Fantasy Mahagatha - Sadhna, Sadhak, Shaktiya aur dragons

[Shadow_Chaser]

Main guarantee ke sath keh sakta hu ki manav ke maa baap ko thoda sa bhi sabak nahi diya jayega

Milega bhai thoda sabak to milega

Infact har story ki tarha sab sale ek ho janyege happy family banke

Ha ye to hoga..

aur manav ke dono ghatiya maa baap ki alad ese hi rehegi likh ke lelo

Dono families bahut kuch sikhenge ek dusre se
Wese Manav ke parents se sikhne layak jyada kuch to h nhi.. to ye donon Saanvi ke parents se bahut kuch sikhenge

 

[Shadow_Chaser]

Shukriya Smith_15 bhau

 

[Shadow_Chaser]

Story slow kyu rakha haj bhai thoda fast karo itna slow to ekta Kapoor ka show nahi chalta hai

aloneloveis bro. . bas itna keh skta hu ki aage new turns & twists aane wale h
Baaki har ek update relevant h aage ki kahani me

 

[Saili]

Update kab de rhe ho bhaiya ji

 

[Suniya]

Update kab aayega bhai

 

[Gloden dragon]

Bhai update jaldi Dena .....itjar rahega update ka

 

[Lust_King]

Yha Tak padh liye updates Bhai .... But I think ye story not for me ... You are good in writing but I don't like it ... No offence...

 

[Castle2126]

As expected manav ke maa baap ka vahi ghatiyapan aur akad
Aur sale chal kese rahe hai hatho mein hath daal ke jese newly married couple

Haramzaado ko 5 paise ki sharam nahi hai main pehle hi keh raha tha manav ke maa baap foriegn mein gulcharre uda ke aye hai iss update ne mujhe sahi sabit kar diya maa aur bete ki fikar nahi hai bilkul bhi bhadwo ko tabhi to bhenchod ek din se upar ho gya aye hue par apni maa ko ab milne aye hai woh bhi akad mein

Azab harami hai dono

What i wanted to say... Just politely

 

[Castle2126]

Main guarantee ke sath keh sakta hu ki manav ke maa baap ko thoda sa bhi sabak nahi diya jayega

Infact har story ki tarha sab sale ek ho janyege happy family banke aur manav ke dono ghatiya maa baap ki alad ese hi rehegi likh ke lelo

Bhai tu Dil se review deta h... Sahi h bhai... Keep up the good work

 

[Arun Rathod11]

Bhai tu Dil se review deta h... Sahi h bhai... Keep up the good work

Thode din hi dikhenge mere comments jaldi hi ban laga denge yeh bolke ki "u r demotivating writers"