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[Alok]

Nice and cool bro......

 

[Tere pyar me pagal]

update 29​

Vanika ab sab samjh chuki thi aur jan chuki thi ki isme manu ne use fasaya hai aur uske sath dhokha kiya hai, yehi sab sochte sochte vanika ke gulabi gaal gusse se lal ho jate hai aur wo us shadi ke jode ko wahi chhod kar manu ke kamre me jati hai, manu vanika ko dekh kar khush ho jata hai, wo us waqt naha kar bahar he aaya tha aur underwear me tha.

Manu jaise he vanika ko dekhta hai wo apni baahe fehra deta hai use gale lagane ke liye par tabhi manu ke gaal par ek jordar tamacha lagta hai aur usi ke sath manu ki seeti peeti gul ho jati hai, use samjh nahi aata ki kal tak jo uska lund muh me le rhi thi usse shadi karne ko taiyar thi wo aaj apne purane lehje me wapas kaise laut aayi.

Vanika(rote hue aur guuse me)- you cheap bastard………… how dare you, kitne ghinone ho tum apni he behan ke sath aisi cheap harqat karte hue tumhe sharam nahi aayi, naali ke gande keede

Manu nahi janta tha ki baat kya hai par wo fir bhi vanika ko ek bar shant karna chahta tha aur usi ke liye wo vanika ke kareeb jane ki koshish karta hai

Vanika(manu ko dhakka dete hue)- dur raho tum mujhse, don’t you dare come near me

Manu vanika ki aankho me dekhta hai to krodh ki jwala jal rhi thi jise dekh manu ki ek bar fatt kar chaar ho jati hai par wo himmat karta hai

Manu- vanika baat kya hai tum itni gusse me kyu ho

Vanika- gusse me kyu hu tumhe nai pta ki mai gusse me kyu hu

Manu- mujhe kaise pta hoga, acha ek kam karo tum ye pani pee lo(pas padi table se pani ka glass vanika ki aur badhate hue) thoda shant ho jao fir baat karte hai

Vanika(manu ka glass wala hath jor se jhatakte hue)- mujhe pyas nahi hai, aur shant kaise ho jau, tum ne jo kiya hai uske bad mera shant hona sambhav nahi hai

Manu- baat to batao aakhir kya hui, mujhe bhi to pata chale tum gussa asal me kis baat par ho

Vanika(manu ko ghoorte hue)- sach sach batana, ye sab tumne mujhe fasane ke liye kiya than a

Manu- kya sab

Vanika- ye honeymoon suite book karna, fir market me un ladko se ladayi karna, fir doctor se kehalwana ki………. aur wo sab…… mujhe to kehne me bhi sharam aa rhi hai

Manu- tumhe aisa kyu lagta hai ki maine ye sab tumhe fasane ke liye kiya hai

Vanika- agar tumne ye sab mujhe fasane ke liya nahi kiya to ye shadi ka joda tumhare pas pehle se he kaise tha jabki maine apni manzoori to bad me di thi

Manu- because I believe you, mujhe pura vishwas tha ki tum mujhe na nahi karogi, aur han ek baat aur ye sab jootha nahi tha wo ladke unke sath hui ladayi wo sab asli tha, tumhe sach me lagta hai ki mai aisi koi cheap harqat kar sakta hu

Vanika- jooth ye ek dum jooth hai mujhe tum par bilkul bhi vishwas nahi

Manu- mujhpar na sahi par doctor ne jo bola kya uski baat bhi joothi ho sakti hai?

Vanika- actors ko hire karke jooth bulwana koi badi baat nahi hai

Ye sunkar manu ek report nikalta hai aur vanika ki aur badha deta hai, actually wo doctor dwara prescribed test tha jise manu ne vanika se chhup kar karwaya tha kyuki wo janta tha ki report kharab aayegi aur vanika us incident ke bad already bahut tense thi wo use aur pareshan karna nahi chahta tha

Vanika- ab ye kya hai

Manu- dekho to sahi, tumhe khud pta chal jayega

Vanika jaise he report dekhti hai to samjh jati hai ki manu sach me injured hua tha aur wo ladayi bhi asli thi

Manu- ab keh do ki ye report bhi nakli hai, nahi keh do

Ye ladayi wala incident to clear ho gya par use abhi bhi samjh nahi aaya ki manu ne ye shadi ka joda kharida kab, kyuki us din ladayi ke bad to wo log turant wapas aa gye the aur uske bad wo log shopping gye nahi, tabhi wo apne dimag ke ghode dodati hai aur

Vanika- ye shadi ka joda tumne jab hum log banglore me the aur shopping karne gye the tab buy kiya tha na,(use ghoorte hue) sach bolna

Manu(jooth bolte hue)- nahi tab nahi liya tha maine ise yahi se liya hai, sach me

Vanika- khao meri kasam

Manu(maska lagate hue)- I don’t swear on such petty matters, specially on my lovely sister

Vanika ke liye ye koi satisfactory answer to nahi tha par wo is baat se man he man khush hoti hai ki manu ne uski kasam nahi khayi iska matlab wo sach me usse kahi na khai pyar karta hai

Vanika- iska matlab tum jooth bol rhe ho

Manu- oh c’mon tum samjh kyu nahi rhi mujhe tumhe jooth bolkar kya milega

Vanika(gusse me ek dum se bol deti hai)- mai

Manu(man me khush hote hue)- agar jooth bol kar he tumhe pana hota to kabka hasil kar liya hota, ye to sacchai ki raah hai jo meri itni pariksha(test) le rhi hai

Vanika- thik hai thik hai, par ab mai yaha aur nahi rukna chahti mai banglore wapas jana chahti hu

Manu(samjh jata hai ki abhi ise chedne ka koi fayda nahi)- mujhe koi dikkat nahi hai, agar tum wapas jana chahti ho to wahi sahi par ek baat humesha yaad rakhna I LOVE YOU, marte dum tak

Vanika(ab thoda shant ho jati hai manu ke muh se apne pyar ka ijzhar sunkar aur ye dekh kar ki wo uski baat bhi man rha hai)- to apna saman pack karo aur chalo

Iske bad manu waiter ko bula kar kuch baate karta hai aur hotel ke pending dues clear kar deta hai aur wo dono agli he flight le kar banglore ke liye nikal jate hai

Yaha mai aao ko bata du ki manu vanika se kuch bhi secret rakhne ko nahi bolta, wo actually yaha risk le rha hai ki vanika khud se kya karegi ab, manu use observe karna chahta tha, aur isi ke sath wo usse kuch narazgi bhi jata rha tha jo obviously sirf dikhave ki thi.

 

[Avi Goswami]

Lajwab updates bhai

 

[Alok]

What a twist bro.......


You just nailed it......... Superb.

 

[K S Lover]

Nice update waiting for next

 

[Vikram Bhosle]

SuperB... Updates...

 

[Mahi Maurya]

आपकी कहानी बहुत अच्छी चल रही है।​

बीच में कहीं कहीं कुछ कमी नजर आई, लेकिन कहानी की चाल इतनी सधी हुई है कि उस कमी को नजरअंदाज करना पड़ा। या यूँ कहें कि कहानी ने उस कमीं को नजरअंदाज करने पर विवश कर दिया।​

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खिंचाव आकर्षण और लोलुपता को आपने बहुत अच्छे ढंग से लिखा है। ऐसे ही लिखते रहिए और पाठकों का मनोरंजन करते रहिए।​

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[A.B.KING]

Nice update

 

[Aamirpqrs]

update 29​

Vanika ab sab samjh chuki thi aur jan chuki thi ki isme manu ne use fasaya hai aur uske sath dhokha kiya hai, yehi sab sochte sochte vanika ke gulabi gaal gusse se lal ho jate hai aur wo us shadi ke jode ko wahi chhod kar manu ke kamre me jati hai, manu vanika ko dekh kar khush ho jata hai, wo us waqt naha kar bahar he aaya tha aur underwear me tha.

Manu jaise he vanika ko dekhta hai wo apni baahe fehra deta hai use gale lagane ke liye par tabhi manu ke gaal par ek jordar tamacha lagta hai aur usi ke sath manu ki seeti peeti gul ho jati hai, use samjh nahi aata ki kal tak jo uska lund muh me le rhi thi usse shadi karne ko taiyar thi wo aaj apne purane lehje me wapas kaise laut aayi.

Vanika(rote hue aur guuse me)- you cheap bastard………… how dare you, kitne ghinone ho tum apni he behan ke sath aisi cheap harqat karte hue tumhe sharam nahi aayi, naali ke gande keede

Manu nahi janta tha ki baat kya hai par wo fir bhi vanika ko ek bar shant karna chahta tha aur usi ke liye wo vanika ke kareeb jane ki koshish karta hai

Vanika(manu ko dhakka dete hue)- dur raho tum mujhse, don’t you dare come near me

Manu vanika ki aankho me dekhta hai to krodh ki jwala jal rhi thi jise dekh manu ki ek bar fatt kar chaar ho jati hai par wo himmat karta hai

Manu- vanika baat kya hai tum itni gusse me kyu ho

Vanika- gusse me kyu hu tumhe nai pta ki mai gusse me kyu hu

Manu- mujhe kaise pta hoga, acha ek kam karo tum ye pani pee lo(pas padi table se pani ka glass vanika ki aur badhate hue) thoda shant ho jao fir baat karte hai

Vanika(manu ka glass wala hath jor se jhatakte hue)- mujhe pyas nahi hai, aur shant kaise ho jau, tum ne jo kiya hai uske bad mera shant hona sambhav nahi hai

Manu- baat to batao aakhir kya hui, mujhe bhi to pata chale tum gussa asal me kis baat par ho

Vanika(manu ko ghoorte hue)- sach sach batana, ye sab tumne mujhe fasane ke liye kiya than a

Manu- kya sab

Vanika- ye honeymoon suite book karna, fir market me un ladko se ladayi karna, fir doctor se kehalwana ki………. aur wo sab…… mujhe to kehne me bhi sharam aa rhi hai

Manu- tumhe aisa kyu lagta hai ki maine ye sab tumhe fasane ke liye kiya hai

Vanika- agar tumne ye sab mujhe fasane ke liya nahi kiya to ye shadi ka joda tumhare pas pehle se he kaise tha jabki maine apni manzoori to bad me di thi

Manu- because I believe you, mujhe pura vishwas tha ki tum mujhe na nahi karogi, aur han ek baat aur ye sab jootha nahi tha wo ladke unke sath hui ladayi wo sab asli tha, tumhe sach me lagta hai ki mai aisi koi cheap harqat kar sakta hu

Vanika- jooth ye ek dum jooth hai mujhe tum par bilkul bhi vishwas nahi

Manu- mujhpar na sahi par doctor ne jo bola kya uski baat bhi joothi ho sakti hai?

Vanika- actors ko hire karke jooth bulwana koi badi baat nahi hai

Ye sunkar manu ek report nikalta hai aur vanika ki aur badha deta hai, actually wo doctor dwara prescribed test tha jise manu ne vanika se chhup kar karwaya tha kyuki wo janta tha ki report kharab aayegi aur vanika us incident ke bad already bahut tense thi wo use aur pareshan karna nahi chahta tha

Vanika- ab ye kya hai

Manu- dekho to sahi, tumhe khud pta chal jayega

Vanika jaise he report dekhti hai to samjh jati hai ki manu sach me injured hua tha aur wo ladayi bhi asli thi

Manu- ab keh do ki ye report bhi nakli hai, nahi keh do

Ye ladayi wala incident to clear ho gya par use abhi bhi samjh nahi aaya ki manu ne ye shadi ka joda kharida kab, kyuki us din ladayi ke bad to wo log turant wapas aa gye the aur uske bad wo log shopping gye nahi, tabhi wo apne dimag ke ghode dodati hai aur

Vanika- ye shadi ka joda tumne jab hum log banglore me the aur shopping karne gye the tab buy kiya tha na,(use ghoorte hue) sach bolna

Manu(jooth bolte hue)- nahi tab nahi liya tha maine ise yahi se liya hai, sach me

Vanika- khao meri kasam

Manu(maska lagate hue)- I don’t swear on such petty matters, specially on my lovely sister

Vanika ke liye ye koi satisfactory answer to nahi tha par wo is baat se man he man khush hoti hai ki manu ne uski kasam nahi khayi iska matlab wo sach me usse kahi na khai pyar karta hai

Vanika- iska matlab tum jooth bol rhe ho

Manu- oh c’mon tum samjh kyu nahi rhi mujhe tumhe jooth bolkar kya milega

Vanika(gusse me ek dum se bol deti hai)- mai

Manu(man me khush hote hue)- agar jooth bol kar he tumhe pana hota to kabka hasil kar liya hota, ye to sacchai ki raah hai jo meri itni pariksha(test) le rhi hai

Vanika- thik hai thik hai, par ab mai yaha aur nahi rukna chahti mai banglore wapas jana chahti hu

Manu(samjh jata hai ki abhi ise chedne ka koi fayda nahi)- mujhe koi dikkat nahi hai, agar tum wapas jana chahti ho to wahi sahi par ek baat humesha yaad rakhna I LOVE YOU, marte dum tak

Vanika(ab thoda shant ho jati hai manu ke muh se apne pyar ka ijzhar sunkar aur ye dekh kar ki wo uski baat bhi man rha hai)- to apna saman pack karo aur chalo

Iske bad manu waiter ko bula kar kuch baate karta hai aur hotel ke pending dues clear kar deta hai aur wo dono agli he flight le kar banglore ke liye nikal jate hai

Yaha mai aao ko bata du ki manu vanika se kuch bhi secret rakhne ko nahi bolta, wo actually yaha risk le rha hai ki vanika khud se kya karegi ab, manu use observe karna chahta tha, aur isi ke sath wo usse kuch narazgi bhi jata rha tha jo obviously sirf dikhave ki thi.

Bahut accha update bhaiii❤
You are a very good writer
Baki story bdiya chal rahi haiii
Aur ek baat kehna chahoonga k vanika ko manu ki Randi na bnakar dono k beech pyar aur sex ka combination rakhen❤
Aur iske alawa dusri behano k saath bhi pyar aur sex dono ka combination bnaye rakhen
Overall bahut accha likh rahe ho

 

[Hami123]

Ho gia storie ka kbara

update 29​

Vanika ab sab samjh chuki thi aur jan chuki thi ki isme manu ne use fasaya hai aur uske sath dhokha kiya hai, yehi sab sochte sochte vanika ke gulabi gaal gusse se lal ho jate hai aur wo us shadi ke jode ko wahi chhod kar manu ke kamre me jati hai, manu vanika ko dekh kar khush ho jata hai, wo us waqt naha kar bahar he aaya tha aur underwear me tha.

Manu jaise he vanika ko dekhta hai wo apni baahe fehra deta hai use gale lagane ke liye par tabhi manu ke gaal par ek jordar tamacha lagta hai aur usi ke sath manu ki seeti peeti gul ho jati hai, use samjh nahi aata ki kal tak jo uska lund muh me le rhi thi usse shadi karne ko taiyar thi wo aaj apne purane lehje me wapas kaise laut aayi.

Vanika(rote hue aur guuse me)- you cheap bastard………… how dare you, kitne ghinone ho tum apni he behan ke sath aisi cheap harqat karte hue tumhe sharam nahi aayi, naali ke gande keede

Manu nahi janta tha ki baat kya hai par wo fir bhi vanika ko ek bar shant karna chahta tha aur usi ke liye wo vanika ke kareeb jane ki koshish karta hai

Vanika(manu ko dhakka dete hue)- dur raho tum mujhse, don’t you dare come near me

Manu vanika ki aankho me dekhta hai to krodh ki jwala jal rhi thi jise dekh manu ki ek bar fatt kar chaar ho jati hai par wo himmat karta hai

Manu- vanika baat kya hai tum itni gusse me kyu ho

Vanika- gusse me kyu hu tumhe nai pta ki mai gusse me kyu hu

Manu- mujhe kaise pta hoga, acha ek kam karo tum ye pani pee lo(pas padi table se pani ka glass vanika ki aur badhate hue) thoda shant ho jao fir baat karte hai

Vanika(manu ka glass wala hath jor se jhatakte hue)- mujhe pyas nahi hai, aur shant kaise ho jau, tum ne jo kiya hai uske bad mera shant hona sambhav nahi hai

Manu- baat to batao aakhir kya hui, mujhe bhi to pata chale tum gussa asal me kis baat par ho

Vanika(manu ko ghoorte hue)- sach sach batana, ye sab tumne mujhe fasane ke liye kiya than a

Manu- kya sab

Vanika- ye honeymoon suite book karna, fir market me un ladko se ladayi karna, fir doctor se kehalwana ki………. aur wo sab…… mujhe to kehne me bhi sharam aa rhi hai

Manu- tumhe aisa kyu lagta hai ki maine ye sab tumhe fasane ke liye kiya hai

Vanika- agar tumne ye sab mujhe fasane ke liya nahi kiya to ye shadi ka joda tumhare pas pehle se he kaise tha jabki maine apni manzoori to bad me di thi

Manu- because I believe you, mujhe pura vishwas tha ki tum mujhe na nahi karogi, aur han ek baat aur ye sab jootha nahi tha wo ladke unke sath hui ladayi wo sab asli tha, tumhe sach me lagta hai ki mai aisi koi cheap harqat kar sakta hu

Vanika- jooth ye ek dum jooth hai mujhe tum par bilkul bhi vishwas nahi

Manu- mujhpar na sahi par doctor ne jo bola kya uski baat bhi joothi ho sakti hai?

Vanika- actors ko hire karke jooth bulwana koi badi baat nahi hai

Ye sunkar manu ek report nikalta hai aur vanika ki aur badha deta hai, actually wo doctor dwara prescribed test tha jise manu ne vanika se chhup kar karwaya tha kyuki wo janta tha ki report kharab aayegi aur vanika us incident ke bad already bahut tense thi wo use aur pareshan karna nahi chahta tha

Vanika- ab ye kya hai

Manu- dekho to sahi, tumhe khud pta chal jayega

Vanika jaise he report dekhti hai to samjh jati hai ki manu sach me injured hua tha aur wo ladayi bhi asli thi

Manu- ab keh do ki ye report bhi nakli hai, nahi keh do

Ye ladayi wala incident to clear ho gya par use abhi bhi samjh nahi aaya ki manu ne ye shadi ka joda kharida kab, kyuki us din ladayi ke bad to wo log turant wapas aa gye the aur uske bad wo log shopping gye nahi, tabhi wo apne dimag ke ghode dodati hai aur

Vanika- ye shadi ka joda tumne jab hum log banglore me the aur shopping karne gye the tab buy kiya tha na,(use ghoorte hue) sach bolna

Manu(jooth bolte hue)- nahi tab nahi liya tha maine ise yahi se liya hai, sach me

Vanika- khao meri kasam

Manu(maska lagate hue)- I don’t swear on such petty matters, specially on my lovely sister

Vanika ke liye ye koi satisfactory answer to nahi tha par wo is baat se man he man khush hoti hai ki manu ne uski kasam nahi khayi iska matlab wo sach me usse kahi na khai pyar karta hai

Vanika- iska matlab tum jooth bol rhe ho

Manu- oh c’mon tum samjh kyu nahi rhi mujhe tumhe jooth bolkar kya milega

Vanika(gusse me ek dum se bol deti hai)- mai

Manu(man me khush hote hue)- agar jooth bol kar he tumhe pana hota to kabka hasil kar liya hota, ye to sacchai ki raah hai jo meri itni pariksha(test) le rhi hai

Vanika- thik hai thik hai, par ab mai yaha aur nahi rukna chahti mai banglore wapas jana chahti hu

Manu(samjh jata hai ki abhi ise chedne ka koi fayda nahi)- mujhe koi dikkat nahi hai, agar tum wapas jana chahti ho to wahi sahi par ek baat humesha yaad rakhna I LOVE YOU, marte dum tak

Vanika(ab thoda shant ho jati hai manu ke muh se apne pyar ka ijzhar sunkar aur ye dekh kar ki wo uski baat bhi man rha hai)- to apna saman pack karo aur chalo

Iske bad manu waiter ko bula kar kuch baate karta hai aur hotel ke pending dues clear kar deta hai aur wo dono agli he flight le kar banglore ke liye nikal jate hai

Yaha mai aao ko bata du ki manu vanika se kuch bhi secret rakhne ko nahi bolta, wo actually yaha risk le rha hai ki vanika khud se kya karegi ab, manu use observe karna chahta tha, aur isi ke sath wo usse kuch narazgi bhi jata rha tha jo obviously sirf dikhave ki thi.