahi thi
Ab kya hua?
Sach face karne ki himmat nahi rahi ya koe aur baat hai?
Tara- ashu aaram se

Ashmita- kuch aaram se nahi hoga ab
Ye kitni aasani se bol rahi thi didi ki humari jindagi me to kabhi koe problem aae hi nahi
Hum do behano ne bina maa ke kaise gujara kiya hai vo bas hum do hi jante hai aur yaha ye etni badi badi baatein kar rahi hai

Lucifer- anisha do bakre, ek murga, kuch boiled aur kuch fried eggs chawal aur rotiya le aao
Bahut bukh lagi hai

Anisha bahut relaxed lag rahi thi sayad vo janti thi ki ye hone wala hai ya fir usne hi ye sab kiya hai kuch bharosa nahi hai Anisha ka

Lucifer ke bolne ke baad vo ander chali gaye aur bahar fir kamna ko ashmita ki vo jawab puchte hue nighahe bolne nahi de rahi thi

Lucifer- ashu bath ja
Kab tak khadi rahegi?
Ashmita- mujhe bas jawab chahiye lucifer aur fir main chali jaungi yaha se

Lucifer- har koe yaha jawab mangne hi aaya hai
Bath ja
Aur lucifer ashmita ko pakad ke jabardasti batha deta hai tara apne aap bath jati hai

Kamna- tum lucifer ho?
Kamna ne pehli baar muh khola aur jo pucha usse sun kar to ashmita aur jada chhid gaye

Ashmita- ha ye lucifer hai
Aap agar hum sabko apni betiya mana hai to aapki sari betiyo ka pyaar hai ye
Aur kuch puchna hai eske bare?

Ashmita ke aise jawab ne kamna ko fir chhup kara diya

Tab tak anisha coffee leke aa gaye thi

Lucifer- ye kya hai?
Kya mangvaya tha aur kya leke aae?
Anisha- abhi ye lelo baad me sab mil jayega

Lucifer hi liya lekin ashmita ne anisha ki taraf dekhe bina hi mana kar diya
Tara ne bhi coffee le li

Aur anisha vahi bath gaye

Ashmita- didi sayad hume chalna chahiye
Humara yaha time waste hi ho raha hai
Kamna- ashu please
Bahut peeda wali aawaz nikali kamna ki lekin ashmita par koe asar nahi kar paye

Ashmita- mujhe ashu sirf mere pyaar karne wale bula sakte hai aap nahi
Tara- ashu shant hoja thodi der ke liye please
Mujhe sab process karne ke liye time chahiye

Ashmita- raste me kar lena
Hume vapas jana hai abhi
Lucifer- mere pass bahut sawal hai lekin pehle aap enko jawab de do
Waqt aapke pass hoga enke pass hoga lekin mere pass bilkul nahi hai aur jab tak enhe apne sawalo ke jawab nahi mil jate mujhe apno ke nahi milenge
Esliye main aapse request kar raha hu
Lucifer aaj request kar raha hai
Mujhe aur kuch karne par majbur mat karo
Please bata do

Kamna- devil request karte hue acha nahi lagta.....
Excellent update.. Last line.. 💥💥💥
 

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UPDATE-192


Anisha- aap kyu nahi jana chahte vapas?
Aapki puri family hai vaha
Kamna- ab kya karu vaha ja kar?
Kya bolu apne bacho ko?
Kaha tha main?
Kyu thi?
Etne salo tak mili kyu nahi?
Mere pass kisi sawal ka koe jawab nahi hai

Anisha- mujhe puri umeed hai vo dono aapse koe sawal nahi puchegi
Kamna- lekin unke dil me to rahenge hi sare sawal?

Anisha- abhi bhi to rahenge?
Unko pata hai aap jinda ho aur aise me agar aap nahi jaoge to bhi to sare sawal aise ke aise rakhe rahenge?
Kamna- main kabhi nahi chahti thi vo mere bare me jane
Ek bahut simple life adpot ki ki koe mujhe notice na kar paye
Kabhi vapas sehar ki taraf mud kar nahi dekha
Pata nahi kaise unko pata chal gaye?

Anisha- maine bataya unhe
Kamna- tumne?????
Kyuuuu

Anisha- mujhe badla chahiye tha
Kamna- kis chhij ka badla?
Jo raichand ne jyoti ke sath kiya uska badla?
Agar aise sab log badla lene aa gaye to raichand har roj mare
Uski kismat kale kagaz par khoon se likhi gaye hai aur vo usne khud likhi hai
Uske liye kisi aur ki life ke sath khelna bilkul sahi nahi hai

Anisha- mujhse galti ho gaye
Main andhi ho gaye thi gusse me
Kamna- gussa hi kaal ka karan banta hai
Maine to ussi din tumhe pahchan liya tha jab tum pehli baar yaha aaye thi
Ye nahi ki tum jyoti ki beti ho balki ye ki tum bahut cold ho

Anisha- maine sirf vohi kiya jo mujhe karna chahiye tha
No regret
Kamna- kya mila?
Hum badle ki rah me etna aage badh jate hai ki ye tak nahi soch pate ki badla pura hone ke baad hum kya karenge?
Jaise ab tumhre sath ho raha hai
Tumhra badla pura ho gaya ab tum kya karogi?
Kya ek normal life jee sakti ho tum?

Anisha- i dont know
Kamna- jab tum mujhe mili thi tab hi maine tumse kaha tha es daldal me mat faso
Kuch nahi rakha esme
Sach to main bhi bata sakti thi tumhe lekin tumne meri baat nahi mani

Anisha- mujhe kisi ke muh se sunana tha
Kamna- vohi to main puch rahi hu ki tumne uske muh se sun liya ab kya?
Kya tum ab khush ho?
Satisfied ho?
Kya ab life me kuch karne ko bacha bhi hai ya nahi?
Tum meri beti jaisi ho aur main nahi chahti meri beti ki halaat meri jaisi ho

Anisha- aapne bhi khud apna faisla liya tha aur maine bhi
Fark bas etna hai ki aapko apne decision par regret hai aur mujhe nahi

Kamna- regret etni jaldi nahi aata
Abhi to pura khatam nahi hua hai lekin jab sab khatam ho jayega tab hume realize hoga ki humne kya kiya kyu kiya aur uske consequence kitne the
Abhi to tumhe kuch galat nahi lagega

Anisha- at least maine apne bacho ko chhod kar to nahi bhagi
Kamna- apni behano ko chhod kar to aae ho

Anisha- main vapas ja sakti hu
Kamna- kya tum vapas jaogi?

Anisha- sayad ya sayad nahi
Kamna- beti ye dunia achi nahi hai esme tumhe apno ka sath chahiye jeene ke liye

Anisha- aap bhi to apno ke bagar jeeye the?
To main kyu nahi jee sakti?
Kamna- maine ye jivan jiya nahi kaata hai aur main nahi chahti ki tum bhi yehi karo

Anisha- aap unko chhod kar kyu aaye thi?
Kamna- mere pass aur koe rasta nahi tha

Anisha- humesha dusra rasta hota hai
Kamna- ye tum bol rahi ho?

Anisha- ha kyuki mere pass bhi tha aur maine usse nahi lene ka faisla kiya
Kamna- mere pass nahi tha

Anisha- aap apne decision ko justify kar rahe ho bas
Kamna- jaisa tumhe sochna hai tum soch sakti ho
Main kon hoti hu tumhe rokne wali

Anisha- acha batao kya reason tha
Kamna- jo baatein ho chuki unko jane bhi do
Kya rakha hai vo sab vapas jagane ka?

Anisha- mujhe janana hai
Aapne mujhe beti samjha hai to mujhe beti maan kar batao
Kamna- jidd kaha se li tumne?
Jyoti to aisi nahi thi

Anisha- aap jante the unhe?
Kamna- ha
She was the puriest among us

Anisha- among us??
Kamna-abhi bahut kuch baki hai aur esliye main bol rahi hu ki tum behano ko ek sath ek dusre ke liye rahna chahiye

Anisha- un behano ko ek maa ki jarurat hai
Kamna- main nahi ja sakti vapas

Anisha- to main bhi nahi ja sakti
Aur aap baatein ghuma rahe ho
Sidhe sidhe kyu nahi bata dete ki kya reasons the aapke?

Kamna- mera aur anil ka rishta sahi nahi chal raha tha
Es se pehle vo mujhse door hota main us se door ho gaye
Anisha- ye koe reason nahi hua
Rishta sahi nahi chal raha tha eska ye matlab to hai nahi ki aap apne bachho ko chhod do?

Kamna- tum samjh nahi rahi ho
Anisha- kyuki aap samjha nahi rahe ho

Kamna- anil har dusri jagah muh marta firta tha aur main us layak nahi thi ki apne bacho ko ek achi life de saku
Anisha- ye bhi juth hai
Aap abhi bhi sach nahi bata rahe ho

Kamna- ashmita aur tara dono ka bachpan bahut acha raha hai vaha
Unhe kisi chhij ki koe kami nahi rahi
Mere pass kya milta unhe?
Kuch bhi nahi
Ab un dono ke pass sab kuch hai

Ashmita- aap kaise kah sakti ho ki humara bachpan acha gujra hai?

Bahut der tak anisha aur kamna ki baat sunte sunte ab ashmita se raha nahi gaya aur vo bol hi padi

Pehle to vo intezaar me thi ki sayad kamna sach bata hi de ki kyu vo unhe chhod kar gaye lekin jab usse yakeen ho gaya ki kamna kuch nahi bataegi to usne kamaan apne hatho me le li

Ashmita- aapko kuch nahi pata hai
Kuch bhi nahi
Kitni aasani se bol diya aapne ki humare pass sab kuch tha
Kisi chhij ki koe kami nahi thi
Hum khush the
Aisa bolne wali aap koe nahi hoti
Aapko kuch nahi pata ki humne kaise gujare hai vo din
Chahe kuch bhi reason raha ho lekin sachae yehi hai ki aap apne bacho ko chhod kar bhag gaye thi aur uske baad kabhi unki taraf dekhne tak ki kosis nahi ki
Mujhe nahi pata Kya hoga mere sath aur lucifer ke sath ya fir anisha ke sath lekin jo aapne mere sath kiya hai uske samne sab fika hi lagega
Sab fika hi lagega

Ashmita ne apna sara gussa apne sabdo ke jariye nikal diya
Chehra par udasi ke bhaav to bahut pehle aa chuke the uske lekin ab gussa aur chhad chuka tha

Vahi tara bilkul shant khadi thi jaise situation ko samjhne ki kosis kar rahi ho

Lucifer ka pura dhayan kamna par thi aur vo ye sochne me laga hua tha ki aisa kya hai kamna me aur kya vo usse bata sakti hai apne bare me aur kyu vo kamna ke bare me pata nahi laga sakta?
Kae sare sawal chal rahe the uske dimag me jinke sayad usse jawab milne wale the

Vahi kamna bahut buri tarah shocked ho gaye thi ashmita aur tara ko vaha dekh kar

Guilt se pura chehra peela pad chuka tha uska aur abhi vo kuch bolne ki condition me nahi thi

Ashmita- bol kyu nahi rahi ab aap?
Etne der se to bahut baatein ghumae ja rahi thi
Ab kya hua?
Sach face karne ki himmat nahi rahi ya koe aur baat hai?
Tara- ashu aaram se

Ashmita- kuch aaram se nahi hoga ab
Ye kitni aasani se bol rahi thi didi ki humari jindagi me to kabhi koe problem aae hi nahi
Hum do behano ne bina maa ke kaise gujara kiya hai vo bas hum do hi jante hai aur yaha ye etni badi badi baatein kar rahi hai

Lucifer- anisha do bakre, ek murga, kuch boiled aur kuch fried eggs chawal aur rotiya le aao
Bahut bukh lagi hai

Anisha bahut relaxed lag rahi thi sayad vo janti thi ki ye hone wala hai ya fir usne hi ye sab kiya hai kuch bharosa nahi hai Anisha ka

Lucifer ke bolne ke baad vo ander chali gaye aur bahar fir kamna ko ashmita ki vo jawab puchte hue nighahe bolne nahi de rahi thi

Lucifer- ashu bath ja
Kab tak khadi rahegi?
Ashmita- mujhe bas jawab chahiye lucifer aur fir main chali jaungi yaha se

Lucifer- har koe yaha jawab mangne hi aaya hai
Bath ja
Aur lucifer ashmita ko pakad ke jabardasti batha deta hai tara apne aap bath jati hai

Kamna- tum lucifer ho?
Kamna ne pehli baar muh khola aur jo pucha usse sun kar to ashmita aur jada chhid gaye

Ashmita- ha ye lucifer hai
Aap agar hum sabko apni betiya mana hai to aapki sari betiyo ka pyaar hai ye
Aur kuch puchna hai eske bare?

Ashmita ke aise jawab ne kamna ko fir chhup kara diya

Tab tak anisha coffee leke aa gaye thi

Lucifer- ye kya hai?
Kya mangvaya tha aur kya leke aae?
Anisha- abhi ye lelo baad me sab mil jayega

Lucifer hi liya lekin ashmita ne anisha ki taraf dekhe bina hi mana kar diya
Tara ne bhi coffee le li

Aur anisha vahi bath gaye

Ashmita- didi sayad hume chalna chahiye
Humara yaha time waste hi ho raha hai
Kamna- ashu please
Bahut peeda wali aawaz nikali kamna ki lekin ashmita par koe asar nahi kar paye

Ashmita- mujhe ashu sirf mere pyaar karne wale bula sakte hai aap nahi
Tara- ashu shant hoja thodi der ke liye please
Mujhe sab process karne ke liye time chahiye

Ashmita- raste me kar lena
Hume vapas jana hai abhi
Lucifer- mere pass bahut sawal hai lekin pehle aap enko jawab de do
Waqt aapke pass hoga enke pass hoga lekin mere pass bilkul nahi hai aur jab tak enhe apne sawalo ke jawab nahi mil jate mujhe apno ke nahi milenge
Esliye main aapse request kar raha hu
Lucifer aaj request kar raha hai
Mujhe aur kuch karne par majbur mat karo
Please bata do

Kamna- devil request karte hue acha nahi lagta.....
Are wahhh kya mast update diya hai bhai. Phle bahut se sawalo ka jawab diya aapne fir last me kai aur naya sawal la kar rakh diya.
Phli baat to kamna maunt Abu me hai. Dusri ye baat anisha ne hi bataya hoga Lucifer ko ye address Aur ab Lucifer kamna se yesub batane ki request kyu kar raha hai ? Aur ye kamna ne kyu Lucifer ko devil kyu kaha ? Kahi ye janti to nahi Lucifer ki sachayi.
 

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UPDATE-192


Anisha- aap kyu nahi jana chahte vapas?
Aapki puri family hai vaha
Kamna- ab kya karu vaha ja kar?
Kya bolu apne bacho ko?
Kaha tha main?
Kyu thi?
Etne salo tak mili kyu nahi?
Mere pass kisi sawal ka koe jawab nahi hai

Anisha- mujhe puri umeed hai vo dono aapse koe sawal nahi puchegi
Kamna- lekin unke dil me to rahenge hi sare sawal?

Anisha- abhi bhi to rahenge?
Unko pata hai aap jinda ho aur aise me agar aap nahi jaoge to bhi to sare sawal aise ke aise rakhe rahenge?
Kamna- main kabhi nahi chahti thi vo mere bare me jane
Ek bahut simple life adpot ki ki koe mujhe notice na kar paye
Kabhi vapas sehar ki taraf mud kar nahi dekha
Pata nahi kaise unko pata chal gaye?

Anisha- maine bataya unhe
Kamna- tumne?????
Kyuuuu

Anisha- mujhe badla chahiye tha
Kamna- kis chhij ka badla?
Jo raichand ne jyoti ke sath kiya uska badla?
Agar aise sab log badla lene aa gaye to raichand har roj mare
Uski kismat kale kagaz par khoon se likhi gaye hai aur vo usne khud likhi hai
Uske liye kisi aur ki life ke sath khelna bilkul sahi nahi hai

Anisha- mujhse galti ho gaye
Main andhi ho gaye thi gusse me
Kamna- gussa hi kaal ka karan banta hai
Maine to ussi din tumhe pahchan liya tha jab tum pehli baar yaha aaye thi
Ye nahi ki tum jyoti ki beti ho balki ye ki tum bahut cold ho

Anisha- maine sirf vohi kiya jo mujhe karna chahiye tha
No regret
Kamna- kya mila?
Hum badle ki rah me etna aage badh jate hai ki ye tak nahi soch pate ki badla pura hone ke baad hum kya karenge?
Jaise ab tumhre sath ho raha hai
Tumhra badla pura ho gaya ab tum kya karogi?
Kya ek normal life jee sakti ho tum?

Anisha- i dont know
Kamna- jab tum mujhe mili thi tab hi maine tumse kaha tha es daldal me mat faso
Kuch nahi rakha esme
Sach to main bhi bata sakti thi tumhe lekin tumne meri baat nahi mani

Anisha- mujhe kisi ke muh se sunana tha
Kamna- vohi to main puch rahi hu ki tumne uske muh se sun liya ab kya?
Kya tum ab khush ho?
Satisfied ho?
Kya ab life me kuch karne ko bacha bhi hai ya nahi?
Tum meri beti jaisi ho aur main nahi chahti meri beti ki halaat meri jaisi ho

Anisha- aapne bhi khud apna faisla liya tha aur maine bhi
Fark bas etna hai ki aapko apne decision par regret hai aur mujhe nahi

Kamna- regret etni jaldi nahi aata
Abhi to pura khatam nahi hua hai lekin jab sab khatam ho jayega tab hume realize hoga ki humne kya kiya kyu kiya aur uske consequence kitne the
Abhi to tumhe kuch galat nahi lagega

Anisha- at least maine apne bacho ko chhod kar to nahi bhagi
Kamna- apni behano ko chhod kar to aae ho

Anisha- main vapas ja sakti hu
Kamna- kya tum vapas jaogi?

Anisha- sayad ya sayad nahi
Kamna- beti ye dunia achi nahi hai esme tumhe apno ka sath chahiye jeene ke liye

Anisha- aap bhi to apno ke bagar jeeye the?
To main kyu nahi jee sakti?
Kamna- maine ye jivan jiya nahi kaata hai aur main nahi chahti ki tum bhi yehi karo

Anisha- aap unko chhod kar kyu aaye thi?
Kamna- mere pass aur koe rasta nahi tha

Anisha- humesha dusra rasta hota hai
Kamna- ye tum bol rahi ho?

Anisha- ha kyuki mere pass bhi tha aur maine usse nahi lene ka faisla kiya
Kamna- mere pass nahi tha

Anisha- aap apne decision ko justify kar rahe ho bas
Kamna- jaisa tumhe sochna hai tum soch sakti ho
Main kon hoti hu tumhe rokne wali

Anisha- acha batao kya reason tha
Kamna- jo baatein ho chuki unko jane bhi do
Kya rakha hai vo sab vapas jagane ka?

Anisha- mujhe janana hai
Aapne mujhe beti samjha hai to mujhe beti maan kar batao
Kamna- jidd kaha se li tumne?
Jyoti to aisi nahi thi

Anisha- aap jante the unhe?
Kamna- ha
She was the puriest among us

Anisha- among us??
Kamna-abhi bahut kuch baki hai aur esliye main bol rahi hu ki tum behano ko ek sath ek dusre ke liye rahna chahiye

Anisha- un behano ko ek maa ki jarurat hai
Kamna- main nahi ja sakti vapas

Anisha- to main bhi nahi ja sakti
Aur aap baatein ghuma rahe ho
Sidhe sidhe kyu nahi bata dete ki kya reasons the aapke?

Kamna- mera aur anil ka rishta sahi nahi chal raha tha
Es se pehle vo mujhse door hota main us se door ho gaye
Anisha- ye koe reason nahi hua
Rishta sahi nahi chal raha tha eska ye matlab to hai nahi ki aap apne bachho ko chhod do?

Kamna- tum samjh nahi rahi ho
Anisha- kyuki aap samjha nahi rahe ho

Kamna- anil har dusri jagah muh marta firta tha aur main us layak nahi thi ki apne bacho ko ek achi life de saku
Anisha- ye bhi juth hai
Aap abhi bhi sach nahi bata rahe ho

Kamna- ashmita aur tara dono ka bachpan bahut acha raha hai vaha
Unhe kisi chhij ki koe kami nahi rahi
Mere pass kya milta unhe?
Kuch bhi nahi
Ab un dono ke pass sab kuch hai

Ashmita- aap kaise kah sakti ho ki humara bachpan acha gujra hai?

Bahut der tak anisha aur kamna ki baat sunte sunte ab ashmita se raha nahi gaya aur vo bol hi padi

Pehle to vo intezaar me thi ki sayad kamna sach bata hi de ki kyu vo unhe chhod kar gaye lekin jab usse yakeen ho gaya ki kamna kuch nahi bataegi to usne kamaan apne hatho me le li

Ashmita- aapko kuch nahi pata hai
Kuch bhi nahi
Kitni aasani se bol diya aapne ki humare pass sab kuch tha
Kisi chhij ki koe kami nahi thi
Hum khush the
Aisa bolne wali aap koe nahi hoti
Aapko kuch nahi pata ki humne kaise gujare hai vo din
Chahe kuch bhi reason raha ho lekin sachae yehi hai ki aap apne bacho ko chhod kar bhag gaye thi aur uske baad kabhi unki taraf dekhne tak ki kosis nahi ki
Mujhe nahi pata Kya hoga mere sath aur lucifer ke sath ya fir anisha ke sath lekin jo aapne mere sath kiya hai uske samne sab fika hi lagega
Sab fika hi lagega

Ashmita ne apna sara gussa apne sabdo ke jariye nikal diya
Chehra par udasi ke bhaav to bahut pehle aa chuke the uske lekin ab gussa aur chhad chuka tha

Vahi tara bilkul shant khadi thi jaise situation ko samjhne ki kosis kar rahi ho

Lucifer ka pura dhayan kamna par thi aur vo ye sochne me laga hua tha ki aisa kya hai kamna me aur kya vo usse bata sakti hai apne bare me aur kyu vo kamna ke bare me pata nahi laga sakta?
Kae sare sawal chal rahe the uske dimag me jinke sayad usse jawab milne wale the

Vahi kamna bahut buri tarah shocked ho gaye thi ashmita aur tara ko vaha dekh kar

Guilt se pura chehra peela pad chuka tha uska aur abhi vo kuch bolne ki condition me nahi thi

Ashmita- bol kyu nahi rahi ab aap?
Etne der se to bahut baatein ghumae ja rahi thi
Ab kya hua?
Sach face karne ki himmat nahi rahi ya koe aur baat hai?
Tara- ashu aaram se

Ashmita- kuch aaram se nahi hoga ab
Ye kitni aasani se bol rahi thi didi ki humari jindagi me to kabhi koe problem aae hi nahi
Hum do behano ne bina maa ke kaise gujara kiya hai vo bas hum do hi jante hai aur yaha ye etni badi badi baatein kar rahi hai

Lucifer- anisha do bakre, ek murga, kuch boiled aur kuch fried eggs chawal aur rotiya le aao
Bahut bukh lagi hai

Anisha bahut relaxed lag rahi thi sayad vo janti thi ki ye hone wala hai ya fir usne hi ye sab kiya hai kuch bharosa nahi hai Anisha ka

Lucifer ke bolne ke baad vo ander chali gaye aur bahar fir kamna ko ashmita ki vo jawab puchte hue nighahe bolne nahi de rahi thi

Lucifer- ashu bath ja
Kab tak khadi rahegi?
Ashmita- mujhe bas jawab chahiye lucifer aur fir main chali jaungi yaha se

Lucifer- har koe yaha jawab mangne hi aaya hai
Bath ja
Aur lucifer ashmita ko pakad ke jabardasti batha deta hai tara apne aap bath jati hai

Kamna- tum lucifer ho?
Kamna ne pehli baar muh khola aur jo pucha usse sun kar to ashmita aur jada chhid gaye

Ashmita- ha ye lucifer hai
Aap agar hum sabko apni betiya mana hai to aapki sari betiyo ka pyaar hai ye
Aur kuch puchna hai eske bare?

Ashmita ke aise jawab ne kamna ko fir chhup kara diya

Tab tak anisha coffee leke aa gaye thi

Lucifer- ye kya hai?
Kya mangvaya tha aur kya leke aae?
Anisha- abhi ye lelo baad me sab mil jayega

Lucifer hi liya lekin ashmita ne anisha ki taraf dekhe bina hi mana kar diya
Tara ne bhi coffee le li

Aur anisha vahi bath gaye

Ashmita- didi sayad hume chalna chahiye
Humara yaha time waste hi ho raha hai
Kamna- ashu please
Bahut peeda wali aawaz nikali kamna ki lekin ashmita par koe asar nahi kar paye

Ashmita- mujhe ashu sirf mere pyaar karne wale bula sakte hai aap nahi
Tara- ashu shant hoja thodi der ke liye please
Mujhe sab process karne ke liye time chahiye

Ashmita- raste me kar lena
Hume vapas jana hai abhi
Lucifer- mere pass bahut sawal hai lekin pehle aap enko jawab de do
Waqt aapke pass hoga enke pass hoga lekin mere pass bilkul nahi hai aur jab tak enhe apne sawalo ke jawab nahi mil jate mujhe apno ke nahi milenge
Esliye main aapse request kar raha hu
Lucifer aaj request kar raha hai
Mujhe aur kuch karne par majbur mat karo
Please bata do

Kamna- devil request karte hue acha nahi lagta.....
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Lone survivor bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....
 

Thakur

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Bas maja aata rahna chahiye

Kya pata main khud gayab ho jau
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UPDATE-192


Anisha- aap kyu nahi jana chahte vapas?
Aapki puri family hai vaha
Kamna- ab kya karu vaha ja kar?
Kya bolu apne bacho ko?
Kaha tha main?
Kyu thi?
Etne salo tak mili kyu nahi?
Mere pass kisi sawal ka koe jawab nahi hai

Anisha- mujhe puri umeed hai vo dono aapse koe sawal nahi puchegi
Kamna- lekin unke dil me to rahenge hi sare sawal?

Anisha- abhi bhi to rahenge?
Unko pata hai aap jinda ho aur aise me agar aap nahi jaoge to bhi to sare sawal aise ke aise rakhe rahenge?
Kamna- main kabhi nahi chahti thi vo mere bare me jane
Ek bahut simple life adpot ki ki koe mujhe notice na kar paye
Kabhi vapas sehar ki taraf mud kar nahi dekha
Pata nahi kaise unko pata chal gaye?

Anisha- maine bataya unhe
Kamna- tumne?????
Kyuuuu

Anisha- mujhe badla chahiye tha
Kamna- kis chhij ka badla?
Jo raichand ne jyoti ke sath kiya uska badla?
Agar aise sab log badla lene aa gaye to raichand har roj mare
Uski kismat kale kagaz par khoon se likhi gaye hai aur vo usne khud likhi hai
Uske liye kisi aur ki life ke sath khelna bilkul sahi nahi hai

Anisha- mujhse galti ho gaye
Main andhi ho gaye thi gusse me
Kamna- gussa hi kaal ka karan banta hai
Maine to ussi din tumhe pahchan liya tha jab tum pehli baar yaha aaye thi
Ye nahi ki tum jyoti ki beti ho balki ye ki tum bahut cold ho

Anisha- maine sirf vohi kiya jo mujhe karna chahiye tha
No regret
Kamna- kya mila?
Hum badle ki rah me etna aage badh jate hai ki ye tak nahi soch pate ki badla pura hone ke baad hum kya karenge?
Jaise ab tumhre sath ho raha hai
Tumhra badla pura ho gaya ab tum kya karogi?
Kya ek normal life jee sakti ho tum?

Anisha- i dont know
Kamna- jab tum mujhe mili thi tab hi maine tumse kaha tha es daldal me mat faso
Kuch nahi rakha esme
Sach to main bhi bata sakti thi tumhe lekin tumne meri baat nahi mani

Anisha- mujhe kisi ke muh se sunana tha
Kamna- vohi to main puch rahi hu ki tumne uske muh se sun liya ab kya?
Kya tum ab khush ho?
Satisfied ho?
Kya ab life me kuch karne ko bacha bhi hai ya nahi?
Tum meri beti jaisi ho aur main nahi chahti meri beti ki halaat meri jaisi ho

Anisha- aapne bhi khud apna faisla liya tha aur maine bhi
Fark bas etna hai ki aapko apne decision par regret hai aur mujhe nahi

Kamna- regret etni jaldi nahi aata
Abhi to pura khatam nahi hua hai lekin jab sab khatam ho jayega tab hume realize hoga ki humne kya kiya kyu kiya aur uske consequence kitne the
Abhi to tumhe kuch galat nahi lagega

Anisha- at least maine apne bacho ko chhod kar to nahi bhagi
Kamna- apni behano ko chhod kar to aae ho

Anisha- main vapas ja sakti hu
Kamna- kya tum vapas jaogi?

Anisha- sayad ya sayad nahi
Kamna- beti ye dunia achi nahi hai esme tumhe apno ka sath chahiye jeene ke liye

Anisha- aap bhi to apno ke bagar jeeye the?
To main kyu nahi jee sakti?
Kamna- maine ye jivan jiya nahi kaata hai aur main nahi chahti ki tum bhi yehi karo

Anisha- aap unko chhod kar kyu aaye thi?
Kamna- mere pass aur koe rasta nahi tha

Anisha- humesha dusra rasta hota hai
Kamna- ye tum bol rahi ho?

Anisha- ha kyuki mere pass bhi tha aur maine usse nahi lene ka faisla kiya
Kamna- mere pass nahi tha

Anisha- aap apne decision ko justify kar rahe ho bas
Kamna- jaisa tumhe sochna hai tum soch sakti ho
Main kon hoti hu tumhe rokne wali

Anisha- acha batao kya reason tha
Kamna- jo baatein ho chuki unko jane bhi do
Kya rakha hai vo sab vapas jagane ka?

Anisha- mujhe janana hai
Aapne mujhe beti samjha hai to mujhe beti maan kar batao
Kamna- jidd kaha se li tumne?
Jyoti to aisi nahi thi

Anisha- aap jante the unhe?
Kamna- ha
She was the puriest among us

Anisha- among us??
Kamna-abhi bahut kuch baki hai aur esliye main bol rahi hu ki tum behano ko ek sath ek dusre ke liye rahna chahiye

Anisha- un behano ko ek maa ki jarurat hai
Kamna- main nahi ja sakti vapas

Anisha- to main bhi nahi ja sakti
Aur aap baatein ghuma rahe ho
Sidhe sidhe kyu nahi bata dete ki kya reasons the aapke?

Kamna- mera aur anil ka rishta sahi nahi chal raha tha
Es se pehle vo mujhse door hota main us se door ho gaye
Anisha- ye koe reason nahi hua
Rishta sahi nahi chal raha tha eska ye matlab to hai nahi ki aap apne bachho ko chhod do?

Kamna- tum samjh nahi rahi ho
Anisha- kyuki aap samjha nahi rahe ho

Kamna- anil har dusri jagah muh marta firta tha aur main us layak nahi thi ki apne bacho ko ek achi life de saku
Anisha- ye bhi juth hai
Aap abhi bhi sach nahi bata rahe ho

Kamna- ashmita aur tara dono ka bachpan bahut acha raha hai vaha
Unhe kisi chhij ki koe kami nahi rahi
Mere pass kya milta unhe?
Kuch bhi nahi
Ab un dono ke pass sab kuch hai

Ashmita- aap kaise kah sakti ho ki humara bachpan acha gujra hai?

Bahut der tak anisha aur kamna ki baat sunte sunte ab ashmita se raha nahi gaya aur vo bol hi padi

Pehle to vo intezaar me thi ki sayad kamna sach bata hi de ki kyu vo unhe chhod kar gaye lekin jab usse yakeen ho gaya ki kamna kuch nahi bataegi to usne kamaan apne hatho me le li

Ashmita- aapko kuch nahi pata hai
Kuch bhi nahi
Kitni aasani se bol diya aapne ki humare pass sab kuch tha
Kisi chhij ki koe kami nahi thi
Hum khush the
Aisa bolne wali aap koe nahi hoti
Aapko kuch nahi pata ki humne kaise gujare hai vo din
Chahe kuch bhi reason raha ho lekin sachae yehi hai ki aap apne bacho ko chhod kar bhag gaye thi aur uske baad kabhi unki taraf dekhne tak ki kosis nahi ki
Mujhe nahi pata Kya hoga mere sath aur lucifer ke sath ya fir anisha ke sath lekin jo aapne mere sath kiya hai uske samne sab fika hi lagega
Sab fika hi lagega

Ashmita ne apna sara gussa apne sabdo ke jariye nikal diya
Chehra par udasi ke bhaav to bahut pehle aa chuke the uske lekin ab gussa aur chhad chuka tha

Vahi tara bilkul shant khadi thi jaise situation ko samjhne ki kosis kar rahi ho

Lucifer ka pura dhayan kamna par thi aur vo ye sochne me laga hua tha ki aisa kya hai kamna me aur kya vo usse bata sakti hai apne bare me aur kyu vo kamna ke bare me pata nahi laga sakta?
Kae sare sawal chal rahe the uske dimag me jinke sayad usse jawab milne wale the

Vahi kamna bahut buri tarah shocked ho gaye thi ashmita aur tara ko vaha dekh kar

Guilt se pura chehra peela pad chuka tha uska aur abhi vo kuch bolne ki condition me nahi thi

Ashmita- bol kyu nahi rahi ab aap?
Etne der se to bahut baatein ghumae ja rahi thi
Ab kya hua?
Sach face karne ki himmat nahi rahi ya koe aur baat hai?
Tara- ashu aaram se

Ashmita- kuch aaram se nahi hoga ab
Ye kitni aasani se bol rahi thi didi ki humari jindagi me to kabhi koe problem aae hi nahi
Hum do behano ne bina maa ke kaise gujara kiya hai vo bas hum do hi jante hai aur yaha ye etni badi badi baatein kar rahi hai

Lucifer- anisha do bakre, ek murga, kuch boiled aur kuch fried eggs chawal aur rotiya le aao
Bahut bukh lagi hai

Anisha bahut relaxed lag rahi thi sayad vo janti thi ki ye hone wala hai ya fir usne hi ye sab kiya hai kuch bharosa nahi hai Anisha ka

Lucifer ke bolne ke baad vo ander chali gaye aur bahar fir kamna ko ashmita ki vo jawab puchte hue nighahe bolne nahi de rahi thi

Lucifer- ashu bath ja
Kab tak khadi rahegi?
Ashmita- mujhe bas jawab chahiye lucifer aur fir main chali jaungi yaha se

Lucifer- har koe yaha jawab mangne hi aaya hai
Bath ja
Aur lucifer ashmita ko pakad ke jabardasti batha deta hai tara apne aap bath jati hai

Kamna- tum lucifer ho?
Kamna ne pehli baar muh khola aur jo pucha usse sun kar to ashmita aur jada chhid gaye

Ashmita- ha ye lucifer hai
Aap agar hum sabko apni betiya mana hai to aapki sari betiyo ka pyaar hai ye
Aur kuch puchna hai eske bare?

Ashmita ke aise jawab ne kamna ko fir chhup kara diya

Tab tak anisha coffee leke aa gaye thi

Lucifer- ye kya hai?
Kya mangvaya tha aur kya leke aae?
Anisha- abhi ye lelo baad me sab mil jayega

Lucifer hi liya lekin ashmita ne anisha ki taraf dekhe bina hi mana kar diya
Tara ne bhi coffee le li

Aur anisha vahi bath gaye

Ashmita- didi sayad hume chalna chahiye
Humara yaha time waste hi ho raha hai
Kamna- ashu please
Bahut peeda wali aawaz nikali kamna ki lekin ashmita par koe asar nahi kar paye

Ashmita- mujhe ashu sirf mere pyaar karne wale bula sakte hai aap nahi
Tara- ashu shant hoja thodi der ke liye please
Mujhe sab process karne ke liye time chahiye

Ashmita- raste me kar lena
Hume vapas jana hai abhi
Lucifer- mere pass bahut sawal hai lekin pehle aap enko jawab de do
Waqt aapke pass hoga enke pass hoga lekin mere pass bilkul nahi hai aur jab tak enhe apne sawalo ke jawab nahi mil jate mujhe apno ke nahi milenge
Esliye main aapse request kar raha hu
Lucifer aaj request kar raha hai
Mujhe aur kuch karne par majbur mat karo
Please bata do

Kamna- devil request karte hue acha nahi lagta.....
Finally suspense khul raha he :yesss:
Finally Kamna jo Ashmita aur Tara ki maa he wo muh kholegi
Lekin usko Anisha ki maa Jyoti ke bare kaise itna sab malum ? Wo bhi among us ? Kitni jagah khata khola tha ye Anil ne :countsheep:
Upar se Kamna Lucifer ko as devil bulai jo ye pure story me koi bhi earth wala banda nahi bola he Lucifer ko abatk :wooow:
We're eagerly waiting for next update
And we'll be there for you 😊
 

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Anisha- aap kyu nahi jana chahte vapas?
Aapki puri family hai vaha
Kamna- ab kya karu vaha ja kar?
Kya bolu apne bacho ko?
Kaha tha main?
Kyu thi?
Etne salo tak mili kyu nahi?
Mere pass kisi sawal ka koe jawab nahi hai

Anisha- mujhe puri umeed hai vo dono aapse koe sawal nahi puchegi
Kamna- lekin unke dil me to rahenge hi sare sawal?

Anisha- abhi bhi to rahenge?
Unko pata hai aap jinda ho aur aise me agar aap nahi jaoge to bhi to sare sawal aise ke aise rakhe rahenge?
Kamna- main kabhi nahi chahti thi vo mere bare me jane
Ek bahut simple life adpot ki ki koe mujhe notice na kar paye
Kabhi vapas sehar ki taraf mud kar nahi dekha
Pata nahi kaise unko pata chal gaye?

Anisha- maine bataya unhe
Kamna- tumne?????
Kyuuuu

Anisha- mujhe badla chahiye tha
Kamna- kis chhij ka badla?
Jo raichand ne jyoti ke sath kiya uska badla?
Agar aise sab log badla lene aa gaye to raichand har roj mare
Uski kismat kale kagaz par khoon se likhi gaye hai aur vo usne khud likhi hai
Uske liye kisi aur ki life ke sath khelna bilkul sahi nahi hai

Anisha- mujhse galti ho gaye
Main andhi ho gaye thi gusse me
Kamna- gussa hi kaal ka karan banta hai
Maine to ussi din tumhe pahchan liya tha jab tum pehli baar yaha aaye thi
Ye nahi ki tum jyoti ki beti ho balki ye ki tum bahut cold ho

Anisha- maine sirf vohi kiya jo mujhe karna chahiye tha
No regret
Kamna- kya mila?
Hum badle ki rah me etna aage badh jate hai ki ye tak nahi soch pate ki badla pura hone ke baad hum kya karenge?
Jaise ab tumhre sath ho raha hai
Tumhra badla pura ho gaya ab tum kya karogi?
Kya ek normal life jee sakti ho tum?

Anisha- i dont know
Kamna- jab tum mujhe mili thi tab hi maine tumse kaha tha es daldal me mat faso
Kuch nahi rakha esme
Sach to main bhi bata sakti thi tumhe lekin tumne meri baat nahi mani

Anisha- mujhe kisi ke muh se sunana tha
Kamna- vohi to main puch rahi hu ki tumne uske muh se sun liya ab kya?
Kya tum ab khush ho?
Satisfied ho?
Kya ab life me kuch karne ko bacha bhi hai ya nahi?
Tum meri beti jaisi ho aur main nahi chahti meri beti ki halaat meri jaisi ho

Anisha- aapne bhi khud apna faisla liya tha aur maine bhi
Fark bas etna hai ki aapko apne decision par regret hai aur mujhe nahi

Kamna- regret etni jaldi nahi aata
Abhi to pura khatam nahi hua hai lekin jab sab khatam ho jayega tab hume realize hoga ki humne kya kiya kyu kiya aur uske consequence kitne the
Abhi to tumhe kuch galat nahi lagega

Anisha- at least maine apne bacho ko chhod kar to nahi bhagi
Kamna- apni behano ko chhod kar to aae ho

Anisha- main vapas ja sakti hu
Kamna- kya tum vapas jaogi?

Anisha- sayad ya sayad nahi
Kamna- beti ye dunia achi nahi hai esme tumhe apno ka sath chahiye jeene ke liye

Anisha- aap bhi to apno ke bagar jeeye the?
To main kyu nahi jee sakti?
Kamna- maine ye jivan jiya nahi kaata hai aur main nahi chahti ki tum bhi yehi karo

Anisha- aap unko chhod kar kyu aaye thi?
Kamna- mere pass aur koe rasta nahi tha

Anisha- humesha dusra rasta hota hai
Kamna- ye tum bol rahi ho?

Anisha- ha kyuki mere pass bhi tha aur maine usse nahi lene ka faisla kiya
Kamna- mere pass nahi tha

Anisha- aap apne decision ko justify kar rahe ho bas
Kamna- jaisa tumhe sochna hai tum soch sakti ho
Main kon hoti hu tumhe rokne wali

Anisha- acha batao kya reason tha
Kamna- jo baatein ho chuki unko jane bhi do
Kya rakha hai vo sab vapas jagane ka?

Anisha- mujhe janana hai
Aapne mujhe beti samjha hai to mujhe beti maan kar batao
Kamna- jidd kaha se li tumne?
Jyoti to aisi nahi thi

Anisha- aap jante the unhe?
Kamna- ha
She was the puriest among us

Anisha- among us??
Kamna-abhi bahut kuch baki hai aur esliye main bol rahi hu ki tum behano ko ek sath ek dusre ke liye rahna chahiye

Anisha- un behano ko ek maa ki jarurat hai
Kamna- main nahi ja sakti vapas

Anisha- to main bhi nahi ja sakti
Aur aap baatein ghuma rahe ho
Sidhe sidhe kyu nahi bata dete ki kya reasons the aapke?

Kamna- mera aur anil ka rishta sahi nahi chal raha tha
Es se pehle vo mujhse door hota main us se door ho gaye
Anisha- ye koe reason nahi hua
Rishta sahi nahi chal raha tha eska ye matlab to hai nahi ki aap apne bachho ko chhod do?

Kamna- tum samjh nahi rahi ho
Anisha- kyuki aap samjha nahi rahe ho

Kamna- anil har dusri jagah muh marta firta tha aur main us layak nahi thi ki apne bacho ko ek achi life de saku
Anisha- ye bhi juth hai
Aap abhi bhi sach nahi bata rahe ho

Kamna- ashmita aur tara dono ka bachpan bahut acha raha hai vaha
Unhe kisi chhij ki koe kami nahi rahi
Mere pass kya milta unhe?
Kuch bhi nahi
Ab un dono ke pass sab kuch hai

Ashmita- aap kaise kah sakti ho ki humara bachpan acha gujra hai?

Bahut der tak anisha aur kamna ki baat sunte sunte ab ashmita se raha nahi gaya aur vo bol hi padi

Pehle to vo intezaar me thi ki sayad kamna sach bata hi de ki kyu vo unhe chhod kar gaye lekin jab usse yakeen ho gaya ki kamna kuch nahi bataegi to usne kamaan apne hatho me le li

Ashmita- aapko kuch nahi pata hai
Kuch bhi nahi
Kitni aasani se bol diya aapne ki humare pass sab kuch tha
Kisi chhij ki koe kami nahi thi
Hum khush the
Aisa bolne wali aap koe nahi hoti
Aapko kuch nahi pata ki humne kaise gujare hai vo din
Chahe kuch bhi reason raha ho lekin sachae yehi hai ki aap apne bacho ko chhod kar bhag gaye thi aur uske baad kabhi unki taraf dekhne tak ki kosis nahi ki
Mujhe nahi pata Kya hoga mere sath aur lucifer ke sath ya fir anisha ke sath lekin jo aapne mere sath kiya hai uske samne sab fika hi lagega
Sab fika hi lagega

Ashmita ne apna sara gussa apne sabdo ke jariye nikal diya
Chehra par udasi ke bhaav to bahut pehle aa chuke the uske lekin ab gussa aur chhad chuka tha

Vahi tara bilkul shant khadi thi jaise situation ko samjhne ki kosis kar rahi ho

Lucifer ka pura dhayan kamna par thi aur vo ye sochne me laga hua tha ki aisa kya hai kamna me aur kya vo usse bata sakti hai apne bare me aur kyu vo kamna ke bare me pata nahi laga sakta?
Kae sare sawal chal rahe the uske dimag me jinke sayad usse jawab milne wale the

Vahi kamna bahut buri tarah shocked ho gaye thi ashmita aur tara ko vaha dekh kar

Guilt se pura chehra peela pad chuka tha uska aur abhi vo kuch bolne ki condition me nahi thi

Ashmita- bol kyu nahi rahi ab aap?
Etne der se to bahut baatein ghumae ja rahi thi
Ab kya hua?
Sach face karne ki himmat nahi rahi ya koe aur baat hai?
Tara- ashu aaram se

Ashmita- kuch aaram se nahi hoga ab
Ye kitni aasani se bol rahi thi didi ki humari jindagi me to kabhi koe problem aae hi nahi
Hum do behano ne bina maa ke kaise gujara kiya hai vo bas hum do hi jante hai aur yaha ye etni badi badi baatein kar rahi hai

Lucifer- anisha do bakre, ek murga, kuch boiled aur kuch fried eggs chawal aur rotiya le aao
Bahut bukh lagi hai

Anisha bahut relaxed lag rahi thi sayad vo janti thi ki ye hone wala hai ya fir usne hi ye sab kiya hai kuch bharosa nahi hai Anisha ka

Lucifer ke bolne ke baad vo ander chali gaye aur bahar fir kamna ko ashmita ki vo jawab puchte hue nighahe bolne nahi de rahi thi

Lucifer- ashu bath ja
Kab tak khadi rahegi?
Ashmita- mujhe bas jawab chahiye lucifer aur fir main chali jaungi yaha se

Lucifer- har koe yaha jawab mangne hi aaya hai
Bath ja
Aur lucifer ashmita ko pakad ke jabardasti batha deta hai tara apne aap bath jati hai

Kamna- tum lucifer ho?
Kamna ne pehli baar muh khola aur jo pucha usse sun kar to ashmita aur jada chhid gaye

Ashmita- ha ye lucifer hai
Aap agar hum sabko apni betiya mana hai to aapki sari betiyo ka pyaar hai ye
Aur kuch puchna hai eske bare?

Ashmita ke aise jawab ne kamna ko fir chhup kara diya

Tab tak anisha coffee leke aa gaye thi

Lucifer- ye kya hai?
Kya mangvaya tha aur kya leke aae?
Anisha- abhi ye lelo baad me sab mil jayega

Lucifer hi liya lekin ashmita ne anisha ki taraf dekhe bina hi mana kar diya
Tara ne bhi coffee le li

Aur anisha vahi bath gaye

Ashmita- didi sayad hume chalna chahiye
Humara yaha time waste hi ho raha hai
Kamna- ashu please
Bahut peeda wali aawaz nikali kamna ki lekin ashmita par koe asar nahi kar paye

Ashmita- mujhe ashu sirf mere pyaar karne wale bula sakte hai aap nahi
Tara- ashu shant hoja thodi der ke liye please
Mujhe sab process karne ke liye time chahiye

Ashmita- raste me kar lena
Hume vapas jana hai abhi
Lucifer- mere pass bahut sawal hai lekin pehle aap enko jawab de do
Waqt aapke pass hoga enke pass hoga lekin mere pass bilkul nahi hai aur jab tak enhe apne sawalo ke jawab nahi mil jate mujhe apno ke nahi milenge
Esliye main aapse request kar raha hu
Lucifer aaj request kar raha hai
Mujhe aur kuch karne par majbur mat karo
Please bata do

Kamna- devil request karte hue acha nahi lagta.....
Sansaar jabarjast update bhai.
Kamna ab sari sacchai bta degi sayad
Kamna me kuch khas hai jo wo lucifer ke bare me janti hai, aur lucifer uska man bhi nahi padh pa rha hai. Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.
 
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