Fantasy Maharaja- Ek Ankahi Dastaan

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Characters:-​

Mera pariwaar:
1. Simha:- singh kabile ka sardaar
2. Geeta:- simha ki patni
3. Shakti:- simha ka beta
4. Rukmini:- shakti ki patni
a. Ravi:- rukmani ka pehla beta
b. Veer:- rukmani ka dusra beta
c. Shalini:- rukmani ki beti
d. Rajat:- rukmani ka teesra beta
5. Shaka:- garud kabile ka sardaar/rukmini ke pita
6. Chaya:- shaka ki patni

Others:
1. Gyaani maa:- ek sadhvi
2. Chitwan:- veer ke dost
3. Shyam:- veer ke dost
4. Rupa:- shyam ki badi bahen
5. Rati:- shyam ki badi bahen
6. Dara:- veer ke dost
7. Chelu:- veer ke dost
8. Kamini:- rajkumari
9. Damini:- rajkumari
10. Gurumaa:- kamini aur damini ki kulguru
11. Mamta:- gurumaa ki beti
12. Maya:- kamini ki senapati
13. Rupa:- damini ki senapati

Super Intro

 

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Update 01

Ye wo samay tha jab rajayon ka nahi aadhe se jyada ilaakon par kabilon ka raaj hota tha...

raja bhi huva karte the par tab unki sankhya bahut kum thi ya kahin-kahin to bilkul hi nahi...

chhote-chhote kabilon me ye duniya bati huyi thi...unn kabilon me raja nahi sardaar raj karte the...

aisa hi ek chota kabila tha singh kabila jiski aaj uske padosi kabile se jung hone wali thi...

dono kabilon ke sainik aamne-samne taiyaar khade the jung kabhi bhi ho sakti thi...

wahin ek gufa me ek sadhvi varshon se tapasya kar rahi thi...

uske paas bahut gyaan tha isiliye sab use gyaani maa keh kar bulate the...

uski baat talne ki himmat kissi me bhi nahi thi...abhi bhi wo tapasya me leen thi...

tabhi achanak uski aankhon ke samne kissi ka aksh aa gaya...jise dekhte hi uski aankhen khul gayi...

ye uske liye ek sanket tha ki kuch bahut galat ho raha hai jise use rokna hoga...

wo turant gufa se bahar aayi aur chal padi uss disha me jahan ke sanket use mile the...

wo abhi ja hi rahi thi ki raste me use bhagdad dikhayi di...

jise dekh wo aur bhi jyada baichen ho gayi aur ek aurat ko rok kar poochne lagi...

gyaani maa- kya huva tum sab bhaag kyun rahe ho...

wo aurat gyaani maa ko janti thi to usne aadar se bola...

aurat- gyaani maa singh kabile aur garud kabile ke beech bahut bhayanak yudh hone wala hai...

surya ki pehli kiran ke saath dono kabeele aapas me bhid jayenge...

yahi karan hai ki sab log apni jaan bachakar bhaag rahe hai...

gyaani maa- ye tum kya bol rahi ho mujhe unhe rokna hoga...rokna hi hoga...

ye bolte-bolte wo aage badh gayi aur wo aurat bhi wahan se bhaag gayi...

nahi main aisa nahi hone de sakti...agar aisa huva to chahe jeete koyi bhi haaregi poori duniya...

uske aane me main koyi badha nahi aane doongi...mujhe jaldi wahan pahunchna hoga...

ye bol kar wo jaldi-jaldi aage badhne lagi...wahin dusri taraf dono taraf ke log surya ki pehli kiran ka intzaar kar rahe the...

surya ki pehli kiran jaise hi nikli dono taraf se humla bol diya gaya...

abhi hathiyaar takrane hi wale the ki ek awaaz goongi..."ruk jao ye ladaayi band karo"...

ye awaaz sunte hi dono taraf ke logon ke haath wahin ke wahin ruk gaye aur sab awaaz ki disha me dekhne lage...

Zabardast Update

 

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Update 02

gyaani maa ko dekh kar sabke sab ruk jaate hai aur aadar se unke samne jhuk jaate hai...

gyaani maa- ye sab kya ho raha hai...

tabhi garud kabile ka sardaar jiska naam shaka tha bolta hai...

shaka- gyaani maa aap to antaryaami hai aap to sab janti hai...

gyaani maa- haan janti hoon phir bhi tumse janna chahti hoon...

shaka- gyaani maa aap to janti hai ki hum apne hi kabile me ladkiyon ko bhyate hai...

magar simha ke muh bole bete ne humari beti ko bhagakar wo rasam tod di aur ye log use bacha rahe hai...

shaka ki ye baat sunkar singh kabile ke sardaar simha ne baat aage badhayi...

simha- nahi gyaani maa aisa bilkul bhi nahi hai mere bete ne inki beti ko nahi bhagaya...

balki inke kabile ke ladke ne humari beti ko bhagaya hai...

shaka (gusse se)- ye jhuth bol raha hai gyaani maa...

simha- nahi tum jhuth bol rahe ho...

aise hi dono me phir se jhagda hone laga par iss baar hathiyaar jubaan thi...

unke teer dono ke muh se nikalne wale shabd...jo kissi tarkash ki tarah the...

gyaani maa- band karo ye sab bilkul chhup ho jao...tum dono me se ab koyi kuch nahi bolega...

uske baad gyaani maa do logon ko bula kar unhe un ladka-ladki ko laane ko kehte hai jinki baatein chal rahi thi...

saath hi unke pariwaar walon ko bhi...kuch dair baad sabhi ko wahan laaya jaata hai...

itne waqt me gyaani maa ke baithne ka bhi intzaam kar diya gaya tha...

aaye huve logon ko dekh gyaani maa bolti hai...

gyaani maa- maine dono jodon ko kaha tha laane ko ye to ek hi hai...

ye baat sunte hi wahan ek sannata sa chha jaata hai...koyi bhi kuch nahi bol raha tha...

ye dekh kar iss baar gyaani maa gusse se poochti hai...

gyaani maa- main kuch pooch rahi hoon kahan hai dusra joda...

tab bhi koyi kuch nahi bolta...par ek awaaz se sab chonk jaate hai...

awaaz- gyaani maa wo kahan hai ye hum aapko batate hai...

ab ye awaaz kiski thi aur ye kya batane wale the...

Going Great..... Nice Start.....

 

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Update 08

aise hi waqt ka pahiya ghooma...din kab hafton mein aur hafte kab saal mein badal gaye pata hi nahi chala...

aaj humara hero poora jawan ho chuka tha...jawani tak aate-aate uska poora sharir sakht ho chuka tha...

ek taraf jahaan 5 saal pehle huyi shakti ki mout se uska sabse bada beta ravi gumsum aur gussail ho gaya tha...

wahin humara hero veer aaj bhi mast-moula aur shant mizag ka tha...

ab baat karein rukmini ki ladli shalini ki to wo apne naam ke bilkul vipreet thi...

sabse badi ladaka aur utni hi gusaail...gusse mein to ye apne bade bhai ko bhi peeche chhod deti thi...

aakhir mein baari aati hai rajat ki...rajat humesha santulan me rehne waala tha...

wo hamesha harr niyam ka paalan karta...jabki uske baaki bhai-behan unko todne se gurej nahi karte...

aise hi ek din garmiyon ke mausam me jab veer garmi ke chalte raat ko jaaga to usne dekha...

uski maa safed ghagra-chholi jaise kapde pahne soyi huyi hai...

garmi ki wajah se unhe bhi bahut paseena aa raha tha...jisse safed chholi geeli hokar unki chuchiyon se chipak gayi thi...

tab bra to hoti nahi thi jiske chalte veer ko uski maa ke khade nipples ke darshan ho gaye...

saath hi ye veer ka pehla mouka tha jab wo kissi ki lagbhag nangi chuchiyan itne paas se dekh raha tha...

abhi veer apni maa ko dekh hi raha tha ki achanak uske peeche kissi ke hilne ki aahat huyi...

jisse veer darr gaya aur chup-chap bina kuch kiye so gaya...

uss samay jhonpadi huya karti thi pakke ghar nahi aur sone ke liye naram bail aur patton se bana bistar...

jispe jaanwar ki khaal bhichayi gayi hoti thi...jhonpadi ka aakaar aur usme rakha samaan iska prateek hota tha ki kabile mein unka sthaan kya hai ya wo kya karta hai...

agle din jab veer ghar se bahar gaya to usne dekha ki harr din ki tarah aaj bhi uska bada bhai kushti lad raha tha...

baaki log unke charon taraf khade unka manoranjan kar rahe the...

veer ko jyada kushti ladna pasand nahi tha kyunki wo harr kushti bahut asaani se jeet jaata tha...

magar tab bhi wo apne bhai ki kushti harr din dekh kar hi jaata tha...

 

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Congratulations

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Super Intro

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Zabardast Update

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Update 09

aise hi poora din beet gaya...agle din main kissi ke uthane se utha...

dekha to paaya maa khadi thi aur mujhe gusse se dekh rahi thi...

unhe dekh kar main bhi socch mein pad gaya ki ab kya kiya maine jisse unhe gussa aaya huva hai kyunki main harr din kuch na kuch karta hi rehta tha...

mere taiyaar hone ke baad maa ne mujhe kuch fal khane ko diye...ye mere harr din ki dincharya me shamil the...

aaj kal to logon ke paas chahe paise ho ya na ho...jyadatar log apna saara kaam dusron par thhop dete hai...

magar pehle aisa nahi tha...tab sab log milkar kaam kiya karte the...

phir chahe wo sardaar ka pariwaar ho ya ek sadharan kabile me rehne wale vyakti ka...

par kaam kaunsa hoga ye umar ke hisaab se nirdharit hota tha...

jaise ki bade shikaar kiya karte to wahin chhote sabzi aur fal kheton se lekar aate...

sabko harr kaam sikhaya jaata bacchpan se hi...jab wo bade ho jaate wo apna kaam khud chhun lete...

maine bhi bacchpan se harr kaam seekha tha...saare kaam alag-alag bhaagon me bante huwe the...

jaise khet se sabjiyan aur fal lane se shikaar karne tak, kapde banane se lekar khet me kheti karne tak...

maa hamesha mujhe khud nahane ke baad hi uthati thi...jiski wajah mujhe baad me pata chali par main aapko abhi bata raha hoon...

ye isiliye tha kyunki nadi me subah suraj ugne aur shaam ko suraj dhalne ke baad wahan sirf auratein hi nahati thi...

uss samay wahan kissi bhi mard ka jaana varjit tha...baaki ka saara waqt mardon ko diya gaya tha...

usme wo kabhi bhi nadi me jakar naha sakte the...main sabjiyan aur fal laane ka kaam karta tha...

issi ke chalte mere kuch dost bhi ban gaye the jo aaj tak hai...

 

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Going Great..... Nice Start.....

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