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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

Lone survivor

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WRITER’s NOTE

School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

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UPDATE-199


Madhuri aur bacho ke sath ghumte ghumte kafi time ho gaya tha aur jab lucifer ne unhe ghar chhoda to almost raat hone wali thi

Ek din aur lucifer ne kharab kar diya lekin usse es din ka dukh nahi tha kyuki madhuri ke chehre par ek bahut pyaari muskaan jo thi pure din

Vo chhori chhupke se lucifer ko bhi khub dekh rahi thi aur jab jab unki najre aapas me takrati madhuri sarm se apni najre fer leti

Lucifer ko to bahut maja aa raha tha madhuri ko yu satane me aur sach bola jaye to madhuri ko bhi bahut acha lag raha tha

Tabhi to laal gulabi ho rakhi thi

Jab unko ghar drop karke lucifer vapas nikalne laga to madhuri ne us se khana kha kar jane ki request ki lekin lucifer ne mana kar diya kyuki vo janta tha madhuri bahut thak gaye hai aur bache to ab kuch khane wale hai nahi

Madhuri ko baaton me ghuma kar lucifer flat ke bahar aa gaya

Road par khada khada vo ye soch raha tha ki jaye kis aur

Ek taraf ashmita ka ghar tha to dusri taraf inaaya ka
Fir socha chhodo yaar dono ko aur naag ke pass chala jaye atleast nashe karke dimag to chalega

Farmhouse par naag aaj akela nahi tha bahut sare log bathe hue the aur naag unse baat kar raha tha

Lucifer ko dekhte hi sab khade ho gaye

Lucifer- kya chal raha hai yaha?
Naag- tum log ja sakte ho

Sab lucifer ko namaskaar karke vaha se nikal gaye

Lucifer- kya mahfil laga rakhi hai be gandu?
Naag- bhai vohi us ladke ke liye bata raha tha
Dusman ko jada din jinda nahi chhodna chahiye

Lucifer- chal aaja aur daru le aa
Naag- rum le aau bhai?
Thand ho gaye hai bc yaha bhi

Lucifer- bahut garmi hai mere ander
Naag- vo to bhai pata hai
Main apni baat kar raha tha

Lucifer- tere ander bhi paida karu garmi?
Naag- na bhai main aise hi theek hu

Lucifer- ja fir titar ho le
Naag fatafat ek bottle utha laya aur garden me hi aag jala kar dono bath gaye

Lucifer- ek baat batata hu tujhe
Naag- ha ha batao bhai

Lucifer- agar mere jane ke baad ma'am, ashmita, inaaya, tara, anisha, payal enme se kisi ko thoda bhi dukh hua to naag yaad rakhna lucifer naam hai mera aur teri vo halaat karunga main ki aaj tak kisi ne aisa kuch socha bhi nahi hoga

Jane ki baat sunte hi naag ke hath vahi ke vahi ruk gaye aur vo lucifer ko dekhne laga "kya matlab bhai"

Lucifer- unhe kuch nahi hona chahiye
Naag- vo nahi puch raha
Kaha jane ki baat kar rahe ho aap?

Lucifer- jaha se koe vapas nahi aata laut kar
Naag- bhai kyu khubsurat shaam ki gand maar rahe ho?

Lucifer- bas unhe koe dukh mat hone dena naag tu
Naag- kuch nahi hoga unhe bhi aur aapko bhi

Lucifer- chal chal peg bana
Aur lucifer kaali raat me us chand ko dundne laga jo usse sahi rasta dikhaega

Naag se baat karne ke baad vo ek hath me saraab liye bas aasman ko shanti se dekhta raha

Kal raat ke baad uske dimag me bahut kuch chalne laga tha aur ab uska ek hi maksad tha khud ko janane ka

Maa chudane gaye dunia dari ab agar lucifer ko kuch karna hai to lucifer ke bare me janana hai aur kuch nahi

Vo yehi sab soch raha tha aur naag usse khamoshi se khamosh bathe dekh raha tha****

Raaj- eda kaha hai?
Guruji- tumhre jhakam abhi puri tarah se bhare nahi hai
Aaram karo

Raaj- maine pucha edaaaa kahaaa haiii vo jor se chhilaya
Guruji- bhulo mat tum kis se baat kar rahe ho

Raaj- mujhe ab to sab saaf saaf dikh raha hai
Guruji ya to mujhe eda ka pata bata dijiye ya fir tayar ho jaye apna ek aur shishya khone ke liye

Supreme- Raaj sach ka devta aaj kaisi baat kar raha hai?
Guruji kuch bolte us se pehle hi supreme aa gaye vaha par

Supreme- guruji hume thoda waqt de dijiye kuch baat karni hai raaj se

Guruji ne baar vapas raaj ko dekha aur vaha se chale gaye

Raaj- mujhe koe baat nahi karni aapse
Aur agar aapko karni hai to pehle mujhe eda ka pata bataye

Supreme- jhakam bhare nahi tumhre abhi tak?
Raaj- ye mere sawal ka jawab nahi hai

Supreme- eda ko kuch jada hi gussa aa gaya tha sayad
Raaj- aap kitna bhi kosis kar lo lekin main apni baat par tika hua hu

Supreme ne pyaar se raaj ke sar par hath fera aur kuch neeli neeli roshini unke hatho se nikal kar raaj ke sareer me ghusne lagi

Raaj- ....
.....
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Theek hai ab mujhe akela chhod dijiye
Supreme- ye ghav bhar gaye hai ab
Jakar pata lagao kavish kya karne ki kosis kar raha hai

Kavish- jee supreme
*****

Eda- ho gaye sare arrangements??
Mazikeen- ho gaye ma'am

Eda- pehle kaha se suruvaat karna chahogi?
Mazikeen- ek list banae hai maine
Usme dekh sakte hai jo hum dangerous hai ya vo jinhone ek hi galti ki thi jo bahut badi thi

Eda- le aao fir unko hi
Dekhte hai kuch sikh pate hai ya nahi vo
Mazikeen- kuch nahi sikh payenge
Aapse pehle bhi bahut logo ne kosis ki thi aur sab fail hue hai

Eda- main nahi hungi
Tum sabko leke aao
Mazikeen- ek sath?

Eda- dar lag raha hai tumhe?
Mazikeen- agar vo sab ek sath hamla kar denge to musibat ho jayegi
Lucifer bhi nahi hai yaha par unhe sambhalne ke liye

Eda- lucifer nahi hai to kya hua main to hu na
Koe hamla nahi karega
Mazikeen- aur agar kar diya to?

Eda- kar diya to jo chhije hongi
Ya to vo vapas bahar nahi nikal payenge ya fir
Mazikeen- ya fir kya?

Eda- ya vo maare jayenge
Mazikeen- yehi to vo chahte hai
Hell se chhutkara aur mare hue ko vapas kya marenge?

Eda- to fir khabar faila do jinhone bhi kuch ulta sidha kiya unhe lucifer ke pass bejh diya jayega
Fir dekhti hu kaise jayenge vo humare against
Mazikeen- lucifer ke naam se hi vo etna dar jayenge ki bahar aane tak se kapenge

Eda- bahar to unhe aana hi padega
Aur koe option nahi hai unke pass
Aur suno yaha ke khane ki suvidha theek karo
Mazikeen- unhe kuch nahi milta khane ko
Bhukha hi rakha jata hai

Eda- agar unhe badle me kuch milega to vo sayad jada ache se samjhe ki hum kya chahte hai
Mazikeen- khane ka kaise karu?
Hum khud aisa hi khana khate hai

Eda- lucifer kaise karta tha?
Mazikeen- vo bahar ja sakte the
Hum nahi ja sakte

Eda- main ja sakti hu
Mujhe batao kaha se karta tha vo khane ka
Mazikeen- mujhe nahi pata
Vo bas nashe hi karta tha yaha par

Eda- simran kaha rahti thi?
Mazikeen- vaha nahi ja sakte hum

Eda- kyu nahi ja sakte?
Mazikeen- lucifer ne vaha jane ke liye mana kar rakha tha sabko
Hum hell vale to vaise bhi kahi nahi ja sakte lekin lucifer ne logo ko bhi mana kar rakha tha vaha jane se

Eda- kyu?
Mazikeen- mujhe nahi pata

Eda- jagah kaha hai vo?
Mazikeen- vv...vo muj..mujhe nahi pata

Eda- juth mujhse mat bolna dobara
Mazikeen- please vaha mat jaye
Agar lucifer ko pata chal gaya to vo pata nahi kya kar denge

Eda- lekin lucifer hai nahi na yaha par?
Aur lucifer aayega bhi nahi
Mazikeen- simran ke liye lucifer kahi se bhi aa sakta hai
Please aisa mat kariye

Eda- jagah kaha hai?
Mazikeen- aapka pata nahi lekin meri samaat aa jayegi

Eda- lucifer vapas nahi aa raha
Kaha hai vo jagah
Mazikeen- ******

Eda- thank you
Milna tha mujhe ek baar simran se
Main bhi to dekhu aisa kya tha us me jo lucifer shant ho gaya aur usne etna khoon baha daala

Mazikeen simran lucifer ka hi dusra roop thi
Eda- bahut suna hai maine
Aaj dekh hi leti hu simran ko bhi

Mazikeen- mera naam mat lena please lucifer ke samne*****


Kavish- aur kitna intezaar?
Sadiya beet gaye intezaar karte karte
Pata nahi kab aayega vo din

"Aaega bahut jaldi aaega tab tak tum aise hi mera kaam karte raho"
"Agar lucifer ka samna karna hai to us se jada takatvaar banana padega mujhe"

Kavish- aap us se jada takatvar ho
Aur ab jab lucifer ko kuch yaad nahi to aise me hume es chhij ka fayda uthana chahiye na

"Nahi, jab tak usse sab kuch yaad nahi aajata tab tak hum kuch nahi karenge
Mujhe lucifer ko harte dekhna hai na ki ek aise insaan ko jo insaano se hi jhakmi ho jata hai"

Kavish- hume to usse bas marna hai
Kaise bhi mara jaye kya hi fark padta hai?

"Tum nahi samjhoge, jab tak samne wala humari takaar ka nahi hota tab tak usse harane me kya hi maja hai"

Kavish- theek hai main chalta hu
Jaldi vapas aaunga kuch aur angels ke sath

"Tum jitna jaldi kaam karoge main utna jaldi bahar aa paunga aur fir lucifer naam ke us kide ko raste se hatane me bahut maja aaega"

Kavish- aage se jaldi jaldi aane ki kosis karunga.....
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Lone survivor bhai....
Nice and excellent update....
 
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Khud se jyada lucifer ke baare jaanti hai
Aur khud ka kuch nhi
Khud se jyada muhabbat v Lucifer se
Aur khud se nhi
Ye chal di simran se milne
Idhar lucifer man ki maan ke v nhi maan raha hai
Ashmita ab kya hi kahu ise suruat se iske liye aaya lucifer bechara
Ab dekhte hain aage raj aur kavish kya karte hain
 
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UPDATE-199


Madhuri aur bacho ke sath ghumte ghumte kafi time ho gaya tha aur jab lucifer ne unhe ghar chhoda to almost raat hone wali thi

Ek din aur lucifer ne kharab kar diya lekin usse es din ka dukh nahi tha kyuki madhuri ke chehre par ek bahut pyaari muskaan jo thi pure din

Vo chhori chhupke se lucifer ko bhi khub dekh rahi thi aur jab jab unki najre aapas me takrati madhuri sarm se apni najre fer leti

Lucifer ko to bahut maja aa raha tha madhuri ko yu satane me aur sach bola jaye to madhuri ko bhi bahut acha lag raha tha

Tabhi to laal gulabi ho rakhi thi

Jab unko ghar drop karke lucifer vapas nikalne laga to madhuri ne us se khana kha kar jane ki request ki lekin lucifer ne mana kar diya kyuki vo janta tha madhuri bahut thak gaye hai aur bache to ab kuch khane wale hai nahi

Madhuri ko baaton me ghuma kar lucifer flat ke bahar aa gaya

Road par khada khada vo ye soch raha tha ki jaye kis aur

Ek taraf ashmita ka ghar tha to dusri taraf inaaya ka
Fir socha chhodo yaar dono ko aur naag ke pass chala jaye atleast nashe karke dimag to chalega

Farmhouse par naag aaj akela nahi tha bahut sare log bathe hue the aur naag unse baat kar raha tha

Lucifer ko dekhte hi sab khade ho gaye

Lucifer- kya chal raha hai yaha?
Naag- tum log ja sakte ho

Sab lucifer ko namaskaar karke vaha se nikal gaye

Lucifer- kya mahfil laga rakhi hai be gandu?
Naag- bhai vohi us ladke ke liye bata raha tha
Dusman ko jada din jinda nahi chhodna chahiye

Lucifer- chal aaja aur daru le aa
Naag- rum le aau bhai?
Thand ho gaye hai bc yaha bhi

Lucifer- bahut garmi hai mere ander
Naag- vo to bhai pata hai
Main apni baat kar raha tha

Lucifer- tere ander bhi paida karu garmi?
Naag- na bhai main aise hi theek hu

Lucifer- ja fir titar ho le
Naag fatafat ek bottle utha laya aur garden me hi aag jala kar dono bath gaye

Lucifer- ek baat batata hu tujhe
Naag- ha ha batao bhai

Lucifer- agar mere jane ke baad ma'am, ashmita, inaaya, tara, anisha, payal enme se kisi ko thoda bhi dukh hua to naag yaad rakhna lucifer naam hai mera aur teri vo halaat karunga main ki aaj tak kisi ne aisa kuch socha bhi nahi hoga

Jane ki baat sunte hi naag ke hath vahi ke vahi ruk gaye aur vo lucifer ko dekhne laga "kya matlab bhai"

Lucifer- unhe kuch nahi hona chahiye
Naag- vo nahi puch raha
Kaha jane ki baat kar rahe ho aap?

Lucifer- jaha se koe vapas nahi aata laut kar
Naag- bhai kyu khubsurat shaam ki gand maar rahe ho?

Lucifer- bas unhe koe dukh mat hone dena naag tu
Naag- kuch nahi hoga unhe bhi aur aapko bhi

Lucifer- chal chal peg bana
Aur lucifer kaali raat me us chand ko dundne laga jo usse sahi rasta dikhaega

Naag se baat karne ke baad vo ek hath me saraab liye bas aasman ko shanti se dekhta raha

Kal raat ke baad uske dimag me bahut kuch chalne laga tha aur ab uska ek hi maksad tha khud ko janane ka

Maa chudane gaye dunia dari ab agar lucifer ko kuch karna hai to lucifer ke bare me janana hai aur kuch nahi

Vo yehi sab soch raha tha aur naag usse khamoshi se khamosh bathe dekh raha tha****

Raaj- eda kaha hai?
Guruji- tumhre jhakam abhi puri tarah se bhare nahi hai
Aaram karo

Raaj- maine pucha edaaaa kahaaa haiii vo jor se chhilaya
Guruji- bhulo mat tum kis se baat kar rahe ho

Raaj- mujhe ab to sab saaf saaf dikh raha hai
Guruji ya to mujhe eda ka pata bata dijiye ya fir tayar ho jaye apna ek aur shishya khone ke liye

Supreme- Raaj sach ka devta aaj kaisi baat kar raha hai?
Guruji kuch bolte us se pehle hi supreme aa gaye vaha par

Supreme- guruji hume thoda waqt de dijiye kuch baat karni hai raaj se

Guruji ne baar vapas raaj ko dekha aur vaha se chale gaye

Raaj- mujhe koe baat nahi karni aapse
Aur agar aapko karni hai to pehle mujhe eda ka pata bataye

Supreme- jhakam bhare nahi tumhre abhi tak?
Raaj- ye mere sawal ka jawab nahi hai

Supreme- eda ko kuch jada hi gussa aa gaya tha sayad
Raaj- aap kitna bhi kosis kar lo lekin main apni baat par tika hua hu

Supreme ne pyaar se raaj ke sar par hath fera aur kuch neeli neeli roshini unke hatho se nikal kar raaj ke sareer me ghusne lagi

Raaj- ....
.....
.....
Theek hai ab mujhe akela chhod dijiye
Supreme- ye ghav bhar gaye hai ab
Jakar pata lagao kavish kya karne ki kosis kar raha hai

Kavish- jee supreme
*****

Eda- ho gaye sare arrangements??
Mazikeen- ho gaye ma'am

Eda- pehle kaha se suruvaat karna chahogi?
Mazikeen- ek list banae hai maine
Usme dekh sakte hai jo hum dangerous hai ya vo jinhone ek hi galti ki thi jo bahut badi thi

Eda- le aao fir unko hi
Dekhte hai kuch sikh pate hai ya nahi vo
Mazikeen- kuch nahi sikh payenge
Aapse pehle bhi bahut logo ne kosis ki thi aur sab fail hue hai

Eda- main nahi hungi
Tum sabko leke aao
Mazikeen- ek sath?

Eda- dar lag raha hai tumhe?
Mazikeen- agar vo sab ek sath hamla kar denge to musibat ho jayegi
Lucifer bhi nahi hai yaha par unhe sambhalne ke liye

Eda- lucifer nahi hai to kya hua main to hu na
Koe hamla nahi karega
Mazikeen- aur agar kar diya to?

Eda- kar diya to jo chhije hongi
Ya to vo vapas bahar nahi nikal payenge ya fir
Mazikeen- ya fir kya?

Eda- ya vo maare jayenge
Mazikeen- yehi to vo chahte hai
Hell se chhutkara aur mare hue ko vapas kya marenge?

Eda- to fir khabar faila do jinhone bhi kuch ulta sidha kiya unhe lucifer ke pass bejh diya jayega
Fir dekhti hu kaise jayenge vo humare against
Mazikeen- lucifer ke naam se hi vo etna dar jayenge ki bahar aane tak se kapenge

Eda- bahar to unhe aana hi padega
Aur koe option nahi hai unke pass
Aur suno yaha ke khane ki suvidha theek karo
Mazikeen- unhe kuch nahi milta khane ko
Bhukha hi rakha jata hai

Eda- agar unhe badle me kuch milega to vo sayad jada ache se samjhe ki hum kya chahte hai
Mazikeen- khane ka kaise karu?
Hum khud aisa hi khana khate hai

Eda- lucifer kaise karta tha?
Mazikeen- vo bahar ja sakte the
Hum nahi ja sakte

Eda- main ja sakti hu
Mujhe batao kaha se karta tha vo khane ka
Mazikeen- mujhe nahi pata
Vo bas nashe hi karta tha yaha par

Eda- simran kaha rahti thi?
Mazikeen- vaha nahi ja sakte hum

Eda- kyu nahi ja sakte?
Mazikeen- lucifer ne vaha jane ke liye mana kar rakha tha sabko
Hum hell vale to vaise bhi kahi nahi ja sakte lekin lucifer ne logo ko bhi mana kar rakha tha vaha jane se

Eda- kyu?
Mazikeen- mujhe nahi pata

Eda- jagah kaha hai vo?
Mazikeen- vv...vo muj..mujhe nahi pata

Eda- juth mujhse mat bolna dobara
Mazikeen- please vaha mat jaye
Agar lucifer ko pata chal gaya to vo pata nahi kya kar denge

Eda- lekin lucifer hai nahi na yaha par?
Aur lucifer aayega bhi nahi
Mazikeen- simran ke liye lucifer kahi se bhi aa sakta hai
Please aisa mat kariye

Eda- jagah kaha hai?
Mazikeen- aapka pata nahi lekin meri samaat aa jayegi

Eda- lucifer vapas nahi aa raha
Kaha hai vo jagah
Mazikeen- ******

Eda- thank you
Milna tha mujhe ek baar simran se
Main bhi to dekhu aisa kya tha us me jo lucifer shant ho gaya aur usne etna khoon baha daala

Mazikeen simran lucifer ka hi dusra roop thi
Eda- bahut suna hai maine
Aaj dekh hi leti hu simran ko bhi

Mazikeen- mera naam mat lena please lucifer ke samne*****


Kavish- aur kitna intezaar?
Sadiya beet gaye intezaar karte karte
Pata nahi kab aayega vo din

"Aaega bahut jaldi aaega tab tak tum aise hi mera kaam karte raho"
"Agar lucifer ka samna karna hai to us se jada takatvaar banana padega mujhe"

Kavish- aap us se jada takatvar ho
Aur ab jab lucifer ko kuch yaad nahi to aise me hume es chhij ka fayda uthana chahiye na

"Nahi, jab tak usse sab kuch yaad nahi aajata tab tak hum kuch nahi karenge
Mujhe lucifer ko harte dekhna hai na ki ek aise insaan ko jo insaano se hi jhakmi ho jata hai"

Kavish- hume to usse bas marna hai
Kaise bhi mara jaye kya hi fark padta hai?

"Tum nahi samjhoge, jab tak samne wala humari takaar ka nahi hota tab tak usse harane me kya hi maja hai"

Kavish- theek hai main chalta hu

Jaldi vapas aaunga kuch aur angels ke sath

"Tum jitna jaldi kaam karoge main utna jaldi bahar aa paunga aur fir lucifer naam ke us kide ko raste se hatane me bahut maja aaega"

Kavish- aage se jaldi jaldi aane ki kosis karunga.....
Nice update.
Keep posting!
 

Lone survivor

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ye kaun sasur Lucifer ko maarna chahta hai mana ki Lucifer ki yadasht gayi hai lekin uski to salamat hai na ab dekhte hain aage kya hota hai
Aage lucifer pehle us se chudega fir usse chhodega
waise movie me koi loi karke thi aur uski yani Lucifer ki beti aati hai bhavishya se aisa kuch tha lekin ye story thoda alag hai usse fir bhi Lucifer to hai wahi usko kaun hara sakta hai
Uski beti aaye thi future me se series me lekin yaha to koe future hi nahi hai to kisi ka future se aana not possible
 

Lone survivor

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Bahut hi acha Update tha Lone survivor bhai maja aa gaya hai
Thank you so much bhai
. Lagata h ab bhut jldi hi Lucifer ki yaddasht wapas aane wali hai. Aur aisa hua to dekhne wali baat hogi ki aakhir fir kya hoga ?
Fir hoga tandaav
Kya Lucifer Simran ke karan eda ke samne aayega ya nhi ?
Sayad nahi
Aur lagta hai ab sayad next no. Maduri mam ka hi lagega.
Madhuri ka number nahi lagega
 
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