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PART 2
Update 133
Update 133
Komal Payal ko lekar tehel rahi thi aur Aditya khada khada pray kar raha tha.Kaafi waqt ke baad Pari bahar ayi.Pari ke bahar ate hi Komal uske pas chali gayi.Pari ka chehra murjhaya huya tha.
Komal- Anu ko kya huya.
Pari keh ankhon se asu nikalne laghi.Komal yeh dekh kar aur darr gayi.Woh darne laghi.
Komal- Bolna kya huya.
Pari- Woh Anu ka dono kidney damage ho gayi.
Yeh baat sunkar toh Komal ki pairon taale zameen khisak gayi.Yeh kya bol rahi hai.
Komal- Yeh kya bakwas hai.Meri Anu ka kidney kaise kharab ho sakti hai.Tu majak maat kar.
Pari- Kash yeh majak hoti.
Komal ke ankhon se asu behne lagah.Pari Komal ko dhilasa de rahi thi.
Pari- Didi hamari Anu ko kuch nahi hogi.Hum kidney transplant karenge.Phir hamari Anu thik ho jayegi.
Pari ki baat sunkar Komal ko kuch rahat mili.
Komal- Par yeh huya kaise.
Pari- Kabhi kabhi aisa hota hai ki kidney ahista ahista kharab hone laghte hai.Jis chiz ke karan kidney kharab hote hai agar hum woh chiz na bhi karen tabhi kharab hote hai.Jaise ki bachchon ke liye.Shayed paida hone se hi uski kidney par problem rahi hogi.Par mujhe ek chiz samajh mein nahi ayi ki usse pehle bhi usse dard huya hoga phir hame kaise malum nahi padhi.
Pari ki baat sunkar Aditya age akar bola.
Aditya- Mummy Anu ko pehle bhi dard huyi thi lekin usne aap logon ko kuch nahi batayi thi.Aap dono bahot sad the na.
Aditya ki baat sunkar dono ko aur rouna ayi.Ek choti si bachchi kitni sochi thi.Par woh logh maa ki kartavya palan nahi kar payi isliye dono ko aur rouna ayi.Woh achi maa nahi bann payi.
Pari- Tumne hame pehle kyu nahi bataya.Yeh kis time ki baat hai.
Aditya- Koi 3 Mahine pehle ki.
Pari- OMG tumne pehle agar bata dete toh shayed dono kidney kharab nahi hote.
Aditya roune lagah.
Aditya- Sorry choti maa.Anu thik toh ho jayegi na.
Aditya ko route huye dekh kar Komal usko gale se lagah li Payal ko niche utar kar.Payal jakar Pari ki ghod mein chhadh gayi.Woh bahot darr gayi thi.
Komal- Hamari Anu bilkul thik ho jayegi.
Payal- Mummy didi thik ho jayegi na.
Pari- Haan bilkul thik ho jayegi.Didi hame fatafat Anu ko shahar2 ki hospital mein admit karni padegi.Waha par acha facilities hai.Kidney ka intezam bhi karni padegi.Sirf rishtedar hi kidney de sakte hai.Toh hame tamam rishtedar se puchni padegi.
Komal- Haan haan hame jaldi nikalne chahiye.
Phir Komal ne Mahesh ko bhulaya.Kyu ki doo ladies kitna kar sakte hai.Aditya aur Payal ko bhi sambhalna padhta hai.Mahesh ne sabh kuch intezam kar diya.Ananya ko nind ki injection dekar Ambulance mein karke shahar2 ke taraf le ja rahe the.Ananya ke sath ambulance mein Komal thi.Pari bachche aur Mahesh ko lekar car mein a rahe the.
Sabh shahar2 ki hospital pohonch kar Ananya ko admit karva di.Kidney specialist hai naam hai Dr.Karim.Woh hi Ananya ki treatment karenge.Pari toh ladies ki doctor thi.
Dr.Karim ne Ananya ko check karke bola.
Dr.Karim- Dekhiye jald se jald kidney ka intezam kijiye.Agle doo din ke andar operation karna padega.Aap logh aapke rishtedar ko boliye.
Pari- Ji doctor hum intezam karte hai.
Komal aur Pari ne tamam riahtedar ko sabh kuch batah diya.Divya bua Kajol bua Aakash uncle Sameer uncle sabh hospital a gaye.Shakuntala aur Rishabh bhi a gaye.Jabh Sabh a gaye toh Dr.Karim ne pucha.
Dr.Karim- Kya yeh logh aap logon ki rishtedar hai.
Pari- Ji haan.
Dr.Karim- Chaliye aap logon ka kidney match hote ki nahi yeh dekhte hai.
Sabh doctor ke sath chale gaye.Bachche Mahesh ke sath bethe rahe.
Aaj Veer ki dil bahot jor jor se dhadak raha tha.Naa jaane usse aaj aapni dil mein ek dard sa mehsus ho raha tha jaise koi aapna taklif mein ho.Woh bechain ho gaya.Woh aapna shop band karke samundar ke kinare jakar beth gaya.Dhur samundar ko dekhte dekhte usse aapni bachchon ki yaad ane lagah.Naa jaane kaise hai woh logh.Woh unn logon ka hulchul puchne ke liye Mahesh ko phone lagaya.Mahesh tabhi cabin ke bahar khada huya tha.Jabh mobile ring huya toh usse malum nahi tha ki kyon hai.Woh bachchon se dhur jakar call receive kiya.
Mahesh- Hello kaun.
Veer- Mahesh main hoon.
Veer ki awaaz pehchanne mein Mahesh ko derr nahi lagah.
Mahesh- Sir aap.
Veer- Haan main.Waha par sabh thik hai na.Naa jaane aaj bahot bechaini si mehsus kar raha hoon.
Mahesh- Kuch thik nahi hai sir.
Aab Veer thoda sidha hokar beth gaya.
Veer- Kyu kya huya.
Mahesh phir sabh kuch Veer ko batah diya.Veer yeh baat sunkar toh hairan ho gaya.Uska dil tadap utha.Uska Anu taklif mein hai.Uska ankhen namm ho gaya.
Veer- Main a raha hoon.Tum airport a jaana.Kisi ko maat batana.
Mahesh- Ok sir.
Phir Veer call cut kar deta hai.Veer ki mobile ke screen par Aditya Ananya aur Payal ka wallpaper tha.Woh Ananya ko dekh kar kahan.
Veer- Main a raha hoon meri bachi.Papa sabh thik kar denge.Main a raha hoon.
Veer bhag kar aapne shopp par gaya aur aapna saman pack kiya.Woh airport jakar ticket karvaya.Kuch deer mein hi flight take off karega.Woh flight mein beth gaya aur flight take off ho gaya.Woh plane mein beth kar asu bahata raha.Woh bas Annaya ki photo ko hi dekh raha tha aurur uske liye dua mang raha tha.Naa jaane uska beti kaisi hogi.
Mahesh phone par baat karne ke baad phirse usi jagah par akar khada ho gaya.Sabhi waha par a gaye.Unke ate hi Payal jakar Shakuntala ki ghod mein chhadh gayi.Aditya ke pas Rishabh beth gaya.Kuch der baad Dr.Karim akar bola.
Dr.Karim- Dekhiye aap mein se sirf ek hi insan ka kidney match hota hai jiska kidney hum nahi le sakte.
Komal- Kiska.
Dr.Karim- Ji Mr.Rishabh ka.
Rishabh samne akar bola.
Rishabh- Kyu kay problem hai.
Dr.Karim- Dekhiye aap ka umar ho chuka hai aur aapko blood pressure aur diabetes hai.Isliye hum aapke kidney nahi le sakte.
Sabh mayus ho gaye.Komal ka toh asu behne laghi.
Komal- Aap kaise bhi karke meri beti ko thik kar dijiye.
Dr.Karim- Dekhiye agar kidney nahi mila toh hum kuch nahi kar sakte.Jyada tar bhai bahen ki kidney match karte hai.Lekin woh dono toh chote hai.Aapke husband ka kidney match ho sakta hai.Aapke husband kahan hai.
Dr ki baataat sunkar Komal jor se roune laghi.Divya bua ghusse se boli.
Divya Bua- Uss nalayak ke bareme puchiyega maat.
Dr.Karim- Phir toh main aapki beti ko bacha nahi sakta.
Dr waha see chala jatah hai.Divya bua aur bhi bhalahala bhura kehti hai Veer ki bareme.Jisse sunkar Komal aur Pari ko ghussa ane laghi.Komal chillate huye boli.
Komal- Mami pls Veer ke bareme main kuch bhura nahi sunn sakti.
Divya Bua- Usne itna badah kand kiya aur tu mujh par bharas rahi hai.
Phir Komal sabh kuch batati gayi uss din kya huya tha.Jisse sunkar Divya bua aur sabh ko bahot sharmandegi mehsus huyi.Unn logon ne Veer ko bahot bhala bhura kahan tha lekin Veer ne ek shabd bhi nahi kahan tha.Divya bua namm ankhon se boli.
Divya Bua- Hey bhagban yeh maine kya kar diya.Maine Veer ko kya nahi kahan.Par usne toh kuch kiya hi nahi.Uss din bhi usne mujhe call kiya tha lekin maine kuch nahi suni.
Divya bua ki baat sunkar Komal ko hairani huyi.Veer ne Divya bua ko phone kiya tha.
Komal- Kahan hai woh.
Divya Bua- Woh toh patah nahi.
Komal- Aapke pas number hai.
Divya Bua- Hai mere mobile par.
Divya bua mobile nikal kar woh number search karne laghi.Jabh mil gayi toh Komal ki diya.Komal ne call kiya lekin band a raha tha.Kyu ki tabh Veer plane mein jo tha.
Komal- Veer ka phone band a rahaa hai.
Komal bethkar roune laghi aapni beti ki halat ko dekh kar.Itna paisa hone ke baad bhi wohoh aapni beti ke liye kuch nahi kar paa rahi thi.
Aakash uncle- Beti himmat rakh.Sabh kuch thik ho jayega.
Komal- Kahan se thik hoga mama ji.Kidney nahi mil raha hai.Meri beti ko bacha lo mama ji.
Yeh kehkar Komal roune laghi.Phir bachchon ko Divya bua ke ghar bheh diya gaya.Mahesh bhi nikal gaya airport ki taraf.Hospital mein sirf Komal aurur Pari thi.Komal Ananya ki pas bethi huyi thi.Ananya jaise ek bhejan sharir ho.Ananya upar ki taraf dekh rahi thi.
Ananya- Mummy kya main maar jayungi.
Ananya ki baat sunkar Komal ki dil rou utha.
Komal- Nahi meri bachchi tujhe kuch nahi hoga.
Ananya- Papa kahan hai mummy.
Komal- Papa a jayega.
Ananya- Papa ko akhir baar dekhna chahti hoon.
Ananya ki baat sunkar Komal ki dil chir rahi thi.
Komal- Tujhe kuch nahi hogi meri bachchi.Tu bilkul thij ho jayegi.Papa sabh kuch thik kar denge.
Komal dil mein bas Veer ko ane ke liye dua mang rahi thi.Woh bas dil se keh rahi thi laut ane ke liye.Ananya ko nind ki injection dekar sula diya gaya.Rishabh aur Aakash uncle aapni tamam riahtedar ko puch rahe the kidney dene ke liye.Lekin koi nahi mann rahe the.Pari bhi try kar rahi thi kaise bhi karke Kidney ka jhugad karne ke liye.
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PART 2
Update 134
Update 134
Veer shahar2 ki airport pohonch chuka tha.Woh airport se nikal kar dekha Mahesh khada tha.Woh Mahesh se milkar sabh ka hulchul pucha aur kidney ka intezam huya ke nahi pucha.Raat ke 12 baj rahe the.Veer Mahesh ko lekar hospital a gaya.Woh Ananya ki ward ki taraf ja raha tha ki Pari ko dekha kisi se mobile par baat kar rahi thi.Veer wohi par rukh gaya.Veer aab unke samne khada hona nahi chahta tha.Kuch derr baad Pari andar chali gayi aur Komal ko lekar doctor ki cabin mein chali gayi.Veer Mahesh ko ward ke samne khada karke andar ghus gaya.
Woh andar jakar dekha Ananya ek bhejan sa padhi huyi thi bed par.Uski sharir halki ho gayi thi.Woh bahot sukh gayi thi.Usse dekhte hi Veer ki ankhon mein asu a gaya.Veer halki kadam se chalta huya uske pas chala gaya.Uski bed ke kinare khada hokar uski chehre ko nihar raha tha.Uski chehra puri tarah se safed ho gayi thi.Jaise khoon naam ki chiz tha hi nahi.Ananya ko iss halat mein dekh kar Veer ki dil rou utha.Woh Ananya ko aapni seene se lagakar roune lagah aur bolne lagah.
Veer- Main tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga.Main a gaya hoon na.Papa sabh kuch thik kar denge.Mera pyaari bachchi.
Yeh kehkar uski forehead par kiss kar diya.Phir usko sula diya.Woh aapni chehra thik karke bahar a gaya.Abhi tak Komal aur Pari nahi ayi thi.Tabhi usne dekha ki Komal aur Pari a rahi thi.Komal ke ankhon mein asu the.Veer ek side mein chup gaya.Mahesh bhi uske sath chup gaya.Woh ward ke samne akar rukh gaye.
Komal- Kahin se kidney ka intezam nahi ho rahi hai.Main kya karoon.Aaj paisa bhi mera kaam nahi a rahi hai.
Yeh kehkar woh roune laghi.Pari bhi rou rahi thi aur Komal ko sahara de rahi thi.Phir dono ward mein chale gaye.Unko iss halat mein dekh kar Veer ko bahot dard huya.Woh aapne maan mein kehne lagah.
Veer- Main sabh kuch thik kar dunga Komal.Hamari beti ko kuch nahi hogi.
Veer Mahesh ko lekar Dr.Karim ke cabin mein chale gaye.Dr.Karim ne unko bethno ko kahan.
Dr.Karim- Ji boliye kyon hai aap.
Veer- Ji main Ananya ka pita hoon.
Dr.Karim khush ho gaye.
Dr.Karim- Are aap a gaye.Aapki beti ko ek kidney ki jorurat hai.
Veer- Ji main janta hoon.
Dr.Karim- Toh phir chaliye test karne ke liye.
Veer- Ji main kidney toh dunga lekin mera ek shart hai.
Dr.Karim soch mein padh gaye baap hokar yeh aapni beti ko kidney dene ke liye shart kyu rakh rahe hai.
Dr.Karim- Ji boliye.
Veer- Aap kisi ko nahi kahenge ki maine kidney diya hai.
Veer ki baat sunkar Dr.Karim shcoked ho gaye.Unko kya malum ki woh aisa kyu keh raha hai.
Dr.Karim- Par kyu?
Veer- Hamara relationship aab nahi rahe.Isliye main nahi chahta ki unko kuch bhi patah chale.
Dr.Karim kuch der Veer ki taraf dekha.Phir usne chinta kiya ki Ananya ko abhi kidney jorurat hai.Yeh sabh baate baad mein kar sakte hai.
Dr.Karim- Thik hai jaisa aapki marji.
Phir Veer ko lejakar test karvaya.Test ka result ane tak Veer wohi betha raha.Kuch der baad result aya.
Dr.Karim- Mubarak ho aapki kidney match ho gaya.
Yeh baat sunkar Veer bahot khush ho gaya.Aab uska beti bach jayegi.Uska ankhon se asu behne lagah.
Veer- Aab meri beti thik ho jayegi na.
Dr.Karim- Haan aapki beti aab bilkul thik ho jayegi.Kaal dopeher ko aap dono ki operation karna hai.Tyaar rahiyega.
Veer- Par main unke samne nahi janah chahta.
Dr.Karim- Fikar maat kijiye.Hum aapko dusre side se operation table mein le jayenge.
Veer- Thank you doctor.
Dr.Karim- Koi baat nahi.
Dr.Karim chala gaya Komal ko yeh baat batane ke liye.Lekin kisne diya yeh kya batayega woh bhi usne soch liya.Veer Mahesh ko lekar ek hotel mein chala gaya rehne ke liye.Veer ko hotel mein chhodh kar Mahesh hospital mein a gaya.
Dr.Karim directly ward mein ghus gaye.Komal rou rahi thi Ananya ke pas beth kar.Dr.Karim ko dekha kar khadi ho gayi.
Dr.Karim- Mubarak ho kidney ka intezam ho gaya hai.
Yeh baat sunkar toh Komal ko itni khushi huyi ki woh khushi ki maare Pari ko gaale lagah liya.Pari bhi bahot khush huyi.Dono haste haste gale mil rahi thi.Phir khushi thoda control huya toh woh Dr. ke pas akar boli.
Komal- Aap sach keh rahe hai na.
Dr.Karim- Ji haan bilkul.
Komal- Kisne diya meri beti ko kidney.
Dr.Karim- Woh mera ek dost ne.
Pari- Par yeh toh galat hai na.
Dr.Karim- Dekhiye usne jabh aap logon ki pareshani ko dekha toh mujhse bahot minnate ki.Isliye main mann gaya.
Komal- Kyon hai woh pareshta jisne meri beti ka jaan bachaya.
Dr.Karim- Dekhiye mera dost nahi chahta ki aap logon ko uske bareme patah chale.
Dr. ki baat sunkar Komal aur Pari hairan ho gayi.
Pari- Par kyu.
Dr.Karim- Dekhiye woh nahi chahta ki koi usse hamdardi jataye ki usne kisi par yehsan kiya.
Komal- Woh toh ek parishta hai.Woh jo bhi ho hamisha khush rahe.
Dr.Karim- Kaal dopeher 12 baje operarion hoga.
Pari- Thik hai doctor.
Phir waha se doctor chala jatah hai.Komal aur Pari ne phone karke sabh ko yeh baat bata di.Komal aur Pari Ananya ki forehead ko chumkar uske pas beth gayi.Kabh unko nind a gaye unko patah bhi nahi chala.Shayed khushi hote hai tabhi nind ata hai.
Veer hotel ki balcony mein khada hokar dhur aasman mein dekh raha tha.Uska dil mein khushi tha ki uska beti aab thik ho jayegi.Phirse woh khilkhilakar hasegi.Shayed woh hasi woh dekh nahi payega.Lekin itna toh khushi hogaga ki uska beti khush hai.Woh balcony mein chairs par bethe bethe sou gaya.
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Awesome update bhai
Veer ab apni beti ko bacha payega
Sabko ab maloom ho gya hai k veer
Ne kuch nai kiya, veer nirdosh hai
Kya sab kuch pehle ki tarah theek ho payega
Dekhna padega
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Veer ab apni beti ko bacha payega
Sabko ab maloom ho gya hai k veer
Ne kuch nai kiya, veer nirdosh hai
Kya sab kuch pehle ki tarah theek ho payega
Dekhna padega
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