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Isliye target pura kro aur update le jao. Yahi deal hai apni.

Aur guys jo bhi naye bande thread par aa rahe hain wo upar poll me apna keemti vote jarur dalte jaye.

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[ Military School ]


Ab tak...

"Ladke, immediately apna boria bistar bandho. Gadi already 5 minute se bahar wait kar rahi hai." Khadus Sergeant ne Vikram se kaha.

School, book aur system ke chakkar me Vikram ye to bhool hi gaya tha ki aaj kya hona hai.

"It's time for you to head to the military school," Sergeant ne Vikram se kaha.


Ab aage...

So jabse Dalki ne earth par aakar humans ki gaand todni suru ki thi tabhi se government ne pratyek individual ke liye chahe wo kisi bhi gender ka ho, 18 saal ka hone ke baad 2 years ki military training compulsory kar di thi. Vaise to Humans aur Dalki ke bich philhal ek peaceful period chal raha tha lekin bc iski koi guarantee nahi thi ki ye humesha aisa hi rahega. Ye Dalki's badi hi kutti chiz the, Bc ye trust karne layak hi nahi the, Inka koi bharosa nahi tha ki ye kab kya kar de. Dalki's universe ki kuchh un gini chuni species me se the jinke dimaag me power ka nasa aur juban par power ka chaska chada huaa tha. Ye us tarah ke log the jo apne se kamjor species ko dominate karna pasand karte the. Power ke liye inki hunger aur jinhe ye kamzor samajhte hain unhe control karne ki inki desire se paar pa pana kisi ke liye bhi tedi kheer thi.

Har dusre din news par bss yahi bakchodi chalti rehti thi, ki aaj isne usko ungli kar di aaj usne isko ungli kardi. Dono hi species war ki kagaar par khadi thi lekin inhe phir bhi gaand masti sujh rahi thi, aur yaha bc log baag bechare pareshan apne gharo me baithe the ki pata nahi kab kya ho jaye.

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Yaha Sergeant Griff ke sath niche jane se pehle Vikram phataphat laghusankaalay ( toilet ) ki taraf bhaga kyuki bc 2 litre pani pi lene ki vajah se uska bladder phatne ko ho gaya tha.

1 Number karne ke baad laghusankaalay se nikal kar apna room lock karke Vikram ne jaise hi apartment building se bahar kadam rakha to system ne use ek aisa surprise diya ki Vikram ki gaand phatne ko ho gai. Is wakt uski aankhon ke thik samne wahi notification screen thi aur us par kuchh messages dikhai de rahe the, aur wo messages the ~


[Your body is being hit by direct sunlight]

[You are affected by the sunlight]

[All stats will be halved while you are exposed to the sunlight]


Achanak hi Vikram ko apni body me bhayanak thakavat mehsoos hone lagi, use aisa lag raha tha jaise wo abhi abhi kisi marathon se daud kar aaya ho. Uske hath aur pair itne bhari feel hone lage ki unhe move karne bss me hi use gaand tak ka dam lagana pad raha tha.

Vikram ke achanak rukne aur aisi ajeeb harkate karne ki vajah se Sergeant Griff ne use ghoor kar dekha, jaise mano puchh raha ho ki, tujhe kya hua? Ruk kyu gaya?

"Tum thik to ho na, Ladke?" Sergeant ne Vikram se puchha aur khudko aise taiyar karne laga jaise Vikram abhi bhagega aur wo use turant hi lapak lega. Sergeant ka aisa sochna swabhavik bhi tha, kyuki har saal kuchh aise launde laundiya hote hi the jo jaate time koi na koi bakchodi karne ki koshish karte aur phir unhe forcefully leke jana padta tha.

Sergeant Vikram ko laude jaisi sakl liye ghoor raha tha jabki Vikram ka dhyan to kahi aur hi tha. Vikram apni responsibilities se bhagne walo mese nahi tha aur na hi uska aisa koi irada tha. Wo to abhi apne samne dikh rahi us screen ko dekhne me busy tha. Usne dekha ki na sirf uske stats down huye hain balki uski HP ( Health Points ) bhi almost half ho gai hai.


[HP 5/5]

[Strength 5/5]

[Stamina 5/5]

[Agility 5/5]


"System ki maa ki aankh! Aisa kon karta hai be?" Vikram ye baat zor se chilla kar bolna chahta tha lekin phir use realise hua ki uske alawa waha aur bhi log hain, aur majboori me use mann me hi system ko gali deke khudko sant karna pada.

"Ladke, tum sun bhi rahe ho?" Lauda Sergeant ek baar phir chillaya.

Lekin Vikram abhi bhi usi screen ko ghoore ja raha tha kyuki abhi abhi phirse us par kuchh naye notifications aaye the.


[You have received a new quest]

[Daily quest: Avoid direct sunlight for 8 hours]

[Reward: 5 Exp]


Jaise hi Vikram ne in notifications ko dekha to usne thodi rahat ki saans li. Vaise to water wali quest bhi easy hi thi but usme phir bhi Vikram ko thode efforts lagane pade the aur bc jo dard hua baad me so wo alag, lekin is quest ki khas baat ye thi ki ise Vikram raat me aaram se apne room me so kar bhi pura kar sakta tha, jo ki uske liye ek bahut badhiya baat thi because launde ko sona pasand hai, vaise sona kise pasand nahi?? Sabhi ko pasand hai bhai!
So theory ke hisab se agar system thik usi tarah work karta hai jaisa ki kisi RPG System type ke game me hota hai to ek baar jab Vikram 100 Exp ( Experience Points ) earn kar lega tab wo Level up kar sakta hai aur sath hi sath apne stats bhi increase kar sakta hai.

Yani isse ek baat saaf hai ki jitni daily quests Vikram ko milengi uske liya utna hi achha hai.

"Itne dheere dheere kyu chal raha hai, Nalayak?! Tere jaise shust ladke military school me ek din bhi nahi tik pate, agar yahi haal raha to school tujhe kachcha chaba jayega!" Is baar Sergeant Griff ki shakht aawaz ne apna kaam kar diya aur Vikram jo kisi gehri neend me tha wo apni soch se bahar nikal kar phirse asal duniya me aa gaya.

Vikram jaise taise karke apne apartment block ke paas me hi khadi ek large bus ke paas pahuncha, aur jab wo usme enter kiya to usne dekha ki us bus me uski hi age ke ( 18 years ) dher sare students already waha par baithe huye the. Vikram ne jab pichhe mudke dekha to paya ki Sergeant usse kuchh hi steps door apne dono hathon ko pichhe ki taraf bandhe huye kisi stone statue ki tarah khada use hi ghoor raha tha, even Vikram ko bhi ye realise nahi hua ki uske sath chalte chalte Sergeant kab ruk gaya.

Vikram wapas se bus ki taraf muda aur usne ek baar puri bus ko achhe se dekha. Itne students me aisa ek bhi banda ya bandi nahi thi jise Vikram pehchanta ho, means wo sabhi alag alag schools ke students the. Phir Vikram ne yaha waha apne baithne ke liye seat dhundi to usko bus ke front me ek seat dikhayi di, puri bus me wahi bss ek seat khali thi, baki almost puri bus students se bhari hui thi.

Building se bus tak ki doori bss kuchh 50 metres ki hi rahi hogi lekin itne me hi Vikram ko aisa feel ho raha tha jaise wo 5Km ki daud lga kar aaya ho.
Imagine karo ki aapne din bhar kuchh bhi nahi khaya ho aur sham hote hi aap 5 Km ki ek daud par nikal jayen aur waha se aane ke baad aapko 2 ghante gym bhi hit karni ho. Ab batao! Itna sab karne ke baad aapka kya haal hoga? Khas kar tab jab aap Vikram ki tarah ek duble patle sareer ke malik ho.
Bss aisa hi kuchh is wakt Vikram ko feel ho raha tha.

Khair jaise hi Vikram us seat par baitha, thik usi wakt uski aankhon ke samne system ki notification screen pop up ho gai aur usme likhe message ko padhkar Vikram ki jaan me jaan aai.


[Stats have returned to normal]

Is incident se ek baat clear ho gai thi ki direct sunlight me aate hi Vikram ke stats aur yaha tak ki uski HP bhi half ho jati hai aur jab wo direct sunlight me nahi hota to uske stats aur HP phirse normal hona start ho jate hain. Vikram apne stats ko phirse normal hota dekh kar khush tha, wo apni body me ek nayi energy ko feel kar pa raha tha use is wakt aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi ne uske upar se koi heavy weight utha liya ho.

"Bhenchod gaand marte marte bach gai aaj to! Achha hua bc ye keval direct sunlight me aane par hi hota hai, barna koi din win wala chakkar hota to laude lag jane the, ye bc system ka koi bharosa nahi, kya pta keh de ki din me bahar nikalna mana hai agar system ka kaha nahi mana to -2 HP per ghante ke hisab se kategi aur tab tak kategi jab tak tum is duniya se nahi katt lete. Fuck man!! This system is scary as fuck!" Vikram khudme hi pta na kya badbadaye ja raha tha.

Abhi sab students excitement ke sath aapas me baate kar hi rahe the jab wo lauda Sergeant bus me entry mara aur use dekhte hi bc sabhi ke muh aise band ho gaye jaise unke samne koi bhoot khada ho aur agar abhi unne kuchh bola to wo unki maa chod dega.

"Alright Students! Ab samay aa gaya hai ki hum military academy ki taraf badhe." Sergeant ne apni dabang aawaz me announce karte huye kaha aur ye ek tarah se bus driver ke liye bhi sanket tha, drive ne bhi Sergeant ki taraf dekh apni mundi hilayi aur bus ko start kar aage ki direction me drive karne laga.

Vikram samet bus me baithe un sabhi students ki aaj ek nayi journey start ho chuki thi aur ye journey jaha jakar khatam hone wali thi wo destination thi ~ Military Academy.

Bus chalna start kar chuki thi aur finally unki journey start ho chuki thi, lekin is journey ke dauraan puri bus me sannata chhaya raha, kyuki jab bhi koi student kuchh bolne ya aapas me bate karne ki koshish karta to Sergeant Griff use aisi laude jaisi sakl ke sath ghoorta ki unki bolti band ho jati thi aur phir wo gaand masti karne ki koshish bhi nahi karte the.

Bc Griff ko to unhe kuchh bolne ki bhi jarurat nahi padti thi, uske serious look ko dekh kar hi sabhi students samjh jate the ki wo unse kya chahta hai.

Abhi journey start huye sirf 10 minutes hi huye the jab Vikram ki aankhon ke samne phirse wahi notification screen pop up hui, system ne use kuchh naye notifications bheje the.


[A substance in the air has been detected]

[You are feeling sleepy]

[Resistance +1]


Vikram ko ye notifications kuchh ajeeb lage, kahi na kahi uske dimag ne use ye signal de diya tha ki bc yaha kuchh to bakchodi chal rahi hai. Vikram ne jab bus ke interior ko check karna suru kiya to usne dekha ki aadhe se jyada students already apni apni seats par ludhak chuke the aur aadhe abhi bhi jhapkiyan lete huye apni aankhon ko mal rahe the.

Achanak hi wo khud bhi thoda dizzy feel karne laga, usne isse fight karne ki bhi koshish ki lekin use aisa lag raha tha jaise uski body dheere dheere heavy hoti ja rahi ho.
Dheere dheere uski palke band hone lagi.


[Your resistance to the substance has increased]

[Resistance +1]


Lekin is notification ke sath hi uski consciousness dheere dheere wapas aane lgi. Use aisa mehsoos ho raha tha jaise uski body is unknown substance ko resist karne ki koshish kar rahi ho.

Abhi wo us unknown substance se ladne ki koshish kar hi raha tha jab use apni taraf kuchh loud footsteps aate huye sunayi diye. Jab Vikram ne apni adhkhuli aankhon ke sath upar dekha to waha koi aur nahi Sergeant Griff khada hua tha.

"Lagta hai ki tum mese kuchh logo ki body is sleeping gas ko resist kar sakti hai, Aur ab humaye paas tum logo ka chehra dhakne ke alawa aur koi option nahi hai.' Sergeant Griff ne Vikram ko dekhte huye kaha.

Uske baad un logo ne Vikram ke sarr ko ek black bag se dhakk diya jisse uska vision completely cover ho gaya aur ab use kuchh bhi dikahyi nahi de raha tha. Har beet'te pal gas ka asar badhta ja raha tha aur wo gas dheere dheere Vikram ki body par hawi hone lagi. Vikram ne bhi is baar haar maan li, aur wo ek gehri neend me so gaya.

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Kuchh samay baad, Vikram ko aisa mehsoos hua jaise kisi ne uske sarr pe thanda pani daal diya ho. Thande pani ne apna asar dikhaya aur dheere dheere Vikram ki aankhen khulne lagi. Aankhen khulte hi Vikram ne dekha ki wo kisi ghaas ke hare bhare maidan me pada hua tha.

Vikram ne apna sarr utha kar aas paas ke mahaul ko dekha to paya ki waha kuchh students the joki jaag chuke the aur unke sath kya hua tha aur abhi wo kaha hain is bare me soch rahe the jabki kuchh students abhi bhi unconscious hokar ground par pade huye the.

Dheere dheere karke baki students ko bhi hosh aane laga aur wo bhi confusion aur surprise ke mile jule expressions ke sath yaha waha dekh rahe the.

Vikram aur baki students ne jab achhe se sab kachu check kar liya tab unhone paya ki is wakt us plain open ground par 500 students khade huye the, lekin jis baat ne unhe sabse jyada chaukaya wo ye thi ki abhi wo jis jagah par khade huye the wo unke liye completely unknown thi, unhone is jagah ko dekhna to door kabhi iske bare me suna bhi nahi tha.

"Aaj se apni zindagi ke aane wale 2 saal tum sabhi isi jagah par bitaoge." Tabhi us khule maidan me Sergeant Griff ki wo dabang aawaz sunayi di.

Sergeant Griff ki baat ko sunkar sabhi students apne aas paas ki surroundings ko check karne lage. Ab tak almost sabhi students ke upar se us sleeping gas ka asar khatam ho chuka tha aur wo fully conscious the. Ab jab unhone thik se apne aas paas dekhna suru kiya tab unhe dikhai diya ki wo is wakt ek bahut hi bade hare bhare ghas ke maidan me khade huye the. Dekhne se aisa lag raha tha jaise ye ground kisi bahut hi bade campus ka hissa ho. Waha par keval wo green grass se bhara hua open plain ground hi nahi tha, uske alawa unke thik samne 3 huge, large aur futuristic buildings bhi bani hui thi. In buildings ki height almost 60 feet rahi hogi. Lekin us campus ki highlight un buildings ki height nahi thi, us campus ki highlight thi uska Area.
(Currently humare world ke hisab se dekha jaye to largest campus area wise ka title jata hai America ke "Berry College' ko.)
So agar area wise dekha jaye to military academy ka ye campus berry college se size me almost 1.5 guna jyada bada tha.
Yani agar roughly dekha jaye to ye campus almost Oceania Continent me sthit ek country Marshall Islands jitna tha. So ye kehna galat nahi hoga ki ye campus apne aap me hi ek country hai. Bc aise hi thodi na hum military ko powerful powerful bol rahe jabse. Military sirf lund hilane ke liye powerful nahi hai. World ki 5 sabse badi super powers mese ek military hi hai. Currently world me 5 super powers ka dabdaba hai jisme 4 original families aur 5th khud military hai, aur chuki yaha par military rule chalu hai to yaha ki government bhi ek tarah se military hi hai.
So the moral of the story is ki don't underestimate the power of the military.

Khair philhal sabhi students apne samne chal rahe scene ko dekh kar surprised the. Wo log is wakt abhi kisi hidden city me the jise unhone aaj se pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. Waha par jitne bhi log unhe dikh rahe the un sabhi ne military uniforms pehni hui thi, waha par ek se badh kar ek technological marvels the jo unhe apni ore attract kar rahe the.

Yaha ki technology aur engineering unke time ke hisab se bahut jyada advance thi. Yaha par work aur construction ke liye jagah jagah par robots ghoom rahe the. Kuchh giant robots crates ko utha kar yaha se waha kar rahe the to kuchh robots building machines ko control kar rahe the jo ek under construction building ke upar glass ke panel after panel rakhe ja rahi thi.

Waha par flying ships thi jo udte udte jameen ke itne paas aa ja rahi thi ki Vikram aur baki sabhi ko lag raha tha ki abhi ye kisi skyscraper se takra jaayegi aur niche streets par chal rahe logo ke upar kanch ki barsaat kar dengi. Halanki, aisa kuchh bhi nahi hua. Wo sabhi ships kisi perticular path ko follow kar rahi thi. Waha par hawa me tairti hui trains bhi thi, jo kisi invisible track par chal rahi thi. Kul milakar jis technology aur engineering ko aaj wo log witness kar rahe the is technology ke bare me outside world puri tarah se anjaan tha. Ye aisi technology thi jise ab tak outside world ko nahi diya gaya tha, military ise khud tak hi seemit rakhna chahti thi.

Dalki ke sath hui pehli war ke baad humans ne technological field me bahut tarakki kar li thi. Aur aisa isliye ho paya tha kyuki war khatam hone ke baad humans Dalki ke bahut se equipments ko salvage karne me kamyab ho gaye the. Iske baad madharchod military ne ye faisla kiya ki wo is technology ko khudke liye rakhenge. "Hume jo chize mili hain unme se kuchh public ke use karne ke hisab se kaphi khatarnak sabit ho sakti hain." Ye wo shabd the jo military ne war khatam hone ke baad aam janta se kahe the, ya ye kahe ki yahi bol kar military ne public ko chutiya banaya tha.

Abhi Vikram military ki tarakki ko dekh kar surprise ho hi raha tha jab use apni kalai par thoda sa weight feel hua. Jab usne apni kalai ko check kiya tab waha par ek watch bandhi hui thi, Ye ek tarah ki degital watch thi, lekin philhal usme kuchh bhi dikhai nahi de raha tha, wo watch abhi ekdum blank black thi.

"Tumhari wrist par bandhi hui wo chiz tumhari lifeline hai. Ye watch hi tumhe is military base par ek student ke roop me identify karegi. Iski help se tum kuchh certain areas ko access kar sakte ho, jaise ki apne food ke liye pay karna and dusri isi tarah ki chize. Ab sabse important chiz, jab ye wristwatch use me nahi hogi tab ye ek single digit ka number show karegi aur, yahi number tumhara power level hoga." Sergeant Griff ne watch ke usage ko explain karte huye kaha.

Lekin yaha Vikram ke chehre ko dekh kar lag raha tha jaise Griff abhi abhi koi unknown planet ki kisi unknown language me bakchodi karke chup hua ho. Vikram ne apne aas paas dekha to paya ki wo akela banda nahi tha jise Griff ki baaton ko samajhne me problem ho rahi thi, baki students ke chehro par bhi confusion saaf najar aa rahi thi.

Lekin jaise hi Vikram ko Griff ki baaton ka matalab samajh aaya vaise hi uske daant apas me bhid gaye aur mutthi apne aap hi kas uthi. Vikram ne socha tha ki shayad military school me aane ke baad uski life badal jayegi, lekin ab use ye ehsas ho raha tha ki sirf jagah badli hai, bakchodi nahi. Ye bilkul 'same bakchodi but different place' jaisa tha.
Tum log soch rahe hoge ki bc ye Vikram ko achanak kya hua jo Griff ki baaton ko sunkar aag babula ho gaya ek dam.
Tum log bc abhi tak na samjhe?
Ruko, samjhata hu! So imagine kro ki tum kisi magical world ke kisi magical school me padhte ho. Ye ek aisa school hai jaha sirf power matter karti hai, yaha jo powerful hote hain unki Pooja ki jati hai jabki jo kamjor hote hain unka majak udaya jata hai, unhe sataya jata hai. Ab agar tum khudko aisi jagah par imagine karoge to tum ye jarur chahoge ki tum ek powerful student ho, taki tumhari waha par roj gaand na mari jaye, lekin maze ki baat ye hai ki tumhare paas koi choice hi nahi hai, tum ek level 1 ke duble patle kamzor se student ho, ek aisa student jo bully hona sehan nahi kar sakta, tumhe ye bhi maloom hai ki agar tumne aawaz uthai to tumhari double gaand todi jayegi, lekin phir bhi aadat se majboor hokar tum unke khilaf aawaz uthate ho. Tum is roj roj ki bakchodi se pareshan ho chuke ho aur jaise taise karke tumhara school bhi khatam ho chuka hai. Ab time hai military academy ko join karne ka, kyuki tum jis world me rehte ho waha 18 years ki age ke baad 2 saal ki military training compulsory hai. Apni life ke is point par tum soch rahe hote ho ki ab tumhare paas ek mauka hai, takatvar bankar duniya ki maa chodne ka mauka. Lekin jab tum military academy me pahunchte ho tab tumhe pata chalta hai ki is academy aur tumhare us school me koi difference nahi hai.
Dono hi jagah jo chiz common hai wo hai ~ Power level system.
Dono hi jagaho par tumhari aukaat tumhare 'power level' se decide hoti hai.
Yaha par bhi tumse powerful log tumhare sath vaisa hi treatment karte hain jaisa ki tumhare us school me kiya karte the.
Ab zara socho ki tumhe kaisa lagega? kaisa lagta hai jab hume jis cheez se sabse jyada ummid ho wahi hume niraas kar de? Tumhe kaisa lagega jab tumhe ye pata chale ki jaha aakar tum puri duniya ki gaand maarne ka sapna dekh rahe the waha ek baar phir, tumhari khudki gaand marne wali ho?
Vikram ko bhi is wakt thik vaisa hi mehsoos ho raha tha jaisa ki tum kar rahe ho.

"Ab se thodi hi der baad hum tumhara power level check karenge. Isliye jab tak tumhe bulaya na jaye tab tak apni jagah se hilna nahi, understand?!" Sergeant Griff ne chehre par smile ke sath chillate huye kaha. Is wakt Sergeant ki us laude jaisi sakl par Smile ki decoration thi, aur isiliye chutiya hone ke baad bhi wo is wakt kisi Evil Monster ki tarah lag raha tha, ek aisa evil monster jo apne samne khade un nanhe munne bachcho ki maa chodne ko betaab ho.

"Good luck!!"


To be continued...



First of all sorry guys!! Update Sunday ko dene ka bola tha, but thoda issue ho gaya jis vajah se Sunday ko na de paya. But ye update pichhle sabhi updates se length me thoda bada hai.
Update consist almost 3.8K words!
Ab ek din late hua but update thoda bada mil gaya ju logo ko, so mamla equal-equal.

Baki is update ka target hai 30 likes, thode jyada hain but mujhe pata hai ki kar loge tum log.

Aur Haan, target pura kro update le jao, same deal on hai apni.

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[ Military School ]


Ab tak...

"Ladke, immediately apna boria bistar bandho. Gadi already 5 minute se bahar wait kar rahi hai." Khadus Sergeant ne Vikram se kaha.

School, book aur system ke chakkar me Vikram ye to bhool hi gaya tha ki aaj kya hona hai.

"It's time for you to head to the military school," Sergeant ne Vikram se kaha.


Ab aage...

So jabse Dalki ne earth par aakar humans ki gaand todni suru ki thi tabhi se government ne pratyek individual ke liye chahe wo kisi bhi gender ka ho, 18 saal ka hone ke baad 2 years ki military training compulsory kar di thi. Vaise to Humans aur Dalki ke bich philhal ek peaceful period chal raha tha lekin bc iski koi guarantee nahi thi ki ye humesha aisa hi rahega. Ye Dalki's badi hi kutti chiz the, Bc ye trust karne layak hi nahi the, Inka koi bharosa nahi tha ki ye kab kya kar de. Dalki's universe ki kuchh un gini chuni species me se the jinke dimaag me power ka nasa aur juban par power ka chaska chada huaa tha. Ye us tarah ke log the jo apne se kamjor species ko dominate karna pasand karte the. Power ke liye inki hunger aur jinhe ye kamzor samajhte hain unhe control karne ki inki desire se paar pa pana kisi ke liye bhi tedi kheer thi.

Har dusre din news par bss yahi bakchodi chalti rehti thi, ki aaj isne usko ungli kar di aaj usne isko ungli kardi. Dono hi species war ki kagaar par khadi thi lekin inhe phir bhi gaand masti sujh rahi thi, aur yaha bc log baag bechare pareshan apne gharo me baithe the ki pata nahi kab kya ho jaye.

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Yaha Sergeant Griff ke sath niche jane se pehle Vikram phataphat laghusankaalay ( toilet ) ki taraf bhaga kyuki bc 2 litre pani pi lene ki vajah se uska bladder phatne ko ho gaya tha.

1 Number karne ke baad laghusankaalay se nikal kar apna room lock karke Vikram ne jaise hi apartment building se bahar kadam rakha to system ne use ek aisa surprise diya ki Vikram ki gaand phatne ko ho gai. Is wakt uski aankhon ke thik samne wahi notification screen thi aur us par kuchh messages dikhai de rahe the, aur wo messages the ~


[Your body is being hit by direct sunlight]

[You are affected by the sunlight]

[All stats will be halved while you are exposed to the sunlight]


Achanak hi Vikram ko apni body me bhayanak thakavat mehsoos hone lagi, use aisa lag raha tha jaise wo abhi abhi kisi marathon se daud kar aaya ho. Uske hath aur pair itne bhari feel hone lage ki unhe move karne bss me hi use gaand tak ka dam lagana pad raha tha.

Vikram ke achanak rukne aur aisi ajeeb harkate karne ki vajah se Sergeant Griff ne use ghoor kar dekha, jaise mano puchh raha ho ki, tujhe kya hua? Ruk kyu gaya?

"Tum thik to ho na, Ladke?" Sergeant ne Vikram se puchha aur khudko aise taiyar karne laga jaise Vikram abhi bhagega aur wo use turant hi lapak lega. Sergeant ka aisa sochna swabhavik bhi tha, kyuki har saal kuchh aise launde laundiya hote hi the jo jaate time koi na koi bakchodi karne ki koshish karte aur phir unhe forcefully leke jana padta tha.

Sergeant Vikram ko laude jaisi sakl liye ghoor raha tha jabki Vikram ka dhyan to kahi aur hi tha. Vikram apni responsibilities se bhagne walo mese nahi tha aur na hi uska aisa koi irada tha. Wo to abhi apne samne dikh rahi us screen ko dekhne me busy tha. Usne dekha ki na sirf uske stats down huye hain balki uski HP ( Health Points ) bhi almost half ho gai hai.


[HP 5/5]

[Strength 5/5]

[Stamina 5/5]

[Agility 5/5]


"System ki maa ki aankh! Aisa kon karta hai be?" Vikram ye baat zor se chilla kar bolna chahta tha lekin phir use realise hua ki uske alawa waha aur bhi log hain, aur majboori me use mann me hi system ko gali deke khudko sant karna pada.

"Ladke, tum sun bhi rahe ho?" Lauda Sergeant ek baar phir chillaya.

Lekin Vikram abhi bhi usi screen ko ghoore ja raha tha kyuki abhi abhi phirse us par kuchh naye notifications aaye the.


[You have received a new quest]

[Daily quest: Avoid direct sunlight for 8 hours]

[Reward: 5 Exp]


Jaise hi Vikram ne in notifications ko dekha to usne thodi rahat ki saans li. Vaise to water wali quest bhi easy hi thi but usme phir bhi Vikram ko thode efforts lagane pade the aur bc jo dard hua baad me so wo alag, lekin is quest ki khas baat ye thi ki ise Vikram raat me aaram se apne room me so kar bhi pura kar sakta tha, jo ki uske liye ek bahut badhiya baat thi because launde ko sona pasand hai, vaise sona kise pasand nahi?? Sabhi ko pasand hai bhai!
So theory ke hisab se agar system thik usi tarah work karta hai jaisa ki kisi RPG System type ke game me hota hai to ek baar jab Vikram 100 Exp ( Experience Points ) earn kar lega tab wo Level up kar sakta hai aur sath hi sath apne stats bhi increase kar sakta hai.

Yani isse ek baat saaf hai ki jitni daily quests Vikram ko milengi uske liya utna hi achha hai.

"Itne dheere dheere kyu chal raha hai, Nalayak?! Tere jaise shust ladke military school me ek din bhi nahi tik pate, agar yahi haal raha to school tujhe kachcha chaba jayega!" Is baar Sergeant Griff ki shakht aawaz ne apna kaam kar diya aur Vikram jo kisi gehri neend me tha wo apni soch se bahar nikal kar phirse asal duniya me aa gaya.

Vikram jaise taise karke apne apartment block ke paas me hi khadi ek large bus ke paas pahuncha, aur jab wo usme enter kiya to usne dekha ki us bus me uski hi age ke ( 18 years ) dher sare students already waha par baithe huye the. Vikram ne jab pichhe mudke dekha to paya ki Sergeant usse kuchh hi steps door apne dono hathon ko pichhe ki taraf bandhe huye kisi stone statue ki tarah khada use hi ghoor raha tha, even Vikram ko bhi ye realise nahi hua ki uske sath chalte chalte Sergeant kab ruk gaya.

Vikram wapas se bus ki taraf muda aur usne ek baar puri bus ko achhe se dekha. Itne students me aisa ek bhi banda ya bandi nahi thi jise Vikram pehchanta ho, means wo sabhi alag alag schools ke students the. Phir Vikram ne yaha waha apne baithne ke liye seat dhundi to usko bus ke front me ek seat dikhayi di, puri bus me wahi bss ek seat khali thi, baki almost puri bus students se bhari hui thi.

Building se bus tak ki doori bss kuchh 50 metres ki hi rahi hogi lekin itne me hi Vikram ko aisa feel ho raha tha jaise wo 5Km ki daud lga kar aaya ho.
Imagine karo ki aapne din bhar kuchh bhi nahi khaya ho aur sham hote hi aap 5 Km ki ek daud par nikal jayen aur waha se aane ke baad aapko 2 ghante gym bhi hit karni ho. Ab batao! Itna sab karne ke baad aapka kya haal hoga? Khas kar tab jab aap Vikram ki tarah ek duble patle sareer ke malik ho.
Bss aisa hi kuchh is wakt Vikram ko feel ho raha tha.

Khair jaise hi Vikram us seat par baitha, thik usi wakt uski aankhon ke samne system ki notification screen pop up ho gai aur usme likhe message ko padhkar Vikram ki jaan me jaan aai.


[Stats have returned to normal]

Is incident se ek baat clear ho gai thi ki direct sunlight me aate hi Vikram ke stats aur yaha tak ki uski HP bhi half ho jati hai aur jab wo direct sunlight me nahi hota to uske stats aur HP phirse normal hona start ho jate hain. Vikram apne stats ko phirse normal hota dekh kar khush tha, wo apni body me ek nayi energy ko feel kar pa raha tha use is wakt aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi ne uske upar se koi heavy weight utha liya ho.

"Bhenchod gaand marte marte bach gai aaj to! Achha hua bc ye keval direct sunlight me aane par hi hota hai, barna koi din win wala chakkar hota to laude lag jane the, ye bc system ka koi bharosa nahi, kya pta keh de ki din me bahar nikalna mana hai agar system ka kaha nahi mana to -2 HP per ghante ke hisab se kategi aur tab tak kategi jab tak tum is duniya se nahi katt lete. Fuck man!! This system is scary as fuck!" Vikram khudme hi pta na kya badbadaye ja raha tha.

Abhi sab students excitement ke sath aapas me baate kar hi rahe the jab wo lauda Sergeant bus me entry mara aur use dekhte hi bc sabhi ke muh aise band ho gaye jaise unke samne koi bhoot khada ho aur agar abhi unne kuchh bola to wo unki maa chod dega.

"Alright Students! Ab samay aa gaya hai ki hum military academy ki taraf badhe." Sergeant ne apni dabang aawaz me announce karte huye kaha aur ye ek tarah se bus driver ke liye bhi sanket tha, drive ne bhi Sergeant ki taraf dekh apni mundi hilayi aur bus ko start kar aage ki direction me drive karne laga.

Vikram samet bus me baithe un sabhi students ki aaj ek nayi journey start ho chuki thi aur ye journey jaha jakar khatam hone wali thi wo destination thi ~ Military Academy.

Bus chalna start kar chuki thi aur finally unki journey start ho chuki thi, lekin is journey ke dauraan puri bus me sannata chhaya raha, kyuki jab bhi koi student kuchh bolne ya aapas me bate karne ki koshish karta to Sergeant Griff use aisi laude jaisi sakl ke sath ghoorta ki unki bolti band ho jati thi aur phir wo gaand masti karne ki koshish bhi nahi karte the.

Bc Griff ko to unhe kuchh bolne ki bhi jarurat nahi padti thi, uske serious look ko dekh kar hi sabhi students samjh jate the ki wo unse kya chahta hai.

Abhi journey start huye sirf 10 minutes hi huye the jab Vikram ki aankhon ke samne phirse wahi notification screen pop up hui, system ne use kuchh naye notifications bheje the.


[A substance in the air has been detected]

[You are feeling sleepy]

[Resistance +1]


Vikram ko ye notifications kuchh ajeeb lage, kahi na kahi uske dimag ne use ye signal de diya tha ki bc yaha kuchh to bakchodi chal rahi hai. Vikram ne jab bus ke interior ko check karna suru kiya to usne dekha ki aadhe se jyada students already apni apni seats par ludhak chuke the aur aadhe abhi bhi jhapkiyan lete huye apni aankhon ko mal rahe the.

Achanak hi wo khud bhi thoda dizzy feel karne laga, usne isse fight karne ki bhi koshish ki lekin use aisa lag raha tha jaise uski body dheere dheere heavy hoti ja rahi ho.
Dheere dheere uski palke band hone lagi.


[Your resistance to the substance has increased]

[Resistance +1]


Lekin is notification ke sath hi uski consciousness dheere dheere wapas aane lgi. Use aisa mehsoos ho raha tha jaise uski body is unknown substance ko resist karne ki koshish kar rahi ho.

Abhi wo us unknown substance se ladne ki koshish kar hi raha tha jab use apni taraf kuchh loud footsteps aate huye sunayi diye. Jab Vikram ne apni adhkhuli aankhon ke sath upar dekha to waha koi aur nahi Sergeant Griff khada hua tha.

"Lagta hai ki tum mese kuchh logo ki body is sleeping gas ko resist kar sakti hai, Aur ab humaye paas tum logo ka chehra dhakne ke alawa aur koi option nahi hai.' Sergeant Griff ne Vikram ko dekhte huye kaha.

Uske baad un logo ne Vikram ke sarr ko ek black bag se dhakk diya jisse uska vision completely cover ho gaya aur ab use kuchh bhi dikahyi nahi de raha tha. Har beet'te pal gas ka asar badhta ja raha tha aur wo gas dheere dheere Vikram ki body par hawi hone lagi. Vikram ne bhi is baar haar maan li, aur wo ek gehri neend me so gaya.

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Kuchh samay baad, Vikram ko aisa mehsoos hua jaise kisi ne uske sarr pe thanda pani daal diya ho. Thande pani ne apna asar dikhaya aur dheere dheere Vikram ki aankhen khulne lagi. Aankhen khulte hi Vikram ne dekha ki wo kisi ghaas ke hare bhare maidan me pada hua tha.

Vikram ne apna sarr utha kar aas paas ke mahaul ko dekha to paya ki waha kuchh students the joki jaag chuke the aur unke sath kya hua tha aur abhi wo kaha hain is bare me soch rahe the jabki kuchh students abhi bhi unconscious hokar ground par pade huye the.

Dheere dheere karke baki students ko bhi hosh aane laga aur wo bhi confusion aur surprise ke mile jule expressions ke sath yaha waha dekh rahe the.

Vikram aur baki students ne jab achhe se sab kachu check kar liya tab unhone paya ki is wakt us plain open ground par 500 students khade huye the, lekin jis baat ne unhe sabse jyada chaukaya wo ye thi ki abhi wo jis jagah par khade huye the wo unke liye completely unknown thi, unhone is jagah ko dekhna to door kabhi iske bare me suna bhi nahi tha.

"Aaj se apni zindagi ke aane wale 2 saal tum sabhi isi jagah par bitaoge." Tabhi us khule maidan me Sergeant Griff ki wo dabang aawaz sunayi di.

Sergeant Griff ki baat ko sunkar sabhi students apne aas paas ki surroundings ko check karne lage. Ab tak almost sabhi students ke upar se us sleeping gas ka asar khatam ho chuka tha aur wo fully conscious the. Ab jab unhone thik se apne aas paas dekhna suru kiya tab unhe dikhai diya ki wo is wakt ek bahut hi bade hare bhare ghas ke maidan me khade huye the. Dekhne se aisa lag raha tha jaise ye ground kisi bahut hi bade campus ka hissa ho. Waha par keval wo green grass se bhara hua open plain ground hi nahi tha, uske alawa unke thik samne 3 huge, large aur futuristic buildings bhi bani hui thi. In buildings ki height almost 60 feet rahi hogi. Lekin us campus ki highlight un buildings ki height nahi thi, us campus ki highlight thi uska Area.
(Currently humare world ke hisab se dekha jaye to largest campus area wise ka title jata hai America ke "Berry College' ko.)
So agar area wise dekha jaye to military academy ka ye campus berry college se size me almost 1.5 guna jyada bada tha.
Yani agar roughly dekha jaye to ye campus almost Oceania Continent me sthit ek country Marshall Islands jitna tha. So ye kehna galat nahi hoga ki ye campus apne aap me hi ek country hai. Bc aise hi thodi na hum military ko powerful powerful bol rahe jabse. Military sirf lund hilane ke liye powerful nahi hai. World ki 5 sabse badi super powers mese ek military hi hai. Currently world me 5 super powers ka dabdaba hai jisme 4 original families aur 5th khud military hai, aur chuki yaha par military rule chalu hai to yaha ki government bhi ek tarah se military hi hai.
So the moral of the story is ki don't underestimate the power of the military.

Khair philhal sabhi students apne samne chal rahe scene ko dekh kar surprised the. Wo log is wakt abhi kisi hidden city me the jise unhone aaj se pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. Waha par jitne bhi log unhe dikh rahe the un sabhi ne military uniforms pehni hui thi, waha par ek se badh kar ek technological marvels the jo unhe apni ore attract kar rahe the.

Yaha ki technology aur engineering unke time ke hisab se bahut jyada advance thi. Yaha par work aur construction ke liye jagah jagah par robots ghoom rahe the. Kuchh giant robots crates ko utha kar yaha se waha kar rahe the to kuchh robots building machines ko control kar rahe the jo ek under construction building ke upar glass ke panel after panel rakhe ja rahi thi.

Waha par flying ships thi jo udte udte jameen ke itne paas aa ja rahi thi ki Vikram aur baki sabhi ko lag raha tha ki abhi ye kisi skyscraper se takra jaayegi aur niche streets par chal rahe logo ke upar kanch ki barsaat kar dengi. Halanki, aisa kuchh bhi nahi hua. Wo sabhi ships kisi perticular path ko follow kar rahi thi. Waha par hawa me tairti hui trains bhi thi, jo kisi invisible track par chal rahi thi. Kul milakar jis technology aur engineering ko aaj wo log witness kar rahe the is technology ke bare me outside world puri tarah se anjaan tha. Ye aisi technology thi jise ab tak outside world ko nahi diya gaya tha, military ise khud tak hi seemit rakhna chahti thi.

Dalki ke sath hui pehli war ke baad humans ne technological field me bahut tarakki kar li thi. Aur aisa isliye ho paya tha kyuki war khatam hone ke baad humans Dalki ke bahut se equipments ko salvage karne me kamyab ho gaye the. Iske baad madharchod military ne ye faisla kiya ki wo is technology ko khudke liye rakhenge. "Hume jo chize mili hain unme se kuchh public ke use karne ke hisab se kaphi khatarnak sabit ho sakti hain." Ye wo shabd the jo military ne war khatam hone ke baad aam janta se kahe the, ya ye kahe ki yahi bol kar military ne public ko chutiya banaya tha.

Abhi Vikram military ki tarakki ko dekh kar surprise ho hi raha tha jab use apni kalai par thoda sa weight feel hua. Jab usne apni kalai ko check kiya tab waha par ek watch bandhi hui thi, Ye ek tarah ki degital watch thi, lekin philhal usme kuchh bhi dikhai nahi de raha tha, wo watch abhi ekdum blank black thi.

"Tumhari wrist par bandhi hui wo chiz tumhari lifeline hai. Ye watch hi tumhe is military base par ek student ke roop me identify karegi. Iski help se tum kuchh certain areas ko access kar sakte ho, jaise ki apne food ke liye pay karna and dusri isi tarah ki chize. Ab sabse important chiz, jab ye wristwatch use me nahi hogi tab ye ek single digit ka number show karegi aur, yahi number tumhara power level hoga." Sergeant Griff ne watch ke usage ko explain karte huye kaha.

Lekin yaha Vikram ke chehre ko dekh kar lag raha tha jaise Griff abhi abhi koi unknown planet ki kisi unknown language me bakchodi karke chup hua ho. Vikram ne apne aas paas dekha to paya ki wo akela banda nahi tha jise Griff ki baaton ko samajhne me problem ho rahi thi, baki students ke chehro par bhi confusion saaf najar aa rahi thi.

Lekin jaise hi Vikram ko Griff ki baaton ka matalab samajh aaya vaise hi uske daant apas me bhid gaye aur mutthi apne aap hi kas uthi. Vikram ne socha tha ki shayad military school me aane ke baad uski life badal jayegi, lekin ab use ye ehsas ho raha tha ki sirf jagah badli hai, bakchodi nahi. Ye bilkul 'same bakchodi but different place' jaisa tha.
Tum log soch rahe hoge ki bc ye Vikram ko achanak kya hua jo Griff ki baaton ko sunkar aag babula ho gaya ek dam.
Tum log bc abhi tak na samjhe?
Ruko, samjhata hu! So imagine kro ki tum kisi magical world ke kisi magical school me padhte ho. Ye ek aisa school hai jaha sirf power matter karti hai, yaha jo powerful hote hain unki Pooja ki jati hai jabki jo kamjor hote hain unka majak udaya jata hai, unhe sataya jata hai. Ab agar tum khudko aisi jagah par imagine karoge to tum ye jarur chahoge ki tum ek powerful student ho, taki tumhari waha par roj gaand na mari jaye, lekin maze ki baat ye hai ki tumhare paas koi choice hi nahi hai, tum ek level 1 ke duble patle kamzor se student ho, ek aisa student jo bully hona sehan nahi kar sakta, tumhe ye bhi maloom hai ki agar tumne aawaz uthai to tumhari double gaand todi jayegi, lekin phir bhi aadat se majboor hokar tum unke khilaf aawaz uthate ho. Tum is roj roj ki bakchodi se pareshan ho chuke ho aur jaise taise karke tumhara school bhi khatam ho chuka hai. Ab time hai military academy ko join karne ka, kyuki tum jis world me rehte ho waha 18 years ki age ke baad 2 saal ki military training compulsory hai. Apni life ke is point par tum soch rahe hote ho ki ab tumhare paas ek mauka hai, takatvar bankar duniya ki maa chodne ka mauka. Lekin jab tum military academy me pahunchte ho tab tumhe pata chalta hai ki is academy aur tumhare us school me koi difference nahi hai.
Dono hi jagah jo chiz common hai wo hai ~ Power level system.
Dono hi jagaho par tumhari aukaat tumhare 'power level' se decide hoti hai.
Yaha par bhi tumse powerful log tumhare sath vaisa hi treatment karte hain jaisa ki tumhare us school me kiya karte the.
Ab zara socho ki tumhe kaisa lagega? kaisa lagta hai jab hume jis cheez se sabse jyada ummid ho wahi hume niraas kar de? Tumhe kaisa lagega jab tumhe ye pata chale ki jaha aakar tum puri duniya ki gaand maarne ka sapna dekh rahe the waha ek baar phir, tumhari khudki gaand marne wali ho?
Vikram ko bhi is wakt thik vaisa hi mehsoos ho raha tha jaisa ki tum kar rahe ho.

"Ab se thodi hi der baad hum tumhara power level check karenge. Isliye jab tak tumhe bulaya na jaye tab tak apni jagah se hilna nahi, understand?!" Sergeant Griff ne chehre par smile ke sath chillate huye kaha. Is wakt Sergeant ki us laude jaisi sakl par Smile ki decoration thi, aur isiliye chutiya hone ke baad bhi wo is wakt kisi Evil Monster ki tarah lag raha tha, ek aisa evil monster jo apne samne khade un nanhe munne bachcho ki maa chodne ko betaab ho.

"Good luck!!"


To be continued...



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[ Military School ]


Ab tak...

"Ladke, immediately apna boria bistar bandho. Gadi already 5 minute se bahar wait kar rahi hai." Khadus Sergeant ne Vikram se kaha.

School, book aur system ke chakkar me Vikram ye to bhool hi gaya tha ki aaj kya hona hai.

"It's time for you to head to the military school," Sergeant ne Vikram se kaha.


Ab aage...

So jabse Dalki ne earth par aakar humans ki gaand todni suru ki thi tabhi se government ne pratyek individual ke liye chahe wo kisi bhi gender ka ho, 18 saal ka hone ke baad 2 years ki military training compulsory kar di thi. Vaise to Humans aur Dalki ke bich philhal ek peaceful period chal raha tha lekin bc iski koi guarantee nahi thi ki ye humesha aisa hi rahega. Ye Dalki's badi hi kutti chiz the, Bc ye trust karne layak hi nahi the, Inka koi bharosa nahi tha ki ye kab kya kar de. Dalki's universe ki kuchh un gini chuni species me se the jinke dimaag me power ka nasa aur juban par power ka chaska chada huaa tha. Ye us tarah ke log the jo apne se kamjor species ko dominate karna pasand karte the. Power ke liye inki hunger aur jinhe ye kamzor samajhte hain unhe control karne ki inki desire se paar pa pana kisi ke liye bhi tedi kheer thi.

Har dusre din news par bss yahi bakchodi chalti rehti thi, ki aaj isne usko ungli kar di aaj usne isko ungli kardi. Dono hi species war ki kagaar par khadi thi lekin inhe phir bhi gaand masti sujh rahi thi, aur yaha bc log baag bechare pareshan apne gharo me baithe the ki pata nahi kab kya ho jaye.

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Yaha Sergeant Griff ke sath niche jane se pehle Vikram phataphat laghusankaalay ( toilet ) ki taraf bhaga kyuki bc 2 litre pani pi lene ki vajah se uska bladder phatne ko ho gaya tha.

1 Number karne ke baad laghusankaalay se nikal kar apna room lock karke Vikram ne jaise hi apartment building se bahar kadam rakha to system ne use ek aisa surprise diya ki Vikram ki gaand phatne ko ho gai. Is wakt uski aankhon ke thik samne wahi notification screen thi aur us par kuchh messages dikhai de rahe the, aur wo messages the ~


[Your body is being hit by direct sunlight]

[You are affected by the sunlight]

[All stats will be halved while you are exposed to the sunlight]


Achanak hi Vikram ko apni body me bhayanak thakavat mehsoos hone lagi, use aisa lag raha tha jaise wo abhi abhi kisi marathon se daud kar aaya ho. Uske hath aur pair itne bhari feel hone lage ki unhe move karne bss me hi use gaand tak ka dam lagana pad raha tha.

Vikram ke achanak rukne aur aisi ajeeb harkate karne ki vajah se Sergeant Griff ne use ghoor kar dekha, jaise mano puchh raha ho ki, tujhe kya hua? Ruk kyu gaya?

"Tum thik to ho na, Ladke?" Sergeant ne Vikram se puchha aur khudko aise taiyar karne laga jaise Vikram abhi bhagega aur wo use turant hi lapak lega. Sergeant ka aisa sochna swabhavik bhi tha, kyuki har saal kuchh aise launde laundiya hote hi the jo jaate time koi na koi bakchodi karne ki koshish karte aur phir unhe forcefully leke jana padta tha.

Sergeant Vikram ko laude jaisi sakl liye ghoor raha tha jabki Vikram ka dhyan to kahi aur hi tha. Vikram apni responsibilities se bhagne walo mese nahi tha aur na hi uska aisa koi irada tha. Wo to abhi apne samne dikh rahi us screen ko dekhne me busy tha. Usne dekha ki na sirf uske stats down huye hain balki uski HP ( Health Points ) bhi almost half ho gai hai.


[HP 5/5]

[Strength 5/5]

[Stamina 5/5]

[Agility 5/5]


"System ki maa ki aankh! Aisa kon karta hai be?" Vikram ye baat zor se chilla kar bolna chahta tha lekin phir use realise hua ki uske alawa waha aur bhi log hain, aur majboori me use mann me hi system ko gali deke khudko sant karna pada.

"Ladke, tum sun bhi rahe ho?" Lauda Sergeant ek baar phir chillaya.

Lekin Vikram abhi bhi usi screen ko ghoore ja raha tha kyuki abhi abhi phirse us par kuchh naye notifications aaye the.


[You have received a new quest]

[Daily quest: Avoid direct sunlight for 8 hours]

[Reward: 5 Exp]


Jaise hi Vikram ne in notifications ko dekha to usne thodi rahat ki saans li. Vaise to water wali quest bhi easy hi thi but usme phir bhi Vikram ko thode efforts lagane pade the aur bc jo dard hua baad me so wo alag, lekin is quest ki khas baat ye thi ki ise Vikram raat me aaram se apne room me so kar bhi pura kar sakta tha, jo ki uske liye ek bahut badhiya baat thi because launde ko sona pasand hai, vaise sona kise pasand nahi?? Sabhi ko pasand hai bhai!
So theory ke hisab se agar system thik usi tarah work karta hai jaisa ki kisi RPG System type ke game me hota hai to ek baar jab Vikram 100 Exp ( Experience Points ) earn kar lega tab wo Level up kar sakta hai aur sath hi sath apne stats bhi increase kar sakta hai.

Yani isse ek baat saaf hai ki jitni daily quests Vikram ko milengi uske liya utna hi achha hai.

"Itne dheere dheere kyu chal raha hai, Nalayak?! Tere jaise shust ladke military school me ek din bhi nahi tik pate, agar yahi haal raha to school tujhe kachcha chaba jayega!" Is baar Sergeant Griff ki shakht aawaz ne apna kaam kar diya aur Vikram jo kisi gehri neend me tha wo apni soch se bahar nikal kar phirse asal duniya me aa gaya.

Vikram jaise taise karke apne apartment block ke paas me hi khadi ek large bus ke paas pahuncha, aur jab wo usme enter kiya to usne dekha ki us bus me uski hi age ke ( 18 years ) dher sare students already waha par baithe huye the. Vikram ne jab pichhe mudke dekha to paya ki Sergeant usse kuchh hi steps door apne dono hathon ko pichhe ki taraf bandhe huye kisi stone statue ki tarah khada use hi ghoor raha tha, even Vikram ko bhi ye realise nahi hua ki uske sath chalte chalte Sergeant kab ruk gaya.

Vikram wapas se bus ki taraf muda aur usne ek baar puri bus ko achhe se dekha. Itne students me aisa ek bhi banda ya bandi nahi thi jise Vikram pehchanta ho, means wo sabhi alag alag schools ke students the. Phir Vikram ne yaha waha apne baithne ke liye seat dhundi to usko bus ke front me ek seat dikhayi di, puri bus me wahi bss ek seat khali thi, baki almost puri bus students se bhari hui thi.

Building se bus tak ki doori bss kuchh 50 metres ki hi rahi hogi lekin itne me hi Vikram ko aisa feel ho raha tha jaise wo 5Km ki daud lga kar aaya ho.
Imagine karo ki aapne din bhar kuchh bhi nahi khaya ho aur sham hote hi aap 5 Km ki ek daud par nikal jayen aur waha se aane ke baad aapko 2 ghante gym bhi hit karni ho. Ab batao! Itna sab karne ke baad aapka kya haal hoga? Khas kar tab jab aap Vikram ki tarah ek duble patle sareer ke malik ho.
Bss aisa hi kuchh is wakt Vikram ko feel ho raha tha.

Khair jaise hi Vikram us seat par baitha, thik usi wakt uski aankhon ke samne system ki notification screen pop up ho gai aur usme likhe message ko padhkar Vikram ki jaan me jaan aai.


[Stats have returned to normal]

Is incident se ek baat clear ho gai thi ki direct sunlight me aate hi Vikram ke stats aur yaha tak ki uski HP bhi half ho jati hai aur jab wo direct sunlight me nahi hota to uske stats aur HP phirse normal hona start ho jate hain. Vikram apne stats ko phirse normal hota dekh kar khush tha, wo apni body me ek nayi energy ko feel kar pa raha tha use is wakt aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi ne uske upar se koi heavy weight utha liya ho.

"Bhenchod gaand marte marte bach gai aaj to! Achha hua bc ye keval direct sunlight me aane par hi hota hai, barna koi din win wala chakkar hota to laude lag jane the, ye bc system ka koi bharosa nahi, kya pta keh de ki din me bahar nikalna mana hai agar system ka kaha nahi mana to -2 HP per ghante ke hisab se kategi aur tab tak kategi jab tak tum is duniya se nahi katt lete. Fuck man!! This system is scary as fuck!" Vikram khudme hi pta na kya badbadaye ja raha tha.

Abhi sab students excitement ke sath aapas me baate kar hi rahe the jab wo lauda Sergeant bus me entry mara aur use dekhte hi bc sabhi ke muh aise band ho gaye jaise unke samne koi bhoot khada ho aur agar abhi unne kuchh bola to wo unki maa chod dega.

"Alright Students! Ab samay aa gaya hai ki hum military academy ki taraf badhe." Sergeant ne apni dabang aawaz me announce karte huye kaha aur ye ek tarah se bus driver ke liye bhi sanket tha, drive ne bhi Sergeant ki taraf dekh apni mundi hilayi aur bus ko start kar aage ki direction me drive karne laga.

Vikram samet bus me baithe un sabhi students ki aaj ek nayi journey start ho chuki thi aur ye journey jaha jakar khatam hone wali thi wo destination thi ~ Military Academy.

Bus chalna start kar chuki thi aur finally unki journey start ho chuki thi, lekin is journey ke dauraan puri bus me sannata chhaya raha, kyuki jab bhi koi student kuchh bolne ya aapas me bate karne ki koshish karta to Sergeant Griff use aisi laude jaisi sakl ke sath ghoorta ki unki bolti band ho jati thi aur phir wo gaand masti karne ki koshish bhi nahi karte the.

Bc Griff ko to unhe kuchh bolne ki bhi jarurat nahi padti thi, uske serious look ko dekh kar hi sabhi students samjh jate the ki wo unse kya chahta hai.

Abhi journey start huye sirf 10 minutes hi huye the jab Vikram ki aankhon ke samne phirse wahi notification screen pop up hui, system ne use kuchh naye notifications bheje the.


[A substance in the air has been detected]

[You are feeling sleepy]

[Resistance +1]


Vikram ko ye notifications kuchh ajeeb lage, kahi na kahi uske dimag ne use ye signal de diya tha ki bc yaha kuchh to bakchodi chal rahi hai. Vikram ne jab bus ke interior ko check karna suru kiya to usne dekha ki aadhe se jyada students already apni apni seats par ludhak chuke the aur aadhe abhi bhi jhapkiyan lete huye apni aankhon ko mal rahe the.

Achanak hi wo khud bhi thoda dizzy feel karne laga, usne isse fight karne ki bhi koshish ki lekin use aisa lag raha tha jaise uski body dheere dheere heavy hoti ja rahi ho.
Dheere dheere uski palke band hone lagi.


[Your resistance to the substance has increased]

[Resistance +1]


Lekin is notification ke sath hi uski consciousness dheere dheere wapas aane lgi. Use aisa mehsoos ho raha tha jaise uski body is unknown substance ko resist karne ki koshish kar rahi ho.

Abhi wo us unknown substance se ladne ki koshish kar hi raha tha jab use apni taraf kuchh loud footsteps aate huye sunayi diye. Jab Vikram ne apni adhkhuli aankhon ke sath upar dekha to waha koi aur nahi Sergeant Griff khada hua tha.

"Lagta hai ki tum mese kuchh logo ki body is sleeping gas ko resist kar sakti hai, Aur ab humaye paas tum logo ka chehra dhakne ke alawa aur koi option nahi hai.' Sergeant Griff ne Vikram ko dekhte huye kaha.

Uske baad un logo ne Vikram ke sarr ko ek black bag se dhakk diya jisse uska vision completely cover ho gaya aur ab use kuchh bhi dikahyi nahi de raha tha. Har beet'te pal gas ka asar badhta ja raha tha aur wo gas dheere dheere Vikram ki body par hawi hone lagi. Vikram ne bhi is baar haar maan li, aur wo ek gehri neend me so gaya.

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Kuchh samay baad, Vikram ko aisa mehsoos hua jaise kisi ne uske sarr pe thanda pani daal diya ho. Thande pani ne apna asar dikhaya aur dheere dheere Vikram ki aankhen khulne lagi. Aankhen khulte hi Vikram ne dekha ki wo kisi ghaas ke hare bhare maidan me pada hua tha.

Vikram ne apna sarr utha kar aas paas ke mahaul ko dekha to paya ki waha kuchh students the joki jaag chuke the aur unke sath kya hua tha aur abhi wo kaha hain is bare me soch rahe the jabki kuchh students abhi bhi unconscious hokar ground par pade huye the.

Dheere dheere karke baki students ko bhi hosh aane laga aur wo bhi confusion aur surprise ke mile jule expressions ke sath yaha waha dekh rahe the.

Vikram aur baki students ne jab achhe se sab kachu check kar liya tab unhone paya ki is wakt us plain open ground par 500 students khade huye the, lekin jis baat ne unhe sabse jyada chaukaya wo ye thi ki abhi wo jis jagah par khade huye the wo unke liye completely unknown thi, unhone is jagah ko dekhna to door kabhi iske bare me suna bhi nahi tha.

"Aaj se apni zindagi ke aane wale 2 saal tum sabhi isi jagah par bitaoge." Tabhi us khule maidan me Sergeant Griff ki wo dabang aawaz sunayi di.

Sergeant Griff ki baat ko sunkar sabhi students apne aas paas ki surroundings ko check karne lage. Ab tak almost sabhi students ke upar se us sleeping gas ka asar khatam ho chuka tha aur wo fully conscious the. Ab jab unhone thik se apne aas paas dekhna suru kiya tab unhe dikhai diya ki wo is wakt ek bahut hi bade hare bhare ghas ke maidan me khade huye the. Dekhne se aisa lag raha tha jaise ye ground kisi bahut hi bade campus ka hissa ho. Waha par keval wo green grass se bhara hua open plain ground hi nahi tha, uske alawa unke thik samne 3 huge, large aur futuristic buildings bhi bani hui thi. In buildings ki height almost 60 feet rahi hogi. Lekin us campus ki highlight un buildings ki height nahi thi, us campus ki highlight thi uska Area.
(Currently humare world ke hisab se dekha jaye to largest campus area wise ka title jata hai America ke "Berry College' ko.)
So agar area wise dekha jaye to military academy ka ye campus berry college se size me almost 1.5 guna jyada bada tha.
Yani agar roughly dekha jaye to ye campus almost Oceania Continent me sthit ek country Marshall Islands jitna tha. So ye kehna galat nahi hoga ki ye campus apne aap me hi ek country hai. Bc aise hi thodi na hum military ko powerful powerful bol rahe jabse. Military sirf lund hilane ke liye powerful nahi hai. World ki 5 sabse badi super powers mese ek military hi hai. Currently world me 5 super powers ka dabdaba hai jisme 4 original families aur 5th khud military hai, aur chuki yaha par military rule chalu hai to yaha ki government bhi ek tarah se military hi hai.
So the moral of the story is ki don't underestimate the power of the military.

Khair philhal sabhi students apne samne chal rahe scene ko dekh kar surprised the. Wo log is wakt abhi kisi hidden city me the jise unhone aaj se pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. Waha par jitne bhi log unhe dikh rahe the un sabhi ne military uniforms pehni hui thi, waha par ek se badh kar ek technological marvels the jo unhe apni ore attract kar rahe the.

Yaha ki technology aur engineering unke time ke hisab se bahut jyada advance thi. Yaha par work aur construction ke liye jagah jagah par robots ghoom rahe the. Kuchh giant robots crates ko utha kar yaha se waha kar rahe the to kuchh robots building machines ko control kar rahe the jo ek under construction building ke upar glass ke panel after panel rakhe ja rahi thi.

Waha par flying ships thi jo udte udte jameen ke itne paas aa ja rahi thi ki Vikram aur baki sabhi ko lag raha tha ki abhi ye kisi skyscraper se takra jaayegi aur niche streets par chal rahe logo ke upar kanch ki barsaat kar dengi. Halanki, aisa kuchh bhi nahi hua. Wo sabhi ships kisi perticular path ko follow kar rahi thi. Waha par hawa me tairti hui trains bhi thi, jo kisi invisible track par chal rahi thi. Kul milakar jis technology aur engineering ko aaj wo log witness kar rahe the is technology ke bare me outside world puri tarah se anjaan tha. Ye aisi technology thi jise ab tak outside world ko nahi diya gaya tha, military ise khud tak hi seemit rakhna chahti thi.

Dalki ke sath hui pehli war ke baad humans ne technological field me bahut tarakki kar li thi. Aur aisa isliye ho paya tha kyuki war khatam hone ke baad humans Dalki ke bahut se equipments ko salvage karne me kamyab ho gaye the. Iske baad madharchod military ne ye faisla kiya ki wo is technology ko khudke liye rakhenge. "Hume jo chize mili hain unme se kuchh public ke use karne ke hisab se kaphi khatarnak sabit ho sakti hain." Ye wo shabd the jo military ne war khatam hone ke baad aam janta se kahe the, ya ye kahe ki yahi bol kar military ne public ko chutiya banaya tha.

Abhi Vikram military ki tarakki ko dekh kar surprise ho hi raha tha jab use apni kalai par thoda sa weight feel hua. Jab usne apni kalai ko check kiya tab waha par ek watch bandhi hui thi, Ye ek tarah ki degital watch thi, lekin philhal usme kuchh bhi dikhai nahi de raha tha, wo watch abhi ekdum blank black thi.

"Tumhari wrist par bandhi hui wo chiz tumhari lifeline hai. Ye watch hi tumhe is military base par ek student ke roop me identify karegi. Iski help se tum kuchh certain areas ko access kar sakte ho, jaise ki apne food ke liye pay karna and dusri isi tarah ki chize. Ab sabse important chiz, jab ye wristwatch use me nahi hogi tab ye ek single digit ka number show karegi aur, yahi number tumhara power level hoga." Sergeant Griff ne watch ke usage ko explain karte huye kaha.

Lekin yaha Vikram ke chehre ko dekh kar lag raha tha jaise Griff abhi abhi koi unknown planet ki kisi unknown language me bakchodi karke chup hua ho. Vikram ne apne aas paas dekha to paya ki wo akela banda nahi tha jise Griff ki baaton ko samajhne me problem ho rahi thi, baki students ke chehro par bhi confusion saaf najar aa rahi thi.

Lekin jaise hi Vikram ko Griff ki baaton ka matalab samajh aaya vaise hi uske daant apas me bhid gaye aur mutthi apne aap hi kas uthi. Vikram ne socha tha ki shayad military school me aane ke baad uski life badal jayegi, lekin ab use ye ehsas ho raha tha ki sirf jagah badli hai, bakchodi nahi. Ye bilkul 'same bakchodi but different place' jaisa tha.
Tum log soch rahe hoge ki bc ye Vikram ko achanak kya hua jo Griff ki baaton ko sunkar aag babula ho gaya ek dam.
Tum log bc abhi tak na samjhe?
Ruko, samjhata hu! So imagine kro ki tum kisi magical world ke kisi magical school me padhte ho. Ye ek aisa school hai jaha sirf power matter karti hai, yaha jo powerful hote hain unki Pooja ki jati hai jabki jo kamjor hote hain unka majak udaya jata hai, unhe sataya jata hai. Ab agar tum khudko aisi jagah par imagine karoge to tum ye jarur chahoge ki tum ek powerful student ho, taki tumhari waha par roj gaand na mari jaye, lekin maze ki baat ye hai ki tumhare paas koi choice hi nahi hai, tum ek level 1 ke duble patle kamzor se student ho, ek aisa student jo bully hona sehan nahi kar sakta, tumhe ye bhi maloom hai ki agar tumne aawaz uthai to tumhari double gaand todi jayegi, lekin phir bhi aadat se majboor hokar tum unke khilaf aawaz uthate ho. Tum is roj roj ki bakchodi se pareshan ho chuke ho aur jaise taise karke tumhara school bhi khatam ho chuka hai. Ab time hai military academy ko join karne ka, kyuki tum jis world me rehte ho waha 18 years ki age ke baad 2 saal ki military training compulsory hai. Apni life ke is point par tum soch rahe hote ho ki ab tumhare paas ek mauka hai, takatvar bankar duniya ki maa chodne ka mauka. Lekin jab tum military academy me pahunchte ho tab tumhe pata chalta hai ki is academy aur tumhare us school me koi difference nahi hai.
Dono hi jagah jo chiz common hai wo hai ~ Power level system.
Dono hi jagaho par tumhari aukaat tumhare 'power level' se decide hoti hai.
Yaha par bhi tumse powerful log tumhare sath vaisa hi treatment karte hain jaisa ki tumhare us school me kiya karte the.
Ab zara socho ki tumhe kaisa lagega? kaisa lagta hai jab hume jis cheez se sabse jyada ummid ho wahi hume niraas kar de? Tumhe kaisa lagega jab tumhe ye pata chale ki jaha aakar tum puri duniya ki gaand maarne ka sapna dekh rahe the waha ek baar phir, tumhari khudki gaand marne wali ho?
Vikram ko bhi is wakt thik vaisa hi mehsoos ho raha tha jaisa ki tum kar rahe ho.

"Ab se thodi hi der baad hum tumhara power level check karenge. Isliye jab tak tumhe bulaya na jaye tab tak apni jagah se hilna nahi, understand?!" Sergeant Griff ne chehre par smile ke sath chillate huye kaha. Is wakt Sergeant ki us laude jaisi sakl par Smile ki decoration thi, aur isiliye chutiya hone ke baad bhi wo is wakt kisi Evil Monster ki tarah lag raha tha, ek aisa evil monster jo apne samne khade un nanhe munne bachcho ki maa chodne ko betaab ho.

"Good luck!!"


To be continued...



First of all sorry guys!! Update Sunday ko dene ka bola tha, but thoda issue ho gaya jis vajah se Sunday ko na de paya. But ye update pichhle sabhi updates se length me thoda bada hai.
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[ Military School ]


Ab tak...

"Ladke, immediately apna boria bistar bandho. Gadi already 5 minute se bahar wait kar rahi hai." Khadus Sergeant ne Vikram se kaha.

School, book aur system ke chakkar me Vikram ye to bhool hi gaya tha ki aaj kya hona hai.

"It's time for you to head to the military school," Sergeant ne Vikram se kaha.


Ab aage...

So jabse Dalki ne earth par aakar humans ki gaand todni suru ki thi tabhi se government ne pratyek individual ke liye chahe wo kisi bhi gender ka ho, 18 saal ka hone ke baad 2 years ki military training compulsory kar di thi. Vaise to Humans aur Dalki ke bich philhal ek peaceful period chal raha tha lekin bc iski koi guarantee nahi thi ki ye humesha aisa hi rahega. Ye Dalki's badi hi kutti chiz the, Bc ye trust karne layak hi nahi the, Inka koi bharosa nahi tha ki ye kab kya kar de. Dalki's universe ki kuchh un gini chuni species me se the jinke dimaag me power ka nasa aur juban par power ka chaska chada huaa tha. Ye us tarah ke log the jo apne se kamjor species ko dominate karna pasand karte the. Power ke liye inki hunger aur jinhe ye kamzor samajhte hain unhe control karne ki inki desire se paar pa pana kisi ke liye bhi tedi kheer thi.

Har dusre din news par bss yahi bakchodi chalti rehti thi, ki aaj isne usko ungli kar di aaj usne isko ungli kardi. Dono hi species war ki kagaar par khadi thi lekin inhe phir bhi gaand masti sujh rahi thi, aur yaha bc log baag bechare pareshan apne gharo me baithe the ki pata nahi kab kya ho jaye.

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Yaha Sergeant Griff ke sath niche jane se pehle Vikram phataphat laghusankaalay ( toilet ) ki taraf bhaga kyuki bc 2 litre pani pi lene ki vajah se uska bladder phatne ko ho gaya tha.

1 Number karne ke baad laghusankaalay se nikal kar apna room lock karke Vikram ne jaise hi apartment building se bahar kadam rakha to system ne use ek aisa surprise diya ki Vikram ki gaand phatne ko ho gai. Is wakt uski aankhon ke thik samne wahi notification screen thi aur us par kuchh messages dikhai de rahe the, aur wo messages the ~


[Your body is being hit by direct sunlight]

[You are affected by the sunlight]

[All stats will be halved while you are exposed to the sunlight]


Achanak hi Vikram ko apni body me bhayanak thakavat mehsoos hone lagi, use aisa lag raha tha jaise wo abhi abhi kisi marathon se daud kar aaya ho. Uske hath aur pair itne bhari feel hone lage ki unhe move karne bss me hi use gaand tak ka dam lagana pad raha tha.

Vikram ke achanak rukne aur aisi ajeeb harkate karne ki vajah se Sergeant Griff ne use ghoor kar dekha, jaise mano puchh raha ho ki, tujhe kya hua? Ruk kyu gaya?

"Tum thik to ho na, Ladke?" Sergeant ne Vikram se puchha aur khudko aise taiyar karne laga jaise Vikram abhi bhagega aur wo use turant hi lapak lega. Sergeant ka aisa sochna swabhavik bhi tha, kyuki har saal kuchh aise launde laundiya hote hi the jo jaate time koi na koi bakchodi karne ki koshish karte aur phir unhe forcefully leke jana padta tha.

Sergeant Vikram ko laude jaisi sakl liye ghoor raha tha jabki Vikram ka dhyan to kahi aur hi tha. Vikram apni responsibilities se bhagne walo mese nahi tha aur na hi uska aisa koi irada tha. Wo to abhi apne samne dikh rahi us screen ko dekhne me busy tha. Usne dekha ki na sirf uske stats down huye hain balki uski HP ( Health Points ) bhi almost half ho gai hai.


[HP 5/5]

[Strength 5/5]

[Stamina 5/5]

[Agility 5/5]


"System ki maa ki aankh! Aisa kon karta hai be?" Vikram ye baat zor se chilla kar bolna chahta tha lekin phir use realise hua ki uske alawa waha aur bhi log hain, aur majboori me use mann me hi system ko gali deke khudko sant karna pada.

"Ladke, tum sun bhi rahe ho?" Lauda Sergeant ek baar phir chillaya.

Lekin Vikram abhi bhi usi screen ko ghoore ja raha tha kyuki abhi abhi phirse us par kuchh naye notifications aaye the.


[You have received a new quest]

[Daily quest: Avoid direct sunlight for 8 hours]

[Reward: 5 Exp]


Jaise hi Vikram ne in notifications ko dekha to usne thodi rahat ki saans li. Vaise to water wali quest bhi easy hi thi but usme phir bhi Vikram ko thode efforts lagane pade the aur bc jo dard hua baad me so wo alag, lekin is quest ki khas baat ye thi ki ise Vikram raat me aaram se apne room me so kar bhi pura kar sakta tha, jo ki uske liye ek bahut badhiya baat thi because launde ko sona pasand hai, vaise sona kise pasand nahi?? Sabhi ko pasand hai bhai!
So theory ke hisab se agar system thik usi tarah work karta hai jaisa ki kisi RPG System type ke game me hota hai to ek baar jab Vikram 100 Exp ( Experience Points ) earn kar lega tab wo Level up kar sakta hai aur sath hi sath apne stats bhi increase kar sakta hai.

Yani isse ek baat saaf hai ki jitni daily quests Vikram ko milengi uske liya utna hi achha hai.

"Itne dheere dheere kyu chal raha hai, Nalayak?! Tere jaise shust ladke military school me ek din bhi nahi tik pate, agar yahi haal raha to school tujhe kachcha chaba jayega!" Is baar Sergeant Griff ki shakht aawaz ne apna kaam kar diya aur Vikram jo kisi gehri neend me tha wo apni soch se bahar nikal kar phirse asal duniya me aa gaya.

Vikram jaise taise karke apne apartment block ke paas me hi khadi ek large bus ke paas pahuncha, aur jab wo usme enter kiya to usne dekha ki us bus me uski hi age ke ( 18 years ) dher sare students already waha par baithe huye the. Vikram ne jab pichhe mudke dekha to paya ki Sergeant usse kuchh hi steps door apne dono hathon ko pichhe ki taraf bandhe huye kisi stone statue ki tarah khada use hi ghoor raha tha, even Vikram ko bhi ye realise nahi hua ki uske sath chalte chalte Sergeant kab ruk gaya.

Vikram wapas se bus ki taraf muda aur usne ek baar puri bus ko achhe se dekha. Itne students me aisa ek bhi banda ya bandi nahi thi jise Vikram pehchanta ho, means wo sabhi alag alag schools ke students the. Phir Vikram ne yaha waha apne baithne ke liye seat dhundi to usko bus ke front me ek seat dikhayi di, puri bus me wahi bss ek seat khali thi, baki almost puri bus students se bhari hui thi.

Building se bus tak ki doori bss kuchh 50 metres ki hi rahi hogi lekin itne me hi Vikram ko aisa feel ho raha tha jaise wo 5Km ki daud lga kar aaya ho.
Imagine karo ki aapne din bhar kuchh bhi nahi khaya ho aur sham hote hi aap 5 Km ki ek daud par nikal jayen aur waha se aane ke baad aapko 2 ghante gym bhi hit karni ho. Ab batao! Itna sab karne ke baad aapka kya haal hoga? Khas kar tab jab aap Vikram ki tarah ek duble patle sareer ke malik ho.
Bss aisa hi kuchh is wakt Vikram ko feel ho raha tha.

Khair jaise hi Vikram us seat par baitha, thik usi wakt uski aankhon ke samne system ki notification screen pop up ho gai aur usme likhe message ko padhkar Vikram ki jaan me jaan aai.


[Stats have returned to normal]

Is incident se ek baat clear ho gai thi ki direct sunlight me aate hi Vikram ke stats aur yaha tak ki uski HP bhi half ho jati hai aur jab wo direct sunlight me nahi hota to uske stats aur HP phirse normal hona start ho jate hain. Vikram apne stats ko phirse normal hota dekh kar khush tha, wo apni body me ek nayi energy ko feel kar pa raha tha use is wakt aisa lag raha tha jaise kisi ne uske upar se koi heavy weight utha liya ho.

"Bhenchod gaand marte marte bach gai aaj to! Achha hua bc ye keval direct sunlight me aane par hi hota hai, barna koi din win wala chakkar hota to laude lag jane the, ye bc system ka koi bharosa nahi, kya pta keh de ki din me bahar nikalna mana hai agar system ka kaha nahi mana to -2 HP per ghante ke hisab se kategi aur tab tak kategi jab tak tum is duniya se nahi katt lete. Fuck man!! This system is scary as fuck!" Vikram khudme hi pta na kya badbadaye ja raha tha.

Abhi sab students excitement ke sath aapas me baate kar hi rahe the jab wo lauda Sergeant bus me entry mara aur use dekhte hi bc sabhi ke muh aise band ho gaye jaise unke samne koi bhoot khada ho aur agar abhi unne kuchh bola to wo unki maa chod dega.

"Alright Students! Ab samay aa gaya hai ki hum military academy ki taraf badhe." Sergeant ne apni dabang aawaz me announce karte huye kaha aur ye ek tarah se bus driver ke liye bhi sanket tha, drive ne bhi Sergeant ki taraf dekh apni mundi hilayi aur bus ko start kar aage ki direction me drive karne laga.

Vikram samet bus me baithe un sabhi students ki aaj ek nayi journey start ho chuki thi aur ye journey jaha jakar khatam hone wali thi wo destination thi ~ Military Academy.

Bus chalna start kar chuki thi aur finally unki journey start ho chuki thi, lekin is journey ke dauraan puri bus me sannata chhaya raha, kyuki jab bhi koi student kuchh bolne ya aapas me bate karne ki koshish karta to Sergeant Griff use aisi laude jaisi sakl ke sath ghoorta ki unki bolti band ho jati thi aur phir wo gaand masti karne ki koshish bhi nahi karte the.

Bc Griff ko to unhe kuchh bolne ki bhi jarurat nahi padti thi, uske serious look ko dekh kar hi sabhi students samjh jate the ki wo unse kya chahta hai.

Abhi journey start huye sirf 10 minutes hi huye the jab Vikram ki aankhon ke samne phirse wahi notification screen pop up hui, system ne use kuchh naye notifications bheje the.


[A substance in the air has been detected]

[You are feeling sleepy]

[Resistance +1]


Vikram ko ye notifications kuchh ajeeb lage, kahi na kahi uske dimag ne use ye signal de diya tha ki bc yaha kuchh to bakchodi chal rahi hai. Vikram ne jab bus ke interior ko check karna suru kiya to usne dekha ki aadhe se jyada students already apni apni seats par ludhak chuke the aur aadhe abhi bhi jhapkiyan lete huye apni aankhon ko mal rahe the.

Achanak hi wo khud bhi thoda dizzy feel karne laga, usne isse fight karne ki bhi koshish ki lekin use aisa lag raha tha jaise uski body dheere dheere heavy hoti ja rahi ho.
Dheere dheere uski palke band hone lagi.


[Your resistance to the substance has increased]

[Resistance +1]


Lekin is notification ke sath hi uski consciousness dheere dheere wapas aane lgi. Use aisa mehsoos ho raha tha jaise uski body is unknown substance ko resist karne ki koshish kar rahi ho.

Abhi wo us unknown substance se ladne ki koshish kar hi raha tha jab use apni taraf kuchh loud footsteps aate huye sunayi diye. Jab Vikram ne apni adhkhuli aankhon ke sath upar dekha to waha koi aur nahi Sergeant Griff khada hua tha.

"Lagta hai ki tum mese kuchh logo ki body is sleeping gas ko resist kar sakti hai, Aur ab humaye paas tum logo ka chehra dhakne ke alawa aur koi option nahi hai.' Sergeant Griff ne Vikram ko dekhte huye kaha.

Uske baad un logo ne Vikram ke sarr ko ek black bag se dhakk diya jisse uska vision completely cover ho gaya aur ab use kuchh bhi dikahyi nahi de raha tha. Har beet'te pal gas ka asar badhta ja raha tha aur wo gas dheere dheere Vikram ki body par hawi hone lagi. Vikram ne bhi is baar haar maan li, aur wo ek gehri neend me so gaya.

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Kuchh samay baad, Vikram ko aisa mehsoos hua jaise kisi ne uske sarr pe thanda pani daal diya ho. Thande pani ne apna asar dikhaya aur dheere dheere Vikram ki aankhen khulne lagi. Aankhen khulte hi Vikram ne dekha ki wo kisi ghaas ke hare bhare maidan me pada hua tha.

Vikram ne apna sarr utha kar aas paas ke mahaul ko dekha to paya ki waha kuchh students the joki jaag chuke the aur unke sath kya hua tha aur abhi wo kaha hain is bare me soch rahe the jabki kuchh students abhi bhi unconscious hokar ground par pade huye the.

Dheere dheere karke baki students ko bhi hosh aane laga aur wo bhi confusion aur surprise ke mile jule expressions ke sath yaha waha dekh rahe the.

Vikram aur baki students ne jab achhe se sab kachu check kar liya tab unhone paya ki is wakt us plain open ground par 500 students khade huye the, lekin jis baat ne unhe sabse jyada chaukaya wo ye thi ki abhi wo jis jagah par khade huye the wo unke liye completely unknown thi, unhone is jagah ko dekhna to door kabhi iske bare me suna bhi nahi tha.

"Aaj se apni zindagi ke aane wale 2 saal tum sabhi isi jagah par bitaoge." Tabhi us khule maidan me Sergeant Griff ki wo dabang aawaz sunayi di.

Sergeant Griff ki baat ko sunkar sabhi students apne aas paas ki surroundings ko check karne lage. Ab tak almost sabhi students ke upar se us sleeping gas ka asar khatam ho chuka tha aur wo fully conscious the. Ab jab unhone thik se apne aas paas dekhna suru kiya tab unhe dikhai diya ki wo is wakt ek bahut hi bade hare bhare ghas ke maidan me khade huye the. Dekhne se aisa lag raha tha jaise ye ground kisi bahut hi bade campus ka hissa ho. Waha par keval wo green grass se bhara hua open plain ground hi nahi tha, uske alawa unke thik samne 3 huge, large aur futuristic buildings bhi bani hui thi. In buildings ki height almost 60 feet rahi hogi. Lekin us campus ki highlight un buildings ki height nahi thi, us campus ki highlight thi uska Area.
(Currently humare world ke hisab se dekha jaye to largest campus area wise ka title jata hai America ke "Berry College' ko.)
So agar area wise dekha jaye to military academy ka ye campus berry college se size me almost 1.5 guna jyada bada tha.
Yani agar roughly dekha jaye to ye campus almost Oceania Continent me sthit ek country Marshall Islands jitna tha. So ye kehna galat nahi hoga ki ye campus apne aap me hi ek country hai. Bc aise hi thodi na hum military ko powerful powerful bol rahe jabse. Military sirf lund hilane ke liye powerful nahi hai. World ki 5 sabse badi super powers mese ek military hi hai. Currently world me 5 super powers ka dabdaba hai jisme 4 original families aur 5th khud military hai, aur chuki yaha par military rule chalu hai to yaha ki government bhi ek tarah se military hi hai.
So the moral of the story is ki don't underestimate the power of the military.

Khair philhal sabhi students apne samne chal rahe scene ko dekh kar surprised the. Wo log is wakt abhi kisi hidden city me the jise unhone aaj se pehle kabhi nahi dekha tha. Waha par jitne bhi log unhe dikh rahe the un sabhi ne military uniforms pehni hui thi, waha par ek se badh kar ek technological marvels the jo unhe apni ore attract kar rahe the.

Yaha ki technology aur engineering unke time ke hisab se bahut jyada advance thi. Yaha par work aur construction ke liye jagah jagah par robots ghoom rahe the. Kuchh giant robots crates ko utha kar yaha se waha kar rahe the to kuchh robots building machines ko control kar rahe the jo ek under construction building ke upar glass ke panel after panel rakhe ja rahi thi.

Waha par flying ships thi jo udte udte jameen ke itne paas aa ja rahi thi ki Vikram aur baki sabhi ko lag raha tha ki abhi ye kisi skyscraper se takra jaayegi aur niche streets par chal rahe logo ke upar kanch ki barsaat kar dengi. Halanki, aisa kuchh bhi nahi hua. Wo sabhi ships kisi perticular path ko follow kar rahi thi. Waha par hawa me tairti hui trains bhi thi, jo kisi invisible track par chal rahi thi. Kul milakar jis technology aur engineering ko aaj wo log witness kar rahe the is technology ke bare me outside world puri tarah se anjaan tha. Ye aisi technology thi jise ab tak outside world ko nahi diya gaya tha, military ise khud tak hi seemit rakhna chahti thi.

Dalki ke sath hui pehli war ke baad humans ne technological field me bahut tarakki kar li thi. Aur aisa isliye ho paya tha kyuki war khatam hone ke baad humans Dalki ke bahut se equipments ko salvage karne me kamyab ho gaye the. Iske baad madharchod military ne ye faisla kiya ki wo is technology ko khudke liye rakhenge. "Hume jo chize mili hain unme se kuchh public ke use karne ke hisab se kaphi khatarnak sabit ho sakti hain." Ye wo shabd the jo military ne war khatam hone ke baad aam janta se kahe the, ya ye kahe ki yahi bol kar military ne public ko chutiya banaya tha.

Abhi Vikram military ki tarakki ko dekh kar surprise ho hi raha tha jab use apni kalai par thoda sa weight feel hua. Jab usne apni kalai ko check kiya tab waha par ek watch bandhi hui thi, Ye ek tarah ki degital watch thi, lekin philhal usme kuchh bhi dikhai nahi de raha tha, wo watch abhi ekdum blank black thi.

"Tumhari wrist par bandhi hui wo chiz tumhari lifeline hai. Ye watch hi tumhe is military base par ek student ke roop me identify karegi. Iski help se tum kuchh certain areas ko access kar sakte ho, jaise ki apne food ke liye pay karna and dusri isi tarah ki chize. Ab sabse important chiz, jab ye wristwatch use me nahi hogi tab ye ek single digit ka number show karegi aur, yahi number tumhara power level hoga." Sergeant Griff ne watch ke usage ko explain karte huye kaha.

Lekin yaha Vikram ke chehre ko dekh kar lag raha tha jaise Griff abhi abhi koi unknown planet ki kisi unknown language me bakchodi karke chup hua ho. Vikram ne apne aas paas dekha to paya ki wo akela banda nahi tha jise Griff ki baaton ko samajhne me problem ho rahi thi, baki students ke chehro par bhi confusion saaf najar aa rahi thi.

Lekin jaise hi Vikram ko Griff ki baaton ka matalab samajh aaya vaise hi uske daant apas me bhid gaye aur mutthi apne aap hi kas uthi. Vikram ne socha tha ki shayad military school me aane ke baad uski life badal jayegi, lekin ab use ye ehsas ho raha tha ki sirf jagah badli hai, bakchodi nahi. Ye bilkul 'same bakchodi but different place' jaisa tha.
Tum log soch rahe hoge ki bc ye Vikram ko achanak kya hua jo Griff ki baaton ko sunkar aag babula ho gaya ek dam.
Tum log bc abhi tak na samjhe?
Ruko, samjhata hu! So imagine kro ki tum kisi magical world ke kisi magical school me padhte ho. Ye ek aisa school hai jaha sirf power matter karti hai, yaha jo powerful hote hain unki Pooja ki jati hai jabki jo kamjor hote hain unka majak udaya jata hai, unhe sataya jata hai. Ab agar tum khudko aisi jagah par imagine karoge to tum ye jarur chahoge ki tum ek powerful student ho, taki tumhari waha par roj gaand na mari jaye, lekin maze ki baat ye hai ki tumhare paas koi choice hi nahi hai, tum ek level 1 ke duble patle kamzor se student ho, ek aisa student jo bully hona sehan nahi kar sakta, tumhe ye bhi maloom hai ki agar tumne aawaz uthai to tumhari double gaand todi jayegi, lekin phir bhi aadat se majboor hokar tum unke khilaf aawaz uthate ho. Tum is roj roj ki bakchodi se pareshan ho chuke ho aur jaise taise karke tumhara school bhi khatam ho chuka hai. Ab time hai military academy ko join karne ka, kyuki tum jis world me rehte ho waha 18 years ki age ke baad 2 saal ki military training compulsory hai. Apni life ke is point par tum soch rahe hote ho ki ab tumhare paas ek mauka hai, takatvar bankar duniya ki maa chodne ka mauka. Lekin jab tum military academy me pahunchte ho tab tumhe pata chalta hai ki is academy aur tumhare us school me koi difference nahi hai.
Dono hi jagah jo chiz common hai wo hai ~ Power level system.
Dono hi jagaho par tumhari aukaat tumhare 'power level' se decide hoti hai.
Yaha par bhi tumse powerful log tumhare sath vaisa hi treatment karte hain jaisa ki tumhare us school me kiya karte the.
Ab zara socho ki tumhe kaisa lagega? kaisa lagta hai jab hume jis cheez se sabse jyada ummid ho wahi hume niraas kar de? Tumhe kaisa lagega jab tumhe ye pata chale ki jaha aakar tum puri duniya ki gaand maarne ka sapna dekh rahe the waha ek baar phir, tumhari khudki gaand marne wali ho?
Vikram ko bhi is wakt thik vaisa hi mehsoos ho raha tha jaisa ki tum kar rahe ho.

"Ab se thodi hi der baad hum tumhara power level check karenge. Isliye jab tak tumhe bulaya na jaye tab tak apni jagah se hilna nahi, understand?!" Sergeant Griff ne chehre par smile ke sath chillate huye kaha. Is wakt Sergeant ki us laude jaisi sakl par Smile ki decoration thi, aur isiliye chutiya hone ke baad bhi wo is wakt kisi Evil Monster ki tarah lag raha tha, ek aisa evil monster jo apne samne khade un nanhe munne bachcho ki maa chodne ko betaab ho.

"Good luck!!"


To be continued...



First of all sorry guys!! Update Sunday ko dene ka bola tha, but thoda issue ho gaya jis vajah se Sunday ko na de paya. But ye update pichhle sabhi updates se length me thoda bada hai.
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