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Previous .......

Aditi ne utsukta se turant sahmati de di. "theek hai, baba," usne hanste hue kaha, "main wada karti hoon."
ek gehari saans lete hue, Aditya ne apna anurodh kiya. "kya Aap... please jab ham saath me baahar jaate hai us wakt aapka ye ghoonghat hata sakti ho?" uski awaaz me thodi jhijhak thi.


Car me ek bhaari sannaata chha gaya


Continue.......




Car Abhi apni raftar se chal rahi thi lekin kuch pal ke liye car me sannaata chhaya hua tha. na to Aditi aur na hi Aditya ne ek shabd bola. Aditya, bade hi dhairya aur Concerned ke sath apne sawaal ke javaab ka intzaar kar raha tha. lekin Aditi, kisi moorti ki tarah nishchal bethi rahi. Aditi ke man me ek toofaan aaya hua tha, wo ye samajhne ki koshish kar rahi thi ki Aditya ne usase ye kya poochha hai. jis ghoonghat ko usne apne ghar ke baahar kabhi nahi hataaya tha, Aditya ab use hataane ke liye kah raha tha.

"nahi, nahi... shaayad maine hi galat suna hai," usne socha.

haklaate hue, usne aakhirkaar chuppee todi, "main... main tumhaara sawaal nahi samajhi, Aditya."

Aditya ko ye reaction kuchh had tak uljhan bhara laga. usne apni baat saaf saaf roop se jaahir ki thi, phir bhi uski Maa ko samajh me kyu nahi aaya. ek baar phir himmat jutate hue usne khud ko dohraaya, "Maa, main chahata hoon ki aap ye Ghoonghat kabhi na pehano."


Aditi ki aankhen hairat se chaudee ho gayi. uska beta usase ye kya maang raha hai? ghoonghat, jise usne apni shadi ke baad se apne pati aur bete ke alaawa kisi ke saamane nahi hataaya tha - jo uske patni Dharm aur uske kartavya ka prateek hai - ab us par sawaal uthaaya ja raha tha aur wo bhi uske apne bete ke dwara. Aditya ki Demand ka wazan hava me bhaari ho chuka tha.

Wo uske shabdo ke Aashay ko samajhne ke liye sangharsh kar rahi thi. Ye ghoonghat uski pahachaan ka ek Shameel ang tha, ek patni ke roop me uski bhoomika aur jimmedaariyon ki continuous yaad dilaata tha. Wo ab sirf apne bete ke kehane bhar par ise kaise tyaag sakati thi?

Aditi ko Confusion aur disbelief ka ek mishran mehasoos hua. uska beta hamesha se respectful aur samajhdaar raha hai, isliye ye uski anjaane me ki gayi demand uske charitr se alag lag rahi thi.

Iska arth samajhne ki koshish karte hue, Aditi ne nishkarsh nikaala ki Aditya bholepan me ye bol gaya hoga, wo poori tarah se nahi samajh pa raha hoga ki wo kya maang raha hai. ek forced muskaan ke saath, Aditi uski baaton ko khaarij kar dena chaah rahi thi.

"Beta, ye kaisa mazaak hai?" usne poochha, uski awaaz thodi kaanp rahi thi. "Aditya, tumhe is tarah ke mazaak nahi karne chaahiye. Ye koi aisi baat nahi hai jise halke me liya jaye."

"Main mazaak nahi kar raha hoon," Aditya ne kaha. "main sach me chaahata hoon-..."

Aditya ka sentence poora hone se pehale hi Aditi ki awaaz oonchi ho jaati hai, "Aditya..."

Aditi ka gussa saaf jhalak raha tha. haalaanki Aditya, bahaadur tha aur bahut se pahalwaano ko dhool chatane me saksham tha, lekin apni naazuk si Maa ke gusse ko dekhkar use bhi dar laga. Wo chup ho gaya, car ka maahol tanaav se bhar gaya.


thodi der ruk kar, Aditi ne kaha, "tum kya bakvaas kar rahe ho? kya koyi beta apni Maa se aisa kehta hai?" Aditi ko ummeed thi ki uske sakht shabdon se Aditya samajh jaega.

lekin Aditya bhi drdh nishchayi tha. "isme kya galat hai, Maa?" usne himmat jutaate hue poochha.




usne Car ko khaali sadak ke kinaare khada kiya aur poori tarah se Aditi ki or mud gaya. "Maa, please meri baat samajho. Ye ghoonghat nahi hai jo aapne odha hua hai; ye papa dwara aapki aazaadi ke gale me daala hua ek patta hai. main nahi chaahata ki saari zindagii aap is tarah jiyo..."

Aditya ki awaaz, sthir aur gambheer thi. Parampara aur daayitv ki Layers ko bhedane ki koshish kar rahi thi jisne Aditi ko itne lambe samay se baandh rakha tha. uske shabdon ka vajan Aditi ko apne upar mehsoos ho raha tha, jo uski soch ki neenv ko chunauti de raha tha.


Aditi apne bete se bahut pyaar karti thi. usne pehle kabhi usase oonchi awaaz me baat nahi ki thi, lekin aaj apne pyaare bete ke aise sawaal ka saamana karte hue, uski aankhon me aansoo bhar aaye.




"beta," usne kaanpati huee awaaz me kaha, "ye sirf ghoonghat nahi hai. Ye meri aabaroo hai."

Aditya, unshakeable, Aditi ke karib aa kar bolta hai. "Maa, kapde ka ek tukda aapki aabaroo kaise ho sakta hai?" usne dheere se poochha. "meri Maa duniya ki sabse pyaari aur Pavitra mahila hai. unka sammaan kapade ke ek tukde se defined nahi kiya ja sakta. Aapka charitra Parvato se bhi ooncha hai, Maa. is chhote se kapde ke tukde ko apni aabaroo bataakar uska apmaan mat karo."

Uski awaaz me imaandari thi jo khaamoshi ko cheerti huyi, Aditi ke bheetar gaharai se goonj rahi thi. pyaar aur sammaan se bhare uske bete ke shabdo ne us prateek ko chunoti di thi, jise usne itne lambe samay se khud se badhkar mana tha. Aditya ki daleel ka bhaar uske dil par bhaari pad raha tha, aur use un paramparaon or manyatao se pare dekhne ke liye prerit kar raha tha, jinhonne use baandh rakha tha.

Aditi ki awaaz thodi Dhimi uthee, uljhan se bhari huyi. "Par ye hamaari parampara hai."
Aditya ne apni awaaz ko or drdh lekin ek daleel ke saath vyakt kiya, "lekin Maa, kyon?.. ham un puraani paramparaon ko kyon nahin chhod sakte, jinka ab koyi matlab nahin rah gaya hai?"
Aditi ki aankhon me chinta ki ek jhalak dikhayi dee, ek chingaari jo tark ki lahar aur jeevan bhar ki gahari manyatao se agni nahi ban payi thi. "Ye important hai, Aditya," usne jor dekar kaha, uski awaaz komal lekin saaf thi. "Ye sab meri identy ek hissa hai, sammaan ka prateek hai. Imagine karo, beta, agar koyi ajanabi mera chehara dekh le..." uski awaaz dheemi pad gayi, uske man me ankaha dar, uske seene par ek bhaari bojh ban raha tha.

Aditya ne apne Jaws bheench liye, hataasha aur gahare pyaar me sangharsh karte hue usne kaha. "Maa? yah galat kaise ho sakta hai?" uski awaaz oonchi ho gayi, atmavishvas se bhari huyi. "apne aap ko dekho! Apka chehara kitna sundar hai, kind aankhen jo hazaro kahaaniyaan sunati hai, ek muskaan jo poore kamare ko roshan kar sakti hai, aur phir bhi Aap ye sab kapade ke is tukde se chhipaye hue ho, Kyon? Ye mujhe samajh me nahi aata."

"lekin beta," Aditi hakalaate hue boli, uski awaaz abhi abhi kahi gayi uske bete ki Tarif aur logic se bhari baato ke karan thodi kaanp rahi thi, "meri shadi ke baad se lekar aaj tak, tumhaare Papa aur tumhaare alaava kisi admi ne kabhi mera chehara nahi dekha, Aur tumhare Papa ko bhi ye hi pasand hai." jeevan bhar ki parampara aur samaaj ki gahari apekshao ne us par bhaari bojh daala hua tha. Aditya ne apna haath badhaaya, uske sakht hatho ka sparsh komal lekin drdh tha, usne Aditi ka haath dabaaya.




"Maa," usne gambheerata se kaha, "Aap ab papa ke saath nahi ho. Aap yahaan ho, mere saath. aur main Aapko is ghoonghat ke peechhe chhipte hue nahi dekh sakta".


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Update 13





Previous .......

Aditi ne utsukta se turant sahmati de di. "theek hai, baba," usne hanste hue kaha, "main wada karti hoon."
ek gehari saans lete hue, Aditya ne apna anurodh kiya. "kya Aap... please jab ham saath me baahar jaate hai us wakt aapka ye ghoonghat hata sakti ho?" uski awaaz me thodi jhijhak thi.


Car me ek bhaari sannaata chha gaya


Continue.......




Car Abhi apni raftar se chal rahi thi lekin kuch pal ke liye car me sannaata chhaya hua tha. na to Aditi aur na hi Aditya ne ek shabd bola. Aditya, bade hi dhairya aur Concerned ke sath apne sawaal ke javaab ka intzaar kar raha tha. lekin Aditi, kisi moorti ki tarah nishchal bethi rahi. Aditi ke man me ek toofaan aaya hua tha, wo ye samajhne ki koshish kar rahi thi ki Aditya ne usase ye kya poochha hai. jis ghoonghat ko usne apne ghar ke baahar kabhi nahi hataaya tha, Aditya ab use hataane ke liye kah raha tha.

"nahi, nahi... shaayad maine hi galat suna hai," usne socha.

haklaate hue, usne aakhirkaar chuppee todi, "main... main tumhaara sawaal nahi samajhi, Aditya."

Aditya ko ye reaction kuchh had tak uljhan bhara laga. usne apni baat saaf saaf roop se jaahir ki thi, phir bhi uski Maa ko samajh me kyu nahi aaya. ek baar phir himmat jutate hue usne khud ko dohraaya, "Maa, main chahata hoon ki aap ye Ghoonghat kabhi na pehano."


Aditi ki aankhen hairat se chaudee ho gayi. uska beta usase ye kya maang raha hai? ghoonghat, jise usne apni shadi ke baad se apne pati aur bete ke alaawa kisi ke saamane nahi hataaya tha - jo uske patni Dharm aur uske kartavya ka prateek hai - ab us par sawaal uthaaya ja raha tha aur wo bhi uske apne bete ke dwara. Aditya ki Demand ka wazan hava me bhaari ho chuka tha.

Wo uske shabdo ke Aashay ko samajhne ke liye sangharsh kar rahi thi. Ye ghoonghat uski pahachaan ka ek Shameel ang tha, ek patni ke roop me uski bhoomika aur jimmedaariyon ki continuous yaad dilaata tha. Wo ab sirf apne bete ke kehane bhar par ise kaise tyaag sakati thi?

Aditi ko Confusion aur disbelief ka ek mishran mehasoos hua. uska beta hamesha se respectful aur samajhdaar raha hai, isliye ye uski anjaane me ki gayi demand uske charitr se alag lag rahi thi.

Iska arth samajhne ki koshish karte hue, Aditi ne nishkarsh nikaala ki Aditya bholepan me ye bol gaya hoga, wo poori tarah se nahi samajh pa raha hoga ki wo kya maang raha hai. ek forced muskaan ke saath, Aditi uski baaton ko khaarij kar dena chaah rahi thi.

"Beta, ye kaisa mazaak hai?" usne poochha, uski awaaz thodi kaanp rahi thi. "Aditya, tumhe is tarah ke mazaak nahi karne chaahiye. Ye koi aisi baat nahi hai jise halke me liya jaye."

"Main mazaak nahi kar raha hoon," Aditya ne kaha. "main sach me chaahata hoon-..."

Aditya ka sentence poora hone se pehale hi Aditi ki awaaz oonchi ho jaati hai, "Aditya..."

Aditi ka gussa saaf jhalak raha tha. haalaanki Aditya, bahaadur tha aur bahut se pahalwaano ko dhool chatane me saksham tha, lekin apni naazuk si Maa ke gusse ko dekhkar use bhi dar laga. Wo chup ho gaya, car ka maahol tanaav se bhar gaya.


thodi der ruk kar, Aditi ne kaha, "tum kya bakvaas kar rahe ho? kya koyi beta apni Maa se aisa kehta hai?" Aditi ko ummeed thi ki uske sakht shabdon se Aditya samajh jaega.

lekin Aditya bhi drdh nishchayi tha. "isme kya galat hai, Maa?" usne himmat jutaate hue poochha.




usne Car ko khaali sadak ke kinaare khada kiya aur poori tarah se Aditi ki or mud gaya. "Maa, please meri baat samajho. Ye ghoonghat nahi hai jo aapne odha hua hai; ye papa dwara aapki aazaadi ke gale me daala hua ek patta hai. main nahi chaahata ki saari zindagii aap is tarah jiyo..."

Aditya ki awaaz, sthir aur gambheer thi. Parampara aur daayitv ki Layers ko bhedane ki koshish kar rahi thi jisne Aditi ko itne lambe samay se baandh rakha tha. uske shabdon ka vajan Aditi ko apne upar mehsoos ho raha tha, jo uski soch ki neenv ko chunauti de raha tha.


Aditi apne bete se bahut pyaar karti thi. usne pehle kabhi usase oonchi awaaz me baat nahi ki thi, lekin aaj apne pyaare bete ke aise sawaal ka saamana karte hue, uski aankhon me aansoo bhar aaye.




"beta," usne kaanpati huee awaaz me kaha, "ye sirf ghoonghat nahi hai. Ye meri aabaroo hai."

Aditya, unshakeable, Aditi ke karib aa kar bolta hai. "Maa, kapde ka ek tukda aapki aabaroo kaise ho sakta hai?" usne dheere se poochha. "meri Maa duniya ki sabse pyaari aur Pavitra mahila hai. unka sammaan kapade ke ek tukde se defined nahi kiya ja sakta. Aapka charitra Parvato se bhi ooncha hai, Maa. is chhote se kapde ke tukde ko apni aabaroo bataakar uska apmaan mat karo."

Uski awaaz me imaandari thi jo khaamoshi ko cheerti huyi, Aditi ke bheetar gaharai se goonj rahi thi. pyaar aur sammaan se bhare uske bete ke shabdo ne us prateek ko chunoti di thi, jise usne itne lambe samay se khud se badhkar mana tha. Aditya ki daleel ka bhaar uske dil par bhaari pad raha tha, aur use un paramparaon or manyatao se pare dekhne ke liye prerit kar raha tha, jinhonne use baandh rakha tha.

Aditi ki awaaz thodi Dhimi uthee, uljhan se bhari huyi. "Par ye hamaari parampara hai."
Aditya ne apni awaaz ko or drdh lekin ek daleel ke saath vyakt kiya, "lekin Maa, kyon?.. ham un puraani paramparaon ko kyon nahin chhod sakte, jinka ab koyi matlab nahin rah gaya hai?"
Aditi ki aankhon me chinta ki ek jhalak dikhayi dee, ek chingaari jo tark ki lahar aur jeevan bhar ki gahari manyatao se agni nahi ban payi thi. "Ye important hai, Aditya," usne jor dekar kaha, uski awaaz komal lekin saaf thi. "Ye sab meri identy ek hissa hai, sammaan ka prateek hai. Imagine karo, beta, agar koyi ajanabi mera chehara dekh le..." uski awaaz dheemi pad gayi, uske man me ankaha dar, uske seene par ek bhaari bojh ban raha tha.

Aditya ne apne Jaws bheench liye, hataasha aur gahare pyaar me sangharsh karte hue usne kaha. "Maa? yah galat kaise ho sakta hai?" uski awaaz oonchi ho gayi, atmavishvas se bhari huyi. "apne aap ko dekho! Apka chehara kitna sundar hai, kind aankhen jo hazaro kahaaniyaan sunati hai, ek muskaan jo poore kamare ko roshan kar sakti hai, aur phir bhi Aap ye sab kapade ke is tukde se chhipaye hue ho, Kyon? Ye mujhe samajh me nahi aata."

"lekin beta," Aditi hakalaate hue boli, uski awaaz abhi abhi kahi gayi uske bete ki Tarif aur logic se bhari baato ke karan thodi kaanp rahi thi, "meri shadi ke baad se lekar aaj tak, tumhaare Papa aur tumhaare alaava kisi admi ne kabhi mera chehara nahi dekha, Aur tumhare Papa ko bhi ye hi pasand hai." jeevan bhar ki parampara aur samaaj ki gahari apekshao ne us par bhaari bojh daala hua tha. Aditya ne apna haath badhaaya, uske sakht hatho ka sparsh komal lekin drdh tha, usne Aditi ka haath dabaaya.




"Maa," usne gambheerata se kaha, "Aap ab papa ke saath nahi ho. Aap yahaan ho, mere saath. aur main Aapko is ghoonghat ke peechhe chhipte hue nahi dekh sakta".


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Update 13





Previous .......

Aditi ne utsukta se turant sahmati de di. "theek hai, baba," usne hanste hue kaha, "main wada karti hoon."
ek gehari saans lete hue, Aditya ne apna anurodh kiya. "kya Aap... please jab ham saath me baahar jaate hai us wakt aapka ye ghoonghat hata sakti ho?" uski awaaz me thodi jhijhak thi.


Car me ek bhaari sannaata chha gaya


Continue.......




Car Abhi apni raftar se chal rahi thi lekin kuch pal ke liye car me sannaata chhaya hua tha. na to Aditi aur na hi Aditya ne ek shabd bola. Aditya, bade hi dhairya aur Concerned ke sath apne sawaal ke javaab ka intzaar kar raha tha. lekin Aditi, kisi moorti ki tarah nishchal bethi rahi. Aditi ke man me ek toofaan aaya hua tha, wo ye samajhne ki koshish kar rahi thi ki Aditya ne usase ye kya poochha hai. jis ghoonghat ko usne apne ghar ke baahar kabhi nahi hataaya tha, Aditya ab use hataane ke liye kah raha tha.

"nahi, nahi... shaayad maine hi galat suna hai," usne socha.

haklaate hue, usne aakhirkaar chuppee todi, "main... main tumhaara sawaal nahi samajhi, Aditya."

Aditya ko ye reaction kuchh had tak uljhan bhara laga. usne apni baat saaf saaf roop se jaahir ki thi, phir bhi uski Maa ko samajh me kyu nahi aaya. ek baar phir himmat jutate hue usne khud ko dohraaya, "Maa, main chahata hoon ki aap ye Ghoonghat kabhi na pehano."


Aditi ki aankhen hairat se chaudee ho gayi. uska beta usase ye kya maang raha hai? ghoonghat, jise usne apni shadi ke baad se apne pati aur bete ke alaawa kisi ke saamane nahi hataaya tha - jo uske patni Dharm aur uske kartavya ka prateek hai - ab us par sawaal uthaaya ja raha tha aur wo bhi uske apne bete ke dwara. Aditya ki Demand ka wazan hava me bhaari ho chuka tha.

Wo uske shabdo ke Aashay ko samajhne ke liye sangharsh kar rahi thi. Ye ghoonghat uski pahachaan ka ek Shameel ang tha, ek patni ke roop me uski bhoomika aur jimmedaariyon ki continuous yaad dilaata tha. Wo ab sirf apne bete ke kehane bhar par ise kaise tyaag sakati thi?

Aditi ko Confusion aur disbelief ka ek mishran mehasoos hua. uska beta hamesha se respectful aur samajhdaar raha hai, isliye ye uski anjaane me ki gayi demand uske charitr se alag lag rahi thi.

Iska arth samajhne ki koshish karte hue, Aditi ne nishkarsh nikaala ki Aditya bholepan me ye bol gaya hoga, wo poori tarah se nahi samajh pa raha hoga ki wo kya maang raha hai. ek forced muskaan ke saath, Aditi uski baaton ko khaarij kar dena chaah rahi thi.

"Beta, ye kaisa mazaak hai?" usne poochha, uski awaaz thodi kaanp rahi thi. "Aditya, tumhe is tarah ke mazaak nahi karne chaahiye. Ye koi aisi baat nahi hai jise halke me liya jaye."

"Main mazaak nahi kar raha hoon," Aditya ne kaha. "main sach me chaahata hoon-..."

Aditya ka sentence poora hone se pehale hi Aditi ki awaaz oonchi ho jaati hai, "Aditya..."

Aditi ka gussa saaf jhalak raha tha. haalaanki Aditya, bahaadur tha aur bahut se pahalwaano ko dhool chatane me saksham tha, lekin apni naazuk si Maa ke gusse ko dekhkar use bhi dar laga. Wo chup ho gaya, car ka maahol tanaav se bhar gaya.


thodi der ruk kar, Aditi ne kaha, "tum kya bakvaas kar rahe ho? kya koyi beta apni Maa se aisa kehta hai?" Aditi ko ummeed thi ki uske sakht shabdon se Aditya samajh jaega.

lekin Aditya bhi drdh nishchayi tha. "isme kya galat hai, Maa?" usne himmat jutaate hue poochha.




usne Car ko khaali sadak ke kinaare khada kiya aur poori tarah se Aditi ki or mud gaya. "Maa, please meri baat samajho. Ye ghoonghat nahi hai jo aapne odha hua hai; ye papa dwara aapki aazaadi ke gale me daala hua ek patta hai. main nahi chaahata ki saari zindagii aap is tarah jiyo..."

Aditya ki awaaz, sthir aur gambheer thi. Parampara aur daayitv ki Layers ko bhedane ki koshish kar rahi thi jisne Aditi ko itne lambe samay se baandh rakha tha. uske shabdon ka vajan Aditi ko apne upar mehsoos ho raha tha, jo uski soch ki neenv ko chunauti de raha tha.


Aditi apne bete se bahut pyaar karti thi. usne pehle kabhi usase oonchi awaaz me baat nahi ki thi, lekin aaj apne pyaare bete ke aise sawaal ka saamana karte hue, uski aankhon me aansoo bhar aaye.




"beta," usne kaanpati huee awaaz me kaha, "ye sirf ghoonghat nahi hai. Ye meri aabaroo hai."

Aditya, unshakeable, Aditi ke karib aa kar bolta hai. "Maa, kapde ka ek tukda aapki aabaroo kaise ho sakta hai?" usne dheere se poochha. "meri Maa duniya ki sabse pyaari aur Pavitra mahila hai. unka sammaan kapade ke ek tukde se defined nahi kiya ja sakta. Aapka charitra Parvato se bhi ooncha hai, Maa. is chhote se kapde ke tukde ko apni aabaroo bataakar uska apmaan mat karo."

Uski awaaz me imaandari thi jo khaamoshi ko cheerti huyi, Aditi ke bheetar gaharai se goonj rahi thi. pyaar aur sammaan se bhare uske bete ke shabdo ne us prateek ko chunoti di thi, jise usne itne lambe samay se khud se badhkar mana tha. Aditya ki daleel ka bhaar uske dil par bhaari pad raha tha, aur use un paramparaon or manyatao se pare dekhne ke liye prerit kar raha tha, jinhonne use baandh rakha tha.

Aditi ki awaaz thodi Dhimi uthee, uljhan se bhari huyi. "Par ye hamaari parampara hai."
Aditya ne apni awaaz ko or drdh lekin ek daleel ke saath vyakt kiya, "lekin Maa, kyon?.. ham un puraani paramparaon ko kyon nahin chhod sakte, jinka ab koyi matlab nahin rah gaya hai?"
Aditi ki aankhon me chinta ki ek jhalak dikhayi dee, ek chingaari jo tark ki lahar aur jeevan bhar ki gahari manyatao se agni nahi ban payi thi. "Ye important hai, Aditya," usne jor dekar kaha, uski awaaz komal lekin saaf thi. "Ye sab meri identy ek hissa hai, sammaan ka prateek hai. Imagine karo, beta, agar koyi ajanabi mera chehara dekh le..." uski awaaz dheemi pad gayi, uske man me ankaha dar, uske seene par ek bhaari bojh ban raha tha.

Aditya ne apne Jaws bheench liye, hataasha aur gahare pyaar me sangharsh karte hue usne kaha. "Maa? yah galat kaise ho sakta hai?" uski awaaz oonchi ho gayi, atmavishvas se bhari huyi. "apne aap ko dekho! Apka chehara kitna sundar hai, kind aankhen jo hazaro kahaaniyaan sunati hai, ek muskaan jo poore kamare ko roshan kar sakti hai, aur phir bhi Aap ye sab kapade ke is tukde se chhipaye hue ho, Kyon? Ye mujhe samajh me nahi aata."

"lekin beta," Aditi hakalaate hue boli, uski awaaz abhi abhi kahi gayi uske bete ki Tarif aur logic se bhari baato ke karan thodi kaanp rahi thi, "meri shadi ke baad se lekar aaj tak, tumhaare Papa aur tumhaare alaava kisi admi ne kabhi mera chehara nahi dekha, Aur tumhare Papa ko bhi ye hi pasand hai." jeevan bhar ki parampara aur samaaj ki gahari apekshao ne us par bhaari bojh daala hua tha. Aditya ne apna haath badhaaya, uske sakht hatho ka sparsh komal lekin drdh tha, usne Aditi ka haath dabaaya.




"Maa," usne gambheerata se kaha, "Aap ab papa ke saath nahi ho. Aap yahaan ho, mere saath. aur main Aapko is ghoonghat ke peechhe chhipte hue nahi dekh sakta".


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Update 13





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Aditi ne utsukta se turant sahmati de di. "theek hai, baba," usne hanste hue kaha, "main wada karti hoon."
ek gehari saans lete hue, Aditya ne apna anurodh kiya. "kya Aap... please jab ham saath me baahar jaate hai us wakt aapka ye ghoonghat hata sakti ho?" uski awaaz me thodi jhijhak thi.


Car me ek bhaari sannaata chha gaya


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Car Abhi apni raftar se chal rahi thi lekin kuch pal ke liye car me sannaata chhaya hua tha. na to Aditi aur na hi Aditya ne ek shabd bola. Aditya, bade hi dhairya aur Concerned ke sath apne sawaal ke javaab ka intzaar kar raha tha. lekin Aditi, kisi moorti ki tarah nishchal bethi rahi. Aditi ke man me ek toofaan aaya hua tha, wo ye samajhne ki koshish kar rahi thi ki Aditya ne usase ye kya poochha hai. jis ghoonghat ko usne apne ghar ke baahar kabhi nahi hataaya tha, Aditya ab use hataane ke liye kah raha tha.

"nahi, nahi... shaayad maine hi galat suna hai," usne socha.

haklaate hue, usne aakhirkaar chuppee todi, "main... main tumhaara sawaal nahi samajhi, Aditya."

Aditya ko ye reaction kuchh had tak uljhan bhara laga. usne apni baat saaf saaf roop se jaahir ki thi, phir bhi uski Maa ko samajh me kyu nahi aaya. ek baar phir himmat jutate hue usne khud ko dohraaya, "Maa, main chahata hoon ki aap ye Ghoonghat kabhi na pehano."


Aditi ki aankhen hairat se chaudee ho gayi. uska beta usase ye kya maang raha hai? ghoonghat, jise usne apni shadi ke baad se apne pati aur bete ke alaawa kisi ke saamane nahi hataaya tha - jo uske patni Dharm aur uske kartavya ka prateek hai - ab us par sawaal uthaaya ja raha tha aur wo bhi uske apne bete ke dwara. Aditya ki Demand ka wazan hava me bhaari ho chuka tha.

Wo uske shabdo ke Aashay ko samajhne ke liye sangharsh kar rahi thi. Ye ghoonghat uski pahachaan ka ek Shameel ang tha, ek patni ke roop me uski bhoomika aur jimmedaariyon ki continuous yaad dilaata tha. Wo ab sirf apne bete ke kehane bhar par ise kaise tyaag sakati thi?

Aditi ko Confusion aur disbelief ka ek mishran mehasoos hua. uska beta hamesha se respectful aur samajhdaar raha hai, isliye ye uski anjaane me ki gayi demand uske charitr se alag lag rahi thi.

Iska arth samajhne ki koshish karte hue, Aditi ne nishkarsh nikaala ki Aditya bholepan me ye bol gaya hoga, wo poori tarah se nahi samajh pa raha hoga ki wo kya maang raha hai. ek forced muskaan ke saath, Aditi uski baaton ko khaarij kar dena chaah rahi thi.

"Beta, ye kaisa mazaak hai?" usne poochha, uski awaaz thodi kaanp rahi thi. "Aditya, tumhe is tarah ke mazaak nahi karne chaahiye. Ye koi aisi baat nahi hai jise halke me liya jaye."

"Main mazaak nahi kar raha hoon," Aditya ne kaha. "main sach me chaahata hoon-..."

Aditya ka sentence poora hone se pehale hi Aditi ki awaaz oonchi ho jaati hai, "Aditya..."

Aditi ka gussa saaf jhalak raha tha. haalaanki Aditya, bahaadur tha aur bahut se pahalwaano ko dhool chatane me saksham tha, lekin apni naazuk si Maa ke gusse ko dekhkar use bhi dar laga. Wo chup ho gaya, car ka maahol tanaav se bhar gaya.


thodi der ruk kar, Aditi ne kaha, "tum kya bakvaas kar rahe ho? kya koyi beta apni Maa se aisa kehta hai?" Aditi ko ummeed thi ki uske sakht shabdon se Aditya samajh jaega.

lekin Aditya bhi drdh nishchayi tha. "isme kya galat hai, Maa?" usne himmat jutaate hue poochha.




usne Car ko khaali sadak ke kinaare khada kiya aur poori tarah se Aditi ki or mud gaya. "Maa, please meri baat samajho. Ye ghoonghat nahi hai jo aapne odha hua hai; ye papa dwara aapki aazaadi ke gale me daala hua ek patta hai. main nahi chaahata ki saari zindagii aap is tarah jiyo..."

Aditya ki awaaz, sthir aur gambheer thi. Parampara aur daayitv ki Layers ko bhedane ki koshish kar rahi thi jisne Aditi ko itne lambe samay se baandh rakha tha. uske shabdon ka vajan Aditi ko apne upar mehsoos ho raha tha, jo uski soch ki neenv ko chunauti de raha tha.


Aditi apne bete se bahut pyaar karti thi. usne pehle kabhi usase oonchi awaaz me baat nahi ki thi, lekin aaj apne pyaare bete ke aise sawaal ka saamana karte hue, uski aankhon me aansoo bhar aaye.




"beta," usne kaanpati huee awaaz me kaha, "ye sirf ghoonghat nahi hai. Ye meri aabaroo hai."

Aditya, unshakeable, Aditi ke karib aa kar bolta hai. "Maa, kapde ka ek tukda aapki aabaroo kaise ho sakta hai?" usne dheere se poochha. "meri Maa duniya ki sabse pyaari aur Pavitra mahila hai. unka sammaan kapade ke ek tukde se defined nahi kiya ja sakta. Aapka charitra Parvato se bhi ooncha hai, Maa. is chhote se kapde ke tukde ko apni aabaroo bataakar uska apmaan mat karo."

Uski awaaz me imaandari thi jo khaamoshi ko cheerti huyi, Aditi ke bheetar gaharai se goonj rahi thi. pyaar aur sammaan se bhare uske bete ke shabdo ne us prateek ko chunoti di thi, jise usne itne lambe samay se khud se badhkar mana tha. Aditya ki daleel ka bhaar uske dil par bhaari pad raha tha, aur use un paramparaon or manyatao se pare dekhne ke liye prerit kar raha tha, jinhonne use baandh rakha tha.

Aditi ki awaaz thodi Dhimi uthee, uljhan se bhari huyi. "Par ye hamaari parampara hai."
Aditya ne apni awaaz ko or drdh lekin ek daleel ke saath vyakt kiya, "lekin Maa, kyon?.. ham un puraani paramparaon ko kyon nahin chhod sakte, jinka ab koyi matlab nahin rah gaya hai?"
Aditi ki aankhon me chinta ki ek jhalak dikhayi dee, ek chingaari jo tark ki lahar aur jeevan bhar ki gahari manyatao se agni nahi ban payi thi. "Ye important hai, Aditya," usne jor dekar kaha, uski awaaz komal lekin saaf thi. "Ye sab meri identy ek hissa hai, sammaan ka prateek hai. Imagine karo, beta, agar koyi ajanabi mera chehara dekh le..." uski awaaz dheemi pad gayi, uske man me ankaha dar, uske seene par ek bhaari bojh ban raha tha.

Aditya ne apne Jaws bheench liye, hataasha aur gahare pyaar me sangharsh karte hue usne kaha. "Maa? yah galat kaise ho sakta hai?" uski awaaz oonchi ho gayi, atmavishvas se bhari huyi. "apne aap ko dekho! Apka chehara kitna sundar hai, kind aankhen jo hazaro kahaaniyaan sunati hai, ek muskaan jo poore kamare ko roshan kar sakti hai, aur phir bhi Aap ye sab kapade ke is tukde se chhipaye hue ho, Kyon? Ye mujhe samajh me nahi aata."

"lekin beta," Aditi hakalaate hue boli, uski awaaz abhi abhi kahi gayi uske bete ki Tarif aur logic se bhari baato ke karan thodi kaanp rahi thi, "meri shadi ke baad se lekar aaj tak, tumhaare Papa aur tumhaare alaava kisi admi ne kabhi mera chehara nahi dekha, Aur tumhare Papa ko bhi ye hi pasand hai." jeevan bhar ki parampara aur samaaj ki gahari apekshao ne us par bhaari bojh daala hua tha. Aditya ne apna haath badhaaya, uske sakht hatho ka sparsh komal lekin drdh tha, usne Aditi ka haath dabaaya.




"Maa," usne gambheerata se kaha, "Aap ab papa ke saath nahi ho. Aap yahaan ho, mere saath. aur main Aapko is ghoonghat ke peechhe chhipte hue nahi dekh sakta".


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Nice one.bhai update jaldi se dena story me maza aa raha hai