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Behtreen update.bas next update jaldi se dena plzUpdate 11
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"mujhe apne Aditya ke saath har din ghoomane me koyi pareshaani nahi hai." usane haath badhaaya, aur aseem prem ke bhaav se Aditya ke chehare ko apne haatho se thaam liya.
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unki nigaahe ek dusre se milee, unke bich ek khaamosh baatchit hui. Aditi ki aankhe, jo hamesha uske liye Mamta se bhari rahti he, Aaj un me ek gaharai thi jisne Aditya ke Shareer me siharan paida kar di. us saajha nazar me, satah ke thik niche ankahi Bhawnaye ubal rahi thi.
ek pal ke baad Aditi uthee. uska sparsh, ek halka dulaar, wo jhuki ek soft kiss Aditya ke maathe par kiya, jiske karan uska Dil kuch der ke lie ruka.
Aditi ne apni ungaliyaan Aditya ke baalo me pheri, "der ho rahee hai," usne fusfusaate hue kaha, uski awaaz ek nashili kavita thi. "Ab hamen thodi neend leni chahiye."
Aditya, abhi bhi apni Maa ke touch ke ehsaas aur uski nazar ke aakarshan me khoya hua tha, ek sapano ki aah uske hothon se nikali aur aakhirkaar awaaz aayi.
"haan-haan," usne haklaate hue kaha, uski gardan par ek sharm reng rahi thi. "chalo chalte hai."
jab wo apne apne bedaroom ki or saath-saath chal rahe the, to unke beech ek sukhad khamoshi chha gai. phir bhi, hawa me ek nayi chingaari chamak rahi thi.
jesi hi Aditi apne kamre ke door tak pahochi, Aditi Aditya ki or mudi, uske hothon par ek pyari smile thi. "good night, beta," usne dheere se kaha.
Aditya ne uski muskaan ka jawab bhi muskaan ke sath diya, uski aankhon me garmahat aa gayi. "Good night, Maa," usne dohraaya.
unke bich ek maun wada tha. ek naye connection ki bhawana ne use bhar diya, ek shandaar future ka wada.
( Aditi hamesha se hi apne alag room me akeli Soti aayi hai kyuki Aditi ke pati toh kabhi Ghar aate hi nahi the aur ab jab unki tabiyat kharab ho gayi hai toh wo apne alag room me hi hospital facility ke sath hi rehte hai.)
Aditi ne apne kamre ke shaant aashray me, room ka darwaza band kiya aur ek pal ke liye us door par jhuk gayi, din ki thakaan uske kandhon par aa gayi. phir bhi, ek shaant santosh tha, uska beta aakhirkar ghar aa gaya tha. Aur pyaar aur saath se bhare bhavishya ke ummeed ki ek kiran Aditi ke bheetar jhilmila uthi. yahaan tak ki ab is ghar ka vishaal khaalipan, jo saalo se Tanhaai se goonj raha tha, ab kam daraawna lag raha tha. aisa lag raha tha jaise Aditya ki upasthiti ne khaali jagah ko bhar diya tha, jaise hi wo sone ke liye gayi, uski ankhon se ek aansoo nikal aaya, jo uske gaal par chamakata hua raasta bana raha tha.
Ye dukh ka nahi, balki khushi ka aansoo tha. isme ek naye jeewan ki aasha jhalak thi, ek aisa jeewan jisme wo ab duniya ka saamana akele nahi karegi, balki apne bete ke saath haath me haath daalkar, saath milkar apni kahaani ko phir se likhegi.
Aditya bhi apne kamre ki or badha, uske kadam normal se adhik bhaari the. Aditi ke sparsh ki garmaahat ne uske sharir me beejali paida kar di, jo is thandi raat ki hawa se bilkul alag thi. apne aalishaan bistar par girte hue, wo neend se koson door tha.
uske dimaag me din bhar ki ghatnae baar-baar ghoom rahi thi jo uski Maa ke sath bitayi thi - ek-doosre se nazare Milana, hansi-mazaak karna, Unke sath bahar shopping par Jana aur Garden or rasoee me unke bich huyi unexpected ghatna. Maa Aditi ke saath bitaya gaya har pal naya aur alag lagta tha, ek esi thandak se bhara hua jise wo samjha nahi sakta tha. usne apne doston ke saath anginat jagaho ki yaatra ki thi, phir bhi kisi ne bhi usme aisa aanand, aisa ehasaas nahi jagaaya tha.
uske hothon se ek karaah nikali. use hamesha dusaro ki bhawanao ko aasani se samajh jane par garv tha, phir bhi wo yahaan aaj, poori tarah se khoya hua tha. Maa ki har nazar, unke haatho ka har sparsh, Aditya ke andar ek kampan paida kar raha tha, ek aisa ehasaas jo utsaah janak aur confuse karne wala dono tha. kya ye sirf santushti thi? dosti? Maa bete ka pyar? ya kuchh aur gehara, jise wo theek se vyakt nahi kar paa raha tha? jaise hi wo bechaini se bhari neend me dooba, Aditi ka Sundar chehara uske dimaag me fir se aane lag gaya.
uski nayi bhaawnao ka sawaal hava me gehara ho gaya tha, wo dua karne laga ek aisa bhavishy jahaan wo aakhir kaar apne dil ke rahasy ko ujaagar kar paaega. Inhi sab khayalo ke sath neend ka asar us par hawi hone laga Kal ka din fir se apni Maa ke sath bitane ke bare me soch kar uske chehre par fir se ek badi si smile aa jati hai aur wo kab sapno me kho jata hai pata nahi chalta...
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Superb aur shandaar update hai bhaijaan... Aap bohot hi badiya leekhte ho. Isiliye tarah Maa bete ke bich young couple ki tarah slow romance raknaUpdate 11
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"mujhe apne Aditya ke saath har din ghoomane me koyi pareshaani nahi hai." usane haath badhaaya, aur aseem prem ke bhaav se Aditya ke chehare ko apne haatho se thaam liya.
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unki nigaahe ek dusre se milee, unke bich ek khaamosh baatchit hui. Aditi ki aankhe, jo hamesha uske liye Mamta se bhari rahti he, Aaj un me ek gaharai thi jisne Aditya ke Shareer me siharan paida kar di. us saajha nazar me, satah ke thik niche ankahi Bhawnaye ubal rahi thi.
ek pal ke baad Aditi uthee. uska sparsh, ek halka dulaar, wo jhuki ek soft kiss Aditya ke maathe par kiya, jiske karan uska Dil kuch der ke lie ruka.
Aditi ne apni ungaliyaan Aditya ke baalo me pheri, "der ho rahee hai," usne fusfusaate hue kaha, uski awaaz ek nashili kavita thi. "Ab hamen thodi neend leni chahiye."
Aditya, abhi bhi apni Maa ke touch ke ehsaas aur uski nazar ke aakarshan me khoya hua tha, ek sapano ki aah uske hothon se nikali aur aakhirkaar awaaz aayi.
"haan-haan," usne haklaate hue kaha, uski gardan par ek sharm reng rahi thi. "chalo chalte hai."
jab wo apne apne bedaroom ki or saath-saath chal rahe the, to unke beech ek sukhad khamoshi chha gai. phir bhi, hawa me ek nayi chingaari chamak rahi thi.
jesi hi Aditi apne kamre ke door tak pahochi, Aditi Aditya ki or mudi, uske hothon par ek pyari smile thi. "good night, beta," usne dheere se kaha.
Aditya ne uski muskaan ka jawab bhi muskaan ke sath diya, uski aankhon me garmahat aa gayi. "Good night, Maa," usne dohraaya.
unke bich ek maun wada tha. ek naye connection ki bhawana ne use bhar diya, ek shandaar future ka wada.
( Aditi hamesha se hi apne alag room me akeli Soti aayi hai kyuki Aditi ke pati toh kabhi Ghar aate hi nahi the aur ab jab unki tabiyat kharab ho gayi hai toh wo apne alag room me hi hospital facility ke sath hi rehte hai.)
Aditi ne apne kamre ke shaant aashray me, room ka darwaza band kiya aur ek pal ke liye us door par jhuk gayi, din ki thakaan uske kandhon par aa gayi. phir bhi, ek shaant santosh tha, uska beta aakhirkar ghar aa gaya tha. Aur pyaar aur saath se bhare bhavishya ke ummeed ki ek kiran Aditi ke bheetar jhilmila uthi. yahaan tak ki ab is ghar ka vishaal khaalipan, jo saalo se Tanhaai se goonj raha tha, ab kam daraawna lag raha tha. aisa lag raha tha jaise Aditya ki upasthiti ne khaali jagah ko bhar diya tha, jaise hi wo sone ke liye gayi, uski ankhon se ek aansoo nikal aaya, jo uske gaal par chamakata hua raasta bana raha tha.
Ye dukh ka nahi, balki khushi ka aansoo tha. isme ek naye jeewan ki aasha jhalak thi, ek aisa jeewan jisme wo ab duniya ka saamana akele nahi karegi, balki apne bete ke saath haath me haath daalkar, saath milkar apni kahaani ko phir se likhegi.
Aditya bhi apne kamre ki or badha, uske kadam normal se adhik bhaari the. Aditi ke sparsh ki garmaahat ne uske sharir me beejali paida kar di, jo is thandi raat ki hawa se bilkul alag thi. apne aalishaan bistar par girte hue, wo neend se koson door tha.
uske dimaag me din bhar ki ghatnae baar-baar ghoom rahi thi jo uski Maa ke sath bitayi thi - ek-doosre se nazare Milana, hansi-mazaak karna, Unke sath bahar shopping par Jana aur Garden or rasoee me unke bich huyi unexpected ghatna. Maa Aditi ke saath bitaya gaya har pal naya aur alag lagta tha, ek esi thandak se bhara hua jise wo samjha nahi sakta tha. usne apne doston ke saath anginat jagaho ki yaatra ki thi, phir bhi kisi ne bhi usme aisa aanand, aisa ehasaas nahi jagaaya tha.
uske hothon se ek karaah nikali. use hamesha dusaro ki bhawanao ko aasani se samajh jane par garv tha, phir bhi wo yahaan aaj, poori tarah se khoya hua tha. Maa ki har nazar, unke haatho ka har sparsh, Aditya ke andar ek kampan paida kar raha tha, ek aisa ehasaas jo utsaah janak aur confuse karne wala dono tha. kya ye sirf santushti thi? dosti? Maa bete ka pyar? ya kuchh aur gehara, jise wo theek se vyakt nahi kar paa raha tha? jaise hi wo bechaini se bhari neend me dooba, Aditi ka Sundar chehara uske dimaag me fir se aane lag gaya.
uski nayi bhaawnao ka sawaal hava me gehara ho gaya tha, wo dua karne laga ek aisa bhavishy jahaan wo aakhir kaar apne dil ke rahasy ko ujaagar kar paaega. Inhi sab khayalo ke sath neend ka asar us par hawi hone laga Kal ka din fir se apni Maa ke sath bitane ke bare me soch kar uske chehre par fir se ek badi si smile aa jati hai aur wo kab sapno me kho jata hai pata nahi chalta...
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Writer Bhai Kamal ka update thaUpdate 11
Previous....
"mujhe apne Aditya ke saath har din ghoomane me koyi pareshaani nahi hai." usane haath badhaaya, aur aseem prem ke bhaav se Aditya ke chehare ko apne haatho se thaam liya.
Continue.....
unki nigaahe ek dusre se milee, unke bich ek khaamosh baatchit hui. Aditi ki aankhe, jo hamesha uske liye Mamta se bhari rahti he, Aaj un me ek gaharai thi jisne Aditya ke Shareer me siharan paida kar di. us saajha nazar me, satah ke thik niche ankahi Bhawnaye ubal rahi thi.
ek pal ke baad Aditi uthee. uska sparsh, ek halka dulaar, wo jhuki ek soft kiss Aditya ke maathe par kiya, jiske karan uska Dil kuch der ke lie ruka.
Aditi ne apni ungaliyaan Aditya ke baalo me pheri, "der ho rahee hai," usne fusfusaate hue kaha, uski awaaz ek nashili kavita thi. "Ab hamen thodi neend leni chahiye."
Aditya, abhi bhi apni Maa ke touch ke ehsaas aur uski nazar ke aakarshan me khoya hua tha, ek sapano ki aah uske hothon se nikali aur aakhirkaar awaaz aayi.
"haan-haan," usne haklaate hue kaha, uski gardan par ek sharm reng rahi thi. "chalo chalte hai."
jab wo apne apne bedaroom ki or saath-saath chal rahe the, to unke beech ek sukhad khamoshi chha gai. phir bhi, hawa me ek nayi chingaari chamak rahi thi.
jesi hi Aditi apne kamre ke door tak pahochi, Aditi Aditya ki or mudi, uske hothon par ek pyari smile thi. "good night, beta," usne dheere se kaha.
Aditya ne uski muskaan ka jawab bhi muskaan ke sath diya, uski aankhon me garmahat aa gayi. "Good night, Maa," usne dohraaya.
unke bich ek maun wada tha. ek naye connection ki bhawana ne use bhar diya, ek shandaar future ka wada.
( Aditi hamesha se hi apne alag room me akeli Soti aayi hai kyuki Aditi ke pati toh kabhi Ghar aate hi nahi the aur ab jab unki tabiyat kharab ho gayi hai toh wo apne alag room me hi hospital facility ke sath hi rehte hai.)
Aditi ne apne kamre ke shaant aashray me, room ka darwaza band kiya aur ek pal ke liye us door par jhuk gayi, din ki thakaan uske kandhon par aa gayi. phir bhi, ek shaant santosh tha, uska beta aakhirkar ghar aa gaya tha. Aur pyaar aur saath se bhare bhavishya ke ummeed ki ek kiran Aditi ke bheetar jhilmila uthi. yahaan tak ki ab is ghar ka vishaal khaalipan, jo saalo se Tanhaai se goonj raha tha, ab kam daraawna lag raha tha. aisa lag raha tha jaise Aditya ki upasthiti ne khaali jagah ko bhar diya tha, jaise hi wo sone ke liye gayi, uski ankhon se ek aansoo nikal aaya, jo uske gaal par chamakata hua raasta bana raha tha.
Ye dukh ka nahi, balki khushi ka aansoo tha. isme ek naye jeewan ki aasha jhalak thi, ek aisa jeewan jisme wo ab duniya ka saamana akele nahi karegi, balki apne bete ke saath haath me haath daalkar, saath milkar apni kahaani ko phir se likhegi.
Aditya bhi apne kamre ki or badha, uske kadam normal se adhik bhaari the. Aditi ke sparsh ki garmaahat ne uske sharir me beejali paida kar di, jo is thandi raat ki hawa se bilkul alag thi. apne aalishaan bistar par girte hue, wo neend se koson door tha.
uske dimaag me din bhar ki ghatnae baar-baar ghoom rahi thi jo uski Maa ke sath bitayi thi - ek-doosre se nazare Milana, hansi-mazaak karna, Unke sath bahar shopping par Jana aur Garden or rasoee me unke bich huyi unexpected ghatna. Maa Aditi ke saath bitaya gaya har pal naya aur alag lagta tha, ek esi thandak se bhara hua jise wo samjha nahi sakta tha. usne apne doston ke saath anginat jagaho ki yaatra ki thi, phir bhi kisi ne bhi usme aisa aanand, aisa ehasaas nahi jagaaya tha.
uske hothon se ek karaah nikali. use hamesha dusaro ki bhawanao ko aasani se samajh jane par garv tha, phir bhi wo yahaan aaj, poori tarah se khoya hua tha. Maa ki har nazar, unke haatho ka har sparsh, Aditya ke andar ek kampan paida kar raha tha, ek aisa ehasaas jo utsaah janak aur confuse karne wala dono tha. kya ye sirf santushti thi? dosti? Maa bete ka pyar? ya kuchh aur gehara, jise wo theek se vyakt nahi kar paa raha tha? jaise hi wo bechaini se bhari neend me dooba, Aditi ka Sundar chehara uske dimaag me fir se aane lag gaya.
uski nayi bhaawnao ka sawaal hava me gehara ho gaya tha, wo dua karne laga ek aisa bhavishy jahaan wo aakhir kaar apne dil ke rahasy ko ujaagar kar paaega. Inhi sab khayalo ke sath neend ka asar us par hawi hone laga Kal ka din fir se apni Maa ke sath bitane ke bare me soch kar uske chehre par fir se ek badi si smile aa jati hai aur wo kab sapno me kho jata hai pata nahi chalta...
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Awesome update broUpdate 4
Akhir jis Hawaijahaaz ne udaan bhari thi baadalon ke oopar kai ghanton tak safar karne ke baad usake land karne ka samay bhi aa gaya tha.
ADITYA ke waapas ghar aane ki soochna kisee ko nahin thi darasal baat ye thi ki Aditya ko uske Papa ke bahut jyaada bimaar ho jaane ki khabar uske mama ne di thi . 14 saal ki umr se hi unke saath rahane ke kaaran Aditya apne nana aur maamaon se hi jyaada ghula mila hua tha vo unhe hi apna parivaar maanata tha na ki apne asli Maa Baap ko . pita toh Kabhii ghar aate hi nahi the aur Maa se bhi vo jyaada mil nahi pata tha kyuki Bachpan me bahut chhotee umr se hi Aditya ke pita ne uska daakhila kain tarah ki coaching aur classes me karwa diya tha to uska jyaadaatar samay wahi beet jaata tha uske pita ke lie ye hi unka pyaar dikhaane ka tareeka tha ki vo apne bete ko sabhi roop se saksham aur bahut jyaada honahaar bana denge . Isi kaaran se 6-7 saal ki umr se hi uska uski Maa se bhi milna bahut kam ho gaya tha . Classes aur courses se jo samay bachta tha vo so kar beeta deta tha jo uske lie jaruri bhi tha isiliye uski Maa bhi use distarb nahin karti thi . Dil to Aditi ka bahut dukhta tha apni santaan ke lie par pati ke aadesh aur apne bete ke achchhe bhavishy ko soch kar vo bhi kuchh nahee karati thi . Isi tarah Aditya 14 Saal ka ho gaya aur usne apne jeewan ke Khali-Pan ko Bharne ke liye Hamesha ke liye Khudke Nana ke Ghar rehne ki Thaan li .
Esa nahi tha ki wo Apne Maa Baap se nafrat karne laga tha Ulta wo toh apni Maa se bahut pyar karta tha kyuki wo janta tha ki ek Maa hi hai jo uski Feelings ko samjhti hongi par apne pati ke karan chup hai . Lekin fir bhi Uska Jiwan Niras ho gaya tha jise fir se Durust karne ke liye usne apne Nana ke bade pariwar me Rehna sahi samjha . 14 se 17 ki umr tak wo puri Tarah se apne Nana Ke ghar Raha is bich uska apne khudke pariwar se jo Bacha kucha Nata tha wo bhi Toot gaya . Baat toh uski pehle bhi unse nahi hoti par jo kabhi kabhi ek dusre ki Jhalak mil jati thi ab wo bhi Band ho chuka tha . Isi bich Akash ne NIT ka entrence exam clear kar liya aur ab wo 2 Saal se South India reh Raha hai .
(Pichle Dino uske Mama ka use call aya ki Uske Pita ki Health bahut jyada serious hai wo almost apne death bed par hai . Khabar sun kar Aditya jyada Dukhi nahi hua kyuki Wo pita toh uske liye Lagbhag anjaan hi the lekin fir bhi Pita toh Pita hota hai apne mama ke dwara khabar ko sun kar usne Wapas apne Ghar Jaa kar apne Pita ko Aakhri bar Milne ka fesla Kiya .
Ye baat usne kisi ko nahi batayi wo jyada Ho halla pasand nahi karta tha usne socha tha ki Ek din me jakar agle din wapas aa jaega toh kisi ko kya hi inform karna . Isiliye use airport par bhi koi lene nahi aya tha wo khud hi taxi se ghar ke liye nikal gaya.)
[ Apne mama ke Ghar rehte hue Aditya ne waha wrestling Sikhi
Usne apne sharir ko bahut jyada majboot bana liya . Lekin waha rehte hue use ek galat Adat bhi lag gayi jo thi sex . Nana ke Ghar rehte hue usne apni nayi nayi jawani se Ganv ki kai ladiyo aur aurato ko apne Niche Litaya . Is sab ke karan use Sex ki adat lag gayi wo Sex ke is khel me bahut Mahir ho Gaya wo thoda dominant swabhav ka ho gaya .
Aurat ya ladki chahe jis bhi umr ka Biradari ki ho uski personality aur sex power se uski diwani ho hi jati thi .
South India Jane ke Bad usne waha "Kalaripayattu( anciant Martial arts )" sikhna shuru kiya
aur Morden martial arts toh bachpan se apne Papa ke karan Sikh hi raha tha
Is sab ke baad bhi usne apna ye dusra kaam jari rakha aur waha bhi Kai ladkiyo ke sath wo hi sab Kiya jisme uski khudki Teachers bhi shamil thi lekin in relations ke bare me uske pariwar me se kisi ko kuch pata tha ]
Kher Is sab me Uski manzil bhi aa gayi uska apna ghar jaha wo paida hua jaha usne chalna aur bolna sikha
Uska man thoda bhavuk hua lekin apne jazbato ko kaboo kar wo aghe bada uska Ghar kafi bada tha fir bhi lagbhag sunsan hi tha . Usne Ghar ki door Bell bajayi kuch der intezaar karne par darwaza khula . Darwaza khulte thi Aditya aur darwaza kholne wala wo shakhs ek dusre ko dekhte hi reh gaye.
Darwaza kholne wala koi aur nahi uski Khudki Maa thi jise wo Kai saalo baad dekh Raha tha . Uske man me Maa ki jo image thi usse kafi alag. baat ye thi Aditya ka bahut choti umr se uski Maa se Milna lagbhag band ho gaya tha fir wo apne mama ke Ghar chala gaya usne apne dosto ki maaon ko dekha tha jo Kafi aged aur moti dikhti isi karan uske man me itne Salo se dur rehne ke karan apni maa ki bhi esi hi Chhavi bani Hui thi ki wo bhi ab wesi hi dikhti hogi .
Par wo jis Lady ko apne samne dekh Raha tha wo uske bilkul ulat thi agar use Maa ka chehra thoda yaad na hota toh wo shayd pehchan bhi na pata . Jawaan khubsurat Swarg ki Apsara jo abhi abhi Doodh se naha kar ayi ho .
Aditya dekhta hi reh gaya. Badi badi Hirani si ankhe , Khubsurat Masoom aur Bhola chehra surahidaar gardan , achhi tarah bhare sthan, patli Kamseen kamar , kele ke tane jaisi jange, patli pindli aur uski Koyal se mithi suruli patli Awaz . kya kahu bas itna keh sakta hoon ki uppar Wale ne Aditya ki maa ko fursat se banaya hai. Koi nahi keh sakta tha ki ye ek Bete ki Maa hai aur wo bhi ese gabru Bete ki toh kabhi nahi.
Koi bhi agar unhe Sath khada kare toh unhe couple hi samjhe ya jyada se jyada Aaditi ko Aditya ki chhoti Behan samjhe .
Aditi 20 Ya 21 saal se ek din bhi jyada ki nahi lagti thi . Upar se uski Chhoti height Jo 5’0 hogi jo use aur bhi jawaan bana deti thi . ADITI ki Hight uske bete Aditya jo ki 6’1 ka tha se bahut Kam thi .
Jabardast updateUpdate 6
Aditya fresh hone ke bad apne bed par let jata hai aur past me hue incidents ke bare me sochne lagta hai ki kese uske baap ne use aur uski Maa ko dur rakha halaki wo ye sab usi ki bhalayi ke liye kar raha tha par ek bachhe ke liye usko Maa hi sabse important hoti hai jiska pyar use kabhi nasib hi nahi ho paya. Kafir der tak yuhi sochne ke baad use bahar se kisi ki car ki awaz aati hai wo khudke se dekhta hai toh sach me koi Ghar aya tha. Niche jakar dekhne ke bad Aditya ko pata lagta hai ki ye Doctos hai jo regular checkup ke liye aaye hai , Wo fir apni Maa ki taraf dekhta hai jo Ghunghat me kaid ho chuki thi.
Niche akar uski Maa Doctors se uska parichay karati hai fir ek check-up ke bad Doctors Aditya ko batate hai ki Kashyap Singh ki Halat kharab hi hai unka Lakwa unke hath ko kharab kar chuka hai Sath hi main Heart attack ke karan wo ab jyada bahar bhi nahi reh sakte unke liye thodi bhi mehnat Jaan lewa sabit ho sakti hai . Wo filhal hosh me toh hai lekin kamzori ke karan abhi wo thik se Baat nahi kar Sakte.
ADITYA Dr. Se apne pita se Baat karne ke liye kehta hai jis par Dr. Swikriti de dete hai Aditi aur Aditya, Kashyap se milne Room me chale Jate ha. Kashyap Aditya ko dekhte hi pehchan leta hai aur uski ankho se ansu aane lagte hai wo apne bete ko gale lagane ke liye uthane ki koshish karta hai par uska Sharir sath nahi deta . Aditya jaldi se uske pita ke pas Beth kar unhe na uthne ke liye kehta hai. Aditi bhi wahi Aditya ke pas Beth jati hai aur uski ankho se bhi aansu behne lagte hai . Itne saalo me ye pehli bar tha ki Ye pariwar ek sath tha par wo bhi kis kimat par.
Kashyap Singh ko apne kiye gaye Gunaho ke liye pachtawa hota hai. usne ye sab Aditi aur Aditya ke Bhale ke liye hi Kiya tha par wo ab samjh paa Raha tha ki Rishte Nibhane ke liye Unke sath hona jaruri hai na ki unse Dur. Ye soch kar Kashyap fir se Ansu bahane lagta hai. Aditya ki ankhen bhi Nam ho jati hai. Kuch der Bad Kashyap Singh thodi bohot baate karne ki koshish karte hai.
Kashyap Singh ~ (Bolne ki koshish karte hue) K… kaise ho … Beta?
Aditya ~ Achha hun Papa par please aap khudko taklif mat dijiye.
Kashyap Singh bhi khudki halat samjh Raha tha fir wo Aditi taraf dekhta hai uski Sundar biwi jise wo khud shayad aaj achhe se dekh raha tha jiske liye uske paas kabhi wakt nahi tha . Wo Aditi se kehta hai ~ T… Tum kesi ho … Aditi?
Ye sun kar Aditi aur jyada aasnu bahane lagti hai ye pehli bar tha jab uske Pati ne uska haal usse puchha tha . Wo koi jawab nahi deti sirf rone lagti hai .
Kashyap Ko bhi ab Realization hone lagta hai ki uske Karan In Dono ne kitna dukh Saha hai . Kuch der tak koi Baat nahi hoti fir Kashyap Singh Apni Takat laga kar fir se bolne ka pryaas karta hai .
Kashyap ~ Aa.. Aaditya
Aditya ~ Haa .. Papa Kahiye. Main yahi hun.
Kashyap ~ E..ek wada ka.karo mujhse….
Aditya ~ Haa papa Kahiye aap jo bolenge main taiyar hun.
Kashyap ~ Jo…gal.tiya mene ki …. Wo kabhi ..Mat karna ........... Aditi ka Dh.. Dhyan rakhna, Use Kabhi … Akela… Chhod kar … Mat jana.
Aditya ~ Hamara dhyan Rakhne ke liye Aap hai na Papa. Apko kuch nahi hoga.. Maa ko meri jarurat nahi.
Kashyap ~ bas….. mujhse ..Wada K…Karo beta. VA..vachan do.
Aditya ~ ( Apne Pita ki Halat ke karan Papa ka hath tham kar unhe Vachan de deta hai) Main Vada karta hun Papa . Maa ko kabhi chhod kar nahi jaunga.
Kashyap ~ Ab se … Aditi Tumhari…. Jimmedari hai .
Ye bol kar Kashyap fir se behosh ho jata hai Aditya Bhag kar dr. Ko lene Jata hai Aditi jo ye sab dekh Rahi thi apne rone par control nahi kar pati aur aansuo ki Jhadi laga deti hai . Kuch der me Doctos Akar Aditya aur Aditi ko Bahar Jane ka bol kar Kashyap ki fir se jaanch karne lagte hai.
Kafi der Tak Aditya aur Aditi bahar hi intezar karne lagte hai. jese hi doctor bahar ate hai Aditya un par sawalo ki bochhor kar deta hai.
Dr. ~ Ghabraiye nahi Wo Sirf Energy na hone ke karan behosh hue he. Halaki abhi bhi nahi kaha Jaa sakta ki wo kab Tak thik honge ya honge bhi ya nahi. Hum sirf koshish kar sakte hai. Aap Hope mat khoiye Upar Wale par Bharosa rakhiye. hamari team hr kuch dino me akar unki treatment karegi. Filhaal aap log hume ijazat dijiye. If anything serious happens you will inform us anytime.
Dr. Ki Baat bol kar chale jate hai. Aditya apni Maa ko dekhta hai jo Khamoshi me dubi Hui thi wo use dilasa deta hai ki Sab thik ho jaega . Aditi bhi apne bete ke kehne par thoda hosla sambhalti hai.
Aditi Aditya se Khane ka puchhti hai par Aditya mana kar deta hai
Aditi ~ (Bhavook ansuo ke sath)kya itne saalo ke bad bhi apni Maa ke hatho ka khana nahi khaega Beta
Aditya is baat ka jawab nahi de pata aur Khane ke liye haa kar deta hai. Aditi kitchen me khana banane chali jati hai, Aditya ki nazar Kitchen me jati Hui apni maa ki taraf jati hai.
Usko Khushi aur Pachtawa dono mehsoos hote hai ki ye Apsara uski Sagi Maa hai Aditya ek Thandi saans leta hai aur kehta hai ~ Ab toh shayad main Apka diya zehar bhi khaa sakta hoon.
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"mujhe apne Aditya ke saath har din ghoomane me koyi pareshaani nahi hai." usane haath badhaaya, aur aseem prem ke bhaav se Aditya ke chehare ko apne haatho se thaam liya.
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unki nigaahe ek dusre se milee, unke bich ek khaamosh baatchit hui. Aditi ki aankhe, jo hamesha uske liye Mamta se bhari rahti he, Aaj un me ek gaharai thi jisne Aditya ke Shareer me siharan paida kar di. us saajha nazar me, satah ke thik niche ankahi Bhawnaye ubal rahi thi.
ek pal ke baad Aditi uthee. uska sparsh, ek halka dulaar, wo jhuki ek soft kiss Aditya ke maathe par kiya, jiske karan uska Dil kuch der ke lie ruka.
Aditi ne apni ungaliyaan Aditya ke baalo me pheri, "der ho rahee hai," usne fusfusaate hue kaha, uski awaaz ek nashili kavita thi. "Ab hamen thodi neend leni chahiye."
Aditya, abhi bhi apni Maa ke touch ke ehsaas aur uski nazar ke aakarshan me khoya hua tha, ek sapano ki aah uske hothon se nikali aur aakhirkaar awaaz aayi.
"haan-haan," usne haklaate hue kaha, uski gardan par ek sharm reng rahi thi. "chalo chalte hai."
jab wo apne apne bedaroom ki or saath-saath chal rahe the, to unke beech ek sukhad khamoshi chha gai. phir bhi, hawa me ek nayi chingaari chamak rahi thi.
jesi hi Aditi apne kamre ke door tak pahochi, Aditi Aditya ki or mudi, uske hothon par ek pyari smile thi. "good night, beta," usne dheere se kaha.
Aditya ne uski muskaan ka jawab bhi muskaan ke sath diya, uski aankhon me garmahat aa gayi. "Good night, Maa," usne dohraaya.
unke bich ek maun wada tha. ek naye connection ki bhawana ne use bhar diya, ek shandaar future ka wada.
( Aditi hamesha se hi apne alag room me akeli Soti aayi hai kyuki Aditi ke pati toh kabhi Ghar aate hi nahi the aur ab jab unki tabiyat kharab ho gayi hai toh wo apne alag room me hi hospital facility ke sath hi rehte hai.)
Aditi ne apne kamre ke shaant aashray me, room ka darwaza band kiya aur ek pal ke liye us door par jhuk gayi, din ki thakaan uske kandhon par aa gayi. phir bhi, ek shaant santosh tha, uska beta aakhirkar ghar aa gaya tha. Aur pyaar aur saath se bhare bhavishya ke ummeed ki ek kiran Aditi ke bheetar jhilmila uthi. yahaan tak ki ab is ghar ka vishaal khaalipan, jo saalo se Tanhaai se goonj raha tha, ab kam daraawna lag raha tha. aisa lag raha tha jaise Aditya ki upasthiti ne khaali jagah ko bhar diya tha, jaise hi wo sone ke liye gayi, uski ankhon se ek aansoo nikal aaya, jo uske gaal par chamakata hua raasta bana raha tha.
Ye dukh ka nahi, balki khushi ka aansoo tha. isme ek naye jeewan ki aasha jhalak thi, ek aisa jeewan jisme wo ab duniya ka saamana akele nahi karegi, balki apne bete ke saath haath me haath daalkar, saath milkar apni kahaani ko phir se likhegi.
Aditya bhi apne kamre ki or badha, uske kadam normal se adhik bhaari the. Aditi ke sparsh ki garmaahat ne uske sharir me beejali paida kar di, jo is thandi raat ki hawa se bilkul alag thi. apne aalishaan bistar par girte hue, wo neend se koson door tha.
uske dimaag me din bhar ki ghatnae baar-baar ghoom rahi thi jo uski Maa ke sath bitayi thi - ek-doosre se nazare Milana, hansi-mazaak karna, Unke sath bahar shopping par Jana aur Garden or rasoee me unke bich huyi unexpected ghatna. Maa Aditi ke saath bitaya gaya har pal naya aur alag lagta tha, ek esi thandak se bhara hua jise wo samjha nahi sakta tha. usne apne doston ke saath anginat jagaho ki yaatra ki thi, phir bhi kisi ne bhi usme aisa aanand, aisa ehasaas nahi jagaaya tha.
uske hothon se ek karaah nikali. use hamesha dusaro ki bhawanao ko aasani se samajh jane par garv tha, phir bhi wo yahaan aaj, poori tarah se khoya hua tha. Maa ki har nazar, unke haatho ka har sparsh, Aditya ke andar ek kampan paida kar raha tha, ek aisa ehasaas jo utsaah janak aur confuse karne wala dono tha. kya ye sirf santushti thi? dosti? Maa bete ka pyar? ya kuchh aur gehara, jise wo theek se vyakt nahi kar paa raha tha? jaise hi wo bechaini se bhari neend me dooba, Aditi ka Sundar chehara uske dimaag me fir se aane lag gaya.
uski nayi bhaawnao ka sawaal hava me gehara ho gaya tha, wo dua karne laga ek aisa bhavishy jahaan wo aakhir kaar apne dil ke rahasy ko ujaagar kar paaega. Inhi sab khayalo ke sath neend ka asar us par hawi hone laga Kal ka din fir se apni Maa ke sath bitane ke bare me soch kar uske chehre par fir se ek badi si smile aa jati hai aur wo kab sapno me kho jata hai pata nahi chalta...
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