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Incest mangalsutra se kamsutra tak

Dosto pehle kiski chudai dekhna pasand karoge ?

  • Anjali

    Votes: 8 5.8%
  • Rajni

    Votes: 80 57.6%
  • Srishti

    Votes: 8 5.8%
  • Vanika

    Votes: 35 25.2%
  • Swati

    Votes: 8 5.8%

  • Total voters
    139
  • Poll closed .

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update 31
Manu ke room me pahunch kar wo use soya hua paati hai, rajni uske kareeb jakar manu ke sirhane baith jati hai aur bade he pyar se apne komal hatho ko uske mathe par firhati hai aur isi ke sath manu ki aankh khul jati hai aur rajni ko apne sirhane pakar wo dar jata hai aur ek dum se hadbada kar uth khada hota hai

Rajni- uth gya meri aankho ka tara

Manu(rajni ke muh se ye sunkar samjh jata hai ki ya to vanika ne mummy se kuch nahi kaha ya fir jo bhi kaha hai wo jooth kaha hai)- han mummy wo bahut thak gya tha isi liye laitte he neend aa gyi

Rajni- koi baat nahi, mujhe tum par bahut naaz hai, mera beta kitna bada ho gya hai apni jimmedariyan sirf samjh he nahi raha balki unhe nibha bhi rha hai

Manu- mummy aap kya keh rhi hai mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa rha

Rajni- thank you keh rhi hu

Manu- par kyu

Rajni- ab zyada bano mat, vanika ne mujhe sab bata diya hai ki kaise tumne use un gundo se bachaya, agar tum na hote beta to us din ghar ki izzat ko humesha ke liye daag lag jata, mere ladle ko kisi ki nazar na lage

Manu(ab sab samjh jata hai aur man he man khush hota hai ki vanika ne mummy ko kuch nahi bataya)- koi baat nahi maa ye to mera farz tha, apni badi behan ki raksha mai nahi karunga to aur kon karega

Ye sun kar rajni manu ko gale laga leti hai aur man me sochti hai ki dekhte he dekhte uska nanha sa baccha pta nahi kab itni badi baate karna seekh gya

Tabhi manu kehta hai

Manu- mummy aise sukhe sukhe he pyar karoge kya kitni dur se aaya hu, bahut bookh lagi hai kuch acha sa khane ko banao na

Rajni(pyar aur khushi se aankho me aansu aa jate hai)- are mai to bhool he gyi, chal tu fresh ho ja mai jaldi se apne bête ke liye kuch acha sa khane ko banati hu.

Iske bad manu fresh ho kar khane ki table par pahunch jata hai aur udhar kitchen se vanika uske liye khana le kar aati hai rajni abhi bhi rasoi me he thi, manu peeche mud kar dekhta hai aur vanika ko he jan bujhkar ghoor kar dekhne lagta hai par vanika usse nazre chura rhi thi

Jaise he vanika plate table par rakhkar wapas jane ke liye palatti hai manu uska hath pakad leta hai

Ye dekh kar vanika ki aankhe ek dum se badi ho jati hai aur wo manu ki aur dekhti hai

Manu janta tha ki agar isne abhi tak mummy se kuch nahi kaha to aage bhi ye chidiya apna muh nahi kholegi matlab rasta saf hai, aur wo uska hath nahi chhodta ye dekh vanika kehti hai

Vanika(haule se taki rajni ko sunai na pade)- chhod mera hath

Manu- agar na chhodu to

Vanika- to mai mummy se shikayat karungi

Manu(hansta hua)- agar karni hoti to kabki kar chuki hoti

Vanika- manu mera hath chhod nahi to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga

Aur tabhi rajni vanika ko awaz lagati hai

Manu- nahi chhodta ja jo karna hai karle

Aur itna sunte he vanika manu ke hath par daant gada deti hai aur isi ke manu uska hath chhod deta hai, vanika waha se bhag jati hai aur peeche mud kar dekhti hai hansti hui to use dekhkar manu jaha vanika ne daant gadaye the use chaat leta hai, vanika ye dekh kar Sharma jati hai aur dhatt ka ishara karti hui wapas rasoi me chali jati hai

(yaha mai aapko bata du ki rone se vanika ke andar ka sara gum sara gussa nikal jata hai jisse wo shant ho jati hai aur fir se usi masti mazak wale mood me aa jati hai)

Iske bad 3no milkar khana khate hai aur uske baad rajni bartan lekar rasoi me chali jati hai aur vanika apne room me

Iske bad manu bhi rasoi me chala jata hai

Manu- mummy aaj papa nahi dikhe

Rajni- haa beta wo actually thoda factory ka kam zyada hai aur foreign se bhi kuch clients aaye hue hai to aaj kal late he aate hai, tum so jao unse subah mil lena

Manu- nahi mummy abhi neend nahi aa rhi, mai aisa karta hu ki vanika di ko doodh de kar aata hu

Iske bad manu ek glass me doodh lekar vanika ke room me chala jata hai, wo us waqt apna saman unpack kar rhi thi

Manu ko dekh kar vanika bolti hai

Vanika- kyu aaye ho tum yaha, jao yaha se mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni

Manu- agar tumhe mujhse koi baat nahi karni to mat karo par is bechare doodh ke gilas ka kya kasoor hai ise to pee lo

Vanika- kyu laye ho tum ye doodh, mujhe koi zaroorat nahi hai iski

Manu- ab tumhe mera khayal nahi hai to na sahi, mai maru ke

(aur itna kehne ke bad manu se shabad adhure reh jate hai kyuki vanika uske muh par apna hath rakh deti hai)

Vanika- aayinda aisi baat mat kehna kyuki farq padta hai

Manu- are jao jao jooth mat bolo agar farq padta to aise goa se nahi aate hum log aur apne room se jane ke liye na kehti tum mujhe, par han ek baat jan lo mujhe tumhari fikr hai isi liye ye doodh laya hu, itna royi ho ser dard karne laga hoga doodh pee lo acha mehsoos karogi

Vanika ye sunkar andar se apne aap par swal uthane lagti hai ki itna sab kuch maine iske sath kiya iska dil tod diya, iske armano ko aag laga di fir bhi ye mere liye itna concerned hai, kahi mai he to galat nahi, kahi ye mujhse sach me pyar to na karne laga ho

Vanika baat aage badhate hue apna unpacking ka kam continue karti hai

Vanika- kya sach me tumhe meri itni fikr hai

Manu- kaha tha na I LOVE YOU marte dum tak, to jooth thodi he bola tha

Manu ke ye bolte he vanika ke saman se wahi shadi ka joda nikalta hai, use dekh kar vanika expression less ho jati hai aur manu ke muh par halki si smile aa jati hai

Aur jaise he vanika manu ki taraf dekhti hai

Vanika- kutte tu kabhi nahi sudhrega, itna sab kuch ho gya aur abhi bhi hans raha hai

Manu- ab sapna to pura ho na saka par agar pura ho jata to kya hota use soch kar insane khush bhi nahi ho sakta

Vanika(ye sunkar use bura lagta hai ki uski wajah se manu ke arman pure na ho sake)- par jo tum karne ko keh rhe the wo tha bhi to galat

Manu- agar galat tha to use pura karne ka jootha wada kyu kiya, kyu mujhe ye aasha di ki manu is duniya me abhi bhi koj hai jiske sath tum enjoy kar sakte ho, kyu mujhe ye ehsas karwaya ki anjali ke jane je bad meri black and white ho chuki picture abhi bhi rangeen ho sakti hai

Vanika ye sab manu ke muh se sun kar aur depress ho jati hai, uske pas koi jawab nahi hota kyuki ye wo khud thi jisne han kaha tha manu ne uske sath koi jabardasti nahi ki, vanika achanak

Vanika- dekho manu jo hua uske liye I’m sorry mujhse galati ho gyi mujhe wo nahi karna chahiye tha

Manu- nahi di nahi galati to mujhse ho gyi ki maine aapko khush karne ke liye ye trip book kar liya, aap ko to shuru se he mujhpar bharosa nahi tha meri neeyat me khot lag rha tha, meri galati thi ki maine aap ke liye un gundo se panga liya aur khud chot khayi kyuki aap ko to wo sab acting lagti hai aap ko to lagta hai ki mai to makkar hu aur shayad isi liye aap ne apna wada bhi tod diya mujhe khush rakhne ka, dekhiye dhayan se mai khush nahi hu aise aap se dur ho kar mai khush nahi hu, I LOVE YOU VANIKA I really LOVE YOU

Iske bad vanika bilkul toot jati hai aur apni bachi hui himmat se kehti hai

Vanika- agar mujhe apna wada yaad na hota ya tod diya hota aaj yaha khade nahi hote tum

Manu samjh jata hai ki vanika rajni ko na batane ke liye aisa bol rhi hai

Manu(halki awaz me clap karte hue)- ooh thank you so much miss vanika jo aapne mujh par ye ehsan kiya, but you know what mai kisi ka ehsan nai rakhta, mai khud abhi mummy ko sab sach bata dunga uske bad jo hoga dekha jayega, but you my darling, you remember one thing, I might die after this but till my dusk I will LOVE you

Aur itna kehne ke bad manu room se nikal jata hai
 

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Bahut acche
Abhi dekhte hain aage 2no k beech kya hota haii
Kahin na kahin vanika manu ko chahne toh lagi hai
Aur uski aur attraction bhi bad rha hai
Dekhte hain woh kab tak izhaar karti hai Manu k aage👍
Waiting for the next update
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अरे नहीं मान्यवर।
आप मुझे अपना प्रेरणाश्रोत बताकर कुछ ज्यादा ही सम्मान दे रहे हैंं हमें, जबकि हम अभी इसके काबिल नहीं हैं। आपकी लेखनी बहुत अच्छी है। सीखना तो मुझे आपसे चाहिए।

बाकी आपकी कहानी में जिस कमी का हमने जिक्र किया है। वो कहानी की शुरुआत में था। और हमने शुरू में आपकी कहानी पढ़ी नहीं । वो तो हमने अभी पढ़ी है। और कहानी इतनी आगे बढ़ चुकी है और अच्छी जा रही है। तो उसका सिलसिले वार जिक्र करना कहानी के साथ अन्याय होगा। क्योंकि उसके बाद मुझे कहीं और कमी नजर आती तो मैं जरूर जिक्र करती। छोटी मोटी त्रुटियाँ हर कहानी में होती हैं। लेकिन सफल कहानी वही होती है जिसमें वो त्रुटि बार बार न दोहराई जाए। और आपकी कहानी में मुझे उसके बात कही कुछ नहीं दिखा।

इसलिए उसका जिक्र बेमानी होगा। आप बहुत अच्छा लिख रहे हैं। ऐसे ही लिखते रहिए। और सभी पाठकों का मनोरंजक करते रहिए।

mahodaya aap mujhe ab neecha dikha rahi hai mere jaisa chota writer jo updates bhi regular nahi de pata, usse aap sikhengi, mazak mat udaiye garib ka.
aur ye aap mane na mane kintu meri prernastrot to aap he hai, ye aap ko swikar karna he hoga.
RESPECT:respekt:
 

sumimaster

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Vanika ab sab samjh chuki thi aur jan chuki thi ki isme manu ne use fasaya hai aur uske sath dhokha kiya hai, yehi sab sochte sochte vanika ke gulabi gaal gusse se lal ho jate hai aur wo us shadi ke jode ko wahi chhod kar manu ke kamre me jati hai, manu vanika ko dekh kar khush ho jata hai, wo us waqt naha kar bahar he aaya tha aur underwear me tha.

Manu jaise he vanika ko dekhta hai wo apni baahe fehra deta hai use gale lagane ke liye par tabhi manu ke gaal par ek jordar tamacha lagta hai aur usi ke sath manu ki seeti peeti gul ho jati hai, use samjh nahi aata ki kal tak jo uska lund muh me le rhi thi usse shadi karne ko taiyar thi wo aaj apne purane lehje me wapas kaise laut aayi.

Vanika(rote hue aur guuse me)- you cheap bastard………… how dare you, kitne ghinone ho tum apni he behan ke sath aisi cheap harqat karte hue tumhe sharam nahi aayi, naali ke gande keede

Manu nahi janta tha ki baat kya hai par wo fir bhi vanika ko ek bar shant karna chahta tha aur usi ke liye wo vanika ke kareeb jane ki koshish karta hai

Vanika(manu ko dhakka dete hue)- dur raho tum mujhse, don’t you dare come near me

Manu vanika ki aankho me dekhta hai to krodh ki jwala jal rhi thi jise dekh manu ki ek bar fatt kar chaar ho jati hai par wo himmat karta hai

Manu- vanika baat kya hai tum itni gusse me kyu ho

Vanika- gusse me kyu hu tumhe nai pta ki mai gusse me kyu hu

Manu- mujhe kaise pta hoga, acha ek kam karo tum ye pani pee lo(pas padi table se pani ka glass vanika ki aur badhate hue) thoda shant ho jao fir baat karte hai

Vanika(manu ka glass wala hath jor se jhatakte hue)- mujhe pyas nahi hai, aur shant kaise ho jau, tum ne jo kiya hai uske bad mera shant hona sambhav nahi hai

Manu- baat to batao aakhir kya hui, mujhe bhi to pata chale tum gussa asal me kis baat par ho

Vanika(manu ko ghoorte hue)- sach sach batana, ye sab tumne mujhe fasane ke liye kiya than a

Manu- kya sab

Vanika- ye honeymoon suite book karna, fir market me un ladko se ladayi karna, fir doctor se kehalwana ki………. aur wo sab…… mujhe to kehne me bhi sharam aa rhi hai

Manu- tumhe aisa kyu lagta hai ki maine ye sab tumhe fasane ke liye kiya hai

Vanika- agar tumne ye sab mujhe fasane ke liya nahi kiya to ye shadi ka joda tumhare pas pehle se he kaise tha jabki maine apni manzoori to bad me di thi

Manu- because I believe you, mujhe pura vishwas tha ki tum mujhe na nahi karogi, aur han ek baat aur ye sab jootha nahi tha wo ladke unke sath hui ladayi wo sab asli tha, tumhe sach me lagta hai ki mai aisi koi cheap harqat kar sakta hu

Vanika- jooth ye ek dum jooth hai mujhe tum par bilkul bhi vishwas nahi

Manu- mujhpar na sahi par doctor ne jo bola kya uski baat bhi joothi ho sakti hai?

Vanika- actors ko hire karke jooth bulwana koi badi baat nahi hai

Ye sunkar manu ek report nikalta hai aur vanika ki aur badha deta hai, actually wo doctor dwara prescribed test tha jise manu ne vanika se chhup kar karwaya tha kyuki wo janta tha ki report kharab aayegi aur vanika us incident ke bad already bahut tense thi wo use aur pareshan karna nahi chahta tha

Vanika- ab ye kya hai

Manu- dekho to sahi, tumhe khud pta chal jayega

Vanika jaise he report dekhti hai to samjh jati hai ki manu sach me injured hua tha aur wo ladayi bhi asli thi

Manu- ab keh do ki ye report bhi nakli hai, nahi keh do

Ye ladayi wala incident to clear ho gya par use abhi bhi samjh nahi aaya ki manu ne ye shadi ka joda kharida kab, kyuki us din ladayi ke bad to wo log turant wapas aa gye the aur uske bad wo log shopping gye nahi, tabhi wo apne dimag ke ghode dodati hai aur

Vanika- ye shadi ka joda tumne jab hum log banglore me the aur shopping karne gye the tab buy kiya tha na,(use ghoorte hue) sach bolna

Manu(jooth bolte hue)- nahi tab nahi liya tha maine ise yahi se liya hai, sach me

Vanika- khao meri kasam

Manu(maska lagate hue)- I don’t swear on such petty matters, specially on my lovely sister

Vanika ke liye ye koi satisfactory answer to nahi tha par wo is baat se man he man khush hoti hai ki manu ne uski kasam nahi khayi iska matlab wo sach me usse kahi na khai pyar karta hai

Vanika- iska matlab tum jooth bol rhe ho

Manu- oh c’mon tum samjh kyu nahi rhi mujhe tumhe jooth bolkar kya milega

Vanika(gusse me ek dum se bol deti hai)- mai

Manu(man me khush hote hue)- agar jooth bol kar he tumhe pana hota to kabka hasil kar liya hota, ye to sacchai ki raah hai jo meri itni pariksha(test) le rhi hai

Vanika- thik hai thik hai, par ab mai yaha aur nahi rukna chahti mai banglore wapas jana chahti hu

Manu(samjh jata hai ki abhi ise chedne ka koi fayda nahi)- mujhe koi dikkat nahi hai, agar tum wapas jana chahti ho to wahi sahi par ek baat humesha yaad rakhna I LOVE YOU, marte dum tak

Vanika(ab thoda shant ho jati hai manu ke muh se apne pyar ka ijzhar sunkar aur ye dekh kar ki wo uski baat bhi man rha hai)- to apna saman pack karo aur chalo

Iske bad manu waiter ko bula kar kuch baate karta hai aur hotel ke pending dues clear kar deta hai aur wo dono agli he flight le kar banglore ke liye nikal jate hai

Yaha mai aao ko bata du ki manu vanika se kuch bhi secret rakhne ko nahi bolta, wo actually yaha risk le rha hai ki vanika khud se kya karegi ab, manu use observe karna chahta tha, aur isi ke sath wo usse kuch narazgi bhi jata rha tha jo obviously sirf dikhave ki thi.
they are returning without fulfilling Manu's previous mentioned plan so,now writer wants to write story according to readers request... great that's a far more modern approach to writing the story... changing the plot whenever the readers don't find it appropriate...I was hoping vanika will be sex slave of manu by the time they will be leaving the place but...it's ok...
 

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update 31
Manu ke room me pahunch kar wo use soya hua paati hai, rajni uske kareeb jakar manu ke sirhane baith jati hai aur bade he pyar se apne komal hatho ko uske mathe par firhati hai aur isi ke sath manu ki aankh khul jati hai aur rajni ko apne sirhane pakar wo dar jata hai aur ek dum se hadbada kar uth khada hota hai

Rajni- uth gya meri aankho ka tara

Manu(rajni ke muh se ye sunkar samjh jata hai ki ya to vanika ne mummy se kuch nahi kaha ya fir jo bhi kaha hai wo jooth kaha hai)- han mummy wo bahut thak gya tha isi liye laitte he neend aa gyi

Rajni- koi baat nahi, mujhe tum par bahut naaz hai, mera beta kitna bada ho gya hai apni jimmedariyan sirf samjh he nahi raha balki unhe nibha bhi rha hai

Manu- mummy aap kya keh rhi hai mujhe kuch samjh nahi aa rha

Rajni- thank you keh rhi hu

Manu- par kyu

Rajni- ab zyada bano mat, vanika ne mujhe sab bata diya hai ki kaise tumne use un gundo se bachaya, agar tum na hote beta to us din ghar ki izzat ko humesha ke liye daag lag jata, mere ladle ko kisi ki nazar na lage

Manu(ab sab samjh jata hai aur man he man khush hota hai ki vanika ne mummy ko kuch nahi bataya)- koi baat nahi maa ye to mera farz tha, apni badi behan ki raksha mai nahi karunga to aur kon karega

Ye sun kar rajni manu ko gale laga leti hai aur man me sochti hai ki dekhte he dekhte uska nanha sa baccha pta nahi kab itni badi baate karna seekh gya

Tabhi manu kehta hai

Manu- mummy aise sukhe sukhe he pyar karoge kya kitni dur se aaya hu, bahut bookh lagi hai kuch acha sa khane ko banao na

Rajni(pyar aur khushi se aankho me aansu aa jate hai)- are mai to bhool he gyi, chal tu fresh ho ja mai jaldi se apne bête ke liye kuch acha sa khane ko banati hu.

Iske bad manu fresh ho kar khane ki table par pahunch jata hai aur udhar kitchen se vanika uske liye khana le kar aati hai rajni abhi bhi rasoi me he thi, manu peeche mud kar dekhta hai aur vanika ko he jan bujhkar ghoor kar dekhne lagta hai par vanika usse nazre chura rhi thi

Jaise he vanika plate table par rakhkar wapas jane ke liye palatti hai manu uska hath pakad leta hai

Ye dekh kar vanika ki aankhe ek dum se badi ho jati hai aur wo manu ki aur dekhti hai

Manu janta tha ki agar isne abhi tak mummy se kuch nahi kaha to aage bhi ye chidiya apna muh nahi kholegi matlab rasta saf hai, aur wo uska hath nahi chhodta ye dekh vanika kehti hai

Vanika(haule se taki rajni ko sunai na pade)- chhod mera hath

Manu- agar na chhodu to

Vanika- to mai mummy se shikayat karungi

Manu(hansta hua)- agar karni hoti to kabki kar chuki hoti

Vanika- manu mera hath chhod nahi to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga

Aur tabhi rajni vanika ko awaz lagati hai

Manu- nahi chhodta ja jo karna hai karle

Aur itna sunte he vanika manu ke hath par daant gada deti hai aur isi ke manu uska hath chhod deta hai, vanika waha se bhag jati hai aur peeche mud kar dekhti hai hansti hui to use dekhkar manu jaha vanika ne daant gadaye the use chaat leta hai, vanika ye dekh kar Sharma jati hai aur dhatt ka ishara karti hui wapas rasoi me chali jati hai

(yaha mai aapko bata du ki rone se vanika ke andar ka sara gum sara gussa nikal jata hai jisse wo shant ho jati hai aur fir se usi masti mazak wale mood me aa jati hai)

Iske bad 3no milkar khana khate hai aur uske baad rajni bartan lekar rasoi me chali jati hai aur vanika apne room me

Iske bad manu bhi rasoi me chala jata hai

Manu- mummy aaj papa nahi dikhe

Rajni- haa beta wo actually thoda factory ka kam zyada hai aur foreign se bhi kuch clients aaye hue hai to aaj kal late he aate hai, tum so jao unse subah mil lena

Manu- nahi mummy abhi neend nahi aa rhi, mai aisa karta hu ki vanika di ko doodh de kar aata hu

Iske bad manu ek glass me doodh lekar vanika ke room me chala jata hai, wo us waqt apna saman unpack kar rhi thi

Manu ko dekh kar vanika bolti hai

Vanika- kyu aaye ho tum yaha, jao yaha se mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni

Manu- agar tumhe mujhse koi baat nahi karni to mat karo par is bechare doodh ke gilas ka kya kasoor hai ise to pee lo

Vanika- kyu laye ho tum ye doodh, mujhe koi zaroorat nahi hai iski

Manu- ab tumhe mera khayal nahi hai to na sahi, mai maru ke

(aur itna kehne ke bad manu se shabad adhure reh jate hai kyuki vanika uske muh par apna hath rakh deti hai)

Vanika- aayinda aisi baat mat kehna kyuki farq padta hai

Manu- are jao jao jooth mat bolo agar farq padta to aise goa se nahi aate hum log aur apne room se jane ke liye na kehti tum mujhe, par han ek baat jan lo mujhe tumhari fikr hai isi liye ye doodh laya hu, itna royi ho ser dard karne laga hoga doodh pee lo acha mehsoos karogi

Vanika ye sunkar andar se apne aap par swal uthane lagti hai ki itna sab kuch maine iske sath kiya iska dil tod diya, iske armano ko aag laga di fir bhi ye mere liye itna concerned hai, kahi mai he to galat nahi, kahi ye mujhse sach me pyar to na karne laga ho

Vanika baat aage badhate hue apna unpacking ka kam continue karti hai

Vanika- kya sach me tumhe meri itni fikr hai

Manu- kaha tha na I LOVE YOU marte dum tak, to jooth thodi he bola tha

Manu ke ye bolte he vanika ke saman se wahi shadi ka joda nikalta hai, use dekh kar vanika expression less ho jati hai aur manu ke muh par halki si smile aa jati hai

Aur jaise he vanika manu ki taraf dekhti hai

Vanika- kutte tu kabhi nahi sudhrega, itna sab kuch ho gya aur abhi bhi hans raha hai

Manu- ab sapna to pura ho na saka par agar pura ho jata to kya hota use soch kar insane khush bhi nahi ho sakta

Vanika(ye sunkar use bura lagta hai ki uski wajah se manu ke arman pure na ho sake)- par jo tum karne ko keh rhe the wo tha bhi to galat

Manu- agar galat tha to use pura karne ka jootha wada kyu kiya, kyu mujhe ye aasha di ki manu is duniya me abhi bhi koj hai jiske sath tum enjoy kar sakte ho, kyu mujhe ye ehsas karwaya ki anjali ke jane je bad meri black and white ho chuki picture abhi bhi rangeen ho sakti hai

Vanika ye sab manu ke muh se sun kar aur depress ho jati hai, uske pas koi jawab nahi hota kyuki ye wo khud thi jisne han kaha tha manu ne uske sath koi jabardasti nahi ki, vanika achanak

Vanika- dekho manu jo hua uske liye I’m sorry mujhse galati ho gyi mujhe wo nahi karna chahiye tha

Manu- nahi di nahi galati to mujhse ho gyi ki maine aapko khush karne ke liye ye trip book kar liya, aap ko to shuru se he mujhpar bharosa nahi tha meri neeyat me khot lag rha tha, meri galati thi ki maine aap ke liye un gundo se panga liya aur khud chot khayi kyuki aap ko to wo sab acting lagti hai aap ko to lagta hai ki mai to makkar hu aur shayad isi liye aap ne apna wada bhi tod diya mujhe khush rakhne ka, dekhiye dhayan se mai khush nahi hu aise aap se dur ho kar mai khush nahi hu, I LOVE YOU VANIKA I really LOVE YOU

Iske bad vanika bilkul toot jati hai aur apni bachi hui himmat se kehti hai

Vanika- agar mujhe apna wada yaad na hota ya tod diya hota aaj yaha khade nahi hote tum

Manu samjh jata hai ki vanika rajni ko na batane ke liye aisa bol rhi hai

Manu(halki awaz me clap karte hue)- ooh thank you so much miss vanika jo aapne mujh par ye ehsan kiya, but you know what mai kisi ka ehsan nai rakhta, mai khud abhi mummy ko sab sach bata dunga uske bad jo hoga dekha jayega, but you my darling, you remember one thing, I might die after this but till my dusk I will LOVE you

Aur itna kehne ke bad manu room se nikal jata hai
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