Adultery Main Aur Mera Gaon(Completed)
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Veer samundar ke kinare betha huya tha udas mann se.Dhur samundar ko dekh raha tha aur aapni zindaghi ka tulna kar raha tha.Uska zindaghi bhi iss samundar ki lehron ki tarah hai.Kabh kahan le jaye kisi ko nahi malum.Woh mobile mein sabh ka photo dekhne lagah.Tabhi usko Divya bua ki yaad aya aur usne Divya bua ko phone kar diya.
Divya Bua- Hello kaun hai.
Veer dhime awaaz mein bola.
Veer- Bua main hoon.
Veer ki awaaz sunkar Divya bua bhadak gayi.Kyu na badakti usne jo kaam kiya tha woh sharmindigi kaam tha.
Divya Bua- Main koi Veer ko nahi janti.Ainda phone maat karna.
Divya bua phatak se phone cut deti hai.Veer roune laghta hai.Logon ki zindaghi bhi kitna ajeeb hai na.Kabh kya modh leta hai kisi ko malum nahi padhta.Woh dhur samundar ko dekh kar asu bahata rehta hai.
Jabh Komal aur Pari gaon pohonche tabh raat ke 10 baj chuke the.Woh logh ghar ke bahar akar darwaza khatkhataya.Par ghar mein toh koi tha hi nahi.Kamla aab yaha nahi rehti hai.Woh sirf aab din mein ati hai aur sabh dekh kar chali jati hai.Jabh Veer tha tabh khana banakar chali jati thi kyu ki uska shaadi ho gaya tha.Aab woh aapni pati ke sath rehti hai.
Komal- Are Kamla toh aab yaha par nahi rehti.Aab kya karen.
Pari- Kamla ko phone karti hoon.
Pari Kamla ko phone karke bhula leti hai.Tabh tak bachche garden mein ghum fir rahe the.Aaj bahot dino ke baad woh aapni ghar aye the.Unka mood off tha isliye woh sirf tehel rahe the agar acha hotah toh shayed hungama macha dete.Pari aapni maa papa ko phone karke batah deti hai ki woh logh pohonch gaye hai.Kuch der baad Kamla ati hai aapni pati ke sath.Kamla ka Pati ka naam hai Sourav.Woh Veer ki factory mein kaam karta hai.Kamla akar darwaza khol deti hai.
Komal light jala deti hai.Sara ghar mein roshni ho jatah hai.
Kamla- Malkin main khana bana doon.
Pari- Nahi nahi tum abhi jao hum bana lenge.Kaal ajana.
Kamla thik hai bolkar key rakh kar chali jati hai.Bachche hall mein jakar beth jateh hai.Unko mayus dekh kar Komal aur Pari ko bahot bhura lagh raha tha lekin unka bhi haal unke jaisa tha.Komal aur Pari unke samne jakar kahin.
Pari- Bhukh lagah hoga na.
Komal- Bolo kya khaoge.
Aditya- Kuch khane ka mann nahi hai.
Ananya aur Payal bhi sar haan mein hila deti hai.Komal aur Pari janti hai ki unko bhukh lagah hai.Isliye dono kitchen mein chali gayi khana banane ke liye.Khana banakar jor jabardasti unko khana khila diya.Phir unko sula diya.Komal aur Pari bhi halki phulki khana kha li.
Phir dono aapni aapni kamre mein chali gayi.Komal aapni kamre mein aaj 1 saal baad enter kar rahi thi.Aapne kamre mein enter hokar Veer ki yaad ane laghi.Uski ankh se asu behne laghi thi.Sara kamre mein sirf Veer ko khoj rahi thi.Phir woh Bed ki upar laghi huyi Veer aur uski photo ke upar nazar dali.Veer usko piche se pakad kar rakha tha.Veer ke muskaan bhari chehre dekh kar Komal ki ankh namm ho gayi.
Pari ka bhi ek hil haal tha.Veer aur uski photo ko dekh rahi thi aur asu bahatu rahi.
Pari- Kyu chhodh kar chale gaye.Main toh sirf naraj hi huyi thi.Uske liye itna badah saja kyu diya.Maine tumhe maaf kar diya.Pls laut ayo.Payal ka rou rou kar bhura haal hai.Aditya aur Ananya ka bhi haal kharab ho gayi.Patah nahi unko kaise sambhal paungi.Tum kahan gaye Veer.
Yeh sabh keh keh kar roune laghi.Dono asu bahate bahate kabh nind ki aggosh mein chali gayi unko patah bhi nahi chali.
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Update 132
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Veer samundar ke kinare betha huya tha.Aasman se halki halki baarish gir raha tha.Veer ki bhi asu nikal raha tha aapni zindaghi ke bareme soch kar.Woh rou raha hai yeh kisi ko malum bhi nahi padh sakta hai.Baarish ke boonde jahir nahi karne de raha tha.Shayed baarish uske asu pohonch raha tha aur keh raha tha dhiraj rakhne ke liye sabh kuch thik ho jayega.
Komal aur Pari ka zindaghi ek track mein chal rahi thi.Unn logon ne bahot koshish ki Veer ka patah lagane ki.Lekin kahin se kuch patah nahi chal raha tha.Mahesh ko toh patah tha ki woh Australiya gaya hai lekin woh iss baat ko bhi nahi batah saka.Veer ne jo manah kiya.Aav Komal aur Pari sirf yeh mannat mang rahi thi ki woh bapas a jaye.Komal aab uski buisness ke sath sath Veer ki buisness bhi sambhalne laghi.Pari aab gaon ki hospital chala rahi hai.Bachchon ka bhi transfer gaon mein kara liya.
Komal aapni ek buisness meeting ke liye Restaurent mein bethi huyi thi.Yeh shahar1 ki bahot badah Restaurent hai.Yaha par aksar logh buisness meeting hi karte hai.Komal betha huya tha aur uski client ane mein der kar raha tha isliye woh juice pee rahi thi aur magazine padh rahi thi.Restaurent ke andar kuch logh aye.Unn logon ko dekhte huye Komal ki nazar ek ladki par padhi aur woh sochne laghi ki yeh toh wohi ladki hai.Woh logh Komal ki piche ki table mein beth gayi.Woh logh kaafi khush dikh rahe the.
Woh logh shayed party karne aye the.Waha par doo aadmi tha aur ek ladki.Woh logh baat kar rahe the aur Komal sunn rahi thi.
Aadmi1- Viraj aaj toh hamare liye khushi ka din hai yaar.
Viraj- Haan sahi kahan Sumit.Aaj jakar hamara factory chalu huya hai.
Ladki- Iska credit mujhe milni chahiye.
Sumit- Haan darling tumhare liye hi toh yeh mumkin huya hai.
Viraj- Haan yaar Ruchi ke liye hi yeh sambhav huya hai.Uss saala Veer toh hame kahin ka nahi chhodhne wala tha.
Veer ka naam sunkar Komal ki kaan khadi ho gayi.Woh aab gaur se sunn ne laghi.
Sumit- Haan saala toh hame barbad karne par tulaa huya tha.Hamara factory toh band hi karva diya tha.Kehta hai factory ka safety thik nahi hai.
Viraj- Saala agar safety thik nahi hai toh tera baap ka kya jatah hai.Agar problem huya toh workers ko hoga na.Tujhe kya pareshani hai.
Sumit- Phir dekha mera idea saale ka zindaghi barbad karke rakh diya hamne.Biwi bachche chhodh kar chale gaye.
Viraj- Uss din dosti karne gaya tha usse.Lekin saal manah hi nahi.Hamara takdir acha tha uss din uska biwi bachche ghar par nahi the.Tune uska drinks mein nind ki goli mix kar diya aur Ruchi ko bhula liya.
Sumit- Phir toh hamne usko uthakar uske kamre mein le gaya aur uska shirt kholkar leta diya aur Ruchi bhi bedsheet pehenkar uske sath let gayi.Subah jabh huya toh saale ko lagah ki nashe ki halat mein usne kuch kar diya hai.Woh khud ko doshi manne lagah.Haahahahaha
Yeh bolkar teeno hasne lagah.Komal ko toh ghussa aur sath sath rouna bhi a rahi thi.Usne Veer par shak kiya.Veer toh kuch kiya hi nahi.Woh logh soch rahe the ki Veer ne iss Ruchi ke sath muh kaala kiya tha.Veer ne bhi uss din kya huya kuch nahi bataya tha usko kuch yaad hi nahi tha ki kya huya.Woh bas maafi mang raha tha.Komal ki ankh namm ho gayi.Woh ghusse se uth khada hokar unke samne jakar khadi ho gayi.Komal ko dekh kar teeno ki fath gaya.Komal sabh kuch sunn toh nahi li.Woh teeno khada ho gaya.
Komal ghusse se boli.
Komal- Acha toh tum logon ne aisa kiya tha.Mere Veer ko maine kitna galat samjhi thi.Woh toh khud ko gunehgaar mann raha tha.Aab Veer barbad nahi karega main tum logon ko barbad kar dungi.
Komal yeh kehkar Ruchi ko ek thappad mara.Thappad ka awaaz pura Restaurent mein ghujne lagah.Sabh unke taraf dekhne lageh.Sumit aur Viraj toh bas dekhta hi reh gaya.
Komal- Tu khud ko aurat bolti hai.Ek aurat hokar tune itna ghatiya kaam kaise kiya.Thu hai teri zindaghi par.
Yeh kehkar Komal bahar chali ayi.Woh teeno toh bhut bankar khada raha.Komal ghusse se kisi ko phone karke inki factory band karne ke baare mein baat karne lageh.Phir woh route huye pehle hospital gayi.Pari ke cabin mein jakar dekha toh Pari kisi mariz ko dekh rahi thi.Komal ki iss halat ko dekh kar Pari ghabra gayi.Woh fatafat mariz ko dekh kar bahar bhej diya.Komal ko chair par beth kar puchi.
Pari- Kya huya didi.Aap rou kyu rahi hai.
Komal route route sari baat batayi.Komal ki baat sunkar Pari bhi roune laghi.
Pari- Hamne yeh acha nahi kiya.Hame Veer par yakin karna chahiye tha.
Komal- Mujhe toh aapne upar ginn a rahi hai ki maine Veer par vishwas nahi kiya.
Dono bas roye ja rahi thi.Dono ko aab yehsas ho gayi thi ki unhone kitni badi bhull kar di thi.
Aditya Ananya aur Payal school se laut rahe the.Payal bich mein aur Aditya right mein aur Ananya left mein khade hokar Payal ki hath pakad kar a rahe the.Tabhi Ananya kamar pakad kar dard se chilla uthi.Aditya aur Payal darr gayi ki Ananya ko kya huya.Aditya aur Payal Ananya ke pas jakar bola.
Aditya- Ananya kya huya.
Payal- Didi aapko kya huya hai.
Ananya- Aaahhhh kamar mein dard ho raha hai aahhhhh.
Ananya ko iss halat mein dekh kar Payal darr jati hai aur roune laghti hai.Aditya ne himmat dikhate huye aadmiyon ko bhulakar Ananya ko rickshaw mein uthaya.Rickshaw karke woh teeno hospital pohonch gaye.Komal aurur Pari hospital se nikal hi rahe the ki unko dekha ki rickshaw karke a rahe hai aur Ananya chilla rahi hai.Komal aurur Pari daud kar unke pas gayi.
Komal Ananya ko pakad kar boli.
Komal- Kya huya Anu.
Ananya- Mummy kamar mein dard ho rahi hai.
Payal tabhi roye ja rahi thi.
Pari- Adi Anu ko kya huya hai.
Aditya- Patah nahi choti mummy hum ghar a rahe the ki tabhi yeh kamar pakad kar chillane laghi.
Komal ghod mein karke Ananya ko hospital ke andar le ayi.Pari Anaya ko lekar ward mein ghus gayi.Woh logh bahar wait karne laghi.Komal bahot rou rahi thi.Jabh dekha ki Payal rou rahi hai toh woh Payal ko ghod mein utha liya.
Komal- Payal beta rou maat.Mera gudiya route nahi.
Payal- Didi ko kya huya hai.
Komal- Kuch nahi huya hai Didi ko woh abhi thik hokar chali ayegi.
Komal keh toh rahi thi lekin usko darr lagh rahi thi ki uski beti ko kya huya hai.Woh Payal ko kaske seene se lagakar tehel rahi thi.Aditya bas khada khada dua mang raha tha
Bahut badia update. Waiting for the next one. One suggestion: yeh barbar Veer ko rulao mat. Don't present him as a crying baby. Please show some spine & self-respect in him. Thakur kabhi rota nahi. Show him as a real man. He is not a wimp.