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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI DEEP STATE TOP KARTA HAI. JAHA USE TROPY AUR SCHOLARSHIP MILTI HAI..
AB AAGE>>>................
UPDATE 2
Jese hi me gate se bahar nikla achanak kisi me mera rasta rok liya.....
Ueh koi air nahi balki hamare school le sab se bigde hue ladke the.......
L1 - kyu be topper kaham chal diya......
Main - ghar ja raha hun bhai.......
Plz kya aap mera rasta chode ge........
L2 - kya ne itni bhi kya jaldi hai.........
Hamse apne topper hone ka gift to leta ja......
Main - bhai mujhe koi bhi gift bift nahi chaiye.....
Kya aap mujhe jane denge plz.....
L3 - kya be m*******d tujhe sunayi nahi deta.....
Tujhe rukne ke liye bola na to ruk.....
Main - dekho bhai maa gali mat do varna.....
L2 - varna kya be.....
Principal ko complaint karega......
Ja munna ja......
Yeh keh ke teeno ladke hasne lage.......
Main - dekho bhai log yeh jayada ho raha hai......
L3 - yeh ese nahi manega.....
Ise sabak sikhana hi padega.....
Teri maa ki sale.....
Woh ladka itna bol mujhe marne ke liye age badha.......
Yese hi usne mere muh pe punch marna chaha.....
Me twist karke side ho gya aur usi waqt uske pet ki left side me punch mar diya.....
Jis se woh niche gir pada aur karhane laga.......
(Mujhe ladna to nahi ata par.....
Park mein subha jab mein joging pe jata hun to vahan ek teacher apne students ko kuch karate bagera aur self defense sikhata hai.....
Is liye kuch moves mene bhi sikh liye.......)
Main - mene pehle hi kaha tha ki mujhe maa ki gali mat dena......
Par isne nahi suna ab bhugat.......
L2 bhi mujhe marne ko badha......
Par mene age badke niche baith ek twisting kick uske pero me mari.....
Jis se woh hawa me gulati khata hua niche gir pada......
Jese hi me kahada hua......
Kisi ne piche se mere sar pe kisi sakht cheez se baar kiya.......
Mujhe sar me bohat jayada dard hone laga......
Aur khoon bhi behne laga......
Jab mene piche palat ke dekha to piche L1 ek baseball bat liye khada tha.......
Jese hi woh dobara mujhe marne ko hua.....
Mene age badh ke baseball ko pakad liya......
Aur ek punch uske pet me de mara.......
Woh bhi pet pakad ke niche baith gya......
Fir mene uske face pe ek kick jad di......
Woh vahin let ke tadafne laga.......
Hamare charo taraf kafi bhed jama ho gayi thi.......
Principal mam aur bakki ke teachers bhi vahan pohanch gaye.......
T1 - kya hua yahan......
L2 - sir isne hame mara.......
T1 - kyu be ladke tumne inko kyu mara......
Main - sir ladayi inho me shuru ki thi.......
Aur inho ne mujhe maa ki gali bhi di........
Itne me Principal mam ne age badh ke un teeno ladko ko thappad mar diya......
T1 - mam yeh aap kya kar rahi hai.....
Galti us ladke ki hai......
Principal mam - galti uski nahi hai inki hai......
T2 - aap itne biswash ke sath kese keh sakte hai ki galti inki hai aur us ladke ki nahi.......
Principal mam - kyu ki me Deep ko kayi salo se janti hun......
Woh kabhi bhi jhooth nahi bolta.......
Samjhe......
(Un teeno se) dafa ho jao yahan se......
Woh teeno mujhe ghurte hue vahan se chale gaye.......
Itne me mujhe chakkar ane lage aur me behosh hone laga.........
Aur kuch hi palo mein me niche gir pada......
Principal mam ki nigha jab mujh pe padi to bhag ke mere pass aa gayi.......
Jab unho ne mere sar ke piche hath lagaya to unhe vahqn kuch gila gila sa mehsoos hua.......
Jab unho ne apna hath dekha to vahan khoon laga hua tha.......
Principal - hey bhagwan khoon....
Khade khade mera muh kya dekh rahe ho......
Jaldi se ise meri gadi tak pohnchao......
Fur kuch teachers ne mujhe utha ke Principal mam ki gadi me litaya......
Principal mam ne mera sar apni goad me rakh liya......
Aur driver ko gaddi hospital lejane ke liye kaha.......
Jaldi hi hum log hospital pohanch gaye......
Mam ne Ward boys ko bula ke mujhe stature pe litaya aur ander le gayi.......
Doctor mere sar pe patti kar di......
Principal - doctor Deep abhi kesa hai......
Doc - he's fine now.....
Jayada khoon beh jane ke ki bajhe se body me kamjori aa gayi aur woh behosh ho gya.......
Agar thodi si bhi der ho jati to......
Ise bachana mushkil ho jata......
Bas kuch der me ise hosh aa jayega........
Principal mam - thanks doctor.......
Fir doctor vahan se chala gya.......
Mam vahan mere pass hi baithi rahi.........
Kareeb raat ke 8 baje mujhe hosh aya........
Mene dekha me kahin nayi jagha pe hun......
Fur mujhe medicine ki smel ane lagi me samajh gya......
Me hospital me hun......
Fir me apni charo aur dekhne laga.......
Principal mam mere pass hi baithi thi........
Principal mam ne jab mujhe hosh me ate dekha to woh uth ke mere pass aa gayi......
Aur mere mathe ko chum ke boli.....
Principal mam - ab kese tabiyat hai beta tumhari.......
Main - abhi acha hun.....
Par me yahan kese......
Principal mam - mein tumhe yahan leke ayi hun......
Tumhare sar oe chot lagi thi jisse tumhara bohat khoon beh gya.......
Aur tum behosh ho gaye.......
Fir me tumhe yahan le ayi.......
Par tum mujhe yeh bataoge ki tumne unse jhagda kyu kiya.......
Main - (bholi si surat bana ke) mam wo jhagda mene nahi unho ne shuru kiya tha......
Fur main mam ko vahan pe pe jo kuch hua sabh bata diya.....
Principal mam - chalo koi baat nahi tum yahin ruko me doctor ke pass hoke ayi......
Tumhe discharge karvana hai.......
Fir mam room se bahar chali gayi........
Kuch der baad woh room mein vapis ayi.......
Unke sath doctor bhi tha........
Fir doctor ne kuch checkup kiya aur kuch medicine bagera likh ke mujhe discharge kar diya......
CONTINUED......
AB AAGE>>>................
UPDATE 2
Jese hi me gate se bahar nikla achanak kisi me mera rasta rok liya.....
Ueh koi air nahi balki hamare school le sab se bigde hue ladke the.......
L1 - kyu be topper kaham chal diya......
Main - ghar ja raha hun bhai.......
Plz kya aap mera rasta chode ge........
L2 - kya ne itni bhi kya jaldi hai.........
Hamse apne topper hone ka gift to leta ja......
Main - bhai mujhe koi bhi gift bift nahi chaiye.....
Kya aap mujhe jane denge plz.....
L3 - kya be m*******d tujhe sunayi nahi deta.....
Tujhe rukne ke liye bola na to ruk.....
Main - dekho bhai maa gali mat do varna.....
L2 - varna kya be.....
Principal ko complaint karega......
Ja munna ja......
Yeh keh ke teeno ladke hasne lage.......
Main - dekho bhai log yeh jayada ho raha hai......
L3 - yeh ese nahi manega.....
Ise sabak sikhana hi padega.....
Teri maa ki sale.....
Woh ladka itna bol mujhe marne ke liye age badha.......
Yese hi usne mere muh pe punch marna chaha.....
Me twist karke side ho gya aur usi waqt uske pet ki left side me punch mar diya.....
Jis se woh niche gir pada aur karhane laga.......
(Mujhe ladna to nahi ata par.....
Park mein subha jab mein joging pe jata hun to vahan ek teacher apne students ko kuch karate bagera aur self defense sikhata hai.....
Is liye kuch moves mene bhi sikh liye.......)
Main - mene pehle hi kaha tha ki mujhe maa ki gali mat dena......
Par isne nahi suna ab bhugat.......
L2 bhi mujhe marne ko badha......
Par mene age badke niche baith ek twisting kick uske pero me mari.....
Jis se woh hawa me gulati khata hua niche gir pada......
Jese hi me kahada hua......
Kisi ne piche se mere sar pe kisi sakht cheez se baar kiya.......
Mujhe sar me bohat jayada dard hone laga......
Aur khoon bhi behne laga......
Jab mene piche palat ke dekha to piche L1 ek baseball bat liye khada tha.......
Jese hi woh dobara mujhe marne ko hua.....
Mene age badh ke baseball ko pakad liya......
Aur ek punch uske pet me de mara.......
Woh bhi pet pakad ke niche baith gya......
Fir mene uske face pe ek kick jad di......
Woh vahin let ke tadafne laga.......
Hamare charo taraf kafi bhed jama ho gayi thi.......
Principal mam aur bakki ke teachers bhi vahan pohanch gaye.......
T1 - kya hua yahan......
L2 - sir isne hame mara.......
T1 - kyu be ladke tumne inko kyu mara......
Main - sir ladayi inho me shuru ki thi.......
Aur inho ne mujhe maa ki gali bhi di........
Itne me Principal mam ne age badh ke un teeno ladko ko thappad mar diya......
T1 - mam yeh aap kya kar rahi hai.....
Galti us ladke ki hai......
Principal mam - galti uski nahi hai inki hai......
T2 - aap itne biswash ke sath kese keh sakte hai ki galti inki hai aur us ladke ki nahi.......
Principal mam - kyu ki me Deep ko kayi salo se janti hun......
Woh kabhi bhi jhooth nahi bolta.......
Samjhe......
(Un teeno se) dafa ho jao yahan se......
Woh teeno mujhe ghurte hue vahan se chale gaye.......
Itne me mujhe chakkar ane lage aur me behosh hone laga.........
Aur kuch hi palo mein me niche gir pada......
Principal mam ki nigha jab mujh pe padi to bhag ke mere pass aa gayi.......
Jab unho ne mere sar ke piche hath lagaya to unhe vahqn kuch gila gila sa mehsoos hua.......
Jab unho ne apna hath dekha to vahan khoon laga hua tha.......
Principal - hey bhagwan khoon....
Khade khade mera muh kya dekh rahe ho......
Jaldi se ise meri gadi tak pohnchao......
Fur kuch teachers ne mujhe utha ke Principal mam ki gadi me litaya......
Principal mam ne mera sar apni goad me rakh liya......
Aur driver ko gaddi hospital lejane ke liye kaha.......
Jaldi hi hum log hospital pohanch gaye......
Mam ne Ward boys ko bula ke mujhe stature pe litaya aur ander le gayi.......
Doctor mere sar pe patti kar di......
Principal - doctor Deep abhi kesa hai......
Doc - he's fine now.....
Jayada khoon beh jane ke ki bajhe se body me kamjori aa gayi aur woh behosh ho gya.......
Agar thodi si bhi der ho jati to......
Ise bachana mushkil ho jata......
Bas kuch der me ise hosh aa jayega........
Principal mam - thanks doctor.......
Fir doctor vahan se chala gya.......
Mam vahan mere pass hi baithi rahi.........
Kareeb raat ke 8 baje mujhe hosh aya........
Mene dekha me kahin nayi jagha pe hun......
Fur mujhe medicine ki smel ane lagi me samajh gya......
Me hospital me hun......
Fir me apni charo aur dekhne laga.......
Principal mam mere pass hi baithi thi........
Principal mam ne jab mujhe hosh me ate dekha to woh uth ke mere pass aa gayi......
Aur mere mathe ko chum ke boli.....
Principal mam - ab kese tabiyat hai beta tumhari.......
Main - abhi acha hun.....
Par me yahan kese......
Principal mam - mein tumhe yahan leke ayi hun......
Tumhare sar oe chot lagi thi jisse tumhara bohat khoon beh gya.......
Aur tum behosh ho gaye.......
Fir me tumhe yahan le ayi.......
Par tum mujhe yeh bataoge ki tumne unse jhagda kyu kiya.......
Main - (bholi si surat bana ke) mam wo jhagda mene nahi unho ne shuru kiya tha......
Fur main mam ko vahan pe pe jo kuch hua sabh bata diya.....
Principal mam - chalo koi baat nahi tum yahin ruko me doctor ke pass hoke ayi......
Tumhe discharge karvana hai.......
Fir mam room se bahar chali gayi........
Kuch der baad woh room mein vapis ayi.......
Unke sath doctor bhi tha........
Fir doctor ne kuch checkup kiya aur kuch medicine bagera likh ke mujhe discharge kar diya......
CONTINUED......
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Fantastic update, nut i want to ask this story will be as in xossip or you make some changes as story progress?
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