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Prince Charles

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Update 06

samne ka najara sacch me tha bhi ascharya chakit kar dene wala...

wahan samne aadmi 1 ki bheji huyi daayi aur uske saathiyon ki laashein padi thi...

par ye dekh kar unko achambha kyun hoga jabki wo sab saara din yahi kaam karte hai...

asal main ascharya chakit kar dene waali baat ye thi ki wahin paas me ek sheron ka jhund tha...

unke theek beech me ek nanha sa baccha bade pyaar se so raha tha...

aisa lag raha tha jaise wo sab uss bacche ke rakshak ho aur uske charon taraf raksha ghera banaye huye ho...

asal me huva kya tha ye janne ke liye thoda peeche chalte hai...

jaise hi aadmi 1 ko apni chaal ulti padti dikhayi di gyaani maa ki wajah se...

jo ab tak soojh-boojh se kaam kar raha tha usne bina socche samjhe faisle lena shuru kar diya...

shaka aur baaki sab pe humla karne se pehle usne apne kuch saathi daayi maa ke paas bhej diye...

shakti, rukmini aur unke sabhi saathiyon ko khatam karne ke liye...

daayi maa ne sabka vishwaas jeet liya tha isiliye usne sabhi ko gehri neend me sula diya iska use yakeen ho gaya...

par jab daayi ke saathiyon ne humla kiya to sab jaag rahe the...

magar phir bhi jaise-taise daayi apne saathiyon ke saath bacche ko lekar bhaag nikli...

unke peeche baaki sab the...ladayi hoti rahi aur daayi ke saathi kum hote gaye...

wahin paas me sheron ka ek jhund rehta tha...jiski wajah se wahan koyi nahi jaata tha...

daayi ne iss ilaake aur usme rehne waale sheron ke baare me suna tha ki ye sab bahut khoonkhar hai...

yahi karan tha ki koyi bhi insaan yahan se jinda wapas nahi aaya tha...

ye socch kar wo apne bache huye saathiyon ke saath uss ilaake me chali gayi...

wahan ja kar usne bacche ko sheron ke jhund ke paas phenk diya ki wo use khaa lenge...

par yahan wo huva jiski usne to kya kissi ne bhi kabhi kalpana nahi ki hogi...

sheron ne use khaane ki jagah jaise apni panah me le liya...

wo na to khud use khaa rahe the aur na hi kissi ko uske paas aane de rahe the...

iss baat se daayi aur uske saathi gusse se aag babula ho gaye...

apna kaam poora karne ke liye wo apne saathiyon ke saath bacche ko maarne ke liye aage badh gayi...

bas yahi unn sabki aakhiri galti saabit huyi aur unn sheron ne sabko maar diya...
 

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Update 06

samne ka najara sacch me tha bhi ascharya chakit kar dene wala...

wahan samne aadmi 1 ki bheji huyi daayi aur uske saathiyon ki laashein padi thi...

par ye dekh kar unko achambha kyun hoga jabki wo sab saara din yahi kaam karte hai...

asal main ascharya chakit kar dene waali baat ye thi ki wahin paas me ek sheron ka jhund tha...

unke theek beech me ek nanha sa baccha bade pyaar se so raha tha...

aisa lag raha tha jaise wo sab uss bacche ke rakshak ho aur uske charon taraf raksha ghera banaye huye ho...

asal me huva kya tha ye janne ke liye thoda peeche chalte hai...

jaise hi aadmi 1 ko apni chaal ulti padti dikhayi di gyaani maa ki wajah se...

jo ab tak soojh-boojh se kaam kar raha tha usne bina socche samjhe faisle lena shuru kar diya...

shaka aur baaki sab pe humla karne se pehle usne apne kuch saathi daayi maa ke paas bhej diye...

shakti, rukmini aur unke sabhi saathiyon ko khatam karne ke liye...

daayi maa ne sabka vishwaas jeet liya tha isiliye usne sabhi ko gehri neend me sula diya iska use yakeen ho gaya...

par jab daayi ke saathiyon ne humla kiya to sab jaag rahe the...

magar phir bhi jaise-taise daayi apne saathiyon ke saath bacche ko lekar bhaag nikli...

unke peeche baaki sab the...ladayi hoti rahi aur daayi ke saathi kum hote gaye...

wahin paas me sheron ka ek jhund rehta tha...jiski wajah se wahan koyi nahi jaata tha...

daayi ne iss ilaake aur usme rehne waale sheron ke baare me suna tha ki ye sab bahut khoonkhar hai...

yahi karan tha ki koyi bhi insaan yahan se jinda wapas nahi aaya tha...

ye socch kar wo apne bache huye saathiyon ke saath uss ilaake me chali gayi...

wahan ja kar usne bacche ko sheron ke jhund ke paas phenk diya ki wo use khaa lenge...

par yahan wo huva jiski usne to kya kissi ne bhi kabhi kalpana nahi ki hogi...

sheron ne use khaane ki jagah jaise apni panah me le liya...

wo na to khud use khaa rahe the aur na hi kissi ko uske paas aane de rahe the...

iss baat se daayi aur uske saathi gusse se aag babula ho gaye...

apna kaam poora karne ke liye wo apne saathiyon ke saath bacche ko maarne ke liye aage badh gayi...

bas yahi unn sabki aakhiri galti saabit huyi aur unn sheron ne sabko maar diya...
Nice update
 
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Superb yar
 
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Prince Charles

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Update 07

aadmi 1- ye nahi ho sakta meri itni mehnat vifal nahi ho sakti...meri chaal bekaar nahi ja sakti...

shakti- hahahaha...chaal arre chaal to wo hoti hai jiska kissi ko pata na ho...tu kab, kya aur kaise karega wo to hum teh kar rahe the to teri kaisi chaal...

aadmi 2- dhokha kiya hai tumne humare saath...

shaka- jo tumne kiya wo kya sahi tha...dhokhebaaz ke saath kiya dhokha bhi sahi hota hai...

aadmi 1- mujhe pata hai tum mujhe maar doge...magar usse pehle mujhe batao ki tumne ye sab kyun kiya...

shakti- tu bahut badi duvidha mein hai na ki kab kaise huva...

aadmi 2- haan hume sacch janna hai...

shakti- sacch janna hai to suno...

ye bolte hi shakti ne dono ke sar dhadh se alag kar diye...sab ye dekh kar hairaan reh gaye...

simha- beta ye sab kya hai...

geeta- haan rukmini batao na tum ro kyun rahi ho jabki sab theek hai...

rukmini (rote huve)- maa to main kya karun bada waala saara din inke saath chipka rehta hai...soccha tha ki main mere ladle ke saath khelungi par dekho na usne to paida hote hi kaise dost bana liye...

ab main kiske saath khelun wo sab to mujhe bhi badi mushkil se uske paas jaane dete hai...

rukmini ne ye sab itni masumiyat se kaha ki wahan khade sabhi ke hontho par muskaan tair gayi...gamgin mahol mein khushi phir se lout aayi...tab kuch dair baad shakti ne bolna shuru kiya...

shakti- pitaji ye sab tab se shuru huva jab aap mujhe yahan le kar aaye...tabse mujhe har raat sapne aate aur koyi mujhe batata ki mere saath kya hone waala hai...

wo mujhe bacchne ki tarkeeb batata lekin wo ye bhi kehta ki main unko hone se rokne ki koshish na karun...jab meri mulaqaat rukmini se huyi tab mujhe ye pata chala ki humari hone wali dusri santaan vishesh hogi...

magar usse pehle humpar bahut bada sankat aayega aur jaisa kaha gaya tha sab waise hi ho bhi raha tha...aap to jante hai ki aapka khud par vash nahi rehta jab krodh aapke oopar hawi hota hai...

tabhi maine aapko kuch nahi bataya...saath hi ek maa ka mann komal hota hai...wo apne bacchon pe aane waale sankat ko sunkar dukhi ho sakti hai...tabhi humne kissi ko nahi bataya...

shaka- siwaye mere koyi nahi jaanta tha ki kya ho raha hai...inke rishte ko thukrana, rukmini ka swayamwar, sab vidhi ka vidhaan tha...tabhi to jaisa kaha gaya tha sab waisa hi huwa...

ab kuch ye bhi socch rahe honge ki jab hum jaante the to inhe khatam kyun nahi kiya...iska jawaab hai agar ye pehle khatam kar diye jaate to wo kabhi na hota jo hona tha...

samay ke chakra ke saath hume khilwaad nahi karna tha ye hum bhali-bhaanti jante the...
 

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Mast update bhai

Waiting for next update...
 
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