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Thanks so much and next update will come soon
Due to Amit's mother's dream, Amit's mother's reputation, love and attitude towards Amit has changed. Since Rekha has gone, there is no news about it, so tell me about Rekha. Neha and Amit make a good excuse in front of Mother. Seeing the love of both, the heart was happy. Neha is a little worried about some things, but her problems will soon go away.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story. Thank You...
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Maine uski baat sunkar use banhon me bharkar bilkul apane upar khinch liya aur uske galon ko chumbano se bhar diya aur uski aankho ko chumte hue kaha "I Love you meri Jaan aur Jàan ko koi apane se alag nahi kar sakta"
Meri baat sunkar Neha bhi bhavuk ho gai aur vo bhi mujhe mere chere par chumne lagi aur uske jo hath meri gardan par the vo meri peeth par panhuch kar mujhe sehlane lage. Uskei chuchiyan meri chahti par ragad kha rahi thi jisse arman bhadkane lage, uska halka sa sharir mere upar aa gaya tha jiski sugandh me main madhosh hota ja raha tha Mere hath uski bagal se jakar uski peeth ko kaskar chiptaye hue the aur use apani aur.khinch raha tha, vo bhi mujh me samane ko aatur thi. Ham donon ke sharir aapas me kafi jor se jude hue the balki gunthe hue the aur uski aankhon me pyar hi pyar nazar aa raha tha tu maine uski thudhi ko upar karke pehle uske mathe par apne honth rakh diye aur fir unhe chuma tu uski aankhe band ho gayi. Maine apane honth bari bari se uski aankhon par lejakar unko chuma aur fir uske galon par aa gaya. Har bar jab mere honthon ka saparsh use hota jo usko romanchit kar raha tha kyounki jab bhi yeh hota tha tu vo mujhse aur jayada chipak jati thi. uske chipakne se uske urojon ki ragad aur uski hateliyon ka Meri peeth per dabav badna bata raha tha ki use in sab mein maja aa raha hai aur uske bhav bata rahe the ki vah is sab ko enjoy kar rahi thi aur uska man chaha raha tha ki yah Pal kabhi khatm na ho. Maine Neha ki peeth ko sehalate hue puccha
A: kaisa lag raha hai
N: dil kar raha hai hi ki puri jindagi aise hi aapki bahon mein rahun
A: agar tum hamesha aise hi meri banhon me rahogi tu fir vo sab kaam kaise karogi
N: Kaam, kaise kaam
A: Are bahut sare kaam hain, jab tum bilkul nahi chohogi ki tum meri banhon me ho
N: Main aisa bilkul nahi chanhugi ki main akele ranhu
A: (Uski aankhon me dekhte hue) Sacchi, vo kaam karte hue bhi meri banhon me rehna chahogi.
N: koun se kaam
A: Kapde badalna, washroom me fresh hona, nahana aur aise hi bahut sare kaam hain
N: aap bahut gande ho
A: Accha main ganda hu, fir bhi meri banhon me rehna chahti ho
N: Mera vo matlab nahi tha
A: matlab meri banhon me nahi rehna ya main ganda nahi hu
N: mujhe aapki banhon me bhi nahi rehna aur aap gande bhi ho
Yeh kehkar vo apane aap ko mujh se chudhane lagi aur mujhse alag hokar khadi ho gayi tu maine uski kalai pakad li aur maine use apani aur khincha tu vo virodh karne lagi lekin mere aage uski kanha chalni thi. Main bhi khadha ho gaya aur use apani aur ghumakar kehne laga "bus itna hi vishwas hai apne janu per, thoda sa majak Kya Kiya ki tum to naraj ho gai aur vaise kehti ho ki main Puri jindagi aapki bahon mein rahana chahti hu."
N: Mujhe aap chhodo Mujhse bahut badi galti ho gai jo maine aisa Socha aaj ke bad main aisa nahin kahungi
A: (Maine usko gale laga liya aur woh kasmasane lagi) madam nahin hai na vishwas mujhpar, isiliye gussa ho gayi. Mazak sehan nahi hota aur fir dukh kaise sahogi, sirf mujhe tumhe yahi samjhana tha.
N: Mazak, aap mujhse mazak kar rahe the, nahi aap tu serious the aur aapko mujhse nahi balki mere sahrir se pyar hai.
A: (Uski baat sunkar mujhe jhatka laga aur ekdam se usko chhod diya) Madam Neha I am really very sorry agar maine aapko hurt kiya hai tu, vaise aapki jankari ke liye bata du ki maine aapse pyar kiya hai na ki aapke sharir se, fir bhi agar aapke dil me yeh baat baith gayi hai tu aapka bahut bahut dhanyavad, chaliye main aapko janha aap kanhe chhod deta hu.
N: Nahi aap taklif na karen, main chali jaungi.
A: Madam aap taklif nahi hain, balki meri jimmewari hain jab tak aapki Mom vapis nahi aa jati aur unke vapis aane ke baad main jaisa ki aap chahti hainain chala jaunga, lekin unke aane tak aap akele nahi ranhegi.
N: Main tu uske baad bhi akele nahi rehna chahoungi
A: Vo aap kaise kar sakti hain kyounki main tu aapse nahi balki aapke sharir se pyar karta hu.
N: Agar aapne mujhe aap kaha tu main aapko kaat lungi, main aapse choti hu
A: Aap mujhse choti kanha hai, aap tu bahut badi hain isliye tu aap mujhe parvachan deti hain aur aadesh deti hain ki mujhe kya karna chahiye aur kya nahi.
N: Maine aapko kab aadesh diya
A: abhi tu bola na ki main aapke sharir ko na chunhu aur maine aapka aadesh maan liya hain
N: Mera vo matlab nahi tha
A: Madam main Matlab ki teh tak nahi jata, jo aapne kaha maine maan liya aur yeh mera aapse vada hai ki main aapke sharir ko ab nahi chunhuga
N: Matlab ki aapne bata diya na ki aap mujhse pyar nahi karte
A: Madam, maine yeh kab kaha ki main aapse pyar nahi karta
N: abhi tu aapne kaha
A: Maine kaha ki main aapke sharir ko nahi chunuga kyounki aapka aadesh hai, lekin aapse pyar karna mere Dil ka aadesh hai jo ki main hamesha manta hu aur aapki jankari ke liye bata du ki main aapse pyar karta tha, karta hu aur karta ranhuga
N: (subakate hue) fir mujhe tang kyoun karte ho
A: Maine tu aapko koi tang nahi kiya hai aur dusri baat jab tak aapki mom nahi aa jati tu main aapko tang karne ki soch bhi mahi sakta kyounki aapki sari preshaniayan tab tak meri hain
N: Agar aap mujhse pyar karte ho to fir satate kyoun ho
A: pehli baat tu aapko mujhpar vishwas hi nahi hain ki main aapse pyar karta hu, dusri baat satana vo bhi aapko ye shayad main sapne me bhi nahi kar paunga
N: abhi kaha thodhi der pehle kaha tha na aapne ki "vo kaam karte hue bhi meri banhon me rahogi'
A: Is baat me satana kanha se aa gaya, balki aapne hi kaha ki main ganda hu
N: aur nahi tu kya koi aise bhi sochata hai ki jisse pyar karte ho use nanga karke apani banho me rakhana chahte ho
A: Pehli baat tu maine kabhi nahi kaha ki main aapko nanga karna chahta hu, balki maine tu aapki baat par prasahan kiya tha ki vo kaam karte hue bhi meri banhon me rehna chahogi, jisme tumhe na ki mujhe kapde utarane hote hain. Batao maine kanha kuch galat kaha aur kaise sataya, yeh sab tu aapke dimagh me aaya na ki mere.
N: aapne aisa nahi socha
A: abhi tak tu nahi socha lekin ab tu maine vaada bhi kar diya hai ki aapke sharir ko nahi chuhunga tu ho sakta hai mai ab imagine karunga ki meri jaan ka nagan sharir jab meri banhon me hoga tu kaisa lagega
N: (sharm aur gusse se) aapko sharam.nahi aayegi aisa karte hue
A: Log tu yeh sab haqiquat me karte hain, main tu sirf kwaboh me hi karunga jisse aapko koi taklif bhi nahi hogi
N: nahi aap aisa nahi karoge
A: Madam aapka jor mujhpar chal sakta hai na ki mere khawabo par, isliye yeh tu main pakka hi karunga aur khawabo me bahut kuch karunga.
N: kya karoge
A: vah sab aapke janne ke liye nahi hai.
Neha meri taraf lapki aur mere hath ko pakad kar meri kalai par kaat khaya
A: (aaaaa......hhhhh.. ..aaaaaaa) ye kya kiya
N: aap baar baar mujhe aap bol ranhe hain na aur maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki agar mujhe aap bologe tu kaat khaungi
A: Jangli billi
N: Haan hun, jangli billi, ab iss billi se bach kar rehna
Maine uski baat sunkar use banhon me bharkar bilkul apane upar khinch liya aur uske galon ko chumbano se bhar diya aur uski aankho ko chumte hue kaha "I Love you meri Jaan aur Jàan ko koi apane se alag nahi kar sakta"
Meri baat sunkar Neha bhi bhavuk ho gai aur vo bhi mujhe mere chere par chumne lagi aur uske jo hath meri gardan par the vo meri peeth par panhuch kar mujhe sehlane lage. Uskei chuchiyan meri chahti par ragad kha rahi thi jisse arman bhadkane lage, uska halka sa sharir mere upar aa gaya tha jiski sugandh me main madhosh hota ja raha tha Mere hath uski bagal se jakar uski peeth ko kaskar chiptaye hue the aur use apani aur.khinch raha tha, vo bhi mujh me samane ko aatur thi. Ham donon ke sharir aapas me kafi jor se jude hue the balki gunthe hue the aur uski aankhon me pyar hi pyar nazar aa raha tha tu maine uski thudhi ko upar karke pehle uske mathe par apne honth rakh diye aur fir unhe chuma tu uski aankhe band ho gayi. Maine apane honth bari bari se uski aankhon par lejakar unko chuma aur fir uske galon par aa gaya. Har bar jab mere honthon ka saparsh use hota jo usko romanchit kar raha tha kyounki jab bhi yeh hota tha tu vo mujhse aur jayada chipak jati thi. uske chipakne se uske urojon ki ragad aur uski hateliyon ka Meri peeth per dabav badna bata raha tha ki use in sab mein maja aa raha hai aur uske bhav bata rahe the ki vah is sab ko enjoy kar rahi thi aur uska man chaha raha tha ki yah Pal kabhi khatm na ho. Maine Neha ki peeth ko sehalate hue puccha
A: kaisa lag raha hai
N: dil kar raha hai hi ki puri jindagi aise hi aapki bahon mein rahun
A: agar tum hamesha aise hi meri banhon me rahogi tu fir vo sab kaam kaise karogi
N: Kaam, kaise kaam
A: Are bahut sare kaam hain, jab tum bilkul nahi chohogi ki tum meri banhon me ho
N: Main aisa bilkul nahi chanhugi ki main akele ranhu
A: (Uski aankhon me dekhte hue) Sacchi, vo kaam karte hue bhi meri banhon me rehna chahogi.
N: koun se kaam
A: Kapde badalna, washroom me fresh hona, nahana aur aise hi bahut sare kaam hain
N: aap bahut gande ho
A: Accha main ganda hu, fir bhi meri banhon me rehna chahti ho
N: Mera vo matlab nahi tha
A: matlab meri banhon me nahi rehna ya main ganda nahi hu
N: mujhe aapki banhon me bhi nahi rehna aur aap gande bhi ho
Yeh kehkar vo apane aap ko mujh se chudhane lagi aur mujhse alag hokar khadi ho gayi tu maine uski kalai pakad li aur maine use apani aur khincha tu vo virodh karne lagi lekin mere aage uski kanha chalni thi. Main bhi khadha ho gaya aur use apani aur ghumakar kehne laga "bus itna hi vishwas hai apne janu per, thoda sa majak Kya Kiya ki tum to naraj ho gai aur vaise kehti ho ki main Puri jindagi aapki bahon mein rahana chahti hu."
N: Mujhe aap chhodo Mujhse bahut badi galti ho gai jo maine aisa Socha aaj ke bad main aisa nahin kahungi
A: (Maine usko gale laga liya aur woh kasmasane lagi) madam nahin hai na vishwas mujhpar, isiliye gussa ho gayi. Mazak sehan nahi hota aur fir dukh kaise sahogi, sirf mujhe tumhe yahi samjhana tha.
N: Mazak, aap mujhse mazak kar rahe the, nahi aap tu serious the aur aapko mujhse nahi balki mere sahrir se pyar hai.
A: (Uski baat sunkar mujhe jhatka laga aur ekdam se usko chhod diya) Madam Neha I am really very sorry agar maine aapko hurt kiya hai tu, vaise aapki jankari ke liye bata du ki maine aapse pyar kiya hai na ki aapke sharir se, fir bhi agar aapke dil me yeh baat baith gayi hai tu aapka bahut bahut dhanyavad, chaliye main aapko janha aap kanhe chhod deta hu.
N: Nahi aap taklif na karen, main chali jaungi.
A: Madam aap taklif nahi hain, balki meri jimmewari hain jab tak aapki Mom vapis nahi aa jati aur unke vapis aane ke baad main jaisa ki aap chahti hainain chala jaunga, lekin unke aane tak aap akele nahi ranhegi.
N: Main tu uske baad bhi akele nahi rehna chahoungi
A: Vo aap kaise kar sakti hain kyounki main tu aapse nahi balki aapke sharir se pyar karta hu.
N: Agar aapne mujhe aap kaha tu main aapko kaat lungi, main aapse choti hu
A: Aap mujhse choti kanha hai, aap tu bahut badi hain isliye tu aap mujhe parvachan deti hain aur aadesh deti hain ki mujhe kya karna chahiye aur kya nahi.
N: Maine aapko kab aadesh diya
A: abhi tu bola na ki main aapke sharir ko na chunhu aur maine aapka aadesh maan liya hain
N: Mera vo matlab nahi tha
A: Madam main Matlab ki teh tak nahi jata, jo aapne kaha maine maan liya aur yeh mera aapse vada hai ki main aapke sharir ko ab nahi chunhuga
N: Matlab ki aapne bata diya na ki aap mujhse pyar nahi karte
A: Madam, maine yeh kab kaha ki main aapse pyar nahi karta
N: abhi tu aapne kaha
A: Maine kaha ki main aapke sharir ko nahi chunuga kyounki aapka aadesh hai, lekin aapse pyar karna mere Dil ka aadesh hai jo ki main hamesha manta hu aur aapki jankari ke liye bata du ki main aapse pyar karta tha, karta hu aur karta ranhuga
N: (subakate hue) fir mujhe tang kyoun karte ho
A: Maine tu aapko koi tang nahi kiya hai aur dusri baat jab tak aapki mom nahi aa jati tu main aapko tang karne ki soch bhi mahi sakta kyounki aapki sari preshaniayan tab tak meri hain
N: Agar aap mujhse pyar karte ho to fir satate kyoun ho
A: pehli baat tu aapko mujhpar vishwas hi nahi hain ki main aapse pyar karta hu, dusri baat satana vo bhi aapko ye shayad main sapne me bhi nahi kar paunga
N: abhi kaha thodhi der pehle kaha tha na aapne ki "vo kaam karte hue bhi meri banhon me rahogi'
A: Is baat me satana kanha se aa gaya, balki aapne hi kaha ki main ganda hu
N: aur nahi tu kya koi aise bhi sochata hai ki jisse pyar karte ho use nanga karke apani banho me rakhana chahte ho
A: Pehli baat tu maine kabhi nahi kaha ki main aapko nanga karna chahta hu, balki maine tu aapki baat par prasahan kiya tha ki vo kaam karte hue bhi meri banhon me rehna chahogi, jisme tumhe na ki mujhe kapde utarane hote hain. Batao maine kanha kuch galat kaha aur kaise sataya, yeh sab tu aapke dimagh me aaya na ki mere.
N: aapne aisa nahi socha
A: abhi tak tu nahi socha lekin ab tu maine vaada bhi kar diya hai ki aapke sharir ko nahi chuhunga tu ho sakta hai mai ab imagine karunga ki meri jaan ka nagan sharir jab meri banhon me hoga tu kaisa lagega
N: (sharm aur gusse se) aapko sharam.nahi aayegi aisa karte hue
A: Log tu yeh sab haqiquat me karte hain, main tu sirf kwaboh me hi karunga jisse aapko koi taklif bhi nahi hogi
N: nahi aap aisa nahi karoge
A: Madam aapka jor mujhpar chal sakta hai na ki mere khawabo par, isliye yeh tu main pakka hi karunga aur khawabo me bahut kuch karunga.
N: kya karoge
A: vah sab aapke janne ke liye nahi hai.
Neha meri taraf lapki aur mere hath ko pakad kar meri kalai par kaat khaya
A: (aaaaa......hhhhh.. ..aaaaaaa) ye kya kiya
N: aap baar baar mujhe aap bol ranhe hain na aur maine pehle bhi kaha tha ki agar mujhe aap bologe tu kaat khaungi
A: Jangli billi
N: Haan hun, jangli billi, ab iss billi se bach kar rehna
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