Aisa lagta hai story ko reach milna band Hui hai
Logon Ko achcha nahin lagega Harshvardhan aur rani Kadambari mai incest wala piyar dikhayo ge to...
Harshvardhan Marne se pahle jis ladki ka varnan diya tha vah varnan Rani Kadambari ko nahi kisi aur ladki ko dikhao....
plot thora change Karo
Bass Rani Kadambari aur chhote Yuvraj mein hi pyar dikhao
1.Story ko tharki mat banayo*
1. Maharaja ne Rani Kadambari ko kabhi Samman nahin diya pyar to dur ki baat*
2. Harshvardhan ( bara beta jo ki mar chuka hai) Harshvardhan aur rani maa Kadambari k Madhya sirf maa bete wala pyar dikhao*
3. Sirf chhote Yuvraj aur Kadambari ke bich pure beinteha pyar dikhao, bahut romance purani samay ki erotic romance dikhayo*
4. Thriller*
5. Thoda sa suspense jyada nahin*
BaKi aap bhi writer Ho
Aapki second story "ek sacche pyar ki Kahani 2" bahut acchi rahi thi.