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Incest Maa meri ho gayi

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Premkumar65

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Maa meri Ho gayi




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Khasyap Singh (44) :- ek succesful business man . Apni aadhi se jyada zindagi sirf kaam aur business me laga di jis karan na apne pariwar par na khud ki health aur wellbeing par dhyan de pate hai . Isi wajah se apni umr se bhi jyada budhhe lagte hai . Isi wajah se sirf ek hi beta hai kyuki ye kabhi apni patni ko samay hi nahi de pate .

Aaditi Singh (36 Heroine) :- ek ganv ke orthodox pariwar me padia Hui ek sanskari mahina . Bachpan se hi Sanskrit aur apne pariwar ki dekh rekh me badhi hui . ** saal ki chhoti umr me hi Shadi aur ** saal me Beta ho Jane ke karan duniya dari bilkul nahi janti . Na apne pati ke bina Ghar se bahar Jana na koi dost sirf Ghar sambhalna boriyat ke karan Ghar pe hi exercise aur Yoga karti hai aur jyadatar samay Pooja path Wastav me agar kahe toh sidhi sadhi Sushil gaaye hai . Par isi wajah se inko bhi nahi pata ki ye kya Chiz hai .
Doodh sa Gora rang, Dil lubhane wale tikhhe par pyare nen-naksh, surahi si gardan , exercise aur yoga ke karan Inka sange-marmar se tarasha hu jism . Seene aur Kulho par aakarshak ubhar aur kamsin patli kamar inhe swarg ki Apsara bana rahe hai .
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Is sab ke chalte inki umr bhi inki real umr se kam lagti hai halaki ek bete ki maa hai lekin fir bhi koi inhe 22-23 saal se jyada ki nahi bata sakta .


Aditya Singh (19 Hero) :- College me engineering ka student hai Apni maa ke pariwar par gaya hai Lamba choda gabru . Kehne ko toh B.Tech kar raha hai par dilchaspi bahut se subjects me hai Science, History, Philosophy and Art . Filhal "NIT, Tiruchirappalli " me apna course complete karne me laga hai . South India me rehte hue Indian marital arts me bhi Ruchi jagi toh wo bhi sikh raha hai .
Height 6'1

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Pita ke hamesha kaam me busy rehne aur achha khasa pesa hone ke karan thoda bigda hua bhi hai . Ladkiya patana aur sex karna iska shok aur adat hai . Par apne is character ko isne kabhi apne Ghar walo ke samne nahi Ane diya . Unke liye ye bahut Sharif ladka hai . Sabse jyada pyar apne maa se karta hai .
nice start.
 
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Premkumar65

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Aakhir kaar, meelo tak faili stressful chuppi ke baad, Aditya ne ghutan bhari shaanti ko toda. "kya aap kuch aur dekhna chahengi, Maa?" usne puchha, uski awaaz hesitant thi.

Aditi ne apne bete ki hi tarah aage badhne ki chhupi hui ichcha ko dikhate hue, us beet chuki ghatna ko ek taraf kar. "nahin, beta," usne apni awaaz ko kaste hue kaha. "chalo ab ghar chalte hain. ham fir kabhi yahan vaapas aa jaayenge."
Aditya ki aankhon me ummeed ki ek chamak jagi. "haan, Maa," usne tajjasus se jawab diya. "jab bhi aap taiyaar ho. main hamesha aapke saath rahunga."
Aditi ne haath badhaaya, uska sparsh kuch pal ke lie Aditya ke gaal par tika raha. "mera pyaara beta," wo dheere se boli, uski awaaz me ankahi bhaawanae bhari hui thi.


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Aditya ko raahat mili kyunki use maloom hua ki us Ghatna ne unke rishte ko nahi toda hai. Aditi ko bhi apne kandhon se bojh utarta hua mehasoos hua. pehle unke cheharon par chhai udaasi ki jagah ek halki muskaan ne le li, jo unke bich ek mazboot rishte ka saboot tha.

jaise hi wo ghar ke driveway me pahunche, Aditya sabse pehle baahar nikala, apni Maa ke liye darwaza khola aur usne apni Maa ke liye kharide gaye shopping bags nikaale. Aditi ke seene me ek umang khil uthi, uski aankhon me ek sharmili khushi jhalak uthi.

Maa aur beta, dono khushi me doobe hue apne ghareloo kaamo me lag gaye. din ek sukhad shaam me badal gaya. Kitchen me, Aditi raat ka khaana banaate hue dheere dheere gunguna rahi thi. Aditya ke wapas Ghar aa jane ke baad se, kitchen ek baar phir uska ilaka ban gayi thi. apne bete ke liye khana banate samaye use sukh ki gehari bhaawana mehsoos ho rahi thi. Use esa lag raha tha jaise uska ek sapna sach ho gaya ho. Apne Aditya ka paalan-poshan karna, uski Maa ke roop me apni bhoomika nibhaana. ghar ki maids ko kaam me sirf madad karane ke lie kaha gaya tha; dinner ka most hissa Aditi hi banaana chahti thi. Aditya ne apni Maa ko naye maqsad ke saath kaam karte hue dekha, jisse use bohot khushi huee. usne hamesha apni Maa ki sundarta ki taarif ki thi, lekin jab Aditi muskurati thi, toh uski chamak ke samne sab kuchh fika lagta tha. Uski khubsurati se wo heraan reh jaata tha.


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Aditya hypnotize hokar darwaze ke paas khada tha. Aditi Kitchan me idhar-udhar ghoom rahi thi, Aditya ke liye, Aditi ko kaam karte dekhna kisi bhi dusri cheez se kaheen zyaada jaroori kaam tha.

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Wo mushkil se apne aas-paas ki halchal ko notice kar pa raha tha - bartano ki khat-pat, naukaron ki baat-chit.
halanki, Aditi uski nazaro se bekhabar thi. uska dhyaan laser ki tarah tez tha, Aditi ka dimaag Aditya ke pasandida khane ko etihaad taiyaar karne par laga hua tha. Har kaam ko tezi se anjaam diya ja raha tha, uske har kadam me Aditya ke liye uska pyaar jhalak raha tha.

Achanak, Aditya ko pyaas lagi. fridge jo kitchen doosre kone par tha se paani ki bottle ki zaroorat thi, usne socha ki us busy kitchen me kisi ko bol kar paani lena thik nahi hai wo sabhi pehle hi kafi kaam kar rahe hai toh usne khud kitchen se guzar kar wahan tak jana hoga. raasta use sidhe Aditi ke paas se le jaega, aur uski aankhon me ek chanchal roshani chamak uthi.

Aditya Pani lene ke liye kitchan ke bich se hokar guzarta hai Aditi ko abhi bhi abas nahi tha ki Aditya kitchan me aa chuka hai wo abhi bhi man laga kar kam kar Rahi thi. Aditya bhi uske focus ko kharab nahi karna chahta tha isiliye wo mojuda nokaro ki bhid se hokar dusri taraf jaane lagta hai. Lekin jese hi wo Aditi ke pas se guzarta hai ek nokarani ka pair galti se thoda fisal jata hai jisse Aditya ko Dhakka lagta hai aur wo Aditi ki aur girne lagta hai. Aditya ke sharir ka samne ka hissa Aditi ke pichhle hisse se lag jata hai aur Aditya balance bigdne ke karan Aditi par poori tarah girne wala hota hai ki tabhi wo hath badha ke Aditi ko pakad leta hai aur khudko girne se bacha leta hai. Lekin fir bhi uska Agla hissa Aditi ki pichhle hisse se touch ho gaya tha.


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Aditi ke hothon se ek aah nikal gayi. Uski ungaliyaan Aditi ke pet aur pith se takarai, jisse uski reedh m siharan paida ho gayi. Aditi ashcharya aur dar se pichhe ki aur palti unki aankhen mili, Aditya bahut der tak wese hi bana raha lekin kuch der bad Aditya ne jaldi se apna santulan waapas pa liya, maafi maangte hue uske chehare par sharm ki lakiren ubhar aayi. Aditi ki pith se uska sharir takraane se uske hosh ud gaye the. Wo thoda ladakhadaya, halkat hue maafi maangate hue khud ko sahi kiya. aakhir kaar jab usne apni nazar hatai to uske gaalon par garmi chha gayi, fridge se paani ki bottle Li aur kitchan se jane laga.

Aditi ki komalta ka sparsh use abhi bhi mehsus ho raha tha, aur wo yaad jo uski pyaas se kaheen zyada nashili thi. paani ke bade ghoont peeta raha jo ab uske andar jal rahi aag ko bujhaane me kuchh khaas madad nahi kar raha tha. Aditi ki chhavi uske dimaag me ghum rahi thi. unke bich hue sparsh ki yaad ek mazedaar tashadud thi, wo ankahi ichchha ke sagar me bah raha tha, ek aisee tadap jise wo theek se samajha nahi paa raha tha, phir bhi andekha nahi kar sakta tha. Apni Maa ke jism ke ehsaas ko yaad karte hue achanak se use apne jangho ke bich current jata hua mehsus hota hai aur uska soya hua hathiyar salami dena shuru kar deta hai.


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uske gaalon par laalima chhaa gayi. usne khud ko manasik roop se lanat di, apne vichaaro ko ek alag disha me le jaane ke lie majboor kiya. thande paani ne uske bheetar achaanak bhadki aag ko shaant karne me kuchh khaas madad nahi ki, jo uski ungaliyon par aditi ki komal skin ki yaad se aur bhi badh gayi thi. usne apni aankhen band kar lee, chaaha ki wo chhavi feekee pad jae, lekin wo usi tarah bani rahi. hataasha ke saath, usne paani ka ek aur lamba ghoont liya, pyaas uske dil me chal rahi uthal-puthal se bas dhyaan bhatkaane wali cheez ban gayi thi. use khud par kaaboo paana tha. lekin wo yaad bani rahi, ek manmohak tasveer jisne uske sanyam ko todane ki dhamaki di.




Us raat dinner karne ke bad, taaro ki chaadar ke niche, Aditya aur Aditi chhat par bethe, Aditya ne apni awaaz me imaandari se puchha, "aaj ka din kaisa raha, Maa?"

Aditi ki muskaan sachchi thi kyonki usne jawaab diya, "tumhaare saath bitaya har pal anmol hai, beta. aaj ka din hamesha mere saath rahega. jis tarah se tumne mera khyaal rakha, mujhe nayi nayi jagahe dikhaai... Wo mere liye Duniya ka sabse khubsurat lamha tha." uski awaaz me feelings ki vibration thi. " Aur ye mere jeevan ka sabse achchha din tha."

Aditya, apni Maa ke chehare par chamakti khushi se mantra-mugdh ho gaya. "sach me, Maa?"

"sach me" usne confirmation di, unki nazare pyaar se bhari hui thi.

"toh ab ye sirf ek baar ki baat nahi hogi," Aditya ne pakke nishchay ke saath apni awaaz me elaan kiya. "ham ye har din karenge. har din, main apko baahar le jaunga, itne saalo tak akele rahne ke baad, Aap itna toh deserve karti ho."

Aditi ki muskaan thodi feekee pad gayi. "lekin beta-"
Aditya ne masumiyat dikhaate hue apni Maa ko bich me toka. "kya apko apne bete ke saath samay bitaana achchha nahi laga?"
Aditi ke honthon par ek komal muskaan ubhar aayi. "theek hai," usne swikaar kiya, uski awaaz me khushi thi. "mujhe apne Aditya ke saath har din ghoomane me koyi pareshaani nahi hai." usane haath badhaaya, aur aseem prem ke bhaav se Aditya ke chehare ko apne haatho se thaam liya.

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Ye Second part hai uski update ka.
Once again late update ke liye sorry dosto.
Main puri koshish karta hoon ki aap logo ko wakt par update de saku.

Ummeed hai ki ye update bhi aap logo ko pasand ayega. Please feedback zarur dijiyega aur like kijiye. ❤️
Khubsurat update.
 
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uff so hot..

if possiblr beta maa ke gale mai mangalsutra bandh de or biwi bana le usko apni secret. maja aa jaega red bangles in hand sindur mangalsutra
100% agree lekin yeh toh end ke aas paas mein hoga, mere khayal se usse pahle pyar mohabbat aur ekrar baaki hai dono hero heroine ke beech
 
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Previous....

"mujhe apne Aditya ke saath har din ghoomane me koyi pareshaani nahi hai." usane haath badhaaya, aur aseem prem ke bhaav se Aditya ke chehare ko apne haatho se thaam liya.


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unki nigaahe ek dusre se milee, unke bich ek khaamosh baatchit hui. Aditi ki aankhe, jo hamesha uske liye Mamta se bhari rahti he, Aaj un me ek gaharai thi jisne Aditya ke Shareer me siharan paida kar di. us saajha nazar me, satah ke thik niche ankahi Bhawnaye ubal rahi thi.

ek pal ke baad Aditi uthee. uska sparsh, ek halka dulaar, wo jhuki ek soft kiss Aditya ke maathe par kiya, jiske karan uska Dil kuch der ke lie ruka.


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Aditi ne apni ungaliyaan Aditya ke baalo me pheri, "der ho rahee hai," usne fusfusaate hue kaha, uski awaaz ek nashili kavita thi. "Ab hamen thodi neend leni chahiye."
Aditya, abhi bhi apni Maa ke touch ke ehsaas aur uski nazar ke aakarshan me khoya hua tha, ek sapano ki aah uske hothon se nikali aur aakhirkaar awaaz aayi.
"haan-haan," usne haklaate hue kaha, uski gardan par ek sharm reng rahi thi. "chalo chalte hai."
jab wo apne apne bedaroom ki or saath-saath chal rahe the, to unke beech ek sukhad khamoshi chha gai. phir bhi, hawa me ek nayi chingaari chamak rahi thi.

jesi hi Aditi apne kamre ke door tak pahochi, Aditi Aditya ki or mudi, uske hothon par ek pyari smile thi. "good night, beta," usne dheere se kaha.
Aditya ne uski muskaan ka jawab bhi muskaan ke sath diya, uski aankhon me garmahat aa gayi. "Good night, Maa," usne dohraaya.
unke bich ek maun wada tha. ek naye connection ki bhawana ne use bhar diya, ek shandaar future ka wada.


( Aditi hamesha se hi apne alag room me akeli Soti aayi hai kyuki Aditi ke pati toh kabhi Ghar aate hi nahi the aur ab jab unki tabiyat kharab ho gayi hai toh wo apne alag room me hi hospital facility ke sath hi rehte hai.)

Aditi ne apne kamre ke shaant aashray me, room ka darwaza band kiya aur ek pal ke liye us door par jhuk gayi, din ki thakaan uske kandhon par aa gayi. phir bhi, ek shaant santosh tha, uska beta aakhirkar ghar aa gaya tha. Aur pyaar aur saath se bhare bhavishya ke ummeed ki ek kiran Aditi ke bheetar jhilmila uthi. yahaan tak ki ab is ghar ka vishaal khaalipan, jo saalo se Tanhaai se goonj raha tha, ab kam daraawna lag raha tha. aisa lag raha tha jaise Aditya ki upasthiti ne khaali jagah ko bhar diya tha, jaise hi wo sone ke liye gayi, uski ankhon se ek aansoo nikal aaya, jo uske gaal par chamakata hua raasta bana raha tha.

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Ye dukh ka nahi, balki khushi ka aansoo tha. isme ek naye jeewan ki aasha jhalak thi, ek aisa jeewan jisme wo ab duniya ka saamana akele nahi karegi, balki apne bete ke saath haath me haath daalkar, saath milkar apni kahaani ko phir se likhegi.


Aditya bhi apne kamre ki or badha, uske kadam normal se adhik bhaari the. Aditi ke sparsh ki garmaahat ne uske sharir me beejali paida kar di, jo is thandi raat ki hawa se bilkul alag thi. apne aalishaan bistar par girte hue, wo neend se koson door tha.
uske dimaag me din bhar ki ghatnae baar-baar ghoom rahi thi jo uski Maa ke sath bitayi thi - ek-doosre se nazare Milana, hansi-mazaak karna, Unke sath bahar shopping par Jana aur Garden or rasoee me unke bich huyi unexpected ghatna. Maa Aditi ke saath bitaya gaya har pal naya aur alag lagta tha, ek esi thandak se bhara hua jise wo samjha nahi sakta tha. usne apne doston ke saath anginat jagaho ki yaatra ki thi, phir bhi kisi ne bhi usme aisa aanand, aisa ehasaas nahi jagaaya tha.

uske hothon se ek karaah nikali. use hamesha dusaro ki bhawanao ko aasani se samajh jane par garv tha, phir bhi wo yahaan aaj, poori tarah se khoya hua tha. Maa ki har nazar, unke haatho ka har sparsh, Aditya ke andar ek kampan paida kar raha tha, ek aisa ehasaas jo utsaah janak aur confuse karne wala dono tha. kya ye sirf santushti thi? dosti? Maa bete ka pyar? ya kuchh aur gehara, jise wo theek se vyakt nahi kar paa raha tha? jaise hi wo bechaini se bhari neend me dooba, Aditi ka Sundar chehara uske dimaag me fir se aane lag gaya.


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uski nayi bhaawnao ka sawaal hava me gehara ho gaya tha, wo dua karne laga ek aisa bhavishy jahaan wo aakhir kaar apne dil ke rahasy ko ujaagar kar paaega. Inhi sab khayalo ke sath neend ka asar us par hawi hone laga Kal ka din fir se apni Maa ke sath bitane ke bare me soch kar uske chehre par fir se ek badi si smile aa jati hai aur wo kab sapno me kho jata hai pata nahi chalta...


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Update thoda Chhota hai par aage ki kahani me kuch nayi chize hone waali hai jise ek alag update me likhna jaruri tha....

I Hope apko update pasand ayega.. Update ko like kijiye aur apna feedback jarur dijiye.

Kahani ke liye koi suggestion ho toh AAP wo bhi saajha kar sakte hai. ❤️
 
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