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Wasay pahly baar aysa laga hay yea update purh kay kay aap nay comments dekh kay kahani koo mura hay maray hesab say tuu belawajah sa luga hay lakain aap kee marzi writer aap hay juu jasa sahi sumjhay
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amita ji, the dream written by you seems like a reality. Your writing is worth it. Although it was a dream but the dream was very beautiful. Neha and Amit's love, and the activities between the two were very good.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...
Aap ek bahut hi ache aur jagruk pathak hain jo hamesha hi lekhak ko protsahit karte rahte hain, aapka shukriya ada karna aapki tauhin hogi.
Aapka vishleshan man ko choo lene wala hai, bahut bahut dhanayavad.
Aapka vishleshan man ko choo lene wala hai, bahut bahut dhanayavad.
Amita jee ab bhi kahoo kay main belawajah kee tareef kurta hun dekhoo bhala hum koo kasay pagel kurdeya thaa woo madhur melap dekha kay or new update main woo sub kuch saaf haa Sarita kay dil main Amit kaa pyar buss gaya hay gahrai tuk dekhoo kub ezhar hut hay kub iqrar huta hay kub aak dujay koo qabool kurty hay Neha say iqrar tuu huu gaya dekhay woo tesri bivi kub bunty hay,
Wasay main such hee tuu kahta hun aap jadoo kurty huu hur hur update main jadoo rucha huta hay pel main rukh badal jata hay
Aap aisa keh sakte hain, lekin aisa bilkul bhi nahi hai kyounki kahani ka plot pehle se hi aisa tha.
Pathko ki rai sarvopari hai, lekin unki rai kis had tak original story me sammahit ki ja sakti hai, yeh jarur kiya jata hai, lekin plot kabhi bhi change nahi hota hai
Aapko pasand nahi aaya uske liye main itna hi kanhugi ki aage aapki icchaon ka samman kiya jayega
Dhanayvad
Pathko ki rai sarvopari hai, lekin unki rai kis had tak original story me sammahit ki ja sakti hai, yeh jarur kiya jata hai, lekin plot kabhi bhi change nahi hota hai
Aapko pasand nahi aaya uske liye main itna hi kanhugi ki aage aapki icchaon ka samman kiya jayega
Dhanayvad