Bhai aapne pad liya. Khushi Huyee. Sara Credit aapko hi hai. Maine kuchh Galtiya sudhari hain jo Pichli kahani se male nahin khati thee. Aapki kahani doosari site pe chal rahi thee, wahan aapne band kar yahan badi slow speed mein chal rahe the. Na wahan ke reader khush the na yahan ke.
Asha karta hoon aap naraz na ho, Thoda sa part bacha hai aap ki aagya ho to wo bhi yahan paste kar doon aur aap use wahan se aage kahani ko aage badayen. Yadi main aapki kuchh help saku, galtiyan sudharne mein to mujhe khushi hogi.
Main koi writer nahi hoon aur na hi mujhe credit chahiye. Main to bas itna chahta hoon ki ek achhee kahani achchhe tarah se poori ho jaye, jo sabhi chahte honge.
Ek aur writer bhi aapki doosri site kahani poora karne ki koshish mein hai par mujhe uske update bilkul bakbas lage.
Aapke update achchhe lage par kuchh characters ke naam confusion kar rahe the. Samay bhi match nahi kar rahe the isiliye mujhe enter karna pada.
Meri Intention aapko hurt karne ki nahi, balki Readers ke cofusions ko door karne ke liye thee.
Main aapse maafee mangta hoon ki maine apko disturb kiya...
Aapki agya ho to ek page ka matter aage doon nahin to aap Dada ji tour pe jane se aage kahani shuru karen...
