I am new here so I will follow your instruction . Thanks for comments and suggestionsbhai story aapki mast hai.......bas do ek baat aapko kehna chahunga....ek story eyse chote chote update maat do..........post edit karke usime add karskte ho...
dushri baad bhai......eyse ek paragraph pe sab maat likha kro.....jab bhi ma bete k beech me koi baat ho rhi ho(means dialogue) toh usse next line by line likhe iss story ki quality up ho gyegi......baki app dekh log jaysa appko likhne m aashani ho.............agar thik na lage toh iss comments ko ignore kar do.
isse pichli update edit karke add karo ya fir note pad par like k rakho eksth update dena nehi toh isse log commend samjh lenge.Aur iss tarah do no nind ki aagosh me chale gaye. Subeh sabse pehle sunita ki nind khuli aur raat ki incident k baaren me sochkar sochne lagi kaise apne bete ka samna karegi. Fir jaldi jaldi uth k wo nahane ke baad Puja Kiya aur kitchen me chali gayi chai banane.