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Shukriya dost kafi khusi huiHi there kisi b story pe ye Mera first cmnt hai wo is liye k pehle kabhi kissi site pe register hi nahi ta Xossip pe aap ki jo pehle story read Kari ti wo ti Beta ye tune kya kiya yehi se meri apki writing ko le kr dilchadpi bari bohat hi achi story ti khas kr jab madhav ki maa ghayab hoi kafi interesting mor ta story ka lakin us k bad story band kr d ap ne bbohat arse tak intezar kia restart hone ka hoi b pr kc khas result na mila khair baat kru is story ki to pehle to laga k incest hai to sex k ilawa kia rakha ho ga bohat baar Nazar andaaz kia lakin jab read kari to samajh me aya bohat hi achi story likhi ap ne apki writing ka to pehle se hi kayal ta but us k bad to bs kia bataon bohat acha likhte ho ap bohat acha mesoos kr raha hun k Mai first time kissi writer se us ki story se related apni feeling share kr raha hun
Arti wali story b zbrdst ti hero ka nam kc khas yad nahi bs itna kahun ga k bs ese hi likhte rahiye time to time see you
Sirf sex based likhna toh mujhe aata hi nai sab kahani ki apni ek theme hai usi p likhta hu ye baat alag hai ki vo lambi ho jati hai aur beta tu ne kya kiya ki baat toh usse b suru karunga par samai toh lagega dost kai navo p pair ek sath rakh diya hai maine yahi galti hai meri toh paar toh dhere dheere hi lagna hai...
Aur arti vali story ka hero ka naam raja ya fir atal kahiye hai...