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Fantasy Lucifer- The fallen angel(completed)

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School times se likhne ka bahut shauk tha mujhe mostly poems hi likhta tha. School me hi ek ladki mili bahut pyaari thi. College ke 3rd year tak relationship chala fir vo chali gaye door. Uske baad kabhi socha nahi tha dobara kuch likunga. Bilkul man hi nahi karta tha. Nashe to jaise jindagi ban gaye the. Pehle bhi nashe karta tha lekin uske baad jada ho gaye. Akela rahna acha lagne lagega aur dheere dheere sab door hote chale gaye. Main akela hi bacha tha. Tab kahi se xf ka pata chala aur pata nahi kyu aise hi ek raat pehli story ka first update post kar diya. Ek medium mil gaya tha mujhe kuch share karne ka aur acha bhi lagne laga tha. Dheere dheere vapas likhna start kiya aur es baar stories. Xf par kuch stories likhi fir vo band hua to yaha aa gaya. Aur vohi silsila yaha bhi kamyaab raha. Aap sabko sayad idea nahi hoga ki jo thoda bahut interact hota hai humara yaha vo kitna important ho sakta hai kisi ki life me. Es waqt mere pass almost sab kuch hai lekin agar kisi ko kuch share karna chahu to aisa person nahi hai esliye beech beech me kuch updates me apni situation likh deta hu to acha lagta hai. I hope ki humara sath aise hi aage bana rahe.

Ek mew story ka dimag me kuch idea hai lekin kab start hogi eske liye abhi sure nahi hu

May be main kuch dino ke liye rehab chala jau ya fir kuch aur mil jaye sath chalne ke. Lets see

In the end i want to thank each and everyone of you guys who has supported me and gave me so much love. Means a lot

Thank you so much guys. Jaldi hi milte hai ek new story ke sath tab tak ke liye 👋
 

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Ma'am- tum aaj firse etne dino baad me aaye ho?
Maine bola tha na har roj aana hai tumhe?
Lucifer- ma'am bas kaam jada ho raha hai

Ma'am- kaam jada ho raha hai ya tum mujh se bachne ki kosis kar rahe ho?
Sayad pyaar se bachne ki kosis kar rahe ho?
Lucifer- Ma'am aap humesha yehi chhij leke bath jati ho
Mujhe pasand nahi ye

Ma'am- acha theek hai ye nahi karte
Batao ab kaisa feel hota hai tumhe yaha?
Lucifer- jada kuch nahi badla hai
Ab kuch log jante hai to thoda waqt aasani se nikal jata hai

Ma'am- kya tumhe ab yaha acha nahi lagta?
Lucifer- aisa lagta hai jaise kisi praye ke ghar me hu

Ma'am- lekin ab to tumhe yaha bahut din rahna padega na
To kyu na esse apna ghar samjhne ki kosis ki jaye?
Lucifer- Ma'am ye mera ghar nahi hai
Main sach batao main jungle me yaha se theek tha

Ma'am- tumhe yaha ab log jante hai tumhri care karte hai fir bhi tum aisa kyu soch rahe ho?
Lucifer- Ma'am yaha par liabilities hai
Jo mujhe nahi chahiye

Ma'am- tum apni jimmedariyo se bhagna chahte ho?
Lucifer- aapko jo bolna hai aap bol sakti hai but yehi sachae hai

Ma'am- agar tumhe bhagna hi tha to tum aaye kyu?
Mana kar dete?
Lucifer- sab kuch etna aasan nahi hota
Acha aap batao aapke sath etna sab ho raha hai fir aap kaise muskura leti ho?
Aap kaise apni problems bhul kar meri help kar rahi ho aur main to ek tarah se stranger hi hu aapke liye?

Ma'am- tumhe mere bare me kaise pata?
Mujhe to koe problem nahi hai
Lucifer- ab aap juth bol rahe ho Ma'am

Ma'am- tumhe kisne bataya?
Alia ne?
Lucifer- esse kya koe fark padega?
Aap ek chhoti si jindagi me etna sab jhel kar bhi khush kaise rah sakti ho?

Ma'am- musibaat sabki jindagi me aati hai aur eska matlab ye nahi hota ki hum usse bhag jaye, Agar hum ek se bhag bhi gaye to das aur humare samne aaenge
Hum kitno se bhagenge?
Problems hai meri life me lekin mere pass Alia hai
Main uske liye to jee sakti hu na?
Kya tumhre pass koe nahi hai jiske liye tum jee sako?
Lucifer- saanvi
Ek baar fir lucifer ke muh se vo naam nikla jiske bare me vo bilkul nahi janta tha

Ma'am- kon hai saanvi?
Lucifer- mujhe nahi pata

Ma'am- tumne hi to naam liya hai
Lucifer- ha bas aise hi nikal jata hai
Main janta bhi nahi aise kisi ko

Ma'am- eska matlab to yehi hai ki tumhre pass khush rahne ki, jeene ki ek vajah hai bas tumhe usse dundna hai
Lucifer- dundte dundte to pata nahi kitne saal hogaye

Ma'am- thoda aur saal laga lo
Kya pata tum kinare tak aa hi gaye ho?
Lucifer- kya pata mere piche piche ek bahut tej lahar bhi aa rahi ho?

Ma'am- vo to aaegi hi
Ye confirm hai leke us lahar ko kaise harana hai ye hume sochna hai ye nahi ki vo aaegi ya nahi
Lucifer- ma'am aapne ye course liya tha ya fir aap paida hi aise hue the?

Ma'am- haha halaat sab sikha dete hai lucifer
Lucifer- I can change your halaat

Ma'am- I will do it myself
Lucifer- dekh lo Ma'am mujhe bas ek phone call karna hai aur aapki life normal ho jayegi

Ma'am- thank you lucifer lekin pehle mujhe khud se kosis karne do agar main safal nahi hue to for sure I will tell you
Lucifer- as you wish Ma'am
Ab mujhe kisi se milne jana hai jo ladki ka rejection sahan nahi kar pa raha hai

Ma'am- pyaar karta hoga sayad
Ma'am ne muskura kar lucifer ko jawab diya badle me lucifer bina kuch bole bas muskurata hua vaha se chala gaya kyuki usse pata tha ki Ma'am bolna kya chah rahi hai

Lucifer vaha se naag ke adde pe chala gaya kyuki apne londe ko bhi to sambhalana tha
Vo mar gaya to bc lucifer kaise sab dekhege?
Ab to jab marji tab bol deta tha naag ye kar, naag vo kar, naag gand de, etc etc etc
Esliye naag ko bachana bahut jaruri tha

Vaha pahucha to naag akele saraab pee raha tha aur usse dekh ke lag raha tha ki gand mar chuki hai apne londe ki

Lucifer- tu yaha aaya hai matlab achi news hogi
Hai na?
Nahi to pata hai main kya karunga tere sath?
Naag- usne bola ki usse time chahiye thoda sochne ke liye

Lucifer- fir to achi hi news hai
Time chahiye matlab ha hai
Naag- jaruri to nahi

Lucifer- sale thoda to acha soch liya kar
Ha hi karegi tension mat le
Aur ab bahut time waste kar diya hai tune ab kaam kara jaye?
Naag- kya kaam?

Lucifer- ye ladke ke information chahiye
Jo photo ashmita ke cabin se li thi aur anisha ko de thi vohi lucifer ne naag ko dikhae
Naag- kon hai ye?

Lucifer- yehi to pata karna hai
Naag- theek hai

Lucifer-aur main agar kuch dino ke liye gayab ho jau to ma'am aur ashmita ka dhayan rakhna
Naag- kaha ja rahe ho aap?

Lucifer- main to kahi nahi jana jata lekin kismat kahi leke jayegi ye to sure hu
Naag- ashmita ke pass to guards hai na?

Lucifer- us se kaam nahi chalega
Tujhe extra security deni hogi unko aur vo bhi bina bataye
Naag- ho jayega

Lucifer- aur vo Malik par dhayan rakhna
Bahut time se koe kand nahi kiya usne
Naag- hum par najar rakh raha hoga

Lucifer- jo bhi kar raha ho lekin dhayan rakhna
Naag- theek hai bhai

Lucifer- ek aur kaam
Pata kar rathore kaha gayab hogya
Naag- vo kaha gaya?
Yahi to hoga

Lucifer- yaha nahi hai
Kahi bejh diya inaaya ne usse mujh se bachane ke chakar me
Tu pata kar kaha hai
Naag- bahut jada kaam hogya ye to bhai ek dil toote aashiq ke liye

Lucifer- tera dil nahi tootne dunga main
Esliye uski tension chhod aur kaam par lag ja
Uske baad lucifer vaha se vapas apne flat aagya aur chhilam fuk ke so gaya

Mid night sapna

" ek bahut sundar garden tha jaha bahut sundar sundar phool lage hue the, vaha har tarah ke flowers dikhne ko mil jate aur etne achi khusbhu aa rahi thi vaha se ki koe bhi sambhodit ho jaye us khusbhu se
En sab ke bich ek husan ki pari un ped podho ko pani de rahi thi aur un par khaad bhi chidak rahi thi
Vahi door khada lucifer ye sab ek halki muskaan liye dekh raha tha, vo confuse tha ki us pari ko dekhe ya fir un khubsurat fulo ko ya fir uski hasi ko
Enhi ulhano me kabhi to ladki dekhta to kabhi sunder sunder ful
Lekin uske chehre ki muskaan jo ki to thi vo abhi tak nahi badli thi
Ladki- vaha kyu khade khade muskura rahe ho? Yaha meri madad hi Kara do
Usne bina lucifer ki taraf dekhe hi bola
Lucifer- main to abhi aaya hu
Uski taraf chalte hue bola

Ladki- fir yaha etne der se kon khada tha? Sayad tumhra bhoot hoga
Lucifer- main hi mera bhoot hu
Aur uske sath uski madad karane laga

Ladki- log kahte hai lucifer hasta nahi hai
Lucifer- sayad usse aaj se pehle hasne ki vajah nahi mili hogi

Ladki- I'm sure ki ab uski muskaan pure jag me fal jayegi
Lucifer- agar vajah ne sath diya to bilkul aisa ho sakta hai

Ladki- kya vajah hai vo?
Lucifer- vo to main nahi bata sakta

Ladki- mujhe ye batao
The great lucifer yaha kya kar raha hai?
Lucifer- the great??

Ladki- sayad tumne apne bare me stories suni nahi
Lucifer- achi stories thi kya?

Ladki- sayad
Lucifer- tum suna do

Ladki- main to ek chhoti si flowerist hu
Main kya batau
Lucifer- tumne jo suna vo acha tha ya nahi?

Ladki- sach bolu ya acha bolu?
Lucifer- acha hi bol do

Ladki- vo to sochna padega
Lucifer- kyu kuch acha suna nahi?

Ladki- ratio bahut kam hai na ache ka to yaad nahi aa raha
Lucifer- mere sath chalo aaj acha dikha deta hu

Ladki- aur kisi ne dekh liya to?
Lucifer- to kya?

Ladki- tumhra to pata nahi lekin meri izzat ud jayegi
Lucifer- mere bare me koe bolega aisa mujhe lagta nahi hai

Ladki- vohi to main bol rahi hu
Tumhre bare me nahi mere bare me
Lucifer- ab tum achi chhije dekhna hi nahi chahti to fir esme mera kya kasur?

Ladki- pass ke ek gaon me koe raksas ghus aaya hai
Jo raat ko bahut aatanak failata hai
Lucifer- apne bhagwan ko bolo
Sayad madad kar de

Ladki- agar achae dikhani hai to vaha jake dikhao aur fir mujhe jaha le jana chahte ho main vaha chal lungi
Lucifer- bas etni si baat
Ek ghante me uske sareer mil jayega tumhe

Ladki- bina violence ke
Lucifer- kya?

Ladki- koe marna nahi chahiye
Ek boond bhi khoon nahi chahiye
Agar aise kar sakte ho to bolo
Lucifer- tum to sach me mujhe nahi janti

Ladki- yehi condition hai meri
Tumhre power ke bare me to sab jante hai main tumhra dil dekhna chahti hu
Lucifer- abhi sina faad ke dikha du?

Ladki- bina dikhave ke dikhao
Lucifer- main jata hu aur uske hath pair pakad ke usse request karke usse vaha se bhagata hu?
Theek hai?

Ladki- hum dunia ko khoon se nahi badal sakte
Agar badal sakte hai to tabhi jab hum kisi ke dil ko badal sake
Lucifer- kuch samjh nahi aaya

Ladki- aaj raat ka time hai tumhre pass
Aur vo ladki fulo se bhari tokri utha ke vaha se chali gaye aur yaha apna lucifer nind se jaag g bahut badia
 

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Lucifer ashmita ke bed par pada hua use irritate kar raha tha ki

“Nearby threat” ki ek notification uske dimag me baji

Jo lucifer etne der se sirf aur sirf bakchodiya kar raha tha uska chehre jhatke ke sath dead serious ho gaya aur ye baat ashmita se bhi chhupi nahi thi

Vo lucifer ko chhup karane ke liye uski taraf hi dekh rahi thi aur jab use dekha ki lucifer ke chehre ka haav bhaav ek dam se change ho gaya hai to vo turant lucifer ke pass pahuch gaye

Ashmita- lucifer? Kya ho gaya? Sab theek hai? Chehra kyu murjha gaya tera?
Bina lucifer ko bolne ka time diye usne ek ke baad ek sawal lucifer par taan diye

Lucifer- bolne degi to kuch bol paunga na?

Ashmita- ha to bol maine kab roka hai? Jab dekho sadu bana batha rahta hai
Nakhre ke sath ashu boli

Ashmita- ab bolta kyu nahi hai? Bolne de to rahi hu?

Lucifer- ajeeb pagal aurat hai ye yaar

Lucifer- main ye soch raha tha ki jab main tujhe ladki se aurat banaunga tab tu sarmayegi kaise? I mean sarmane jaisa kuch to tujhe aata hi nahi hoga na? Fir tu sarmaegi kaise?

Ashmita- shut up aur sach sach bata

Lucifer- esme sach juth kaha se aa gaya? Tu hi bata kaise sarmayegi tu? Aata hai tujhe? Bas ladva lo tujhse ya fir peet lo mujhe. Yehi sab to aata hai tujhe aur aata hi kya hai?

Ashmita- ab tu kuch mat bol mujhe kaam karne de

Lucifer- ha ha tu kar kaam mujhr bahut kaam hai ja raha hu main
Aur lucifer jane ke liye vaha se khada ho gaya

Ashmita- kahi jane ki jarurat nahi hai. Chhup chhap pada rah yaha

Lucifer- fir bolegi mujhe irritate kar raha hai kaam nahi karne de raha hai. Ab jab ja raha hu to tujhe us se bhi problem hai?

Ashmita- bol mat bas kuch bhi

Lucifer- muh band kar de na mera. Tabhi ruk paunga main

Ashmita- main hi karungi tera muh band tension mat le bilkul bhi

Lucifer- ye to mujhe pata hai. Acha mujhe kaam hai main ja raha hu

Ashmita- jake dikha teri tange na tood du main
Aur lucifer ke samne apni kamar par hath rakh kar khadi ho gaye

Lucifer- oye insaan ko kaam nahi hote kya? Jaruri kaam hai abhi aata hu karke

Ashmita- jab tak tu sach nahi batayega tab tak to tujhe bilkul bhi jane nahi dungi main tujhe. Ab sab tere pe depend hai tu kya karta hai

Lucifer- konsa sach? Sab to pata hai tujhe

Ashmita- abhi jo tera muh tatti jaisa hua tha uska reason kya hai ye bata aur agar juth bola to soch lena lucifer tu

Lucifer- mera chehra hi aisa hai esme main kya kar sakta hu? Aur tujh jaisi chudel se juth bol kar kya mil jayega mujhe?

Ashmita- ab dosti tujhse ki hai to angel to banungi nahi chudel ban kar hi jee sakti hu na?

Lucifer- angel banana bhi mat. Baki sab to dekh lenge lekin angel mat banana

Ashmita- topic change mat kar. Kya hua hai ye bata.

Lucifer- aa raha hu raat ko vapas tere sath sone. Fir dunga tere har sawalo ke jawab sath me lungi teri madmast jawani ke majje

Ashmita- faltu ki baatein kara lo bas

Lucifer- ok bye
Aur lucifer light ki raftaar se vaha se gayab hua. Ashmita ko to pata bhi nahi chala ki lucifer kab utha aur kab chala gaya. Vo hairaani bhari aankhen fade bas dekhti rah gaye

Lucifer vaha se nikla aur jaldi se apni senses use karte hue target ki taraf badhne laga

Smell etni strong thi ki lucifer ko uska picha karne me bilkul bhi pareshani nahi ho rahi thi. Sayad samne wala chahta bhi yehi tha ki lucifer uske pass pahuche

Lekin abhi dimag ki jagah dil kaam me le raha tha lucifer aur esliye hi to bina kuch soche samjhe bas chale ja raha tha

Ek baar bhi usne ye nahi socha ki ye ek trap bhi to ho sakta hai? Sayad apne aap har had se jada yakeen tha use aur ye bhi ki koe use trap ke fasa nahi sakta

Sala chahe angel ho devil ya human ego sabki ek jaisi hi hoti hai. Jaisi abhi lucifer ki hai. Maana tum bahut shaktishali ho aur tum kisi se nahi darte lekin lucifer ko apne dusmano ko kamjor nahi samjhna chahiye tha

Vo us disha me aage badh hi raha tha ki door kahi dhadaam dhadaam dhadaam dhadaam ek ke baad ek char bahut bhayanak dhamake hue

Vo dhamake lucifer se to kafi door hue the lekin fir bhi etne powerful the ki lucifer jaha khada tha vaha tak ki jamin kaamp gaye the

Protection shield jo lucifer ne apno ko bachane ke liye banaye thi vo bina lucifer ke bole active ho gaye aur lucifer bhagte hue logo se door ek ghar ke pass chala gaya jaha koe nahi tha aur vaha se ud gaya

Pahucha to samne ka darashay dil dhahla dene wala tha. Laasho ka to jaise antim sanskaar bhi ho gaya tha vahi jo jinda bache the unki halaat dekh kar lucifer jaisa cold hearted ki bhi aankhen bhar aaye thi

Apne dil ko majbut banaya usne aur logo ke sath injured ki madad karne laga. Ambulance ke sath sath fire brigade aur police aur investigation departman ke bade bade adhikari bhi is ghanta ki vajah se vaha pahuchne lag gaye the

Har kisi ko yehi lag raha tha ki ye terrorist attack hai aur pure sehar me red alert ghosit kar diya

Logo ko ghar se bahar nikalne tak ki permission band kar di thi

Ye ek dasak ka sabse ghataak attack tha jisne sakdo ki shankhya me log maare ja chuke the aur vo tadaad badti hi ja rahi th

Abhi vo apne thought process ko pura bhi nahi kar paya tha ki uske kaano me firse dhamako ki aawaz sunae dene lagi jo pichle wale dhamake se bahut adhik tej thi aur ab uske piche se aawaz aa rahi thi

Door use aasman me kaale duo ke badal bante dikhe. Vo dua hi etni jada thi ki aisa lag raha tha jaise pure sehar ne andere ki chadar od li hai

Lucifer beech me khada ka khada rah gaya tha. Na vo apne samne paide logo ki sahayata kar pa raha tha aur na vo dusri jagah ja raha tha

Aise lag raha tha jaise uske pair vahi jameen par chipak kar rah gaye ho. Chehre par to koe bhaav nahi dikh raha tha lekin aankhon me dard ka salaab kabhi bhi bah sakta tha

Vo etna jada apne aap me kho gaya tha ki use abhi tak ye andaja bhi nahi hua tha ki pichle ek ghante se uska mobile continuous baj raha tha. Uski taraf to lucifer ka dhayan hi nahi gaya tha

“Ohh bhai vaha khada khada kya kar raha hai? Yaha madad nahi kar sakta?” Lucifer ke piche se ek aawaz aaye jisne use apni nind se jagaya

Ek ladka jo 20-22 saal ko hoga pura khoon me sana logo ko ambulance me bharne ki kosis kar raha tha. Uske sareer par laga khoon uska nahi tha vo to un sareer se nikal raha tha jinhe vo utha raha tha

Lucifer ne jab usko dekha to turant sare khayalo ko chhod uski taraf badh gaya aur uski madad karne laga

Uske kaano se logo ki chhikhane chhilane ki aawaz gunjana band hi nahi ho rahi thi. Jo use pagal kar rahi thi agar jaldi hi lucifer ko kisi ne sambhala nahi to vo puri taraf out of control ho jayega aur tabhai kya hoti hai vo to uske baad dikhegi

Thodi hi der me amulance ki ghadiya bhar bhar kar vaha se jane lagi aur dusri aane lagi. Jo log es dhamake se bach gaye the vo bhi bina kisi rule regulation ki parvaah kiye insaaniyat ki khateer ek dusro ki madad karne me lage hue the

“Bhaaaiii” ek aur jani pahchani aawaz lucifer ke kaano me pahuchi

Naag- main kabse aapko phone kar raha hu. Ashmita maam aur inaaya maam ke bhi etne phone aa chuke hai. Ek jawab to dena chahiye na ki aap theek ho?
Naag ghabrate hue lucifer se bola. Chinta aur dar uske chehre se saaf dikhaye de raha tha

Lekin lucifer ke muh se kuch nahi nikla. Usne ek najar naag par dali. Use sahi salamat dekh kar uske kando par ek halki si thapki maari aur vapas logo ki madad karne laga

Naag ne bhi lucifer ke mano dasa ache se samjhi aur aage kuch nahi bola. Bas call karke sabko bata diya ki lucifer theek hai aur fir vo bhi madad karne me lag gaya…



Aur ab hum aa chuke hai es story ke last chapter ki taraf. I know pichle kuch time se update time par nahi aa paye and i am not giving any excuses just want to say sorry. From now onwards update regular aayenge and within a week or two hum es story ko khatam kar denge and will start a new journey. Agar aapko lagta hai kuch sawalo ke jawab nahi mile hai to aap abhi comments karke puch sakte ho because in the end kuch na kuch to rah hi jata hai and most of you knows how good i am in writing the climax🤦. Anyways thank you so much for all the love and support. I am always grateful🙏🙏
 
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in the end kuch na kuch to rah hi jata hai and most of you knows how good i am in writing the climax🤦
Bhai apki story to hamesha hi jabardast rahti hai...lekin climax me hi bas mithi kheer m thora namak ka swad de jati hai...es bar bas Lucifer ka khayal rakh lene...pahle Wale to sab normal human the lekin Lucifer to Devil(accha wala) hai...banki aapki ikcha...
 

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Two days later

Ashmita apne car ko kahi gusse me bhagaye ja rahi thi, uske chehre par gussa aur bahut jada tension dikh rahi thi
" es kutte ka main muh tod dungi agar aaj mujhe ye dikh gaya to, humesha eski marji to chalegi nahi jab man aaya kuch bhi kar diya jab man aaya gayab ho jaye, ek baar batana to chahiye na ki kuch kaam hai, kahi ja raha hu, etne time me aajaunga, tension mat lena lekin nahi esko kisi ki fikar ho to bataye na... maine bhi kaise insaan ko apna dost bana liya... sab teri hi galti hai ashmita sab teri hi galti hai...ab bhugat..usse to vaise bhi koe fark nahi padta kisi chhij aur tu pareshan hoye ja"
Ashmita apne man me hi bhadakti hue apni car ko dodaye ja rahi thi aur jaldi hi vo apni manjil par pahuch gaye
Jaldi se ghadi park ki aur upar ki aur chalne lagi
Gate ke samne pahuch kar
" vo nahi hai yaha par" piche se aawaz aae aur jab ashmita ne mud ke dekha to madhuri ma'am khadi thi

Ashmita- aapko pata hai kaha gaya hai?
Do dino se gayab hai, na phone utha raha hai aur na message ka jawab de raha hai?
Ma'am- mujhe bhi nahi pata
Maine bhi call ki thi lekin pata nahi kaha gaya... humesha aise hi gayab ho jata hai kisi ko bina bataye

Ashmita- es baar milega to eski tange tood dungi fir dekhti hu kaise bhagega
Ma'am- coffee peoge?

Ashmita- nahi vo actually mujhe kaam hai thanks
Ma'am- kya pata aa hi jaye coffee Peete peete

Ashmita ka to vaise hi jane ka man nahi tha vaha se to vo Ma'am ko hi ha bol kar unke ghar par chali gaye

Ma'am kuch der baad do cup coffee leke aaye aur ashmita ke sath bath gaye

Kuch der tak to koe kuch nahi bola lekin fir Ma'am ko hi bolna pada
Ma'am- ek baat puchu?
Ashmita- jee

Ma'am- lucifer kya mayne rahta hai tumhre liye?
Ashmita- matlab?

Ma'am- don't get me wrong I just want to know
Vo to kuch batata nahi hai aur esliye kuch help bhi nahi ho pati uski
Tum hi bata do
Ashmita- mera na kabhi koe dost nahi raha... bachpan me ek tha lekin vo chhod ke chala gaya uske baad kabhi vo friends wali feelings hi nahi aaye
Koe dost bhi banana chahte the to just because I'm rich
Lekin lucifer alag hai, main kaise batau aapko but main nahi chahti ki vo kabhi mujhse door ho

Ma'am- you want to be with him as a friend?
Ashmita- Ma'am
Main aapko Ma'am bula sakti hu?
Lucifer bhi Ma'am hi bulata hai

Ma'am-sure
Ashmita- I'm not gonna lie but something I really hate him I mean most of the time
Vo mujhe bas irritate karta rahta hai lekin fir yaad karti hu to acha bhi lagta hai

Ma'am- you love him?
Ashmita- nahi Ma'am I don't love him
Matlab vaise wala pyaar nahi hai

Ma'am- tum confuse ho
Ashmita- main usse dost manti hu
Dost ki tarah hi dekhti hu aur dost ki tarah hi uski care karti hu

Ma'am- aur vo kya chahta hai?
Ashmita- I don't know
Vo to bas apne aapko janana chahta hai sayad

Ma'am- kya tumhe usse hamdardi hai uske past ki vajah se?
Ashmita- past to sabka aisa hi hota hai
In fact everyone have a story
Vo jaise mujhe treat karta hai us se aisa lagta hai ki I'm also a normal human being
Bas that's it

Ma'am- usse kabhi kisi dusri ladki ke sath dekhti ho to kaisa lagta hai?
Ashmita- kaisa bhi nahi lagta
Jab vo mujhse juth bolta hai to gussa aata hai

Ma'am- he is a good guy
Ashmita- I know
Bas usse thoda sahi guidance ki jarurat hai

Ma'am- vo tum de sakti ho
Ashmita- nahi nahi
Meri to bilkul nahi sunta vo
Agar main usse kuch karne ko bolungi to vo bilkul uska opposite hi karega
Pagal kahi ka

Ma'am- ha ye to hai
Ulta to karta hai vo
Acha ek kaam karte hai
Ashmita- kya?

Ma'am- tum us par hak jamane lag jao
Agar koe baat nahi maan raha to ad jao ki hoga to yehi hai chahe kuch bhi kar lo fir dekho vo kaise react karta hai
Ashmita- mujhe pata hai kaise react karega

Ma'am- kaise?
Ashmita- ulti sidhi harkate karega fir mujhe gussa dilaega aur in the end apni marji ki kar dega fir baad me manane ki kosis bhi nahi karega

Ma'am- ab manana hi mat
Kya pata vo bhi tumhe apna samjhne lag jaye aise aur fir tumhe apni problems share karne lage?
Dekho problems solve tabhi hoti hai jab unka pata ho
Abhi to sirf etna pata hai ki vo apne past ke bare me nahi janta but eske aage kya?
Ashmita- eske aage kya?

Ma'am- kya pata kuch aur ho jiski vajah se vo pareshan ho aur bata nahi raha ho?
Kya pata aur bhi bahut bade reason ho?
Ashmita- aap uske liye etna kyu sochte ho?

Ma'am- uska dard apna jaisa lagta hai
Jab hum apno ko kho dete hai to mujhe pata hai kaisa feel hota hai
Ashmita- I'm sorry

Ma'am- koe baat nahi
I just want to help
Ashmita- okay ma'am
Ye bhi try karke dekh lenge but where is he?

Ma'am- uska ek associate hai
Usse pucha tumne?
Ashmita- areee ha
Naag usse sayad pata ho
Nahi nahi mujhe nahi lagta Ma'am usne naag ko bhi bataya hoga

Ma'am- try karke to dekh lo
Ashmita- mujhe pata nahi vo kaha rahta hai
Ek baar hi mila hai vo bhi restaurant me

Ma'am- dekh lo mil jaye to
Nahi to mujhe lagta hai lucifer aajayega vapas
Ashmita- mujhe pata nahi kal se kyu ghabrahat ho rahi hai

Ma'am- he will be fine
Usse kuch nahi hoga
Ashmita- badi muskil se ek dost mila tha
I just don't want to lose him

Ma'am- he is lucifer
Usse kya ho sakta hai?
Kya pata koe lead mili ho to chala gaya ho
Ashmita- ha lekin bata ke to jana chahiye tha na
Hum konsa usse rok hi lete?

Ma'am- etna dimag lucifer me?
Ashmita- pehle uska dimag ka ilaaz hi karana padega fir hi aage kuch hoga

Fir kuch der aur dono baat karte hai aur uske baad ashmita vaha se apne office chali jati hai
Usse lag raha tha ki kya pata vo direct office hi aagya ho lekin aisa hua nahi tha lucifer nahi aaya tha office

Ashmita apne cabin me chali gaye aur kaam karne ki kosis karne lagi lekin Lucifer ke thoughts usse kaam nahi karne de rahe the
Aise time par hume humesha yehi lagta hai ki kahi samne wala mar to nahi gaya hoga ya fir usse kuch ho to nahi gaya?
Yehi sab thoughts uske dimag me bhi chal rahe the ki achanak uska door knock hua aur usse fir se laga ki lucifer aagaya hai
" come in" vo turant boli lekin samne anisha ko dekh ke hi uska mood kharab ho gaya

Ashmita- kya hua? *rude*
Anisha- Ma'am design dikhane the *polite*

Ashmita- baad me aana * firse rude*
Anisha- okay ma'am
Aur jane lagi tabhi pata nahi ashmita ko kya hua "ruko, chalo dikhao abhi"
Aur anisha ruk gaye aur ashmita ke samne wali chair ke pass khadi hogaye

Ashmita- sit
Anisha dhayan se bath gaye aur ashmita ki taraf dekhne lag gaye
Ashmita- dikhao

Fir vo apne kuch designs dekhane lagi aur ashmita kuch der ke liye lucifer ko bhul kar apna kaam karne lagi

Ashmita- bahut issues hai esme
Tumhe ek baar aur check karna padega
Anisha- ma'am ye to demo tha bas idea ke liye

Ashmita- agar kisi ko apna idea bhi dikhane jao to bhi usme galtiyo ki koe gunjash nahi honi chahiye
Anisha- sorry Ma'am

Ashmita- tum meri expectations se acha kaam kar rahi hu bas thoda sa sikhne ki jarurat hai
Anisha- main jaldi hi sikh lungi ma'am

Ashmita- tumne lucifer ko dekha kya?
Pata nahi kyu ashmita ne anisha se pucha ye jante hue bhi ki usko mana kiya tha lucifer ke aas pass rahne ko
Anisha- nahi ma'am
Kya hua?

Ashmita- pata nahi kaha chala gaya bina bataye do din hogaye
Anisha- ma'am vo mujhe Beach ke pass mile the teen chaar din pehle

Ashmita- kuch bataya usne tumhe?
Anisha- jada baat nahi hue bas vo kisi ko dund rahe the

Ashmita- kisko?
Anisha- ye to nahi pata Ma'am
Main vaha bathi hue thi aur vo kahi se aaye the fir do minute baat karke chale gaye
Maine nahi ki ma'am unse baat vohi kar rahe the

Ashmita- koe baat nahi
Vo aisa hi hai
Tum ja sakti ho
Anisha- thank you ma'am
Aur vo mud ke chali gaye


Ek bistar par lucifer pada hua tha aur uske dil ke bicho bich ek ajeeb sa chaku laga hua tha
Khoon se uske kale kapde bhi rangeen ho chuke the aur vo vapas sapno ki dunia me ja chuka tha
Pata nahi vo kamjor pad raha tha ya fir uske dusman jada takatvar ho rahe the ki baar baar lucifer ko nuksaan pahuchane me kamyaab ho jate the
Ye to waqt hi bataega lekin abhi lucifer sahi condition me bilkul nahi tha
Vahi ek sundar si ladki uske jhakmo par marham patti kar rahi thi jo angreji dawaeya to bilkul nahi lag rahi thi
Sayad desi thi aur desi hi lucifer par acha asar bhi karti
Lekin abhi tak vo chaku nahi nikala tha uske sareer se sayad esliye ki usse khoon bahut jada bahne lag jayega aur bina hospital usse rokna bahut muskil hoga
Baki ke jo chhote mote jhakam the vaha par davae lagaye ja chuki thi
Ladki- kya ye chaku nikal du ab?
Kahi jada time rahne se koe reaction na kar de
Ladki 2- agar tum nikal sakti ho safely tabhi nikalna

Ladki- aapki help lagegi
Ladki 2- mujh se blood nahi dekha jata

Ladki- aaj dekhna hi padega aur bahut jada dekhna padega
Ladki 2- koe aur option nahi hai kya?

Ladki- ha hai na hospital le jane ka
Lekin vaha se sab explain kon karega?
Ladki 2- ye marna nahi chahiye
Bahut answer chahiye mujhe es se

Ladki - marna hota to abhi tak mar chuka hota
Main ek jhatke me ye nikalungi aur aap turant jhakam par es kapde ko dabba dena
Es par maine meds laga di hai lekin aapko ache se daba kar rakhna hoga taki blood kam se kam nikale aur jaldi hi nikalna band hojaye
Ladki 2 gehri saas lete hue ohh lucifer tum mujh se kya kya aur karvaoge
Ok done jaldi se karo

Uska etna bolna tha ki pehli wali ne ek jhatke me lucifer ke sareer se chaku nikal diya aur usse aisa feel hua ki chaku ke sath sath vo bhi kuch nikla hai lekin abhi moment aisi thi ki usne ye sochna sahi nahi samjha to turant dusri wali ne jhakam dhak diya aur sath me apni aankhen bhi band Kar di
Sayad sach me khoon nahi dekha jata us se

Ladki 1 chaku side me fek kar jaldi se jhakam par marham patti karne lagi vahi dusri wali aankhen band karke bot ki tarah khadi rahi

Ladki 2- jaldi karo
Mujhe vomit jaisa ho raha hai
Ladki- ruko ruko abhi nahi
Jhakam bahut gahra hai
Aur vo jaldi jaldi hath chalane lagi
10 minutes lage usse stretches karne me aur fir dono ek sath piche hat gaye pehli wali to normal hi lag rahi thi lekin dusre wali ne vahi thodi se vomit kar di aur aisa lag raha tha jaise vo abhi behosh ho jayegi

Ladki- ho gaya
Ladki 2- hmm ka..kab t..tak hosh aajayega

Ladki- I'm not sure
Aane ko subah tak aajaye lekin nahi aaye to weeks bhi lag sakte hai
Ab mujhe jana hoga mummy Papa akele hai
Tumhe kabhi bhi jarurat pade to call kar dena main turant aajaungi
Ladki 2- thank you sakshi
But please kisi ko batana mat

Sakshi- I won't
Don't worry
Aur vo vaha se chali jati hai....
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Lucifer ashmita ke bed par pada hua use irritate kar raha tha ki

“Nearby threat” ki ek notification uske dimag me baji

Jo lucifer etne der se sirf aur sirf bakchodiya kar raha tha uska chehre jhatke ke sath dead serious ho gaya aur ye baat ashmita se bhi chhupi nahi thi

Vo lucifer ko chhup karane ke liye uski taraf hi dekh rahi thi aur jab use dekha ki lucifer ke chehre ka haav bhaav ek dam se change ho gaya hai to vo turant lucifer ke pass pahuch gaye

Ashmita- lucifer? Kya ho gaya? Sab theek hai? Chehra kyu murjha gaya tera?
Bina lucifer ko bolne ka time diye usne ek ke baad ek sawal lucifer par taan diye

Lucifer- bolne degi to kuch bol paunga na?

Ashmita- ha to bol maine kab roka hai? Jab dekho sadu bana batha rahta hai
Nakhre ke sath ashu boli

Ashmita- ab bolta kyu nahi hai? Bolne de to rahi hu?

Lucifer- ajeeb pagal aurat hai ye yaar

Lucifer- main ye soch raha tha ki jab main tujhe ladki se aurat banaunga tab tu sarmayegi kaise? I mean sarmane jaisa kuch to tujhe aata hi nahi hoga na? Fir tu sarmaegi kaise?

Ashmita- shut up aur sach sach bata

Lucifer- esme sach juth kaha se aa gaya? Tu hi bata kaise sarmayegi tu? Aata hai tujhe? Bas ladva lo tujhse ya fir peet lo mujhe. Yehi sab to aata hai tujhe aur aata hi kya hai?

Ashmita- ab tu kuch mat bol mujhe kaam karne de

Lucifer- ha ha tu kar kaam mujhr bahut kaam hai ja raha hu main
Aur lucifer jane ke liye vaha se khada ho gaya

Ashmita- kahi jane ki jarurat nahi hai. Chhup chhap pada rah yaha

Lucifer- fir bolegi mujhe irritate kar raha hai kaam nahi karne de raha hai. Ab jab ja raha hu to tujhe us se bhi problem hai?

Ashmita- bol mat bas kuch bhi

Lucifer- muh band kar de na mera. Tabhi ruk paunga main

Ashmita- main hi karungi tera muh band tension mat le bilkul bhi

Lucifer- ye to mujhe pata hai. Acha mujhe kaam hai main ja raha hu

Ashmita- jake dikha teri tange na tood du main
Aur lucifer ke samne apni kamar par hath rakh kar khadi ho gaye

Lucifer- oye insaan ko kaam nahi hote kya? Jaruri kaam hai abhi aata hu karke

Ashmita- jab tak tu sach nahi batayega tab tak to tujhe bilkul bhi jane nahi dungi main tujhe. Ab sab tere pe depend hai tu kya karta hai

Lucifer- konsa sach? Sab to pata hai tujhe

Ashmita- abhi jo tera muh tatti jaisa hua tha uska reason kya hai ye bata aur agar juth bola to soch lena lucifer tu

Lucifer- mera chehra hi aisa hai esme main kya kar sakta hu? Aur tujh jaisi chudel se juth bol kar kya mil jayega mujhe?

Ashmita- ab dosti tujhse ki hai to angel to banungi nahi chudel ban kar hi jee sakti hu na?

Lucifer- angel banana bhi mat. Baki sab to dekh lenge lekin angel mat banana

Ashmita- topic change mat kar. Kya hua hai ye bata.

Lucifer- aa raha hu raat ko vapas tere sath sone. Fir dunga tere har sawalo ke jawab sath me lungi teri madmast jawani ke majje

Ashmita- faltu ki baatein kara lo bas

Lucifer- ok bye
Aur lucifer light ki raftaar se vaha se gayab hua. Ashmita ko to pata bhi nahi chala ki lucifer kab utha aur kab chala gaya. Vo hairaani bhari aankhen fade bas dekhti rah gaye

Lucifer vaha se nikla aur jaldi se apni senses use karte hue target ki taraf badhne laga

Smell etni strong thi ki lucifer ko uska picha karne me bilkul bhi pareshani nahi ho rahi thi. Sayad samne wala chahta bhi yehi tha ki lucifer uske pass pahuche

Lekin abhi dimag ki jagah dil kaam me le raha tha lucifer aur esliye hi to bina kuch soche samjhe bas chale ja raha tha

Ek baar bhi usne ye nahi socha ki ye ek trap bhi to ho sakta hai? Sayad apne aap har had se jada yakeen tha use aur ye bhi ki koe use trap ke fasa nahi sakta

Sala chahe angel ho devil ya human ego sabki ek jaisi hi hoti hai. Jaisi abhi lucifer ki hai. Maana tum bahut shaktishali ho aur tum kisi se nahi darte lekin lucifer ko apne dusmano ko kamjor nahi samjhna chahiye tha

Vo us disha me aage badh hi raha tha ki door kahi dhadaam dhadaam dhadaam dhadaam ek ke baad ek char bahut bhayanak dhamake hue

Vo dhamake lucifer se to kafi door hue the lekin fir bhi etne powerful the ki lucifer jaha khada tha vaha tak ki jamin kaamp gaye the

Protection shield jo lucifer ne apno ko bachane ke liye banaye thi vo bina lucifer ke bole active ho gaye aur lucifer bhagte hue logo se door ek ghar ke pass chala gaya jaha koe nahi tha aur vaha se ud gaya

Pahucha to samne ka darashay dil dhahla dene wala tha. Laasho ka to jaise antim sanskaar bhi ho gaya tha vahi jo jinda bache the unki halaat dekh kar lucifer jaisa cold hearted ki bhi aankhen bhar aaye thi

Apne dil ko majbut banaya usne aur logo ke sath injured ki madad karne laga. Ambulance ke sath sath fire brigade aur police aur investigation departman ke bade bade adhikari bhi is ghanta ki vajah se vaha pahuchne lag gaye the

Har kisi ko yehi lag raha tha ki ye terrorist attack hai aur pure sehar me red alert ghosit kar diya

Logo ko ghar se bahar nikalne tak ki permission band kar di thi

Ye ek dasak ka sabse ghataak attack tha jisne sakdo ki shankhya me log maare ja chuke the aur vo tadaad badti hi ja rahi th

Abhi vo apne thought process ko pura bhi nahi kar paya tha ki uske kaano me firse dhamako ki aawaz sunae dene lagi jo pichle wale dhamake se bahut adhik tej thi aur ab uske piche se aawaz aa rahi thi

Door use aasman me kaale duo ke badal bante dikhe. Vo dua hi etni jada thi ki aisa lag raha tha jaise pure sehar ne andere ki chadar od li hai

Lucifer beech me khada ka khada rah gaya tha. Na vo apne samne paide logo ki sahayata kar pa raha tha aur na vo dusri jagah ja raha tha

Aise lag raha tha jaise uske pair vahi jameen par chipak kar rah gaye ho. Chehre par to koe bhaav nahi dikh raha tha lekin aankhon me dard ka salaab kabhi bhi bah sakta tha

Vo etna jada apne aap me kho gaya tha ki use abhi tak ye andaja bhi nahi hua tha ki pichle ek ghante se uska mobile continuous baj raha tha. Uski taraf to lucifer ka dhayan hi nahi gaya tha

“Ohh bhai vaha khada khada kya kar raha hai? Yaha madad nahi kar sakta?” Lucifer ke piche se ek aawaz aaye jisne use apni nind se jagaya

Ek ladka jo 20-22 saal ko hoga pura khoon me sana logo ko ambulance me bharne ki kosis kar raha tha. Uske sareer par laga khoon uska nahi tha vo to un sareer se nikal raha tha jinhe vo utha raha tha

Lucifer ne jab usko dekha to turant sare khayalo ko chhod uski taraf badh gaya aur uski madad karne laga

Uske kaano se logo ki chhikhane chhilane ki aawaz gunjana band hi nahi ho rahi thi. Jo use pagal kar rahi thi agar jaldi hi lucifer ko kisi ne sambhala nahi to vo puri taraf out of control ho jayega aur tabhai kya hoti hai vo to uske baad dikhegi

Thodi hi der me amulance ki ghadiya bhar bhar kar vaha se jane lagi aur dusri aane lagi. Jo log es dhamake se bach gaye the vo bhi bina kisi rule regulation ki parvaah kiye insaaniyat ki khateer ek dusro ki madad karne me lage hue the

“Bhaaaiii” ek aur jani pahchani aawaz lucifer ke kaano me pahuchi

Naag- main kabse aapko phone kar raha hu. Ashmita maam aur inaaya maam ke bhi etne phone aa chuke hai. Ek jawab to dena chahiye na ki aap theek ho?
Naag ghabrate hue lucifer se bola. Chinta aur dar uske chehre se saaf dikhaye de raha tha

Lekin lucifer ke muh se kuch nahi nikla. Usne ek najar naag par dali. Use sahi salamat dekh kar uske kando par ek halki si thapki maari aur vapas logo ki madad karne laga

Naag ne bhi lucifer ke mano dasa ache se samjhi aur aage kuch nahi bola. Bas call karke sabko bata diya ki lucifer theek hai aur fir vo bhi madad karne me lag gaya…



Aur ab hum aa chuke hai es story ke last chapter ki taraf. I know pichle kuch time se update time par nahi aa paye and i am not giving any excuses just want to say sorry. From now onwards update regular aayenge and within a week or two hum es story ko khatam kar denge and will start a new journey. Agar aapko lagta hai kuch sawalo ke jawab nahi mile hai to aap abhi comments karke puch sakte ho because in the end kuch na kuch to rah hi jata hai and most of you knows how good i am in writing the climax🤦. Anyways thank you so much for all the love and support. I am always grateful🙏🙏
Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Lone survivor bhai.....
Nice and beautiful update....
 
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