Fantasy MAHAGATHA : EK PRACHAND YODHA

[Shahrukh]

Bahut badiya update bhai keep posting

 

[RANSA]

Aapne mere thoughts sahi se samje hai thankyou bhai dhayan se samjhane ke liye isiliye mai is character ko filhaal abhi nahi leke aaunga mai todi story baaki characters ke saath hi chalne dunga
Lagbhag 10-15 update ke baad mai raj ki maa ko involve karunga

Aur usko maafi milegi jarur milegi par todi saza bhi milegi
Aur iska bohat ghatak reason hoga ki karishma kyu chod gayi apne bacche ko !!baaki sab samay pe chod do aap log aur enjoy maaro

Exactly bhai
Maa ka chodna reason ki wajah se justify hona chahiye aur jab tak raj ko pata na ho tab tak to uski maa uske liye buri hi h to wo kar sakta h jo usko accha lage uski maa ko tadpane ke liye and rest aage kya wo aap likh hi denge
Keept it up good going bhai

 

[Sidh]

UPDATE : 18

PLACE : VILLA A. PALI HILLS

Raj aur Tanya apne villa ke garden mein khade the,
chaandni raat mein.
Raat ke khule aasman mein
taare chhup-chhup ke chamak rahe the, aur garden ki khushboo ne unke pyaar ko aur bhi mahka diya.
Raj ne Tanya ki taraf dekha,
uski aankhon mein pyaar bhara hua tha, aur uski muskaan ne Raj ka dil churaya hua tha .

Tanya .....Raj aaj ki raat bahut hi khubsurat hai!

Raj....Kyoki aaj Meri Chaandni ne aasman ko aur bhi roshan kar diya hai
Tanya aaj ki raat to aur bhi khubsurat ho gayi hai,
kyunki tum mere saath ho.
Tum mere liye ab bohat khas ho Manta hu mai umar mai chota hu tumse par ab tum mera hi ek hissa ho

Tanya...mere sehzade tumhe jab bhi meri jarurat padegi mai har pal tumhare piche hongi
Raj uski aakho mai dekhta hua dhere dhere uske hotho ko chum leta hai
Firse vahi karta hai lekin Tanya is baar usko hoth chusne lagti hai
us pyari ladki ki body ek dam khator thi koi bhi nishan nahi tha us bedaag Chand ke tukde pe
Dono ek dusre ka chadni raat mai hoth ko paan kar rahe the koi bhi piche harne ko taiyaar naa tha
Ab raj ko hi har manani thi kyoki vo toa system holder tha heal ho raha tha lekin Tanya ki sanse puri Chad chuki thi
10 minutes se lagatar ho rahi kiss ko raj Babu ne toda
Tanya madam apni saase sambhalne mai lagi hui thi aur fir ek dum se raj ki baho mai Jaa chipki
vo raj ko sab kuch Maan chuki thi ab vahi uska shehzada tha

Raj ne bhi kaske Tanya ko baaho mai bhar liya aur Raj ne uski aankhon mein dekha
Unki pyaar ki kahani ne ek naya mod le liya tha

Vo use goad mai utha ke master bedroom mai le aaya vo bada sa mulayam makhmali gadde daar bed pe laake Lita diya
Un dono mai todi si bhi vasna nahi thi
Tha toa saccha pyar
Tanya bhi vo sab abhi nahi karna chati thi
Vo bhi man hi man khus thi agar raj ki jagah koi aur hota toa ek raat mai hi sab kar leta halaki vo rokti nahi
agar ye raj karta toa

Par use mano pata tha
ye Prem hai hawas nahi!!

Ye dusra pyar tha hamare hero ka
Ab uske pass 2 mehbooba thi joohi aur Tanya abhi pata nahi kitni hongi

Raj: Tanya, main tumse bohot pyaar karta hoon. Tum aur joohi mere dil ki dhadkan ho, mere saansein ho mai bachapan se hi pyar ke liye tarasta aa raha hu pheli baar bagwan ne mujhe 2 premikaa di hai jo mujhse pyar karti hai

par mai darta hu bagwan unhe bhi na chin le

Meri bhabhi maa simran bhi mujhse bohat pyar karti hai unhone Kam se kam mujhe Mamta ki chao toa di

Tanya: Raj, main bhi tumse bohot pyaar karti hoon.
Tum meri bhi saanson mai bas chuke ho
mai tumhe kabhi nahi chodungi akela ab ye Tanya sirf tumhari hai ...

Unhone ek dusre ko pyaar se chhua, aur unki pyaar ki dhadkan ne ek naya sangeet bajaya. Chaandni raat mein, unki pyaar ki kahani ne ek naya adhyay shuru kiya.

Usne baho mai bhar ke Tanya ko Sula diya
ab usko yaad kiya jo sach mai uska saaya hai

Apni Noor ko .....

Noor suno
Noor ... Haa raj batao kaise yaad kiya apni dost ko
Vaise toa Noor raj se jud chuki thi uske dimak ki har baat janti thi

Raj....Noor kya tum mujhe apne baare mai kuch nahi bataogi
ye system ka kya khel hai aur kyu tum mere pass ho

Noor ....nahi raj vo abhi tum nahi jaan sakte ho uske liye samay hai

Raj....accha Noor kya mai mere stats dek sakta hu pls
Noor ....haa kyu nahi raj
Ye lo


Abhi raj ke pass 100 crore rupees bache the saath hi
Flying skill|magic punch|translator|dark web|villa|audi|lambo toa tha hi
40 points bhi the
Raj
18
65 kg
6' Feet height (because of appearance)
Mid muscular guy

STATS
STRENGTH 50
INTELLIGENCE 40
AGILITY 35
APPERANCE 15
HEALING 40
Noor ne hi raj ko salah di thi ki apne saare stats phele 50 tak kar le kyuki uske baad usko 5 units chaiye 1 point badane ke liye
Yani 5 units ke badle 1 point milega
Noor tum Aisa Karo 10 units intelligence mai laga do aur baaki
5 agility mai
25 apperance mai
Noor samaj jaati hai raj kya chata hai
Ok raj
Isi ke saath window pe naye stats the jo is prakaar the
STATS
STRENGTH 50
INTELLIGENCE 50
AGILITY 40
APPERANCE 40
HEALING 40
Bas use ab 30 points ki jarurat thi thi uske baad uska level B open ho jaaega vo janta tha
50 stats point ka matlab hai vo 50 full trained bando ko akela mitti mai mila sakta hai
Yaani kul mil ke vo aam insaan se 50 Guna jyda powerful tha
Jab vo sone laga toa uski suryamani ring chamakna shuru kardi
Raj ki body mai visible badlav aane shuru ho gaye

Uske baal lambe ho gaye uski aakhe Sher jaise tej jo raat ke andere mai bhi dek sake
Uske muscles aur bhi kas gaye sina aur bhi choda mehsoos ho raha tha
Body mai itni urja thi ki vo agar ab maya (pitro ki maa) ko daboch le toa uski Gand fat jaaye

Uski height subah ke samay 6'3 ho gayi thi 3 inch bad chuki thi yani uski bhabhi simran jitna ho gaya tha vo

Face pe aise chamak thi maano sakshat devta dharti pe aa gaya ho

Subah ke 5 baj rahe the aur ek baccha apni cycle chala raha tha raj ke villa ke toda pass hi road ke naake pe

Raj bhi uth ke tahalne bahar chala gaya

Kittu bittu raj ko dek chowk jaate hai raj pura badal chuka tha uska aura alag hi lag raha tha maano Sher chal raha ho

Vo dono usko good morning bolte hai
Aur puchte hai raj bhaiya aap itna kaise badal gaye pure alag lag rahe

Raat ko alag lag rahe the
Raj ko sab pata tha vo bahana banata hai vo kya haina raat mai saayad aap log thik se nahi deka hoga

Mai toa phele bhi aisa tha dono ek dusre ki sakal dekhne lage

Haa sayad ho sakta hai bhaiya
Vaise aap kaha Jaa rahe subah subah

Haa vo kya haina toda tehalne ki aadat hai meri aata hu todi der mai

Aapki Tanya didi soo Rahi hai dhyan rakhna

Kittu and bittu .... ok bhaiya

Raj bahar nikal gaya todha aage gaya hi tha apne villa se ki

Dekhta hai ek Khali truck upar ki dhalan se bohat teji se aa raha hai road ke bicho bich ladka apni electric cycle mai kuch kar raha tha baccha hi tha vo ek tarah se

Truck ka size kaafi giant tha raj ko samaj nahi aa raha tha kya kare vo bacche ko leke hawa mai udd sakta tha uski agility bohat tej di

Lekin vaha haalat dek ke usko kuch samaj nahi aaya kare toa kya kare

Ladke ke ear mai airpods the uski umar 12-13 saal hogi
Tabhi uske dimak mai magic punch ka khayal aata hai jo use system se mila tha

Saath hi ding ke saath notification
Save the child destroy the truck
Rewards : flexible liquid and cure portion 100 crore

Ab raj ko kuch toa karna tha vo dodta hua truck ke samne aata hai
aur magic punch activated aise command deta hai

Uska haath apne aap ek bomb ke jitna Shakti shali ho jaata hai
Aur vo truck pe maar deta hai

Dhadd ki awaj ke saath hi truck puri tarah nasto nabut ho jaata hai uske tukde idhar udhar pade the

Vo ladka raj ko aise dek raha tha maano usne alian dek liya ho use yakin karna muskil ho raha tha
ek usse 2 feet 3 inch lamba banda uske piche tha apna raj

Vo turant behosh ho jaata hai dar ke
Kuch time baad usko hosh aata hai

Usko yakin tha ye sab raj ne kiya
vo baccha usko ghure Jaa Raha tha

Raj ...bacche kya naam hai tumhara aur abhi yaha jo bhi hua vo kisi ko mat batana samje

Bhaiya mera naam akash pandey hai par ye aapne Kiya kaise
Mujhe bhi sikhao na vo itna bada truck aapke kaise toda aap superhero hona

Isi beech jab truck baache taraf Jaa Raha toa driver gutka chaba raha tha use laga vo fas jaaega isiliye phele hi baag chuka tha vo usne raj ko nahi deka!!

Raj ...aisa hi samaj lo par ye kisi ko nahi pata chalna chaiye samje Varna mujhe ye log pareshan karenge

Thankyou bhaiya mai kisi ko nahi bataunga promise

Toa ab apne ghar jaao bacche ya mai chod du tumko

Nahi bhaiya mai chala jaaunga mai pass hi rahta par aap mujhse milne aur mujhe sikhane aaenge na please bhaiya

Raj....ok akash ab jaao aap

Akash chala gaya vaha se apne ghar

DIng.....reward awarded
flexible liquid and cure portion
100 crore

Noor ...raj isi tarah tumko task pure karne hai
Flexible liquid and cure portion kya hai Noor

Raj cure portion se tum kisi bhi bimar aadmi ko theek kar sakte ho chae use koi bhi bimari kyu na ho lekin iska istemaal 1 baari hi ho sakta hai

And flexible liquid se tumhari flexibility 100 times bad jaaegi tum ek chote se hole se bhi apni body pass kar paaoge
Tumhari bones ek dum liquid ki tarah flexible hongi

Is baar raj ko points nahi mile the
Reward mai

Raj bohat khush ho jaata hai aur us portion ko pii leta hai uska asar shuru ho jaata hai

Raj ke sharir mai sabhi haddiyo mai dard hone laga par Noor usko sambhal Rahi thi

Kuch der mai raj apni body ko ek pipe mai se paar kar leta hai vo hairaan tha itni flexible body ka baadshah

Cure portion vo system mai hi rahne deta hai

Isi tarah 6:00 baj jaate hai ab vo Ghar jaake fresh hota hai

Aur apni mehbooba ke kamre mai jaata hai uske labo ko chus leta hai

Tanya hadbada ke uth jaati hai aur ek kas ke laat maar deti hai raj ko kyoki vo pehchan mai nahi aa raha tha vo kaafi badal chuka tha

Raj....Tanya pagal ho gayi ho kya

Tanya...ye awaj toa raj jaise hai parek min raj ye tum ho ...

Haa Tanya mai hu yaar ...

par Tum itna change kyu lag rahe tumhari height bhi jyda lag rahi aur tumhare Baal

Raj bohat badal gaya tha achanak points ke chkkar mai

Aisa kuch nahi hai yaar vo jaise taise Tanya ko taal deta hai

Tanya ...raj tum sach mai ek raj ho tum batana nahi chate par mai pata karke rahungi kyuki tum meri jaan ho ab

Raj ...deko tumne kitni tej laat maar di mujhe
Aur bahar jaane laga

Tanya kaan pakad ke usse mafi mangti hai aur uske labo pe toot padti hai

Raj hasne lagta hai hahhaha mai mazak kar raha tha aur isse mujhe koi farak nahi pada heheh

raj ke sar pe pyar se chapat maar ke Ganda kahi ke chodo mujhe

Aur muskurati hui raj ko room se bahar dhakel deti hai

Aur fresh hone lagti hai

Raj ne ek plan socha tha ki vo aaj college paidal hi jaaye bus se
Jisse use yaha ki life ka bhi pata chale

Tanya apni laal pari leke raj se vida leke Ghar chali gayi thi

Vahi raj bhi taiyaar hoke nastha kar raha tha

Keetu bank gaya tha raj ke diye hue paise ghar bejne

Bittu chair pe betha tha

Raj ko dek ke khada ho jaata hai

Raj...
Bhaiya mai Jaa raha hu yaha ka khayal rakhna kuch bhi jarurat Lage Tanya madam ko call kar dena

Bittu ...ok bhaiyaa ji

Raj....
Mujhe aane mai shaam ho jaaegi
Aisa bol ke raj nikal diya bus stand ki aur agle update mai sayad koi naya Khiladi raj ka apna usse Milne wala hai guess Karo kon!!?

Mast update bhai

 

[prideep meena]

Bro lajwab majadar updated bro

 

[Rocky2602]

Nice n fantastic

 

[111ramjain]

Nice update

 

[Smith_15]

Update 21

 

[Ss mujrim]

Ajj update aey ga ya nii
Wait kaar hn bro

 

[sam_41]

Mind blowing update one of the best story in this forum

 

[rajpurohitkikahani99]

UPDATE : 21​

Mahima raj garima Tanya
is time raj father ke ghar mai mojud the
jaha mahima and garima rahti hai

Garima....
Chutku tu Jaa aur fresh ho ja
Tanya tum bhi jaake todha fresh ho jaao
Mahima tu jaake coffee bana le sabke liye

Mahima and Tanya......ji didi

Raj....kya tum bhi chalogi fresh hone mere saath

Raj ne tanya ki taraf aakh maar ke pucha

Garima.....beta lag raha hai tu firse thappad khane chahta hai

Tanya...raj ke kandhe pe mukka marti hai aur vaha se sarpat baag jaati hai

Raj bhi haste hue fresh hone chala jaata hai

Kuch der baad ye dono fresh hoke aate hai tab tak mahima kitchen se coffee leke aa jaati hai

Vo tray ko table pe rakh deti hai

Garima raj Tanya ko coffee ke mug pass karti hai

Mahima....hmm toa ab bataoge ye sab kya ho raha hai aur tu yaha kaise aa gaya matlab tu toa udaypur tha?

Raj....ki aakhe nam ho jaati hai

Is vakt ye log sofha pe bethe the
ek taraf mahima and Tanya

Dusri taraf raj

Raj ne coffee pili thi aur garima ko todha piche karke uski godi mai sar rakh leta hai

Garima...raj kya hua hai vaha mujhe ajib lag raha batana please

Raj.....aap dono mujhe maaf kar dena aur puri baat sunna fir hi gussa karna
Fir kuch sochte hue ....

Tanya tum batado please didi log ko

Tanya...thik hai raj

Tanya unko udaypur ki puri story bata deti hai sirf system ko chod ke kyuki vo kudh bhi nahi janti thi

raj ki takat aur usne raj ko kabhi ladte hue bhi nahi dekha

vo joohi ke baare mai bhi bata deta hai
Aur
anupriya and anjali kaise usko marti thi vaha vo bhi bata deti hai

Un dono ki aakhe nam thi aur joohi ke baare mai sunke unko thik toa nahi laga kyuki vo uski behen hai par galti dono ki thi

Aur unko raj pe pura Bharosa tha
lekin vo log samjhte the unki maa anjali raj ka pura dhyan rakhti hogi

Vo galat nikli unko bohat gussa aa raha tha apni maa pe

Garima.....dek raj tera aur juhi ka rishta galat hai
ye samaaj ise nahi manta

Raj....didi mai kyu logo ki sunu jab meri juhi mujhe pyar karti and mai usko

Mahima....teri baat bhi thik hai raj par un logo ko is tarah tere saath nahi karna
chaiye tha
aur tujhe itna pareshan kiya chii

Mere bhai tune ek baar bhi hume nahi bataya tune papa ko bhi nahi bataya?

Raj....papa ko pata hai didi fir bhi unko mujhse koi matlab nahi aur na hi mai un log ko ab apni family manta

Mujhe vaha kevel simran bhabhi aur joohi se hi matlab hai

Dono bolti hai chal raj tu hamare saath udaypur chal
ab hum dekhenge tujhe kon parshan karta
Nahi karni hame yaha job hum kal hi chalte

Raj....bahana maar ke didi kya aap chahti hai aapke bhai ki padai ka nuksan ho
jabki uski pyari pyari bahane hi usko khud hi padae gi

Dono nahi nahi raj hum aisa kyu sochenge
Lekin ab se tu hamare saath yahi rahega

Nahi didi ab se aap dono mere saath rahogi samji aap dono

Toa kya raj sach mai vo villa a. Tera hi hai
Par tere pass itna paisa kaha se aaya raj

Raj.....didi mere pass usse kahi jyada paisa hai
Aur ye Paisa legal hai aur mera hai

Is baar sabhi chauk jaate hai !!

Sorry didi Aapko mai nahi bata sakta
ye mere pass kaise hai aapko meri kasam aap nahi pucho gi

Aur aaj se aap dono vahi rahogi mere saath

Dono raj ki baat maan jaati hai

Aur ab ye bhi bata de ye
Tanya ki taraf ishara karke
Iska aur tera kya chakkar hai

Raj...fir train se ghar tak ki sabhi mulakaat ke baare mai bata deta

Garima .... accha toa tum Tina ji ki beti ho
Tanya .... haa didi

Aur Tanya vo college ke gate pe jo hua vo kya tha
Didi vo sab iska hi plan tha isi ne kaha tha

Raj...usko ghure Jaa Raha tha aakhir vo raj ko fasa rahi thi

Fir sab khilkhila ke has pade

Dosto aaj finally raj ne 2 members ka pyar dobara paa liya ab dekhte hai bakiyo ka kab tak milega ....

Mahima......raj hame koi dikkat nahi hai par tu in 2 ko akela sambhal lega

Raj...muh banate hue maana didi inko sambhalna aasan nahi par karna toa padega

Tanya....usko kha jaane wali nazro se dek rahi thi

Garima.....
raj aur majhli maa ka kuch pata chala vo kaha rahti hai ab


Raj......
ko uski baat se behad gussa aata hai

Raj.....
didi dobara mere samne usko maa mat bolna vo nahi janti maa ka matlab kya hai

Tanya ne baat ko ghuma diya

Offo yaar late ho raha hai abhi 12 baj chuke hai shaam tak inko shift karvana hai raj ke villa mai

Raj....raj ke villa mai nahi hamare villa mai vo hum sabka hai samji Tanya

Tanya....
Arre baba haa vahi vahi

dono behene bohat khush thi apni bhai pe garv tha ki vo uske liye kitni khas thi jabki unki maa ne uske saath kitna galat kiya

Didi hume aapke kisi bhi saaman ki jarurat nahi hai vaha sab kuch rakha hai already aapki jarurat ki har chiz hai vaha

Aap bas apni jaruri chize le chalo
Kal apun shopping pe chalenge vaha se aap saare naye kapde lena
Mujhe nahi pasand ki meri behen itne normal kapde pehne

Dono muskura rahi thi aur boli
Buddhu kahi ke vo toa hum college mai aise normal dressing rakhte hai

Par tu itne simple kapde kyu pehne hai

Tanya bolti hai ... Vo toa iski aadat hai isko yahi pehnna pasand hai

Mahima tanya ko chedte hue...tumhe bada pata hai lagta hai jaldi shadi karvani padegi
Raj .... Kab karni hai didi mujhe shadi batao

Is vakt dono bhai behen ek team mai the

Tanya .... Garima didi
Mahima raj
mat pareshan karo usko dono bohat bigad rahe ho meri choti behen ke piche pade ho dono

Tanya bhi garima ke gale se chipak jaati hai

Isi tarah hasi mazaak aur todi nok jhok chalti hai fir vo log Ghar ko tala laga dete hai

Bahar neighbour ko bata ke chal jete hai Tanya ke ghar kyuki abhi bhi vo us khuli jeep mai vardi mai thi

Road pe kaafi londe unhe ghure Jaa rahe the khas kar tino ladkiyo ko
Aur raj ko man hi man gali de rahe honge ki 3 phuljhadi leke Jaa Raha hai sala

Raj...ne apne emotions control karne sikh liye the vo gadi mai todi der Noor se bhi baat Kiya aur pucha ki map ka kaam kaisa chal raha Noor

Noor...raj maine abhi tak kundal wali jagah dudh li hai vo jagah is vakt yahi hai Harish chadra gad fort hai Ahmed nagar district mai uski aur jankari dhundne mai 1 month ka samay lagega
aur vo kavach aur dhanush ka nahi pata chala abhi usme aur 4-5 mahine lag sakte hai

Raj....mai bohat confused hu Noor kya sach mai us mahan yodha ki chize Aaj bhi hai

Noor... Haa raj Aaj raat mai tumhe uski puri kahani ko bataungi kaise vo Shakti dharti pe aayi .......

Raj....thik hai Noor
Raj kuch aur puchne wala tha Noor se tabhi mahima ne usko hila diya
oee hero kaha kho gaya

Hum Tanya ke ghar pahuch gaye
Raj ne jaake bell bajai

Baaki sab next update mai !!
Note ..... Meri ek baat dhyan se lo aap sabhi readers
mai jagaho(places) ke naam real rakh Raha hu kyoki kahani padne mai maza aaega
Par is baat ka dhyaan rakhe isme sabhi chize kalpanik hai iska reality se koi lena dena nahi hai ye ek fanatsy hai uski tarah rahne Dena isko
Agar mai nakli nakli jagah likhne laga toa aap logo ko bilkul maza nahi aaega so enjoy Karo fantasy samaj ke!!