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Nevil singh

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Subah sawere apne sath aisi harkat kiye jane se devrani udas ho jati hai or bhag kar apna darwaza band kar bistar par let kar rone lagti hai

Devrani:man me)us tuchha ratan singh ki himmat kaise hui mujhe chhune ki me baldev ko kahungi ..nahi nahi use pata chal gaya to wo mahabharat khada kar dega

Kuch soch kar devrani uth ti hai or apne pushtako me apne bete dwara likhe gaye prem patra dhundti hai par use kuch nahi milta hai

Devrani k mathe pe paseene k bund aajate hai

"hey bhagwan ye patra kaha chale gaye yahi to the uff "

Devrani apne mez par rakhe har saman ko fekne lagti hai pure kaksha ka kona kona dekhti hai par use prem patra nahi milta hai

Devrani mane me:kahi ye ratan singh to nahi jo patra dekh lya ho islye mujhe bhogne ki prayas kar raha hai ..hay me kya karu ab kisiko bhi mila ho par wo to mere or baldev k faansi ka karan ho sakta hai meri he galati ka parinam hai me itni laparwahi se kaise rakh sakti hu

Pasine pasine hue devrani thak har k apne nam aakhe liye bistar par let jati hai use pata he nahi chalta or tezi se samay nikal jata hai or ab tak sab so kar uth gaye the or badri or shyam jane ki tayyari kar k nikalne he wale the par unko yaad aaya k wo devrani mausi se nahi mile

Rajpal:ary kya hua ruk q gaye bacho

Badri:maharaj wo mausi se nahi mila

Kamla:wo to so rahi hai abhi tak

Baldev:aisa karo chalo andar he ja kar mil lo

Badri or shyam devrani k kaksha me aate hai

Badri or shyam khade hote hai baldev devrani jise aakh lag gai thi uske bagal me palang par baith

Baldev:devrani aji uth bhi jaao kab tak soti rahogi

Devrani jhat se uth ti hai or samne baldev ko dekhti hai or door badri or shyam ko khade dekh sharma jati hai

Badri:kya hua bhabi maa aap ki tabyat theek nahi lag rahi

Devrani:nahi devar ji bass u he aakh lag gayi thi vyayam karne k bad

Badri:hum log ja rahe hai aashirwad dijiye

badri or shyam dono pair chhute hai

devrani dono k sar par hath rakh kar aashirwad deti hai

Baldev:ab to bhabi kahe jane se chidh nahi rahi ho devrani aisa kya seekha dya apne bhabi ko badri

Badri:wo hum apko nahi batayenge baldev bhaiya wo hamare devar or bhabi ki baat hai

Baldev:to baat yaha tak pahuch chuki hai

Badri or shyam muskurate hue vida le kar bahar nikalte hai or apne ghodo par baith

Baldev:apna khyal rakhna mitro

shyam:tum bhi or unka bhi

baldev baat samajh kar muskura deta hai dono ghodo ko dauda kar thodi der me he aakho se ojhal ho jate hai


Dupahar k bhojan k baad raja rata or raja rajpal madeera peene baith te hai


Ratan:rajpal aaj mujhe koi cheez pasand aagai ghatrashtra ki

rajpal:kaho kya pasand hai abhi wo aapke kadmo me hoga raja ratan singh

Ratan:bhai dekho mujhe ek mahila pasand aagayi hai jise mujhe bhogna hai or tumhe tumhara vachan yaad hai na jab tumne meri patni k sath apni raat rangeen ki thi

rajpal:ratan ji aise kaise hum bhul sakte hai jo maza mujhe tumhare patni eliza ne dya tha

Ratan:to samjho tumhe apna vachan pura karne ka samay aagaya hai

Rajpal:ary aap kaho pure ghatrashtra ki kanyaye tumhare baho me hogi

Ratan:mujhe pure ghatrashtra ki nahi chahiye par ye mahal ki..

rajpal ab thoda bhaybhit ho jata hai

Rajpal:ma mahal ki matlab samjha nahi

Ratan:matlab dekho seedha hai raja rajpal mujhe tumhari chhoti patni ka ubhra hua shareer pasand agaya hai

rajpal ka muh khula ka khula rah jata hai

Rajpal:matlab devrani

ratan:tum sahi samjhe Rani devrani ko bhogna hai mujhe or mere khyal se tumhe koi aapatti nahi honi chahiye

Rajpal:par raja ratan ji

ratan singh ab gusse se laal ho jata hai

Ratan:dikha di na apni awqat tum singh ho or apna vachan bhul gaye jab meri patni ko raat bhar chudai kiya tab to sharam nahi aai or ab apni patni dene me jibha halak me atak gayi

Raja rajpal is baat ko sahi samjhte hu

Rajpal:maharaj mai to koshish kar sakta hu par devrani nahi mani to..

Ratan:mujhe kuch nahi pata tumhe apna vachan pura karna hai tum kaise karoge tum samjho

Rajpal:theek hai me koshish karunga

ratan:dekho agar mujhe devrani nahi milti to me kal k kal Ghatrashtra per hamla kar apna rajya bana lunga or tumhara kacha chitha tumhare rajya k samne rakh dunga jis se tumhara pratishtha or tumhara rajya dono jayega hath se or to or devrani ko utha k le jane me mujhe samay nahi lagega

Rajpal:nahi aisa kuch mat karna maharaj

Ratan:tum mere shakti se parichit ho islye mujhe kuch bhi aisa karne par majbur na karo jiska pachtawa mujhe bhi ho or tumhe bhi

Rajpal:nahi aapko mil jayegi devrani par mera rajya mera he rahe

Ratan:chatur ho apni patni de kar satta me bane reh sakte ho tum

Rajpal or ratan singh fir madeera pee rahe the

Idhar devrani apne kaksha me baith

devrani:man me) ab ye patra jisne bhi churaya hai wo hamare jaan k dushman honge

devrani:kamla o kamla

kamla bhaag kar aati hai

Devrani use pura baat batati hai

kamla:maharani me to kisi ko nahi dekhi in dino yaha aate hue or me kya karungi prem patra apne paas rakh kar

Devrani:kamla mujhe samajh nahi aaraha kya karu baldev ko bulao

kamla turant ja kar baldev ko sath le kar aati hai

Baldev:maa kya hua itni ghabarahat q

Devrani:man me) mere raja kaise batau k mere ijjat par hath dalne ki koshish kya ratan singh ne ,abhi prem patra ki guthi to suljhe museebat ek sath he aani thi

Baldev:kaho maa kya soch rahi ho

Devrani:wo tumhare likhe hue prem patra sab gayab hai

Baldev:kyaa
baldev achmbhit ho kar kehta hai

Devrani:mujhe bhut dar lag raha hai baldev ab kya hoga

Kamla:Mahrani mera shaq to Maharani shurushti per hai

Devrani rote hue aakar baldev k gale lag jati hai

Baldev:sanyam rakho maa hum darenge to kuch nahi hoga

kamla:himmat se kam lo tum dono ki ye agni pariksha ho sakti hai ise paar kar lo jeevan sanwar jayega

devrani:par kaise wo shurushti k hath agar patra lag gaya to wo kabhi bhi hume faansi k fande tak pahucha degi or hum kuch nahi kar payenge

Baldev:kamla tum maa ko sambhalo me sochta hu kuch

Baldev bahar aakar udyan me idhar se udhar tahalne lagta hai

Baldev man me:kya karu ab aise me to hum dono mare jayenge hamare paas koi raasta he nahi hai apne aap ko sahi sabit karne ka

tabhi rajpal baldev ko dekh

Rajpal:ary putra kya hua q itne chintit ho

Baldev muskura kar

baldev:nahi pita ji kuch nahi bass badri or shyam chale gaye to unki yaad aarahi hai

Rajpal:oh or tumhari maa kaha hai

baldev apni aakhe badi kar k

Baldev:wo kaksha me he thi

rajpal:man me)agar ye baat baldev ko pata chale k me uski maa ko kisi or k sath sone k lye manane ja raha hu to wo kya sochega mere baare me

aise he sham ho jati hai or ghatrashtra k mahal me har ore diya k roshni jagmaga rahi thi

Rajpal devrani k kaksha ki ore ja kar

"devrani kya aap andar ho"

Devrani:aayiye maharaj

Rajpal andar ata hai

Rajpal:kya hua devrani jab se aayi ap andar he ho

Devrani:man me)kahi maharaj tak patra pahuch to nahi gaya jo yha aaye

or devrani kanpne lagti hai

Rajpal kuch der idhar udhar ki bate karne k baad

Rajpal:Devrani ek mahtavpurna baat karni thi aapse

Devrani:kahiye maharaj

devrani kaanp rahi thi kahi maharaj patra ko lekar na unse sawal puche

Rajpal bhi kanp raha tha k ratan singh k sath raat beetane wali baat par devrani pata nahi kya pratikirya degi

Rajpal:baat ye hai raja ratan singh bhut neech vyakti hai

Devrani:han kya hua maharaj

Rajpal apne aakho me jhuti aasu la kar masumiyat se

rajpal:wo kehta hai k hamare rajya par aakaraman kar dega or hum sabko bandi bana lega agar uski baat nahi maani

Devrani:kaun si baat maharaj

Rajpal:mujhe to bhut lajja aarahi hai ye keh kar par me tumse anurodh karna chahunga devrani tum he hum sab k jaan ko bacha sakti ho

Devrani:par kaise maharaj

Rajpal apna sar jhuka kar

rajpal:Devrani tumhe ratan singh pasand karta hai use ek raat guzarna hai tumhare sath

Ye sunte he devrani k aakho se aasu ki ganga behane lagti hai

Devrani:maharaj kya aapne use kuch nahi kaha jab usne aisi maang ki?

Rajpal:wo

Devrani:dhitkar hai apke jaise raja par jis se koi uski patni ki ek raat mangta hai or wo chup chap sun kar apni patni ko manane aajata hai..chiii maharaj ghinn aati hai aap par koi or raja hota to apne patni k lye aisa sun kar usi samay uska sar kaat deta

Rajpal:wo bhut shaktishali hai

Devrani:aapko apni satta apni rajshahi pyari hai na? uske badle me apni patni ko kisi or ko saunp doge maharaj

devrani ab fut fut kar rone lagti hai

Devrani:aaj tak to aapne mujhe patni ka haq bhi nahi dya or aaj aapne aisi maang kar k bata dya k aapne saat fere bhi nam k lye liya tha ..mai uff tak nahi ki aaj tak par aapki patni ban kar sharminda hu aise

Rajpal:chup karo zyada he bol rahi ho ab tum

Devrani:wah ulta chor kotwal ko dante apne kale charitra ko chhupane k lye apne patni ka sahara le rahe ho uske shareer ka sauda kar k

Rajpal:suno tum aise nahi maan ne wali to suno ha mujhe merra rajya chahiye me nahi chahta k ghatrashtra pe koi or raj kare or apne rajshahi apni sampatti apne mahal k lye me tum kya tumhari jaisi 10 devrani ko ratan k niche litwa du

Devrani:chupppp ho jao rajpal aab nahi to ek rajputni kii haaye tujhe kahi nahi chhoregi or tum mere pati nahi hote bhale se naam k ho to tumhara sar me dharr se alag kar deti

Rajpal:veerta ka praman kisi or ko dena apne aap ko tayyar karo do din k andar nahi to mujhe jabardasti karna padega

ye keh kar garazte hue rajpal bahar chala jata hai

devrani gusse me aakar apne ghar ka saman utha kar fekne lagti hai pure kaksha k saman ko bikher deti hai

"kutte rajpal q mere jeevan me aaye tum or samne rakhe fal k bartan ko utha kar aayine pe de marti hai jis se aayina toot jata hai or pure kaksha me bikhar jata hai

itna shor sun kar kamla aati hai

Kamla:maharani kya hua aapne kya haal bana dya kaksha ka

Devrani rote hue zameen par baith jati hai

"kamla mere jeevan ka haal aisa ho gaya hai is kaksha k haal se kya karu"

Kamla devrani ko pakad kar

"maharani kanch k tukde hai niche aap upar aayiye palang pe or bataiye aakhir hua kya"

"kamla bhala kaun apne patni ka sauda karta hai"

"maharani kaun kya aap roye nahi puri baat batao"

"subah me meri ijjat pe hath dalne ki koshish ki raja ratan singh ne"

"kya keh rahi ho maharani"

"han kamla or abhi mere naam k pati mujhe kehne aaye the k tumhe ratan singh k sona hai tayyari kar lo"

"hey bhagwan kya kaliyuga aagaya hai use sharam nahi aayi"

"aapne baldev ko q nahi batai maharani"

"kamla tum to jante ho baldev kachi umar ka hai kuch josh me aaker ulta sidha kar dya to or wais bhi humara prem patra bhi gayab hai agar baldev me kuch kya ratan singh ko to kahi shurushti ya jiske paas hai ye wo nikal ka de hamare virudha"

or devrani rone lagti hai

"Maharani chup karo meri behan aise pati dhitkar hai samaj pe khud vaishyao me pade rehte the raja ratan singh k sath uska he badla chukana chah rahe hai me sab samajhti hu"

"kamla puri jeevan bhar in sab ne mujhe dukh he dya ab me baldev k sath kuch sukh k pal jeena seekh rahi hu to ye sab m"

"himmat karo devrani or baldev ko batao ab tum dono ko mil kar he ye yudha ladna hai "

Kamla kaksha ko saaf safai karne lag jati hai or devrani apne jeevan ko shuru se soch kar aasu bahane lagti hai

idhar shurushti rajpal se milne k lye aati hai apne hath ke patra chhupa k

shurushti:man me) aaje he patra de deti hu kal tak dono maa bete ko fansi mil jayegi
or muskurate hue rajpal k kaksha k pas aakar

shurushti:maharaj

Rajpal or ratan singh andar baithe baat kar rahe the

Rajpal:han maharani shurushti kahiye hum abhi maharaja ratan ji k sath hai

shurushti:man me)ye ratan jab se aya hai rajpal ko chhorta he nahi

Shurushti darwaze par parde k peeche khadi ho kar

shurushti:Koi baat nahi maharaj mujhe aap se kuch bat karni thi aap ajaye mere kaksha me jab aap dono ki baat puri ho jaye
or shurushti wapas chali jati hai

andar baitha ratan singh

ratan:kya hua bhai devrani mani k nahi

Rajpal:abhi tak to nahi par manegi

ratan:manni he chahiye nahi to..

Rajpal:ary aap madeera pijiye maharaj aap chinta na kare me kuch bhi kar k aap ko devrani ko bhogne ka awsar dunga..


Raat ka bhojan kar k sab sone ki tayyari kar rahe the

Baldev chupke se apni maa k kaksha me aata hai

Baldev:maa aapne khana khaya

Devrani:nahi bass icha nahi thi

Baldev:meri rani aise to kamzor ho jaogi

Devrani daud k aaakar baldev k gale lag jati hai

Baldev:devrani kya hua q itni dari ho

Devrani rone lagti hai

Baldev:ro mat devrani

Devrani:baldev aaj subah sawere jab me udyan se tahal kar aarahi thi dusht ratan ne mera hath pakda or mujhse gandi baat kahi

baldev devrani ko chhor apna talwar utha ta hai

Baldev:us harami ki itni himmat abhi uska sar kaat kar tumhare kadmo me lata hu

devrani rote hue

"tumhe meri kasam abhi tum kuch bhi nahi karoge mere laal"

"maa tum kasam wapas lo mujhe majboor na karo raja ratan singh ka hal aisa karunga k uski maa bhi use nahi pehchan payegi"

"beta samjho abhi hamare halat aise hai hamare patra ko hamare shatru hathyar bana kar ham par palatwar kar sakte hai sanyam se kam lo beta or is apman ka badla tum le lena par abhi nahi"

baldev talwar ko door fekta hai or devrani ko apne baho me bhar

"jo meri rani ko aaakh bhi utha kar dekha "

"puri baat to suno mere raja"

"han kaho meri jaan"

"wo rajpal aya tha or us dusht ne kaha hai k ratan ghatrashtra kabza kar lega agar uski icha puri na hui or mujhe ratan k sath ek raat guzarne .."

baldev apna hath devrani k muh par rakh

"baas ek or shabd nahi devrani in haramio ko stree ko bhogne ata hai samman nahi karna ata "

"han me kaisi abhagan hu jo aise manushya se mujhe vivah dya gaya"

"wo tumhara pati nahi hai devrani me hu tumhara pati wo kutte rajpal ko rajshahi ki lalach or streeio or vaishyao se rangrailya in sab ka uttar milega ab me inhe sirf marunga nahi tadpan tadpa k marunga"


Aadhi raat devrani or baldev ek dusre k baho me apne dukh dard baant rahe rhe the

wahi shurushti maharaj ko patra dikhane k prayas me leti thi

raja ratan singh apne pyas kaise bujhai jaye devrani se ye soch raha tha

or apne kaksha me leta rajpal apne patni devrani ko kaise manaye ratan singh k sath raat guzarne k lye soch raha tha

To be continued
sukhmayi update bandhu
 

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aadhi raat ko mahal me sab apni apni sapne saja rahe the or or baldev or devrani ek dusre k baho ke is dukh bhari ghari me ek dusre ka sahara bane lipte the

Baldev:man me) Me yani k baldev singh ghatrashtra k hone wala maharaj vachan leta hu k is rajya ki maharani ka taaj Maharani shurushti se le kar iske sahi haqdar mere hone wali patni Maharani devrani k sar par sajaya jayega

Kuch der baad baldev or devrani let jate hai or devrani ki aakh lag jati hai baldev uske maasum chehre ko dekh devrani ka sar apne hath par rakhe aakhe band kar aaram karte hue gehri saanse le kar aakhe band karta hai baldev k aakho me aaag ki lehar or badle ki bhawna apne pita or ratan singh k khilaf bhadak gayi thi


Dono ekathhe so jate hai subah sawere devrani ki aakh khulti hai or wo apne aapko baldev k baho me pakar uth kar roz ki trah naha dho kar tayyar ho kar pooja karne lagti hai

Devrani:man me)bhagwan kya karu me hum dono ki sachai jaise maharaj tak pahuchegi wo din hum dono ka aakhiri din hoga

tabhi devrani k man me kuch baat aati hai

Devrani:man me)Han agar hum ghatrashtra ko chhor kahi or chale jaye to rajpal hamara chah k bhi kuch nahi kar payega..par mere Maharani ban ne ka sapna jo maine bachpan se sajaya tha uska kya ..or baldev kabhi apna peeth dikha kar in papio se bina badla lya bina jayega nahi ..par jaan bachani hai abhi to

Subah sawere kamla bhi apne gaao se mahal ko aajati hai or sabse pehle devrani k kaksha k paas aakar

"maharani"

Devrani darwaza kholti hai

"sushh dheere bolo baldev ki neend na toot jaye"

"maharani kya socha hai aapne "

"kamla maine nirnay le liya hai hum Ghatrashtra chhor denge"

"ye kya maharani par aap log kaha jaoge"

"Sansar itna bada hai hum kahi bhi guzara kar lenge mai nahi chahti baldev in kutto k chungal me fase or use kuch ho jaye"

"maharani agar aap ye soch rahi ho to jaldi nikal jana behtar hoga q k aaj to kisi haal me wo ratan tumse jabardsti karega or wo shurushti ho sakta hai patra maharaj ko de de tum dono taraf se fass rahi ho"

"Behan aisa karti hu me abhi nikal jati hu tum sabko keh dena me so rahi hu or baldev jaise uthega use nadi tat par ghode k sath bhej dena"

"han maharani or waise bhi baldev k sath agar tum niklogi to sab shaq karenge"

"theek hai me kuch saman apne le leti hu or apna bhagwan ki murti bhi meri madad karo"

"par baldev ziddi hai"

"kamla tum use kuch mat batana kehna mai use sirf bulai hu baldev ko me mana lungi nahi to wo in dono ki jaan leye bina jayega nahi"

Kamla devrani ki madad karti hai or ek chadar devrani odh leti hai jis se use koi pehchan na sake jate hue or kuch saman ki gathri baandh leti hai

Kamla:aap peeche k darwaze se nikal jao

Devrani:Dhanyawad meri behan har kadam pe sath dene k lye

devrani kamla k gale lag jati hai

Kamla:meri chhoti behan ho ap maharani ,apna khyal rakhna himmat nahi harna kabhi

kamla k aakho me aasu the

devrani bhi kamla ko dekh aakhe nam karte hue
"chalo kamla ab fir kabhi mile na mile ..zinda rahi to zarur milenge"

"aisi baat na kaho maharani baldev sab theek kar dega uske rahte hue tumhe kuch nahi ho sakta"

Devrani apne pushtako k beech se kalam nikal kar ek kore kagaz par kuch likhne lagti hai or fir wo kamla ko de di
"maharani ye kya likh kar dya"?

Devrani:jab baldev nikal jaye to ye mere taqiye par rakh dena isme likha hai saaf saaf me apne premi baldev k sath ghar chhor rahi hu ..or ye patra jakham par namak ki trah kaam karega Rajpal k

Kamla:par maharani is se to pure mahal ya pure ghatrashtra me pata chal jayega k tumko tumhare bete ne bhaga k le gaya

Devrani muskurati hai
"ab mujhe is samaj ki koi parwah nahi"

Ye keh kar devrani peeche k raste se apna chadar apne aadhe muh par dhakte hue subah sawere nikal jati hai nadi tat par

Kamla aa kar apne kaam me lag jati hai or uska dhyan baldev par he tha k kab uthega wo kuch ek ghante baad baldev uth ta hai

"maa kaha ho"

ye sunte he daud kar kamla baldev k kaksha me jati hai

"yuvraj aap uth gaye "

"han kamla me naha dho kar tayyar bhi ho gaya ye ratan singh kaha hai aaj use kahi door le ja kar uske paap ka dand dunga"

"Yuvraj aaap jo chahe kar lena par abhi maa ne aapko ati shighra nadi tat par bulaya hai ghoda le kar"

Baldev janta tha k ye samay kabhi bhi uska raaj khul sakta hai wo apne hath me talwar leta hai or bahar jane lagta hai

Bahar use uski dadi jeevika milti hai

Jeevika:ary baldev beta kaha ja rahe ho

Baldev:dadi thoda kaam hai seema par

Baldev bahar nikal kar apne ghode ki traf badhta hai use vaidh ji datun karte hue nazar aate hi

Vaidh:shubh prabhat yuvraj sawere sawere

Baldev:shubh prabhat ji aya thoda kam se

Baldev apne ghode par baith nadi k tat par chal deta hai or idhar apni aakho me aasu liye baldev ko kamla dekh rahi thi wo jhat se andar aakar Devrani ka diya hua patra uske taqiye par rakh deti hai

Kamla chup chap apne kam me fir lag jati hai

Dheere dheere mahal k sab log jagne lagte hai or maharani shurushti bhi jagti hai

Shurushti:man me)ye maharaj bhi na kal raat aaye nahi nahi to aaj in dono ki fansi ho gayi uff mera mann nahi maan raha kitna jaldi ye patra du maharaj ko

thodi der me Maharaj rajpal uth te hai or

"ary mujhe to shurushti ne bulaya tha "

rajpal tayyar ho kar maharani shurushti k kaksha me jane lagta hai

Kamla rasoi me kam kar rahi thi or use dikhai padta hai maharaj rajpal shurushti k kaksha ki ore ja rahe hai

Rajpal:maharani shurushti

Shurushti naha dho kar tayyar ho rahi thi

"aayiye maharaj"

rajpal andar aata hai

"aaj to bhut sundar lag rahi ho maharani"

"dhanywad maharaj"

"aap kuch kehne wali thi na maharani"

"maharaj aap k rehte hue itna ghinona apradh kaise kar sakta hai jis se hamari puri desh dunya me badnami ho"

"maharani pahelia na bujaho kaho kya baat hai"

"me kahungi to aapko jhoot lagega aap khud dekh lijiye"

shurushti apne taqiye k niche se patra ko utha kar rajpal ko deti hai

"ye kya hai "

"ye tumhare ladle putra baldev or tumhai patni ki prem kahani ka kacha chitha hai maharaj"

"kya bakk rahi ho tum"

"me bakk nahi rahi tum khud dekho"
Rajpal tezi se ek patra le kar padhne laga

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Priya sher singh urf baldev ji

Aasha karti hu aap abhi mera patra dekh muskura rahe honge,me aapko sadaiv aise he muskurate rehte dekhna chahti hu or uske liye me apni praan bhi tyag du to mujhe parwah nahi hoga

Baldev maine har
ek baat kamla dwara jaan li hu or
tumhare har nirnay ki wajah sirf me hu or mera dukh hai,mai he pagal thi jo tumhe ek hawasi or mere maan samman ki parwah na karne wala samajh lya q k

tum mujhe pane k lye sher singh ka bhes apnaya jiske wajah se mujhe laga tum mere jism ko pane k lye kisi hadd tak gir sakte par me galat thi

Tumne mujhe pane k lye kamla se madad. li jis se mujhe laga tum meri man maryada dunya k samne uzagar kar k mujhe badnam kar doge par me galat thi

Kamla ne bataya kaise tumne mere liye kisi sher singh namak vyakti k chayan kar lya tha yadi me us din ghode pe baith jati tum mujhe uske pas chhor dete
tum meri khushi k lye itna bada balidan dene ja rahe the

Mai ne jeevan me kisi se pehle prem nahi kya vivah to mere pita ji ne jabardasti karwa di
mera pehla prem sher singh hai ya shayad baldev mujhe nahi pata par tum dono k lye mere dili me prem k jazbat aye or jab ab ye baat he khatm ho jati hai k me kiska chunav karu

Mere dill ne pehli bar kisi k sapne sajaye wo tha sher singh or kisine apne pyari bate or mera khayal rakh kar mere dill ko bhaya wo tha baldev

Baldev urf sher singh ji mera jeevan ab aapke naam bass ye dill kabhi mat todna q k ek aurat har maryada niyam or dharm k virudha ja kar faisla leti hai to uske sath kuch galat ho to wo dubara apne jeevan me wapas nahi ja sakti hai.

Aapki devrani
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Rajpal:Adharmi devrani

Shurushti:ye bhi padhiye apke bete ki kartut

shurushti ek patra nikal kar rajpal ko deti hai

Rajpal gusse se laal hue dusra patra padhta hai jo baldev ne apni maa ko likha tha
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Priya maa

Mai apka baldev hu or aapka hamesha rahunga ,apni maa ka baldev jitna samman kal karta tha utna aaj karta hai or wo samman kal bhi utna he rahega chahe prastithi kaisi bhi ho

Meri maa ki maan maryada izzat ka rakhwala jitna bachpan se tha utna bhi aaj hu or kal bhi nahi badlunga or sadaiv aapki maan maryada ki raksha karunga

Maa agar mere kisi bhi galat tareeqe se apke dill se thes pahuchi hai to uske liye kshama mangata hu muaaf kar do mujhe

Jeevan me mai kal tak bhut akela mehsus karta tha jab tak me apni shiksha puri kar k nahi aya tha or jaise he meri nazar tum par gayi tab se me tumhare liye pagal ho gaya tha kahi na kahi mera dill tumne us din he chura liya par is baat ko mante hue mujhe samay laga

Sirf islye nahi k tumhara dukh dekh kar mera dill paseez gaya par sahi kahu to tumhare khoobsurti bhi bhut badi wajah thi jisne mere dill ko bebas kar dya apne maa k pyar me padne k lye
Maa me tumse bhut prem karta hu or tumhare sath apni sari zindagi bitana chahta hu or mai tumhare har wo dukh jo tumne jeevan me dekhe hai sab par marham ki trah lag jana chahta hu jis se tumhara dill ka dard mit jaye or tum jeevan ka sahi aanand le sako

Maine bhut socha samaj k bar me par aakhir kar mere dill nahi mana or mai or mera dill apne hasrate pura kar k rahenge or sabse badi hasrat hai tumhe jeevan bhar ki khushia dena,uske liye zamane se ladne ka or marne ka gam nahi ab bass jeene ki khushi hai

Bolo jeeyogi mere sath?
To aaj raat bhojan k baad nadi kinare aajana

Tumhara premi
Baldev urf sher sing
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Rajpal gusse se laal ho jat hai or apna talwar nikal kar

"senapati somnaaaaaaath "

Shurushti:inhe aise mat maarna sabke samne fasi dena maharaj

"tum chup karo"

Senapati somnath maharaj k boli sun kar daud kar mahal me aata hai

senapati:ji maharaj

Rajpal:aaj do faansi k fando ka prabandh karo aaj ki aaj he di jayegi

Senapati:par kisko maharaj

Rajpal:aao mere sath

rajpal sabse pehle baldev k kaksha me jata hai par use nahi pa kar

Shurushti khadi muskura rahi thi

Shurushti:wo dono devrani k kaksha me honge maharaj

Rajpal or somnath devrani k kaksha ka darwaza jaise kholte hai use waha bhi dono nah milte hai

rajpal:senapati sainiko ko bulao

bahar khade sainik khub tezi se bhala liye mahal me ghusne lage somnath k bulane par

Devrani k kaksha me aakar sainik sab

"kya hua senapati ji"

Rajpal:sainiko mahal me kahi bhi baldev or devrani ho bulao

Tabhi senapati ki nazar taqiye per rakhe kagaz par jatiha

senapati:maharaj ye kya hai

ab tak kamla or shurushti k sath radha bhi devrani k kaksha k dwar par khadi ho gayi thi

Senapati aage badh kar devrani k rakhe patra ko utha kar dekhta hai

Senapati:maharaj ispe to rani devrani ka nam hai
rajpal turant senapati k hath se patra chhen kar

rajpal padhne lagta hai

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Rajpal umeed karti hu k tum is samay mere or baldev ki sachai jaan gaye honge or tum mujhe jaan se marne ki icha liye mere kaksha me aaye ho,jaisa dard tum abhi mehsus kar rahe ho wais me jeevan bhar ki hu or aakhir kaar mujhe apna premi baldev mujhe mil gaya or me uske sath ghatrashtra chhor kar ja rahi hu

Thhu hai tumhare jaise pati pr jo apne patni kisi or ko bhet dena chah raha tha

Baldev ki patni
Devrani
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Tabhi ek sainik pura mahal ghum kar ata hai or kehta hai
"maharaj pure mahal me kahi nahi hai wo dono aaspas bhi nahi"

rajpal apne nange talwar ko gusse se ghumata hai or us sainik k sar ko dhar se alag kar deta hai

senapati jo rajpal k paas he khada tha or patra padh kar use samajh aagaya tha

senapati:maharaj aap ne kya kiya apne he sainik ko maar dya apne krodh par kabu rakhiye


Rajpal:ye kamini adharmi devrani apne bete k sath bhag gai

Ye sun kar shrushti or radha k aakhe bade ho jate hai

Shurushti:man me) ye kya kamini lagta hai bhaap gayi thi k uske jaan ko khatra hai or bhag gai

Shurushti:senapati suno wo log subah mahal me he the wo ghatrashtra ko paar kar k nahi jana chahiye

ye sab shor or mahal me khun bahta dekh maharani jeevika rajpal ki maa bahar aati hai

jeevika:kya hua rajpal ye sab kya ho raha hai

shurusti:hoga kya aapka ladla pota apke bahu apne maa devrani ko le kar bhag gaya

Jeevika sunte he

"kya shurushti..hey bhagwan"

"ji ma ji baldev devrani ko le kar bhag gaya or devrani ne patra bhi chhor gayi hai"

jeevika apna sar par hath rakh kar chakra kar gir jati hai or behosh ho jati hai

rajpal shurushti daud kar aate hai

Rajpal:maaa a


shurushti:maa ji

rajpal apne maa ko uthane k lye apni khun se sani talwar ko fekta hai or shurushti or senapati k madad se apne maa ko uske kaksha me le jata hai

Senapati:sainiko vaidhji ko bulao


Idhar baldev nadi tat par pahuch jata hai or apne maa ko saman liye khadi pa kar

Devrani:beta der kar di aane me

"maa kya hua aapne yaha q bulaya hai"

"beta maine faisla kar liya hai abhi hume ghatrashtra chhorna hoga unse bachna hai to"

"maa mai kayar nahi agar samaj k khilaf hum gaye hai to wo kaun se pujari hai kahi k sab hamara sath denge me unsab se akela lad sakte haii"

"mere bache aaj chal inse hum kabhi or badla le lenge "

"par hum jayenge kaha maa"

idhar mahal me

Rajpal:senapati ghatrashtra ka chappa chappa chhan maro or in dono adharmi ko mere samakhsha laao inhe mrityu dand ki ghosna me karta hu

Senapati:jo hukam maharaj

Rajpal:chalo sainiko

Senapati:aap bhi

rajpal:han sainiko ko har disha purv paschim dakshin k disha me bhejo
har gav har ghar chhaan maaro


senapati rajpal ko kahe anusar sena ko har disha me bhej deta hai

Rapal:ab hum paras ki disha ki ore chalte hai nadi k uspar

Kuch der me rajpal apne sainko k sath nadi tat par pahuch jata hai

maharani ab bhi baldev se bahas kar rahi thi par baldev maan ne ko tyyar nahi tha devrani baldev k gale lag jati hai

"beta tumhe tumhare pyar ki kasam chalo ham door chale "

"ma kasam q par jaye kaha"

samne se rajpal aaraha tha use nadi tat par baldev ka ghoda dikhta hai

rapal:wo dekho baldev ka ghoda
wo aasapas honge
senpati:wo dekho us vriksha k paas


jaise jaise rajpal kareeb ata hai wo dekhta hai dono ek dusre k gale lage the

Rajpal ishare se sainiko ko gherne k lye kehta hai

baldev devrani ko apne baho me liye khada tha is baat se anjan k uska gherao ho chuka hai


Baldev:theek hai chalte hai meri rani
baldev aage badh kar apne hoth devrani k gale pe rakh chumta hai or apne hathon se devrani k kamar par rakh sahlata hai

ye drishya dekh Raja rajpal k dhairya toot jata hai

rajpal:aakaraman

ye sunte he baldev or devrani ek dusre ko chhorte hai or apne ap ko ghira pate hai sainiko se or saham jate hai..


To be continued
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Baldev or devrani apne aap ko sainiko se ghire pate hai devrani darr k baldev se chipak jati hai

Rajpal:pakad lo in adharmio ko

do sainik baldev ki ore tezi se ghode ko daudate hai

devrani ishare se baldev ko bhagne k lye kehti hai baldev nadi k tat par ret k andar apna pair ghusata hai or ek jhatke se sainiko k upar de marta hai jis se pura vatavaran dhul dhul ho jata hai or sainiko k aakh me dhul jane se wo dekh nahi pate hai

mauqe ka fayda utha kar baldev jaldi se devrani ko uske saman sahit goad me utha k ghode per bithata hai or khud chhalang maar k bhagata hai

jab tak dhul chhat pata or sainik ko sab sujhta baldev or devrani ghode se nikal jate hai


Rajpal:wo bhag rahe hai paschim ki disha chalo

Senapati or sainik baldev or devrani k peeche apna ghoda bhagane lagte hai kuch doori par baldev devrani ko apne goad me lye ghode ko bhaga raha tha

Rajpal:ruk jao nahi to tum dono k lye acha nahi hoga

Devrani:rukna nahi beta le chalo mujhe ye sab se door khas kar ye rajpal se

baldev ghode ko bhagate bhagate jungle ki ore mode leta hai or uske peeche rajpal bhi jungle ki ore mod leta hai


Baldev ghane jungle me ghode ko kabhi daaye jhadion k andar modta to kabhi baye or rajpal bhi unka peecha karna chhor nahi raha tha..baldev k aage ek chhota sa pahad ata hai wo ghode k lagam ko kheechta hai ghoda samajhte hue hehhyate hue pahad k upar tezi se chadhne lagta hai or fir tezi se utarta hai par rajpal or senapati k ghoda bhut dheeme gati se chadhta hai or jab wo pahad par pahuchta hai tab tak baldev ghane jungle me ghode ko ghusa deta hai

Rajpal:ye fir hamare hath se nikal gaye

senapati:chinta na kijiye maharaj seema se bahar me inhe jane nahi dunga

rajpal:theek hai tum sainiko ko ye khabar pahucha do

Senapati:theek hai

rajpal:chalo ab wapas mahal

Rajpal or senapati wapas mahal ki ore chal dete hai

mahal pahuch kar rajpal dekhta hai ab tak uski maa jeevika hosh me aagayi hai or uske aakho me aasu the or lagbhag ghar ka har vyakti aaj udaas tha

Jeevika:aagaya beta hum sab tera he raah dekh rahe the

rajpal apne sar ka pagdi ko fekte hue baith ta hai

Rajpal:tum sab k ghar me rehte hue aisa kaise ho sakta mujhe is baat ki khabar q nahi ki gayi ..kaise mere naak k niche ye dono aisa karte rahe or aaj baldev ne apne maa ko bhaga le gaya par mujhe bhanak tak nahi hui Q aaaaakhir q mujhe uttar chahiye iska

Shurushti:maharaj jaise he mujhe shaq hua inpar me inke kaksha ki talashi ki or prem patra mila

Rajpal:maa kya aapko indono k lakshan se nahi lage k ye dono kya gul khila rahe hai?

jeevika:beta tum itni chinta mat karo we adharmi the wo tumhare layaq he nahi thi devrani jaisi bhrast mahila or baldev jaisan adharmi putra maine nahi dekhi

Rajpal:chinta kaise na karu maa aaj pure mahal me ye baat sabko pata chal gayi hai

utne me raja ratan singh apne kaksha se nikalte hue

Ratan:rajpal tum sahi me namard nikle tumhare samne se tumhari rani ko tumhari patni ko koi bhaga k le gaya or tum kuch nahi kar paye

Rajpal:humne koshish ki

Ratan:pakad to nahi paye na or unke prem pooja tumhe itne dino se nahi dikhi ab haath mal k kuch nahi hoga ek stree ko sambhal nahi sake tum

Rajpal ratan singh k gusse ko jayez samajh kar chup chap tha

Ratan:me aise adharmi pariwar k sath ek kshan nahi ruk sakta or rahi baat meri khwaish ki wo me janta hu kaise puri karni hai

Rajpal:ary ruko to abhi kaha jaoge

Ratan:apne rajya rajpal bass tum sab apna khyal rakho or dhund sako to dhund lo apne rani ko chhura lo apne bete k chungal se

ratan singh ye keh kar bahar aaajata hai or apne ghode se Kuberi ki ore chal deta hai


Rajpal apne aakhe band kya

rajpal:ye maa beta k wajah se mujhe kitne beizzati sahni pad rahi hai

Rajpal:kamla radha vaidh ji kya aap logo ko bhi in dono me kuch chal raha hai ye mehsus nahi hua ?

sab ne nakar dya or kaha unhe is baat ki khabar nahi thi

Rajpal:kamla tum sach batao mujhe q lagta hai tumhe pata tha

Kamla:nahi maharaj aise adharm hone ki bhanak bhi mujhe lagti to me sabse pehle me he unhe ghar me beizzat kar deti

Rajpal:jaao tum sab apne apne kaksha me mujhe akela chhor do

sab jane lagte hai or rajpal apne kaksha me ja kar let jata hai

thodi der me shurushti aajati ha

shurushti:maharaj

rajpal:han maharani

shurushti:aap inke baare me soch kar apni sehat kharab na kare in dono ne jo kiya uska fal unhe awashya milega

rajpal k paas baith kar shurushti rajpal ka sar dabane lagti hai


idhar baldev or devrani jungle ko cheerte hue tezi se ghatrashtra k seema tak pahuch jate hai or baldev apne talwar nikal kar ghoda bhagane lagta hai

seema par sainik jaise dekhta hai baldev ko inke peecha karne lagte hai

tabhi baldev apna talwar zor se gol gol ghuma kar

"sainiko hume jane do nahi to tum sab jante ho ye talwar tum sab ka khun pee sakti hai ek he sath"

Baldev k aakho me jalte angare dekh sainik peeche hat jate hai or baldev ghode ko aage badhate hue Ghatrashtra k seema ko paar kar leta hai

Baldev ab ghode ko dheere karte hue

Baldev:ab kaha jaye hum

devrani:hum bhaiya se baat karenge

Baldev:par mama ji kya hamara rishta swikar karenge

Devrani:hamare paas or koi rasta nahi hai senapati or rajpal hume kahi na kahi se dhund nikalenge or ratan bhi

Baldev:par maa

Devrani:prem kye ho tum ab pariksha deni padegi baldev ab samay aagaaya hai mera hath mango mere bhaiya se

Baldev:agar nahi mane to

Devrani:to bhi me tumhari he rahungi

Dono paras ki ore ghode ko modte hai

thodi door jane k baad devrani ko ek bazar nazar aata hai or ab lagbhag raat ho gayi thi


Devrani:mujhe bhuk lag gai subah se kuch nahi khaya tumne bhi chalo kuch kha le

Dono bazar me ja kar laddu wale k paaas ja kar ghode se utarte hai devrani sawdhani se apne chadar ko apne muh par odh leti hai jis se koi use pehchan na paye

Baldev:bhaiya laddu kaise diya

Ladduwala:bhaiya 30 sikke k ek ser hai

baldev sikke nikal k deta hai

Ladduwala:ary ye to ghatrashtra k sikke hai

Baldev:han

Ladduwala:aap dono ghatrashtra se ho kya

Baldev:nahi hum kuberi se hai ratan singh k rajya se sainik hu me

Ladduwala:or ye aapki patni

Baldev:ji han meri patni

Ladduwala:lagta hai inki tabyat theek nahi ya kuch zyada he thand lag rahi hai

Baldev:aap hume laddu do pehle

Ladduwala:kahe chidh rahe ho ..ghatrashtra se yaad aya aaj ek sainik aya tha waha ek adhbhut ghatna ghati hai

Baldev:kya ghatna"

devrani bhi ab dhyan se laddu wale halwai ki baat sun ne lagi

Ladduwala hasta hua kehta hai
"bhaiya kaliyug aagaya hai Ghatrashtra ki rani or unke putra ka prem prasang chal raha rha or aaj rajpal k putra apne maa ya fir ye kahiye rajpal ki chhoti rani ko bhaga le gaya"

Ye sunte he devrani darr se kaanp jati hai or ladduwale ko dekhne lagti hai

Baldev:bhaiya hume kya pata is bare me me khud chhutti par hu..kya aap dekhe ho wo yuvraj ko jo apne maa ko le ke bhag gaya

Ladduwala:dekha nahi hu or dekhna bhi nahi aise adharmi vyakti ko..aap ye sab chhoriye aap laddu khaye

Baldev apne hath me laddu leye devrani k sath ek vriksha k neeche baithak pe baith kar laddu khane lage wahi par baithe kuch log aapas me baat kar rahe the or sab k muh per sirf baldev or devrani ki baat he thi

baldev or devrani waha se jaldi nikalte hai or raat me rukna bhi theek nahi samajhte hai or paras ki ore ghoda bhagane lagte hai..


Raat bhare ghoda bhagane k baad devrani neend k maare thak jati hai or baldev k goad me he so jati hai or baldev bass ghode k lagam ko sambhalte hue paras ki ore badh raha tha

Subah me Ghatrashtra mahal

Rajpal apni talwar laga kar or puri tayyari kar k jaise yudha me ja raha ho mahal se bahar nikalta hai

rajpal:senapati somnath

senapati:ji maharaj

rajpal:unka kuch pata chala

tabhi mahal se shurushti bahar aati hai

shurushti:maharaj aap ne kal se kuch khaya nahi kha lijiye kuch

Rajpal:mai tab tak nahi khaunga jab tak wo dono mere samne na aajaye

Rajpal:senapati tum har padosi rajya me ye khabar faila do jo hamari madad karega un dono ko pakadne me hum use muh manga inaam denge

senapati:par maharaj waise to ye baat aag ki tarah puri dunya me fail jayegi

Rajpal:mujhe kuch nahi pata mujhe baldev or devrani chahiye zinda ya murda or abhi ghatrashtra k jitne gao hai or jitne chaudhri hai in gao k sabko bula kar keh do hum indono ko fansi ki saja suna dye sab ko pata chalna chahiye in dono kitna bada paap kiya hai

Senapati :jo aagya maharaj

senapati har gao k mukhiya ya chaudhri ko apat baithak me bulata hai or sari baat batate hue kehte hai maharaj ne apne chhoti rani or bete ko maut ki saza suna di hai sab hairan pareshan the ye sun kar or apas me baldev or devrani ko kosh rahe the itni buri harkat par


Sham ho jati hai or baldev or devrani paras pahuch he jate hai mahal k bahar sainik dekh samajh jate hai ye to wahi log hai jo kuch din pehle mehman ban k aaye the

Baldev or devrani paras k mahal pahuch kar sainik se puchte hai devraj kaha hai or sidha devraj k paas pahuch jate hai jo apne kaksha me the

Devraj:ary meri behan devrani tum ary bhanje tum dono bhut jaldi aagaye or ye kya haal bana lya tum dono ne

Baldev or devrani devraj ka pair chhute hai


Devrani:aap mere pita samman hai aap se ek anurodh hai

Devraj:kaho meri bachi

Baldev:baat ye hai mama ji k hume desh nikal ka hukm dya hai

devraj:kisne

devrani:rajpal ne

devraj achambhit ho kar

Devraj:par aisa kya apradh

Baldev:apradh kya prem ka maine

Devraj:mai samjha nahi

To be continued
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Devraj:mai samjha nahi

Baldev:mama ji maine apradh kya hai apni maa se prem kar k

Devraj asmanjas se dekhte hue

Devraj:tumhara arth kya hai?

Baldev:Mama ji mai aapki behan devrani ka aapse hath mangta hu hum dono ek dusre se prem karte hai or me jeevan bhar aapki behan ki raksha karunga

Devraj:kya bakk rahe ho baldev

Devrani:ye sahi keh raha hai bhaiya hum dono ek dusre k bina jee nahi sakte

Baldev:mai devrani se aapke behan se vivah karna chahta hu or unko apni maa se apni patni banana chahta hu me ab or nahi sah sakta

Devraj ye sun kar aag babula ho jata hai or isse pehle wo kuch or sune "thapp" se thappad baldev k gaal par rakh deta hai

Devraj:haramzade

Baldev apne gaal par hath rakh

Baldev:is thappar ki qeemat aapko chukani pad sakti hai mama

Ye sab sunte he Hooriya aajati hai

Devraj:nikal ja yaha se adharmio

Devrani:Mere shareeer ka sauda kya gaya bhaiya aapke jeeja rajpal ne kya jeevan bhar mujhe sataya ab wo hume marna chahta hai
Ye keh kar devrani rone lagti hai

Devraj:Mujhe tum per ghrina ho rahi hai devrani tumhari jaisi behan marr jaye to acha jo apna muh apne bete se he kala karwa rahi hai or tumne apna sasural chhor yaha bhaag aayi bete sath

Devrani:bhaiya

Devraj:agar tum meri behan na hoti jise maine bachpan se beti ki trah pala hai to bhagwan kasam aaj tum dono ki lashe niche hoti

Baldev:chalo maa hamari yaha koi nahi sun ne wala

Devrani:to bhaiya kya aapko ye gawara hai k aapke behan ko rajpal bech de ?par behan agar apne bete se prem kar li to ye adharm ho gaya ..bhaiya agar ye adharm hai to me hu adharmi or aap sab dharm per chalte rahe ..

Baldev devrani ko sahara dete hue bahar le kar aane lagta hai raaste me hooriya khadi thi

Hooriya:kya hua

Devrani or baldev chup chap mahal se bahar nikal kar apne ghode pe sawar ho kar chale jate hai

Devraj:Sultan ne to nahi suna na ye sab

Hooriya:wo so rahe hai or shamshera shikar par gaya hai tumhe is trah nahi karna chahiye tha

devraj sharm k mare apna sar pakad k baith jata hai

Devraj:kya karta mallika e jahan aise adharmio ko shabashi deta inhone mera naak kata dya

Hooriya:ary tum tooto mat devraj ji

devraj ko chhor kar hooriya bahar aajati hai

Hooriya:man me)kya karu devrani to baat bhi kahi ki par wo museebat me hai kaise madad karu

Baldev ghoda bahagate hue paras se nikal raha tha

Baldev:maa tum chup ho jao rone se kuch nahi hoga or ye bhul jao k hamari koi madad karega or hume sharan dega


Devrani:tumne theek kaha baldev ab hume khud ladna hoga

Baldev:ye hui na baat or wais bhi
me hu na tumhare sath

Devrani:mujhe kuch or nahi chahiye bass aap hamesha mujh se aise he prem karte rahe

Baldev:devrani ab hume ghatrashtra me he jagah banani hai or waise bhi tumhara bhi to sapna tha Maharani ban ne ka

Devrani:han kya ye mumkin hai?

Baldev:Sab mumkin hai meri jaan
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Devrani muskura deti hai or dono tezi se paras se nikal rahe the


Tabhi samne se ek rassi baldev ki ore aati hai jo ek fanda tha use dekhte he baldev apna sar hatata hai or

devrani peeche mud kar dekhti hai to kuch ghudsawar unka peecha kar rahe the

wahi jungle me shamshera shikar kar raha tha or wo dekhta hai k kuch ghudsawar kisi ka peecha kar rahe hai
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Shamshera abhi jungle me apne ghode ko door bandha tha

Shamshera:dekhu to kaun hai ye log
shamshera apne ghode ki ore jata hai

Idhar baldev k upar fir se dono taraf se ghudsawar rassi fekte hai or baldev ko kuch he der me rassi se lapet liya jata hai or baldev ko kheech kar ghode se gira dete hai


Baldev;devrani tum surakshit sthan par chali jao meri chinta na karo
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Devrani ghode ko bhagane lagti hai or kuch door bhagate hue wo piche mud kar dekhti hai ghudsawar nahi the tabhi samne se apne hatho me talwar liye kuch naqabposh khade the

"ae utro ghoda se or chup chap hamare sath chalo chalaki karne ki koshish ki to baldev ka bura haal kar denge hum wo chungal me hai hamare"

"Ek mard ko tum sab mil k dhoke se pakad leye dhyan dena baldev sher hai kahi kuch ulta na pad jaye "

Devrani ye keh kar utarti hai..

Sainik devrani ka hath pakadte hue

Devrani:mera hath mat chhuna ek rajputni ko chhune ki qeemat jante ho na?

Wo naqab posh jo devrani ko bandhne aaraha tha peeche hat jata hai

Devrani:chalo me tum k sath jane ko tayyar hu or baldev meri jaan hai wo tumhare sath hai uske lye me bhi khushi khushi mar sakti hu

Tabhi kuch or sainik naqabposhi waha par baldev ko charo ore se moti rassi se jakade le aate hai or ek sainik usko apne sath ghode per bitha leta hai

Sainik:theek hai hum tumhe nahi chhute chalo aajao ghode pe

Devrani:me tujh jaise tuchha k sath sat kar baithu ghode pe apni surat dekhi hai aayne me

Ye sun kar or sainik bhi hasne lagte hai

Devrani:mujhe ek ghoda do

Devrani ko ek ghoda dya jata hai or wo sab chal dete hai

Idhar shamshera apne ghode k paas pahuchta hai or jab tak wo inke paas ata hai ye log nikal jate hai

Shamshera:ye log to
bhut jaldi gayab hogaye kaun the ye log

shamshera apna ghoda paras ki ore ghuma kar apne mahal jata hai


Shamshera:salam ammi

Hooriya:salam beta,bhut der kardi aane me jungle me itna andhere me shikar mat kiya karo mujhe dar laga rahta hai tumhara

Shamshera:ammi jaan aisi koi cheez he nahi bani jo shamshera ko nuksaan pahucha de

Hooriya:han badi baate na karo jao muh hath dho lo me tumhare liye kebab banwaye hai
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Shamshera:aaj to maza aajayega

Shamshera:maa aaj jungle k raaste kuch logo ko dekha jo kisi ka peecha kar rahe the or wo parasi nahi lag rahe the pehanawe se

Hooriya:man me)Kahi wo baldev or devrani to nahi or dushman unka peecha karte hue yaha tak to nahi aagaye,par shamshera ko kaise batau k wo dono pyar karte hai or nahi ..devraj se baat karti hu

Shamshera maa ko nihare ja raha tha

Shamshera:kitni khoobsurat hai

Hooriya hosh me ate hue

Hooriya:ky kya shamshera?

Shamshera:wo maa ye naye kaleen ki baat kar raha tha

Hooriya:acha beta muskura kar bawarchi khana k taraf jane lagti hai
shamshera use kha jane wali nazar se dekh raha rha or uske matakte gaand hijab k upar se kamal dha rahe the
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Ghatrashtra

Senapati:Maharaj hamare sainik unka peecha karte hue paras k seema tak pahuch gaye honge

Rajpal:ye adharmio ki madad devraj kabhi nahi karega wo ye soche k wo paras ja kar bass jayenge hahaha

Senapati:han ho sakta hai

Rajpal:hasi aati hai krodh bhi k bhala koi vyakti k paas uska bhanja jaye or kahe k mujhe apni maa chahiye me use bhaga k le aya hu to kya wo vyakti apne bhanje or behan ka sath denge ?

Senapati:man me)ye pagal to nahi ho gaya hass raha hai k gussa ho raha hai samajh nahi aaraha sala pagal ho gaya hai jab se patni bhagi hai iski

Rajpal:bolo senapati
rajpal madeera peete hue puchta hai

senapati: Nahi maharaj koi bhi vyakti apne behan or bhanje ki jodi ko sahmati nahi de sakta hai

Rajpal:un dono ki chamdi udhed denge hum bass ek baar hamare hath lag jaye


Senapati:hamare sainik use zarur pakad lenge wo din raat kam kar rahe hai aap so jaye ab raat ho gayi hai me bhi jata hu

Senapati rajpal ko uske kaksha me chhor kar bahar jane lagta hai tabhi rani shurushti apna kaksha ka dwar khol kar bahar aati hai

Somnath:ary itni raat me kaha ja rahi maharani

Shurushti:Tumse matlab or me apne ghar me hu apne mahal me hu bahar nahi ja rahi bahar tum jaao abhi

Somnath:nahi itni ban than k nikli ho kahi maharaj k paas to nahi
or somnath shurushti ko aakh marta hai

Shurushti:Kamine apne neech jaati ki neech harkat dikha he di

Somnath ko gussa aajat hai or wo devrani ko pakad kar uske he kaksha me ghus jata hai or fatak se darwaza band kar k maharani shurushti ko deewar se laga kar uske badan se chipak jata hai

Shurushti:chhoro mujhe kamine kutte

somnath sab ansuna kya hue shurushti k gardan par chumte hue apna hath ghagra k upar maharani k gaand ko dabate hue apne land ko shurushti k chut par ragadne lagt hai

shurushti:chhor nahi to tera sar kalam karwa dungi

Somnath jhat se apna dhoti niche karta hai or apna lauda apne harh me liye hilata hai or shurushti ka ek hath pakad kar apna lauda uske hath me deta hai

Shurushti:neech

Somnath:ye neech ka jaisa lauda hai waisa lauda se aaj tak kisi raja ne tumhe choda nahi hoga

ye baat sun kar shurushti sharma jati hai

Somnath aage badh kar blouse k upar se uska doodh pakad kar masalte hue

"ab dekhiye maharani kaise ye neech aapke chut me uch macha deta hai"

shurushti apna hath land se thirak kar chhor deti hai somnath apna hath niche le ja kar ghagra ko utha ta hai or shurushti k ghagra ko kamar tak utha k ghagra k kone ko apne muh me dant se pakad leta hai or apne dono hatho se shurushti ko apne laude k taraf kheech kar ek pair ko utha kar shurushte k chut me apna land ek hath se pakad kar lagata hai or ek karara dhakka marta hai

"haaaaaaaaaye me marr gayi"

"ye le meri maharani lohar ka land"

Somnath or dhakke pe dhakke pele ja raha tha
"uhh aaah nahi somnath ah oh"

"le mera land maharani bhut gaand matka k ja rahi thi na apne gend ko hilaye apne maharaja k paas le mera land "

"kutte aaram se kar me maharani hu koi vaishya nahi"
somnath khade khade pelne lagta hai
pure kaksha me "phach phach"ki aawaz gunz rahi thi ab tak shurushti ka chut bhi paani chhorne lagta hai or ab somnath shurushti k blouse k upar kar uske vaksha ko apne hatho me thame dabata hai

"aadh dheere"

Somnath ab latke hue 48 varshiya bhari mahila jo sirf 5.5 ki thi apne land par tange darwaze k peeche pele ja raha tha

Kuch der pelne k baad shurushti k aakho me aasu aajate hai or apna bhaar pura somnath k upar de kar apni aakhe band kye jhatke sahne lagti hai

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"uh aaah "

"uh ohh aaaah"

"phachh phachh"

Somnath:ye lijiye maharani mera lohe ka land

kuch der or pelne k baad somnath jhadne wala tha
somnath:ary tum so he gayi mere pe ab virodh to nahi kar rahi land lene me maza aa rha hai maharani

shurushti seedha hoti hai or somnath shurushti k hotho ko apne hoth me bhar kar chus kar do teen tagde jhatke maar k apna virya maharani shurushti k chut me he chhor deta hai

"aaaah maharani chus lo apne senapati k laude ka paani"

"aaah senapati somnath tum oh"

Dono ek sath jhadte hai
somnath apna lauda nikal kar apna dhoti pehanta hai

Somnath:ab ap jaa sakti ho maharani rajpal k pas

Shurshti apna blouse pehanti hai or apne palang k paas ja kar ek kapda utha ka apna ghagra utha kar chut par rakh virya ko saaf kar deti hai

"Tum somnath mere sath jabardasti kar k sahi nahi kah rahe ho"

"maharani ab jhut na kaho kaise masti me chud rahi thi abhi abhi ab or natak nahi"

is baat ka shurushti k paas jawab nahi tha somnath apna muh poch kar bahar nikalta hai to dekhta hai dono darban jo mahal k mukhya dwar par pahredari karte hai baith kar apas me baat kar rahe the


sainik:ary yaar hamare rajya me ye pehli ghatna hai k ek maa beta prem karte ho

Dusra sainik:han bhai ye to soch se pare hai apne maa se ek beta kaise prem kar sakta hai or maa bhi apne bete ko kaise ek premi k roop me sweekar kar sakti hai ye baldev ne to bhut maze kye honge rani devrani k sath

Sainik:islye to aaj kal zyada khil rahi thi rani devrani or mujhe lagta hai ye dono paras bhi apne pyas bujhane he gaye the.pure ghatrashtra me thu thu ho rahi hai raj pariwar ki

Ye sab sun raha somnath

"kya chal raha ye sab"

Sainik dono khade ho jate hai

Sainik:ji senapati ji

Senapati:tum dono ko yaha par kam karne k lye rakha gaya hai k gappe marne ?

sainik:hume kshama kar dijiye

Senapati:thek hai khade ho mahal ki nigrani karo

somnath apne senagruh me jo mahal k aage he tha apne kaksha me ja kar so jata hai wo shurushti ko chod kar thak chuka tha use neend aajati hai

Subah hoti hai or ghatrashtra me hungama horaha tha senapati ki neend khulti hai or bahar aakar dekhta hai
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kuch sainik baldev ko rassi se bandhe ghode par laade la rahe the or sath he devrani ek ghode per baithi aarahi thi

Somnath muskurate hue

"shaabash sainiko .."


To be continued
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Somanth:shabash sainiko

Sainik ghode par bandhe baldev ko utarta hai

Somnath:koi jaakar maharaj ko ye samachar de do
somnath muskurate hue baldev ko dekhta hai

Somnath:man me)ye to mere se bhi kamina nikla apni maa ko he fasa k le bhaga tha par humare chungal se baldev kaha bach paoge

Sainik:senapati ji baldev ki rassi khol de kya ?

Somnath:pagal ho gaye ho kya tum jante nahi wo baldev singh hai agar uske haath khul gaye to tum sab bach nahi paoge

Devrani apne ghode se utar kar apne ghunghut ko kheech k apna muh pura dhak leti hai
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Somnath:man me)saali muh dhak k bada devi ban ne ka natak kar rahi hai

Somnath:tumne sirf baldev ko he q bandha sainiko
Sainik:maharaj wo ye hume chhune nahi diye hum bandhte kaise

Devrani:Senapati..mat bhulo k me ab bhi Rani hu or tum baldev ko yuvraj na keh kar galati kar rahe ho

devrani apna pallu ko halka sa utha kar sk hath se pallu pakde kehti hai

Mahal k andar sainik daud kar jata hai

Rajpal:ary tum itni sawere mahal me bhage q aarahe ho

Sainik:'wo maha raja wo yuvraj baldev

Rajpal apni aakhe badi karte hu

Rajpal:kya tum sach kah rahe ho kya wo dono pakde gaye?

Sainik:ji maharaj

Rajpal apne gale me pehne ek moti k haar ko utaar k us sainik ko deta hai

rajpal:ye raha tera inaam

rajpal jaldbazi me mahal k bahar aata hai
jaha senapati or sena k beecho beech baldev ghutno k bal baith tha

Baldev apna sar jhukaye baitha tha uske pure shareer par moti rassi k nisaan pad gaye the

Baldev:pani

Devrani:koi paani laao
mere jigar k lye paani mere laal k lye

Sainik:le aata hu abhi

tabhi rajpal aajata hai

Rajpal:ruk jaao

sab aawaz k taraf nazar ghumate hai or rajpal apne aakho ko badi kar

Rajpal:paani to is kutte ko me pilaunga

Devrani:tum sab ki manavta kaha mar gayi kya yahi dharm seekha hai tum logo ne

dhere dheere log ikatha ho jate hai ye sun kar k baldev or devrani pakde gaye hai

devrani se dekha nahi jata hai or wo pani laane k lye bhagne lagti hai

Rajpal:is baldev ko seedha kar k baandh do or is adharmi devrani ko q khula chhoda hai
is kutiya ko me dekhta hu

senapati:maharaj inhe sainik hamare dar k mare bandhe nahi

Rajpal:q re devrani apna pallu se muh dhak k kyai sabit karna chahti ho

Devrani:suno sab kan khol k tum sab kayar ho me nahi me chahti to tumhare in sainiko ka khatma kar di hoti lekin mujhe apne baldev pe pura bharosa hai dam hai to usse muqabla karo..or me apne pallu se muh dhak kar ye sabit kar rahi hu k me majburan koi bhi kadam uthai par tujh se zyada sharam hai mere andar

Rajpal:badtameez adharmi

Devrani:jo apne patni ko dusre k bistar par bheje wo kya dharmik hota hai logo?

Waha par charo ore ghire log ye sun kar chaunk jate hai or sabka man udas hojata hai

Devrani:Ghatrashtra ki praza ap log ek baar sochna zarur jo stree apne maan maryada ka itna khyal rakhti hai wo aisa kadam q uthai shayad tum sab ko uttar mil jaye


Pure praza me hahakar mach jata hai sab aapas me baat karne lagte hai
"ye to theek keh rahi hai iska muh humne kabhi nahi dekha iske sath zarur kuch galat hua hai'

Devrani:praza sirf ek baat samajh lo ye rajao se ek zyada patni sambhalti nahi to ek se zyada vivah karte q hai

Hungama ko sun andar se jeevika or shurushti bhi aajati hai

Rajpal dekhta hai k log devrani k baat se sahmati dikha rahe hai

Rajpal:Gaur se sun lo sab maine baldev ko pehle he faansi ki saza suna di hai or kal surya uday se pehle isko fansi di jayegi

Devrani:fansi mujhe bhi do baldev ko he q

Rajpal:hasta hua tujhe to jeevan bhar tadpa tadpa k marunha or kaan khol kar sun lo sab devrani ko aajevan karawas ki saza sunate hai hum

Devrani:namard ho tum rajpal

Rajpal gusse se laal ho jata hai or devrani ko pakad kar kheechte hue mahal me le jane lagta hai

Rajpal:chal kutiya teri garmi nikalta hu

Mahal k dwar pe khadi jeevika sab kuch dekh rahi thi rajpal andar devrani ko laakar

Rajpal:bhut garmi thi na tere me sab nikalta hu aaj

Devrani:bass tum se yahi umeed thi rajpal

rajpal gusse se laal ho jata hai or apna hath devrani k gale me daal kar uska gala daba kar pakad leta hai

devrani:ahh chhoro

Jeevika andar aati hai

Jeevika:rajpal basss

Rajpal:kya hua maa

jeevika:tum ek rajput ho stree ko yu peede dete ho kaise raja ho tum
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jeevika ki baat sun kar rajpal apna hath devrani k gardan se hatata hai

Rajpal:maa isne jo galati ki hai uski saza ye kuch bhi nahi

Jeevika:me samajhti hu par tumne inhe saza suna he dya hai is adharmi ko mar kar apna hath ganda na karo tum shayad nahi jante iska har aarop tum per praza k lye kya sandesh jayega?

Rajpal jhat se ek rassi nikal kar devrani ko bandh deta hai or jeevika k sath bahar aajata hai
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Bahar dekhta hai kamla pani leye baldev k paas khadi thi or use peela rahi thi

rajpal jaise he kamla ko rokne k lye jata hai jeevika use hath se ishara karti hai wo ruk jata hai

senapati ab baldev k dono hatho ko bandh khada kar deta hai

Rajpal:q premi baldev bhut patra likhte the kya hua prem ka bhoot nikal gaya ?

Baldev paseene paseene tha or apna sar utha k ghur k dekhta hai rajpal ko

rajpal:senapati koda laaye

Rajpal:abhi utaar dete hai iski bhoot

Rajpal k hath me koda aate he baldev k nange peeth par rajpal kode ki barish kar deta hai

"chatak" chatak"
ki aawaz fiza me gunz rahi thi
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Baldev:ah
apne aakhe band kar apne pita rajpal k har kode ki maar bardasht kar raha tha

Rajpal:muaafi maang lo me marna chhor dunga
Kamla se dekha nahi jata hai
Kamla:muafi maang lo yuvraj baldev

Baldev sher ki trah hunkar marta hai uske jism par laal nishan pad chuke the har jagah

Baldev:Kamla Muaafi q mangu maine koi galati nahi ki prem kya hai

Rajpal:ye le
chatak"

kamla:muaafi maang lo shayd aapki jaan baksh de
or kamla rone lagti hai

Rajpal:Han muaafi mango

Baldev:Kamla maine Devrani se Prem Kya hai Ayyashi nahi

Rajpal:teri ye le
"chatak"

Baldev:mai us baat ka kshama nahi mang sakta jisme me kuch galat nahi kya


Kuch der marne k baad rajpal thak jata hai

Rajpal:senapati ise le jao or karagar me daal do kal ki faansi ki tayyari ki jaye

Ye sun kar Ghatrashtra hil jata hai q k ghatrashta ka eklauta rajkumar jo aage ja kar ghatrashtra ko sambhalta wo aaj faansi k lye bandha khada tha

shurushti khadi sab dekh kar khub maze le rahi thi

Shurushti:maza to bhut aya ye drishya dekh k
shurushti ye sochte hue halka muskurati hai


Baldev ko sainik niche utarte hai or use senagruh k paas karagar me le ja kar bandh dete hai or faansi ki tayyari karte hai

Rajpal aakar apne kaksha me baith kar sochne lagta hai kaise uske jeevan me ye sab hua

tabhi shurushti aajati hai or uske nirnay ko sahi bata kar rajpal ko samjhati hai


PARAS

Hooriya pareshan thi or apne bete ko nahi bata kar devraj se baat karne ka faisla karti hai

Hooriya devraj ko apne dasi se keh kar bulwati hai

Devraj:Ji mallika e jahan aapne yaad kiya

Hooriya:aaye devraj ji

Devraj:kahiye

Hooriya:Aapse ek guzarish thi

Devraj:aisi kya baat hai jo Mallika jahan aadhe jahan k malkin ko guzarish karni pade

Hooriya:dekhiye devraj ji mujhe nahi pata k aap us din k baad devrani ko dekhna chahte hai ya nahi or mujhe lagta hai koi bhi bhai apne bahan ki aisi harkat par aisa he karega

Ye baat sun kar devraj sharm se apna sar niche jhuka leta hai

Devraj:Ji wo shayad ab dimag se pagal hai

Hooriya:jo bhi hai wo to hai aapki behan he or shamshera keh raha tha k kuch logo ko kisi ka peecha karte hue dekha or
mujhe pura yaqeen hai k us din baldev or devrani par he hamla hua ho or wo khatre me hai

Devraj:wo mere lye mar gayi hai

Hooriya:devraj ji bhale se wo aap k lye mar gayi hai par uske gunah ki saza uski jaan to nahi

Devraj chup chap khamoshi se sunta rahta hai

Hooriya:uski jaan chali jayegi to kya hum sab ko acha lagega ..me chahti hu k aap sultan k sath jaye or uski jaan ki hifazat kare


Devraj:Mallika jahan ye aap keh rahi hai jise pure jahan me mazhabi or har gunaah har paap se mahfooz stree mana jata hai aap to updesh deti ho sabko to kya jo devrani ki wo sahi tha?

Hooriya:Me unka hargiz sath nahi de rahi hu jo wo kiye hai par kya hum uske jaan lene wale kaun hote hai beshaq wo dono jahannam k aag me jalenge par iska faisla hum nahi khuda karega


Devraj:theek hai to aap chahti kya hai

tabhi samne se Sultan meer wahid andar aate hai

Sultan:aapne bulaya mallika e jahan or hum chale aaye

Hooriya muskurate hue
"aayiye mere sartaz mere sultan"

sultan:Kya baate chal rahi hai

Hooriya:sultan baldev or devrani khatre me hai or mujhe lagta hai k aapko kuberi ka khazana dilwane me baldev he madad kar sakta hai

Sultan:hmm sahi kah rahi ho wo dilli k badshah shahzeb na hum se pehle hath maar le

Hooriya:jaha tak me suni hu Shahzeb ghatrashtra k seema tak pahuch gaya hai

Sultan muskurate hue
"aapko bhut khabar hone lagi dunya ki jasusi bhi shuru kar di kya mohtarma"

hooriya:ji nahi sultan(muskura k)jiska beta shamshera jaisa jasus ho use ye baat jan ne k lye jasusi nahi karni padti

Sultan:aap to boot bane khade hai devraj ji aapka kya kehna hai

Devraj:wo

Hooriya:sultan wo tayyar hai

Sultan:to fir hum aaj he niklenge kal subah tak hum Ghatrashtra honge

Devraj:avashya sultan shamshera aajaye fir

Sultan:ary mera beta kabhi jung k lye na nahi kahega hum chale bhi gaye to wo sunte he k uske abbu jung par gaye hai wo aajayega

Hooriya:bass aapki he paidaish hai zindagi bhar aapne jung ladi or bhi yahi karega

Devraj:theek hai sultan theek hai mallika ijazat chahta hu

Devraj jata hai tayyri karne ghatrashtra nikalne ki

kuch der me shamshera bhi aajata hai or wo is baat se khush ho jata hai k wo jung per ja raha hai

kuch der me sena ekatrit karne k baad sultan shamshera or devaj ekathe hote hai

Sultan:hamari tadad kya hai?
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Devraj:Hum pachas hazar(50,000) sainiko k sath aakaraman karenge

Sultan:hmm koi kami ho to bataye hum arab se bulwa lenge

Devraj:nahi sultan hamare sainik kuch devgadh me bhi judenge yaha se hum devgadh hote hue jayenge

Shamshera:Hume kuberi lootna hai kisi bhi haal me chahe hume lakho ki fauz le jani pade

Devraj:han yuvraj hum do tukdi me batenge ek tukdi ghatrashtra per hamla karegi or dusri tukdi kuberi per ek sath hamle k wajah se ye dono ek dusre ko samarthan karne layak nahi rahenge or koi shadyantra nahi ban sakega hum se yudha jeetne ka

Shamshera:wah

Devraj:Jeet hume milti hai jab shatru shadyantra karna chhor de or yudha ladne ka hausla past ho jaye

Sultan:tum sahi me bhut qabil ho raja devraj ji

shamshera:par abbu hum ghatrashtra par hamla q karenge? or ghatrashtra par to Dilli k badshah shahzeb hamla karne wala hai wo seema tak pahuch gaya hai

Devraj or sultan haste hai

Sultan:beta jasusi seekh li par jung ladna devraj se seekh lo

devraj:yuvraj shamshera hum ghatrashtra vasio per hamla nahi karenge unke sainiko or waha pehle se maujud Shahzeb ki sena par hamla karenge

Shamshera:oh me to socha he nahi to islye hum do hisso me hamla karenge

Sultan:han beta kuberi ka khazana mera khwab hai or mai nahi chahta koi teesra humari jung ka fayda utha kar khazana loot kar chale jaye

Teeno dopahar ka khana kha kar sainiko ko jama kar apne ghode pe sawar ho jate hai

Hooriya:aap sab ko khuda salamat rakhe

Devraj:hum jald lautenge

Shamshera:salam ammi jaan apna khyal rakhe

Sultan:Jaan baaki rahe to fir milenge mallika

Hooriya:khuda kare meri umar aapko lag jaye
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Hooriya:devraj ji meri iltiza hai apni behan se narmiyat se pesh aaye usne shadi k baad bas dukh dekha hai shayad wo aapse kabhi nahi kah paye

Sab ghode ko devgadh ki taraf ghumate hai

devraj:chalo sainiko

Ek sainik zor se Paras k jhande ko lahrate hue nara lagata hai or sab dheere dheere apne ghode k sath aage badhte hai


Ghatrashtra


Sham ho gayi thi or kal subah Baldev ko fansi dene jane ki tayyari ho rahi thi wahi ghatrashtra k seema par somnath ne achi khasi sena pahredari k lye rakhi thi jo raat bhar seema par hote

Ghatrashtra seema par do sainik tahal rahe the
sainik 1 : Bhai ye hamari rato ki neend humne kharab ki par sala ye Badshah Shahzeb ka ata pata nahi

Sainik2:mujhe nahi lagta k itna bada raja hamare rajya par hamla karega kuberi me to khazana bhi hai yaha kya hai

Sainik1:han shayad tum theek kahte ho ye raja or yuvraj to alag he uljhe hue hai Maa beta prem kahani me

or dono hasne lagte hai

Ye dono anjan theek inke peeche ghatrashtra k pahado par Badshah shahzeb apne sena ko le kar khada tha

Shahzeb:bhaio hum ghatrashtra k seema par hai or hum us pahad k samne khade hai jise hara kar hum ghatrashtra ko hara payenge kai badshah is pahad ko paar nahi kar sake par ?

Sainik:hum kareng..hum karenge ..

Shahzeb:aap sab k josh e jazba ko salam dosto hum 25000 hai hum ghatrashtra ko raund kar rakh denge or suna hai Raja ratan yahi hai hume use bhi kuberi lete hue chalenge..to chalo kal subah hum Ghatrashtra fateh kare

Sainik sab hunkar bharte hai


shahzeb is baat se anjan tha k raja ratan wapas kubri chala gaya hai

dilli ki badshah apne sena k sath pahad per chadhai karne lagta hai or subah sawere ghatrashtra par hamla karne ko tayyar tha

Ghatrashtra k mahal me sannata chhaya hua tha

raat ka bhojan bana kar kamla jane lagti hai par uska dill nahi manta or wo vaidh ji k yaha ruk jati hai

jeevika ek thali le kar rajpal k kaksha me jati hai jaha devrani bandhi thi wo uska hath pair khol kar usko khana deti hai

Jeevika:ye le kha le

Devrani:rehne dijiye maa ji mere baldev ko kal subah fannsi hai or me kha lu

jeevika:fasi wo bhi tere karan agar tu samajhdari dikhati to

Devrani:samajhdari dikhati to kabhi rajpal jaise vyakti se vivah nhi karti aap stree ho kar nahi samjhi to rajpal kya samjhega


tabhi shurushti or rajpal aajate hai

Shurushti:isko samjhane se koi feyda nahi maaji ye charitraheen hamari baato ko raj gharane ki izzat ko kabhi nahi samajh payi

rajpal:maa aap jaao apne kaksha me

Rajpal:shurushti aap bhi jao subah se aap log aaram nahi kye

Rajpal ja kar kaksha ka darwaza band kar deta hai

Rajpal:dekho devrani me tumhe ek mauqa deta hu agar tum meri baat maan li to tumhara baldev fansi per latakne se bach jayega

Devrani:kya chahte ho tum
devrani thoda soch kar kahti hai

Rajpal:tumhe Ratan ko khush karna padega or kshama mangna padega hum sab se or aaj k baad tum baldev se jeevan bhar baat nahi karogi

Devrani aav dekhti hai na taav or raja rajpal
k girebaan pakad kar rajpal k muh per thuk deti hai

Devrani:thu hai tere jeevan per rajpal kaise pati ho apni patni ka sauda karte hue sharm nahi aai or me ratan singh k pas jane se acha mar jana pasand karungi

Rajpal:jab apne bete se muh kala ki to sharm nahi aayi

Devrani:Baldev mera pyar hai tumne kab mujhe ek patni ka samman or pyar dya raja rajpal? tumhe to chullu bhar pani me doob marna chahiye

Rajpal:tujhme itni garmi thi to kisi or se nikalwa leti .abhi teri garmi shant karta hu

Rajpal aage badh kar dabochne ki koshish karta hai

Devrani:mujhe chhuna mat rajpal
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rajpal devrani k jaangh par hath rakhta hai

devrani dhakka deti hai

devrani:kameen..mujhe chhuna mat kaha na mujh par sirf mere baldev ka haq hai..

Rajpal gusse se uska hath marod kar

Rajpal:teri to garmi aisi nikalunga bas subah baldev ko fansi ho jaye

Devrani:me jaan de dungi agar kisi ne mere sath jabardasti karne ki koshish ki

rajpal fir se devrani ko usi rassi se lapet k zor se bandhta hai

Rajpal:ab idhar bandhi baithi reh tere premi ki chamdiya udher k ata hu

Rajpal mahal se nikal kar ata hai raat me shant mahaul me aaaj kuch zyada shanti thi pura ghatrashtra aaj so nahi pa raha tha

Rajpal karagar me jata hai jaha baldev bandha hua tha

Rajpal sainik se

"mera koda laao aaj ise ahsaas dilaau k aisa apradh karne ka anjam kya hota hai"

sainik rajpal ko koda la kar deta hai or chala jata hai karagar me sirf baldev or rajpal the baldev maar kha kar uske shareer ko thakan mehsus hui or uski aakh lag jati hai

Rajpal ek koda sote hue baldev ko marta hai

Baldev:aaaaaah


Rajpal:kamine hum sab ki neend haram kar tu so raha hai

Rajpal lagatar kode barsane lagta hai

Rajpal:teri himmat kaise hui ye kadam uthane ki

baldev se ab raha nahi jata hai

Baldev:jab prem hota hai to koi ghabrata nahi

Rajpal:kameene mene tujhe paida kar k galati kar diya

Baldev:sahi kya nahi to me meri pyari premika devrani k jeevan ka kaise theek kar pata

Rajpal:tumhari ye himmat

rapal or kode barsane lagta hai

Baldev:aaaah himmat ki baat kya batau Devrani jaisi stree ko tum chhor k idhar udhar muh marte ho hahaha

Rajpal or kode barsata hai

Baldev:maar lo mujhe par jo mai tumhare
patni k sath maze kya ..kya batau kya maal hai raat bhar mere goad me soti thi aah uske gaddedar jism bina vastra k ah wo
to apsara hai

Rajpal or gussa hota hai or baldev ko lagatar kode se marte rehta hai
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Baldev:mahraj thak gaye kya or maro ..par devrani k bhari mansal shareer ko masalne me jo maza hai wo or kisi me nahi :.or tumhari patni devrani bhi subah tak mere goad me baithi rehti thi ab kya batau


Rajpal baldev ki baat sun kar buri tarah sharma jata hai q k tha to aakhir uska beta he

wo koda ko fekta hai

Rajpal:kar liye jo karna tha ab subah narak me pahuchne k lye tayyar raho

Baldev muskurata hai
rajpal wapa mahal aajata hai

aise he gahmagahmi me raat beet rahi thi or aane wale sawere ka soch kar ghatrashtra k har ek nagri ka dill dahal ja raha tha ghatrashtra aaj pehli baar jaag raha tha.

To be continued
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Ghatrashtra


Andhera dheere dheere chhat raha tha or ghatrashtra k dharti par pehli baar kisi ka aakaraman hone wala tha jis dharti per aaj tak koi nahi pahuch paya or Ghatrashtra jo shanti ka prateek tha wo aaj sankat me tha

Badshah shahzeb apne sainiko k sath pahad per chadhai ki or aadhi raat he wo pahad k choti par pahuch gaya tha or shahzeb ne badi chaturai se apne 25000 sainiko me se 15000 sainik ko apne mantri k sath Kuberi rawana kar deta hai
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Abhi puri trah se andhera chhata nahi tha or sab ghatrashtra k seeme me pravesh kar chuke the

Shahzeb:Thahar jao sab yaha.hum ab ghatrashtra k seema me hai yaha se hume sujh bujh se aage badhna hai,aaj sham tak hum is rajpal ko sabak sikha kar Kuberi hamare laskar jo kuberi par fateh kar li hogi waha ja kar kuberi ko lootenge..sab tayyar?

Sainik:hum tayyar hai jahapanah

Tabhi sabka dhyan ek ped ki ore jata hai jiski dali hil rahi thi jaise shahzeb dekhta hai uspe se ek sainik kood kar bhag kar ghode par biath jata hai

Shahzeb:teer se chhalli kar do wo Ghatrashtra ka jasoos hai

Teerandaz apne teer ki bauchhar kardete hai or wo ghudsawar ko kai teer uske peeth par lagte hai par wo rukta nahi or mahal ki ore jate rehta hai


Shahzeb:Chalo ye ja kar khabar pahuchayega raja rajpal ko k hum aagaye hai hahahahaha


Ye sab pahad k choti par pahuch chuke Shamshera or sultan k sath devraj bhi sun rahe the Badshah shahzeb is baat se anjan tha k theek uske peeche Sultan meer wahid Paras se sena liye khade hai

Shamshera aahista se

Shamshera:Ishhhh Koi aawaz nahi karega sab apne ghodo ko peeche le chalo bina aawaz kya hamare dushman hamare niche hai

shahzeb niche khada apne sainiko ko batata hai k ghatrashtra or kuberi ko jeetna uske lye kitna aham hai or thodi der me sab tayyar ho jate hai Ghatrashtra per hamla karne k lye

Shahzeb:Fateh hamari hai
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Sainik:fateh hamari hai

Shahzeb apne 10,000 sainiko ko le kar ghatrashtra k mahal ki ore apne sainiko k sath jane lagta hai


Idhar apne sena ko roke sultan meer wahid khade the

Sultan:humse bhul ho gayi Devraj

Devraj:kya bhul sultan hum to samay par pahuch gaye hai or hum jab chahe aakaraman kar sakte hai

Sultan,devraj ji shayad aapne Shahzeb ki fauz ko nahi dekha hai hume khabar thi k wo 25000 fauz le kar aaraha hai par ye uska aadha bhi nahi tha

Devraj:aapne sahi kaha sultan ye baat pr mera dhyan nahi gaya
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Sultan,devraj ji ye baat saaf hai k Badshah shahzeb ne apni aadhi se zyada fauz Kuberi bhej dya hai lootne k lye

Devraj:kya

Sultan:han

shamshera:par abba huzur aise me to hum kuberi ka khazana kho denge or wo loot k dilli le gaye honge jab tak hum yaha ka kam kar k kuberi pahuchenge

Sultan:Han beta

Devraj:ghabraye nahi sultan ab hume do fauz se nahi char fauz se ek sath samay ladna hoga

Sultan:par kaise devraj ji

Devraj:sainikko ab dheere dheere niche utaro ..Sultan ji Hum bhi apne aadhe sainik kuberi bhej denge jis se k kuberi rajya ko wo loot k bhag na sake
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Sultan:par wo to nikal gaye hai ab pata nahi kaha tak pahuche hai shahzeb k fauz

Devraj:sultan hum unke fauz k muqable do gune zyada hai agar wo hum se pehle loot le fir bhi hum unhe kuberi se bahar jane nahi denge

Sultan:par baldev or devrani ka kuch ata pata nahi hai k wo kaha hai..Hooriya ne kaha tha k shamshera ne dekha tha peecha karte hue unka

Shamshera:main dekha to tha kuch logo ko ek ghode ka peecha karte hue par me dekh nahi paya kaun the ,kya wo baldev tha?


Sultan:han Baldev or behan devrani aai thi

Shamshera:kya? par wo chale q gaye jab aaye the to

Devraj:chhoro yuvraj abhi hume kya karna hai ye sochte hai
devraj apne behan or bhanje ka sun kar jhinjhila jata hai

Devraj:hum me se kisi na kisi ko sena k sath kuberi jana hoga

Shamshera:me to ye kahunga abba huzur k aap raja devraj k sath kuberi chale jaye q k kuberi lootna hamare liye zyada zaruri hai

Sultan:par shahzade aap akele kaise samna karenge shahzeb ka wo jung jeetne k lye kisi bhi hadd tak ja sakta hai

Shamshera:aap bharosha rakhe fateh hamari hogi

Devraj:theek kah rahe ho yuvraj sultan ko hum akela na to ghatrashtra rakh sakte hai na waha bhej sakte hai

Sultan:han devraj aaj kal tabyat nasaz rahti hai or kabhi kabhi bhulne bhi laga hu uske alawa aaj bhi talwar me dhar wahi hai hamare

Devraj:ji aap ab bhi 100 k barabar hai sultan par hum koi jokhim nahi le sakte ,aap hamare sath kuberi chaliye

Shamshera:aap log jaye or ye jung mujh per chhor dijiye hum sambhal lenge is dilli k shahzeb ko

Devraj:sainiko q k badshah shahzeb apne sainik ko Kuberi bhej dya hai islye hum aadhe sainik ko yahi rakhenge or aadhe mere or sultan k sath kuberi jayenge


Kuch der me he aadhe sainik bant jate hai or sab ab tak pahad se niche aachuke the

Devraj:yaha ka kaman shahzade shamshera sambhalenge ,ghabrana nahi Shahzeb is baar bach k nahi jana chahiye

Shamshera:devraj ji aapka dushman hamara dushman hai aap fikr na kare Badshah shahzeb is baar mere hatho bachega nahi

Devraj:theek hai yuvraj aap k bharose me apna shatru chhor raha hu

Sultan or devraj 25000 fauz le kar kuberi ki ore chal dete hai or shamshera apne 25000 fauz k sath

Shamshera:sathio abhi hum hamla nahi karenge

sainik 1:Q shahzade hume inke peeche he ja kar inhe sabak sikhana tha

Shamshera:ab ye ja rahe hai ghatrashta k sainiko se ladenge or jaise he ye Shahzeb ghatrashtra apna jhanda lahrayega hum aakaraman kar denge .is se fayda ye hoga k hum Sirf Dilli se aaye fauz se ladenge or ghatrashtra se hume nahi ladna hoga..islye thoda aaram kar lo

Sainik2:par shahzade sultan ne to kuch or kaha tha

Shamshera:uff ab aaram karne kah raha hai badshah to bhi manzoor nahi..sab apne ghodo se utar kar baith jao or khao peeo aaram karo

sab sainik hasne lagte hai or apne ghode se utar kar baith jate hai koi let jata hai

Shamshera bhi paas k ek pathhar par ja kar baith jata hai or sochne lagta hai

Shamshera:man me)Agar ammi theek thi to ye log kaun the jo inko pakadna chahte the or devraj kyu apne behan k sasural par hamla karne k lye humare sath nahi aya or na he kaha k unke pariwar ko nuksan na ho..or mere baldev kehne par wo baat palat rahe the ..iska matlab ya to wo log rajya me nahi hai ya to unke khilaf ho gaye hai devraj ji

Ye sab sochte hue shamshera jhat se uth ta hai

Shamshera:chalo ek baar fir se jasusi ki jaye ghatrashtra ki


Shamshera:ae idhar aao

shamshera apna mukut utarta hai

"suno mujhe pagdi bandhne me madad karo"

Sainik:par kyu shahzade aap jung me hai pagdi se hifazat nahi ho payegi

shamshera:bade bhole ho ya mujhe samajhte ho..me islye uatara hu taqe mujhe koi pehchan nahi paye me Ghatrashtra ho kar aata hu,jayza le kar

Sainik:par apka akela jana khatre se khali nahi shahzade ye jasusi ka waqt nahi hai aap jung e maidan me hai

Shamshera:shamshera ko talwar chhu le aisa ho nahi sakta hai
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shamshera apna ghode per baith

shamshera:mere aane tak koi hilna nahi bhale se peeche ho jana par aage nahi

sainik muh dekhte rehte hai or Shamshera ghoda k sath hawa se baate karne lag jata hai


Surya ki pehli kiran khil rahi thi or raat bhar gamheen mahaul k baad subah bhi shant tha ,pura raat koi so nahi saka

Subah raja rajpal mahal se bahar ata hai dekhta hai sainik fansi ki tayyari kar rahe the
kuch der me pura ghatrashtra dheere dheere fansi dene wale sthan par ikatha ho jata hai

Senapati:Sainiko jao baldev ko le aao

Sainik ja kar baldev ko le aate hai or faasi k takht par khada kar k bandh dete hai

mahal se jeevika or shurushti aajati hai sath he sath raat bhar kamla jo vaidh ji k yaha jaag rahi thi wo bhi rote hue aati

pure samaj k samne se baldev ko fansi dene ki tayyari chalu thi or sab k aakho me aasu the ghatrashtra ka bhavishya jo tha aaj wo hamesha k lye khatam hone wala tha
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andar devrani jo rassi se bandhi thi apna haal ro ro kar kharab kar li thi raat bhar me or apne aakhe band kye raat bhar bhagwan se prathna kar rahi thi

Devrani:man me)bhagwan agar aaj mere baldev ko kuch ho gaya to mera tujh se vishwas uth jayega or tera naam apne jeevan me kabhi nahi lungi ,bhagwan mere baldev ko bacha le bhale tu meri bali le le

Rajpal k dono aakho ki laali bata rahi rhi thi k wo aaj apne putra ko fansi par chadhane k lye aatur tha

Senapati:maharaj ab surya uday hone wala hai ..aapki aagya ho to faansi di jaye

Rajpal:ha..
jaise he kehta hai log hahakar macha dete hai or logo ki shor gul me ek ghode k aane ki aahat aati hai or wo ghode per se ek sainik girta hai jiske pure badan per teer lage the

sainik:maharaj ..

Senapati or rajpal daud kar jate hai sainik k paas

Senapati:bolo kaun kya tumhare sath aisa

Sainik:maharaj..wo Dill ka shahzeb Ghatrashtra me ghus aya hai or kabhi bhi hamla kar sakta hai
Ye keh kar sainik apna dam tod deta hai

Rajpal:senapati sainiko ko ektatrit karo ghatrashtra khatre me hai

Senapati:sainiko .. Ghatraashtra me hamare shatru dilli k badshah shazeb kabhi bhi hamla kar sakte hai ..ghatrashtra k logo aap sab se anurodh hai k aap sab hamara sahyog de..

To be continued
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Ghatrashtra ka sainik marte dam tak apne rashtra k hit me kam karte hue ghatrashtra vasio ko shahzeb k aakaraman karne ki baat keh deta hai or pure ghatrashtra me halchal mach jati hai log baldev ko bhul jate hai senapati logo ko bhagte daudte dekh sab ko Ghatrashtra k sainiko ka saath dene k lye kehta hai

Senapati:budhe or bache ko kripya kar k surakshit sthano par rakhe ,
Maharaj ab is baldev ka kya kare

Rajpal:Pehle hume Shahzeb se nipatna hai or rahi baat baldev ki to me ise shahzeb k sath he apne talwar se khatam kar dunga tum sab jao or mahal k charo ore sainik ko tayyar karo

Senapati:jaisi aapki ichha Maharaj

Senapati:is sainik k balidan vyarth nahi jani chahiye hum sab ko shahzeb ko kisi haal me rokna hai

Sainik apne bhala talwar or teerandaz apne ban or teer k sath mahal k charo ore gherao kar lete hai
Maharani jeevika or shurushti mahal k andar jati jai

Jeevika:bahu mahal ka har darwaza or khidki laga do

Shurushti:ji maa ji

Jeevika:ye sab Devrani k paap ka fal hai jo humare ghatrashtra me aaj aisi museebat aati hai

Kamla:radha tum ja kar peeche ka dwar band kr dyo me khidkiya lagati hu

Jeevika:ye Badshah shahzeb jab dilli per aakaraman kya tha kai varsh pehle to waha k har stree ko inke sainiko ne utha liya tha

Shurushti:Maa ji mujhe bhut darr lag raha hai

Jeevika,darne ki zarurat nahi hum unse yudha karenge or agar kuch aisa hua bahu to hum tehkhane k raste se mahal k bahar nikal jayenge

Shurushti:wo kaha hai

Jeevika:mere kaksha me hai

Shurushti:theek hai par mujhe to uska pata nahi tha

Jeevika:bahu rajpal k pita ne gupt rakha sab hum is raaste se seedha ghatrashtra k seema tak pahuch sakte hai zameen k andar he andar

Shurushti:Bhagwan na kare aisa kuch ho

Kamla or shurushti mahal k har khidki or darwaza band kar deti hai

Bahar ka nazara aisa tha k rajpal or somnath sainiko k sath Shahzeb k aane ki pratiksha kar rahe the or sainik sab tayyar the

somnath:sainiko sab tayyar ?

Sainik:Han hum tayyar hai

Somnath,darne ki zarurat nahi mere bahadur sainiko aaj tak ghatrashtra par koi nahi kabza kar saka ye shahzeb ko bhi khali hath laut kar dill jana hoga

Rajpal:Sainiko hamari maa ghatrashtra per ye videshi na kal kabza kar paye the na aaj kar payenge or shahzeb is baar dilli zinda nahi jayega

Sainik:han shahzeb zinda nahi jayega

Ab shant mahaul tha Baldev ye sab dekh raha rha uske hath pair ab bhi bandhe the

Mahal me kamla devrani k paas jati hai jo rajpal k kaksha me bandhi thi kamla devrani k muh pr bandha kapde ko kholti hai

Kamla:chup karo maharani

Devrani:kya chup karu jab mera premi mere prem me apna jaan de dya faansi per latak gaya mera zinda reh k kya fayda mujhe bhi maar do kamla ..gala ghot do mera

Devrani fafak fafak kar ro padti hai

Kamla k aakho me aasu aajata hai

Kamla:aisa nahi kehte maharani bhagwan bhut bada hai usne tumhari sun li baldev ka faasi tal gaya hai

Devrani ye sunte he aisa mehshus karti hai jaise uske shareer se ruh nikal gayi thi par fir se aagayi ho

Devrani:kya tum sach keh rahi ho kamla

Kamla:han par buri khabar ye hai k Dilli k raja hum par aakaraman kar sakte hai kisi bhi kshan

Devrani:kya ..

kamla:han Maharani or uske sena jitni krurta karti hai wo to janti ho shahzeb khud jo rajya loot ta hai us rajya k ranio ko apne harem me rakh leta hai

Devrani:hume kya karna chahiye kamla

Kamla:me wahi batane aai hu aapko yaha ek rasta hai maharani jeevika k kaksha me jo hume zameen k bhetar se he ghatrashtra k seema tak pahucha degi

Devrani:samajh nahi ata shahzeb k hamle ka me dhanyawad kahu ya ..

Kamla:bass jo hota hai ache k lye hota hai

Devrani:tumne dekha mere baldev ko kaisa hai
Kamla:wo theek hai us par bhut zulm kya maharaj ne.aap dono ko itne bade sansar me kahi ja kar bass jana tha

Devrani:me bhagne walo me se nahi ab mujhe mera haq chahiye or yahi ghatrashtra me chahiye ..mere or baldev ka rishta yahi shuru hua tha kamla hamari yade yaha se judi hai hume kahi or nahi jana


Kamla:kya bachpana hai..khair baad ki baat baad me pehle hume baldev ko chhurana hoga

Devrani:par kaise

Kamla:wo me dekh lungi bass ab aap rona band kar do or sahi samay par yaha se nikal jana baldev k sath

Bahar Sena shahzeb ki sena ki pratiksha me khadi thi or tabhi hawa jo tez chal rahi thi usme dhul udne lage or ghodo ki chalne ki aawaz k sath ghodo ki hihyane ki aawaz aane lagi sab ki nazar saamne jati hai door dilli k sainik ghatrashtra ki ore badh rahe the
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Somnath:wo aagaye hai maharaj

Rajpal:aane do wapas nahi ja paye
Rajpal apna talwar rakh kar teer kaman utha leta hai

Somnath:teerandaaz aage ho jao..Ghudsawar peeche tayyar rehna hai

Jaise jaise Shahzeb ki fauz aage aarahi thi unke tadad dekh kar sainik apas me baat karne lagte hai

Somnath:Chup karo sainiko himmat mat haaro ..yudha sena se nahi himmat se jeeti jati hai or hum unse ginti me kam hai to kya hua hum ek unke 10 k barabar hai..jai bhawani

Sainik:jai bhawani

Somnath aakar rajpal se puchta hai dheere se

Somnath:maharaj kya hume Kuberi se koi madad mil sakti hai abhi?

Rajpal:chinta nahi karo bhale he ratan singh gusse me gaya hai yaha se mujhe vishwas hai wo hamari madad karne k lye zarur sena bhejega

Somnath:to fir hume apna dut bhej dena chahiye

rajpal:humne pehle he apna dut bhej dya hai kuberi

Somnath:wah ye aapne acha kya jab tak hume kuberi se madad nahi mil jati tab tak to hum in shahzeb ki sena ko hum sambhal lenge

Shahzeb ab theek mahal k samne aakar rukta hai

Shahzeb:fauzio ab hum inhe masal k rakh denge sab hamla karne k lye tayyar?

Sainik:hum tayyar hai
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Shahzeb:yalgaar ho

Shahzeb k sainik aawaz karte hue mahal ki ore ghodo ko bahgate hai

Idhar
somnath:Teerandaz aakaraman

teero ki bauchar kar di jati hai jo kai shahzeb k sainiko ko ghode se niche gira rahi thi


somnath:Ghudsawar aage badho teerandaz hath me bhala uthao

Dill k sena samne or mahal k taraf se Ghatrashtra ki sena dono apne ghodo ko tezi se bhaga rahe the or kuch he palo me dono aapas me mil jate hai or shuru ho jata hai maar kaat dono taraf se sainik ek dusre par hamla kar rahe the or maar rahe the
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Shahzeb piche khada dekh raha tha usne bade chaturai se apne aadhi sena ko he pehle bheja tha ladai k lye uski aadhi sena ab bhi peeche thi

Shahzeb:bhaio ab ye aag k golo se mahal k deewal ko chhalli kar do

Shahzeb ki sena aag k golo ko topo me laga kar marna shuru kar dete hai jo sidha rajpal k mahal k bahari deewaro per ja kar gir rahe the

Somnath:ye kya ye shahzeb ne apni fauz puri nahi bheji thi

Baldev ab bhi bandha hua khada tha baldev k sabr ka bandh toot jata hai

Baldev:somnath wo shahzeb hai usko harana aaasan nahi mujhe khol do nahi to tum sab ki neeti k wajah se pure ghatrashtra ko bhugatna padega

Rajpal:somnath ise keh do aj iska antim din hai or apna paapi muh na khole

Somnath:Hume hamara kaam karne do baldev nahi to majburan tumhare muh ko bhi bandhna hoga

Somnath:sainiko shahzeb k sainik peeche bhi hai unko muh tod jawab do gole maro un par

teerandaz apne teer kaman chhor topo me golo me aag laga kar shahzeb ki kheme me marne lagte hai ab aasman me din me raat ka drishya tha .mahal k deewaro per jaise he aag k gole lagte or bahar sainiko k cheekh kar marne ki aawaz sunte ghatrashtra k ghar ghar me sab k shareer kanp uth te

Udhar Shamshera Bhi shahzeb k sena k piche piche Mahal tak aajata hai or mahal k paas aakar apna rasta badal leta hai q k shamshera pehle bhi Ghatrashtra aachuka tha wo gali gali janta tha or kisi bhi trah se wo Ghatrashtra k sainik k rup me ghatrashtra me ghus jata hai shamshera ko itni suni ghatrashtra ki gao or galiya kabhi nahi lagi jitni aaj thi wo mahal k kareeb aakar apne ghode ko mahal k piche bandh deta hai or apne hath me talwar liye jaha par yudha chal rahi thi waha jata hai door se use baldev bandha hua dikhta hai or niche rajpal or somnath apne mantrio k sath yudha ki ranneeti par kaam kar rahe the

Shamshera dekhta hai mahal k samne maidan me so guto ki bhidant ho rahi hai shamshera muskurate hue

Shamshera:Shahzeb to bhari pad raha hai ghatrashtra par dekhte hai mazedar hone wala hai
shahzeb ye keh kar apna talwar utha kar bhagte hue Rajpal or somnath ki ore jata hai
"jai ghatrashtra jai bhawani"

somnath dekhta hai k ye kaun sainik peeche chhut gaya tha
Somnath.. kaun ho or ab ja kar tumhe sujh raha hai hum par aakaraman ho gaya hai

Shamshera samajh jata hai huliye se k yahi senapati hai or wo rajpal hai

Shamshera:senapati ji hum kisan hai par hamare pita ek yodha the jo raja rajpal k pita ka sath jeevan bhar diye hum se raha nahi gaya to hum apne pita ka talwar or poshak pehin aagye ..kucho galat kye kya

Shamshera badi hoshiyari se apne bhasa badal kar somnath or rajpal ko chakma de deta hai

Rajpal:bas ab puri ramkahani na sunao sainiko k sath jud jao

Somnath:suno tum un teerandazo k sath ruko jab hum kahe to ran me jana

Shamshera hath jod kar
"jo aagaya maharaj"
shamshera ki is baat ko baldev bhi dekh raha tha or shamshera sena ki ore jate hue baldev ko dekhta hai or baldev ko dekh aakh maar deta hai

Baldev:man me)bahurupiya Shamshera
or uske chehre per ek muskan aajati hai

Yudhha shuru tha or shahzeb ki sena ghatrashtra ki sena par bhari pad rahi thi ab dopahar ho gaya tha

Somnath:maharaj ab hamare sainik ran me bhut kam hai ab hume jana hoga

Somnath:Jitne sainik hai kaan khol kar sun lo hum mar jayenge lekin shahzeb ko kabhi ghatrashtra pr kabza nahi karne denge

Rajpal or somnath baaki sainiko ko tayyar kar ghodo pe sawar ho kar ran bhumi me jane lagte hai

Somnath:hum shahzeb ki sainiko k maut k ghat utar denge

sab sainik rajpal or somnath k peeche jane lagte hai or shamshera apne ghode ko rajpal ki sena k sath judta hai or jab dekhta hai rajpal or somnath yudha shuru kar diye apne ghode ko chhor daud kar baldev ki ore aaata hai
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rajpal or somnath apne talwar kala ka acha pradarshan karte hai or shahzeb k sena me hadkamp mach jati hai

Shahzeb:peeche mat hato bhaio

shahzeb ki sena apne badshah ki baat sun kar dat kar samna karne lagte hai

shahzeb ab aage aakar apne aakhiri daste k sath rajpal or somnath k sainiko k sath ladne lagte hai

Kuch der me he ghatrashtra ki sena bhut kam ho jati or wo bhagne lagti hai or shahzeb ki sena unko khadedte hue mahal ki ore badhne lagte hai

saiinik:bhago hum sab maare jayenge

Rajpal:bhago mat sainiko apni aakhiri saans tak lado

somnath:maharaj ab hamara jeetna mushkil hai aap tehkhane k raste se raj pariwar ko bacha lijiye me insabko rokta hu

Somnath or rajpal mahal k aage khade ho kar shahzeb k sena par bhari pad rahe rhe

somnath:maharaj aap andar jaaye

rajpal ki nazar tabhi samne padti hai or use baldev nahi dikhta hai

Rajpal:ye baldev kaha gayab ho gaya
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Shamshera fauz ko chhor aakar baldev k paas ata hai or uske hath ki rassi ko kaat kar use aazad karta hai
Baldev,dhanyawad bhai shamshera
Shamshera:tum mere chhote bhai ho chalo ab hume nikalna hoga yahi sahi samay hai Shahzeb k fauz is taraf aarahi hai
Baldev:tum ja kar ghoda tayyar karo me maa ko le kar aaata hu )

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somnath:aap apni jaan bachaye maharaj

rajpal ghode se utar kar bhaag kar mahal
me ghusta hai par tab tak shahzeb bhi mahal tak pahuch jata hai or somnath ko charo ore se gher leta hai

Shahzeb apne sainiko k sath mahal me ghus jata hai
Somnath apne aap ko ghira pa kar ghode se kood jata hai or mahal ki ore bhagta hai kuch sainik uske peeche bhagte hai somnath peeche mud kar baith kar unke pair par talwar marta hai or mahal me ghusta hai uske peeche shahzen ki sainik bhi ghus jate hai

Baldev mahal me aakar apne maa ko idhar se udhar har kaksha me dekh raha tha tabhi uske kaan me hungama hota hai or wo samajh jata hai k mahal me shahzeb ne dhaba bol dya hai or wo or shiddat se apne maa ko har kaksha me dhundta hai

Idhar kamla or radha jeevika sath uske kaksha me thi or unke sath vaidh ji bhi the

Kamla:Maharani jeevika aap chale jaye sab mahal me aaagaye hai

Jeevika:tum sab bhi chalo mere beta rajpal kaha hai use bhi le chalo me akela jeevit reh k kya karungi

Kamla:aap baat maniye aap jaye ek kam kijye Vaidh ji aap le jaye inko agar wo sab is kaksha me aagaye to koi bach k nikal nahi paayega

Jeevika:shurushti kaha hai use laao

Jeevika ye keh kar tehkhane k seedhio se utarne lagti hai apni vaishaki le kar or uska sath dete hue vaidh ji bhi utarne lagte hai doono niche pahuch kar gufa k raste par chalne lagte hai

Kamla:maharani shurushti kaha ho aap
shurushti apne kaksha me he thi jaise he shahzeb k sainik mahal me ghuse wo apne kaksha se nikalne he wali thi k shahzeb k sainik us taraf aane lage or na chahte hue bhi wo ruk kar apna kaksha ka darwaza band kar leti hai

Kamla jeevika k kaksha me shurushti ka intezar kar rahi thi q k use devrani ko bhi bachana tha

kamla jeevika jis raste se gai thi usko chhupa deti hai carpet se or khud devrani k ko bachane k lye nikal padti hai

Mahal k beecho beech Shahzeb or rajpal lad rahe the or wahi uske sainik somnath se lad rahe the

Kamla bahar nikalti hai to dekhti hai baldev use dikhta hai

Baldev:kamla maa kaha hai

kamla baldev ko dekh khush ho jati hai

Kamla:wo rajpal k kaksha me hai

Dono bhag kar rajpal k kaksha me aate hai jise shahzeb k sainik bhi dekh lete hai unke peeche wo bhi daudne lagte hai

"pakdo unhe koi bach nahi paaye"

"kamla jaldi bhago"

Dono aate hai or devrani ko bandha dekh baldev ka khun khaul jata hai

Devrani aahat sun kar aakhe upar karti hai uske aaakho k samne baldev tha

Devrani man me:Bhagwan dhanywad me iske badle me charo dham yatra karungi mere baldev ki jaan bachanne k lye dhanyawad

Baldev:maaa

Baldev or kamla jhat se devrani k rassi ko kholte hai

Devrani:baldev tum theek to ho na

Baldev devrani ko gale se laga leta hai

Kamla ja kar kaksha ka darwaza laga deti hai
Kamla:abhi sahi samay nahi hai tum dono niklo yaha se

Baldev:chalo devrani

Devrani:chalo raja

Darwaze per ab shahzeb k sainik aajate hai or darwaza peetne lagte hai

kamla:tum dono khidki se chale jao

Devrani:par tum

Kamla:meri chinta mat karo tum log jao

Baldev:dhanywad kamla fir milenge
kamla k aakho me aasu aajate hai

Kamla:kamla itne jaldi nahi marne wali tum dono k bache ko dekh k he maregi or kamla k aakho se aasu chhalak jate hai baldev devrani ko utha kar khidki per chadha deta hai or bari bari se dono mahal k dusri ore kood jate hai

tabhi kamla ko zor ka dhakka lagta hai or darwaza toot jata hai or sainik andar aajate hai

ek sainik aakr kamla ko pakad kar ek thappar marta hai
"haramzadi kaha gaye wo log"
Kamla ko thappar itna zor se lagta hai k wo sidha door ja kar girti hai

Baldev devrani ka hath pakde bhag raha tha
tabhi in ke dono taraf se sainik aajate hai baldev thoda rukta hai or apne kaman k teero se bari bari se dono sainik ko maar girata hai
or fir devrani ka hath pakad kar bhagne lagta hai

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devrani muskura kar baldev ko dekhti hai
Idhar rajpal k hath se talwar chhut jati hai or somnath bhi apne hath khade kar deta hai

Shahzeb:pakad lo inhe..

Shahzeb bhag kar har kaksha ki talashi lene lagta hai
Shahzeb apne hath me talwar liye jaise he maharani shurushti k kaksha par dhakka deta hai darwaza band pata hai

shahzeb ek zordar dhakka maarta hai or 6 fitt k upar or janwar jaisi taqat rakhne wala shahzeb darwaza ko tod gira deta hai or ab sirf parda he laga tha darwaze per

Shahzeb apni talwar aage badhata hai use samne maharani shurushti dikhti hai jiske hath me talwar tha

shahzeb:dekh kar to lagta hai k yaha ki mallika ho par talwar aapne sahi se pakda nahi hai

Shurushti ek kadam peeche hote hue

Shurushti:tumne sahi samjha Shahzeb hume talwar pakadna bhi aata hai or sar katna bhi

Shahzeb:to aap janti hai hume

Shurushti:tujhe jaise neech ko sab janti hai kutte

Shahzeb gaali sun kar gusse me ata hai fir shurushti ko upar se niche tak dekhta hai

Shahzeb:kad k sath aapna zehan bhi chhota hai Maharani aapko ek badshah se baat karne nahi aati

shurushti aage badh kar talwar chalati hai

Shahzeb:haha umar dhal gayi lekin ab bhi ladaku ho maharani
or shahzeb aage badh kar ek zor ka prahar karta hai jis se Shurushti k hath ki talwar gir jati hai


Shahzeb apna talwar aage badha kar shurushti k gardan par rakh
"cheez to badi mast ho purani sharab ho tum "

Shahzeb ek hath se shurushti k kamar par hath rakh kar sahlata hai or apne talwar fek kar shurushti ko daboch kar baho me le leta hai

"aah meri raani teri jaisi maal ko chod kar maza aajayega aaj"

"chhor de mujhe shahzeb anjam acha nahi hoga"

Shahzeb aage badh kar shurushti k hoth ko apne hoth me bhar leta hai or chusne lagta hai

Idhar baldev or devrani mahal se bhagne me kamyab ho jate hai or shamshera apne sath ek or ghoda liye dono ka intezar kar rha tha

"jaldi is ghode per baith mere piche aajao"
ye keh kar shamshera apne ghodo ko bhagata hai
Baldev devrani ko ghode per bithata hai fir khud kood kar baith jata hai or shamshera k piche jane lagta hai

Dono taraf se shamshera k piche sainik the shahzeb k
shamshera apne dono hatho me talwar liye sab ko kat raha rha or baldev bhi apne hath me talwar liye uske paas jo sainik hamla karne aaraha tha use marte jata hai

Kuch door yu he chalte hue ab Shamshera or baldev k piche ab koi nahi tha
baldev peeche mud kar dekhta hai

Baldev:shamshera ab hamara peecha koi nahi kar raha

Shamshera:chalte raho baldev ye shahzeb harami hai kahi se bhi tapak sakta hai

shamshera baldev devrani hawa me baat karte hue ghatrashtra ki seema par kar rahe the

To be continued..
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Baldev or devrani ko shamshera bacha kar le aata hai or udhar vaidh ji k sath maharani jeevika bhi gufa k raste se bach kar nikal jati hai.mahal me Rajpal or maharani shurushti fass jati hai or sath he radha kamla or senapati somnath bhi pakda jata hai


Shamshera apne sainiko ko dekhta hai jo aaram kar rahe the or wo ghode se utar kar

Shamshera:Aajao baldev

Baldev k ghode pe se pehle devrani utarti hai fir baldev ghode ki lagam pakad kar chalte hue use sena dekh hairani hoti hai

Baldev:Ye itne sainik yaha par kya kar rahe hai

Shamshera:ye to kam ho gaye hai aadhe fauz humne kuberi bhej diye

Baldev:Par q

Shamshera:Q k hum kuberi lootne aaye hai baldev islye ghatrashtra par chadhai kiye bina hum loot nahi sakte par raja ratan dikhai nahi diya

Devrani:wo mahal me nahi hai kab ka chala gaya apne rajya

Shamshera:sab baat to theek hai par Baldev tumhe q apne he rajya me bandi banaya gaya

Baldev ye sun kar devrani ki ore dekhta hai

Devrani baldev ko kahne ka han me ishara kar deti hai

Baldev:zara is taraf aao

Shamshera:bolo bhi fauz hum se door hai ..mujhe ye baat samajh nahi aati baap aakhir q apne bete ko bandi banayega


Baldev wahi ruk jata hai
"idhar aao shamshera"

shamshera peeche mud kar baldev k paas aata hai

Baldev:bhai baat kuch aisi hai k maine aisa kadam utha lya jiske wajah se ye sab hua

Shamshera:kaisa kadam baldev ..agar tum mujhe nahi batana chahte ho to koi baat nahi

Devrani:nahi nahi beta tumne to apne jaan par khel k hume bachaya tumhara ahsan hum nahi bhulenge

Shamshera,devrani khala kar diya na ek pal me paraya wo to hume shaq hua k aap dono khatre me ho or me to mahal sirf waha ki fauz ka jayza lene gaya tha k Shahzeb ki fauz or taqat kitni hai or waha mujhe baldev bandha hu dikh gaya

Baldev,dhanywad mere mitra..baat ye hai k Me inse prem karta hu

Shamshera:acha to isme kya nai baat hai

Baldev:tum samajh nahi rahe ho me maa ko ek stree k rup me chahta hu or hum ek dusre k bina reh nahi sakte

Shamshera apni aakhe badi karte hue

Shamshera:hmm agar me samajh pa raha hu to tum apne maa ko chahte ho ishq karte ho tum dono ek mard aurat jis trah karte hai

Devrani:Han beta hum kab ek dusre ko chahne lage pata bhi nahi chala

ye keh kar devrani apna sar niche kar leti hai

Shamshera:hhaahhahahaha
haste ja raha tha

Baldev:kya hua has q rahe ho

Devrani:beta tumhe pasand nahi aai ye baat


Shamshera apni hasi rokte hue

Shamshera:me isliye has raha hu k aap dono ek dusre ko pyar karte hai ek shauhar biwi ki trah to fir me aapko khala kehta hu to baldev ko kya khalu kahu?

or shamshera fir thhaka lagakar hasta hai

Baldev ye sun kar sharma jata hai or devrani apna sar niche kiye rehti hai

Shamshera:ya fir ye ho sakta hai k baldev mera chhota bhai hai to aap meri bhabi ho gayi devrani khala

Devrani:chup karo Shamshera shaitan ki trah hase ja rahe ho

Shamshera:muaf kar do
shamshera hasi rokte hue kehta hai

shamshera:Baat to ye hai k me bhut khush hu sun kar ye baat q k jaise baldev tum apne maa se muhabbat karte ho waise he dill he dill me mujhe bhi meri ammi jaan se muhabbat hai

Baldev or devrani is trah se shamshera k muh se saaf sapat sun or uski himmat ko dekh apne aakhe fade shamshera ko he dekh rahe the

Devrani:tumhari himmat ki daad deni padegi waise mujhe ye pehle se pata tha
or is baar devrani has deti hai

Ab baldev or shamshera devrani ko achambhit ho kar ghood rahe the

Devrani:tum dono ullu ki trah q ghood rahe ho

Shamshera:par khala aap ko kaise pata ?mai to kabhi kisi ko nahi bataya

Devrani:Babu ho tum mere samne bhale kitne bhi jasus bano ..pehle din he mai tumhare aakho ka peecha karte hue dekh li thi k tum kis nigah se apni ammi ko dekhte ho

Baldev or shamshera devrani ko he dekh rahe rhe the

Shamshera:aap to bhut tez nikli khair ab mujhe lagta hai ye mumkin hai

Devrani:namumkin ...

Shamshera:Q

Devrani:maine dana dalne ki koshish ki tumhare ammi ko par wo hamesha nakar di ye keh kar k kitna bada gunaah hai.jaha tak me samjhi hu hooriya didi mar jayegi par tumhare prem ko swikar nahi karegi

Shamshera:koi baat nahi khala jaan ab aap dono ko he dekh kar khush rah lunga
aakhe nam karte hue kehta hai

Devrani:Shamshera beta to tum vivah kar lena achi si ladki dekh kar


Shamshera:nahi khala jaan mere zindagi me unke siwa koi or nahi aa sakti

Devrani:islye tum hamesha shadi k lye mana kar dete ho..to kya jeevan bhar kuware rahoge?

Shamshera:yaado k sahare zindagi kaat lunga
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Baldev,devrani iske baato ko kya sun rahi ho ye bhut bada tharki hai..

shamshera ye dekh k baldev apne maa ka nam le kar bula raha hai apne aakhe badi kar
Shamshera:jhute me or tharki

Baldev:mujhe vishwas nahi hota tum apne ammi ko aise nazar se dekhte ho

Shamshera ab mayus ho jata hai

Shamshera:Baldev tum isliye keh rahe ho na q k me kotha par jata hu?

Baldev:han shamshera premi kabhi dusre k taraf aakh utha kar nahi dekhte

Shamshera:dekho bhai mujhe wo jab bhut yaad aati hai to apne mehbooba hooriya k naam ka zaam gatak leta hu

Baldev:zaam tak to theek hai par tum jo sambandh
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Devrani halka khasti hai

devrani:bhulo mat mai yahi par hu tum dono baat ko kaha se kaha le ja rahe ho

Baldev or shamshera sharma jate hai

Baldev:wo maa

Devrani:waise hooriya k naam ka zaam?
ye acha tha shamshera

Baldev:apne maa ko nam se bulata hai

Shamshera,or tumne abhi jo apne maa ko naam se bulaya uska kya ?

Ye sun ab baldev or devrani sharm se paani paani ho jate hai

Baldev:wo woo to hum ek dusre ko prem karte hai or hum dono ko is baat se koi apatti nahi

Shamshera:to jaise tum apne maa se pyar karte ho to nam le kar bula sakte waise he mera pyar ek tarfa he sahi me q nahi le sakta nam..tum to unke samne me le rahe ho me peeth peeche bhi nahi

baldev:ab tumhari marzi

Devrani:ab tum dono jhagdo mat

Shamshera:dekha na aapne khala ye zaam ki kotha ki har baat pardafash kar raha hai to ye galat nahi

Devrani:mujhe pata hai shamshera pehle se he k tumhari lat kharab hai par baldev ko mere samne tumhari pol nahi kholni chahiye

or devrani hasti hai

shamshera:khala wo me majburi me kabhi kabhi

Devrani:islye to kehti hu vivah kar lo patni aajayegi to idhar udhar nahi jaoge..or tum to baldev ko bhi bigad rahe the

Shamshera:han wo us din .tab mujhe kya pata tha ye majnu hai apne maa ka he ..agar pata hota to ise waha na le jata

Baldev or devrani ek sath
"koi baat nahi shamshera"

tabhi peeche se aawaz aati hai
"shahzade "

Shamshera peeche mud kar dekhta hai to sainik use bula rah the
teeno chal kar sainiko k paas pahuchte hai


Ghatrashtra Mahal


Mahal ka drishya aisa tha shahzeb ki sena mahal me ghus sab ko qaid kar rahi thi or udhar shurushti ko pakde badshah shahzeb chus raha tha

Shurusti:chhoro mujhe
shahzeb ko ek dhakka maarti hai
shahzeb shurushti k sar ko pakad k deewar de marta hai shurushti behosh ho jati hai

tabhi shahzeb k sainik aajate hai

Shahzeb:is kameeni ko hosh me laao ise hum dilli le kar jayenge isko hum apni harem me rakhenge

sainik1:Badshah salamat aap ka hukm ho to hum bhi koi murg musallam ka intezam kar le

Shahzeb:utha lo humare jane se pehle yaha ki jitni khoobsurat aurate hai

Sainik2:Badshah salamat to hum kuberi kab jayenge

Shahzeb:hum sham me niklenge thoda aaram kar lete hai jane se pehle Ghatrashtra k har mard ko maaro gao me jao har ek rajpal ko fansi de do uske khandan ka koi nahi bachna chahiye


Idhar jeevika or vaidh ji gufa k raaste chalte ja rahe the

Vaidh:Maharani aaj hum is gufa se bahar nikal payenge k nahi

Jeevika:Vaidh ji ab hum bass pahuchne wale hai


Ghatrashtra k har gao me me shahzeb k sena ja kar loot paat shuru kar dete hai or jo aurat unhe pasand aati unhe utha lete hai


Ghatrashtra me lagbhag 30 gaao the or har teen char gao ka ek chaudhari tha jo maharaja k lye kam karte the wo sab mil kar ek sabha bulate hai jisme kuch sainik wo hote hai jo yudha se apni jaan bacha kar bhage the or kuch wo jo mahal k pahredar the lad nahi sakte the or wo bhag kar aakar chaudhari se baat karte hai

Sab mil kar ye nirnay karte hai k wo sab mil Ghatrashtra k seema par jo surang ka rasta hai jo seedha mahal le kar jata hai waha jayenge

20 chaudhari 10 sainik or pahredar mil kar ghatrashtra k seema par jate hai


Chaudhari 1:Sainiko tum sahi keh rahe ho na Maharani jeevika mahal me nahi thi

sainik1:ha chaudhari sahab wo mahal me nahi thi

chaudhari2:theek hai hum us jungle k sameep hai jaha wo rasta khulta hai

tabhi ek sainik pahad par nazar ghumata hai or wo sena ko dekh
"hey bhagwan itni sena yaha kya kar rahi hai"

sab dekhte hai us taraf waha Shamshera ki sena pure pahad par chhayi thi jis se pahad ka rang badal gaya tha

Chaudhari1:ye sena ab kiski hai

sainik:hum sabka waha par jana theek nahi aap sab yahi ruke me thoda kareeb ja kar dekhta hu

Sainik:sena ka jhanda hara hai ye videshi sena hai

sainik apne ghode k taraf le jata hai or kuch door jane k baad wapas apna ghoda mod kar le aata hai

chaudhari1:kya hua tum wapas q aagaye

Sainik:chaudhari sahab wo sena paras ki hai uske jhande se samajh gaya or ek bat

Sainik:Unke sath baldev bhi dikhai diya

chaudhari1:kya

Chaudhari2:acha iska matlab hai Devrani k madad se ye fauz yaha khadi hai

Sainik2:iske peeche baat kuch or lag rahi hai

Chaudhari1:hume maharani jeevika ko dhundna chahiye baldev k paas jana thek nahi hoga

Sab jeevika ko lene k lye us jungle me pahuchte hai or us surang k raste ko kholte hai
jaise upar se jeevika or vaidh ko roshni dikhti hai wo samajh jate hai unhe lene koi agaya hai

Jeevika or vaidh ji ubhar khabar seedhio or patharo par chadhne ki koshish karte hai par chadh nahi pa rahe the

Chaudhari1:shayad wo log upar nahi aaparahe sainiko rassi andar feko

Sainik rassi le ata hai or rassi ko surang me fekta hai jise pakad kar vaidh ji or jeevika maharani upar aati hai

Jeevika upar aate he let jati hai

jeevika:paani

sainik turant apne baste me se pani nikal kar dete hai or jeevika paani pee kar apni aakhe band kya leti rehti hai

chaudhari2:maharani aap theek to hai na

Vaidh ja kar jungle se kuch jadi booti lete hai or jeevika ko khilate hai

Thode der bad jeevika hosh me aati hai
jeevika ko le kar sab paas me he ek gupt gufa me le aate hai

Jeevika:mujhe yaha kaha le aaye ..mera beta rajpal:.aaah
or foot foot kar ro padti hai

Chaudhari2:maharani aap roye nahi hum kuch karte hai

jeevika:maar dalenge wo mere pariwar ko chaudhari sahab

Jeevika:sab loot gaya barbad ho gaya hamare rashtra me ab videshio ne kabza kar lya

chaudhari2:Aap thek keh rahi hai Maharani jeevika aaj ghatrashtra k har gao har ghar me loot paat macha rakha hai shahzeb ne or hamari bahu betio ko bhi utha kar le ja rahe hai

jeevika:in sab ka karan me he hu ..hum aap sab ko surakshit nahi rakh sake
or khub zor se rone lagti hai

Sainik1:Maharani hum mahal se bhag aaye shahzeb ne hukm de deya hai k Maharaj rajpal ka pariwar me koi jeevit nahi rahe maharaja rajpal bhi bandi bane hai or wo sab jaane se pehle sab khatm kar denge

jeevika:nahi mera laal mar nahi sakta mera chirag

sainik2:maharani ab hamare paas koi raasta nahi sirf ek rasta hai

Jeevika:kya..me sab kuch karungi apne laa ko bachane k lye

Sainik2:Hum yuvraj baldev k madad se bach sakte hai

Jeevika:wo kaise

sainik2:maharani wo abhi hazaro sainiko k sath ghatrashtra k seema par hai shayad wo parasi sainik hai agar

chaudhari1:par wo hamara sath q denge abhi to Maharaj baldev ko fansi dene wale the

Sainik2:par hum baat kar k dekh sakte hai

Jeevika:theek hai unhe yaha bula lo

chaudhari2:han agar uske dill me zara bhi ghatrashtra k lye jagah hoga to zarur sath dega

Sainik2:hume jaldi jana hoga ..ho sakta hai parsi sena yuvraj baldev ko le jane k lye aai hai yaha to wo log kabhi bhi paras nikal sakte hai

Jeevika:aap chaudhary sahab do sainiko ko le kar jaye or pyar se le kar aye unhe

Ek chaudhary or do sainik gufa se nikal kar ghodo par sawar ho kar us pahad ki ore chal dete hai jaha baldev tha

Idhar baldev or devrani baith kar Shamshera se gappe maar rahe the or baldev or devrani puri kahani sunate hai kaise unhe pyar ho gaya or kaise wo dono pakde gaye

Devrani:to shamshera ab aage kya karna h

Shamshera:ab hum bina Shahzeb ko sabak sikhaye to jayenge nahi kya ap dono hamara sath doge

Devrani: Me chahti hu mujhe mera haq mile Gharrashtra me jis se mujhe vanchit rakha gaya par jabardasti nahi yudha kar k nahi

shamshera:aap log chahe to ruk jaye nahi to aap chahe to paras ja kar ruk sakte hai me shahzeb ka kam tamam kar k he aaunga
Baldev:maa aaj kal koi aapki nahi sochta

Itne me samne se teen ghudsawar aate dikhai dete hai or shamshera k sainik apne talwar nikale

"kaun ho tum log"

Chaudhri:Bhai me chaudhari hu Ghatrashtra ka yuvraj baldev se baat karne aaye hai

Ye sun kar k ghatrashtra ka koi hai Devrani apna pallu niche kar apna muh dhak leti hai
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Baldev:ary chaudhari sahab

chaudhari:Yuvraj aapko dekh k prasannata hui

Baldev:Chalo koi to hai jise hum jeevit pasand hai nahi to sab chahte hai k hum mar jaye

chaudhadi:nahi aisa nahi hai..

Baldev:kahiye kya sewa kare aapki

chaudhari devrani ko dekhta hai jo apne pall se apna muh dhake khadi thi

chaudhari:Bahu rani bhi yahi hai kya

Baldev:Ji han bhagwan ne hum dono ko bachana tha

Chaudhari:Wo aapko apki dadi maharani jeevika yaad ki

tabhi devrani apne ek hath se apne pallu ko khaska kar bolti hai
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devrani:Inki koi daadi wadi nahi hai na koi pariwar hai hamara

Baldev:Jane do maa mt kaho

Chaudhari:hum samajh sakte hai Bahu rani jis bahu ka aawaz mai aaj pehli bar sun raha hu wo agar aisa keh rahi hai to uske dill me kitna dard hoga

Baldev:hume nahi mina kisi se

devrani ko chaudhari baat pasand aata hai
devrani:theek hai hum chalte hai par humare sath kuch galat nahi hoga to

chaudhari:Me marr jaunga par aap dono ko kshati nahi pahuchane dunga kisi ko
wo to jeevika ji yahi aajati par itni sena dekh hum khud nahi aaana chahte the yaha

Ye sun baldev muskura deta hai

shamshera:agar inko kuch hua to soch lo.

chaudhari:aap log paras nikalne wale hai kya...aap log ruk jaye jab tak Yuvraj baldev nahi aajate

ye sun kar shamshera muskurata hai

Shamshera:man me)ye budhe ko kya batau k hum shahzeb ko liye bina yaha se nahi jayenge

Baldev or devrani chaudhari k sath chal dete hai usi gufa me jaha Ghatrashtra k kuch sainik or chaudhari ruke the jeevika or vaidh ji k sath

Thode der me he sab us gufa tak pahuch jate hai andar jate he jaise baldev ki nazar jeevika par padti hai uska aakhe gusse se laal ho jati hai

Devrani jeevika ko dekh apna muh fer kar ek kone me chali jati hai

Vaidh:aaye yuvraj baldev

Baldev:ji vaidh ji aap theek to ho na

jeevika k taraf dekh bhi nahi raha tha baldev

Chaudhari1:aaye aap log baithye

Sainik2:Yuvraj hamare ghatrashtra ka haal abhi Bhut bura hai shahzeb ne ati kar di hai

chaudhari2:han yuvraj hamare bahu beti koi surakshit nahi

Baldev:ab iska karan me to nahi ?

sainik2:par aap hamare madad kar sakte ho

chaudhari2:Maharani jeevika aap he kahiye

Jeevika:Baldev jo hua so hua abhi sirf mere bete rajpal ki jaan he nahi pure ghatrashtra vasio ki jaan or izzat tumhare hatho me hai agar tum hamari madad kar do to

Baldev:Jab mujhe marta hua chhor dya tha tab to koi meri madad k lye nahi aaya me q karu madad

Jeevika:tum hamari madad karo hum sab tumhara ahsan nahi bhulenge

Baldev:Maharani jeevika hum ne bhi aap se bhut baar kaha hum par ahsan kar dein

Jeevika:dekho abhi badla lena ka samay nahi bolo badle me tumhe kya chahiye

Baldev kuch sochta hai fir kehta hai

Baldev:Badle me Mujhe Ghatrashtra ka Raja ki gaddi chahiye aur

Chaudhari2:aur kya

jeevika bhi baldev ki ore dekh rahi thi or sab ek taak baldev ko dekhe ja rahe the

Baldev:Aur Devrani mujhe mere rani k roop me chahiye jise sab aadar satkar kare..Mujhe ban na hai Ghatrashtra ka Maharaja or Me devrani ko banaunga Maharani..agar meri maange puri hui to he me tum sab ki madad kar sakta hu

Ye sun kar waha par jitne chaudhari or sainik the sab ko saanp sungh gaya or devrani apne pallu ko halka sa upar uthaye baldev ko dekhti hai jo
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muskura raha tha or devrani bhi muskura di

Jeevika ko ye sun chakkar sa aajata hai
Sannata chha jata hai or sab log is kashmakash me pad jate hai or sochne lagte hai aakhir kya kiye jaye...



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Baldev:Aur Devrani mujhe mere rani k roop me chahiye jise sab aadar satkar kare..Mujhe ban na hai Ghatrashtra ka Maharaja or Me devrani ko banaunga Maharani..agar meri maange puri hui to he me tum sab ki madad kar sakta hu

Ye sun kar waha par jitne chaudhari or sainik the sab ko saanp sungh gaya or devrani apne pallu ko halka sa upar uthaye baldev ko dekhti hai jo muskura raha tha or devrani bhi muskura di


Jeevika ko ye sun chakkar sa aajata hai
Sannata chha jata hai or sab log is kashmakash me pad jate hai or sochne lagte hai aakhir kya kiye jaye

Baldev:kya hua saanp sungh gaye sabko?

jeevika:nahi ..tum ham se ye maang chhor kar kuch or maang lo tum chahe to maharaja ban jao Ghatrashtra ka jo chahe wo karo tum 10 vivah kar lo par devrani se vivah k lye anumati de nahi sakti

Chaudhari2:Baldev aap Maharaja ban jaye hume koi apatti nahi par apni maa se vivah karna to paap hoga aap khud sochiye

Baldev:Me soch kar he bol raha hu or devrani bhi is baat se sahmat hai

Jeevika:Hosh me aajao tum dono is se pehle samay hath se nikal jaye tumhe pata hai is rishte k wajah se hamara kitni beizzti hui hai or tum chahte ho vivah kar k dunya k samne hamara naak kat jaye

Tabhi devrani bol padti hai

Devrani:maa ji ye baat aap keh rahi hai ?aap ka beta mujhe jeevan bhar parayo sa vayvahar kya tab aapki naak nahi kati?

aapke bete ne mujhe apne mitra ratan singh k bistar par bhejne k lye jabardasti ki tab aap ki naak nahi kati ?

aapka beta rajpal piche 18 varsh se vaishyao k paas jata hai us se aap ki naak nahi kati ?
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wah!Ghatrashtra vasio agar ye sab kaam se or meri jeevan narak banane k baad aap sab ki naak nahi kati to me sacha pyar karti hu baldev se iske lye naak kati to bhi mujhe parwah nahi

Ye sun sab k sab murat ban jate hai

Baldev:hamare paas zyada samay nahi hai or Dadi maa aap chahe na chahe hum fir bhi vivah karenge

Baldev apne kamar me lage chaku se apni anguthe par lagata hai chaku k tez dhar se angutha halka kat jata hai baldev ja kar devrani k mathe per apna anguthe k khun se devrani ka matha bhar deta hai
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Devrani baldev ko dekhte reh jati hai


Baldev:banogi na meri jeevan sathi
devrani jhat se baldev k charan sparsh karte hue
Devrani:Baldev ji me hamesha aapka sath dungi chahe dukh ho ya sukh ho
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Baldev:ye kya pair mat chhuo ..
baldev devrani ko pakad kar uthata hai

devrani:Pati bhagwan saman hota hai or apne bhagwan k pair chhuna galat nahi

Ye sab dekh kar gufa me maujud jeevika or jitne chaudhari the or sainik sab stabdh ho jate hai

Chaudhari2:Maharani jeevika aap anumati de na de ye to wahi karenge jo ye chahte hai iske wajah se hume Ghatrashtra ko khona theek nahi hoga

Jeevika:tumhare kahne ka arth kya hai mai inhe anumati de du Vivah ka ek maa bete ko tum pagal to nahi ho gaye

Chaudhari2:pagal hum nahi maharani aapka putra raja rajpal hai jo is bechari ko jeevan bhar dukh dya jiski saza tum sab bhugat rahe ho

Chaudhari1:muaaf karna maharani par aap apni ghar ki izzat bachane k lye pure Ghatrashtra ki bahu betio ki izzat ki parwah nahi kar rahi ho

Chaudhari1:hum sab pure ghatrashtra k mukhiya hai or saalo se ghatrashtra ka palan poshan me hamara yogdan raha hai..

chaudhari2:Maharani jeevika sab barbad ho jayega Wo shahzeb dill ki trah yaha bhi kabza kar lega or hamare bahu betio ko wo utha kar le jayega

chaudhari1:hamara rajya hum se chheen jayega or hume yaha se bhagna hoga ya to shahzeb k hatho marna hoga

Baldev or devrani ek dusre k baaho me baahe daal gufa k bahar nikal rahe the

Chaudhari2: maharani apni pariwar k maan samman k khatir pure ghatrashtra k maan samman ko kho dogi aap baldev ko han kah dijiye Ghatrashtra ki praza aapko kabhi muaf nahi karegi jab unhe pata chalega k aap unsab ko bacha sakti thi par aap ne nahi bachaya

Jeevika:man me)Hey bhagwan kya karu ek taraf pura ghatrashtra k log hai dusri traf mere bete ki pati kaise me use kisi or ko de du..(dusra man)devrani bhi to theek hai usne bhut takleef uthaya hai or waise bhi mera pota he to hai baldev )

Pure gufa me jitne sainik or chaudhari the sab zor zor se baate karne lagte hai or jeevika ko galat batane lagte hai tabhi ek zor ki aawaz aati hai or sab chup ho jate hai

"Ruk jaaaao Baldev"

Jeevika jate hue baldev or devrani ko rokte hai baldev or devrani peeche ghum kar dekhte hai

Jeevika:hume tumhari maange manzoor hai

Ye sun kar to jaise baldev or devrani k khushi ka thikana nahi hota hai devrani k aakho me khushi k aasu chhalak jate hai or wo baldev k seene per sar rakh

Devrani:aakhir hamari prem kahani rang laai
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Baldev:Prem agar sache man se karo to aaj na kal jeet he hoti hai
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Baldev or devrani wapas aate hai

Baldev:dhanywad daadi

jeevika apna muh fer leti hai

Baldev:Daadi apne pote ki hone wali patni ko pot bahu ko aashirwad nahi dogi

Ye sun devrani lajja jati hai

Baldev:pair chhuo dadi ki bhi

Devrani muskurate hue Jeevika k pair chhu leti hai par jeevika apna muh dusri taraf ghuma leti hai

Jeevika:kaam ki baat karo aaj sham me Shahzeb ja raha hai agar wo nikal gaya yaha se to

Baldev:Dadi mai Shahzeb ko yaha se kisi bhi ek stree ko le kar jane nahi dunga chahe me apni pran de du..or Ghatrashtra par jaise he hum wapas apna jhanda lahrayenge me vivah karunga devrani se

chaudhari2:beta hamare paas samay bhut kam hai

Baldev:Chaudhari sahab aap chinta mat kijiye mujhe pata hai shahzeb apne kuch sainiko k sath Kuberi k traf kooch karega or apni aadhe se zyada sainiko ko yahi loot maar karne k lye rakhega ..par aisi uski mansha hai jo me kabhi puri nahi hone dunga

Chaudhari2:beta tum se yahi umeed thi

Baldev:Chaudhari ji Ghatrashtra ki har stree meri maa behan hai unke upar hue har ek apman ka badla me shahzeb se lunga

Ye sun kar waha par sab baldev ko gaur se dekhne lag jate hai

Baldev apna hath aage utha kar pran leta hai
"mai Baldev singh yani k ghatrashtra ka maharaja aaj pran lena hu Shahzeb k kiye ki saza use milegi or iska badla hum us se dill chhen kar lenge"

Sab aashcharyachakit ho kar dekhte hai baldev ki ore..


KUBERi

Idhar kuberi me mahal me aaram kar raha raja ratan singh k sath uski patni eliza thi jo use maadera pan karwa rahi thi ratan singh is baat se anjaan tha k uske rajya me do alag alag sena aakraman karne k lye lagbhag pahuch chuki hai ek Dilli ki sena or uske peeche sultan ki sena jiska sath devraj de raha tha

Ratan:or pilaao eliza is devrani k roop ne mujhe pagal kar dya hai

Eliza use glass bhar k madeera deti hai or wo peene lagta hai


Shahzeb ki sena Kuberi ko paschim disha se aakaraman karne ki tayyari kar raha tha or sultan or devraj uttar disha se


To be continued
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