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"Maa," usne gambheerata se kaha, "Aap ab papa ke saath nahi ho. Aap yahaan ho, mere saath. aur main Aapko is ghoonghat ke peechhe chhipte hue nahi dekh sakta".
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Aditya ne apni baat jari rakhi "Ye paramparae, ateet ki nishaaniya hai. ham ab ek nayi duniya me rehte hai, ek aisi duniya jahaan ek Aurat apna sar uncha karke chal sakti hai, na ki apna chehra parde me chhipae." Aditi ke honth virodh me khul gaye, lekin koi shabd nahi nikla. Aditya ki baate uske bheetar goonj uthi, Aditya ne saalo se Aditi ke chaaro or jo diwaare khadi thi, unhe tod diya. "lekin tumhare papa, Aditya?" Aditi ne aakhirakaar kaha, uski awaaz me narmi aa gayi thi. apne pati ki gair maujoodgi me bhi unke khilaaf jaane ke khayaal se hi uske andar dar paida ho gaya. Aditya ki nazare Aditi par tiki thi, "Maa," usne dheere se kaha, "wo insaan yahaa nahi hai. ab apke paas main hoon, apka beta, jo apko sabse zyada pyaar karta hai aur apki parvaah karta hai. main chaahta hoon ki aap duniya me confidence ke saath chalo, kisi parde ke peechhe chhip kar nahi।"
Aditi ke man ke ek hisse ne Aditya ki baato ko sach maana. Aditya sahi hi toh bol raha hai duniya aage badh chuki hai, aur ye parampara use bhi ek bhaari bojh ki tarah mahsoos hoti thi jese koi uska gala ghont raha ho. phir bhi, saalon se uske saath raha Samaj ka dar aur parmpara ki andekhi jail ne use bandi bana rakha tha. bachpan se hi sikhaye gayi Values ki training bohot jyada gehri thi.
"nahi, beta," usne kamzor ho chuki awaaz se kaha, uski awaaz bhaavanao se bhar gayi thi. dar ne uske gale ko jakad liya. "main... main ye nahi kar sakti."
"kyo, Maa?" Aditya ke Sawal me bebasee jhalak rahi thi. Itne tark dene ke bad bhi apni Maa ko is tarah values or traditions ki zanjeer me bandha dekh uska Dil toot raha tha. phir bhi, Conversation aur phychology ke liye apne talent ka use karte hue, usne jor dekar kaha, "Apne mujhse waada kiya tha. Aap Chandrawati vansh ki beti aur Suryaveer vansh ki bahu hain. kya Aap apne vachan se pichhe hat rahi ho?"
Achaanak uske in shabdo ne Aditi ko jhakajhor diya. Wo jhijhakte hue budbudai, "lekin... lekin-"
Aditya ne use beech me hi rok diya, uske alfaaz mazboot the. "Aap traditions ka paalan karne ka daava karti ho Aur Do mahaan parivaaro se Judi ho kar bhi apna vaada tod rahi ho? hamaare ancestors ne hame apne wado ko nibhaana sikhaaya hai, chaahe badle me hamaari life ki keemat hi kyo na ho."
Aditya ne Aditi ke dimaag ko sire se Hila kar rakh diya, Aditi ko logic aur mazboot vishvaas ke jaal me fansa diya. Aditi se koi jawaab dete nahi ban raha tha, wo chuppee me doobee rahti hai kyonki wo Aditya ki daleel ke wazan aur apne khud ke Resolution ki dag-magaa-hat se joojh rahi thi. sharm, uske seene me ek garm angaare ki tarah jaal rahi thi, bina parde ya ghoonghat ke baahar nikalane ke khayal se hi uski rooh kaanp rahi thi. "Please, beta," usne vinati ki, "mujhe aisa kuch karne ke liye majboor mat karo. main... main publicly apna ghoonghat hatane ki sharm bardaasht nahi kar sakti." Aditya ke prati uske badhte lagaav ke bawajood, Ghoonghat abhi bhi ek bada Obstacle bana hua tha. Ab baat sirf parampara ki nahi thi ab jo zanjeer Aditi ko jakade hui thi wo thi uski apni Sharm jiska wo samna nahi paa rahi thi.
Aditya ne uski bebasi ko pahachaana. usne apni awaaz ko naram kiya "Maa, Aap janti ho na main apka Beta hone ke sath sath apka dost bhi hoon". Aditya ki baato me Achanak hue is pariwartan ko Aditi samajh nahi paati aur wo uljhaan bhari nigaho se Aditya ko dekhti hai. Aditya fir kehta hai "Kya aap mujhe Apna dost manti ho"?
Aditi abhi bhi uljhan me thi lekin fir bhi wo jawab deti hai "Haa.. lekin".
"Lekin... Kuch nahi Maa, Kya aapko apne is Dost par bharosa nahi hai? Aapko lagta hai ki mere hote aapko duniya ki nazaro se darne ki jarurat hai".
Aditi ko apne bete par khud se bhi jyada bharosa tha isiliye uske in shabdo ne Aditi ke dil me thodi Rahat paida ki lekin abhi bhi uski jhijhak bani hui thi.
Apni Maa ko is tarah pareshan dekh kar Aditya ke kandhe jhuk gaye, uski aankhon me udaasi ki jhalak dikhai di.
"Maa," usne ab request ki, usme ab niraasha bhari hui thi, "kya aap mere liye ye chhota sa kaam nahi kar sakti?"
Aditi bina rooke Aditya ko dekhne lagti hai uski Ankho me use sirf pyaar dikhta hai jiske karan uske dil me bhi chahat aane lagti hai. Aditya ke liye toh wo khudki Jaan bhi de sakti thi lekin ab jab use Aditya ka sath meel raha hai toh wo kese pichhe hat sakti hai. Wo ghoonghat hatane ke liye apne haatho ko apne sar tak laati hai par abhi bhi uske haath ye kaam karte hue kaamp rahe the, "Beta main khud ye nahi kar paungi."
Aditya ke dimaag me ek sharaarati suggestion aata hai. "theek hai, main samajhta hoon ki Aap ise khud nahi utaar sakti. lekin kya hoga agar aapka ye dost aapki madad kare?" Is Unexpected prastav ne Aditi ke gaalo ko surkh kar diya. sharm se, uski aankhe band ho gayi, aur ek ankahe vishvaas se bhare ishaare me, Aditi ne apna sar Aditya ke kandhe par tika diya. us maun harkat me, Aditya ko apna jawaab mil gaya. Ab use zubani confirmation ki jarurat nahi thi.
Aditi ke touch se nikalne waali garmi, uski vulnerability, bahut kuchh keh rahi thi. Aditya ke hothon par ek muskaan aa gayi.
TO BE CONTINUE......
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PART B jald hi
Nice update....Update 14 (A)
Previous.......
"Maa," usne gambheerata se kaha, "Aap ab papa ke saath nahi ho. Aap yahaan ho, mere saath. aur main Aapko is ghoonghat ke peechhe chhipte hue nahi dekh sakta".
Continue.....
Aditya ne apni baat jari rakhi "Ye paramparae, ateet ki nishaaniya hai. ham ab ek nayi duniya me rehte hai, ek aisi duniya jahaan ek Aurat apna sar uncha karke chal sakti hai, na ki apna chehra parde me chhipae." Aditi ke honth virodh me khul gaye, lekin koi shabd nahi nikla. Aditya ki baate uske bheetar goonj uthi, Aditya ne saalo se Aditi ke chaaro or jo diwaare khadi thi, unhe tod diya. "lekin tumhare papa, Aditya?" Aditi ne aakhirakaar kaha, uski awaaz me narmi aa gayi thi. apne pati ki gair maujoodgi me bhi unke khilaaf jaane ke khayaal se hi uske andar dar paida ho gaya. Aditya ki nazare Aditi par tiki thi, "Maa," usne dheere se kaha, "wo insaan yahaa nahi hai. ab apke paas main hoon, apka beta, jo apko sabse zyada pyaar karta hai aur apki parvaah karta hai. main chaahta hoon ki aap duniya me confidence ke saath chalo, kisi parde ke peechhe chhip kar nahi।"
Aditi ke man ke ek hisse ne Aditya ki baato ko sach maana. Aditya sahi hi toh bol raha hai duniya aage badh chuki hai, aur ye parampara use bhi ek bhaari bojh ki tarah mahsoos hoti thi jese koi uska gala ghont raha ho. phir bhi, saalon se uske saath raha Samaj ka dar aur parmpara ki andekhi jail ne use bandi bana rakha tha. bachpan se hi sikhaye gayi Values ki training bohot jyada gehri thi.
"nahi, beta," usne kamzor ho chuki awaaz se kaha, uski awaaz bhaavanao se bhar gayi thi. dar ne uske gale ko jakad liya. "main... main ye nahi kar sakti."
"kyo, Maa?" Aditya ke Sawal me bebasee jhalak rahi thi. Itne tark dene ke bad bhi apni Maa ko is tarah values or traditions ki zanjeer me bandha dekh uska Dil toot raha tha. phir bhi, Conversation aur phychology ke liye apne talent ka use karte hue, usne jor dekar kaha, "Apne mujhse waada kiya tha. Aap Chandrawati vansh ki beti aur Suryaveer vansh ki bahu hain. kya Aap apne vachan se pichhe hat rahi ho?"
Achaanak uske in shabdo ne Aditi ko jhakajhor diya. Wo jhijhakte hue budbudai, "lekin... lekin-"
Aditya ne use beech me hi rok diya, uske alfaaz mazboot the. "Aap traditions ka paalan karne ka daava karti ho Aur Do mahaan parivaaro se Judi ho kar bhi apna vaada tod rahi ho? hamaare ancestors ne hame apne wado ko nibhaana sikhaaya hai, chaahe badle me hamaari life ki keemat hi kyo na ho."
Aditya ne Aditi ke dimaag ko sire se Hila kar rakh diya, Aditi ko logic aur mazboot vishvaas ke jaal me fansa diya. Aditi se koi jawaab dete nahi ban raha tha, wo chuppee me doobee rahti hai kyonki wo Aditya ki daleel ke wazan aur apne khud ke Resolution ki dag-magaa-hat se joojh rahi thi. sharm, uske seene me ek garm angaare ki tarah jaal rahi thi, bina parde ya ghoonghat ke baahar nikalane ke khayal se hi uski rooh kaanp rahi thi. "Please, beta," usne vinati ki, "mujhe aisa kuch karne ke liye majboor mat karo. main... main publicly apna ghoonghat hatane ki sharm bardaasht nahi kar sakti." Aditya ke prati uske badhte lagaav ke bawajood, Ghoonghat abhi bhi ek bada Obstacle bana hua tha. Ab baat sirf parampara ki nahi thi ab jo zanjeer Aditi ko jakade hui thi wo thi uski apni Sharm jiska wo samna nahi paa rahi thi.
Aditya ne uski bebasi ko pahachaana. usne apni awaaz ko naram kiya "Maa, Aap janti ho na main apka Beta hone ke sath sath apka dost bhi hoon". Aditya ki baato me Achanak hue is pariwartan ko Aditi samajh nahi paati aur wo uljhaan bhari nigaho se Aditya ko dekhti hai. Aditya fir kehta hai "Kya aap mujhe Apna dost manti ho"?
Aditi abhi bhi uljhan me thi lekin fir bhi wo jawab deti hai "Haa.. lekin".
"Lekin... Kuch nahi Maa, Kya aapko apne is Dost par bharosa nahi hai? Aapko lagta hai ki mere hote aapko duniya ki nazaro se darne ki jarurat hai".
Aditi ko apne bete par khud se bhi jyada bharosa tha isiliye uske in shabdo ne Aditi ke dil me thodi Rahat paida ki lekin abhi bhi uski jhijhak bani hui thi.
Apni Maa ko is tarah pareshan dekh kar Aditya ke kandhe jhuk gaye, uski aankhon me udaasi ki jhalak dikhai di.
"Maa," usne ab request ki, usme ab niraasha bhari hui thi, "kya aap mere liye ye chhota sa kaam nahi kar sakti?"
Aditi bina rooke Aditya ko dekhne lagti hai uski Ankho me use sirf pyaar dikhta hai jiske karan uske dil me bhi chahat aane lagti hai. Aditya ke liye toh wo khudki Jaan bhi de sakti thi lekin ab jab use Aditya ka sath meel raha hai toh wo kese pichhe hat sakti hai. Wo ghoonghat hatane ke liye apne haatho ko apne sar tak laati hai par abhi bhi uske haath ye kaam karte hue kaamp rahe the, "Beta main khud ye nahi kar paungi."
Aditya ke dimaag me ek sharaarati suggestion aata hai. "theek hai, main samajhta hoon ki Aap ise khud nahi utaar sakti. lekin kya hoga agar aapka ye dost aapki madad kare?" Is Unexpected prastav ne Aditi ke gaalo ko surkh kar diya. sharm se, uski aankhe band ho gayi, aur ek ankahe vishvaas se bhare ishaare me, Aditi ne apna sar Aditya ke kandhe par tika diya. us maun harkat me, Aditya ko apna jawaab mil gaya. Ab use zubani confirmation ki jarurat nahi thi.
Aditi ke touch se nikalne waali garmi, uski vulnerability, bahut kuchh keh rahi thi. Aditya ke hothon par ek muskaan aa gayi.
TO BE CONTINUE......
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PART B jald hi
Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Esac bhai....Update 14 (A)
Previous.......
"Maa," usne gambheerata se kaha, "Aap ab papa ke saath nahi ho. Aap yahaan ho, mere saath. aur main Aapko is ghoonghat ke peechhe chhipte hue nahi dekh sakta".
Continue.....
Aditya ne apni baat jari rakhi "Ye paramparae, ateet ki nishaaniya hai. ham ab ek nayi duniya me rehte hai, ek aisi duniya jahaan ek Aurat apna sar uncha karke chal sakti hai, na ki apna chehra parde me chhipae." Aditi ke honth virodh me khul gaye, lekin koi shabd nahi nikla. Aditya ki baate uske bheetar goonj uthi, Aditya ne saalo se Aditi ke chaaro or jo diwaare khadi thi, unhe tod diya. "lekin tumhare papa, Aditya?" Aditi ne aakhirakaar kaha, uski awaaz me narmi aa gayi thi. apne pati ki gair maujoodgi me bhi unke khilaaf jaane ke khayaal se hi uske andar dar paida ho gaya. Aditya ki nazare Aditi par tiki thi, "Maa," usne dheere se kaha, "wo insaan yahaa nahi hai. ab apke paas main hoon, apka beta, jo apko sabse zyada pyaar karta hai aur apki parvaah karta hai. main chaahta hoon ki aap duniya me confidence ke saath chalo, kisi parde ke peechhe chhip kar nahi।"
Aditi ke man ke ek hisse ne Aditya ki baato ko sach maana. Aditya sahi hi toh bol raha hai duniya aage badh chuki hai, aur ye parampara use bhi ek bhaari bojh ki tarah mahsoos hoti thi jese koi uska gala ghont raha ho. phir bhi, saalon se uske saath raha Samaj ka dar aur parmpara ki andekhi jail ne use bandi bana rakha tha. bachpan se hi sikhaye gayi Values ki training bohot jyada gehri thi.
"nahi, beta," usne kamzor ho chuki awaaz se kaha, uski awaaz bhaavanao se bhar gayi thi. dar ne uske gale ko jakad liya. "main... main ye nahi kar sakti."
"kyo, Maa?" Aditya ke Sawal me bebasee jhalak rahi thi. Itne tark dene ke bad bhi apni Maa ko is tarah values or traditions ki zanjeer me bandha dekh uska Dil toot raha tha. phir bhi, Conversation aur phychology ke liye apne talent ka use karte hue, usne jor dekar kaha, "Apne mujhse waada kiya tha. Aap Chandrawati vansh ki beti aur Suryaveer vansh ki bahu hain. kya Aap apne vachan se pichhe hat rahi ho?"
Achaanak uske in shabdo ne Aditi ko jhakajhor diya. Wo jhijhakte hue budbudai, "lekin... lekin-"
Aditya ne use beech me hi rok diya, uske alfaaz mazboot the. "Aap traditions ka paalan karne ka daava karti ho Aur Do mahaan parivaaro se Judi ho kar bhi apna vaada tod rahi ho? hamaare ancestors ne hame apne wado ko nibhaana sikhaaya hai, chaahe badle me hamaari life ki keemat hi kyo na ho."
Aditya ne Aditi ke dimaag ko sire se Hila kar rakh diya, Aditi ko logic aur mazboot vishvaas ke jaal me fansa diya. Aditi se koi jawaab dete nahi ban raha tha, wo chuppee me doobee rahti hai kyonki wo Aditya ki daleel ke wazan aur apne khud ke Resolution ki dag-magaa-hat se joojh rahi thi. sharm, uske seene me ek garm angaare ki tarah jaal rahi thi, bina parde ya ghoonghat ke baahar nikalane ke khayal se hi uski rooh kaanp rahi thi. "Please, beta," usne vinati ki, "mujhe aisa kuch karne ke liye majboor mat karo. main... main publicly apna ghoonghat hatane ki sharm bardaasht nahi kar sakti." Aditya ke prati uske badhte lagaav ke bawajood, Ghoonghat abhi bhi ek bada Obstacle bana hua tha. Ab baat sirf parampara ki nahi thi ab jo zanjeer Aditi ko jakade hui thi wo thi uski apni Sharm jiska wo samna nahi paa rahi thi.
Aditya ne uski bebasi ko pahachaana. usne apni awaaz ko naram kiya "Maa, Aap janti ho na main apka Beta hone ke sath sath apka dost bhi hoon". Aditya ki baato me Achanak hue is pariwartan ko Aditi samajh nahi paati aur wo uljhaan bhari nigaho se Aditya ko dekhti hai. Aditya fir kehta hai "Kya aap mujhe Apna dost manti ho"?
Aditi abhi bhi uljhan me thi lekin fir bhi wo jawab deti hai "Haa.. lekin".
"Lekin... Kuch nahi Maa, Kya aapko apne is Dost par bharosa nahi hai? Aapko lagta hai ki mere hote aapko duniya ki nazaro se darne ki jarurat hai".
Aditi ko apne bete par khud se bhi jyada bharosa tha isiliye uske in shabdo ne Aditi ke dil me thodi Rahat paida ki lekin abhi bhi uski jhijhak bani hui thi.
Apni Maa ko is tarah pareshan dekh kar Aditya ke kandhe jhuk gaye, uski aankhon me udaasi ki jhalak dikhai di.
"Maa," usne ab request ki, usme ab niraasha bhari hui thi, "kya aap mere liye ye chhota sa kaam nahi kar sakti?"
Aditi bina rooke Aditya ko dekhne lagti hai uski Ankho me use sirf pyaar dikhta hai jiske karan uske dil me bhi chahat aane lagti hai. Aditya ke liye toh wo khudki Jaan bhi de sakti thi lekin ab jab use Aditya ka sath meel raha hai toh wo kese pichhe hat sakti hai. Wo ghoonghat hatane ke liye apne haatho ko apne sar tak laati hai par abhi bhi uske haath ye kaam karte hue kaamp rahe the, "Beta main khud ye nahi kar paungi."
Aditya ke dimaag me ek sharaarati suggestion aata hai. "theek hai, main samajhta hoon ki Aap ise khud nahi utaar sakti. lekin kya hoga agar aapka ye dost aapki madad kare?" Is Unexpected prastav ne Aditi ke gaalo ko surkh kar diya. sharm se, uski aankhe band ho gayi, aur ek ankahe vishvaas se bhare ishaare me, Aditi ne apna sar Aditya ke kandhe par tika diya. us maun harkat me, Aditya ko apna jawaab mil gaya. Ab use zubani confirmation ki jarurat nahi thi.
Aditi ke touch se nikalne waali garmi, uski vulnerability, bahut kuchh keh rahi thi. Aditya ke hothon par ek muskaan aa gayi.
TO BE CONTINUE......
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PART B jald hi