Fantasy Mahagatha - Sadhna, Sadhak, Shaktiya aur dragons

[Smith_15]

 

[Mk47]

Short n sweet update

 

[Shadow_Chaser]

Dhyanywad update kab tak dene ke irade ha janab ke?

Pehle hi de diya tha

What a wonderful and lovely update.....haye.......waiting for your next update

Thank you so much Yasasvi1 ji
Next update kal ya fir parso

 

[aloneloveis]

Story slow kyu rakha haj bhai thoda fast karo itna slow to ekta Kapoor ka show nahi chalta hai

 

[Shadow_Chaser]

Lovely update

Thanking you Surya_021 bro

Superb update

Thanks Vickyabhi bhai

Nice update bhai....

Thank you Mukul217 bro

Nice update

Thanks Bhupinder Singh bhai

Nice update

Thank you brother krish1152

 

[Shadow_Chaser]

nice apdate ..

Thank you jangjoo bro

manav ke maa bap ko bora banane mai sab sey barha hath aap ka hai un ko log sahi gali dete hai is.

Ha bhai.. gali to khoob mili

kyu ke aap ne un ka cracter aesa pesh kya hai ke wo ache to kahi se nai lag rahe.na aap ne kabhi manav ki call ya koi bat nahi likhi..or wo itne din sey india mai hai koi fikar nai hai un ko maa bete ki.kon sa aesa kam kar rahe hai..

Hmm.. sahi baat kahi aapne
Aage sab kuch clear ho jayega bhaya

ab un ko acha dekhana bolkol sahi nai hoga.thora sabaq milna chaye dono ko take un ko ahsas ho ke wo kya miss kar rahe hai..

Sabaq to milega
Aur sudhaar bhi hoga

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Kaafi ache points rakhe aapne bhaya
Bahut bahut shukriya

 

[Shadow_Chaser]

Nice update dear

Dhanyavaad Lallu bhaya

Short n sweet update

Thank a lot montumass bro
~1.5K length

nice1

Thanks Arvind Sharma bhai

Fantastic update

Thank you so much Rohit1988 bhaya

Impressive story

Thank you very much Hicohico bro

 

[Shadow_Chaser]

Writer seeing comments bro

Obviously. . Of course and why not

opportunity to writer

You - the reader, are writers' opportunities

 

[Shadow_Chaser]

Bahot hi mast update tha bhai

Bahut bahut dhanyavaad rocket league bhaya

aab maza aayega lagta story dhire dhire track pe aa rahi hai next update ka besabari se intezaar rahega

title bilkul justify hoga
Next update : ya to kal .. ya fir friday ko

Desh ki sewa Krna alag baat hai per bete per bhi dhyaan dena chahiye sach mai mujhe manav ke mata pita se bahot nagative feelings aa rahi hai next update mega Update ho jaye to maza aa jayega

Cheeje clear hogi aage brother
Mega update to agle week tak possible nhi h
Appendices taiyar krni h

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Thanks a lot brother

 

[Shadow_Chaser]

As expected manav ke maa baap ka vahi ghatiyapan aur akad

Haa bhai.. itna late jo ho gye

Aur sale chal kese rahe hai hatho mein hath daal ke jese newly married couple

Arey
Loving & caring couple

Haramzaado ko 5 paise ki sharam nahi hai main pehle hi keh raha tha manav ke maa baap foriegn mein gulcharre uda ke aye hai iss update ne mujhe sahi sabit kar diya maa aur bete ki fikar nahi hai bilkul bhi bhadwo ko tabhi to bhenchod ek din se upar ho gya aye hue par apni maa ko ab milne aye hai woh bhi akad mein

Hmm my Arun Rathod11 brother apka gussa krna bilkul banta h
Sudhar jayenge ye haramzade

Azab harami hai dono

dekhte kya hota aage..

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Thanks a lot bhai for ur lovely yet heated revo