Fantasy Mʏ Vᴀᴍᴘɪʀᴇ Sʏsᴛᴇᴍ ~ Tʜᴇ Hɪɴᴅɪ Eᴅɪᴛɪᴏɴ

[Your Sensei]

Guys! listen once again, likes ka target pura hone se pehle update nahi dene wala mai, bilkul bhi nahi. So agar next update chahiye to target pura kro.
One update per week ka schedule fix krne ka socha tha but past 3 days me back to back 3 update de chuka hu. So itna to kar hi sakte ho tum log.
Isliye target pura kro aur update le jao. Yahi deal hai apni.

Aur guys jo bhi naye bande thread par aa rahe hain wo upar poll me apna keemti vote jarur dalte jaye.

Ek aur baat tumhe story achhi lagti hai, batao.
Tumaye story achhi nahi lagti hai, wo bhi batao.
Tumhe kya achha lga, batao.
Tumhe kya achha nahi lga, wo bhi batao.
Agar thread par aaye ho, story read ki hai, to please kuchh na kuchh bol kar jao. Tum log bc aate ho aur aise gayab ho jate ho jaise gadhe ke sarr se kabhi seengh gayab ho gaye the. Bc 2 sabd naa bole jate tumse.

Jyada kuchh nahi mang raha, bss agar thread par aate ho to ek like kar diya kro aur ek chhota sa revo de diya kro. Kam se kam tumhari presence ka pta chalte rehta hai, ki bc tum log exist bhi karte ho.

Bss jo hai itna hi hai, itni baaton ka dhyan tum rakh lena baki tumhara dhyan mai rakh lunga. Tum khush, Mai khush, Dono log khush. To deal done samjhu Mai??

And once again, keep supporting!!!

 

[CFL7897]

Militri traning..... vartman Samay mein bhi yah Rul hai bahut se deshon mein ki agar aap 18 Sal Ho Gaye to aapko military training karna anivarya hai to thoda bahut Uske bare mein maine bhi padha tha

Lekin bakchodi yah Hai Ki yah military training Kuchh alag hi level per hai Jahan per power hi Sab Kuchh matter karta hai jo Jitna powerful hoga uski gand ki Puja Hogi Jo kamjor hoga Usi gand Mari Jayegi Jaise ju ne bataya...

Military training per jaane se pahle hi Vikram ko system ke bare mein ek bakchodi Pata Chali ki ho sunlight mein Apni stats ka Aadha ho jata hai.... aur Shayad ISI Ke Chalte system Ne Vikram ko task de diya ki 8 ghante Tak sunlight ko avoid Kijiye aur 5 point le jaaiye aur jahan tak samajh mein aata hai Vikram ko yah task complete karne Mein aasani Hogi Kyunki "Sona" Sabko pasand hai....

Dushmanon se bachne ke liye military ne apne Jagah ko bilkul khufiya rakha hai yahan per Aane jaane wale Logon ke sight ko blind kar diya jata hai Taki kisi ko bhi use Jagah Ka Pata Na Chale...

Chalo bhai dekhte hain Yahan per Vikram ke sath क्या-क्या bakchodiyan hoti hain

Lage raho bhai sahab

 

[Mk1]

Superb update

 

[Your Sensei]

Militri traning..... vartman Samay mein bhi yah Rul hai bahut se deshon mein ki agar aap 18 Sal Ho Gaye to aapko military training karna anivarya hai to thoda bahut Uske bare mein maine bhi padha tha

Aisa sirf do hi conditions me hota hai.
1. Jab kisi desh ki population bahut hi kam ho, tab waha ki sarkaro ko majboori me is tarah ke niyam banane padte hain.
2. Jab kisi desh ko uske padhosi ya phir anya desho se khatara ho, aise me apne Desh ki raksha ke liye us Desh ke pratyek nagrik ke liye kuchh samay ki military service compulsory kar di jati hai.
Udaharan ke liye Israel aur South Korea jaise desho ko dekha ja sakta hai, ye dono hi desh population aur area wise kaphi chhote hain, lekin technology ke mamle me duniya ke kai bade bade desho se aage hain, jiske parinaamswarup inke upar khatara bhi bahut hai, aur is liye aise desho ko aksar aise faisle lene padhate hain.

Ab agar isi baat ko hum story ke perspective se dekhe to yaha par bhi Dalki namak ek Alien species ne humans ki naak me damm karke rakha hai. Humans ladai ke maidan me unse pichhe hain, unse kamjor hain. Aur aise halaat me jo sabse achha decision liya ja sakta hai wo yahi hai ki Earth par rehne wala pratyek Earth baasi bina kisi swarth ke apne grah ko bachane me yogdan de.

Lekin bakchodi yah Hai Ki yah military training Kuchh alag hi level per hai Jahan per power hi Sab Kuchh matter karta hai jo Jitna powerful hoga uski gand ki Puja Hogi Jo kamjor hoga Usi gand Mari Jayegi Jaise ju ne bataya...

Vaise logo ko aisi hi stories to padhna pasand hai, jaha par gaand mari jati ho.
Just kidding!
Haa ye isi tarah ka training centre hai, yaha training ki aad me kaphi kuchh bakchodi chalti hai.

Military training per jaane se pahle hi Vikram ko system ke bare mein ek bakchodi Pata Chali ki ho sunlight mein Apni stats ka Aadha ho jata hai.... aur Shayad ISI Ke Chalte system Ne Vikram ko task de diya ki 8 ghante Tak sunlight ko avoid Kijiye aur 5 point le jaaiye aur jahan tak samajh mein aata hai Vikram ko yah task complete karne Mein aasani Hogi Kyunki "Sona" Sabko pasand hai....

Inhi chhote chhote incidents ke chalte Vikram apne system ko dheere dheere samjh raha hai. Lekin wo abhi bhi confuse hai ki ye kis tarah ki power hai jo sunlight me aate hi aadhi ho jati hai, aur system use sunlight ko avoid karne ke liye Exp de raha, kahi na kahi ye sabhi chize kisi glt disa ki ore badh rahi hain.

Dushmanon se bachne ke liye military ne apne Jagah ko bilkul khufiya rakha hai yahan per Aane jaane wale Logon ke sight ko blind kar diya jata hai Taki kisi ko bhi use Jagah Ka Pata Na Chale...

Log bss ladna chahte hain!! Yahi is duniya ki sachchai hai.
Jab Dalki's attack karte hain tab yahi log sale sath me milke Dalki's se ladte hain.
Aur jab Dalki nahi to bc ye civil war wale mode me aa jate hain.

Chalo bhai dekhte hain Yahan per Vikram ke sath क्या-क्या bakchodiyan hoti hain

Lage raho bhai sahab

Thanks for this wonderful revo man!
Maza aa gaya padhke!
Keep supporting!!

 

[Your Sensei]

Superb update

Thanks man!
Keep supporting!!

 

[Malik-18]

military to kafi powerful lag rhi hai. esa lagta hai ek alag hi duniya basa kar bethey hue hain. aur technology bhi itni futuristic. aur 2 saal vikram ne yehin par nikaley hain to phir bohat maza aney wala hai. dekhte hain phir vikram ki powers ka level kya hai. aur kya vikram shadow mein rhe ga ya phir khul kar sab k samey apni system ki powers ko show kare ga.

level 2 tak sleepy gas ko resist kiya tha vikram ne aur bad mein khudi resist karna chor diya jab black mask pehnaya us k muh par to kya is se bhi zeyada wo resist kar sakta tha qk bad mein gas ka dabaw bharne lga tha lekin vikram ne resist bhi nahi kiya us se bachne k liye

sunlight mein janey se vikram ki powers half ho jati hain aur dalkis ko sunligh se koi dikat nahi hoti to ye kafi interesting hone wala hai. and i believe k agey chal is cheez ka bhi koi hal zrur nikley ga ya koi esi skill or something jo vikram k liye shield ka kam kare usey sunlight se bchane k liye.

informational update tha koi event nahi hua is mein military powers ko kafi ache se show krwaya hai ya hint diya hai un ki powers ka teaser dikha kar. 2 saal ka time jo hai kya ye fast forward chaley ga ya phir slowly chaley ga. and story mein sex sux ki possibility hai, vikram k koi bhi relatives nahi hain ya phir wo issey miltey nahi hain ya phir vikram hi nah janta ho apne kisi relative ko[shyd relative wala question maine dubara puch liya hai khair mujy sahi se yad nahi to ans kr dena bro is ka bhi]

baki agey update mein dekhein ge. and hope k next update ki length bhi esi hi ho gi

keep writing & keep rocking

waiting for the next update ​

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update

 

[Your Sensei]

Nice update

Thanks man!
Keep supporting!!

 

[Damha]

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[Your Sensei]

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Sakshat moderator sahab padhare hain!

 

[Your Sensei]

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Welcome to the jungle bro!