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Main, Meri Family Aur Mera Gaon (8)
Subah ka nashta karne ke baad maine kuchh socha, sabko apne peeche aane ka bola aur sabko saath lekar nikal pada.
Maine gaanv jane ki bajay bike ko dusare raste pay ghumadiya Rani aur Komal mere pichhe pichhe hi aa gayeen. Main ek badi si building ke pass jake ruka aur ek call ki.
Do minute bad ek admi ne mere pass aa gaya aur poochhne laga..
Admi : Sir aap Mr Avi hai kya
Maine : Haa Main Avi hun.
Admi : Good Morning sir welcome to the company and myself Mr Karim yehan ki branch ka Manager hun sir.
Wo hame ander legaya.
Ham sab ek cabin may chale gaye. Wahan Manager ne sabke liye chay mangwayi. Chay ke bad Manager ne poochha “Aap pahele Factory dekhna pasand karenge ya Office”
Maine kaha – Pehale Factory..
Wo haemin factory dikhane le gaya. Factory ka chakkar lagane ke baad ham Office mein aaye.
Kareem hamein ek hall mein le aaya aur sabko baitha kar bahar chala gaya. Hall mein ek jagah ek couple ki photo thee. Ham us photo ko dekh rahe the ki Neha ne mujhe pass bulake poocha yeh kis ki factory hai aur yehan bhaiya aur bhabhi ke photo kyun hai mujhe ab yaad Aya hai ki ye mere papa aur maa ki photo hai. (Jay aur Shalini)
Maine : ye Thakur sahab ki company hai.
Bich may Mamta bol padi,
Mamta : ye unki company nahi ye tumhari company hai ye Jay Bhaiya Ki Company hai.
Sab Mamta ki aur dekhne lage tab,
Neha : Mamta ji aap kya bol rahee aur aapko Mere bhaiya aur Bhabhi ke baare mein kaise pata.
Jay ne ek factory start karne ke liye Mamta ke ghar jana vahan Mamta aur Rani ki papa (Aman) Ka love story may happy end Lana aur unki shadi karana.
Shaadi ke bad Aman aur Mamta shahar 3 chale gaye aur vahan rahane lage. Idhar Shalini aur Jay ki shadi, aur Gaanv mein Avi aur udhar shahar 3 mein Rani ka janm.Jay aur Shalini ka shahar3 may shift Hona sab hogaya
( Ab flash back Mamta ki taraf se)
Mamta Batane Lagi…
Flash back:
Main aur mere pati Shahr3 mein rahte the.
Ek din main aur Aman shopping kar rahe the tab mujhe Shalini dikhyii di. Maine Shalini Bhabhi ko unkee shadi may dekha tha isliye pahchan liya.
Main : Shalini Bhabhi aap yehan.
Shalini : Tu Mamta hai na.
Mai : ha Bhabhi apne to mujhe pehchan liya ye Mera pati Aman hai.
Shalini : ha mujhe pata hai Jay ne aapkee love story ke bareme bahut kuch bataya hai.
Main : Jay bhaiya Kahan hai.
Jay : Main to yehan hun
Main : kaise ho bhaiya,
Jay : Mai theek hum Mamta aap kaise ho aur Aman Tu kaisa hai Yaar.
Aman : Main theek hum sahab aap se milker khushi huii.
Jay : ye sab sab kya laga raka hai mere nam se bulao.
Aman : Nahi main tum ko sahab hi bulaunga
Jay : Nahi Yaar main bol raha hun na naam se bulao
Aman : us ke liye time lage ga
Main : aap yehan
Jay : ham to yehan 2 Saal se hai per ab ghar change karna chahta hun.
Main : Hamara ghar ke pass ek ghar hai aap dekh lo ek bar
Ghar dekh ke udhar shift ho jana Avi aur Rani hamesa sath rahana Jay ne Avi ko aur Rani ko bada hone ke bad Shadhi karneko tie Karna Shalini Komal ko unki bahu banana ka tai karna,
Jai ne Aman ko apni company mein job diya tha. Jay ne ek nayee company start ki jo Jay ki nayee company ko Parts supply karti thee. Us company may Aman ko job diya tha.
Baad me Aman ki lagan dekhkar usko partner ship dee. Baad mein Jay ka Kumar ki company ke partners se jagada huya aur Jay ne Kumar ki company mein aana band kar diya. Uske baad wo Aman ko guide kar us company ka full charge de diya. Fir Jay aur Shalini Ki accident mein death ho gayee to Aman ne us company ko pura sambalna pada.
Kaam ka bahut pressure padne par usne company mein apana hissa Thakur sahib ko bech diya aur aur unse company sambhane ko kaha.
Thakur sahib ne company mein help karni shuru ki par kaam ka jyada pressure aur Jay ki death ke jhatka Aman bardasht nahi kar saka aur unhe heart attack aaya aur Aman ki death ho gayee.
Aman ki death ke baad company ka Thakur Pratap Singh ne take over kar liya. Aur Jay Bhai sahib ke naam se company chala rahen hai. Aur Jay ka hissa Avi ke naam karna chah rahen hai.
(Necessary flash back overview complete)
Itne mein Thakur Pratap Singh vahan aa jate hain. aur batate hain is Factory aur Office Sab Jay aur Aman ke naam par hi hai. Unhone Aman se uska poora hissa nahi khareeda tha balki company mein usko help karne ke liye credit diya tha jo ki ab company ke profit se chukta ho chuka hai. Aur wo is Factory ko as a Trustee sambhal rahe they. Abhi yeh company Jay aur Aman naam per thee usko Avi aur Mamta ke nam per change kar denge. 50% to Avi ko de bhi diya hai.
Pratap : beta Maine Jo Kiya ye sab bina tum logo ko bataye sab thumhare dadaji ke kahne per kiya hai. Main Neha aur Mamta se kuch baat karna chahta hun. Avi tum tab tak sab ko leker ek baar company ko dekho aur samjho.
Pratap , Neha aur Mamta ke saath ek cabin may chala gaya.
Main aur sab company mein ghoom kar aaye. Avi ne company ke workers se baat ki to pata chala ki, Company mein pichle ek do saal se kafi log kaam chhod ker chale gaye the aur work be proper nahi ho raha tha. Avi ye sab dekha aur us cabin mein jahan Thakur Pratap, Neha aur Mamta baithe the aa gaya.
Pratap : kya beta sab dekh liya.
Maine : hi sab par kam karne valon ki kami hai aur kam bhe proper nahi ho raha hai.
Pratap : ha beta Yeh tumhare papa ke company ke sath Meri company bhi hai. Par idhar main poora dhyaan nahi de paya aur ek nayee company jo hamaari compitetor hai usne hamare logon ko kharid liya isse hi ye company loss mein aane lagi hai tabhi main isse close karna chatata tha. Isiliye tumhe us din bulaya tha.
Maine kuch der socha aur bola : kyu na ham kuchh naye log rakhe , kuchh expert aur kuchh naye jinhe expert train bhi karenge aur kaam bhi lenge.
Pratap : ab ye tumhari aur Mamta ki company hai jo karna hai karo.
Maine : Thakur sab mujhe aap ki help chahiye
Pratap : bolo Avi kya help chahiye
Maine : aap gaanv mein ek samaroh (gathering) ko rakh do.
Pratap : per kyu ?
Maine : vo aap ko Sunday pata chele ga
Itne may Thakur Pratap Ka mobile baja, Pratap bahar jaker mobile pe baat kar ke vapis ata hai.
Pratap : ham is plan ko next Sunday ko rakenge abhi Avi tum ek kar ker Sweta , Shital aur Rajesh ko call kar ke jaldi gaanv aane ko bol do ham kal/parso aap ke dadaji ke pass jayenge
Neha : ghabarate huve kya huva papa ko
Pratap : Kuchh nahi huva Dr ne kaha hai ki ek bar tum log ne unse mil to theek ho ga aur Uske tabiyat may kucah achchha hi hoga kyu ki tum lo jab pichhle baar gaye te tab se unke tabiyat kuchh jyada hi sudhaar huva hai.
Maine : sab kya ham parso chalenge kyu ki Rajesh ane may time lage ga maine bhi udhar jane ko intazam kar loonga
Pratap : theek hai Avi is bar ham be tumhare saath aa rahen hai.
Maine : aap ke liye be rooms book karu
Pratap : Nahi Avi mera guest house hai ham vahin per rukenge.
Maine : Fir sab theek hai.
Neha : aap sab ghar may kuchh bhe mat bolna.
Maine : bua nahi bola to jane ka intzam kaise hoga.
Neha : Avi pichale bar tum camp bolker le gaya tha na is bar be vahi bolo
Maine : theek hai bua
Maine Sweta , Shital aur Poonam Didi ko call kar ke ghar aane ko bol diya.
Sham tak sab ghar aa jayenge.
Maine : Thakur sahib mujhe pata chala ki company mein kuchh Software Engineers job chhod kar chale gayen hai. Mere jaankari ke anusar main ek software engineer ko janta hoon jise Turant job ki jaroorat hai aur main use appoint karna chahta hum.
Pratap : beta ab tum aur Mamta decision lo..
Mamta : Avi tum jo theek samjho vo Karo
Maine : Thakur sahab aap uska interview arrange karke use appoint kare. Par use pata nahi chalna chahitye ki yeh company meri hai aur main usko job de raha hoon.
Pratap : ok beta vo sab ho jayega.
Pratap : Aaj hi Interview kra deta hoon, Kya 1 Ghante tak aa sakta Hai.
Maine : Mai phone kar ke use bulata hun aur phone karne cabin se bahar aa gaya.
Ander
Pratap : Avi mein kuchh khas hai ye. Kitni jaldi company ki problem pakad li. Avi bhee Jay jaisa hi hai itne kam umar may sab se jaan pahchan rakta hai aur problem ka liya
Bahar
Maine Mrs Pawar ko call Kiya call Kisi ne utaya
Maine : hello
Mrs Dubey: ha Avi Mai Mrs Dubey
Maine : Sarita nahi hai kya
Mrs Dubey : washroom may hai kya baat hai
Main : **** Naam ki company mein 1 Ghante baad Job ke liye Interview hai wo apna profile aur certificates jo bhi mile, leker jaldi pahunchne ko kaho.
Mrs Dubey : ok main bol deti hun.
45 Minute baa hi Mrs Dubey aur Mrs Pawar company mein aa gayeen. Maine interview ke baare mein bol diya.
Thakur Pratap Singh ne Interview ki Formality poori karayee aur Mrs Pawar ko company mein job ke liye appoint kar liya.
Mrs Pawar ko company taraf se company ki taraf se ghar select karne ka option be de diya.
Mrs Pawar usko inkar kardiya aur bola ki ghar ka intzam ho chuka hai.
Thakur sab se milker ghav chale gaye. Neha aur Mamta bhi unke unke saath hi chali gayeen.
Thodi der Mr. Dube aur Mrs. Pawar ke saath baat karne ke baad, main baki sab ko leker gaanv chala.
Gaanv pahunch kar maine bola ki parso hamein ek tour par maze karne jana hai. Kavita aur Leena khushi tour ka naam sunte hi uchhalne lagi.
Sham tak Rajesh be bhi ghar agaya. Maine aur Rajesh dono milker fir se rooms book kiye aur Aur ek air-conditioning bus book karne Shahar aa gaye.
Bus book karne ke baad Rajesh aur main Ghar 2 aa gayee aur baat karne lage tabhi Mrs Pawar ander aa gayeen
Rajesh : hello aunty kaise ho
Mrs Pawar : Mai tik hum aur aap
Rajesh : aap yehan kya Kar rahi ho
Mrs pawar : Mai upper hi rah rahi hun gate ke sound sunker samajh gayee ki Avi aaya hai is liye kheer leker aayee hun.
Rajesh : kheer kis liye
Mrs Pawar : Mera job lag janeke liye ( Maine aankho se batane ko mana kardiya)
Rajesh : congratulations
Mrs Pawar : thanks ab Main chalti hun.
Maine : tik hai aap jaiye
Main aur Rajesh kuchh der aaram karne ke baad gaanv ghar aa gaye.
Sham ko khana katam karke main sone chala gaya.
Thode der bad kisi ne mere door knock kiya maine gate kholker deka tho Seema chachi thee ander aake door lock ker diya
Seema chachi : Avi mere liye bhe thoda time do
Maine : aap ke liye mere sath pura time hai
Seema chachi : Avi main tumse ek baat karni hai
Maine : ji bathaiye aur mere bati kahahai
Seema chachi: vo Meena ke pass hai Meena ne mujhe sab bata diya hai ab main bhi us admi se kuchh relationship nahi rakhna chahti hun. kya tere dil may mere liye kuchh jagah do ge nahi to bata main chali jati hun (kah Kar rone lagi).
Maine ne Seema chachi ko gala laga liya aur rone se mana kardiya Seema thoda shant huyi aur mujh se alag huyi aur unke hath may ek mangalsutr aur kumkum tha.
Seema chachi: ye lo Avi mujhe tera nam ka sindhur bhar ke mujhe is ghar mein rahne ka adhikar de de.
Maine : chachi main aap ko ye pehana deta per abhi nahi main ye pehanane ke liye kuchh special aur yadgar banana chahta hoon. Mujh per yakeen ho to thode dino ke liye ruk jao plz.
Seema chachi: tik hai Avi main intezar karungi.
Seema chachi ne mere room se bahar chali gayee.
Seema Meena ke room mein chali gayee. Meena ke room mein Meena Suman aur teeno Bache the. Seema under Jake sab bata diya aur Meena ne Seema ko samjha diya.
fir se mere room ke door knock hua to maine door khola to udhar Suman Meena aur Seema theeno khadee thee.
Sab under aa gayee.
Suman : Avi kal subha janeka inthazam hogaya kya ?
Maine : ha chachi 12 room aur ek a/c bus book ki hai jis se kisi ko problem nahi hogi.
