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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

Thakur

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Mitika- kya soch rahe ho?
Lucifer- soch raha hu ki ye sab mere sath hi kyu ho raha hai?
Aur aage chal kar aur kya kya hoga?

Mitika- kuch nahi hoga
Jada mat socho
Lucifer- tumhe to sab pata hai fir bhi bol rahi ho mat socho?

Mitika- lucifer pyaar sabse bada hathiyaar hai
Hum pyaar se kuch bhi jeet sakte hai
Lucifer- tumne bola tha meri yaaddast jayegi?

Mitika- hmm
Lucifer- vapas milegi mujhe?

Mitika- pata nahi
Lucifer- pata nahi matlab?

Mitika- maine pehle hi galti kar di tumhe sab bata kar
Lucifer- kya matlab?

Mitika- kisi ka future usko pata nahi lagna chahiye paap lagta hai
Mujhe bhi apna muh band rakhna chahiye tha
Lucifer- mujhe kya paap lagega?
Main khud hi paap hu

Mitika- aise nahi bolte pagal
Lucifer- to batao vapas milegi ya nahi?

Mitika- sab kuch tumhre ander hi to hai?
Dund lo ya dund lena
Lucifer- matlab mil jayegi?

Mitika- samjh jao ab lucifer
Lucifer- tum kaha hogi tab?

Mitika- main yahi rahungi aur kaha jaungi?
Lucifer- tum kabse juth bolne lag gaye mujhse?

Mitika- chalo na sex karte hai
Lucifer- piche se ya aage se?

Mitika- jaha se aapka man kare kar lena par chalo to
Lucifer- aaj esko etni chhodi kar dunga ki poti karne ke liye thoda bhi jor nahi lagana padega

Mitika- piche se to sochna bhi mat
Lucifer- abhi to tumne bola

Mitika- main position ki baat kar rahi thi piche wali position se na ki piche wale hole me
Lucifer- ek baar try to kar

Mitika- nahi karna mujhe try
Lucifer- chal theek hai jaisi teri marji piche ko to ho ja aaj piche wali position me karenge****

Roshini- ye mera kaam hai aur mujhe mera kaam rokne wale tum kon hote ho?
Lucifer- ye tumhra kaam hai maan liya lekin ye mera hell hai samjhi?
Mera hell
Yaha ka sab kuch main hi hu

Roshini- agar tumhe mere kaam karne se problem hai to supreme ko bata do
Main chali jaungi yaha se
Lucifer- kisi ko batane ki jarurat nahi hai
Main khud tumhe nikal sakta hu yaha se
Aur tumhre kaam karne se mujhe problem nahi hai lekin jo bina soche samjhe kaam karti ho us se problem hai

Roshini- kya bina soche samjhe kar diya maine?
Lucifer- jo souls ko tum khula chhod rahi ho vo bahar ja kar kisi ko bhi nuksaan pahucha sakti hai

Roshini- kisi ko nuksaan pahuchaya kya?
Nahi na?
To?
Lucifer- main intezaar nahi kar sakta ki vo kisi ko nuksaan pahuchaye aur main tab tak ka intezaar karu

Roshini- main ye dekh rahi thi ki unhe kuch sudhar aaya ya nahi
Lucifer- main hell lord hu mujhe sab pata hai
Tumne unko esliye khula chhoda taki vo bahar jakar apna rang dikha sake aur tum unhe maar kar apna dil bahla sako

Roshini- hell lord ho dark lord nahi
Lucifer- vo jo dark lord hai na vo kisi bill me chhupa batha hai
Jis din samne aaya us din pata chal jayega tumhe bhi ki kon hu main

Roshini- aur tumhe bhi pata chal jayega kon hai vo
Lucifer- mujhe pata hai kon hai vo
Esliye apna dimag vaha na lagao
Agar dobara aisi harkat kari to supreme tak pahuchne ki halaat nahi chhodunga

Roshini- aur main chhupa chhap khadi sab dekhti rahungi?
Galatfami hai tumhri
Agar bina lade hari to kya fayda mere vajud ka?
Lucifer- aur agar ladi to vo karunga tumhre sath ki aage se kabhi koe lucifer ko ungli karne ki sochega bhi nahi

Roshini- essi attitude ki vajah se aaj yaha ho tum
Lucifer- main to fir bhi bhagwan hu
Tum apna dekho
Tumhre me to nahi hai na attitude?
Fir kyu aaye yaha apna sada muh leke?

Roshini- dekhna tha mere se bura bhi koe hai to vo kaisa dikhta hai
Lucifer- tumse buri tumhri ek hi chhij hogi aur I'm dam sure uska shape tumhre chehre jaisi hi hoga

Roshini- bas jab kuch bolne ko na bache to sexual comment pass kar do
Lucifer- aur jab tumhre pass na bache to ussi ka sahara leke jeetne ki kosis kar lena

Roshini- main aise hi kaam karungi
Lucifer- es baar karna fir dekhunga

Roshini- main bhi dekhti hu tumhe
Lucifer- ja sakti ho tum

Roshini- tumhre order se nahi jaungi
Lucifer- mere order se aae ho yaha tum aur mere order se jaogi bhi
Jada udne ki jarurat nahi hai

Roshini- main baat kar lungi supreme se fir batati hu tumhe
Lucifer- jis se marji kar lo baat
Mujhse jubaan ladane ki koe jarurat nahi hai

Roshini- arrogant fuck
Lucifer- thank you***

Present

Naag- bhai us bande ka koe ata pata nahi hai
Kaha mar gaya vo?
Lucifer- tu kyu apna dimag kharab kar raha hai uske piche?
Arjun ko dundne ko bola tha vo to tere se ho nahi raha faltu me bakchodi kar raha hai

Naag- vo arjun bhi pata nahi konse bill me chhupa batha hai
Mil hi nahi raha
Lucifer- mil jayega agar dhang se dundega to

Naag- aur kitni dhang se dundu usse?
Lucifer- mujhe nahi pata kitni dhang se dundega lekin dund usko

Naag- are bhai etne din ho gaye mansi se bhi theek se nahi mila upar se aap marte rahte ho vo alag
Thoda raham karo mujh par bhai
Lucifer- ja mil le fir aur jitni der milna hai ek baar hi mil le baad me bakchodi mat karna

Naag- jee bhai
To main jau?
Lucifer- likh ke du?

Naag- likh ke de dete to jada acha rahta vo kya hai na aapko yaad to kuch rahta nahi hai fir meri marne lag jaoge ki maine kab kaha tujhe jane ko
Lucifer- nahi marunga
Ja tu

Naag- aap hi to mere apne ho
Etne ache kyu ho bhai aap?
Lucifer- tu do minute aur bakchodi ki to main apna mood badal lunga fir marate rahna apni gand

Naag- are bhai aap to serious ho gaya
Ja raha hu main
Fir naag vaha se jaldi se bhag jata hai pata usse bhi tha ki agar nahi gaya to lucifer ka koe bharosa nahi vo kab kis baat par marne lag jaye

Vahi naag ke jane ke baad lucifer akela hi peeta raha aur khub nasha karke apne flat aa gaya

Jaise hi apne flat ka gate band karne wala hota hai ek dam se madhuri samne aa jati hai

Lucifer nashe me to tha ki aur jaise hi madhuri samne aaye uska balance bigda aur khud ko bachane ke liye usne gate ki jagah madhuri ki chikni kamar pakad li aur vo dono ek dusre ke behad kareeb aa gaye

Madhuri ki to saase hi aatak gaye lucifer ke achanak hamle se aur badi badi aankhon se lucifer ko badi pyaar se dekhne lagi

Lucifer ne bhi madhuri ko thoda aur apne kareeb laya aur gate band kar diya

Ab dono gate se satte khade ek dusre ko dekh rahe the
Lucifer ka hath abhi bhi madhuri ki kamar par hi tha jisse hatane ki madhuri ne koe kosis bhi nahi ki

Lucifer ne agle hi pal apna sar madhuri ke kande par patak diya aur
Lucifer- jaan le logi aise to aap meri
Pata nahi kya hai aapme jo main khud ko rok nahi pata

Madhuri ko jaise hi apne shoulders par lucifer ki saase feel hone lagi uski bhi aankhen apne aap band ho gaye

Bas ek touch se hi dono ek dusre ko pagal bana dete the aur aage badhne ki himmat na to madhuri me thi aur na lucifer me

Bahut der tak dono aise hi khade rahe ek statue ki tarah

Madhuri- lucifer....bahut jada dheere boli etne ki lucifer tak aawaz pahuchne par hi aawaz mar gaye

Madhuri- luciferr... vo pehle se thodi si tej awaz me boli
Lucifer- jee lene do na mujhe thodi der shanti se?

Eske aage madhuri kuch nahi bol paye uske pass lucifer ke es sawal ka koe jawab hi nahi tha

Madhuri ke pair bhi dard karne lag gaye the khade khade aur upar se lucifer ne apna bhi sara vajah madhuri par dala hua tha lekin madhuri fir bhi lucifer ke liye kuch nahi boli
Lucifer ne jitna kiya hai uske liye uske badle me madhuri puri jindagi lucifer ke liye aisi khadi ho sakti thi

Lucifer- aap mujhe sula dogi aaj?
Mujhe nind nahi aati
Madhuri ke dil me ek dard sa utha jab lucifer ne bola ki usse nind nahi aati to

Madhuri- hmm badle me madhuri etna hi bol paye
Lucifer madhuri se thoda alag hua aur room ki taraf chal diya madhuri ne bhi usse follow kiya

Lucifer bed par let gaya aur madhuri uske sar ke pass bath kar uske balo me hath firane lagi

Lucifer- main ulajh gaya hu Ma'am
Mujhe kuch samjh me nahi aa raha
Main sab se duri bana kar rakhna chahta hu, mujhe pata hai ek din main yaha se chala jaunga aur aap sab ke liye dunia bhar ka dard chhod jaunga lekin main khud ko control nahi kar pa raha

Na main kisi se door ja pa raha na main kisi ko apne se door kar pa raha
Pehle to sirf inaaya aur ashmita tha uske baad anisha aa gaye fir tara aa gaye fir payal aa gaye ab pata nahi aur kon aayega

Main bahut kosis kar raha hu khud ko control karne ki lekin main jada din kar nahi paunga
Jada din main nahi has paunga ma'am

Aur jis din mera asli chehra samne aaya main vapas sab kuch kho dunga

Pata nahi kya bure kaam karke aaya tha main jiski vajah se mere sath ye sab ho raha hai

Bhagwan aisa naseeb to kisi ko na de jisko khud ke bare me hi kuch nahi pata ho
Jo khud ko dundne ke liye yaha se vaha bhatakta firta rahe

Ma'am main aaj aap se bata raha hu mujhe lagta hai main yaha bahut bada vinaash karne wala hu etna bada ki dunia ka naksa hi badal jayega

Mujhe kisi apne ke khone ka ahsaas hone lag gaya hai aur mujhe ye bhi ahsaas ho gaya hai ki vo kon hai

Lekin agar aisa hua to ma'am kuch nahi bach payega kuch bhi nahi
Mera gussa mera sabse bada dusman hai
Ye gussa sab kuch nast kar dega ma'am
Sab kuch nast kar dega

Lucifer nashe aur apni bhavnao me bhah kar pata nahi kya kya bole ja raha tha aur madhuri bheegi palako se lucifer ka dard mahsus kar rahi thi

Lekin jaldi hi lucifer ki madhuri ki gaud me nind aa gaye aur vo aaj chain se so paya....
Past me Mitika ek he jo sarvagyani he jo sahi se Lucifer ko guide karti he wahi dusri side me ye Roshni ka ek role hw jo earth pe bike wali (naam yaad nahi uska ) usse match kar raha he. Anyway story me har baar Lucifer yahi kehta aaya he Ashmita se ke mera ant tere he hatho hona he aur hum he jo jitni baar ye padhe to sun ke bawale ho jate he ke jaruri he kya ye hona bhi , par kya he kar sakte he akhir me match fixer ko ye theory bhi prove karni he na ke burai aur bure kamo ka ant bura he hota he :yawn:
 

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Mitika- kya soch rahe ho?
Lucifer- soch raha hu ki ye sab mere sath hi kyu ho raha hai?
Aur aage chal kar aur kya kya hoga?

Mitika- kuch nahi hoga
Jada mat socho
Lucifer- tumhe to sab pata hai fir bhi bol rahi ho mat socho?

Mitika- lucifer pyaar sabse bada hathiyaar hai
Hum pyaar se kuch bhi jeet sakte hai
Lucifer- tumne bola tha meri yaaddast jayegi?

Mitika- hmm
Lucifer- vapas milegi mujhe?

Mitika- pata nahi
Lucifer- pata nahi matlab?

Mitika- maine pehle hi galti kar di tumhe sab bata kar
Lucifer- kya matlab?

Mitika- kisi ka future usko pata nahi lagna chahiye paap lagta hai
Mujhe bhi apna muh band rakhna chahiye tha
Lucifer- mujhe kya paap lagega?
Main khud hi paap hu

Mitika- aise nahi bolte pagal
Lucifer- to batao vapas milegi ya nahi?

Mitika- sab kuch tumhre ander hi to hai?
Dund lo ya dund lena
Lucifer- matlab mil jayegi?

Mitika- samjh jao ab lucifer
Lucifer- tum kaha hogi tab?

Mitika- main yahi rahungi aur kaha jaungi?
Lucifer- tum kabse juth bolne lag gaye mujhse?

Mitika- chalo na sex karte hai
Lucifer- piche se ya aage se?

Mitika- jaha se aapka man kare kar lena par chalo to
Lucifer- aaj esko etni chhodi kar dunga ki poti karne ke liye thoda bhi jor nahi lagana padega

Mitika- piche se to sochna bhi mat
Lucifer- abhi to tumne bola

Mitika- main position ki baat kar rahi thi piche wali position se na ki piche wale hole me
Lucifer- ek baar try to kar

Mitika- nahi karna mujhe try
Lucifer- chal theek hai jaisi teri marji piche ko to ho ja aaj piche wali position me karenge****

Roshini- ye mera kaam hai aur mujhe mera kaam rokne wale tum kon hote ho?
Lucifer- ye tumhra kaam hai maan liya lekin ye mera hell hai samjhi?
Mera hell
Yaha ka sab kuch main hi hu

Roshini- agar tumhe mere kaam karne se problem hai to supreme ko bata do
Main chali jaungi yaha se
Lucifer- kisi ko batane ki jarurat nahi hai
Main khud tumhe nikal sakta hu yaha se
Aur tumhre kaam karne se mujhe problem nahi hai lekin jo bina soche samjhe kaam karti ho us se problem hai

Roshini- kya bina soche samjhe kar diya maine?
Lucifer- jo souls ko tum khula chhod rahi ho vo bahar ja kar kisi ko bhi nuksaan pahucha sakti hai

Roshini- kisi ko nuksaan pahuchaya kya?
Nahi na?
To?
Lucifer- main intezaar nahi kar sakta ki vo kisi ko nuksaan pahuchaye aur main tab tak ka intezaar karu

Roshini- main ye dekh rahi thi ki unhe kuch sudhar aaya ya nahi
Lucifer- main hell lord hu mujhe sab pata hai
Tumne unko esliye khula chhoda taki vo bahar jakar apna rang dikha sake aur tum unhe maar kar apna dil bahla sako

Roshini- hell lord ho dark lord nahi
Lucifer- vo jo dark lord hai na vo kisi bill me chhupa batha hai
Jis din samne aaya us din pata chal jayega tumhe bhi ki kon hu main

Roshini- aur tumhe bhi pata chal jayega kon hai vo
Lucifer- mujhe pata hai kon hai vo
Esliye apna dimag vaha na lagao
Agar dobara aisi harkat kari to supreme tak pahuchne ki halaat nahi chhodunga

Roshini- aur main chhupa chhap khadi sab dekhti rahungi?
Galatfami hai tumhri
Agar bina lade hari to kya fayda mere vajud ka?
Lucifer- aur agar ladi to vo karunga tumhre sath ki aage se kabhi koe lucifer ko ungli karne ki sochega bhi nahi

Roshini- essi attitude ki vajah se aaj yaha ho tum
Lucifer- main to fir bhi bhagwan hu
Tum apna dekho
Tumhre me to nahi hai na attitude?
Fir kyu aaye yaha apna sada muh leke?

Roshini- dekhna tha mere se bura bhi koe hai to vo kaisa dikhta hai
Lucifer- tumse buri tumhri ek hi chhij hogi aur I'm dam sure uska shape tumhre chehre jaisi hi hoga

Roshini- bas jab kuch bolne ko na bache to sexual comment pass kar do
Lucifer- aur jab tumhre pass na bache to ussi ka sahara leke jeetne ki kosis kar lena

Roshini- main aise hi kaam karungi
Lucifer- es baar karna fir dekhunga

Roshini- main bhi dekhti hu tumhe
Lucifer- ja sakti ho tum

Roshini- tumhre order se nahi jaungi
Lucifer- mere order se aae ho yaha tum aur mere order se jaogi bhi
Jada udne ki jarurat nahi hai

Roshini- main baat kar lungi supreme se fir batati hu tumhe
Lucifer- jis se marji kar lo baat
Mujhse jubaan ladane ki koe jarurat nahi hai

Roshini- arrogant fuck
Lucifer- thank you***

Present

Naag- bhai us bande ka koe ata pata nahi hai
Kaha mar gaya vo?
Lucifer- tu kyu apna dimag kharab kar raha hai uske piche?
Arjun ko dundne ko bola tha vo to tere se ho nahi raha faltu me bakchodi kar raha hai

Naag- vo arjun bhi pata nahi konse bill me chhupa batha hai
Mil hi nahi raha
Lucifer- mil jayega agar dhang se dundega to

Naag- aur kitni dhang se dundu usse?
Lucifer- mujhe nahi pata kitni dhang se dundega lekin dund usko

Naag- are bhai etne din ho gaye mansi se bhi theek se nahi mila upar se aap marte rahte ho vo alag
Thoda raham karo mujh par bhai
Lucifer- ja mil le fir aur jitni der milna hai ek baar hi mil le baad me bakchodi mat karna

Naag- jee bhai
To main jau?
Lucifer- likh ke du?

Naag- likh ke de dete to jada acha rahta vo kya hai na aapko yaad to kuch rahta nahi hai fir meri marne lag jaoge ki maine kab kaha tujhe jane ko
Lucifer- nahi marunga
Ja tu

Naag- aap hi to mere apne ho
Etne ache kyu ho bhai aap?
Lucifer- tu do minute aur bakchodi ki to main apna mood badal lunga fir marate rahna apni gand

Naag- are bhai aap to serious ho gaya
Ja raha hu main
Fir naag vaha se jaldi se bhag jata hai pata usse bhi tha ki agar nahi gaya to lucifer ka koe bharosa nahi vo kab kis baat par marne lag jaye

Vahi naag ke jane ke baad lucifer akela hi peeta raha aur khub nasha karke apne flat aa gaya

Jaise hi apne flat ka gate band karne wala hota hai ek dam se madhuri samne aa jati hai

Lucifer nashe me to tha ki aur jaise hi madhuri samne aaye uska balance bigda aur khud ko bachane ke liye usne gate ki jagah madhuri ki chikni kamar pakad li aur vo dono ek dusre ke behad kareeb aa gaye

Madhuri ki to saase hi aatak gaye lucifer ke achanak hamle se aur badi badi aankhon se lucifer ko badi pyaar se dekhne lagi

Lucifer ne bhi madhuri ko thoda aur apne kareeb laya aur gate band kar diya

Ab dono gate se satte khade ek dusre ko dekh rahe the
Lucifer ka hath abhi bhi madhuri ki kamar par hi tha jisse hatane ki madhuri ne koe kosis bhi nahi ki

Lucifer ne agle hi pal apna sar madhuri ke kande par patak diya aur
Lucifer- jaan le logi aise to aap meri
Pata nahi kya hai aapme jo main khud ko rok nahi pata

Madhuri ko jaise hi apne shoulders par lucifer ki saase feel hone lagi uski bhi aankhen apne aap band ho gaye

Bas ek touch se hi dono ek dusre ko pagal bana dete the aur aage badhne ki himmat na to madhuri me thi aur na lucifer me

Bahut der tak dono aise hi khade rahe ek statue ki tarah

Madhuri- lucifer....bahut jada dheere boli etne ki lucifer tak aawaz pahuchne par hi aawaz mar gaye

Madhuri- luciferr... vo pehle se thodi si tej awaz me boli
Lucifer- jee lene do na mujhe thodi der shanti se?

Eske aage madhuri kuch nahi bol paye uske pass lucifer ke es sawal ka koe jawab hi nahi tha

Madhuri ke pair bhi dard karne lag gaye the khade khade aur upar se lucifer ne apna bhi sara vajah madhuri par dala hua tha lekin madhuri fir bhi lucifer ke liye kuch nahi boli
Lucifer ne jitna kiya hai uske liye uske badle me madhuri puri jindagi lucifer ke liye aisi khadi ho sakti thi

Lucifer- aap mujhe sula dogi aaj?
Mujhe nind nahi aati
Madhuri ke dil me ek dard sa utha jab lucifer ne bola ki usse nind nahi aati to

Madhuri- hmm badle me madhuri etna hi bol paye
Lucifer madhuri se thoda alag hua aur room ki taraf chal diya madhuri ne bhi usse follow kiya

Lucifer bed par let gaya aur madhuri uske sar ke pass bath kar uske balo me hath firane lagi

Lucifer- main ulajh gaya hu Ma'am
Mujhe kuch samjh me nahi aa raha
Main sab se duri bana kar rakhna chahta hu, mujhe pata hai ek din main yaha se chala jaunga aur aap sab ke liye dunia bhar ka dard chhod jaunga lekin main khud ko control nahi kar pa raha

Na main kisi se door ja pa raha na main kisi ko apne se door kar pa raha
Pehle to sirf inaaya aur ashmita tha uske baad anisha aa gaye fir tara aa gaye fir payal aa gaye ab pata nahi aur kon aayega

Main bahut kosis kar raha hu khud ko control karne ki lekin main jada din kar nahi paunga
Jada din main nahi has paunga ma'am

Aur jis din mera asli chehra samne aaya main vapas sab kuch kho dunga

Pata nahi kya bure kaam karke aaya tha main jiski vajah se mere sath ye sab ho raha hai

Bhagwan aisa naseeb to kisi ko na de jisko khud ke bare me hi kuch nahi pata ho
Jo khud ko dundne ke liye yaha se vaha bhatakta firta rahe

Ma'am main aaj aap se bata raha hu mujhe lagta hai main yaha bahut bada vinaash karne wala hu etna bada ki dunia ka naksa hi badal jayega

Mujhe kisi apne ke khone ka ahsaas hone lag gaya hai aur mujhe ye bhi ahsaas ho gaya hai ki vo kon hai

Lekin agar aisa hua to ma'am kuch nahi bach payega kuch bhi nahi
Mera gussa mera sabse bada dusman hai
Ye gussa sab kuch nast kar dega ma'am
Sab kuch nast kar dega

Lucifer nashe aur apni bhavnao me bhah kar pata nahi kya kya bole ja raha tha aur madhuri bheegi palako se lucifer ka dard mahsus kar rahi thi

Lekin jaldi hi lucifer ki madhuri ki gaud me nind aa gaye aur vo aaj chain se so paya....
Awesome update
 

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Kamna- maine tumse kitne baar kaha hai saraab pee kar drive mat kiya karo
Dheere chalao kahi lag jayegi
Anil- are meri jaan bahut heavy driver hu main
Tension mat le

Kamna- ye jungle hai
Tum aise cut maar rahe ho kuch samne aa gaya to dikhega bhi nahi
Anil- tum mera mood kharab kar rahi ho
Ek to main tumhe etni achi jagah leke aaya hu upar se tum ho ki nataak kar rahi ho

Kamna- tum dheere chala lo please
Koe......dhaaaadaaammmmmm
Anil ka dhayan samne se hat gaya tha kamna ke baar baar bolne se aur usne jungle me bani ek kuttiya me ghadi ghused di

Ghadi mahangi thi esliye un dono ko to sirf kharoche hi aaye lekin bahar ki halaat dekh kar lag raha tha ki kisi ne apni aakhiri saas puri kar li hai

Kamna ne jaise hi samne ka najara dekha vo buri tarah dar gaye aur uska pura sareer kapne laga vahi anil etne nashe me tha ki usne realize bhi nahi kiya ki abhi kya hua

Ek saraab ki bottle muh par lagate hue vo ghadi se bahar nikla aur bilkul samne jake khada ho gaya

Jaha ek young monk tyre ke niche dabba mara hua tha

Aisa lag raha tha vo tyre ke sath kafi der tak ghasetate hue gaya hai

Kamna ne jab ye dekha to usse to chakkar se aane lage
Badi muskil se ghadi ko pakad kar usne apne aap ko sambhala lekin jaha se usne ghadi ko pakda tha vahi us monk ka sar sareer se alag hua pada tha

Jisse dekhte hi kamna buri tarah ulti karne lagi

Thand ke mosam me bhi uske sareer se pasine ki nadiya bahane lagi

Us monk ki halaat etni buri thi ki koe uski taraf dekh bhi nahi sakta tha

Abhi kamna sambhalti us se pehle hi ek buddha monk vaha bhagta aa gaya

Sayad ye jo abhi mara hai ya to uska student hai ya fir uska beta

Jaise hi usse sab majra samjh me aaya uski aankhon me gussa utar aaya

Lekin us se pehle vo kuch bolta anil peete hue samne aaya aur apni jeb se kuch paiso ki gaddiya nikal kar us buddhe fakir ki taraf fek di

Anil- sun be buddhe
Ye le eski aur teri jaan ki kimat
Etna tu apne puri jindagi me nahi kama payega jitna tujhe main de raha hu
Ja jake aish kar......

"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh" karte hue anil door udta hua gaya aur bahut piche jake gira jo us budhe monk ne kick mari vo dekh kar hi lag raha tha ki bhai kamaal

Anil gira aur vahi par behosh hoke geer gaya

Gurupal- main gurupal apne sare ache karmo ko dhaav par laga kar en dono dust prani ko shraap deta hu ki enke bache bhi ense aise hi door ho jayenge
Ye rote rahenge chhikhte rahenge, dard se jaan jane wali lagne lagegi lekin fir bhi enke praan nahi jayenge
Enki aankhon ke samne enke bache ense door hote chale jayenge aur ye kuch bhi nahi kar payenge
Aur mere es bache ki maut ka badla lene ek devil aayega enki jindagi me jo ye sab karavega
Vo devil aakar pehle etni khushiya dega ki ense khushiya sahan nahi hogi aur fir us se bhi adhik dukh enke liye chhod dega
Ye gurupal la shraap hai tum dono ko..

Ek grajati aawaz shant ho gaye aur anil to behosh tha usse kuch pata chala nahi lekin kamna ki aankhon ke samne uski puri zindagi bhanjar ban chuki thi

Ek maa ke liye to uske bache hi sab kuch hote hai aur aaj ek pal me uska sab kuch chhin gaya tha

Ek nadi bahne lagi kamna ki aankhon se lekin uske sabdo ne uska sath dena chhod diya kyuki vo kuch bol hi nahi paa rahi thi

Gurupal- tu bhi es paapi ke har bure karmo me samil hai balki har ek karmo me barabar ki hissedar hai esliye tu apne bacho se mil bhi nahi payegi aaj ke baad aur jab ek sadi ke baad milegi to tujhe usme apne bache nahi milenge tujhe milega paschatap apne karmo ka paschataap

Kamna sidhe gurupal ke pairo me gir gaye aur unke pair pakad kar jor jor se rone lag gaye

Kamna- humse galti ho gaye baba
Humse galti ho gaye
Hume apne bacho se door na karo
Ek maa ke liye to uske bache hi sab kuch hote hai na baba
Main apne bacho ke bagair kaise jinda rahungi?
Ya to aap abhi mere praan leke mujhe es shraap se mukt kara do ya fir mujhe puri dunia ke badle mere bachhe vapas de do
Main dunia ke against apne bacho ke sath rah sakti hu lekin apne bacho ke bina nahi rah sakti
Ek maa par daya kijiye baba ek maa par daya kijiye

Vo kahte hai na gand me ghusa hua teer aur shraap dono ko vapas lene me bahut dard hota hai
Gand me se teer to fir bhi gand chhodi karke nikala ja sakta hai lekin shraap ka kya?
Vo kuch bhi chhodi kar lo chahe gand me hath daal ke nikalne ki kosis karo vo nikal nahi pata

Gurupal- tumhre pati ne galti ki hai aur usko saja milegi
Milegi usko saja
Ek devil aayega aur vo aisi saja dega etni baar dega ki esko apne karmo par sarmandgi honge lagegi
Aaj mera beta nahi maara aaj tum dono ki khushiya mari hai
Jab ye ahankaari manushay uth jaye to bata dena esse ki din ginane suru kar de
Jada saal nahi bachi eske pass
Mere bete ne ek baar mrityu prapat ki hai ye har roj marega
Esse vo har roj marega

Kamna gurupal ke pairo ko pakde hue

Baba daya kijiye
Ek galti to bagwan bhi maaf kar deta hai baba
En sab me humari bachhiyo ki to koe galti nahi hai na baba?
Aap sari saja mujhe de do
Main haste haste sab sahan kar lungi lekin meri bachhiyo ko bakas do baba
Kanya to khud bagwan ka roop hoti hai baba aap unko kaise kast de sakte ho?

Gurupal- tujhe aaj abhi se apne bachhiyo ka tyaag karna hoga
Aaj ke baad tum apni bachhiyo se tabhi mil paogi jab ek rakshash se unhe pyaar hoga aur vo rakshah unko leke tumhre pass aayega
Main tumse vada karta hu ki agar aaj jo bhi hua agar tumne eska praschataap hua to tumhe apne bachiya vapas milegi
Na sirf apne bache milenge tum us rakshah ko bhi ek sahi rasta dikhane me madad karogi aur agar tum apne bacho se uske aane se pehle mili ya tum aaj jo hua vo bhuli to vo to aayega hi sath me jo aayegi vo tumhri betiya nahi hogi
Tumhri betiya nahi hoga....


Ashmita- don't you dare to call him that
Lucifer- sissss calm down
Let her talk

Ashmita lucifer ke aise behavior se daat piste rah gaye

Ek minute tak koe nahi bola
Ashmita- nahi bolenge ye kuch bhi
Hum yaha apna time waste kar rahe hai

Lucifer- mere me patience nahi hai bilkul bhi aur fir bhi main bahut pyaar se baat kar raha hu
Mujhe majbur na karo
Kamna- tum vohi karoge jiske liye tum yaha aaye ho, jiski vajah se tum meri betiyo ke pass aaye ho
Esse koe rok nahi sakta

Lucifer- aisa lag raha hai jaise bahut ache se janti ho aap mujhe?
Kamna- jaan gaye hu

Tara- aap apna reason bataoge ya fir hum chale jaye vapas?
Vaise bhi business me bahut loss ho chuka hai
Ashmita- sahi kah rahi ho aap didi
Chalo chalte hai

Lucifer- chalo
Lucifer ne bhi tara ki baat ka samarthan kiya jo baki sab ke liye thoda surprising tha

Anisha- dinner karke chale jana please
Ashmita- tumne kuch der pehle hi kaha tha ki hum tumhri kuch nahi lagte?
To hum bhi anjaan ghar khana nahi khate

Anisha aage kuch nahi boli aur na hi baki koe aur sab uth kar vaha se chale gaye
Kamna jaisi bathi thi vaisi hi bathi rah gaye vahi anisha unko ghadi tak chhodne aaye

Anisha- lucifer
Jab sab ghadi me bath gaye tab anisha ne lucifer ko pukara
Lucifer- hmm bolo

Anisha- dhayan rakhna unka
Lucifer- etni fikar ho rahi hai unki tumhe?

Anisha- maine aapse vada kiya tha na ki main aapki sachae janane me aapki madad karungi?
Lucifer- to ye sab mere liye ho raha hai?

Anisha- main unhe vapas leke aaungi sehar i promise
Bas tab tak aap thoda patience rakho
Hum dono mil kar sab pata kar lenge
Lucifer- hayyyeeee
Abhi tumhe yahi ghadi par ulta karke na ch....

Anisha- bas bas ab jao
Aur ha apna bhi khayal rakhna
Lucifer- kab tak aaogi?

Anisha- bahut jaldi
Aur anisha lucifer ko ek bahut chhota sa kiss karti hai fir apni behano ko dekhti hai aur vaha se mud jati hai

Lucifer bhi ghadi me bath kar nikal jata hai

Ashmita- faltu me time waste ho gaya humara
Kaha ye socha tha tu hume ghumane leke ja raha hai
Meri hi galti hai tujhse ghumna jo expect kar liya maine
Lucifer- are meri pyaari dost
Aaj tujhe aisi jagah ghumaunga ki tu bhi yaad rakhegi

Ashmita- mujhe nahi jana tera jharna dekhne
Lucifer- mera jharna bahut acha pani bahata hai tara se puch sakti ho...ahhh... marti rahi hai humesha mujhe

Ashmita- tu muh hi band rakha kar fir
Lucifer- tera mood acha kar dunga aaj main
Fir tu bas mera lucifer, pyaara lucifer, haye lucifer, dheere lucifer, ohh lucifer,ahh lucifer bas yehi karti rahoge

Ashmita- fir maar khaega?
Lucifer- maar le tujhe hi to marna hai

Tara- tum dono ladte kyu rahte ho?
Lucifer- vo kya hai na baki sab ke sath main bed par lad leta hu ye bed par ladne nahi deti to yaha sahi

Ashmita- yaha kyu rok raha hai?
Mujhe nahi dekhna tera aur koe surprise
Lucifer- lekin main to dikhaunga

Aur jabardasti ashmita ko jungle wali side leke jane lagta hai

Lucifer- vaise yaha threesome karne me to maja hi aa jayega
Kya bolti ho tara?
Tara bechari ashmita ke samne kuch bol nahi pa rahi thi aur es baat ka lucifer pura fayda utha raha tha

Ashmita- mujhe ghar jana hai
Lucifer- doli me batha ke le chalunga tujhe ghar
Kyu tension leti rahti hai?
Aaj pehli baar lucifer ki kisi baat par ashmita blush ki chahe bahut halka sa blush tha lekin aaj ashmita blush ki to

Ya fir aisa ho sakta hai ki thand ki vajah se uske gaal laal ho gaye ho lekin mujhe to kuch aur hi lag raha hai

Lucifer- and here is your surprise
Lucifer ne ashmita ko left side turn karaya to vaha white roses ki kheti hoti thi

Etne sare white roses the ki ashmita ki to aankhen faati ki faati rah gaye
Usse bachpan se hi agar kisi flower se pyaar tha to vo the white roses
Kyu?
Ye to usse bhi nahi pata tha lekin white roses uski kamjori thi

Aur yehi abhi hua jo ashmita thode der pehle aag babula ho rakhi thi samne ka najara dekh kar ek bahut pyaari muskaan aa gaye uske chehre par

Aur ek chhoti bachi ki taraf haste muskurate un field ki taraf dood laga di

Vahi lucifer aur tara ashmita ko yu khush dekh kar khush hone lage....
Ye Kamna ne saara flashback apne ander hi kyon chalaya jabki shraap ke anusaar to Lucii dono bahno ko apne hi sath le aaya tha ya fir ye dono bahne iss sach ko maan nahi rahi hai?

Waise Lucii mein aat achchi hai ki jisko bed par le jaana hota hai to usne deri nahi karta aur jiske saath ye sab nahi karta jaise Madhuri aur Ashmita. Aaj ke chutiyaape mein usne Ashmita ko blush bhi karwa diya aur khush bhi. Ek dum mast update
 

sorbobhuk

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Mitika- kya soch rahe ho?
Lucifer- soch raha hu ki ye sab mere sath hi kyu ho raha hai?
Aur aage chal kar aur kya kya hoga?

Mitika- kuch nahi hoga
Jada mat socho
Lucifer- tumhe to sab pata hai fir bhi bol rahi ho mat socho?

Mitika- lucifer pyaar sabse bada hathiyaar hai
Hum pyaar se kuch bhi jeet sakte hai
Lucifer- tumne bola tha meri yaaddast jayegi?

Mitika- hmm
Lucifer- vapas milegi mujhe?

Mitika- pata nahi
Lucifer- pata nahi matlab?

Mitika- maine pehle hi galti kar di tumhe sab bata kar
Lucifer- kya matlab?

Mitika- kisi ka future usko pata nahi lagna chahiye paap lagta hai
Mujhe bhi apna muh band rakhna chahiye tha
Lucifer- mujhe kya paap lagega?
Main khud hi paap hu

Mitika- aise nahi bolte pagal
Lucifer- to batao vapas milegi ya nahi?

Mitika- sab kuch tumhre ander hi to hai?
Dund lo ya dund lena
Lucifer- matlab mil jayegi?

Mitika- samjh jao ab lucifer
Lucifer- tum kaha hogi tab?

Mitika- main yahi rahungi aur kaha jaungi?
Lucifer- tum kabse juth bolne lag gaye mujhse?

Mitika- chalo na sex karte hai
Lucifer- piche se ya aage se?

Mitika- jaha se aapka man kare kar lena par chalo to
Lucifer- aaj esko etni chhodi kar dunga ki poti karne ke liye thoda bhi jor nahi lagana padega

Mitika- piche se to sochna bhi mat
Lucifer- abhi to tumne bola

Mitika- main position ki baat kar rahi thi piche wali position se na ki piche wale hole me
Lucifer- ek baar try to kar

Mitika- nahi karna mujhe try
Lucifer- chal theek hai jaisi teri marji piche ko to ho ja aaj piche wali position me karenge****

Roshini- ye mera kaam hai aur mujhe mera kaam rokne wale tum kon hote ho?
Lucifer- ye tumhra kaam hai maan liya lekin ye mera hell hai samjhi?
Mera hell
Yaha ka sab kuch main hi hu

Roshini- agar tumhe mere kaam karne se problem hai to supreme ko bata do
Main chali jaungi yaha se
Lucifer- kisi ko batane ki jarurat nahi hai
Main khud tumhe nikal sakta hu yaha se
Aur tumhre kaam karne se mujhe problem nahi hai lekin jo bina soche samjhe kaam karti ho us se problem hai

Roshini- kya bina soche samjhe kar diya maine?
Lucifer- jo souls ko tum khula chhod rahi ho vo bahar ja kar kisi ko bhi nuksaan pahucha sakti hai

Roshini- kisi ko nuksaan pahuchaya kya?
Nahi na?
To?
Lucifer- main intezaar nahi kar sakta ki vo kisi ko nuksaan pahuchaye aur main tab tak ka intezaar karu

Roshini- main ye dekh rahi thi ki unhe kuch sudhar aaya ya nahi
Lucifer- main hell lord hu mujhe sab pata hai
Tumne unko esliye khula chhoda taki vo bahar jakar apna rang dikha sake aur tum unhe maar kar apna dil bahla sako

Roshini- hell lord ho dark lord nahi
Lucifer- vo jo dark lord hai na vo kisi bill me chhupa batha hai
Jis din samne aaya us din pata chal jayega tumhe bhi ki kon hu main

Roshini- aur tumhe bhi pata chal jayega kon hai vo
Lucifer- mujhe pata hai kon hai vo
Esliye apna dimag vaha na lagao
Agar dobara aisi harkat kari to supreme tak pahuchne ki halaat nahi chhodunga

Roshini- aur main chhupa chhap khadi sab dekhti rahungi?
Galatfami hai tumhri
Agar bina lade hari to kya fayda mere vajud ka?
Lucifer- aur agar ladi to vo karunga tumhre sath ki aage se kabhi koe lucifer ko ungli karne ki sochega bhi nahi

Roshini- essi attitude ki vajah se aaj yaha ho tum
Lucifer- main to fir bhi bhagwan hu
Tum apna dekho
Tumhre me to nahi hai na attitude?
Fir kyu aaye yaha apna sada muh leke?

Roshini- dekhna tha mere se bura bhi koe hai to vo kaisa dikhta hai
Lucifer- tumse buri tumhri ek hi chhij hogi aur I'm dam sure uska shape tumhre chehre jaisi hi hoga

Roshini- bas jab kuch bolne ko na bache to sexual comment pass kar do
Lucifer- aur jab tumhre pass na bache to ussi ka sahara leke jeetne ki kosis kar lena

Roshini- main aise hi kaam karungi
Lucifer- es baar karna fir dekhunga

Roshini- main bhi dekhti hu tumhe
Lucifer- ja sakti ho tum

Roshini- tumhre order se nahi jaungi
Lucifer- mere order se aae ho yaha tum aur mere order se jaogi bhi
Jada udne ki jarurat nahi hai

Roshini- main baat kar lungi supreme se fir batati hu tumhe
Lucifer- jis se marji kar lo baat
Mujhse jubaan ladane ki koe jarurat nahi hai

Roshini- arrogant fuck
Lucifer- thank you***

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Naag- bhai us bande ka koe ata pata nahi hai
Kaha mar gaya vo?
Lucifer- tu kyu apna dimag kharab kar raha hai uske piche?
Arjun ko dundne ko bola tha vo to tere se ho nahi raha faltu me bakchodi kar raha hai

Naag- vo arjun bhi pata nahi konse bill me chhupa batha hai
Mil hi nahi raha
Lucifer- mil jayega agar dhang se dundega to

Naag- aur kitni dhang se dundu usse?
Lucifer- mujhe nahi pata kitni dhang se dundega lekin dund usko

Naag- are bhai etne din ho gaye mansi se bhi theek se nahi mila upar se aap marte rahte ho vo alag
Thoda raham karo mujh par bhai
Lucifer- ja mil le fir aur jitni der milna hai ek baar hi mil le baad me bakchodi mat karna

Naag- jee bhai
To main jau?
Lucifer- likh ke du?

Naag- likh ke de dete to jada acha rahta vo kya hai na aapko yaad to kuch rahta nahi hai fir meri marne lag jaoge ki maine kab kaha tujhe jane ko
Lucifer- nahi marunga
Ja tu

Naag- aap hi to mere apne ho
Etne ache kyu ho bhai aap?
Lucifer- tu do minute aur bakchodi ki to main apna mood badal lunga fir marate rahna apni gand

Naag- are bhai aap to serious ho gaya
Ja raha hu main
Fir naag vaha se jaldi se bhag jata hai pata usse bhi tha ki agar nahi gaya to lucifer ka koe bharosa nahi vo kab kis baat par marne lag jaye

Vahi naag ke jane ke baad lucifer akela hi peeta raha aur khub nasha karke apne flat aa gaya

Jaise hi apne flat ka gate band karne wala hota hai ek dam se madhuri samne aa jati hai

Lucifer nashe me to tha ki aur jaise hi madhuri samne aaye uska balance bigda aur khud ko bachane ke liye usne gate ki jagah madhuri ki chikni kamar pakad li aur vo dono ek dusre ke behad kareeb aa gaye

Madhuri ki to saase hi aatak gaye lucifer ke achanak hamle se aur badi badi aankhon se lucifer ko badi pyaar se dekhne lagi

Lucifer ne bhi madhuri ko thoda aur apne kareeb laya aur gate band kar diya

Ab dono gate se satte khade ek dusre ko dekh rahe the
Lucifer ka hath abhi bhi madhuri ki kamar par hi tha jisse hatane ki madhuri ne koe kosis bhi nahi ki

Lucifer ne agle hi pal apna sar madhuri ke kande par patak diya aur
Lucifer- jaan le logi aise to aap meri
Pata nahi kya hai aapme jo main khud ko rok nahi pata

Madhuri ko jaise hi apne shoulders par lucifer ki saase feel hone lagi uski bhi aankhen apne aap band ho gaye

Bas ek touch se hi dono ek dusre ko pagal bana dete the aur aage badhne ki himmat na to madhuri me thi aur na lucifer me

Bahut der tak dono aise hi khade rahe ek statue ki tarah

Madhuri- lucifer....bahut jada dheere boli etne ki lucifer tak aawaz pahuchne par hi aawaz mar gaye

Madhuri- luciferr... vo pehle se thodi si tej awaz me boli
Lucifer- jee lene do na mujhe thodi der shanti se?

Eske aage madhuri kuch nahi bol paye uske pass lucifer ke es sawal ka koe jawab hi nahi tha

Madhuri ke pair bhi dard karne lag gaye the khade khade aur upar se lucifer ne apna bhi sara vajah madhuri par dala hua tha lekin madhuri fir bhi lucifer ke liye kuch nahi boli
Lucifer ne jitna kiya hai uske liye uske badle me madhuri puri jindagi lucifer ke liye aisi khadi ho sakti thi

Lucifer- aap mujhe sula dogi aaj?
Mujhe nind nahi aati
Madhuri ke dil me ek dard sa utha jab lucifer ne bola ki usse nind nahi aati to

Madhuri- hmm badle me madhuri etna hi bol paye
Lucifer madhuri se thoda alag hua aur room ki taraf chal diya madhuri ne bhi usse follow kiya

Lucifer bed par let gaya aur madhuri uske sar ke pass bath kar uske balo me hath firane lagi

Lucifer- main ulajh gaya hu Ma'am
Mujhe kuch samjh me nahi aa raha
Main sab se duri bana kar rakhna chahta hu, mujhe pata hai ek din main yaha se chala jaunga aur aap sab ke liye dunia bhar ka dard chhod jaunga lekin main khud ko control nahi kar pa raha

Na main kisi se door ja pa raha na main kisi ko apne se door kar pa raha
Pehle to sirf inaaya aur ashmita tha uske baad anisha aa gaye fir tara aa gaye fir payal aa gaye ab pata nahi aur kon aayega

Main bahut kosis kar raha hu khud ko control karne ki lekin main jada din kar nahi paunga
Jada din main nahi has paunga ma'am

Aur jis din mera asli chehra samne aaya main vapas sab kuch kho dunga

Pata nahi kya bure kaam karke aaya tha main jiski vajah se mere sath ye sab ho raha hai

Bhagwan aisa naseeb to kisi ko na de jisko khud ke bare me hi kuch nahi pata ho
Jo khud ko dundne ke liye yaha se vaha bhatakta firta rahe

Ma'am main aaj aap se bata raha hu mujhe lagta hai main yaha bahut bada vinaash karne wala hu etna bada ki dunia ka naksa hi badal jayega

Mujhe kisi apne ke khone ka ahsaas hone lag gaya hai aur mujhe ye bhi ahsaas ho gaya hai ki vo kon hai

Lekin agar aisa hua to ma'am kuch nahi bach payega kuch bhi nahi
Mera gussa mera sabse bada dusman hai
Ye gussa sab kuch nast kar dega ma'am
Sab kuch nast kar dega

Lucifer nashe aur apni bhavnao me bhah kar pata nahi kya kya bole ja raha tha aur madhuri bheegi palako se lucifer ka dard mahsus kar rahi thi

Lekin jaldi hi lucifer ki madhuri ki gaud me nind aa gaye aur vo aaj chain se so paya....
Bahut badhiya update hai Bhai
Jisko khone kadar lucifer ko hai koun hai wo ladki....or mitika or roshni ka kya majra hai bhai
Waiting for next update
 

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AJ always mind blowing update Bhai..
Apke story ka bat hi kuch aur he..
Aur mera fevrouit part he mar dhad .Jo ki apke sare stories me bohot milte he
Dhanyawad Bhai..
 
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Premkumar

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Thank you for understanding bhai

Aane wale bhi ache honge bas sath bane raho

Enjoy sabad hi acha nahi lagta ab to lekin update main kosis karunga ki regular hi rahe fir bhi ek aad din ka delay ho sakta hai
Ese mat boliye bhai..ap ham sabke manoranjan karwate ho itne shandar story likh kar..par khud enjoy sabd se bhag rehe ho..
Dusro ke sat khud bhi life ko enjoy kijiye Bhai..
 
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