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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

Saif119

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Mast update bro waiting for next luci madhu seductive scene
 
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Mana6262

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Majedar update ab lucifer khud ke bare me thoda jan Liya hai lgta hai.....or bakchodi nahi chodega 😁😁😁bicahri maam gaal Lal kar diya sirf bate keh kar.....😄😄😄
 
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Herry

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Next update please
 

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UPDATE-198


Lucifer apni building ki chhat par batha hua tha, aankhen band aur dhayan laga raha tha

Es time lag raha tha ki ha ye hai asli lucifer kyuki uske chehre se tej bah raha tha aur band aankhon me bhi uska sankalp saaf saaf dikhae pad raha tha

"Agar maine apni jindagi me koe bhi acha kaam kiya hai to main us ache kaam ke badle ek rasta maang raha hu...mujhe rasta dikhaye....main lucifer morningstar aka the devil apni jindagi ki sari aachae daav par laga raha hu sirf aur sirf ek raste ke liye"

"Zindagi bhar maine kabhi kisi se kuch nahi manga.... baap se na kabhi pyaar mila aur na maa ka kabhi sath mila...eda se bichda aur guruji ki maar mili.... heaven se bahar feka gaya to hell ki diwar mili...hell se bhaga to past piche bhagte hue samne aakar khada ho gaya....har ek dard ko bina kisi ko blame kare saha maine..... saanvi ko khone se lekar simran ka balidaan sab dekha maine....fir bhi har vo kaam kiya jo meri takdeer me likha hua tha...na kabhi kisi se koe maang ki aur na kisi ne kuch diya"

"Aaj zindagi me pehli baar kuch maang raha hu...ek rasta....khud ko janane ka...sirf aur sirf ek rasta.....main ashmita ke sath vo sab nahi kar sakta jo mujhe pata chala hai...aisa to main soch bhi nahi sakta....eske alava kuch bhi dikha do kara lo... lekin ek rasta dikha do"

"""""" lucifer- mata, main sab bhul kyu jata hu? Mujhe to strong banana hai aur strong bane rahne ki liye sab yaad rakhna padta hai na?
Mata- tum bahut strong ho mere bache

Lucifer- fir mujhe kuch yaad kyu nahi rahta?
Kal guruji ne mujhe subah 4 baje bulaya tha aur mujhe yaad hi nahi raha fir bahut daat padi mujhe
Mata- kyuki tum eda ko dekhne me vayasth the esliye tumhre dhayan hi nahi gaya ki guruji kya bol rahe hai

Lucifer- nahi maata main to sab sun raha tha
Mata- acha?
Ab apni maata se bhi juth bolne lag gaya?

Lucifer- hehehe lucifer kabhi juth nahi bolta maata
Mata- acha to fir kyu yaad nahi tha guruji ki kahi baat tumhe?

Lucifer- kyuki main eda ko dekh raha tha
Maata- yehi to maine bola ki tum eda ko dekh rahe the esliye kuch yaad nahi raha

Lucifer- main eda ko guruji ki baat sunte dekh raha tha
Mata- lekin tumne to nahi suni na koe baat guruji ki?

Lucifer- maine suni thi maata
Unhone mujhse eda, raaj aur kavish se bola tha ki subah jaldi aana hai kal se
Maata- acha ye baat hai

Lucifer- kya baat hai?
Maata- yehi ki eda tumhe chhije bhula deti hai

Lucifer- nahi maate
Eda mujhe khud ko dikhati hai
Maata- vo bhala kaise?

Lucifer- eda me mujhe main dikhata hu maata
Maata- ha lekin kaise?
Tum hi to bolte ho ki eda tumse baat nahi karti aur tum usse dost banana chahte ho?

Lucifer- main bhi to kisi se baat nahi karta maata
Eda bhi chhije bahut aasani se sikh jati hai aur main bhi
Eda ko bhi sab dunia me shaktishal insaano me gina jayega aur mujhe bhi
Eda aur main har chhij me aage piche hi rahte hai
Aur sabse jaruri hum dono ko hi khushiya nahi milegi kabhi

Maata- aisa kyu bol rahe ho?
Tum dono dunia deserve karte ho
Lucifer- besak hum dunia deserve karte ho lekin mujhe pata hai maata hume khushiya dunia paa kar bhi nahi milegi

Maata- waqt sab acha kar deta hai
Lucifer- main waqt hi rok lunga maata

Maata- waqt koe nahi rok sakta beta
Lucifer- lucifer kuch bhi kar sakta hai

Maata- lucifer ko ye to yaad nahi rahta ki subah guruji ne jaldi bulaya hai
Lucifer- ek din mujhe sab yaad rahega maa
Meri puri jindagi meri aankhon ke samne nachegi aur main ek jagah bath kar tamasha dekhunga

Maata- kuch chhije bhul jana hi acha hota hai lucifer
Lucifer- nahi
Main kuch nahi bhulunga
Mujhe sab yaad rakhna padega maata

Maata- chalo main tumhri madad karti hu
Yaad rakhoge na?
Lucifer- humesha maata

Maata- tumhre ander bharmand samata hai lucifer...vo bharmaand puri dunia ka bhaar sambhale hue hai
Esliye jab bhi tum kuch bhulo yaad rakhna vo tumhre ander hi hai
Apni aankhen band karna aur khud se puchna kis raah par jana hai mujhe
Tumse acha tumhe koe nahi bataega

Lucifer - ye kya madad hue maata
Jab mujhe kuch yaad hi nahi raha to fir main kaise dekhunga apne ander?
Maata- eda ke pass jana
Uske ander dekh lena vo to sab janti hai hi aur vaise bhi dunia lucifer aur eda ka naam ek sath yuhi nahi lete
Bahut bada judaav hai tum dono ka

Lucifer- kya kabhi eda mujhse baat karegi maata?
Maata- ye main kaise bata sakti hu?

Lucifer- to main us se kaise puchu?
Maata- tumhe kisi se kuch puchne ki jarurat hai kya?
Etni shaktiya hai tumhre pass uska istemaal karke jaan lena

Lucifer- main eda par shaktiya istemaal nahi karunga
Maata- kyu?

Lucifer- main nahi karna chahta
Maata- bacha agar tumhri shaktiya kisi ko nuksaan nahi pahucha rahi aur fir bhi tumhe uska fayda mil raha hai to us se piche nahi hatna chahiye
Fir chahe samne eda ho ya main ya fir koe aur

Lucifer- mujhe thoda thoda dikhne laga hai logo ke bare me
Maata- aur ache se dikhne lagega

Lucifer- kya main sabko dekh paunga?
Maata- nahi tum unhe nahi dekh paoge jinse tumhe muhobbat hai

Lucifer- acha matlab eda ko nahi dekh sakta main
Maata- eda se muhobaat hai tumhe???

Lucifer- haaa??? Nahiii main to bas bol raha tha
Maata- sab kuch tumhre ander hi hai lucifer
Edhar udhar bhagna chhod kar khud ke ander jhaak kar dekho sare sawalo ke jawab mil jayenge

Lucifer- main kosis karunga
Maata- jitna jada tum sikhoge utna hi aasan hoga tumhre liye ye sab karna

Lucifer- main kal se samay se pehle hi pahuch jaunga maata
Maata- mujhe pata hai tum pahuch jaoge****

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Guruji- apni aankhen band karo aur mere sath ye mantra ka ucharan karo
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Sabhi-****************

Guruji- karte raho aur dhayan hatna nahi chahiye
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Dusro se jada tumhe ye pata hona chahiye ki tum kon ho aur dunia me sabse kathin kaam hi hai khud ko pahchana

Esliye aaj main tumhe tumse milaunga

Guruji- eda lucifer kon hai?

Apna naam sunte hi lucifer ke kaan khade ho gaye lekin usne aankh khol ke dekha nahi

Eda- guruji lucifer supreme ka beta hai
Guruji- mujhe vo sab kuch batao lucifer ke bare me

Eda- lucifer ek highly functioned psychopath hai, a very intelligent and very dangerous one
Lekin uski ek aur side bhi hai ek masoom bache ki
Jisse dunia me sirf aur sirf pyaar chahiye jo usse mil nahi pa raha hai esliye vo jada kisi se baat nahi karta
Dusre us se baat esliye nahi karte kyuki unhe lucifer se dar lagta hai
Bahut log kahte hai ki lucifer se shaktishali dunia me koe nahi hai lekin main sochti hu ki lucifer se soft heated sayad hi koe dusra ho

Eda bolti ja rahi thi aur lucifer ki band aankhen hi harait me failti ja rahi thi
Eda ko uske bare me etna kaise pata?
Unki to kabhi baat bhi nahi hoti thi fir kaise?
Ek ek sabad jo eda ke muh se nikal rahe the vo lucifer ko aur jada chhoka rahe the

Kya eda usse etni ache se janti hai?
Kya lucifer se hi koe galti hue hai eda ko pahchane me?
Ya fir koe aur karan hai?

Jawab ek ka nahi tha uske pass aur sawal hazar

Guruji- ab tum batao eda khud ke bare me
Kon hai eda?

Eda- ed..eda..main....vo...main
Vo kuch bol hi nahi paye... ek sabad theek se nahi bola usne apne bare me

Aur sayad yehi guruji dikhana chahte the ki hum dunia ke bare me to jaan jate hai lekin khud ka kya?
Pehle khud ko to theek se jaan jao, pahchaan jao fir dusro ke bare me sochna

Lekin hum to humesha se ulta hi karte aaye hai

Kon kya kar raha hai, kyu kar raha hai, kaise kar raha hai essi me kho jate hai kabhi khud par to dhayan hi nahi dete

Jaise ye jindagi humari nahi dusro ki hai kyuki khud se jada to hum dusro ke bare me hi sochte rahte hai

Guruji- eda tum lucifer se kabhi baat tak nahi karti fir bhi uske bare me etna sab bata diya lekin khud ke sath to tum janam se rahi ho?
Kya tum khud ke bare me ek sabad nahi bata sakti?
Kon ho tum?

Guruji- yehi dunia ka asli chehra hai hum nahi jante kon hai hum
Aur esliye aaj se aap sabhi ka sabse pehla kaam hoga khud ko dundna
Pata lagao kon ho tum

Aur jab tak tumhe pata nahi lag jata ki kon ho tum tab tak aage ki koe padhae nahi hogi

Ab agar aage ki shiksha leni hai to dundo khud ko*****

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Aur lucifer ki aankhen dheere dheere khulne lagi

Ek dam shant, sithir lucifer aankh khole aasmaan ko dekh raha tha

Jaise usse uske jawab mil chuke hai

Kuch der aur vo vaha batha raha fir shanti se niche aa gaya

Apne room me ghusa tayar hua aur bahar nikal....

"Mammmmuuuu" alia bhagte hue uske pair se lipat gaye

Madhuri sayad unhe bahar leke ja rahi thi ki vo bhi lucifer ko samne hi gate band karte dikh gaye aur uske just piche rahul khada tha
Muskaan bhi lucifer ke pass aa chuki thi

Lucifer ne alia ko gaud me utha liya aur muskaan ka hath pakad kar madhuri ki taraf chalne laga

Lucifer- kaha ja rahe ho mujhe akela chhod kar?
Madhuri- alia jid kar rahi thi bahar ghumne ki to socha thoda ghuma lau

Lucifer- alia to bahut pyaari bachi hai vo jidd kar hi nahi sakti
Alia- main to aapki pyaari bachi hu mamu

Lucifer- vo to tum ho hi
Ja kaha rahe ho?
Madhuri- decide nahi kiya
Jaha ye bolenge vahi le jaungi

Lucifer- kaise ja rahe ho?
Madhuri- scooty se sab ja nahi payenge esliye cab kar li

Lucifer- main chhod deta hu
Madhuri- are nahi
Tum kar lo apna kaam
Hum nikal jayenge

Alia- chalo na mamu
Bahut maja aaega
Muskaan- ha chachu chalo na
Bahut din ho gaye aap milne bhi nahi aate ab to

Lucifer madhuri ki taraf dekhte hue
Bhai kya karu?
Koe bulata hi nahi
Raat ko bhukha aur vo bhi akela sona padhta hai
Ye nahi lucifer ko koe pyaar se sula de
Lekin nahi

Lucifer ki baat bache to koe nahi samjhe lekin madhuri bahut ache se samjh rahi thi aur uska chehra laal padne lag gaya tha

Rahul- chalo na aap bhi
Aaj pehli baar rahul ne khud se lucifer se kuch kaha tha aur pata nahi kyu lucifer usse mana nahi kar paya

Lucifer- badle me mujhe aap sab se(madhuri ko dekhte hue) kisses chahiye
Alia- muhhhahhhhh
Alia ne to bina samay gavaye apne mamu ke gallo ko gila kar diya aur muskaan ne bhi

Ab lucifer muskurate hue madhuri ki taraf dekhne laga jo bilkul laal tamatar jaisi ho chuki thi

Aur lucifer ke aise dekhne se aur jada sarma gaye thi

Madhuri- vo...vo...maa..main cab cancel kar deti hu
Badi muskil se vo etna bol paye aur rahul ka hath pakad kar jaldi se niche ki taraf bhag gaye

Lucifer uski es eda par muskurate hue dono bacho ko leke niche ki taraf chalne laga....
Bahut badhiya update hai Bhai..
Akhir kar samne aahi geya ki ki lucifer ko dhundhne me lucifer ke alwa koi or nhi madad kar sackte... Or lucifer bhi jan geya hai ki kaise ab is daldal se mukti milegi...or mam ko to lal tamatar jaisi bana di...dekhte hai aage kya hota hai or lucifer kaise yaddash ko wapash milta hai
Waiting for next update
 
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Waiting for next update besabri se
 
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Waiting for next update B-)
 
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Update kab ayega Lone survivor sir:what3:
 
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