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Fantasy MANHOOS - LIFE OF A INNOCENT BOY ( ACTION, ROMANCE, SUSPENCE, THRILLER)

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Main nashta karke ghar se hospital ki aur nikal gya.....



Main abhi ghar se kuch hi doori pe tha ki......

Ek ball ludakti hui sadak pe aa gayi.....

Aur ek 3-4 saal ka baccha bacha uske piche bhaga aa raha tha......

Aur usne ball ko rok liya aur vahin sadak pe khelne laga.....

Itne mein ek tez raftar car ayi jo bekabu ho gayi thi......



Aur driver us bache ko side hone ke liye horn bajane laga......

Par bacha vahin khelta raha......

Itne mein horn ki awaz sun ke meri nazar us car pe padi.....

Pehel to mujhe pata na chala kyu aakhir yeh car wala horn kyi vaja raha hai.....

Par jab meri nazar us bache pe pade to....

Mera dil dehal gya.......

Car bache ke bohat nazdeek aa gayi.......

Main bhag ke us bache ki aur jane laga.......



Gaddi bilkul bache ke pass thi.....

Jese hi gaddi bache ko touch hone wali thi....

Main us bache ke pass pohanch gya.......

Aur use utha ke side mein kud gya......

Main dusri side us bache le ke palti khata hua dusri aur pohanch gya......



Woh car bhi age badhti rahi.......

Mujhe kuch kharoche ayi par bacha bilkul theak tha......

Par woh rone lag gya.......

Itne mein bache ke mata pita bhi bhag ke hamari OR aane lage......





Aur udhar woh car ek truck se takrane wali thi.....

Woh truck wala ne gaddi ko dekh dusri aur cut mar diya......

Car wale ne bhi cut mara........



Idhar truck over load hone ke vajha se control ke bahar ho gya......

Aur udhar car ke driver ne bhi control kho diya.......

Car jake ped se takrayi........

Car walo ko kafi chot ayi........



Idhar us bache ke mata pita bhi us bache ki aur aa rahe the..........

Aur udhar us bekabu truck ne bache ke mata pita ko takkar mar di.......





Truck Bhi out of control tha.......

Aur woh bhi aage jake Ek transformer se ja takraya........

Aur usi waqt usme blast ho gya.......



Main bhi us bache ke mata pita ke pass pohanch gya......

Fir

Woh kafi jakhmi the....

Mene kuch logo ki madat se unko auto mein bithaya aur hospital ki aur chal pada.......



Jaldi se ham log hospital mein pohanch gaye.......

Main ne unko icu mein pohanchaya.....

Fir main us bache ko leke gudiya ke room ki aur badh gya.......



Mujhe mam bahar hi mil gayi......



Main us bache ko leke mam ke pass gya......



Kavita mam - kese ho Deep..?



Main - theak hun mam......

Aap kese ho aur gudiya ki tabiyat keai hai.....?



Kavita mam - main bhi theak hun......

Aur gudiya bhi theak hai......

Tumhe yaad kar rahi hai....

Kal kayi baar puch chuko hai....

Bhaiya aye ke nahi......



Main - theak hai main abhi mil ke ata hun.......



Main us bache ko leke room mein jane laga.....

Itne mein mam ne mujh se pucha......



Kavita mam - beta yeh bacha kon hai.......



Main - yeh bacha to mujhe sadak pe mila hai....

Iska accident hone wala tha......



Fir maine mam ko jo kuch bhi hua bata diya.....



Main - mam is bache ko aap apne pass rakhiye......

Agar mera saya is par raha to yeh bechara anath ho jayega......

Pehle hi mera manhoos saya is bache pe padne ke karan ek ghar to tabha ho gya.......

Aur teen bakki hai......

Plz mam aap ise apne pass rakhiye.......



Itna bol mein Preet ke room mein ghuss gya........

Mam mujhe kuch kehne ki koshish kar rahi thi......

Par maine suna nahi.......

Main sidha under ghuss gya.........



Under Preet bed pe baithi thi.......

Aur nurse dava le ke kha rahi thi......

Main age badhne laga.......



Preet davaiya leke relax hui.....

To uski nazar mujh pe padi.......

Us ke chehre pe muskan aa gayi.......

Par dusre hi pal usne muh fula liya aur dusri aur fer liya......

Main uske pass gya ayr bench pe baith gya.........



Main - kya hua gudiya gussa hai mujh se.......



Par gudiya ne koi jabab nahi diya.......



Main - hun to hamari gudiya hum se sachi mein naraz hai.......

Hona bhi chahiye......

Bina bataye jo chala gya tha........



Itna bol main gudiya ki aur dekhne laga par is baar bhi uski aur se koi bhi jabab nahi aya........



Main - main bhi kya karta gudiya.......

Meri bhi majburi hai.......

Mujhe college bhi join karna uski tyari karni hai.......

Kal job chodi hai......

To nayi job dhundni hai.......

Plz maff karde na.......

Tu jo saza degi mujhe manjur hai........



Main chup ho gya aur gudiya ke jabav ka intezar karne laga.......

Par is baar bhi no reaction........



Main - chalo theak hai to tum mujhe saza nahi dogi to main hi khud ko saza deta hun........

(Main sochne laga) unnnnnnnnn

Kya karu......

kya karu.......

Han kan pakad ke uthak baithak karta hun.......





Aur main apni yagha se khada hua aur side mein aa gya.......

Aur apne kan pakad liye......

Aur laga uthak baithak karne.......

Aur sarh sath ginne laga........



Main - 1....2.....3.....4.....5.....6.....10......15......20.......



Iske age main uthak baithak nahi kar saka......

20 uthak baithak mein hi meri halat patli ho gayi......

Kyu ki sar pe chot lagne ke karan body mein abhi bhi kamjori thi.......



Main - gudiya ab maaf bhi karde.....

Dekh ab to maine uthak baithak bhi kardi........



Par gudiya ne koi reation nahi diya......

Woh meri taraf dekh bhi nahi rahi thi.......

Darasal asal baat yeh thi ki wph muh fer ke bina awaz ke hass rahi thi.......



Main - acha theak to ab main apne oo aur saza deta hun.........

(Main fir se sochne laga) unnnnmmm kya karu.........

Han apne hath upar karke bench pe khada ho jata hun..........



Main hath upar karke vahan pade table pe khada ho gya.........

Main takreeban 20 se 25 minutes ese hi khada raha.........

Ab mere hath bhi dard karne lage the........

Maine hatg niche kiye aur table se niche utar ke khada ho gya.......



Main - gudiya ab to maaf kar do......



Par usne koi reaction nahi diya......



Main - plz gudiya kardo na maaf......

Acha chalo mein apne apjo aur saza deta hun.......

(Ek baar fir sochne laga....)

Unnnmmmmm kya karu......

Han idea.....(mann mein) is se gudiya jaroor maan jayegi........

(Preet se) to theak hai gudiya jab tak tum mujhe maaf nahi karti tab tak main yahan tumhare sahmneurga banke rahunga........



Itna bol main pero ke bhar baith gya.......

Aur apni tangi ke niche se apne hath nikale aur jhuk ke apne kan pakad liye.......



Main - delh gudiya ab to main murga ban gya......



Is baar gudiya ne meri taraf dekha.....

Par fir se muh fer liya.......

Maine murge ki awaz nikali........



Main - kuk duk Koooooo........



Jis se gudiya ka control Putti gya aur woh jor jor se hasne lagi........

Aur boli........



Preet - bhaiya aap murge bange.......

Aur bangh bhi dedi.....

To ab anda (egg) bhi de dijiye......

Hahaha



Main - yeh to duniya ke sab sw mushkil kam hai gudiya yeh to.......

Woh pain ke upar kacha pehne wala Spider man bhi nahi kar sakta.......



(Sorry spider man bhai agar bura laga ho to......

vese agar maan bhi jaoge to kya kar loge hamara mazak tha don't bhi serious......

Sade hue makde)



Meri baat pe gudiya ek baar fir se has padi........



Preet - chalo ab apna yeh drama band karo aur khade ho jao.......



Main - tumne mujhe maaf to kar diya.......



Preet - ham baba kar diya.......

Ab khade ho jao.......



Main jese hi khada hua to gudiya boli......



Preet - hmm yeh hoi na good girls wali baat.......



Main - ( be khyali mein) thank you......



Par jab mujhe gudiya ki kahi baat dhyan se yaad ayi aurapni galti ka ehsas hua to.....



Main - gudiya.......



Ek baar fir gudiya has padi aur apne kaan pakad liye.........

Mere chehre pe bhi muskan aa gayi.......



Fir gudiya ne hath ke ishare se mujhe apne pass bulaya......

Main jab uske pass gya to usne apni bahen faila di........



Preet - mujhe meli huggi chahiye jaldi se do.......



Usne yeh baay bilkul ek masum bachi ki tarha kahi.......



Main - ahan to meri angle ko huggi chahiye.......



Preet ne han mein sar hila diya......

Maine age badh ke Preet ko gale laga liya......



Fir maine Preet ke mathe ko chuma aur us se alag ho gya......

Aur fur usse bate karne laga......


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Update 8 baje tak aa jayega...
 

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DOSTO, MAIN PHIR SE IS STORY KO RESTART KAR RAHA HU....

AAP ME SE KAFI DOST AISE HONGE JO SHAYAD YE STORY PAD CHUKE HONGE BUT KUCH NEW BHI HONGE JINHONE STORY KO READ NAHI KIYA HAI. IS LIYE MAIN IS STORY KO RESTART KAR RAHA HU......

AND DOSTO UPDATE HAR DIN NA SAHI BUT 1 DIN BAAD JARUR DUNGA....

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UPDATE 8

Main jese tese Preet ko manaya......
Fir uske pass baith gya......

Preet - bhaiya aap mujhe bina bataye kyu chale gaye the........

Main - gudiya bataya to tha ki majboori thi.........
Acha batao ab tumhari tabiyat kesi hai.......

Preet - main theak hun bhaiya........
Kal ja parso chutti bhi mil jayegi.......

Main - yeh to achi baat hai......
Chal ab mujhe yeh bata ki tu seediyon se kese giri......

Fir Preet ne use us din ki sari baat batayi.........

Preet - maine socha tha ki agar aap na uthe to thoda masti karke uthaungi......
Par us se pehle hi yeh sab ho gya.......

Main - oho to yeh baat thi......
Meri gudiya plan karke ayi thi.......

Preet ne muskurate hue han mein sar hilaya.......

Main - chal koi baat nahi......
Agli baar try kar lena.......

Preet - (masoom sa face banate hue boli) par ab to apko sab kuch pata hai......

Main - meri pyari c gudiya tere liye kuch bhi.......

Phir hum log luch der ese hi baate karte rahe.......

Kuch der baad mam us bache ko leke ander ayi.......

Preet - maa yeh baby kiska hai.......

Kavita mam - beta ise tumhare bhaiya laye hai.......
Iske mummy papa ka accident ho gya hai.....
To unka operation chal hai........

Mam ne us bache bed pe baithate hue bola........

Fir gudiya us bache ke sath khelne lagi......
Woh bacha bhi uske sath jaldi hi ghul mil gya.......

Maine mam ko side mein bulaya........
aur hum bahar aa gaye.....

Main - mam plz aap iske mata pita ke operation ke paise de dogi......

Kavita mam - kyu nahi beta.......

Main - theak hai mam......
Baad mein aap mujhe bill bata dena main apko paise de dunga........

Meri baat sun ke mam palat ke vahan jane lagi.......
Unki akhon mein ansun the........
Mujhe yeh bhi pata tha ki yeh hoga.....
Ki woh mujh se naraz ho jayegi.......
Maine unko rokte hue kaha........

Main - kya hua mam........
Meri baat to suniye......

Kavita mam - tum jao yahan se.....
Mujhe tum se koi baat nahi karni.......
Aur han bill ki bilkul bhi fikar mat karna main pay kar dungi.......

Main - mam plz meri baat to suniye......

Par mam to meri koi baat nahi sun rahi thi......

Main - mam apko ko meri kasam ek baar meri baat to sun lijiye........

Kavita mam - kaho kya baat hai......

Main - mam meri ghar se mere pass kafi paise ate hai har mahine.......
Is liye woh bas bank mein pade sad rahe hai......
Woh mere kam to ate nahi.....
To meri jagha is bache ke kam to aenge.......


Meri baat sun mam meri aur palti......

Kavita mam - to main konsa parai hun.....
Main bhi to tumhari apni hun......
To fir tumne mujhe paraya kyu kar diya........

Main - nahi mam esi baat nahi hai......
Main apko dukhi nahi karna chahata tha......
aur na hi main aap pe bojh banna chahta hun......

Main mam se yeh baat bol hi raha tha ki.....
Meri piche se awaz ayi.......

Awaz - kis ne kaha ki bache maa baap pe bojh hote hai.......

Maine palat kar dekha to piche Deepak uncle khade the......

Main - nahi uncle mera woh matlab nahi tha.......

Deepak - beta bhale hi tum hame apna na mano par hamne to tumhe apna beta hi mana hai......
Aur to tumne yeh kese soch liya ki tum ham pe bojh ho.......

Main - (sar jhuka ke) sorry uncle sorry mam.......

Main unke dil apne liye apna pyar dekh kar us pyar ko sehan nahi kar pa raha tha......
Meri akhon se asun beh nikle........

Mam ne age badh mujhe gale laga liya.......

Kavita mam - chal chup hoja.......
Vaar ladkio ki tarha rone lagta hai.......

Main - mam akhir kyu aap log mujh se itna pyar karte ho.......
Bakki log aur mere parivar wale mujh se nafrat karte hai........
Meri hi manhoosiyat ke vajha se gudiya hospital mein hai.......
Us bache ke mata pita icu mein hai.......
Un car walo ka pata nahi kya hua.......
Aur us truck wale ke ghar mein to matam chaya hoga......

(Dosto main pehle bhi bata chuka hun ki woh truck age jake transformer se takraya tha......
Aur vahin blast ho gya tha......
Aur uska driver bhi usi blast mein mar gya tha......
Yeh baat maine dobara se is liye likhi hai taki kuch readers ka doubt clear ho jaye.......
Kyi unko lagta hai driver ja to kho gya aur jinda bach gya.......)

Main - yeh sab meri manhoosiyat ki vajha se hua hai..........


Kavita mam - beta maine tumhe pehle bhi kaha tha ki.......
Hadse kisi ko bata ke ja kisi ki vajha se nahi hote........
Maine tumhe pehle hi kaha tha tum manhoos nahi ho......
In sab ke sath jo kuch hua woh tumhari vajha se nahi hua.......
Yeh to unki kismat mein likha tha to ho gya......
To yeh baat apne dimag mein bitha lo ke iski vajha tum nahi ho samjhe.......
Then now be aa brave boy......
Chalo chup ho jao aur apne asun pohncho......

Deepak uncle - Kavita sahi keh rahi hai Deep......
Toh apne apne karamo ka fal hota hai......
Koi yahin dharti pe bhogta hai to koi bhagwan ke pass chala jata hai........
Is liye kabhi khud ko blame mat karo........

Main - main karu uncle main chah ke bhi yeh sab nahi bul pa raha hun......
Yeh sab kuch ek dam meri akhon ke sahmne hua hai......
Us sab ko yaad karte hi meri ruh tak kamp jati hai.......


Kavita mam - chalo esa karo pehle chup ho jao.....
Aur fir bathroom jaker apna muh dho ke ao........

Maine vesa hi kiya.....
Aur phir vapis se mam ke pass aa gya.......

Itne hamare pass ek inspector aya aur uske sath do hawaldar bhi thi......

Inpector - ap me se woh kon hai jo us admi aurat ko yahan laya hai jinka accident hua hai........

Main - ji main laya hun......
Ji kahiye.......

Inspector - mujhe apja byan lena hai......

Main - ji puchiye apko jo kuch puchna hai........

Inspector - to bataiye yeh sab kese hua.........

Maine inspector ko sabh kuch bata diya jo kuch bhi maine delha tha......
Inspector ke sath aya hawal dar sab kuch likhne laga........

Use likhne ke baad usne mere sign liye........

Inspector - mujhe yakeen nahi hota ki aaj ke waqt mein apne kisi aur ke bache ke liye apni jaan jokham mein dali......
Varna aaj ke time mein to bhai bhai ka nahi hota......
Aap theak waqt pe unhe hospital bhi le aye nagi to vahan pe to bas bheed tamasha dekhti.......
Aur un dono ki vahin tadaf tadaf ke apni jaan nikal jate......
Apko selute karne ka dil kar raha hai......

Uske baad woh inspector mujhe selute karke chala gya.......
Aur jata hua keh gya......
Ki agar unhe agar age is case mein meri madat ki jaroorat padi to woh mujhe bula lenge........

Uske baad mam ne mera hath pakda aur mujhe pass mein pade bench be baitha liya........
Aur fir mujhe bench pe lita diya.......
Aur mera sar apni goad mein rakh liya......

Unki goad mein mujhe sakoon mil raha tha.......
Jese meri maa ki goad mein milta tha.........

Kavita mam - dekha beta maine kaha tha na ki yeh aab karmo aur kismat ka khel hai.........
Us bache ke mata pita ne jaroor punya kiye honge tabhi to unki jaan bach gayi.........
Us truck driver ne jaroor kisi ka bura kiya hoga......
To use uske kiye ki saza mil gayi........
Aur un car walo ne bhi kabhi na labhi kisi ka bura kiya hoga.........
Chalo chodo in bato ko tum aram karo.......

Uske baad mam mere sar mein unglia ferane lagi.......
Aur mujhe kab neend ayi pata hi nahi chal........
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