Fantasy MAHAGATHA : EK PRACHAND YODHA

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Dhyanvaad ji aur baaki sabhi readers ko bhi thankyou

Mai update raat tak dunga aur update lamba rahega

 

[Iron Man]

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UPDATE : 30​

Is vakt ek aadmi utar chuka tha udaypur ki dharti pe jo dekhne se hi shandaar lag raha tha
Jiske liye kayi saare log and party workers khade hue intezaar kar rahe the

Commissioner : welcome to Rajasthan sir

Raja sahab (Mahesh) : chalo commissioner gadi chalu karvao aur betho mujhe tumse baat karni hai

Commissioner : ji sir

Raja sahab : haa toa tum kah rahe the tumne raj ko Mumbai station pe utarte deka hai kyu

Commissioner : ji sir maine pure india ke station pe ye info di thi ye ladka jaha bhi mile uska pata batao

Raja sahab : nhi commisioner ab hume usi jarurat nahi padegi vo apne maa se milne gaya hoga
Sabko mana kardo
Ab usko na dudha jaaye aur tum mere office jaake deko vaha ek file hogi tumhare kaam ki uska pata karo

Commissioner : ji sir namaste

Raja sahab nikal pade haveli ke liye

Haveli ke gate pe chaplusi karne daud ke aayi anupriya
Ya kahe Mamta ka dikhava karne aayi thi
Raja sahab aap aa gaye kuch pata chala raj beta ka ?

Raja sahab : hmm nahi abhi nahi chala kuch bhi pata

Tabhi anjali ne aake pair chue

Anjali : kaise hai aap

Raja sahab ne usko dek ke ansuna kar diya

Anjali samaj gayi raj ki vajah se vo gussa hai vo man hi man dukhi hone lagi

Tabhi simran aur bheema ne bhi pair chue

Simran : maaf kar dijiye papa ji mai apni jimmedari nahi nibha payi

Raja sahab ne uske sir pe haath fera aur bole koi baat nahi beta

Tabhi joohi daud ke aayi aur apne papa ke lage lag gayi aur rone lagi
Papa mujhe maaf kardo saari galti meri hai raj ki koi galti nahi papa

Papa vo kaha chala gaya sab meri vajah se hai

Raja sahab bhi apni ladli ko dek chup ho gaye

Fir Raja sahab ke pass commisioner ka dobara call aa gaya vo busy ho gaye

BACK TO MUMBAI ....

Raj and family
Ram and family
Lala and family

Charo chal padi apne apne thikane
Lala apni family ke saath Ghar chala gaya

Abhi raj mahima garima ramaa Tina Tanya vikash kirti kunnu Aisha ye sab log jaa rahe the
Muskan ke ghar ko raj ke ab relative bhi hai

Sab ek dusre se jhul mil gaye the aapas mai khub baate kar chuke the

Tabhi vo log pahuch jaate hai villa 3 ke gate pe jo ki toda hi dur tha villa a. Se


Villa c. Members realtion with our hero(raj)

Bhushan chaturvedi
Raj ke Nana aur Kaushalya devi ke bhai Uday bhanu shingh ji ka sala

Devi sudha
Karuna ki murti apni Nani ji

Ram Chaturvedi
Mama

Shalini chaturvedi
Mami

Muskan (muski)
Cousin and friend

Aakash chaturvedi
Cousin

Titu chaturvedi
Chote mama

Sweeti chaturvedi
Choti mami

(baaki detailed intro phele se chuka hu)

Ye villa kahi se bhi villa a. Se kam nahi tha bas usse chota tha
Baaki vaise hi alishan


Ye sab log andar Gaye ek mahila dikhi jo umar mai badi thi par sundarta mai abhi bhin 30-40 ki thi vo thi sudha

Sudha : aa gaye tum sab chalo aacha hai betho mai chai Pani lagati sabke liye

Sudha : bhusan ji ye log kon hai

Raj ne bhusan ko mana kar diya tha batane se

Raj aage jaake apni Nani ko bhao mai bhar leta hai sab ye dek hairaan the ki is 6.5 ki height wale ladke ne apne se double size ki aurat ko aise utha liya

Bhusan ji mand mand muskura rahe the

Sudha : aee ladke kon ho tum ye kya battamizi hai chodo mujhe

Bhusan ji aap dek kya rahe ho kon hai ye

Bhusan : beta nicho utaro usko jara
Sudha ye mai nahi bataunga tum khud uska haath pakdo aur dek ke samaj jaao kon hai vo

Sudha samaj gayi thi ye koi aisa hai jo uska apna hai

Tabhi sudha ne raj ka haath pakad liye

Usko utna kaske pakda ki raj ko dard mehsoos ho raha tha system hone ke baad bhi

Phele toa sudha raj kl dhayan se dek ke pehchan rahi

Fir sudha raj kl jabardasti apne kamre ki taraf le jaati hai

Baaki sab hairani se dek rahe the kisi ko kuch samaj nahi aa raha tha kya ho raha hai achanak se

Kevel 2 hi log the jinko koi chinta nahi
Aisha aur bhusan

Sudha ne abhi tak raj ka haath nahi choda tha

Sudha ne aakh band kiya usko ek awaj aayi jo raj ko bhi aayi

Noor : kaise ho sudha

Sudha ke rongate khade ho gaye ye sun ke vo soch mai pad gayi ye awaj toa ye toa...

Noor : haa ye mai hi sudha jiski raksha
Tumhara bhai karta tha Uday shingh

Aur ye ladka koi aur nahi vahi hai jo mujhe paane ke liye janme hai mere bhi malik

Ye Uday shingh ke hi pote hai Rajpurohit shingh
Tumare apne bhaiya ke vanshaj

Sudha ki aakhe jhalak uthi maharani bharo baad aapki awaj sunke mai dhyana ho gayi

Maharani aapse kab milna hoga dobara

Noor : jab tak sab sahi nahi ho jaata mai yaha kaid hu sudha

Raj ko kuch samaj nahi aa raha tha

Noor : sudha abhi raj ko kuch nahi pata unhe kudh sab karna hoga isiliye tumko unhi ke saath unhi ke parivaar mai rahna hoga

Ab ye jagah Khali karke unke saath jaao
Baaki kuch mat kehna abhi
Sudha samaj gayi

Sudha : ji maharani samaj gayi

Fir sudha turant hi raj ko gale laga leti

Raj : Nani aap kon ho aur kaise system se baat kar sakti ho aap ho kon aur ye Noor kya kah rahi thi

Sudha. : kuch nahi beta chodo us baat ko

Beta tum Uday bhaiya ke bete ho par tum yaha kaise aaye

Tabhi bhusan ji andar aake use sab bata dete

Use itna bhayankar gussa aa raha tha uski aakhe laal thi

Bhusan ji : shant ho jao sudha ek dum shant

Sab bahar in sabka intezaar kar rahe the
Raj hairan pareshan tha aakhir ye sab hai kya aur kyu
Ye Noor bhi nahi bata rahi
Kya chkkar hai ye Maharani Surya mani system ka pata lagana padega

Noor: shant ho jaao raj samay sab bata dega samje
Abhi sudha ko gale lagao aur shant karao

Raj sudha ko bhao mai bhar ke shant karta hai fir tino bahar aate hai

Tabhi bhusan sudha ko raj se bachke Aisha ki taraf ishara karta hai

Raj ko abhi tak Aisha pe shak tha bas

Sudha uske pass jaake aakho se jhukkar pranaam karti hai
Dono ki baate man aur dimak mai ho rahi thi

Sudha : maharani aap aa gayi aapko Mera pranaam

Aisha : khush raho sudha
Sudha haa mai wapas aa gayi baaki sab toa tumko Noor ne bata Diya hoga

Sudha : ji maharani

Fir raj awaj lagata hai sudha ko sudha Aisha se vida leke mahima garima tanya se milti hai baaki sabse milti hai sab jaanti hai sabke baare mai

Fir ye log raat ka dinner karte hai
Tanya ko subah duty pe jaana tha vo chali jaati hai apni family ke saath raj se vida leke

Fir raat ko raj sabko sofe pe bulata hai
Aur kuch aisa maang leta hai jisko sun kar sab hairaan the ye kaise sambhav hoga !!

Raj : mama mami maine aakash ki jaan bachai haina?

Dono : haa beta

Raj : aapne kaha mai aapse kuch bhi maang lu aap denge wada tha aapka haina?

Dono : bolo beta kya chaiye aapko

Raj : aap sab ye ghar chod do

Muskan : kyuu aur ye kya maang Rahi ho raj

Sab raj se jaana chahte the
Mai chahta hu aap log ab se mere saath villa a. Mai rahe

Ram Shalini : but beta ye kaise possible hai hum vaha rahe hamara ghar toa ye hai
Maa baba aap toa kuch bolo

Dono : ye matter tum log dekho

Raj : aapne wada kiya tha aur vaha sab kuch hai aapke liye kya aap mujhe apna parivaar nahi samjhte mama mami

Dono kasake raj ko gale laga ke beta tumhari vajah se hamari jindgi bachi hai aisa mat bolo beta aisa nahi kaho

Fir sab log soch samaj ke raj ke saath rahne ko Maan jaate hai sab khush the

Kirti bhusan ji ke saath khel rahi thi

Tabhi Nani boli raj aaj tum sab log yahi ruko kal se apun vaha shift honge
Kyu thik haina?

Raj : ji Nani

Nani : beta muskan sabko rooms dikha jaake sone ke liye

Muskan sabko kamre dikhati hai fir kudh bhi sone chali jaati hai !!

Aaj ki raat kuch hone wala hai dekhte hai kya
Baaki agle update mai dosto

Shandar jabardast romanchak update

 

[Naik]

UPDATE : 34
PLACE : MUMBAI​

Helicopter is vakt aasman ko chirta hua Jaa Raha tha aasman ke safar mai tino hone wale business partner apni baato mai Lage pade the

Sodhi : raj bhai aapka vo roop toa bada jabardast tha paaji
last mai jis tarah se aapne us ladki ko maaf Kiya sach mai aap ek behtareen insaan ho
Par mujhe samaj nahi aaya aapne aisa kyu kiya ? Kyu usko apne ghar bhi le gaye

Raj : dhyanvaad sodhi bhai
Aur maine use isiliye maaf kiya
Kyuki vo mujhe buri nahi lagi bas todhi galat raste pe jaa rahi thi
Aur jab mujhe pata chala ki usne aisa kyu kiya toa maine socha hai jab tak vo thik nahi ho jaati uski nafrat khatam nahi hoti vo vahi rahegi

Kyuki mai janta hu agar koi stree aapke liye nafrat ko janam dede toa aap kahi ke nahi rahoge
Aur ye jaruri hai ki usko thik Kara jaaye taaki aage aisa na ho kyuki isme us bichari ka koi kusur nahi hai

Jaisa uski maa ke saath bura hua toa uske man mai nafrat janam le gayi

Sodhi : waah raj pra Maan Gaye aapko ab lagta hai koi hume hamare jaisa mila

Sodhi : raj bhai ek kaam karte hai mere office chalte hai aaj vahi nastha karenge aur todhi party sharty hehehe

Raj : nahi paaji mai party vagrah nahi karta aur thik hai chaliye vahi chalte hai

Sodhi : accha pra chalte hai vahi

Bhoopati ji jo kaafi der se inki baate sun rahe the !!

Raj : bhoopati ji mai aapse maafi chahta hu aaj mai dinner pe nahi aa sakta

Bhoopati : kyu raj mujhse koi galti hui kya

Raj : nahi nahi aap galat samaj rahe ho vo aaj jo kuch bhi hungama hua uske kaaran mujhe ghar mai jaake sab dekhna padega sabke sawaal honge vaha aap samaj rahe hona

Bhoopati ( simles) hahahaha samaj gaya accha thik hai lekin agli baar jaldi hi aana aap aur with family

Raj ( smiles back) : ji bilkul mai jaldi hi aaunga

Abhi Inka safar chalu tha raj ne thoda bahar ke nazare ka bhi luft uthaya kyuki aaj mosom ek dum sexy ho rakha tha
Aasman mai halke halke barish wale badal the hawae apni raftaar se adhik tej thi



Aap andaja laga sakte ho aaj raj apne upar se control kho deta toa kya ho jaata
Iske liye usne socha Noor se puchega ki kudh ko kaise control kare

Khair isi soch mai betha raj apne vicharo se bahar aaya usne dekha toa helicopter land karne wala tha aur dhere dhere vo helipad pe land kar gaya

Abhi central minister ke office ke bahar bhaari matra mai commando maujud the

Jaise hi central minister bahar aaye sabne unko salaam thoka

Central minister, bhoopati ji and hero sabse phele lunch karte hai Vaha pe
fir tino unke meeting hall mai chale gaye
Jaha in tino ek alava central minister ka personal secretary bhi tha

Bhoopati : raj aapke pass vo supreme card hai jiski limit 1000 crore ki hai
Ye card pure india mai aapko Mila ke 11 logo ke pass hi hai yaha tak ki mere pass bhi nahi

Raj : ji mai janta hu lekin aap business kis chiz ka karna chahte hai ? Jisme mai partner banu aap logo ka

Sodhi : raj pra kya mai vo card dek sakta hu please phele

Raj (smiles) : vo apne pocket se purse nikalta hai jisme se card sodhi ke haath mai rakh deta hai
Aaj jo aap dono ne mere liye kiya vo is card se bohat badh ke hai !!

Sodhi jaise jaise card dek raha tha pura hairan tha kyuki asli tha vo supreme card !!

Bhoopati : haa toa raj aap puch rahe the business ka toa mai ek company start karna chahta hu apne tino ke naam se ek venture
Jisme power mehendra bhai ki hogi
Paisa aapka hoga
Aur saari activity bhoopati group dekhega

Hum jald hi is venture ko world ki top 10 company ki list mai shamil kar sakte hai bas hume aapka saath chaiye

Raj : vo toa thik hai par isme aap kis field mai jaana chahte ho matlab aap kis chiz ka business karoge initial stage pe

Bhoopati : raj maine 5 chize Sochi hai
1. Pharmaceuticals
2. Luxury Goods
3. Banking
4. Energy Trading
5. Aviation
Abhi India mai is chiz ki market utni devloped nahi hai hum inhi ko large scale pe target karenge aur inke number 1 player banaege

Apne pass desh ke sabse bade politician ka support hai
Aur aap ko bata du Mahendra bhai apne prime minister ka right hand hai

Sodhi : dhyanvaad paaji aur raj bhai aapko profit ratio phone pe bata hi Diya tha 50 percent aapka 30 bhoopati ji ka 20 mera

Raj : jaan ke khusi hui aur mai iske liye taiyaar hu ye lijiye supreme card isko aap rakhiye apne pass aisa kahke usne bhoopati ji ko thama diya
Aur bola bhoopati ji mai aapse kuch maangu aap mana toa nahi karenge

Bhoopati : aisa kya hai jiski aap ko jarurat hai raj
Thik hai ye bhoopati ka vachan hai aap ko jo mangenge hum hamesha denge hum agar hamare bas mai hua toa

Raj (smiles) : mujhe Radha chaiye jisko aap ne mall ka head banaya hai

Bhoopati : aur vo kyu bhala aapko uski kya jarurat ?

Raj : bhoopati ji mujhe vo ladki mai bohat potential nazar aata hai mai usko apne shipping business mai lagvana chahta jisme already maine meri Chachi ki beti ko choose Kiya hai join karne
vo bhi saath hogi toa mai tension mukt ho jaaunga isiliye

Bhoopati : hmm ye baat hai thik hai raj
Par aap shipping business khole bataya bhi nahi aapne

Raj : abhi start nahi Kiya bhoopati ji aur isme mujhe kuch staff chaiye kya aap madad kar sakte hai

Bhoopati : raj kaise baat karte ho aapka partner India ke top 10 business man hoke aapki madad nahi karega aisa kaise possible hai

Raj : ji toa aap ek kaam kijiye mujhe Radha ka termination letter de dijiye mai yaha se uske ghar hi jaaunga vahi usse baat kar lunga

Bhoopati ne apne ek manager ko call lagaya aur Radha ka resignation banane ko kaha aur bejne ko bhi bola

Bhoopati : maine bol diya hai raj mera aadmi 10 min mai aata hoga

Tabhi sodhi ne sabke liye coffee mangva li

Sodhi ke dimak ki batti jali vo bola oee kake ek baat toa rahi gayi

Raj bhoopati ek saath kya rah gaya?

Sodhi : apne venture ka name kya hoga
Ye toa socha nahi

Bhoopati : hmm sawaal toa thik hai par is baare mai maine bhi nahi socha kya name rakhna hai

Raj : ek kaam kijiye MBR VENTURES rakh lijiye
Isme tino ke naam hai aur unique bhi hai

Sodhi : waah paaji ye jabardast hai thankyou so much aapka

Bhoopati : haa raj thik hai ye
mai kal hi sabhi formalities and incorporation karva deta hu apne compliance officer ko bol ke

Tabhi vo termination letter leke banda bhi aa gaya

Raj ne letter liya aur vida maangi

Mahendra : sodhi ne 2 commando bulae aur bola raj ye mere sabse vishawas patra commandos hai sbse ye tumhare saath rahenge aur mai aaj hi government se bolke tumhare liye security allot karvata hu

Aaj se aap dono raj bhai ke saath rahoge

Dono commando : ji sir

Raj : Mahendra bhai is sabki koi jarurat nahi hai mai sambhaal sakta hu sab

Bhoopati : nahi raj
aaj jaisa gatana dobara na ho ye usko dhyan mai rakhte hue kiya gaya hai aur aapko aane wale kuch dino mai inki jarurat vaise bhi padni hai

Aur ye dono commandos aapke personal commando hai 24 ghante aap saath rakh sakte ho

Mahendra bhai baaki security bhi jaldi bej denge

Raj ko unki baat manani padi aur raj ko chodne Mahendra ne ek thar bej di jisme raj aur ek commando piche betha tha
1 commando aage betha tha saath mai driver tha

Raj : aap dono ke kya naam hai

Commando 1 : sir mai
Axx
Commando 2 : sir mai
Bxxx
(Not so important)

Raj : accha thik hai ab aap mere saath ho kisi bhi chiz ki kabhi bhi jarurat ho yaad rakhna ye chota bhai aapke saath hai bas Mera bharosa mat todna

Dono commandos (simles) : ji bilkul

Tabhi raj ki gadi nikal gayi thi sodhi ke office se

Raj ne apna dark web function on kiya
Tracker ki madad se Radha ka address dek liya fir kuch soch ke Radha ko call laga di ...........

Ab todha Radha ke baare mai bata du ye uttrakhand ki rahne wali ladki hai
Iske face pe hamesha khusi aur smile rahti hai masoom hai ek dum
Aur kabhi vahiyat vulgar kapde nahi pahna karti hai

hight mai 5'8 hogi aur sundar bhi hai kaafi ye uttrakhand khand ki hai pahadan ladki hai apne sapne pura karne maharastra sahar mai aa gayi
Iske Ghar walo pe paise ki koi kami nahi sauteli maa se pareshan hoke ye yaha aa gayi hai iska koi bhai bhen nahi hai

Maa thi vo bhi gujar chuki baaki iski family samay aane pe dekhnge
Abhi ye 1 ghar mai kiraye pe rahti hai 2 kamre ka ghar hai ye

Radha : ye kis unknown ka call aa raha mere pass hmm syad spam hoga

Raj : ye call kyu nahi utha Rahi mera ?ek baar aur lagata hu

Radha : firse call .... Chalo dekhti hu kon hai jo mujhe yaad kar raha

Haanji kon bol raha hai

Raj : dost banke itni jaldi bhul jaaogi socha nahi tha maine

Radha : dost kon kahi tum raj toa nahi bol rahe

Raj : aur kisko number diya tha tumne

Radha : chahkte hue ohh toa janab aap ho kahiye kaise yaad kiya

Raj : abhi free ho mujhe tumse jaruri kaam hai

Radha : kaam mujhse haa mai free batao kya hua

Raj : aise nahi mai tumhare ghar aa raha hu kya tum mujhe address bataogi

Radha : haa aa jaao ruko mai location WhatsApp pe share karti hu

Radha ne raj ko location bej di
Raj ne driver ko rasta bata diya

Raj ne commandos ko gadi mai hi rahne ko kaha
Aur chala gaya Radha ke ghar ki taraf

Raj ne bell bajai aur kuch hi palo mai Radha ne darwaja khola maano jaise vo apne is dost ka besabri se intezar kar rahi ho

Raj : hello Radha
usne ye kahte hue haath badaya

Radha : Radha ne uske haath ko thama aur haath milya aur boli aao raj betho

Raj : haa toa Radha mai aaj tumse kuch baat karne aur batane aaya tha jisme 2 khabar hai ek buri aur ek acchi

Radha : matlab aur aise kya baat hai raj batao tum jo bhi hai

Raj ne saas chodi aur bola phele konsi khabar sunau

Radha : phele buri hi bata do

Raj : vo vo .. bhoopati ji ne tumko job se resign karne ke liye letter taiyaar kiya hai jispe sign kardo tum

Radha ne jaise hi ye suna ek dum se khadi ho gayi uski aakhe num ho gayi bohat bura jhatka laga usko

Radha : kyaa par kyu kiya unhone aisa abhi 2-3 din phele hi toa mujhe unhone us mall ka head manager banaya tha fir kyu kiya unhone aisa aur rone lagi

Dosto aap samaj sakte ho jab aapki job chali jaaye toa kaisa lagta hai vahi haal bichari ka tha

Raj : shant ho jaao Radha vo darasal ye maine hi unko karne bola tha ki tumhe job se hata de
Aur tum ab vaha kaam na karo

Jaise hi ye Radha ne suna vo puri hil gayi aakhir jis bande ki vajah se usko ye job mili usi ne use nikalva diya vo roye jaa rahi thi

Radha : kyu raj kyu tumne Aisa Kiya kya galti hui mujhse kuch raj mai kya karungi ab yaha rukke

Raj : phele acchi khabar toa sunlo ek baat batao tum phele vaha kitni salary pe job karti thi fir nayi post pe tumhari salary kitni thi

Radha : vo puri udas ho chuki thi lekin raj uska dost tha vo boli phele 30 hazar milte the raj fir GM ki post jo chali gayi uspe 1 lakh

Raj : tumhare liye good news ye hai ki ab tum mere saath mera business mai madad karogi aur tumko mai double salary dunga aur tumhara koi boss nahi hoga kyuki tum apne dost ke pass job karogi

Aur tumhari madad ke liye Aisha bhi hogi ( Radha Aisha ko naam se nahi janti thi par haa mall mai sakal jarur deki hogi)

Radha : kyaa mai tumhare business ko join Karu
par kis chiz ka business hai vo
Vo bohat khus thi use samaj aa raha tha raj ne kyu bad news good news bola

Raj : shipping business shuru karne wala hu mai jaha lagbhag 150 crore daalunga as an investment

Usme hum containers ko purchase karenge
jisko hum rent kar denge simple usi ko tumko dekhna hai Mumbai port pe

Radha : jaise hi usne ye suna vo andar tak hill gayi aakhir ye itna choti Umar ka banda hai kya looks se kisi Rajkumar jaisa baato se mard aur itna paisa

Raj : Radha ye bohat jimmedari ka kaam hai aur aisa kah ke raj ne uske kandhe pe haath rakha aur bola mujhe tumpe bharosa hai tum kar sakti ho

Radha ki puri rooh tak hil gayi is tarah ke eshas se

Radha : thik hai raj mai taiyaar hu

Raj (smiles) : tum yaha rent pe rehti hona toa kal se tum mere villa mai rahogi samaj gayi isse tumhe aur Aisha ko samay milega aur Roz roz parshan bhi nahi hona hoga

Radha : nahi raj mai vaha nahi rah sakti hu log kya kahenge nhi nhi raj mai yahi thik hu mujhe koi dikkat nhi

Raj : ye mai puch nahi Raha tumse balki bata raha hu mai kuch nahi sununga samji

Radha (smiles back) : thik hai raj mai kal aa jaaungi

Aaj Radha bohat khush achanak pata nahi use kya hua vo jaake raj se chipak gayi

Raj pura shocked ho gaya par uski excitement samjhte hue shant vaise hi khada raha

Radha Kushi ke maare uchalne lagi
Raj mai un sabke liye humdardi thi jinka parivaar nahi aur jo uske kaam aaenge

Raj : Radha mai nikalta hu ab kal tum jaldi aa jaana

Radha ne raj ko bye bolke gate Tak choda aur last mai thankyou kaha bade masoomiyat se

Raj bahar jaake car mai Beth Gaya

Raj : chalo driver bhaiya raj ne apne villa tak ka rasta usko bata diya

Ab baaki Jo bhi raj ke parivaar mai hungama hua vo jaana chahte ho toa intezaar kijiye todha

Abhi ke liye itna hi baaa bye dosto,!!!

Badhiya shaandar update
Achcha naam dia MBR venture guruops
Radha ko tow heart attack kerwa dia tha Raj ne yeh Bata ker ki ab uski job nahi lekin doosri baat jan ker tow laga Dunia ki saari Khushi mil gayi or jab villa A dekhe gi tab kia hoga
Bahot khoob shaandar update

 

[rkrcs99]

Aaj update ayega kyA

 

[rajpurohitkikahani99]

UPDATE : 35
PLACE : MUMBAI​

Mahol ek dum shant tha abhi itna bada hungama jo hua tha
Sabhi taraf Shanti thi
DGP Jaa chuke tha vaha se
Sabhi Ghayalo ko hospital pahucha diya gaya tha

Tarini,Tanya,alka,Ritu charo police ki jeep mai bethi thi
Tarini ko hosh nahi aaya tha vahi Tanya ek dum chup thi
Kaafi gehri santi thi mahol mai
Kuch der baad
Is Shanti ko bhang kiya apni IGP alka ne

Alka : Tanya mere kuch sawaal hai I hope tum unka jabab dogi

Tanya : ji mam puchiye

Alka : "didi" bhi bula sakti ho

Tanya : ji didi ( Tanya is vakt todhi sehmi hui thi jisko Ritu ne acche se bhaamp liya tha)

Alka : toa tum raj ki mangetar ho right?

Tanya : ji didi hum dono ki abhi sagai nahi hui hai par mummy papa ko raj pasand hai

Ritu : oee how tu toa hamari bhabhi hai yaani Tanya (usne mahol ko halka banane ke liye kaha)

Tanya : ji didi

Ritu (smiles) : gadi side mai laga

Tanya ne gadi side mai lagai

Ritu : oee ji didi ki bacchi aaja mere gale lag jaa tu toa meri bhabhi hai ab yaani mera chutku itna bada ho gaya ki shadi karega ab oee hoee

Alka bohat dhayan se Tanya ko dek rahi thi

Tanya : alka didi kya aapko mai pasand nahi aayi

Alka ne use pass bulaya apne gale se chipka liya

Alka : befkoof tujhe mere bhai ne pasand kiya hai tu acchi hi nahi bohat acchi hogi

Ritu and alka dono ye janti thi aaj ke haadse mai bichari Tanya ki koi bhi galti nahi hai

Fir sab log ghadi mai Beth gaye aur Tanya ne car start kardi

Alka : haa toa Tanya mujhe kuch baate acche se janni hai kya apni didi ko sach sach bataogi

Tanya : bilkul didi puchiye mai bilkul sach sach bataungi aapko

Alka : ye raj Mumbai mai kya kar raha hai aur ye uske business partner aur tum ye sab kya chakkar hai
Vo jab Mumbai aa gaya hai humse mila kyu nahi aakhir

Abhi tarini ko hosh aa chuka tha lekin usko in logo ki baate janne mai interest tha vo chahti thi raj ke baare mai janna abhi bhi usko raj ki shirt se uske badan ki mahak aa rahi thi !!

Ritu bhi ab chup chap thi vo bhi sab Janna chahti thi apne bhai ki life ke baare mai

Tanya : didi mai aapko sab samjhati hu

(Tanya jo jo udaypur se leke uski train mai mulakat tak hua vo batati hai)

Jaise jaise alka aur Ritu uski baat sun rahe the vo hairan ho rahi thi aur rone lagi

Ritu : didi hamare bhai ne maa ki vajah se kitna kuch saha vo aurat ne jab hume hi dur kar diya vo maa nahi ho sakti mai chodungi nahi us aurat ko

Alka samajdaar thi vo sab janti thi uski maa kaise hai lekin ab usko raj ki yaha tak ki life ke baare mai janna tha
Uske aau bej rahe the lekin usne chup chap aasu saaf kiya aur boli

Alka : Tanya hamare bhai ne itna kuch saha fir toa vo pura akela hoga na aur ghar chod ke aane ke baad uske pass tumhare alava koi nahi hoga na

Tanya : nahi didi usko yaha uske apne mil gaye

Ritu : apne kon ? Vo toa sab udaypur the na

Tanya : todha muskurate hue bolti hai mai garima aur mahima didi ki baat kar rahi hu

Jaise hi Ritu aur alka ne ye suna dono ek saath ...kyaaaaa....vo dono raj ke saath rahti hai par vo dono yaha kaise aayi ?

Ritu rone lagi
Bura toa alka ko bhi laga tha jiska kaaran tha Prem !!

Tanya : didi aap roo kyu Rahi ho

RItu : rou nahi toa kya karu sayad raj hume behen nahi manta vo hamari maa ki saza hume de raha hai
usko joohi garima mahima ki chinta hai lekin hamari nahi in bite salo mai usne toa har pal unke saath gujara hai hume toa bhul gaya hoga

Varna Aaj vo hamare saath hamare yaha rah raha hota Naa ki mahima garima ke yaha

Alka (smiles) uske face pe dukh toa tha lekin vo boli haa sayad maa ki saza hume hi jhelni padegi lekin vo mera bhai hai aur uska pyar paane ke liye mai kisi bhi had tak Jaa sakti hu

Tanya (smiles back) : nahi aap dono galat samaj Rahi ho
(Fir vo raj ka train se leke kal wale kand tak pura flash back suna deti hai)

Jaise Tanya ne sunaya aur jaise un dono bheno ne Suna raj k 100 crore ka bangla looks gadiya jo unhone kal deka usko yaad kiya ki kudh Central minister uske liye aaya vo samaj gayi thi ki kuch toa chakkar hai is sab mai

Ritu toa todhi mazakiya thi
Lekin alka bohat serious shant nature ki thi maano uski intelligence abhi bhi Raj se bhi jyda ho upar se police vibhag mai IGP

Vo jaan gayi thi raj jaisa dikhta hai vaisa nahi hai agar usne itne kam vakt mai itna kuch kiya hai toa iske piche kuch gehra raaj hai
Usne is baat ko baad ke liye chod diya tha

Ritu : didi aapne suna apna bhai kya ban gaya hai aur bechari mahima aur garima unko bhi hamari tarah dur kiya hume pata bhi nahi tha

Alka : haa choti koi baat nahi dekhna raj hume maaf bhi karega aur hamare saath phele jaisa natkhat ho jaaega

Mahol todha khushnuma ho gaya tha

Isi sab ke bich jo behos hone ka natak karke sab sun rahi thi apni tarini
Jab usne suna bichare raj ne life mai kya kya saha hai kitna dutkaar thokar khayi hai us samay uske aakho se jhalar jhalar aansu nikal rah the

Tarini : hai bagwan ye kaisa paap karva diya tumne mujhse mai ek bichare masoom ke saath itna bura kar diya
Usko ye sunke raj ke chere mai uski maa ka face nazar aa raha tha jo usko dutkaar rahi thi

Vo rote hue chikh padi uski cheekh sunke baaki tino ka dhyan uspe gaya jo usko lanat bhari nazaro se dek rahi thi

Tarini ne face niche Kara aur usne uske saath bethi alka ke pair pakad liye

Tarini : didi please mujhe maaf kar dijiye didi maine us bichare ke saath bohat galat kiya didi maine hi phele use gamand dikhaya fir gali di thi maaf kardo didi mujhe

Alka janti thi tarini apni maa ki vajah se pareshan thi aur galtiya aksar insaan se hi hoti hai jab uski maa galti kar sakti hai toa tarini toa fir bhi abhi choti hai

Uske baad tarini ne haath jod ke binti bhari nazro se Tanya aur Ritu ko dekha
Dono ne muh pher liya

Tarini khub sisakne lagi
Kahi dobara na behosh ho jaae isiliye alka boli

Alka : tune galti hai tarini lekin agar tujhe raj ne maaf kar diya toa hum bhi kar denge filhaal aaj se kuch din tu raj ke yaha hi rukegi ye uska hukum hai

Phele toa jaise hi tarini ne ye suna vo ek dum khush ho gayi fir jab uske ye suna vo raj ke yaha rukegi usko samaj nahi aaya !!?

Tarini : par ghar pe mere chote bhai bhen hai didi

RItu : uska naam raj hai vo teri tarah nahi hai jo aise galat kare usne unko apne villa pe bula liya hoga sayad inspector aane wala hoga unko leke

Tarini ne ye suna uski jaan mai Jaan aayi uska chera niche hi jhuka tha

( Idhar Tanya ne bhi apne ghar phone karke sab kuch bata diya tha yaha kya kya hua kaise hua aur aane ka bol diya
Phele toa Tina bohat naraz Hui aur raj ka ye roop jaan ke bohat khush bhi hui ki usne apni beti ke liye sacha mard chuna uska proud tha apne hone wale bete (damad) pe vo jaan gayi thi uska damad uski beti ko khush rakhega )

Uske baad kuch der mai ye log gate Tak pahuche hi the ki vaha inko subah wali sando dale raj dikha
(Sando isiliye pehni thi kyuki shirt tarini ke pass thi)
Raj is vakt kittu bittu se gappe lagane mai mashgool tha aur vo in sabka bhi intezaar kar raha tha ki sab saath mai andar jaaye !!

Jab tarini ki nigah raj pe gayi toa raj mai usko ek bacche ki chavi dikhayi de Rahi thi uske andar himmat nahi thi ki raj ki aakho mai aakh daal ke dekh sake
Vo bohat kamzor feel kar rahi thi

Tanya ki bhi vahi haalat thi halki use maafi mil gayi thi lekin fir bhi vo himmat nahi kar paa rahi thi raj se maafi maange

Kittu bittu ne Tanya ko namaskar kiya aur baaki sab ko bhi

Lekin raj ka dhayan sirf apni dono didiyo ke upar tha

6 feet ke kase badan wali 24-36-34 Ritu kisi apsara se kam nahi thi vo ek hoor lag rahi thi upar se ye abhi vo apni vardi mai nahi thi agar hoti toa gajab lagti

6"2 feet ke kase badan wali 25-34-36 ke size wali alka toa maano Ritu se bhi jyda akarshak jo ek hi nazar mai kisi ko bhi ghayal karde

Raj ne turant daud lagai aur kudh gaya alka ke upar aur jhalar jhalar aasu bahane laga tha

Kittu bittu bohat hairaan the vo alka ko baharwali hi samaj rahe the

Raj ke aasu ruk hi nahi rahe the vo bas alka se chipka tha jaise baccha apni maa se chipak jaata hai dudh pine

Turant raj alka ko chod ke Ritu ke upar kudh laga di aur ab Ritu rone lagi aur boli

Ritu : kya tujhe itne saalo mai hamari yaad nahi satai bhaiya

Raj : mujhe maaf kardo didi mai majboor tha lekin ab mujhe meri didi mil gayi hai mai tum dono ko kahi nahi jaane dunga ab

Raj ne tanya aur tarini ko filhaal ignore Kiya

AB dekhte hai kal ki aage kya baat hoti hai tab tak bye bye dosto!!

 

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UPDATE : 35
PLACE : MUMBAI​

Mahol ek dum shant tha abhi itna bada hungama jo hua tha
Sabhi taraf Shanti thi
DGP Jaa chuke tha vaha se
Sabhi Ghayalo ko hospital pahucha diya gaya tha

Tarini,Tanya,alka,Ritu charo police ki jeep mai bethi thi
Tarini ko hosh nahi aaya tha vahi Tanya ek dum chup thi
Kaafi gehri santi thi mahol mai
Kuch der baad
Is Shanti ko bhang kiya apni IGP alka ne

Alka : Tanya mere kuch sawaal hai I hope tum unka jabab dogi

Tanya : ji mam puchiye

Alka : "didi" bhi bula sakti ho

Tanya : ji didi ( Tanya is vakt todhi sehmi hui thi jisko Ritu ne acche se bhaamp liya tha)

Alka : toa tum raj ki mangetar ho right?

Tanya : ji didi hum dono ki abhi sagai nahi hui hai par mummy papa ko raj pasand hai

Ritu : oee how tu toa hamari bhabhi hai yaani Tanya (usne mahol ko halka banane ke liye kaha)

Tanya : ji didi

Ritu (smiles) : gadi side mai laga

Tanya ne gadi side mai lagai

Ritu : oee ji didi ki bacchi aaja mere gale lag jaa tu toa meri bhabhi hai ab yaani mera chutku itna bada ho gaya ki shadi karega ab oee hoee

Alka bohat dhayan se Tanya ko dek rahi thi

Tanya : alka didi kya aapko mai pasand nahi aayi

Alka ne use pass bulaya apne gale se chipka liya

Alka : befkoof tujhe mere bhai ne pasand kiya hai tu acchi hi nahi bohat acchi hogi

Ritu and alka dono ye janti thi aaj ke haadse mai bichari Tanya ki koi bhi galti nahi hai

Fir sab log ghadi mai Beth gaye aur Tanya ne car start kardi

Alka : haa toa Tanya mujhe kuch baate acche se janni hai kya apni didi ko sach sach bataogi

Tanya : bilkul didi puchiye mai bilkul sach sach bataungi aapko

Alka : ye raj Mumbai mai kya kar raha hai aur ye uske business partner aur tum ye sab kya chakkar hai
Vo jab Mumbai aa gaya hai humse mila kyu nahi aakhir

Abhi tarini ko hosh aa chuka tha lekin usko in logo ki baate janne mai interest tha vo chahti thi raj ke baare mai janna abhi bhi usko raj ki shirt se uske badan ki mahak aa rahi thi !!

Ritu bhi ab chup chap thi vo bhi sab Janna chahti thi apne bhai ki life ke baare mai

Tanya : didi mai aapko sab samjhati hu

(Tanya jo jo udaypur se leke uski train mai mulakat tak hua vo batati hai)

Jaise jaise alka aur Ritu uski baat sun rahe the vo hairan ho rahi thi aur rone lagi

Ritu : didi hamare bhai ne maa ki vajah se kitna kuch saha vo aurat ne jab hume hi dur kar diya vo maa nahi ho sakti mai chodungi nahi us aurat ko

Alka samajdaar thi vo sab janti thi uski maa kaise hai lekin ab usko raj ki yaha tak ki life ke baare mai janna tha
Uske aau bej rahe the lekin usne chup chap aasu saaf kiya aur boli

Alka : Tanya hamare bhai ne itna kuch saha fir toa vo pura akela hoga na aur ghar chod ke aane ke baad uske pass tumhare alava koi nahi hoga na

Tanya : nahi didi usko yaha uske apne mil gaye

Ritu : apne kon ? Vo toa sab udaypur the na

Tanya : todha muskurate hue bolti hai mai garima aur mahima didi ki baat kar rahi hu

Jaise hi Ritu aur alka ne ye suna dono ek saath ...kyaaaaa....vo dono raj ke saath rahti hai par vo dono yaha kaise aayi ?

Ritu rone lagi
Bura toa alka ko bhi laga tha jiska kaaran tha Prem !!

Tanya : didi aap roo kyu Rahi ho

RItu : rou nahi toa kya karu sayad raj hume behen nahi manta vo hamari maa ki saza hume de raha hai
usko joohi garima mahima ki chinta hai lekin hamari nahi in bite salo mai usne toa har pal unke saath gujara hai hume toa bhul gaya hoga

Varna Aaj vo hamare saath hamare yaha rah raha hota Naa ki mahima garima ke yaha

Alka (smiles) uske face pe dukh toa tha lekin vo boli haa sayad maa ki saza hume hi jhelni padegi lekin vo mera bhai hai aur uska pyar paane ke liye mai kisi bhi had tak Jaa sakti hu

Tanya (smiles back) : nahi aap dono galat samaj Rahi ho
(Fir vo raj ka train se leke kal wale kand tak pura flash back suna deti hai)

Jaise Tanya ne sunaya aur jaise un dono bheno ne Suna raj k 100 crore ka bangla looks gadiya jo unhone kal deka usko yaad kiya ki kudh Central minister uske liye aaya vo samaj gayi thi ki kuch toa chakkar hai is sab mai

Ritu toa todhi mazakiya thi
Lekin alka bohat serious shant nature ki thi maano uski intelligence abhi bhi Raj se bhi jyda ho upar se police vibhag mai IGP

Vo jaan gayi thi raj jaisa dikhta hai vaisa nahi hai agar usne itne kam vakt mai itna kuch kiya hai toa iske piche kuch gehra raaj hai
Usne is baat ko baad ke liye chod diya tha

Ritu : didi aapne suna apna bhai kya ban gaya hai aur bechari mahima aur garima unko bhi hamari tarah dur kiya hume pata bhi nahi tha

Alka : haa choti koi baat nahi dekhna raj hume maaf bhi karega aur hamare saath phele jaisa natkhat ho jaaega

Mahol todha khushnuma ho gaya tha

Isi sab ke bich jo behos hone ka natak karke sab sun rahi thi apni tarini
Jab usne suna bichare raj ne life mai kya kya saha hai kitna dutkaar thokar khayi hai us samay uske aakho se jhalar jhalar aansu nikal rah the

Tarini : hai bagwan ye kaisa paap karva diya tumne mujhse mai ek bichare masoom ke saath itna bura kar diya
Usko ye sunke raj ke chere mai uski maa ka face nazar aa raha tha jo usko dutkaar rahi thi

Vo rote hue chikh padi uski cheekh sunke baaki tino ka dhyan uspe gaya jo usko lanat bhari nazaro se dek rahi thi

Tarini ne face niche Kara aur usne uske saath bethi alka ke pair pakad liye

Tarini : didi please mujhe maaf kar dijiye didi maine us bichare ke saath bohat galat kiya didi maine hi phele use gamand dikhaya fir gali di thi maaf kardo didi mujhe

Alka janti thi tarini apni maa ki vajah se pareshan thi aur galtiya aksar insaan se hi hoti hai jab uski maa galti kar sakti hai toa tarini toa fir bhi abhi choti hai

Uske baad tarini ne haath jod ke binti bhari nazro se Tanya aur Ritu ko dekha
Dono ne muh pher liya

Tarini khub sisakne lagi
Kahi dobara na behosh ho jaae isiliye alka boli

Alka : tune galti hai tarini lekin agar tujhe raj ne maaf kar diya toa hum bhi kar denge filhaal aaj se kuch din tu raj ke yaha hi rukegi ye uska hukum hai

Phele toa jaise hi tarini ne ye suna vo ek dum khush ho gayi fir jab uske ye suna vo raj ke yaha rukegi usko samaj nahi aaya !!?

Tarini : par ghar pe mere chote bhai bhen hai didi

RItu : uska naam raj hai vo teri tarah nahi hai jo aise galat kare usne unko apne villa pe bula liya hoga sayad inspector aane wala hoga unko leke

Tarini ne ye suna uski jaan mai Jaan aayi uska chera niche hi jhuka tha

( Idhar Tanya ne bhi apne ghar phone karke sab kuch bata diya tha yaha kya kya hua kaise hua aur aane ka bol diya
Phele toa Tina bohat naraz Hui aur raj ka ye roop jaan ke bohat khush bhi hui ki usne apni beti ke liye sacha mard chuna uska proud tha apne hone wale bete (damad) pe vo jaan gayi thi uska damad uski beti ko khush rakhega )

Uske baad kuch der mai ye log gate Tak pahuche hi the ki vaha inko subah wali sando dale raj dikha
(Sando isiliye pehni thi kyuki shirt tarini ke pass thi)
Raj is vakt kittu bittu se gappe lagane mai mashgool tha aur vo in sabka bhi intezaar kar raha tha ki sab saath mai andar jaaye !!

Jab tarini ki nigah raj pe gayi toa raj mai usko ek bacche ki chavi dikhayi de Rahi thi uske andar himmat nahi thi ki raj ki aakho mai aakh daal ke dekh sake
Vo bohat kamzor feel kar rahi thi

Tanya ki bhi vahi haalat thi halki use maafi mil gayi thi lekin fir bhi vo himmat nahi kar paa rahi thi raj se maafi maange

Kittu bittu ne Tanya ko namaskar kiya aur baaki sab ko bhi

Lekin raj ka dhayan sirf apni dono didiyo ke upar tha

6 feet ke kase badan wali 24-36-34 Ritu kisi apsara se kam nahi thi vo ek hoor lag rahi thi upar se ye abhi vo apni vardi mai nahi thi agar hoti toa gajab lagti

6"2 feet ke kase badan wali 25-34-36 ke size wali alka toa maano Ritu se bhi jyda akarshak jo ek hi nazar mai kisi ko bhi ghayal karde

Raj ne turant daud lagai aur kudh gaya alka ke upar aur jhalar jhalar aasu bahane laga tha

Kittu bittu bohat hairaan the vo alka ko baharwali hi samaj rahe the

Raj ke aasu ruk hi nahi rahe the vo bas alka se chipka tha jaise baccha apni maa se chipak jaata hai dudh pine

Turant raj alka ko chod ke Ritu ke upar kudh laga di aur ab Ritu rone lagi aur boli

Ritu : kya tujhe itne saalo mai hamari yaad nahi satai bhaiya

Raj : mujhe maaf kardo didi mai majboor tha lekin ab mujhe meri didi mil gayi hai mai tum dono ko kahi nahi jaane dunga ab

Raj ne tanya aur tarini ko filhaal ignore Kiya

AB dekhte hai kal ki aage kya baat hoti hai tab tak bye bye dosto!!

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UPDATE : 35
PLACE : MUMBAI​

Mahol ek dum shant tha abhi itna bada hungama jo hua tha
Sabhi taraf Shanti thi
DGP Jaa chuke tha vaha se
Sabhi Ghayalo ko hospital pahucha diya gaya tha

Tarini,Tanya,alka,Ritu charo police ki jeep mai bethi thi
Tarini ko hosh nahi aaya tha vahi Tanya ek dum chup thi
Kaafi gehri santi thi mahol mai
Kuch der baad
Is Shanti ko bhang kiya apni IGP alka ne

Alka : Tanya mere kuch sawaal hai I hope tum unka jabab dogi

Tanya : ji mam puchiye

Alka : "didi" bhi bula sakti ho

Tanya : ji didi ( Tanya is vakt todhi sehmi hui thi jisko Ritu ne acche se bhaamp liya tha)

Alka : toa tum raj ki mangetar ho right?

Tanya : ji didi hum dono ki abhi sagai nahi hui hai par mummy papa ko raj pasand hai

Ritu : oee how tu toa hamari bhabhi hai yaani Tanya (usne mahol ko halka banane ke liye kaha)

Tanya : ji didi

Ritu (smiles) : gadi side mai laga

Tanya ne gadi side mai lagai

Ritu : oee ji didi ki bacchi aaja mere gale lag jaa tu toa meri bhabhi hai ab yaani mera chutku itna bada ho gaya ki shadi karega ab oee hoee

Alka bohat dhayan se Tanya ko dek rahi thi

Tanya : alka didi kya aapko mai pasand nahi aayi

Alka ne use pass bulaya apne gale se chipka liya

Alka : befkoof tujhe mere bhai ne pasand kiya hai tu acchi hi nahi bohat acchi hogi

Ritu and alka dono ye janti thi aaj ke haadse mai bichari Tanya ki koi bhi galti nahi hai

Fir sab log ghadi mai Beth gaye aur Tanya ne car start kardi

Alka : haa toa Tanya mujhe kuch baate acche se janni hai kya apni didi ko sach sach bataogi

Tanya : bilkul didi puchiye mai bilkul sach sach bataungi aapko

Alka : ye raj Mumbai mai kya kar raha hai aur ye uske business partner aur tum ye sab kya chakkar hai
Vo jab Mumbai aa gaya hai humse mila kyu nahi aakhir

Abhi tarini ko hosh aa chuka tha lekin usko in logo ki baate janne mai interest tha vo chahti thi raj ke baare mai janna abhi bhi usko raj ki shirt se uske badan ki mahak aa rahi thi !!

Ritu bhi ab chup chap thi vo bhi sab Janna chahti thi apne bhai ki life ke baare mai

Tanya : didi mai aapko sab samjhati hu

(Tanya jo jo udaypur se leke uski train mai mulakat tak hua vo batati hai)

Jaise jaise alka aur Ritu uski baat sun rahe the vo hairan ho rahi thi aur rone lagi

Ritu : didi hamare bhai ne maa ki vajah se kitna kuch saha vo aurat ne jab hume hi dur kar diya vo maa nahi ho sakti mai chodungi nahi us aurat ko

Alka samajdaar thi vo sab janti thi uski maa kaise hai lekin ab usko raj ki yaha tak ki life ke baare mai janna tha
Uske aau bej rahe the lekin usne chup chap aasu saaf kiya aur boli

Alka : Tanya hamare bhai ne itna kuch saha fir toa vo pura akela hoga na aur ghar chod ke aane ke baad uske pass tumhare alava koi nahi hoga na

Tanya : nahi didi usko yaha uske apne mil gaye

Ritu : apne kon ? Vo toa sab udaypur the na

Tanya : todha muskurate hue bolti hai mai garima aur mahima didi ki baat kar rahi hu

Jaise hi Ritu aur alka ne ye suna dono ek saath ...kyaaaaa....vo dono raj ke saath rahti hai par vo dono yaha kaise aayi ?

Ritu rone lagi
Bura toa alka ko bhi laga tha jiska kaaran tha Prem !!

Tanya : didi aap roo kyu Rahi ho

RItu : rou nahi toa kya karu sayad raj hume behen nahi manta vo hamari maa ki saza hume de raha hai
usko joohi garima mahima ki chinta hai lekin hamari nahi in bite salo mai usne toa har pal unke saath gujara hai hume toa bhul gaya hoga

Varna Aaj vo hamare saath hamare yaha rah raha hota Naa ki mahima garima ke yaha

Alka (smiles) uske face pe dukh toa tha lekin vo boli haa sayad maa ki saza hume hi jhelni padegi lekin vo mera bhai hai aur uska pyar paane ke liye mai kisi bhi had tak Jaa sakti hu

Tanya (smiles back) : nahi aap dono galat samaj Rahi ho
(Fir vo raj ka train se leke kal wale kand tak pura flash back suna deti hai)

Jaise Tanya ne sunaya aur jaise un dono bheno ne Suna raj k 100 crore ka bangla looks gadiya jo unhone kal deka usko yaad kiya ki kudh Central minister uske liye aaya vo samaj gayi thi ki kuch toa chakkar hai is sab mai

Ritu toa todhi mazakiya thi
Lekin alka bohat serious shant nature ki thi maano uski intelligence abhi bhi Raj se bhi jyda ho upar se police vibhag mai IGP

Vo jaan gayi thi raj jaisa dikhta hai vaisa nahi hai agar usne itne kam vakt mai itna kuch kiya hai toa iske piche kuch gehra raaj hai
Usne is baat ko baad ke liye chod diya tha

Ritu : didi aapne suna apna bhai kya ban gaya hai aur bechari mahima aur garima unko bhi hamari tarah dur kiya hume pata bhi nahi tha

Alka : haa choti koi baat nahi dekhna raj hume maaf bhi karega aur hamare saath phele jaisa natkhat ho jaaega

Mahol todha khushnuma ho gaya tha

Isi sab ke bich jo behos hone ka natak karke sab sun rahi thi apni tarini
Jab usne suna bichare raj ne life mai kya kya saha hai kitna dutkaar thokar khayi hai us samay uske aakho se jhalar jhalar aansu nikal rah the

Tarini : hai bagwan ye kaisa paap karva diya tumne mujhse mai ek bichare masoom ke saath itna bura kar diya
Usko ye sunke raj ke chere mai uski maa ka face nazar aa raha tha jo usko dutkaar rahi thi

Vo rote hue chikh padi uski cheekh sunke baaki tino ka dhyan uspe gaya jo usko lanat bhari nazaro se dek rahi thi

Tarini ne face niche Kara aur usne uske saath bethi alka ke pair pakad liye

Tarini : didi please mujhe maaf kar dijiye didi maine us bichare ke saath bohat galat kiya didi maine hi phele use gamand dikhaya fir gali di thi maaf kardo didi mujhe

Alka janti thi tarini apni maa ki vajah se pareshan thi aur galtiya aksar insaan se hi hoti hai jab uski maa galti kar sakti hai toa tarini toa fir bhi abhi choti hai

Uske baad tarini ne haath jod ke binti bhari nazro se Tanya aur Ritu ko dekha
Dono ne muh pher liya

Tarini khub sisakne lagi
Kahi dobara na behosh ho jaae isiliye alka boli

Alka : tune galti hai tarini lekin agar tujhe raj ne maaf kar diya toa hum bhi kar denge filhaal aaj se kuch din tu raj ke yaha hi rukegi ye uska hukum hai

Phele toa jaise hi tarini ne ye suna vo ek dum khush ho gayi fir jab uske ye suna vo raj ke yaha rukegi usko samaj nahi aaya !!?

Tarini : par ghar pe mere chote bhai bhen hai didi

RItu : uska naam raj hai vo teri tarah nahi hai jo aise galat kare usne unko apne villa pe bula liya hoga sayad inspector aane wala hoga unko leke

Tarini ne ye suna uski jaan mai Jaan aayi uska chera niche hi jhuka tha

( Idhar Tanya ne bhi apne ghar phone karke sab kuch bata diya tha yaha kya kya hua kaise hua aur aane ka bol diya
Phele toa Tina bohat naraz Hui aur raj ka ye roop jaan ke bohat khush bhi hui ki usne apni beti ke liye sacha mard chuna uska proud tha apne hone wale bete (damad) pe vo jaan gayi thi uska damad uski beti ko khush rakhega )

Uske baad kuch der mai ye log gate Tak pahuche hi the ki vaha inko subah wali sando dale raj dikha
(Sando isiliye pehni thi kyuki shirt tarini ke pass thi)
Raj is vakt kittu bittu se gappe lagane mai mashgool tha aur vo in sabka bhi intezaar kar raha tha ki sab saath mai andar jaaye !!

Jab tarini ki nigah raj pe gayi toa raj mai usko ek bacche ki chavi dikhayi de Rahi thi uske andar himmat nahi thi ki raj ki aakho mai aakh daal ke dekh sake
Vo bohat kamzor feel kar rahi thi

Tanya ki bhi vahi haalat thi halki use maafi mil gayi thi lekin fir bhi vo himmat nahi kar paa rahi thi raj se maafi maange

Kittu bittu ne Tanya ko namaskar kiya aur baaki sab ko bhi

Lekin raj ka dhayan sirf apni dono didiyo ke upar tha

6 feet ke kase badan wali 24-36-34 Ritu kisi apsara se kam nahi thi vo ek hoor lag rahi thi upar se ye abhi vo apni vardi mai nahi thi agar hoti toa gajab lagti

6"2 feet ke kase badan wali 25-34-36 ke size wali alka toa maano Ritu se bhi jyda akarshak jo ek hi nazar mai kisi ko bhi ghayal karde

Raj ne turant daud lagai aur kudh gaya alka ke upar aur jhalar jhalar aasu bahane laga tha

Kittu bittu bohat hairaan the vo alka ko baharwali hi samaj rahe the

Raj ke aasu ruk hi nahi rahe the vo bas alka se chipka tha jaise baccha apni maa se chipak jaata hai dudh pine

Turant raj alka ko chod ke Ritu ke upar kudh laga di aur ab Ritu rone lagi aur boli

Ritu : kya tujhe itne saalo mai hamari yaad nahi satai bhaiya

Raj : mujhe maaf kardo didi mai majboor tha lekin ab mujhe meri didi mil gayi hai mai tum dono ko kahi nahi jaane dunga ab

Raj ne tanya aur tarini ko filhaal ignore Kiya

AB dekhte hai kal ki aage kya baat hoti hai tab tak bye bye dosto!!

Nice update
Next update jaldi dijiye ga yaar

 

[Shahrukh]

Nice and fantastic update bhai keep posting

 

[ali shah bir]

UPDATE : 35
PLACE : MUMBAI​

Mahol ek dum shant tha abhi itna bada hungama jo hua tha
Sabhi taraf Shanti thi
DGP Jaa chuke tha vaha se
Sabhi Ghayalo ko hospital pahucha diya gaya tha

Tarini,Tanya,alka,Ritu charo police ki jeep mai bethi thi
Tarini ko hosh nahi aaya tha vahi Tanya ek dum chup thi
Kaafi gehri santi thi mahol mai
Kuch der baad
Is Shanti ko bhang kiya apni IGP alka ne

Alka : Tanya mere kuch sawaal hai I hope tum unka jabab dogi

Tanya : ji mam puchiye

Alka : "didi" bhi bula sakti ho

Tanya : ji didi ( Tanya is vakt todhi sehmi hui thi jisko Ritu ne acche se bhaamp liya tha)

Alka : toa tum raj ki mangetar ho right?

Tanya : ji didi hum dono ki abhi sagai nahi hui hai par mummy papa ko raj pasand hai

Ritu : oee how tu toa hamari bhabhi hai yaani Tanya (usne mahol ko halka banane ke liye kaha)

Tanya : ji didi

Ritu (smiles) : gadi side mai laga

Tanya ne gadi side mai lagai

Ritu : oee ji didi ki bacchi aaja mere gale lag jaa tu toa meri bhabhi hai ab yaani mera chutku itna bada ho gaya ki shadi karega ab oee hoee

Alka bohat dhayan se Tanya ko dek rahi thi

Tanya : alka didi kya aapko mai pasand nahi aayi

Alka ne use pass bulaya apne gale se chipka liya

Alka : befkoof tujhe mere bhai ne pasand kiya hai tu acchi hi nahi bohat acchi hogi

Ritu and alka dono ye janti thi aaj ke haadse mai bichari Tanya ki koi bhi galti nahi hai

Fir sab log ghadi mai Beth gaye aur Tanya ne car start kardi

Alka : haa toa Tanya mujhe kuch baate acche se janni hai kya apni didi ko sach sach bataogi

Tanya : bilkul didi puchiye mai bilkul sach sach bataungi aapko

Alka : ye raj Mumbai mai kya kar raha hai aur ye uske business partner aur tum ye sab kya chakkar hai
Vo jab Mumbai aa gaya hai humse mila kyu nahi aakhir

Abhi tarini ko hosh aa chuka tha lekin usko in logo ki baate janne mai interest tha vo chahti thi raj ke baare mai janna abhi bhi usko raj ki shirt se uske badan ki mahak aa rahi thi !!

Ritu bhi ab chup chap thi vo bhi sab Janna chahti thi apne bhai ki life ke baare mai

Tanya : didi mai aapko sab samjhati hu

(Tanya jo jo udaypur se leke uski train mai mulakat tak hua vo batati hai)

Jaise jaise alka aur Ritu uski baat sun rahe the vo hairan ho rahi thi aur rone lagi

Ritu : didi hamare bhai ne maa ki vajah se kitna kuch saha vo aurat ne jab hume hi dur kar diya vo maa nahi ho sakti mai chodungi nahi us aurat ko

Alka samajdaar thi vo sab janti thi uski maa kaise hai lekin ab usko raj ki yaha tak ki life ke baare mai janna tha
Uske aau bej rahe the lekin usne chup chap aasu saaf kiya aur boli

Alka : Tanya hamare bhai ne itna kuch saha fir toa vo pura akela hoga na aur ghar chod ke aane ke baad uske pass tumhare alava koi nahi hoga na

Tanya : nahi didi usko yaha uske apne mil gaye

Ritu : apne kon ? Vo toa sab udaypur the na

Tanya : todha muskurate hue bolti hai mai garima aur mahima didi ki baat kar rahi hu

Jaise hi Ritu aur alka ne ye suna dono ek saath ...kyaaaaa....vo dono raj ke saath rahti hai par vo dono yaha kaise aayi ?

Ritu rone lagi
Bura toa alka ko bhi laga tha jiska kaaran tha Prem !!

Tanya : didi aap roo kyu Rahi ho

RItu : rou nahi toa kya karu sayad raj hume behen nahi manta vo hamari maa ki saza hume de raha hai
usko joohi garima mahima ki chinta hai lekin hamari nahi in bite salo mai usne toa har pal unke saath gujara hai hume toa bhul gaya hoga

Varna Aaj vo hamare saath hamare yaha rah raha hota Naa ki mahima garima ke yaha

Alka (smiles) uske face pe dukh toa tha lekin vo boli haa sayad maa ki saza hume hi jhelni padegi lekin vo mera bhai hai aur uska pyar paane ke liye mai kisi bhi had tak Jaa sakti hu

Tanya (smiles back) : nahi aap dono galat samaj Rahi ho
(Fir vo raj ka train se leke kal wale kand tak pura flash back suna deti hai)

Jaise Tanya ne sunaya aur jaise un dono bheno ne Suna raj k 100 crore ka bangla looks gadiya jo unhone kal deka usko yaad kiya ki kudh Central minister uske liye aaya vo samaj gayi thi ki kuch toa chakkar hai is sab mai

Ritu toa todhi mazakiya thi
Lekin alka bohat serious shant nature ki thi maano uski intelligence abhi bhi Raj se bhi jyda ho upar se police vibhag mai IGP

Vo jaan gayi thi raj jaisa dikhta hai vaisa nahi hai agar usne itne kam vakt mai itna kuch kiya hai toa iske piche kuch gehra raaj hai
Usne is baat ko baad ke liye chod diya tha

Ritu : didi aapne suna apna bhai kya ban gaya hai aur bechari mahima aur garima unko bhi hamari tarah dur kiya hume pata bhi nahi tha

Alka : haa choti koi baat nahi dekhna raj hume maaf bhi karega aur hamare saath phele jaisa natkhat ho jaaega

Mahol todha khushnuma ho gaya tha

Isi sab ke bich jo behos hone ka natak karke sab sun rahi thi apni tarini
Jab usne suna bichare raj ne life mai kya kya saha hai kitna dutkaar thokar khayi hai us samay uske aakho se jhalar jhalar aansu nikal rah the

Tarini : hai bagwan ye kaisa paap karva diya tumne mujhse mai ek bichare masoom ke saath itna bura kar diya
Usko ye sunke raj ke chere mai uski maa ka face nazar aa raha tha jo usko dutkaar rahi thi

Vo rote hue chikh padi uski cheekh sunke baaki tino ka dhyan uspe gaya jo usko lanat bhari nazaro se dek rahi thi

Tarini ne face niche Kara aur usne uske saath bethi alka ke pair pakad liye

Tarini : didi please mujhe maaf kar dijiye didi maine us bichare ke saath bohat galat kiya didi maine hi phele use gamand dikhaya fir gali di thi maaf kardo didi mujhe

Alka janti thi tarini apni maa ki vajah se pareshan thi aur galtiya aksar insaan se hi hoti hai jab uski maa galti kar sakti hai toa tarini toa fir bhi abhi choti hai

Uske baad tarini ne haath jod ke binti bhari nazro se Tanya aur Ritu ko dekha
Dono ne muh pher liya

Tarini khub sisakne lagi
Kahi dobara na behosh ho jaae isiliye alka boli

Alka : tune galti hai tarini lekin agar tujhe raj ne maaf kar diya toa hum bhi kar denge filhaal aaj se kuch din tu raj ke yaha hi rukegi ye uska hukum hai

Phele toa jaise hi tarini ne ye suna vo ek dum khush ho gayi fir jab uske ye suna vo raj ke yaha rukegi usko samaj nahi aaya !!?

Tarini : par ghar pe mere chote bhai bhen hai didi

RItu : uska naam raj hai vo teri tarah nahi hai jo aise galat kare usne unko apne villa pe bula liya hoga sayad inspector aane wala hoga unko leke

Tarini ne ye suna uski jaan mai Jaan aayi uska chera niche hi jhuka tha

( Idhar Tanya ne bhi apne ghar phone karke sab kuch bata diya tha yaha kya kya hua kaise hua aur aane ka bol diya
Phele toa Tina bohat naraz Hui aur raj ka ye roop jaan ke bohat khush bhi hui ki usne apni beti ke liye sacha mard chuna uska proud tha apne hone wale bete (damad) pe vo jaan gayi thi uska damad uski beti ko khush rakhega )

Uske baad kuch der mai ye log gate Tak pahuche hi the ki vaha inko subah wali sando dale raj dikha
(Sando isiliye pehni thi kyuki shirt tarini ke pass thi)
Raj is vakt kittu bittu se gappe lagane mai mashgool tha aur vo in sabka bhi intezaar kar raha tha ki sab saath mai andar jaaye !!

Jab tarini ki nigah raj pe gayi toa raj mai usko ek bacche ki chavi dikhayi de Rahi thi uske andar himmat nahi thi ki raj ki aakho mai aakh daal ke dekh sake
Vo bohat kamzor feel kar rahi thi

Tanya ki bhi vahi haalat thi halki use maafi mil gayi thi lekin fir bhi vo himmat nahi kar paa rahi thi raj se maafi maange

Kittu bittu ne Tanya ko namaskar kiya aur baaki sab ko bhi

Lekin raj ka dhayan sirf apni dono didiyo ke upar tha

6 feet ke kase badan wali 24-36-34 Ritu kisi apsara se kam nahi thi vo ek hoor lag rahi thi upar se ye abhi vo apni vardi mai nahi thi agar hoti toa gajab lagti

6"2 feet ke kase badan wali 25-34-36 ke size wali alka toa maano Ritu se bhi jyda akarshak jo ek hi nazar mai kisi ko bhi ghayal karde

Raj ne turant daud lagai aur kudh gaya alka ke upar aur jhalar jhalar aasu bahane laga tha

Kittu bittu bohat hairaan the vo alka ko baharwali hi samaj rahe the

Raj ke aasu ruk hi nahi rahe the vo bas alka se chipka tha jaise baccha apni maa se chipak jaata hai dudh pine

Turant raj alka ko chod ke Ritu ke upar kudh laga di aur ab Ritu rone lagi aur boli

Ritu : kya tujhe itne saalo mai hamari yaad nahi satai bhaiya

Raj : mujhe maaf kardo didi mai majboor tha lekin ab mujhe meri didi mil gayi hai mai tum dono ko kahi nahi jaane dunga ab

Raj ne tanya aur tarini ko filhaal ignore Kiya

AB dekhte hai kal ki aage kya baat hoti hai tab tak bye bye dosto!!

Nice update bro