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Bhai kya story likhi hai mind blowing jaise chal raha hai chalne do aisa kahani ki romantic bana ki maa khud bete ki bole u love you aur mai tumhare bachche ki maa banne ki taiyar hunUpdate 14Kuch hi dino me, Mumbai ki tez zindagi meri aadat ban gayi thi. Subah college jaata, din ke waqt Mausaji ke hospital aur unki factories me unke sath kaam karta,
jo mere liye personal teaching jaisa tha, aur shaam ko gym jaata
— bas yehi mera naya routine tha. Dheere dheere waqt beetne laga, aur mera MBBS course chal raha tha. Mumbai mujhe andar se badal rahi thi—main us nasamajh ladke se ek samajhdar, mature aadmi ban raha tha. Is naye sheher ne mujhe ek sakhti de di thi jo pehle kabhi mehsoos nahi hui thi.
In dino me, main kabhi Pune wapas nahi gaya. Ghar se kabhi kabar calls aate, lekin main sirf papa aur apni behno se thodi bahut baat karta lekin Maa se koi baat nahi hoti thi, na main chahta tha. Kabhi kabhi unhone koshish ki phone lekar mujhse baat karne ki, lekin main ya to koi bahaana banakar phone kaat deta, ya phir bas "haan" ya "hmm" keh kar baat khatam kar deta.
Sach yeh tha ki main ab kaafi badal chuka tha, lekin jo ek cheez kabhi nahi badli thi, wo tha Maa ke liye mera sachcha pyaar. Main jo kuch kar raha tha, uske peeche sirf ek hi wajah thi— meri Maa meri Radha. Har pal, har mehnat, sab kuch sirf unhe apna banane ke liye tha, aur apne aap ko unke layak banane ke liye.
Main us dard aur doori ko apni taqat bana raha tha, aur Mumbai ki har choti-badi cheez ko apne sapne ke nazariye se dekh raha tha.
Waqt apni raftaar se aage badhta raha, aur main apne MBBS ke teesre saal me aa gaya. Ek shaam — Mausaji, Mausi, aur main — unke ghar ke hall me baithe the.
Mausaji aur main roz ki tarah kaam ki baatein kar rahe the aur mausi humari baate bas chup chap sun rahi thi, jab achanak Rahul wahan aaya aur ek khushkhabri sunai.
Rahul ne muskurate hue kaha,
“Mom, Dad... mera selection Cambridge University me ho gaya hai.”
Mausaji ki aankhein chamak uthi,
“Kya? Sacchi? That’s amazing, beta!”
Mausi apne haath jodte hue boli, “Bhagwaan ka lakh lakh shukr hai! Mere bete ki mehnat rang laayi.”
Main bhi Rahul ko gale lagate hue bola, “Mubarak ho, Rahul Bhaiya! Aapki mehnat ne safal hui.”
Rahul apni khushi chhupa nahi pa raha tha, “Shukriya sabko, main aaj bahut khush hoon.”
Mausaji ne phir kaha, “Aise kaam nahi chalega! Is khushi me hum ek badi party rakhenge.”
Maine Rahul se poocha,
“Rahul Bhaiya, kitna waqt hai aapke paas U.K. jaane se pehle?”
Rahul thoda sa muskuraya aur hath ke ishare se plan banate hue kaha,
“Sirf 2 hafte, phir main sidha England.”
Mausi thodi hairaan hui,
“Sirf 2 hafte…?”
Rahul ne apne andaaz me kaha,
“Haan mom, aur Dad, main soch raha hoon ki kyun na hum koi party na dein, balki is dauran sab milkar ek trip par chalein. Mere liye bhi yaadein ban jaayengi.”
Rahul ki yeh baat sunkar sab ke chehre par ek nayi muskan thi.
Mausaji ne turant Rahul ki baat maan li aur khushi se bole,
"Theek hai, beta... Batao kahan chalna hai."
Rahul ne thoda soch kar jawab diya,
"Malaysia chaltein hain, Dad."
Mausaji ne agree karte hue kaha,
"Wah, badhiya choice hai! Main abhi 4 tickets book karta hoon."
Yeh sunte hi maine thoda ghabraate hue kaha,
"Are, Mausaji, aap meri ticket kyun book kar rahe hain?"
Tabhi Mausi ne kaha,
"Kyun, Raaj beta? Tu bhi toh chalega na?"
Maine thoda hichkichaate hue kaha,
"Mausi, main kya karunga wahan? Aap logon ko pareshani hogi."
Mausi ne meri taraf dekha aur thodi narazgi se boli,
"Matlab tu ne sabit kar diya ki tu mujhe paraaya samajhta hai? Kya main teri maa jaisi nahi hoon, jo apne hi bache ko pareshani mehsoos karoon?"
Main kuch kehne hi wala tha,
"Lekin, Maus..."
Tabhi Mausaji ne beech me rok diya,
"Koi 'par-war' nahi. Main ticket book kar raha hoon, aur tum chal rahe ho. And that's final."
Usi waqt, Mausi ne ek aur raaye di,
"Suniye ji, main kya soch rahi hoon... Kyun na meri behan Radha aur Raaj ke Papa aur iski behno ko bhi saath le chalein? Raaj ko unse mile kitna waqt ho gaya hai. Agar poora pariwaar ek saath hoga, toh kitna maza aayega!"
Mausaji hanste hue bola,
"Wah, badhiya soch hai, patni ji! Aap din-ba-din aur samajhdar hoti ja rahi hain."
Mausi bhi haste hue boli,
"Aakhri patni kiski hoon."
Maa ka naam sunte hi mere dil dhak se room sa gaya... Ab Maa bhi wahan trip par mere saath hogi. Main sochne laga, wo mujhe dekh kar kaise react karegi? Maine itne dino se na unhe dekha hai, na baat ki hai.
Lekin in sab cheezon se zyada, ek sawaal mere zehan me aaya: Kya main unhe dekh kar apne dil ke jazbaat kabu kar paunga?
Kya hoga jab main us khubsurat chehre ko fir se apni ankhon ke samne dekhunga jisse mujhe ishq hua hai. Aur Sab kuch jo main ab tak kar raha hoon, Maa ke liye hi toh kar raha hoon. Ab main beech me tutna nahi chahta.
Dosto mujhe ganuine comments and feedback chahiye. Agar aap log sach meri story padh rahe hai toh apne sachhe khayal batao. Warna main samjhunga ki logo ko is kahani me interest nahi hai aur main ise band kar dunga.
Kya story he...best writing... very eroticUpdate 7Maa ekdum gusse se bhari hui thi, jo abhi abhi hua usse woh abhi tak samajh nahi paayi thi. Unke chehre par hairani, gussa aur dard saaf dikh raha tha. Jaise hi unhone mujhe dekha, gusse me ek zor ka thappad mara aur bina kuch kahe wahaan se nikal gayi.
Main wahaan sann sa khada reh gaya, mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaya. Us thappad ke baad bhi main usi jagah par kuch der khada raha, jaise apne hi faisle ko samajhne ki koshish kar raha hoon. Phir, jab hosh aaya, to maine Maa ko fir se dhoondhna shuru kiya.
Ghar ke kone-kone me dhoondha, par woh kahin nazar nahi aayi. Dil me ghabrahat si ho rahi thi. Tabhi maine apni behno se puchha,
"Maa kahaan hai?"
Unhone kaha,
"Bhaiya, Maa chat par chali gayi hai."
Main bhi bina samay gawaye seedha chat par pahucha. Maa wahan akeli thi, apne chehre ko dono haathon se chhupa kar ro rahi thi.
Unke aansu uske haathon ke beech se nikal kar unke kapdon par gir rahe the. Unka dard mere dil ko cheer raha tha. Main dheere se unke kareeb gaya.
Jaise hi Maa ne mujhe apne paas aate dekha, woh ghabra kar door jaane lagi. Maine ekdum se unka haath pakad liya aur kaha,
"Radha, kahan ja rahi ho? Ruko, meri baat toh suno."
Maa mere muh se apna naam sun kar chonk gayi aur Maa ne apni aankhon se aansu pochhte hue kaha,
"Kamine, ab tu mujhe naam se bulaega? Tune mujhe khain ka nahi chhoda."
Unke shabd jaise mere dil par teer ki tarah lage. Mere saare sapne, saari kalpanayein unke in lafzon se bikhar gayi thi. Par main apne faisle par adig tha.
Main phir se Maa ke kareeb aaya, lekin is baar uski aankhon mein ek ajeeb sa darr tha. Maa ne thoda peeche hote hue kaha,
"Khabardaar agar mere paas aaya toh! Main chhat se kud kar apni jaan de dungi, samjhe?"
Meri saanson ki raftaar tez ho gayi. Main ghabraya, lekin apne aap ko sambhalte hue kaha,
"Radha, jo bhi hua, usse badla nahi ja sakta. Ab tum meri patni ho, tumhe yeh sach kabool karna hoga."
Maa ne gusse aur aansuon se bhari aankhon ke saath kaha,
"Nahi! Yeh kabhi nahi ho sakta!"
Maine bhi thoda sakht ho kar bola,
"Yeh ho chuka hai, Radha. Maine tumhari maang mein sindoor bhara hai."
Maa phir foot kar rone lagi,
"Tune meri zindagi barbaad kar di, Raj."
Maine thande lehje mein kaha,
"Jo bhi hua so hua, ab tum shastro ke mutaabiq meri patni ho. Tumhe is rishte ko swikaar karna padega."
Maa ka gussa aur bhadak utha,
"Main tere papa ko sab sach bata dungi, Raj. Jo tune mere saath kiya hai."
Unke shabd kano mein kisi bandook ki tarah goonj rahe the. Mujhe andaza tha ke jo maine kiya, woh kisi bhi taur par sahi nahi tha. Shayad meri apni masoomiyat thi, ya paagalpan, par ab yeh faisla liya jaa chuka tha aur ye unke liye nafrat ki ek wajah ban gaya tha. Iss ek faisle ne hum dono ke rishton ko ek aisi manzil par la khada kiya, jahan se wapas lautna mushkil lag raha tha.
"Radha," maine dheere se kaha, "main tumse sach mein pyaar karta hoon. Tumhe kabhi takleef nahi dunga, yeh mera wada hai."
Maa ne mere haath ko jhatkte hue tezi se kaha,
"Pyaar? Tujhe pyaar ka matlab bhi pata hai? Tune sirf apni zidd aur bachpana pura karne ke liye apni saagi Maa ki zindagi tabah kar di."
Main bas wahaan chup chaap khada raha, unke aansu, unka gussa, aur unke dil ka dard apni aankhon ke saamne dekhte hue,
lekin bina ek lafz kahe.
Wahan khade khade, main chup chaap Maa ki baatein sun raha tha. Mere andar ek jazba tha, jo ab main rok nahi pa raha tha. Maine faisla kar liya tha ki kisi bhi haalat mein ab Maa ko apne se door nahi hone dunga. Thodi der ke baad jab mujhe laga ki sab hadh paar ho rahi hai, main apne gusse ko dikhate hue bol pada.
Main: "Thik hai, to phir ye baat bhi papa ko bata dena ki maine tumhari maang bhari hai, aur tum ab unki nahi unke bete ki biwi ban gayi ho."
Maa meri baat sun kar ek pal ke liye sehem gayi, chup ho gayi. Shayad unhone kabhi mujhe is roop me nahi dekha tha.
Main: "Tum khud ko samajhti kya ho? Tumhe kya mera pyaar nazar nahi aa raha? Jab se maine hosh sambhala hai, sirf tum hi ho jise maine dil se chaha hai."
Maa rote hue: "Par main teri Maa hoon, Raaj. Ye rishta galat hai, ye kaise ho sakta hai?"
Main: "Main kuch nahi janta, bas itna pata hai ki main sirf tumse pyaar karta hoon. Us din jab un gundo ne tumhare baare me galat baatein boli thi, toh mera khoon khol gaya tha. Us waqt main apne dil ke haal ko samajh nahi paaya, aur agar meri umr thodi zyada hoti, toh wahi unka katl kar deta. Ye agar pyaar nahi toh aur kya hai?"
Maa, gusse aur aansuon ke beech:
"Kya tera dimaag kharab ho gaya hai? Tu chahta hai ki sage Maa aur beta ab pati-patni ban jayein? Isse toh behtar hota agar tu paida hote hi mar gaya hota."
Unke ye lafz, jaise mere dil ko cheer rahe the. Har shabd ek teer ban kar chubh raha tha.
Main: "Aisa mat kaho Radha... Maine tumse sacche dil se pyaar kiya hai. Tumhe kaise yaqeen dilau? Please, maan jao. Main tumhe rani bana kar rakhunga."
Tabhi meri dono behnein bhi chhat par aa gayi.: "Bhaiya, Maa, hum apko kab se dhund rahe hai, aap dono yahan kya kar rahe ho."
Un dono ko dekh kar Maa ne apne aansu chupane ki koshish ki, behnon ke samne khud ko sambhalte hue is liye maine jaldi se bol diya: "Kuch nahi, hum bas baat kar rahe the."
Behen 1: "Bhai, aap aur Maa jaldi chalo, sab niche wait kar rahe hain."
Main: "Thik hai, hum aate hain."
Maa mujhe ignore karte hue aage nikal gayi, aur main apni behnon ke paas ruk gaya. Toh maine Unse kaha: "Ab se tum Maa ko 'Maa' nahi, 'bhabhi' keh kar bulaogi. Akele me, aaj se ye meri patni hai aur tumhari bhabhi."
Meri behane ye sun kar shock gayi lekin unki umr kafi Kam thi toh wo is sab ko khel samjhne lagi lekin Maa ye sun kar sach me bohot jyada shock ho gayi. Unke chehre pe pareshaani aur gussa dono ek saath the.
Maine muskurate hue kaha,
"Chaliye, patni ji, niche chalte hain."
Maa ne kuch bolne ki koshish ki, lekin lafz unke labon tak nahi aaye. Hum niche aa gaye. Barat nikalne wali thi, aur main aur Maa dur khade the. Meri behnon ne Maa ko kaha,
"Bhabhi, Aap bhai ke saath khadi raho."
Maa ne aankhon mein gusse ke saath un dono ko daant diya.
Khair fir Shaadi khatam hone ke baad sab log ghar lautne lage. Hum bhi nikal gaye. Lekin ab Maa aur mera rishta bilkul badal chuka tha. Hum ab sirf Maa - Beta nahi rahe, hum miyan-biwi ban chuke the...
Maa ka yu gussa hona bada kamuk lagata he...Update 9Mujhe raat bhar neend toh aayi nahi, lekin subha school bhi jaana tha, isliye uthkar jaldi tayar ho gaya. Maa subha se hi uth kar meri behno ko tayar kar rahi thi. Hum chai ke table par baithe hi the ki Maa, yani meri Radha, chai lekar aayi aur hum sab ko di. Jaise hi Maa palat kar jaane lagi, maine kaha,
"Radha, sath mein chai piyo."
Par wo bina kuch kahe, mujhe ignore karte hue andar chali gayi. Unka ye rawayya mere dil ko chubh raha tha, lekin main bhi chup raha, kuch nahi bola. Hum sab phir school ke liye nikal gaye, par mann me unki doori ka ehsaas aur gehra ho gaya.
Jab main school se wapas aaya, to Maa bina kisi expression ke kitchen me Khana bana rahi thi.
Main apni school ki dress change karke bahar aaya, toh dekha ke ab Maa khana dining table par laga rahi thi, par kuch keh nahi rahi thi. Main unke paas gaya, lekin unhone mujhe nazarandaz karna jaari rakha. Maine kaha,
"Radha, suno." par unhone koi jawab nahi diya.
Fir main ne fir se kaha,
"Radha, kya hua? Jawab toh do."
Magar is baar bhi Maa ne chup rehna hi pasand kiya. Jab maine pareshan ho kar unka haath pakda,
toh woh narazgi me haath chhudake chali gayi. Usi waqt meri behne bhi aa gayi thi. Humne sath milkar khana khana shuru kiya, to meri chhoti behen boli,
"Bhaiya, Bhabhi kaha hain?"
Maine kaha,
"Andar, kitchen me hi khana kha rahi hai."
Meri behen ko yeh baat pasand nahi aayi, toh woh zidd karke Maa ka haath pakadkar unhe le aayi, aur mere samne bithaya. Maa ne ek nazar mujhe dekha aur fir dusri taraf dekhne lagi, lekin kuch nahi kaha. Sabke beech me woh chupchaap bethi rahi, aur main bhi unke dil ki baat mehsoos karne ki koshish kar raha tha.
Main khana khate hue ek tak Maa ko hi dekh raha tha. Narazgi mein bhi meri biwi/Maa Radha itni sundar lag rahi thi ki jaise jannat ki hoor bhi unke aage kuch na ho.
Unki khamoshi me bhi ek ajab si kashish thi. Mujhe ek sharaarat sujhi, maine apna pair table ke neeche se unke pair pe rakh diya. Jaise hi unhone ehsaas kiya, unki aankhen badi ho gayi.
Main ne unhe aankh maar di, toh woh apni nazare mujhse hata kar neeche dekhte hue khana khane lagi.
Mera shaitani dimaag fir se chal pada, maine fir apne pair se unki saree ko upar karke unko halka sa touch kiya. Woh ghusse me utthi aur jane lagi. Pehle main kuch samajh nahi paaya, lekin meri behan ne kaha,
"Bhabhi, kaha ja rahi ho?"
Maa ne kuch nahi kaha aur bas chup chaap chali gayi. Unki narazgi aur ghussa ab aur bhi gehra ho raha tha, lekin main bhi apni chhoti chhoti sharaarat se unhe manane ke liye tayyar tha.
Dosto, Maaf karna Main apne personal life me thoda busy chal raha tha wese busy toh filhal bhi hoon lekin jese hi mujhe time Mila main aap logo ko Good news Dene aa gaya hoon. Update jlad hi wapas shuru jaenge. Probably from end of November.
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