Bhai tumhari baat sahi hai.. par kehne ka tareeka bilkul galat tha...Yar naraz kyo hota hai mana ki story mujhe kuch thik nahi lagi lekin writer se mafi mang chuka hu.. Writer bhi story puri karna tumhare readers tumhari care karte hai maine to just mistakes batayi jo mujhe lagi otherwise your story is siperb
Hmm bro sahi kaha tariqa galat thaBhai tumhari baat sahi hai.. par kehne ka tareeka bilkul galat tha...
Is tarhan se writer ka confidence khatam ho jata hai.