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nice start.Maa meri Ho gayi
UPDATE 1
Khasyap Singh (44) :- ek succesful business man . Apni aadhi se jyada zindagi sirf kaam aur business me laga di jis karan na apne pariwar par na khud ki health aur wellbeing par dhyan de pate hai . Isi wajah se apni umr se bhi jyada budhhe lagte hai . Isi wajah se sirf ek hi beta hai kyuki ye kabhi apni patni ko samay hi nahi de pate .
Aaditi Singh (36 Heroine) :- ek ganv ke orthodox pariwar me padia Hui ek sanskari mahina . Bachpan se hi Sanskrit aur apne pariwar ki dekh rekh me badhi hui . ** saal ki chhoti umr me hi Shadi aur ** saal me Beta ho Jane ke karan duniya dari bilkul nahi janti . Na apne pati ke bina Ghar se bahar Jana na koi dost sirf Ghar sambhalna boriyat ke karan Ghar pe hi exercise aur Yoga karti hai aur jyadatar samay Pooja path Wastav me agar kahe toh sidhi sadhi Sushil gaaye hai . Par isi wajah se inko bhi nahi pata ki ye kya Chiz hai .
Doodh sa Gora rang, Dil lubhane wale tikhhe par pyare nen-naksh, surahi si gardan , exercise aur yoga ke karan Inka sange-marmar se tarasha hu jism . Seene aur Kulho par aakarshak ubhar aur kamsin patli kamar inhe swarg ki Apsara bana rahe hai .
Height 5'0
Is sab ke chalte inki umr bhi inki real umr se kam lagti hai halaki ek bete ki maa hai lekin fir bhi koi inhe 22-23 saal se jyada ki nahi bata sakta .
Aditya Singh (19 Hero) :- College me engineering ka student hai Apni maa ke pariwar par gaya hai Lamba choda gabru . Kehne ko toh B.Tech kar raha hai par dilchaspi bahut se subjects me hai Science, History, Philosophy and Art . Filhal "NIT, Tiruchirappalli " me apna course complete karne me laga hai . South India me rehte hue Indian marital arts me bhi Ruchi jagi toh wo bhi sikh raha hai .
Height 6'1
Pita ke hamesha kaam me busy rehne aur achha khasa pesa hone ke karan thoda bigda hua bhi hai . Ladkiya patana aur sex karna iska shok aur adat hai . Par apne is character ko isne kabhi apne Ghar walo ke samne nahi Ane diya . Unke liye ye bahut Sharif ladka hai . Sabse jyada pyar apne maa se karta hai .
Khubsurat update.Update 10 (B)
Aakhir kaar, meelo tak faili stressful chuppi ke baad, Aditya ne ghutan bhari shaanti ko toda. "kya aap kuch aur dekhna chahengi, Maa?" usne puchha, uski awaaz hesitant thi.
Aditi ne apne bete ki hi tarah aage badhne ki chhupi hui ichcha ko dikhate hue, us beet chuki ghatna ko ek taraf kar. "nahin, beta," usne apni awaaz ko kaste hue kaha. "chalo ab ghar chalte hain. ham fir kabhi yahan vaapas aa jaayenge."
Aditya ki aankhon me ummeed ki ek chamak jagi. "haan, Maa," usne tajjasus se jawab diya. "jab bhi aap taiyaar ho. main hamesha aapke saath rahunga."
Aditi ne haath badhaaya, uska sparsh kuch pal ke lie Aditya ke gaal par tika raha. "mera pyaara beta," wo dheere se boli, uski awaaz me ankahi bhaawanae bhari hui thi.
Aditya ko raahat mili kyunki use maloom hua ki us Ghatna ne unke rishte ko nahi toda hai. Aditi ko bhi apne kandhon se bojh utarta hua mehasoos hua. pehle unke cheharon par chhai udaasi ki jagah ek halki muskaan ne le li, jo unke bich ek mazboot rishte ka saboot tha.
jaise hi wo ghar ke driveway me pahunche, Aditya sabse pehle baahar nikala, apni Maa ke liye darwaza khola aur usne apni Maa ke liye kharide gaye shopping bags nikaale. Aditi ke seene me ek umang khil uthi, uski aankhon me ek sharmili khushi jhalak uthi.
Maa aur beta, dono khushi me doobe hue apne ghareloo kaamo me lag gaye. din ek sukhad shaam me badal gaya. Kitchen me, Aditi raat ka khaana banaate hue dheere dheere gunguna rahi thi. Aditya ke wapas Ghar aa jane ke baad se, kitchen ek baar phir uska ilaka ban gayi thi. apne bete ke liye khana banate samaye use sukh ki gehari bhaawana mehsoos ho rahi thi. Use esa lag raha tha jaise uska ek sapna sach ho gaya ho. Apne Aditya ka paalan-poshan karna, uski Maa ke roop me apni bhoomika nibhaana. ghar ki maids ko kaam me sirf madad karane ke lie kaha gaya tha; dinner ka most hissa Aditi hi banaana chahti thi. Aditya ne apni Maa ko naye maqsad ke saath kaam karte hue dekha, jisse use bohot khushi huee. usne hamesha apni Maa ki sundarta ki taarif ki thi, lekin jab Aditi muskurati thi, toh uski chamak ke samne sab kuchh fika lagta tha. Uski khubsurati se wo heraan reh jaata tha.
Aditya hypnotize hokar darwaze ke paas khada tha. Aditi Kitchan me idhar-udhar ghoom rahi thi, Aditya ke liye, Aditi ko kaam karte dekhna kisi bhi dusri cheez se kaheen zyaada jaroori kaam tha.
Wo mushkil se apne aas-paas ki halchal ko notice kar pa raha tha - bartano ki khat-pat, naukaron ki baat-chit.
halanki, Aditi uski nazaro se bekhabar thi. uska dhyaan laser ki tarah tez tha, Aditi ka dimaag Aditya ke pasandida khane ko etihaad taiyaar karne par laga hua tha. Har kaam ko tezi se anjaam diya ja raha tha, uske har kadam me Aditya ke liye uska pyaar jhalak raha tha.
Achanak, Aditya ko pyaas lagi. fridge jo kitchen doosre kone par tha se paani ki bottle ki zaroorat thi, usne socha ki us busy kitchen me kisi ko bol kar paani lena thik nahi hai wo sabhi pehle hi kafi kaam kar rahe hai toh usne khud kitchen se guzar kar wahan tak jana hoga. raasta use sidhe Aditi ke paas se le jaega, aur uski aankhon me ek chanchal roshani chamak uthi.
Aditya Pani lene ke liye kitchan ke bich se hokar guzarta hai Aditi ko abhi bhi abas nahi tha ki Aditya kitchan me aa chuka hai wo abhi bhi man laga kar kam kar Rahi thi. Aditya bhi uske focus ko kharab nahi karna chahta tha isiliye wo mojuda nokaro ki bhid se hokar dusri taraf jaane lagta hai. Lekin jese hi wo Aditi ke pas se guzarta hai ek nokarani ka pair galti se thoda fisal jata hai jisse Aditya ko Dhakka lagta hai aur wo Aditi ki aur girne lagta hai. Aditya ke sharir ka samne ka hissa Aditi ke pichhle hisse se lag jata hai aur Aditya balance bigdne ke karan Aditi par poori tarah girne wala hota hai ki tabhi wo hath badha ke Aditi ko pakad leta hai aur khudko girne se bacha leta hai. Lekin fir bhi uska Agla hissa Aditi ki pichhle hisse se touch ho gaya tha.
Aditi ke hothon se ek aah nikal gayi. Uski ungaliyaan Aditi ke pet aur pith se takarai, jisse uski reedh m siharan paida ho gayi. Aditi ashcharya aur dar se pichhe ki aur palti unki aankhen mili, Aditya bahut der tak wese hi bana raha lekin kuch der bad Aditya ne jaldi se apna santulan waapas pa liya, maafi maangte hue uske chehare par sharm ki lakiren ubhar aayi. Aditi ki pith se uska sharir takraane se uske hosh ud gaye the. Wo thoda ladakhadaya, halkat hue maafi maangate hue khud ko sahi kiya. aakhir kaar jab usne apni nazar hatai to uske gaalon par garmi chha gayi, fridge se paani ki bottle Li aur kitchan se jane laga.
Aditi ki komalta ka sparsh use abhi bhi mehsus ho raha tha, aur wo yaad jo uski pyaas se kaheen zyada nashili thi. paani ke bade ghoont peeta raha jo ab uske andar jal rahi aag ko bujhaane me kuchh khaas madad nahi kar raha tha. Aditi ki chhavi uske dimaag me ghum rahi thi. unke bich hue sparsh ki yaad ek mazedaar tashadud thi, wo ankahi ichchha ke sagar me bah raha tha, ek aisee tadap jise wo theek se samajha nahi paa raha tha, phir bhi andekha nahi kar sakta tha. Apni Maa ke jism ke ehsaas ko yaad karte hue achanak se use apne jangho ke bich current jata hua mehsus hota hai aur uska soya hua hathiyar salami dena shuru kar deta hai.
uske gaalon par laalima chhaa gayi. usne khud ko manasik roop se lanat di, apne vichaaro ko ek alag disha me le jaane ke lie majboor kiya. thande paani ne uske bheetar achaanak bhadki aag ko shaant karne me kuchh khaas madad nahi ki, jo uski ungaliyon par aditi ki komal skin ki yaad se aur bhi badh gayi thi. usne apni aankhen band kar lee, chaaha ki wo chhavi feekee pad jae, lekin wo usi tarah bani rahi. hataasha ke saath, usne paani ka ek aur lamba ghoont liya, pyaas uske dil me chal rahi uthal-puthal se bas dhyaan bhatkaane wali cheez ban gayi thi. use khud par kaaboo paana tha. lekin wo yaad bani rahi, ek manmohak tasveer jisne uske sanyam ko todane ki dhamaki di.
Us raat dinner karne ke bad, taaro ki chaadar ke niche, Aditya aur Aditi chhat par bethe, Aditya ne apni awaaz me imaandari se puchha, "aaj ka din kaisa raha, Maa?"
Aditi ki muskaan sachchi thi kyonki usne jawaab diya, "tumhaare saath bitaya har pal anmol hai, beta. aaj ka din hamesha mere saath rahega. jis tarah se tumne mera khyaal rakha, mujhe nayi nayi jagahe dikhaai... Wo mere liye Duniya ka sabse khubsurat lamha tha." uski awaaz me feelings ki vibration thi. " Aur ye mere jeevan ka sabse achchha din tha."
Aditya, apni Maa ke chehare par chamakti khushi se mantra-mugdh ho gaya. "sach me, Maa?"
"sach me" usne confirmation di, unki nazare pyaar se bhari hui thi.
"toh ab ye sirf ek baar ki baat nahi hogi," Aditya ne pakke nishchay ke saath apni awaaz me elaan kiya. "ham ye har din karenge. har din, main apko baahar le jaunga, itne saalo tak akele rahne ke baad, Aap itna toh deserve karti ho."
Aditi ki muskaan thodi feekee pad gayi. "lekin beta-"
Aditya ne masumiyat dikhaate hue apni Maa ko bich me toka. "kya apko apne bete ke saath samay bitaana achchha nahi laga?"
Aditi ke honthon par ek komal muskaan ubhar aayi. "theek hai," usne swikaar kiya, uski awaaz me khushi thi. "mujhe apne Aditya ke saath har din ghoomane me koyi pareshaani nahi hai." usane haath badhaaya, aur aseem prem ke bhaav se Aditya ke chehare ko apne haatho se thaam liya.
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Ye Second part hai uski update ka.
Once again late update ke liye sorry dosto.
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100% agree lekin yeh toh end ke aas paas mein hoga, mere khayal se usse pahle pyar mohabbat aur ekrar baaki hai dono hero heroine ke beechuff so hot..
if possiblr beta maa ke gale mai mangalsutra bandh de or biwi bana le usko apni secret. maja aa jaega red bangles in hand sindur mangalsutra