Fantasy MAHAGATHA : EK PRACHAND YODHA
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very good update. family mein addition pe addition ho raha hai.
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Badhiya zabardast shaandar updateUPDATE : 35
PLACE : MUMBAI
Mahol ek dum shant tha abhi itna bada hungama jo hua tha
Sabhi taraf Shanti thi
DGP Jaa chuke tha vaha se
Sabhi Ghayalo ko hospital pahucha diya gaya tha
Tarini,Tanya,alka,Ritu charo police ki jeep mai bethi thi
Tarini ko hosh nahi aaya tha vahi Tanya ek dum chup thi
Kaafi gehri santi thi mahol mai
Kuch der baad
Is Shanti ko bhang kiya apni IGP alka ne
Alka : Tanya mere kuch sawaal hai I hope tum unka jabab dogi
Tanya : ji mam puchiye
Alka : "didi" bhi bula sakti ho
Tanya : ji didi ( Tanya is vakt todhi sehmi hui thi jisko Ritu ne acche se bhaamp liya tha)
Alka : toa tum raj ki mangetar ho right?
Tanya : ji didi hum dono ki abhi sagai nahi hui hai par mummy papa ko raj pasand hai
Ritu : oee how tu toa hamari bhabhi hai yaani Tanya (usne mahol ko halka banane ke liye kaha)
Tanya : ji didi
Ritu (smiles) : gadi side mai laga
Tanya ne gadi side mai lagai
Ritu : oee ji didi ki bacchiaaja mere gale lag jaa tu toa meri bhabhi hai ab yaani mera chutku itna bada ho gaya ki shadi karega ab oee hoee
Alka bohat dhayan se Tanya ko dek rahi thi
Tanya : alka didi kya aapko mai pasand nahi aayi
Alka ne use pass bulaya apne gale se chipka liya
Alka : befkoof tujhe mere bhai ne pasand kiya hai tu acchi hi nahi bohat acchi hogi
Ritu and alka dono ye janti thi aaj ke haadse mai bichari Tanya ki koi bhi galti nahi hai
Fir sab log ghadi mai Beth gaye aur Tanya ne car start kardi
Alka : haa toa Tanya mujhe kuch baate acche se janni hai kya apni didi ko sach sach bataogi
Tanya : bilkul didi puchiye mai bilkul sach sach bataungi aapko
Alka : ye raj Mumbai mai kya kar raha hai aur ye uske business partner aur tum ye sab kya chakkar hai
Vo jab Mumbai aa gaya hai humse mila kyu nahi aakhir
Abhi tarini ko hosh aa chuka tha lekin usko in logo ki baate janne mai interest tha vo chahti thi raj ke baare mai janna abhi bhi usko raj ki shirt se uske badan ki mahak aa rahi thi !!
Ritu bhi ab chup chap thi vo bhi sab Janna chahti thi apne bhai ki life ke baare mai
Tanya : didi mai aapko sab samjhati hu
(Tanya jo jo udaypur se leke uski train mai mulakat tak hua vo batati hai)
Jaise jaise alka aur Ritu uski baat sun rahe the vo hairan ho rahi thi aur rone lagi
Ritu : didi hamare bhai ne maa ki vajah se kitna kuch saha vo aurat ne jab hume hi dur kar diya vo maa nahi ho sakti mai chodungi nahi us aurat ko
Alka samajdaar thi vo sab janti thi uski maa kaise hai lekin ab usko raj ki yaha tak ki life ke baare mai janna tha
Uske aau bej rahe the lekin usne chup chap aasu saaf kiya aur boli
Alka : Tanya hamare bhai ne itna kuch saha fir toa vo pura akela hoga na aur ghar chod ke aane ke baad uske pass tumhare alava koi nahi hoga na
Tanya : nahi didi usko yaha uske apne mil gaye
Ritu : apne kon ? Vo toa sab udaypur the na
Tanya : todha muskurate hue bolti hai mai garima aur mahima didi ki baat kar rahi hu
Jaise hi Ritu aur alka ne ye suna dono ek saath ...kyaaaaa....vo dono raj ke saath rahti hai par vo dono yaha kaise aayi ?
Ritu rone lagi
Bura toa alka ko bhi laga tha jiska kaaran tha Prem !!
Tanya : didi aap roo kyu Rahi ho
RItu : rou nahi toa kya karu sayad raj hume behen nahi manta vo hamari maa ki saza hume de raha hai
usko joohi garima mahima ki chinta hai lekin hamari nahi in bite salo mai usne toa har pal unke saath gujara hai hume toa bhul gaya hoga
Varna Aaj vo hamare saath hamare yaha rah raha hota Naa ki mahima garima ke yaha
Alka (smiles) uske face pe dukh toa tha lekin vo boli haa sayad maa ki saza hume hi jhelni padegi lekin vo mera bhai hai aur uska pyar paane ke liye mai kisi bhi had tak Jaa sakti hu
Tanya (smiles back) : nahi aap dono galat samaj Rahi ho
(Fir vo raj ka train se leke kal wale kand tak pura flash back suna deti hai)
Jaise Tanya ne sunaya aur jaise un dono bheno ne Suna raj k 100 crore ka bangla looks gadiya jo unhone kal deka usko yaad kiya ki kudh Central minister uske liye aaya vo samaj gayi thi ki kuch toa chakkar hai is sab mai
Ritu toa todhi mazakiya thi
Lekin alka bohat serious shant nature ki thi maano uski intelligence abhi bhi Raj se bhi jyda ho upar se police vibhag mai IGP
Vo jaan gayi thi raj jaisa dikhta hai vaisa nahi hai agar usne itne kam vakt mai itna kuch kiya hai toa iske piche kuch gehra raaj hai
Usne is baat ko baad ke liye chod diya tha
Ritu : didi aapne suna apna bhai kya ban gaya hai aur bechari mahima aur garima unko bhi hamari tarah dur kiya hume pata bhi nahi tha
Alka : haa choti koi baat nahi dekhna raj hume maaf bhi karega aur hamare saath phele jaisa natkhat ho jaaega
Mahol todha khushnuma ho gaya tha
Isi sab ke bich jo behos hone ka natak karke sab sun rahi thi apni tarini
Jab usne suna bichare raj ne life mai kya kya saha hai kitna dutkaar thokar khayi hai us samay uske aakho se jhalar jhalar aansu nikal rah the
Tarini : hai bagwan ye kaisa paap karva diya tumne mujhse mai ek bichare masoom ke saath itna bura kar diya
Usko ye sunke raj ke chere mai uski maa ka face nazar aa raha tha jo usko dutkaar rahi thi
Vo rote hue chikh padi uski cheekh sunke baaki tino ka dhyan uspe gaya jo usko lanat bhari nazaro se dek rahi thi
Tarini ne face niche Kara aur usne uske saath bethi alka ke pair pakad liye
Tarini : didi please mujhe maaf kar dijiye didi maine us bichare ke saath bohat galat kiya didi maine hi phele use gamand dikhaya fir gali di thi maaf kardo didi mujhe
Alka janti thi tarini apni maa ki vajah se pareshan thi aur galtiya aksar insaan se hi hoti hai jab uski maa galti kar sakti hai toa tarini toa fir bhi abhi choti hai
Uske baad tarini ne haath jod ke binti bhari nazro se Tanya aur Ritu ko dekha
Dono ne muh pher liya
Tarini khub sisakne lagi
Kahi dobara na behosh ho jaae isiliye alka boli
Alka : tune galti hai tarini lekin agar tujhe raj ne maaf kar diya toa hum bhi kar denge filhaal aaj se kuch din tu raj ke yaha hi rukegi ye uska hukum hai
Phele toa jaise hi tarini ne ye suna vo ek dum khush ho gayi fir jab uske ye suna vo raj ke yaha rukegi usko samaj nahi aaya !!?
Tarini : par ghar pe mere chote bhai bhen hai didi
RItu : uska naam raj hai vo teri tarah nahi hai jo aise galat kare usne unko apne villa pe bula liya hoga sayad inspector aane wala hoga unko leke
Tarini ne ye suna uski jaan mai Jaan aayi uska chera niche hi jhuka tha
( Idhar Tanya ne bhi apne ghar phone karke sab kuch bata diya tha yaha kya kya hua kaise hua aur aane ka bol diya
Phele toa Tina bohat naraz Hui aur raj ka ye roop jaan ke bohat khush bhi hui ki usne apni beti ke liye sacha mard chuna uska proud tha apne hone wale bete (damad) pe vo jaan gayi thi uska damad uski beti ko khush rakhega )
Uske baad kuch der mai ye log gate Tak pahuche hi the ki vaha inko subah wali sando dale raj dikha
(Sando isiliye pehni thi kyuki shirt tarini ke pass thi)
Raj is vakt kittu bittu se gappe lagane mai mashgool tha aur vo in sabka bhi intezaar kar raha tha ki sab saath mai andar jaaye !!
Jab tarini ki nigah raj pe gayi toa raj mai usko ek bacche ki chavi dikhayi de Rahi thi uske andar himmat nahi thi ki raj ki aakho mai aakh daal ke dekh sake
Vo bohat kamzor feel kar rahi thi
Tanya ki bhi vahi haalat thi halki use maafi mil gayi thi lekin fir bhi vo himmat nahi kar paa rahi thi raj se maafi maange
Kittu bittu ne Tanya ko namaskar kiya aur baaki sab ko bhi
Lekin raj ka dhayan sirf apni dono didiyo ke upar tha
6 feet ke kase badan wali 24-36-34 Ritu kisi apsara se kam nahi thi vo ek hoor lag rahi thi upar se ye abhi vo apni vardi mai nahi thi agar hoti toa gajab lagti
6"2 feet ke kase badan wali 25-34-36 ke size wali alka toa maano Ritu se bhi jyda akarshak jo ek hi nazar mai kisi ko bhi ghayal karde
Raj ne turant daud lagai aur kudh gaya alka ke upar aur jhalar jhalar aasu bahane laga tha
Kittu bittu bohat hairaan the vo alka ko baharwali hi samaj rahe the
Raj ke aasu ruk hi nahi rahe the vo bas alka se chipka tha jaise baccha apni maa se chipak jaata hai dudh pine
Turant raj alka ko chod ke Ritu ke upar kudh laga di aur ab Ritu rone lagi aur boli
Ritu : kya tujhe itne saalo mai hamari yaad nahi satai bhaiya
Raj : mujhe maaf kardo didi mai majboor tha lekin ab mujhe meri didi mil gayi hai mai tum dono ko kahi nahi jaane dunga ab
Raj ne tanya aur tarini ko filhaal ignore Kiya
AB dekhte hai kal ki aage kya baat hoti hai tab tak bye bye dosto!!
Raj ki saari kahani sunke Ritu Alka or tarini ki pata chala ki Raj ke saath kia huwa or dukh huwa hona bhi chahiye
Baherhal Raj ko apni sagi bahen mil gayi
Ab dekhte h Tanya or tarini ka kia hota h Tanya ko tow Raj n maaf ker dia h lekin abhi narajgi poori tarah se nahi gayi h
Dekhte h aage kia hota ha