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Bhai ek chiz suno aap sabhi mai time too time inspector hawaldar ki gand marne wala hu is story mai isiliye unse sympathy mat rakhna
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Naik bhaiya sab milega raj ko bachpan se tadpa hai vo
Ek mamuli sa ladka aaj deko kis kis chiz ka raja hai
Samay sab badal deta !! Samay se koi nahi jeet sakta aur kisi ko dusmani nahi karni chaiye samay ke sath
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Raj aur uski didi mahima dono manzil ki aur bad rahe the
Manzil yani ki garima se milne
Vaise toa mahima ke man mai bohat sawaal the raj se
vo yaha kaise aaya
ye villa a. Usne kaise liye vo janti thi us villa ki kimat par usne socha baad mai baat karungi is baare mai
Abhi phele garima didi ko chutku se milva du
Is vakt garima ek Khali class mai bethi apne khayalo mai khoi thi
Usko Ghar ki bohat yaad aa rahi thi
aur kuch kuch apne pan ka ahsas ho raha tha
mano koi apna uske aas pass ho
Bahar jab usne raj ko senior baccho se uljhate deka
toa use aisa laga mano vo us ladke ko janti ho koi rishta ho unka
Vo is samay gate ke side back karke bethi thi haath mai ek tablet bag tha
Vahi is vakt raj ki gand mai chul macchi hui thi firse thappad khane ki
Phele garima ko dek uske aakho mai aasu the mahima ne usko shant karvaya aur bola chal chalte hai didi se milne
Raj...mahima didi yahi ruko tum kaha Jaa Rahi ho kyuu naa didi se Masti kare todi kamini muskan ke saath bola
kaan idhar laao
Mahima kaan aage karti aur jaise hi usne ye sab suna ...
uski sitti pitti gum thi
Use pata tha garima usse jyda gussel nature ki hai
use mazak pasand nahi
Usne raj ko bola kyu tu Aaj
thappad pe thappad khana chahta hai hai
chutku sidha mil le na
Ye thappad se mera kuch nahi hota didi ye toa aap logo ka pyar hai hahahahah
Mahima usko wapas gale lagate hue beta tu Sherni ke muh mai haath daal raha hai mai kuch nahi karungi dhayan rakhio tu
aur mujhe beech mai mat laana samaj gaya na
Raj classroom mai ghus jaata hai aur piche se garima ko daboch leta hai
Garima ek sundar si gori si ladki thi sundar makhmali gaal uski pyari si gand aur chuche ahah hight mai 5.9
50 kg weight
Is vakt raj ne usko kas ke daboch liya tha aur bola suno ladki maine tumhara kidnap kar liya hai
Garima ko bachapan se hi dar nahi lagta tha kaafi takatwar thi vo ladki bhi ladna jaise uske khun mai tha
Raj ne usko dhila hi pakda tha vo chut gayi aur ghum gayi thi
Raj usko dek hi raha tha
vo boli tu subah hi mujhe lag gaya tha tu ek battamiz ladka hoga aate hi ladai jagde shuru kar diye college mai
Aur yaha mujhe chune ki himmat kaise hui teri
tujhe toa mai police ke hawale kar dungi dek tu
Raj....
(Toa kya hua mai police wali ko bhi aise hi chu lunga wada hai mera )
Garima khich khich ke thappad pe thappad lagane lagi raj ko
Aaj raj ko firse apni pyari pyari behno se milna hua tha
vo ye soch ke khusi se rone laga aur muskan thi uske chere pe
Jo garima ko aur bhi gussa dila Rahi thi
Tabhi mahima ko laga ab kuch jyda ho gaya hai aur usse raj ke aasu dekhe nahi gaye
Vo daud ke usko gale lagati hai par raj khusi ke aasu roo raha tha
Garima hairani se apni behen ko dek rahi thi
Mahima ye kya battamizi hai tu is ladke ke saath chipki kyu hai
Chi ye kya behooda harkat hai
Ab raj aage badhta hai garima piche hone lagti hai aur bolti hai dur hoja mujhse
Raj....didi apne chutku ko apne se firse dur karogi kya aap!!
Garima.....ko chakkar aane laga raj usko baho mai bhar leta hai
Garima...kaap te hotho se didi
Kyu bola mujhe kon hai tu
Kya bola tu 1 min chutku
Garima aakhe badi badi karke dekhne lagi usne nazar mahima pe daali
Mahima ne haa mai ishara kiya aur
Garima rote rote raj ka pura chera chumne lagi usne pura ka pura chera chum daala tha
Ek baar toa uske hoth bhi
Fir usko itna kaske gale laga diya
Raj ne unko apni goad mai utha liya
Garima raj ki gaud mai thi
Mujhe subah aisa laga jaise tu mera apna hai mera karibi
par mujhe samaj jaana chaiye tha itna pyara mera chota bhai hi ho sakta hai
Par ek min tu yaha kaise aaya aur tu yaha kaha rah raha hai
Raj...didi vo sab baate hum baad mai karenge Abhi phele college se chalte hai fir baat hogi
Garima aur mahima ek saath Aaj hamara padane ka man nahi hai raj ye sab kal se dekhege Aaj hum apne chutku ke sath time spend karenge
Garima...dek toa kitna bada ho gaya hai ye mahima
Garima...ek min sun raj par tu ye Sharath mere saath kyu ki shaitaan
Raj kamini hasi haste hue mahima ko dekhne laga
Mahima Uski Gand fat gayi ki ab raj kya karega
Raj bhola bante hue class mai hui
saari baate batata hai garima ko
Sawaal toa usne man bhi aaye aur vo bhi vaise hi chauki jaise mahima ka haal tha
Raj ka itna bada villa
(Abhi tak un dono ko Tina and family ke baare mai koi information nahi)
Khair ab raj ne vo bola jiske baad mahima ki haalat kharab ho gayi
Garima didi mai toa yaha chup chap aa raha tha sidha aapse milne
lekin ye mahima didi boli ki chalo raj didi ko parshan karte
Sarra plan inhi ne banaya tha ki mai aisa Karu
Garima usse ghur ke dekhne lagi mahima ki aakhe niche ho gayi
Raj hasne laga
Garima matlab ye tera hi plan tha raj
Mahima muskurati hui didi lagta hai isko firse gaal laal karvane hai
Raj....dono galo pe haath rakh leta
Aur aakhe band kar leta
Tabhi usko dono galo pe meethi meethi kiss mil jaati hai
Raj muskurate hue dono ko baaho mai bhar leta hai dono raj ke saath chipak gayi thi
Dono ek saath .. raj hamare kuch sawaal hai kya jabab doge
Raj...sorry didi abhi nahi phele kahi chalte hai vaha baat karenge
Abhi class mai bacche aane wale honge
Dono chalo raj apne Ghar chalte hai dono raj ko unke Mumbai Wale Ghar mai le jaane ki baat kar rahi thi
Is vakt raj ko firse Sharath sujh jaati hai aur usko apna wada bhi pura karna tha police wali ko hug jo karna tha
Vo wada kaise Tod deta vo bhi apni behen se kiya hua
Garima mahima staff room mai bag lene chali jaati hai
Raj apni sp sahiba ko call karke Sara plan samja deta hai
vaise bhi aaj usko sp office mai jyda kaam nahi tha vo apne cabin mai kuch files hi pad rahi thi
Raj ka call aate hi
Kaise ho Jaan
Batao kaise yaad kiya
Raj....tumhe tumhari nanado se milvana hai
Tanya...chauk te hue kon aur kisse
Raj....garima didi aur mahima didi se
Tanya....vo mil gayi tum raj ..janu mai bohat khush hu mai abhi aa rahi hu aaj mai khas koi kaam nahi
Raj.....suno phele baby meri baat
Tanya ...sharmate hue gande kahi ke accha ab bolo
Raj....ye plan
Tanya .... tamaatar ki tarah blush karti hui nahi raj mujhse nahi hoga aur unke aage hug nahi raj mai nahi aa rahi
Raj...pls jaanu
Tanya ... Thik hai aa rahi hu tumne hug ke alava kuch aur harkat ki unke samne fir dekhna tum
Raj kamina juth bolta hai thik hai darling by bye aur call kaat deta hai
Sabhi bacche apne apne classes mai the
Garima and mahima principal se baat karke
raj ko half day mai jaane ki permission le leti hai
Garima mahima and raj abhi gate pe the tabhi inke pass ek police ki jeep aake rukti hai hai
Jisme police ki vardi mai sp Tanya bethi thi ek dum Kasa hua badan
jaise kya kuch jhela ho usne
Aakho mai kala chasma
Body language se sherni ki tarah chaal
Aur mahima and garima jitni sundar vo aati hai tino ke pass
Suno ladke is college mai raj kon hai
Raj.....kyu kya hua mai hu raj
Mahima and garima puchti hai
kya hua madam
Tanya unko ghur ke aap dono chup raho
Tum batao ladke yaha tumhari complaint ki hai kisi bacche ne
Tum ek ladki ko jabardasti kidnap kar rahe the aur uske saath galat harkat karne jaa rahe the
Garima ...dekhiye mam vo ladki mai hu aur ye mera bhai hai aisa kuch nahi hai mujhe koi complaint nahi karni hai
Tanya....tum chup raho aur daro mat is ladke ko kadi se kadi saza dilwa ungi mai
Raj....akad mai tum mujhe saza dilva nahi sakti itni himmat nahi tumhari samzi
Mahima and garima ....raj kitne battamiz ho tum apne se bade se aise baat karte hai maafi mango madam se
Raj...maafi my foot
Tanya.....kya kar lega tu Thane chal
Raj.....aage jaata hai aur sp Tanya ko kas ke gale laga leta hai
Tanya....tu bachega nahi chod mujhe chod
Mahima garima dono ki fat chuki thi ab kya hoga raj jail jaaega
Raj Tanya ke kaan mai bola
Ab bas karo jaaneman jaan logi kya ....
Raj mujhe bhi maza aa raha tha
Dono didi ka face toa deko tum
Dono khil khila ke hasne lage raj ne tanya ke gaal pe kiss kar diya
Tanya face chupa leti uski baaho mai
Raj ...garima and mahima se bolta hai didi maine apna wada pura kiya
Tanya....ke gaal firse tamatar ki tarah laal the
Dono ladkiyo ko yakin nahi tha abhi kya hua tha aur kaise hua
Raj bolta hai didi chalo Ghar pe baat karenge
Tanya....
Mahima didi aapko jeep chalani aati hai
Mahima
Haa aati hai mam par .
Tanya
Didi mam nahi sirf Tanya mai aapse choti hu please aur chabhi mahima ko de deti hai
Mahima jeep ko mod leti hai apne ghar ki taraf dono ladkiya soch rahi thi
ye kya hua abhi aur itni badi adhikaari raj ke saath is tarah bethi hai jaise uski biwi ho
Kahi raj ne shadi toa nhi kar li dono ko ajib si feeling aa rahi thi raj se aaj pheli baar vo kisi mard ke gale lagi thi unke dimak mai raj ki hi tasveer thi
Dono isi khayaal mai thi
vo log raj ke Mumbai Wale Ghar mai the jo uske dad ki hi property thi
Ye ek villa tha isme bas 5 kamre the baaki sabhi jarurt ka saman vagrah
Baaki baat agle update mai !!! Ab dekhte hai kya raaaj pata chalenge garima and mahima ko !! Stay tuned!!
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Subah ka wakt ho chala aaj halka halka meetha meetha baarish ka mosam ho rakha tha
Hawa mai mitti ki khushbu thi
Hawa raj ke baalo ko bikher rahi thi
Vo puri tarah gajab dhaa raha tha
Lekin usne normal hi kapde pahne the
Aur uska bag Tina aunty (uski mam)ne taiyaar kar diya tha
kyoki usme unko book and notes rakhni thi raj ke liye toa usko vahi laane wali thi
Raste mai jitni bhi ladkiya gujarti raj ko ek nazar aise dekhti maano kaccha chaba jaaegi
Khair raj bus stop pe pahuch jaata hai
Usko raste ki koi fikar nahi thi kyoki uske dimak mai pura system tha
Usko toa padai ki bhi jarurat nahi thi
vo toa bas time pass maar raha tha vaha
Dark web se usko har chiz ki jankari thi jo duniya mai exist karti hai
internet ke through vo kisi ki bhi I'd dek dek sakta tha vo kon hai kya hai aur hack bhi kar sakta hai
Aur ladai mai uska koi mukabala hi nahi sab use sidha sada hi samaj te hai
lekin vo ab in sab se bohat upar uth chuka hai
Vahi udaypur mai joohi aur simran.. raj ko bohat yaad kar rahi thi
Joohi ...bhabhi sab meri galti hai mai kaise laau apne raj ko wapas mai kya karu
Simran ...joohi jo ho gaya usko badala nahi jaa sakta ab toa jo destiny chahegi vahi hoga
Back to hero...
Raj bus stop pe khada tha 8 baj rahe the
Bus mai bohat bheed thi subah subah
Raj bus mai jaake conductor se ticket leta hai aur khada ho jaata hai vahi side mai kyoki koi bhi seat khali nahi thi
Thodi der mai raj apni manzil se 100 meter dur hota hai
Yani ki vo p hills college pahuch chuka tha
Par vo todha sa late ho gaya tha bus kaafi ruk ruk ke chali thi
Vo guard ke pass jaake entry karta hai aur usse pata puch ke staff room pahuch jaata hai
jaha abhi kevel Tina mam hi bethi thi
Kyuki vo 2nd period se padana chalu karti hai
Raj....good morning ma'am
Tina....usko raj bohat pasand aaya tha apni beti Tanya ke liye
lekin usne ye kisi ko nahi bataya tha sivay apne pati vikash ke
Usko ye bohat accha laga tha ki raj ke pass itna paisa hone ke baad bhi gamand jaise koi chiz nahi
vo yaha jis tarah se respect deke Tina se baat kar raha tha
Tina usse bohat prabhaveet thi
Fir bhi tina ne pucho raj tum mujhe ma'am kyu bol rahe ho
Raj .... Aap abhi miss Tina ho ....Tina aunty nahi vo aap ghar pe ho
Tina ...man mai impressive ye toa meri soch se jyada samaj daar nikla
Tina...ok beta aur suno ye lo tumhara bag maine isme books and notes rakh diye hai aur tumhare admission ki formalities puri kar di hai
samje ki nahi
Raj ....
Mam aap mujhe bata sakti ho admission and books vagrah mila ke kitna amount hua mai aapko transfer kar dunga
uske chere pe sharati muskaan saaf nazar aa rahi thi
Tina...man me hmmm
interesting beta
Mujhse hosi yaari hahahaha
khub jamegi apni aur ab tum hi banoge mere damaad dekhna
Tina
Agar Tina mam ka javab jaanaa chahte ho toa total 6 lakh
Agar apni Tina aunty ka javab sunna chate ho toa batao Tina ne bhi usko parshan kiya
Haa haa batao aunty
ek chapat lagate hue shaitaan khi ka baag yaha se aur Jaa beta apni class mai
Tumko maine apna beta Maan liya hai aur maa baccho se fees nahi leti ab jaao
(man mai sochte hue bohat jaldi
ab tum mere sach mai beta banoge meri Tanya ke liye tumse accha koi nahi hoga
Bas tumhari Umar mai kuch fasle jarur hai)
Raj....haste hue vaha se baa jaata hai class ki taraf
Tabhi usko vaha kuch ladke dikhte hai ragging lete hue
Vo abhi baccho ki ragging le rahe the
Class start hone mai sirf 2 minute bacche the
Un senior group ne raj ko rok liya
Oee idhar aa
Raj...bolo kya kaam hai
Raj ka attitude dek ke un ladko ki gand jal gayi
Raj agar apni pe aa jaaye toa inko 10 second mai hospital bej de
Unme se ek kaafi body builder type ka ladka bolta hai bacche handshake nahi karega seniors se
Vo ek arm wrestler tha usko apne upar bohat ghamand tha vo aise hi naye naye juniors se haath mila ke unki bone dislocate kar deta
Ye baat group mai sab seniors ko pata thi
Kuch seniors bole raj ko dek ke
ek dusre ke kaan mai
aaj toa ye gaya hahah isko nahi pata
jo bhi bhai se haath milata uska ye aakhiri handshake hota
Raj ke senses kaafi high the usne sun lo unki baate
Usko pata chal chuka tha ki kya hone wala hai
Raj man mai ek bhayanak hasi has raha tha
Raj ki Class shuru ho chuki thi use iska bhi khayal tha
Raj...mai jarur milaunga haath
Sabhi senior raj ko dekhne lage ki koi baccha kudh apna haath tudwana chata
Bodybuilder senior ....haath aage karke raj ka haath pakad leta hai aur shuru kar deta hai apni takat ki numaish
Raj ki body us portion se itni flexible thi ki usko ghanta farak nahi pad raha tha
Ye dek ke vo senior hairaan the ki kaise koi yaha thik thak khada hai
Baaki saare senior ko bhi yakin nahi tha ek mamuli ladke ke samne
Uff ladkiya maano raj ke samne abhi kapde khol dengi maarlo meri marlo meri
Raj ko late ho raha tha vo aur late hona nahi chahta tha isiliye
ab raj ki baari thi
Is baar raj bones ko wapas kas liya aur itni tej dabaya ki samne wale bande ki haadi khishak chuki thi plaster lagna tay hai
raj chata toa tod bhi deta vo haath par usne aisa nahi kiya vo senior bolta hai tujhe baad mai dekhenge aur vo sab baag jaate hai
Senior iske baad hospital gaya hoga sidha
Vahi 2 aakhe raj ko ghur ghur ke dek rahi thi
aur ye baate pure college mai fail chuki thi Ki
pichle saal ke arm wrestling state champion ko kisi ne usi ke game mai thok diya
Sabhi logo ne raj ke liye rasta banaya aur taliya bajane lage
Tabhi raj vaha se nikal liya apni class ki taraf
kyoki phele din hi vo 5 minute late tha jisme uski galti nahi thi
Class mai ek young teacher aa chuki thi jo vaha pe assistant professor thi
Vo todi sawali thi lekin uski body ke ubhar kayamat the aur Saadi mai vo apsara lag rahi thi
Raj ne class ka gate knock kiya sabka dhyan raj ki taraf chala gaya
Ladkiya toa maano usko dekh dekh ke hi ras bahane lag rahi ho
Sach mai ek warrior jaisa lag raha tha ek dum shant vo phele wala raj nahi tha kisi bhi tarah se uski personality awaj behaviour sab badal chuka tha!!
Teacher ne bhi ek nazar usko deka fir boli...
Kyu mahashay Aaj tu phele din hi late aaya hai nalayak kahi ka
Raj ko uski baat se farak nahi pada vo teacher apni dhos jamane ke liye aisa bol rahi thi taaki bacche usse kabhi panga na le ...
Jo ladko ke groups the
jab ladkiya raj ko dek rahi toa unki gand jal chuki thi
Ab vahi mam ke aisa bolne pe vo sab daant faad ke hasne lage
Class mai ek bench pe 3 bande Beth sakte the aur vaha kevel 2 hi ladke the jo raj pe nahi hase the
Raj us teacher ko bade pyar se bola......... mam sorry thoda bahar bacche meri ragging le rahe the toa late ho gaya
Vo teacher Dil ki buri nahi thi
Vo boli tujhe kuch kiya toa nahi na un logo ne agar kuch problem ho principal ke pass chale jaao beta
Raj .... muskurate hue mam uske baad maine hi unki ragging leli na toa sayad vo log Gaye honge principal ke pass
Puri class ki Gand fat ke haath mai aa gayi thi aur is baari vo do ladke Jo raj pe nahi hase the
ab hasne lage
Vahi us teacher ke mano sarir mai khun sukh Gaya ho
kii s akele ne phele din hi seniors ki ragging leli
Teacher hmm toa tum bhi Gunda banne aaye ho yaha
Raj... Rahasyamayi muskaan ke saath ma'am mai bilkul aap hi tarah hu mai kyu gunda badmaash banu mai toa bas apna defence kar raha tha
Teacher ...sochne lagi isne meri tarah kyu bola
Teacher...aage se late na ho pheli class hai maaf kar deti hu jaao aur seat pe betho chup chap
Un gandu ladko ke pass seat khali thi
fir bhi seat nahi di un logo ne apne hero ko
Raj unko ignore maar ke last bench pe un dono ladko ke pass Beth Gaya
Dono ...
hello bhai mai gaurav
mai Suresh
Tumhara naam kya hai
raj ... hello gaurav and Suresh mera naam raj hai
Bhai tumne sahi maza chakahya un seniors ko
Haa bhai saurav sahi kah raha
Raj bhai humse dosti karoge
Raj haa kyu nahi ...Abhi se hum dost hai
Kyuki yahi dono the jo raj pe nahi hase the
Raj ne inki family ko bhi jaan liya tha system se ....
Tabhi ek tej awaj aati hai ....tum teeno silence ...pin drop silence ...ye last warning hai
Raj us teacher ko ghurne laga vo teacher bhi raj ko ghurne mai lagi thi
Teacher....baccho mera naam mahima singh hai
Mai Udaypur se hu
Mai aapko business ethics padungi
Usse phele aap sab ek ek karke apna apna introduction do baari baari
Ye dek ke raj face pe ek sharati muskan thi kyuki samne koi aur nahi uski badi behen hai
anjali ki beti jo isi college mai professor hai
vo kabhi wapas laut ke udaypur nahi gayi bas apni maa se hi phone pe baat karti thi aur anjali ne kabhi bhi apni betiyo ke man mai raj ke liye bura nahi bhara tha
vo toa usne jabardasti raj ko mazbut banane ke liye pareshan karti thi
Abhi intro jaan lete hai kuch raj ke dusmano ka
Ramu
Shamu
Pinku
Bhola (leader)
Mikki
Sandhya
Ye sab ek gang hai jo raj ki class mai hai jo usko dekhte hi chid bethe the
Inko yaad mat karo story ke saath apne aap yaad ho jaaenge
In sabke intro ke baad intro hota hai
Ritwika
Age 20
College topper
Baap ke paiso ka bohat ghamand hai isko
Kisi se sidhe muh baat nahi karti
Villa b. Isi ka hi hai
Muskan
Age 19 chulbuli topper hai ye bhi
Ritwika ki bachpan ki saheli hai
Ritwika se jyda sundar hai ye
Dono bahno ki tarah hai
Bilkul bhi ghamand nahi
Villa c. Ki owner ki beti hai apni muskan
( Inki family ka intro baad mai lenge )
Aise hi gaurav aur Suresh ka bhi intro hota hai
Ab baari aati hai uski jisne Aaj itna bada hungama kar diya apna hero
Raj bench se khada hota hai
Is vakt puri class ki nazre uske upar gadi hui thi
Ritwika ko jaise vo pasand hi nahi aaya gamandi jo theri use lagta hai usse Amir koi bhi nahi
Pali hills ke villa b. Ke owner ki beti hai aakhir vo aur uska baap bohat bada business man hai hahahahah
Muskan use ek tak dekti Jaa Rahi thi mano usko raj se pheli nazar mai hi mohabaat ho gayi
Vahi ek thi jo ladkiyo mai raj pe nahi hasi thi
Ghamndi ritwika aur vo chutiya gang jiska upar intro diya vo daant aur gand faad-faad ke hase tha
Raj... Hello dosto mera naam hai
raj shingh
Mai villa a. Mai rahta hu
Yaha naya hu
Yahi sunne ki der thi
ritiwika ka muh khul chuka tha kyuki koi tha jo usse bhi Amir tha
Ye pali hills ka hi college tha toa sabko pata hai un tino villa ke baare mai
Puri gang ki gand ke chithde udd chuke
Muskan Suresh gaurav ke bhi yahi haal the
Hamari madam mahima raj ki didi usko ye naam sunke Aisa jhatka laga ki
usne pucha papa ka naam kya hai tumhare ladke
Puri class shocked thi mahima soch rahi thi kahi ye mera chutku toa nahi hai
Raj....Mahesh shingh cm of rajasthan
And I am from udaypur
Abhi bichari ritvika ka muh itna saa ho gaya vo puri shocked thi
ek CM ka beta itne simple kapdo mai kaise
Vahi ye jaan ke muskan Suresh aur gaurav bhi shocked' pe shocked the
Lekin is vakt bichari mahima ki aakho mai aasu the vo apne jazbaat pe kaabu naa rakh saki aur usko yakin nahi tha ye chutku yahi hai uska chota bhaiya raj
Vo daudti hui jaati hai aur khich ke thappad maar deti hai raj ko
ritwika and us gang ko khusi thi ki iska gamand todne ke liye
madam ne thappad maara hai
Vahi raj usko dek muskurae deke Jaa raha tha
Ek aur thappad ek aur thappad lagatar 4-5 thappad pad chuke the raj ko par jaise usko koi gussa ya nafrat nahi
Fir ek aur thappad padne wala tha ki vo bola didi !!....
Bas jaise garima yahi toa sunna chah rahi thi
Vahi didi sunte hi log aakhe fadd faad ke dek rahe the
Mahima Bina kisi ki chinta ke uske gale se lagi hui aasu bahaye Jaa Rahi thi
Use kisi se farak nahi pad raha tha
Bacche abhi bhi unhi dono ko dek rahe the
Tabhi class mai Tina mam entry leti hai vo bhi hairan thi ye sab kya hai
Kahi ye ladki raj se pyar toa nahi karti hai ek teacher hoke aise chipak Rahi hai par
vo kuch nahi khati use pata tha ki kuch jarur badi gadbad hai
Tabhi use Tanya ki baat yaad aa jati hai uski family mai bhi ek mahima aur garima hai uske bhen vo samaj jaati hai mazra kya hai
Tina....mahima mam and raj aap class se bahar Jaake baat kar sakte ho please ab
Un dono ko apni jagah ka bodh hota hai dono bahar chale jaate hai
Bahar jaake mahima bolti hai mere bhai tu toa bada handsome ho gaya hai pehchan mai bhi nahi aa raha phele itna sa chutku tha
Par pata nahi kyu maa ne hume tujhse dur kar diya
Raj mahol kharab nahi karna chata tha isiliye usne baat badal di
Vahi bahar jaake raj bolta hai
Hmm toa aap yaha aake itni gussel ho gayi ki aise baat karne lagi
Mahima sharminda hote hue bhai please mujhse gussa mat ho
vo toa mai todi strict lagu isiliye Aisa kar rahi thi
I am sorry bhai vo rone lagi
Raj hasne laga
Mahima ...badmash abhi aur thappad khaega kya
Nahi didi aapka kota pura hua ab kisi aur se thappad khane ki baari aa gayi hai sayad
Dono muskura dete hai aur chale jaate hai apni manzil ki taraf
Baaki agle update mai baat hongi dosto!!
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Raj aur uski didi mahima dono manzil ki aur bad rahe the
Manzil yani ki garima se milne
Vaise toa mahima ke man mai bohat sawaal the raj se
vo yaha kaise aaya
ye villa a. Usne kaise liye vo janti thi us villa ki kimat par usne socha baad mai baat karungi is baare mai
Abhi phele garima didi ko chutku se milva du
Is vakt garima ek Khali class mai bethi apne khayalo mai khoi thi
Usko Ghar ki bohat yaad aa rahi thi
aur kuch kuch apne pan ka ahsas ho raha tha
mano koi apna uske aas pass ho
Bahar jab usne raj ko senior baccho se uljhate deka
toa use aisa laga mano vo us ladke ko janti ho koi rishta ho unka
Vo is samay gate ke side back karke bethi thi haath mai ek tablet bag tha
Vahi is vakt raj ki gand mai chul macchi hui thi firse thappad khane ki
Phele garima ko dek uske aakho mai aasu the mahima ne usko shant karvaya aur bola chal chalte hai didi se milne
Raj...mahima didi yahi ruko tum kaha Jaa Rahi ho kyuu naa didi se Masti kare todi kamini muskan ke saath bola
kaan idhar laao
Mahima kaan aage karti aur jaise hi usne ye sab suna ...
uski sitti pitti gum thi
Use pata tha garima usse jyda gussel nature ki hai
use mazak pasand nahi
Usne raj ko bola kyu tu Aaj
thappad pe thappad khana chahta hai hai
chutku sidha mil le na
Ye thappad se mera kuch nahi hota didi ye toa aap logo ka pyar hai hahahahah
Mahima usko wapas gale lagate hue beta tu Sherni ke muh mai haath daal raha hai mai kuch nahi karungi dhayan rakhio tu
aur mujhe beech mai mat laana samaj gaya na
Raj classroom mai ghus jaata hai aur piche se garima ko daboch leta hai
Garima ek sundar si gori si ladki thi sundar makhmali gaal uski pyari si gand aur chuche ahah hight mai 5.9
50 kg weight
Is vakt raj ne usko kas ke daboch liya tha aur bola suno ladki maine tumhara kidnap kar liya hai
Garima ko bachapan se hi dar nahi lagta tha kaafi takatwar thi vo ladki bhi ladna jaise uske khun mai tha
Raj ne usko dhila hi pakda tha vo chut gayi aur ghum gayi thi
Raj usko dek hi raha tha
vo boli tu subah hi mujhe lag gaya tha tu ek battamiz ladka hoga aate hi ladai jagde shuru kar diye college mai
Aur yaha mujhe chune ki himmat kaise hui teri
tujhe toa mai police ke hawale kar dungi dek tu
Raj....
(Toa kya hua mai police wali ko bhi aise hi chu lunga wada hai mera )
Garima khich khich ke thappad pe thappad lagane lagi raj ko
Aaj raj ko firse apni pyari pyari behno se milna hua tha
vo ye soch ke khusi se rone laga aur muskan thi uske chere pe
Jo garima ko aur bhi gussa dila Rahi thi
Tabhi mahima ko laga ab kuch jyda ho gaya hai aur usse raj ke aasu dekhe nahi gaye
Vo daud ke usko gale lagati hai par raj khusi ke aasu roo raha tha
Garima hairani se apni behen ko dek rahi thi
Mahima ye kya battamizi hai tu is ladke ke saath chipki kyu hai
Chi ye kya behooda harkat hai
Ab raj aage badhta hai garima piche hone lagti hai aur bolti hai dur hoja mujhse
Raj....didi apne chutku ko apne se firse dur karogi kya aap!!
Garima.....ko chakkar aane laga raj usko baho mai bhar leta hai
Garima...kaap te hotho se didi
Kyu bola mujhe kon hai tu
Kya bola tu 1 min chutku
Garima aakhe badi badi karke dekhne lagi usne nazar mahima pe daali
Mahima ne haa mai ishara kiya aur
Garima rote rote raj ka pura chera chumne lagi usne pura ka pura chera chum daala tha
Ek baar toa uske hoth bhi
Fir usko itna kaske gale laga diya
Raj ne unko apni goad mai utha liya
Garima raj ki gaud mai thi
Mujhe subah aisa laga jaise tu mera apna hai mera karibi
par mujhe samaj jaana chaiye tha itna pyara mera chota bhai hi ho sakta hai
Par ek min tu yaha kaise aaya aur tu yaha kaha rah raha hai
Raj...didi vo sab baate hum baad mai karenge Abhi phele college se chalte hai fir baat hogi
Garima aur mahima ek saath Aaj hamara padane ka man nahi hai raj ye sab kal se dekhege Aaj hum apne chutku ke sath time spend karenge
Garima...dek toa kitna bada ho gaya hai ye mahima
Garima...ek min sun raj par tu ye Sharath mere saath kyu ki shaitaan
Raj kamini hasi haste hue mahima ko dekhne laga
Mahima Uski Gand fat gayi ki ab raj kya karega
Raj bhola bante hue class mai hui
saari baate batata hai garima ko
Sawaal toa usne man bhi aaye aur vo bhi vaise hi chauki jaise mahima ka haal tha
Raj ka itna bada villa
(Abhi tak un dono ko Tina and family ke baare mai koi information nahi)
Khair ab raj ne vo bola jiske baad mahima ki haalat kharab ho gayi
Garima didi mai toa yaha chup chap aa raha tha sidha aapse milne
lekin ye mahima didi boli ki chalo raj didi ko parshan karte
Sarra plan inhi ne banaya tha ki mai aisa Karu
Garima usse ghur ke dekhne lagi mahima ki aakhe niche ho gayi
Raj hasne laga
Garima matlab ye tera hi plan tha raj
Mahima muskurati hui didi lagta hai isko firse gaal laal karvane hai
Raj....dono galo pe haath rakh leta
Aur aakhe band kar leta
Tabhi usko dono galo pe meethi meethi kiss mil jaati hai
Raj muskurate hue dono ko baaho mai bhar leta hai dono raj ke saath chipak gayi thi
Dono ek saath .. raj hamare kuch sawaal hai kya jabab doge
Raj...sorry didi abhi nahi phele kahi chalte hai vaha baat karenge
Abhi class mai bacche aane wale honge
Dono chalo raj apne Ghar chalte hai dono raj ko unke Mumbai Wale Ghar mai le jaane ki baat kar rahi thi
Is vakt raj ko firse Sharath sujh jaati hai aur usko apna wada bhi pura karna tha police wali ko hug jo karna tha
Vo wada kaise Tod deta vo bhi apni behen se kiya hua
Garima mahima staff room mai bag lene chali jaati hai
Raj apni sp sahiba ko call karke Sara plan samja deta hai
vaise bhi aaj usko sp office mai jyda kaam nahi tha vo apne cabin mai kuch files hi pad rahi thi
Raj ka call aate hi
Kaise ho Jaan
Batao kaise yaad kiya
Raj....tumhe tumhari nanado se milvana hai
Tanya...chauk te hue kon aur kisse
Raj....garima didi aur mahima didi se
Tanya....vo mil gayi tum raj ..janu mai bohat khush hu mai abhi aa rahi hu aaj mai khas koi kaam nahi
Raj.....suno phele baby meri baat
Tanya ...sharmate hue gande kahi ke accha ab bolo
Raj....ye plan
Tanya .... tamaatar ki tarah blush karti hui nahi raj mujhse nahi hoga aur unke aage hug nahi raj mai nahi aa rahi
Raj...pls jaanu
Tanya ... Thik hai aa rahi hu tumne hug ke alava kuch aur harkat ki unke samne fir dekhna tum
Raj kamina juth bolta hai thik hai darling by bye aur call kaat deta hai
Sabhi bacche apne apne classes mai the
Garima and mahima principal se baat karke
raj ko half day mai jaane ki permission le leti hai
Garima mahima and raj abhi gate pe the tabhi inke pass ek police ki jeep aake rukti hai hai
Jisme police ki vardi mai sp Tanya bethi thi ek dum Kasa hua badan
jaise kya kuch jhela ho usne
Aakho mai kala chasma
Body language se sherni ki tarah chaal
Aur mahima and garima jitni sundar vo aati hai tino ke pass
Suno ladke is college mai raj kon hai
Raj.....kyu kya hua mai hu raj
Mahima and garima puchti hai
kya hua madam
Tanya unko ghur ke aap dono chup raho
Tum batao ladke yaha tumhari complaint ki hai kisi bacche ne
Tum ek ladki ko jabardasti kidnap kar rahe the aur uske saath galat harkat karne jaa rahe the
Garima ...dekhiye mam vo ladki mai hu aur ye mera bhai hai aisa kuch nahi hai mujhe koi complaint nahi karni hai
Tanya....tum chup raho aur daro mat is ladke ko kadi se kadi saza dilwa ungi mai
Raj....akad mai tum mujhe saza dilva nahi sakti itni himmat nahi tumhari samzi
Mahima and garima ....raj kitne battamiz ho tum apne se bade se aise baat karte hai maafi mango madam se
Raj...maafi my foot
Tanya.....kya kar lega tu Thane chal
Raj.....aage jaata hai aur sp Tanya ko kas ke gale laga leta hai
Tanya....tu bachega nahi chod mujhe chod
Mahima garima dono ki fat chuki thi ab kya hoga raj jail jaaega
Raj Tanya ke kaan mai bola
Ab bas karo jaaneman jaan logi kya ....
Raj mujhe bhi maza aa raha tha
Dono didi ka face toa deko tum
Dono khil khila ke hasne lage raj ne tanya ke gaal pe kiss kar diya
Tanya face chupa leti uski baaho mai
Raj ...garima and mahima se bolta hai didi maine apna wada pura kiya
Tanya....ke gaal firse tamatar ki tarah laal the
Dono ladkiyo ko yakin nahi tha abhi kya hua tha aur kaise hua
Raj bolta hai didi chalo Ghar pe baat karenge
Tanya....
Mahima didi aapko jeep chalani aati hai
Mahima
Haa aati hai mam par .
Tanya
Didi mam nahi sirf Tanya mai aapse choti hu please aur chabhi mahima ko de deti hai
Mahima jeep ko mod leti hai apne ghar ki taraf dono ladkiya soch rahi thi
ye kya hua abhi aur itni badi adhikaari raj ke saath is tarah bethi hai jaise uski biwi ho
Kahi raj ne shadi toa nhi kar li dono ko ajib si feeling aa rahi thi raj se aaj pheli baar vo kisi mard ke gale lagi thi unke dimak mai raj ki hi tasveer thi
Dono isi khayaal mai thi
vo log raj ke Mumbai Wale Ghar mai the jo uske dad ki hi property thi
Ye ek villa tha isme bas 5 kamre the baaki sabhi jarurt ka saman vagrah
Baaki baat agle update mai !!! Ab dekhte hai kya raaaj pata chalenge garima and mahima ko !! Stay tuned!!
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Hello bhai aapki story starts se pash raha hu abhi bs story ka base ready ho raha tha to comment nahi kiya tha.
Aap aacha likh rahe ho initial updates bahut hi aache lage bahut hi crisp way mai aapki sari baatein likhi h.
Raj ki maa kisi reason ki wajah se use chodkar gai hogi nahi to koi maa apne bete ko chod jaye aur beti ko saath le jaye ye to koi baat hai nahi wo maafi to us reason ke according hogi uski maa ke baarein mai abhi aapne kuch likha hai nahi. Par ha as per reason and initial narajagi tadpana tarsane ke baad maa ko maafi to milni hi chahiye else story ka ek main character ke saath emotional bonding kaise hogi
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Aapne mere thoughts sahi se samje hai thankyou bhai dhayan se samjhane ke liye isiliye mai is character ko filhaal abhi nahi leke aaunga mai todi story baaki characters ke saath hi chalne dunga
Lagbhag 10-15 update ke baad mai raj ki maa ko involve karunga
Aur usko maafi milegi jarur milegi par todi saza bhi milegi
Aur iska bohat ghatak reason hoga ki karishma kyu chod gayi apne bacche ko !!baaki sab samay pe chod do aap log aur enjoy maaro