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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI DEEP KA JHAGDA KUCH LADKO SE HOTA HAI JAHA USE CHOT LAG JATI HAI. TAB PRINCIPAL MAM USE HOSPITAL LEKE JATI HAI. HOSPITAL SE DONO CAR ME APNE GHAR KO NIKAL JATE HAI...
AB AAGE>>>....................
UPDATE 3
Fir hum pp mam ki car mein baith ke ghar ko nikal liye.....
Mene mam ko apne ghar chlane ko kaha......
Main - mam plz mujhe mere ghar chod dijiye.....
Principal mam - chup chap baithe raho......
Tum mere sath mere ghar ja rahe ho.......
Tumhare sar pe kafi chot ayi hai.....
Aur kafi kamjor bhi ho gaye ho......
Aur tum apnr ghar me akele rehte ho.......
Koi bhi tumhari dekh bhal karne wala nahi......
To ab chup chap mere ghar chalo samjhe.......
Main - par mam.....
Principal mam - (vich mein hi baat katte hue) koi excuse nahi......
Ab tum mere satg chal rahe ho to chal rahe ho.......
Understand......
Maine sirf han mein gardan hila di......
Jise dekh mam ke hotho pe muskurahat aa gayi......
Unho ne mujhe gale laga liya.....
Principal mam - that's like a good boy.....
Mam ne mujhe lita ke mera sar apni goad me rakh liya.......
Jaldi hi hum mam ke ghar ke bahar the........
Mam ke ghar mein sirf unke pati unki beti aur woh hi rehti thi......
Unka ghar 2 manjila tha.....
Ghar ke gate se enter hote hi sahmne sitting hall tha....
Uske ek side me dinning table tha.....
Aur usi side kitchen bhi tha.....
Sitting ke dusri side teen rooms the.....
Ek room mam ka.....
Dusra guest room aur third store room......
First floor pe bhi teen room the......
Ek unki beti ka......
Aur baki ke teen guest room the........
(Mam ki family ka thoda sa intro ho jaye.......
Mam's husband - Deepak Verma - age 38......
Achi khasi height hai......
Achi personality......
Nami business man.......
Apni family se bohat pyar karte hai.......
Mam - Kaveeta Verma - age 36......
Dikhne me khoob surat......
Dil ki saff.....
Inka kam hai sirf pyar batna......
Hamesha khush rehti hai.......
Mam's daughter - Preeti Verma - age **........
Bilkul cute c gudiya.......
Ek lauti beti.....
Shararti aur samajh dono ka combination hai........)
Jab ham ghar pohanche to mam ke husband hall mein ho sofo pe baithe the........
Jab unki nazar hum pe padi to woh uth ke hamare pass aa gaye.......
Deepak - Kavita kahan thi tum aaj kafi der ho gayi......
Agar koi koi jaroori kam tha to bata to deti......
Upar se phone bhi nahi utha rahi thi........
Kavita mam - sorry woh main bhool gayi thi.......
Aur phone silent pe tha.......
Fir Deepak uncle ki nazar mujh pe padi......
Deepak - ok thik hai......
Vese yeh ladka kon hai......
Tumne intro nahi karvaya.......
Kavita mam - khud pehchano.......
Deepak - ohh to challenge......
Hmmm sochne do kon ho sakta hai.......
Ahan kahin yeh Deep to nahi.......
Deepak uncle ki baat sunn me san reh gya.......
Fir mene mam ki taraf dekha jo muskura rahi thi.......
Unho ne uncle ki taraf han mein gardan hila di.......
Uncle ne bhi mujhe gale se laga liya.......
Fir mujhe alag karke bole.....
Deepak - par iske sar pe yeh patti kesi.......
Uske baad jo kuch aaj school mein hua mam ne woh sab kuch uncle ko bata diya.......
Deepak - chalo koi baat nahi......
Aao betho......
Fir hum sabhi sofo pe baith gaye......
Kavita mam - vese meri gudiya kahan hai.......
Deepak - woh abhi tak apne room mein padhai kar rahi hai......
Kavita mam - hey Ram dinner kiya ke nahi usne......
Deepak - tumhari ladli hai.....
Me to keh keh ke thak gya.....
Par woh boli ke maa ke sath hi khaungi.......
Kavita mam - chalo me bula ke lati hun use.......
Kavita mam - (ek naukar se) hariya jake Ramu se kaho woh Deep ke liye khichdi bana de.......
Hariya - ji malkin......
Fir Kavita Preeti ke room ki aur badh gayi......
Idhar Deep is soch mein dooba hua tha ki.....
Mam use itna pyar kese karti hai bakki sabhi to usse nafrat karte hai......
Aur to aur mam ke husband tak use jante hai.......
Esa kese ho sakta hai........
Udhar Mam Preeti ke room mein pohanch chuki thi......
Unho ne jake Preeti ka door knock kiya.......
'Knock Knock'
Preeti - papa mene keh diya na mujhe bhukh nahi hai.....
Fir aap kyu baar baar aa rahe ho......
Kavita mam - acha beta ji mere sath bhi nahi khaogi........
Jese hi Preet ne apni maa ki awaz suni.....
Usne bhag ke darwaza khola......
Aur apni maa ke gale lag gayi.......
Preeti - maa aap aa gayi......
Mam ne use apne alag kiya.....
Aur uska gal chum liya.....
Kavita mam - ji meri gudiya.....
Preet - to fir jaldi jaldi niche chalo mujhe bohat bhukh lagi hai.....
Mam maze lene ke mood mein.....
Kavita mam - lekin abhi to tum keh rahi thi tumhe bhukh nahi hai......
Preet - woh tab nahi lagi thi na.......
Ab lagi hai....
Ab jaldi se chalo.......
Kavita mam - lekin tumhe bhukh nahi thi......
Ab to tum surf mere liye kha rahi ho.....
Preet - to jao ab mujhe sachi me nahi khana.......
Aur usne muh fula liya.......
Kavita mam - ale ale meri gudiya to gusse ho gayi.......
Main to mazak kar rahi thi.......
Preet - jao mujhe apse baat hi nahi karni hai......
Ek to itni late ayi ho aur upar se mujhe tang kar rahi ho.....
Kavita mam - ok soly na baba....
Ab maff bhi kardo.....
Preet - nahi karungi nahi karungi....
Jao aap yahan se.......
Kavita mam - Acha to theak hai.....
To main tumhare hisse ka khana tumhare bhaiya ko khila dun......
Preet ne jese hi mam ki yeh baat suni to woh foran apni maa ki aur dekhne lagi......
Preet - maa kya sach mein bhaiya aye hai.......
Kavita mam ne siraf haa mein gardan hila di.....
Preet khushi se uchal padi.......
Preet - kya sachi mein Deep bhaiya aye hai.....
To chalo na jaldi se mujhe unhe milna hai.......
Fir Kavita mam aur Preer niche aa gaye......
Main aur uncle abhi bhi sofo par baithe the.......
Preet bhag ke meri aur ane lagi.......
Me bhi khada ho gya.....
Khushi se nahi......
Me to iss liye khada hua tha ki yeh ladki meri taraf is tarha kyu bhagi aa rahi hai......
Itne me Preet aa ke mere gale lag gayi......
Preet - mere bhaiya aa gaye.......
Mere bhaiya aa gaye.......
Ab main apne bhaiya ko kahin nahi jame dungi......(apna chehra upar karke)
Bolo na bhaiya mujhe chod ke to nahi jaoge.......
Mene siraf naa me gardan hila di......
Kyu tabhi mera dimag chal hi nahi raha tha......
Me to iss baat se hairan tha.....
Ki Principal mam ka pura parivar mujhe janta tha......
Phir jab usne mere sar pe patti dekhi to mujhe pucha.....
Preet - bhaiya yeh apke sar pe kya hua.......
Main - kuch nahi gudiya woh thodi c chot lag gayi thi......
Preet - aap bhi na bhaiya......
Bilkul bacche ho......
Bilkul bhi dhayan nahi rakhte ho apna........
Aao mere sath dinner karo aur fir apko room mein jana hai rest karne samjhe ki nahi.......
Meme siraf han mein sar hilaya.......
Mam aur uncle vahan baithe muskura rahe the......
Fir ham log dinning table pe baith gaye......
Preet - aaj me apne bhaiya ko apne hath se khilaungi.......
Khaoge na mere hath se.......
Main is bar bhi sirf han mein gardan hilayi.......
Fir Preet mujhe apne hath se khilane lagi......
Mujhe aaj tak sirf nafrat hi mili thi.....
Aaj main itna pyar sehan na kar paya aur mere ankhon se ansun nikal aye........
Meri akhon mein ansun dekh ke Preer ne mam se bola......
Preet - maa dekho bhaiya ro rahe hai........
Mam uth ke mere pass aa gayi......
Kavita mam - kya hua beta ro kyu rahe ho.......
Main - kuch nahi mam woh aaj tak mene sirf logo ki nafrat hi dekhi hai.....
Aaj aapko logo ke dobara mila pyar sehan nahi hua......
Aur mere ankhon se apne aap asun nikal aye......
Yeh sun ke mam me mujhe gale laga liya......
Kavita mam - are mera bacha.....
Bas chuo hoja.......
Itne mein Preer boli......
Preet - maa apne sahi kaha bhaiya aach mein hi bache hai dekho to kese bacho ki tarha ro rahe hai.......
Preet ki baat pe sabhi muskura diye.......
Fir hum sab ne apna dinner complete kiya......
Fir sabhi vaham baith ke bate karne lage........
CONTINUED.....
AB AAGE>>>....................
UPDATE 3
Fir hum pp mam ki car mein baith ke ghar ko nikal liye.....
Mene mam ko apne ghar chlane ko kaha......
Main - mam plz mujhe mere ghar chod dijiye.....
Principal mam - chup chap baithe raho......
Tum mere sath mere ghar ja rahe ho.......
Tumhare sar pe kafi chot ayi hai.....
Aur kafi kamjor bhi ho gaye ho......
Aur tum apnr ghar me akele rehte ho.......
Koi bhi tumhari dekh bhal karne wala nahi......
To ab chup chap mere ghar chalo samjhe.......
Main - par mam.....
Principal mam - (vich mein hi baat katte hue) koi excuse nahi......
Ab tum mere satg chal rahe ho to chal rahe ho.......
Understand......
Maine sirf han mein gardan hila di......
Jise dekh mam ke hotho pe muskurahat aa gayi......
Unho ne mujhe gale laga liya.....
Principal mam - that's like a good boy.....
Mam ne mujhe lita ke mera sar apni goad me rakh liya.......
Jaldi hi hum mam ke ghar ke bahar the........
Mam ke ghar mein sirf unke pati unki beti aur woh hi rehti thi......
Unka ghar 2 manjila tha.....
Ghar ke gate se enter hote hi sahmne sitting hall tha....
Uske ek side me dinning table tha.....
Aur usi side kitchen bhi tha.....
Sitting ke dusri side teen rooms the.....
Ek room mam ka.....
Dusra guest room aur third store room......
First floor pe bhi teen room the......
Ek unki beti ka......
Aur baki ke teen guest room the........
(Mam ki family ka thoda sa intro ho jaye.......
Mam's husband - Deepak Verma - age 38......
Achi khasi height hai......
Achi personality......
Nami business man.......
Apni family se bohat pyar karte hai.......
Mam - Kaveeta Verma - age 36......
Dikhne me khoob surat......
Dil ki saff.....
Inka kam hai sirf pyar batna......
Hamesha khush rehti hai.......
Mam's daughter - Preeti Verma - age **........
Bilkul cute c gudiya.......
Ek lauti beti.....
Shararti aur samajh dono ka combination hai........)
Jab ham ghar pohanche to mam ke husband hall mein ho sofo pe baithe the........
Jab unki nazar hum pe padi to woh uth ke hamare pass aa gaye.......
Deepak - Kavita kahan thi tum aaj kafi der ho gayi......
Agar koi koi jaroori kam tha to bata to deti......
Upar se phone bhi nahi utha rahi thi........
Kavita mam - sorry woh main bhool gayi thi.......
Aur phone silent pe tha.......
Fir Deepak uncle ki nazar mujh pe padi......
Deepak - ok thik hai......
Vese yeh ladka kon hai......
Tumne intro nahi karvaya.......
Kavita mam - khud pehchano.......
Deepak - ohh to challenge......
Hmmm sochne do kon ho sakta hai.......
Ahan kahin yeh Deep to nahi.......
Deepak uncle ki baat sunn me san reh gya.......
Fir mene mam ki taraf dekha jo muskura rahi thi.......
Unho ne uncle ki taraf han mein gardan hila di.......
Uncle ne bhi mujhe gale se laga liya.......
Fir mujhe alag karke bole.....
Deepak - par iske sar pe yeh patti kesi.......
Uske baad jo kuch aaj school mein hua mam ne woh sab kuch uncle ko bata diya.......
Deepak - chalo koi baat nahi......
Aao betho......
Fir hum sabhi sofo pe baith gaye......
Kavita mam - vese meri gudiya kahan hai.......
Deepak - woh abhi tak apne room mein padhai kar rahi hai......
Kavita mam - hey Ram dinner kiya ke nahi usne......
Deepak - tumhari ladli hai.....
Me to keh keh ke thak gya.....
Par woh boli ke maa ke sath hi khaungi.......
Kavita mam - chalo me bula ke lati hun use.......
Kavita mam - (ek naukar se) hariya jake Ramu se kaho woh Deep ke liye khichdi bana de.......
Hariya - ji malkin......
Fir Kavita Preeti ke room ki aur badh gayi......
Idhar Deep is soch mein dooba hua tha ki.....
Mam use itna pyar kese karti hai bakki sabhi to usse nafrat karte hai......
Aur to aur mam ke husband tak use jante hai.......
Esa kese ho sakta hai........
Udhar Mam Preeti ke room mein pohanch chuki thi......
Unho ne jake Preeti ka door knock kiya.......
'Knock Knock'
Preeti - papa mene keh diya na mujhe bhukh nahi hai.....
Fir aap kyu baar baar aa rahe ho......
Kavita mam - acha beta ji mere sath bhi nahi khaogi........
Jese hi Preet ne apni maa ki awaz suni.....
Usne bhag ke darwaza khola......
Aur apni maa ke gale lag gayi.......
Preeti - maa aap aa gayi......
Mam ne use apne alag kiya.....
Aur uska gal chum liya.....
Kavita mam - ji meri gudiya.....
Preet - to fir jaldi jaldi niche chalo mujhe bohat bhukh lagi hai.....
Mam maze lene ke mood mein.....
Kavita mam - lekin abhi to tum keh rahi thi tumhe bhukh nahi hai......
Preet - woh tab nahi lagi thi na.......
Ab lagi hai....
Ab jaldi se chalo.......
Kavita mam - lekin tumhe bhukh nahi thi......
Ab to tum surf mere liye kha rahi ho.....
Preet - to jao ab mujhe sachi me nahi khana.......
Aur usne muh fula liya.......
Kavita mam - ale ale meri gudiya to gusse ho gayi.......
Main to mazak kar rahi thi.......
Preet - jao mujhe apse baat hi nahi karni hai......
Ek to itni late ayi ho aur upar se mujhe tang kar rahi ho.....
Kavita mam - ok soly na baba....
Ab maff bhi kardo.....
Preet - nahi karungi nahi karungi....
Jao aap yahan se.......
Kavita mam - Acha to theak hai.....
To main tumhare hisse ka khana tumhare bhaiya ko khila dun......
Preet ne jese hi mam ki yeh baat suni to woh foran apni maa ki aur dekhne lagi......
Preet - maa kya sach mein bhaiya aye hai.......
Kavita mam ne siraf haa mein gardan hila di.....
Preet khushi se uchal padi.......
Preet - kya sachi mein Deep bhaiya aye hai.....
To chalo na jaldi se mujhe unhe milna hai.......
Fir Kavita mam aur Preer niche aa gaye......
Main aur uncle abhi bhi sofo par baithe the.......
Preet bhag ke meri aur ane lagi.......
Me bhi khada ho gya.....
Khushi se nahi......
Me to iss liye khada hua tha ki yeh ladki meri taraf is tarha kyu bhagi aa rahi hai......
Itne me Preet aa ke mere gale lag gayi......
Preet - mere bhaiya aa gaye.......
Mere bhaiya aa gaye.......
Ab main apne bhaiya ko kahin nahi jame dungi......(apna chehra upar karke)
Bolo na bhaiya mujhe chod ke to nahi jaoge.......
Mene siraf naa me gardan hila di......
Kyu tabhi mera dimag chal hi nahi raha tha......
Me to iss baat se hairan tha.....
Ki Principal mam ka pura parivar mujhe janta tha......
Phir jab usne mere sar pe patti dekhi to mujhe pucha.....
Preet - bhaiya yeh apke sar pe kya hua.......
Main - kuch nahi gudiya woh thodi c chot lag gayi thi......
Preet - aap bhi na bhaiya......
Bilkul bacche ho......
Bilkul bhi dhayan nahi rakhte ho apna........
Aao mere sath dinner karo aur fir apko room mein jana hai rest karne samjhe ki nahi.......
Meme siraf han mein sar hilaya.......
Mam aur uncle vahan baithe muskura rahe the......
Fir ham log dinning table pe baith gaye......
Preet - aaj me apne bhaiya ko apne hath se khilaungi.......
Khaoge na mere hath se.......
Main is bar bhi sirf han mein gardan hilayi.......
Fir Preet mujhe apne hath se khilane lagi......
Mujhe aaj tak sirf nafrat hi mili thi.....
Aaj main itna pyar sehan na kar paya aur mere ankhon se ansun nikal aye........
Meri akhon mein ansun dekh ke Preer ne mam se bola......
Preet - maa dekho bhaiya ro rahe hai........
Mam uth ke mere pass aa gayi......
Kavita mam - kya hua beta ro kyu rahe ho.......
Main - kuch nahi mam woh aaj tak mene sirf logo ki nafrat hi dekhi hai.....
Aaj aapko logo ke dobara mila pyar sehan nahi hua......
Aur mere ankhon se apne aap asun nikal aye......
Yeh sun ke mam me mujhe gale laga liya......
Kavita mam - are mera bacha.....
Bas chuo hoja.......
Itne mein Preer boli......
Preet - maa apne sahi kaha bhaiya aach mein hi bache hai dekho to kese bacho ki tarha ro rahe hai.......
Preet ki baat pe sabhi muskura diye.......
Fir hum sab ne apna dinner complete kiya......
Fir sabhi vaham baith ke bate karne lage........
CONTINUED.....
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UPDATE 3 HAJIR HAI BROTHERS......
AB SE UPDATE iSi TIME PAR AAYEGA...........
THANK U FOR SUPPORT..........
AB SE UPDATE iSi TIME PAR AAYEGA...........
THANK U FOR SUPPORT..........
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