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Fantasy Maantrik-The adventure of Three world's Magic,Romance,Thrill,Incest,Adultery

Story kesi lagi aap ko

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Naughtyrishabh

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Fir se swagat

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Ladkiyo ke bare me sahi kaha.
Egypt me mission locket shuru .
Bada hi badhia wapsi .
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.
Dekhe kya khatra aata h ??

Or isiliye ,
Aage ka intjaar
 
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Baap Ji

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Warrior Boy said:
Bhai hero ko farak na padta muh boli ho ya sagi behen toh behen hai uske liye ab behen bola hai toh dil se behen manta hai woh urvashi ko aisa nahi bas muh se bol diya behen
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Bro maf karna agar dil dukha ho.. Story sach me kamal ki hai lekin story me kuch mistakes bhi hai bas unhe thik kro
 
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Baap Ji

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Baba__Bhai said:
Abe agar nahin padhni to mat padh na... Koi force thode hi kar raha hai....
Or haan ye story hai.. koi real life nahin...
Story me kuchh bhi ho sakta hai...
Agar pasand aaye to padh.. na pasand aaye to mat padh... Par aise faltu ke comments mat kar...
Badi mushkil se razi kiya hai is writer ko dobara likhne ke liye... Or tu start hone se pehle hi khatam kar dena chahta hai...
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Yar naraz kyo hota hai mana ki story mujhe kuch thik nahi lagi lekin writer se mafi mang chuka hu.. Writer bhi story puri karna tumhare readers tumhari care karte hai maine to just mistakes batayi jo mujhe lagi otherwise your story is siperb
 
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Silent writer said:
Bro maf karna agar dil dukha ho.. Story sach me kamal ki hai lekin story me kuch mistakes bhi hai bas unhe thik kro
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Bro mera manna hai ki muh boli ho ya sagi behen ho dono me fark nahi karna chahiye akhir rakhi dono bandhti hai hume toh bhai mujhe nahi lagta ki woh koi mistake hai bakki apki soch apko achi lage toh sath bane rahiye hope u understand
 
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Nub_Ag

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Naughtyrishabh said:
Fir se swagat

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Ladkiyo ke bare me sahi kaha.
Egypt me mission locket shuru .
Bada hi badhia wapsi .
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.
Dekhe kya khatra aata h ??

Or isiliye ,
Aage ka intjaar
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Yo bro aaj raat ya kal aa jayega new update keep supporting
 
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Nub_Ag

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aka3829 said:
Welcome Back Bhai. Kya jabardast update diye ho yaar. Jabardast isliye bola kyuki itane din baad story ko restart kar rahe ho fir bhi story pae pakad jyu ki tyu he. Kayi lekhak to kehte he ki yaar itane din ho gaye plot bhi yaad nahi raha. Lekin tum un sabse alag rahe. Abhi to khtra samne bhi nahi aya aur hero ki fatne lag gayi.
Waiting 4 next update
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:thanks: bhai :hug:
 
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Jaat boy

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Miss u alot Bhai welcome back
 
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sonukale

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Very nice update Bhai
 
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