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Update 5
Mam Preet ke hath pe sar rakh ke ro rahi thi.......
Ki tabhi achanak
mujhe kuch yaad aya......
Me utha aur hospital ke gate se bahar aya.....
Aur auto pakad ke kahin chal diya......
Kuch der baad auto kahin jake ruka......
Yahan auto ruka tha vahan ek mandir tha......
Jese jese main age badh raha tha......
Luch yaadein meri akhon ke sahmne aa gayi......
Kyu ki yeh mandir mere bachpan ki yaddon ka mandir hai......
Is mandir mein main aksar apni maa ke sath aya karta tha.......
Apni maa ke gujrne ke baad bhi main kabhi kabhi yahan ata tha.......
Jese jese main age badhta gya.....
Meri yaadein taza hoti gayi......
Aur Akhon se asun bhi behne lage.......
Main chalta hua mandir mein ja pohancha........
Aur mata rani ki murti ke age ghutno ke bal baith gya........
Main - mata rani meri maa kehti thi ki aap sabh ki ralsha karti ho......
Din dukhio ke dukh harti ho.......
Apke age jisme bhi jholi failayi hai......
Apne hamesaha uski jholi bhari hai......
Aaj main bhi apke age jholi faila raha hun.......
Mujh Bhikhari ki bhi jholi bhar do mata.....
Meri gudiya ko theak kardo......
Eh sab meri manhoosiyat ke karan hua hai.......
Jese jese main kisi ke kareeb hota jata hun........
Vese vese unke sath koi na koi hadsa hota rehta hai........
Main apse vaada karta hun ki main gudiya aur mam ki family se door chala jaunga.......
Aur na hi kosi ke kareeb jaunga......
Plz mata rani meri gudiya ko theak kar do plz mata rani......
Meri gudiya ko theak kardo......
Uske baaf main vahin fut fut ke rone laga........
Main kuch der tak vahin baitha rota raha......
Fir kisi ne mere kandhe par hath rakha.........
Jab mene sar utha ke dekha to woh mandir ke pujari the.......
Pujari ji - beta ese nirash mat ho......
Mata rani pe vishwash rakho.....
Woh sab theak karegi.......
Mata rani unki pukar jaroir sunti hai jo sunti hai jo sache dil se prathna karte hai.......
Tum apni pareshani batao......
Main - baba meri gudiya ke sar pe chot lagi hai.....
Usli halat gambhir bani hui hai......
Doctors ne kaha hai ki agar use hosh na aya to woh koma mein bhi ja sakti hai.......
Meri baat sun ke Pandit ji mandir ke andet chake gaye.......
Kuch der baadwoh vapis aye.......
Pandit ji - yeh lo.......
Itna bol unho ne ke choti si kanch ki shishi mujhe pakda de......
Usme kuch bunde tail ki thi......
Main use dekhne laga.......
Main - yeh kya hai baba.......
Pandit ji - beta yeh mata age jo jyot jalai jati uska thoda sa ghee hai.........
Ise apni behen ke mathe pe laga dena.....
Aur fir uske ankhon pe.......
Mata rani kirpa karegi........
Fir pandit ji vahan se chale gaye........
Aur main utha mata ko parnam kiya aur chal pada vapis hospital.......
Jaldi hi main main hospital pohanch gya........
Fir main jaa ke Preet ke room mein ghus gya.......
Mam abhi bhi Preet ke bed pe sar rakh ke baithi........
Maine age badh ke woh ghee Preet ke mathe aur ankhon pe laga diya........
Aur mata rani se Preet ko theak karne ki dua mangna laga.......
Fir main bahar aa gya........
Aur sheeshe se ander dekhne laga.......
Kuch der baad Preet ke hath mein halchul hone lagi........
Fir dheere dheere usne ankhen kholi........
Fir usne idhar udhar dekha.......
Mam uske bed pe sar rakh ke leti hui thi.......
Usne mam ko awaz lagai.........
Preet - (dheemi awaz mein) Mummy.......
Preet ki awaz sun mam ek dam se uth baithi........
Jab unho ne Preet ko utha hua dekha to.......
Woh bohat khush hui........
Woh uth ke Preer ka chehra chne lagi.........
Kavita mam - meri bachi tu theak to hai.........
Preet - han maa.....
Bas sar mein thoda sa dard hai........
Kavita mam - chalo koi baat nahi woh bhi theak ho jayega.......
Itne mein main doctor ko bula laya.......
Doctor ne check up kiya.....
Aur bola....
Doctor - ab apki bachi khatre se bahar hai.......
Fikar koi baat nahi.......
Kavita man - thanks doctor........
Fir doctor vahan se chala gya.......
Main abhi bhi bahar tha.......
Fir mam ne Preet se kuch der baat ki........
Uske baad mam ne mujhe awaz lagai.......
Main ander gya.....
Aur jake Preet ke pass khada ho gya........
Main - ab kesi hai meri gudiya......
Preet - main theak hun bhaiya.......
Main - chalo tum aram karo.......
Uske baad main kuch der uske pass aur baitha......
Fir nurse aa gayi aur use neend ka injection laga diya.......
Jis se use neend aa gayi.....
CONTINUED.......
Mam Preet ke hath pe sar rakh ke ro rahi thi.......
Ki tabhi achanak
mujhe kuch yaad aya......
Me utha aur hospital ke gate se bahar aya.....
Aur auto pakad ke kahin chal diya......
Kuch der baad auto kahin jake ruka......
Yahan auto ruka tha vahan ek mandir tha......
Jese jese main age badh raha tha......
Luch yaadein meri akhon ke sahmne aa gayi......
Kyu ki yeh mandir mere bachpan ki yaddon ka mandir hai......
Is mandir mein main aksar apni maa ke sath aya karta tha.......
Apni maa ke gujrne ke baad bhi main kabhi kabhi yahan ata tha.......
Jese jese main age badhta gya.....
Meri yaadein taza hoti gayi......
Aur Akhon se asun bhi behne lage.......
Main chalta hua mandir mein ja pohancha........
Aur mata rani ki murti ke age ghutno ke bal baith gya........
Main - mata rani meri maa kehti thi ki aap sabh ki ralsha karti ho......
Din dukhio ke dukh harti ho.......
Apke age jisme bhi jholi failayi hai......
Apne hamesaha uski jholi bhari hai......
Aaj main bhi apke age jholi faila raha hun.......
Mujh Bhikhari ki bhi jholi bhar do mata.....
Meri gudiya ko theak kardo......
Eh sab meri manhoosiyat ke karan hua hai.......
Jese jese main kisi ke kareeb hota jata hun........
Vese vese unke sath koi na koi hadsa hota rehta hai........
Main apse vaada karta hun ki main gudiya aur mam ki family se door chala jaunga.......
Aur na hi kosi ke kareeb jaunga......
Plz mata rani meri gudiya ko theak kar do plz mata rani......
Meri gudiya ko theak kardo......
Uske baaf main vahin fut fut ke rone laga........
Main kuch der tak vahin baitha rota raha......
Fir kisi ne mere kandhe par hath rakha.........
Jab mene sar utha ke dekha to woh mandir ke pujari the.......
Pujari ji - beta ese nirash mat ho......
Mata rani pe vishwash rakho.....
Woh sab theak karegi.......
Mata rani unki pukar jaroir sunti hai jo sunti hai jo sache dil se prathna karte hai.......
Tum apni pareshani batao......
Main - baba meri gudiya ke sar pe chot lagi hai.....
Usli halat gambhir bani hui hai......
Doctors ne kaha hai ki agar use hosh na aya to woh koma mein bhi ja sakti hai.......
Meri baat sun ke Pandit ji mandir ke andet chake gaye.......
Kuch der baadwoh vapis aye.......
Pandit ji - yeh lo.......
Itna bol unho ne ke choti si kanch ki shishi mujhe pakda de......
Usme kuch bunde tail ki thi......
Main use dekhne laga.......
Main - yeh kya hai baba.......
Pandit ji - beta yeh mata age jo jyot jalai jati uska thoda sa ghee hai.........
Ise apni behen ke mathe pe laga dena.....
Aur fir uske ankhon pe.......
Mata rani kirpa karegi........
Fir pandit ji vahan se chale gaye........
Aur main utha mata ko parnam kiya aur chal pada vapis hospital.......
Jaldi hi main main hospital pohanch gya........
Fir main jaa ke Preet ke room mein ghus gya.......
Mam abhi bhi Preet ke bed pe sar rakh ke baithi........
Maine age badh ke woh ghee Preet ke mathe aur ankhon pe laga diya........
Aur mata rani se Preet ko theak karne ki dua mangna laga.......
Fir main bahar aa gya........
Aur sheeshe se ander dekhne laga.......
Kuch der baad Preet ke hath mein halchul hone lagi........
Fir dheere dheere usne ankhen kholi........
Fir usne idhar udhar dekha.......
Mam uske bed pe sar rakh ke leti hui thi.......
Usne mam ko awaz lagai.........
Preet - (dheemi awaz mein) Mummy.......
Preet ki awaz sun mam ek dam se uth baithi........
Jab unho ne Preet ko utha hua dekha to.......
Woh bohat khush hui........
Woh uth ke Preer ka chehra chne lagi.........
Kavita mam - meri bachi tu theak to hai.........
Preet - han maa.....
Bas sar mein thoda sa dard hai........
Kavita mam - chalo koi baat nahi woh bhi theak ho jayega.......
Itne mein main doctor ko bula laya.......
Doctor ne check up kiya.....
Aur bola....
Doctor - ab apki bachi khatre se bahar hai.......
Fikar koi baat nahi.......
Kavita man - thanks doctor........
Fir doctor vahan se chala gya.......
Main abhi bhi bahar tha.......
Fir mam ne Preet se kuch der baat ki........
Uske baad mam ne mujhe awaz lagai.......
Main ander gya.....
Aur jake Preet ke pass khada ho gya........
Main - ab kesi hai meri gudiya......
Preet - main theak hun bhaiya.......
Main - chalo tum aram karo.......
Uske baad main kuch der uske pass aur baitha......
Fir nurse aa gayi aur use neend ka injection laga diya.......
Jis se use neend aa gayi.....
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Update 6
Preet ko hosh aa gya tha.......
Mam bhi khush main bhi khush tha.....
Uncle ko bhi hamne is bare mein khabar kar di thi......
Ab waqt aa gya tha.....
Mera bhagwan se kiya vaada poora karne ka......
Mam ki family se door rehne ka vaada........
Yahi sab sochte hue main chair se khada hua aur chal diya bahar......
Main bahar aa ke.....
Hospital ke bahar uske bagal mein ek park tha.....
Main usme ja ke baith gya......
Aur apni jindgi ke bare mein sochne laga........
Kya jindgi hai meri.....
Na khud kisi ke kareeb ja sakta hun aur na hi kisi ko apne kareeb ane de sakta hun........
Akhir mera kasoor kya tha bhagwan.......
Is se acha to mujhe janam hi nahi deta bhagwan.........
Kisi ke sath kuch bura to na hota........
Main yahin sab soch raha tha ki kisi ne mere kandhe pe hath rakha.......
Mene palat le dekha to mam thi......
Kavita mam - kya hua yahan kyu baith gaye aa ke........
Main - bas unhin.......
Apne ghar jane ka waqt ho gya......
Kavita mam - kyu mera ghar tumhara ghar nahi hai.........
Kya ham log tumhare apne nahi hai.........
Main - esi baat nahi hai mam.......
Bas main khud apke pass rehne ke layak nahi hun.......
Kavita mam - kyu esa kya hua.......
Jo tum hamare sath rehne ke layak nahi ho........
Main - hai koi vajha......
Bas aap mujhe jane dijiye.......
Kavita mam - bina vajha bataye to main tumhe hane bhi nahi dungi........
Main - to theak hai suniye......
Main manhoos hun......
Meri hi vajha se gudiya ko itni chot lagi......
Meri manhoosiyat ke vajha se meri maa mujhe chod ke chali gayi......
Meri hi manhoosiyat ke vajha se mene apne ekloute dost ko kho diya......
Ab mujh mein kisi ko khone ki takat nahi hai........
Shayad yahi meri kismat hai....
Sab se alag rehna......
Aur na hi meri kismat mein pyar hai....
Itna bolte bolte meri akhon se ansun aa gaye.......
Aur main uth ke jane laga......
Par mam ne mera hath pakad liya......
Kavita mam - kis ne kaha ki tum manhoos ho......
Jo sab hua woh hadse the........
Tum unki vajha nahi ho.......
Sab apni apni kismat hoti hai.......
Kisi ki kismat mein kuch likha hota hai......
Aur kisi ki kismat mein kuch.......
Jaroori nahi hai ki ham khud ko uska karan mane.......
Main - mam aap isliye keh rahi ho ki aap mujh se pyar karti ho.......
Par mujhe pata hai ki yeh sab meri manhoosiyat ki vajha se hua hai......
Aur fikar mat kijiye main vich vich mein gudiya se milta rahunga.......
Uske vaad mein main jane laga to.fir se mam me mera hath pakad liya.......
Main - mam plz mujhe jane dijiye.......
Apko meri kasam......
Mujhe bhagwan se kiya vaada bhi pura karna hai......
Nahi to meri gudiya par fir se koi musibat aa jayegi.........
Kavita mam - agar tum chake gaye to main gudiya ko kya jabab dungi.....
Ki uska bhai kahan hai......
Main - gudiya ko bol dijiyega ki main kisi kam se bahar gya hun.....
Aur main us se milne ata rahunga......
Chalta hun mam......
Mujhe maff kar dijiyega.....
Agar koi galti ho gayi ho to......
Uske baad main vahan se nikla aur apne ghar ki aur chal diya.........
Mam bhi uth ke mere piche ayiaur hospital ki aur chal di.......
Main jaldi hi ghar pohanch gya......
Ghar pohanch ke maine darwaza band kiya......
Aur charpai pe baith le fut fut ke rone laga.....
Jab dil gubar thoda halka ho gya to main utha aur cofee shop ka dress pehan ke nikal pada apne kam pe.......
COFFE SHOP....
Cofee shop pe pohanch ke mene apni hajri lagvai.......
Itne mein manager mere pass aya.......
Manager - kyu be kamchor teen din se kahan tha.......
Main - sir mere sar pe chot lag gayi thi.....
Khoon kafi beh gya tha.......
Jis ki vajha se kamjori aa gayi thi.......
Is liye kam pe nahi aa paya.......
Manager - to kahabar tera baap karta.......
Kam se kam kahabar to karni chahiye........
Kam na dham hai koi.....
Bas kam chori ke bahane hai......
Main - dekhiye sir mere pita ji ko kuch mat kehna.......
Mujhe chahe kuch bhi ke lo.........
Varna acha nahi hoga.......
Manger - dekho bhai log.....
Ek to kamchori upar se dhamki bhi deta hai......
Haram khor......
Karle jo karna main to ese hi boluga.......
Tere baap ko kya tere pure khandan ko boluga......
Gande khoon ke gandi pedaish.......
Manager ki bato ne mere ander gusse ki ek chingari jaga di......
Main ek punch banaya.....
Aur us manager ke muh pe de mara........
Manager upar uchala aur ek pass pade ek table pe ja gira.......
Manager ki chodi chingari usi pe bhari padi........
Main - sun be manager......
Agar age se kisi ki family ke bare mein esa vesa kuch bola to mein tera woh hal karunga ki teri saat puchate yaad rakhengi......
Uske baad main vahan se nikal ke vapis ghar aa gaya.......
Cofee shop mein koi tha jo yeh sab dekh raha tha......
Aur uski ankhon mein ansun the........
Fir main ghar mein aya....
Kapde change kiye aur charpai pe baith gya......
Mere hath mein meri maa ki tasvir thi.........
Aur akhon mein asun the.........
Main - maa main kya karu........
Kyu mera esa naseeb likha gya.......
Mene kisi ka kya bigada hai........
Main ese hi rota raha.........
Aur kab meri aakh lag gayi......
Pata hi nahi chala......
Uske baad meri aakh subha hi khuli........
Main utha aur joging ke liye park mein aa gya........
Kuch der tak joging ki......
Uske baad thodu bohat exercise ki......
Uske baad maine karate class ko dhayan se dekha.....
Aaj fir gate se tin logo ki entry hui.......
Aaj bhi unki bate mere dil ko chubi......
Ldki1 - yeh manhoos aaj fir yahan.......
Acha bhala do din se gayab tha........
Aaj fir apni manhoos shakal dikhane aa gya......
Admi - kou baat nahi beta.....
Kisi ke liye apna mood kharab nahi karte.......
Par aaj ek kamal ki baat thi.....
Ldki2 shant thi.....
Fir main vapis ghar aa gya.......
Ghar aake main ne dress change kiya.......
Aur apne liye chaye nashta banaya......
Fir gudiya se milne chal diya hospital......
CONTINUED................
Preet ko hosh aa gya tha.......
Mam bhi khush main bhi khush tha.....
Uncle ko bhi hamne is bare mein khabar kar di thi......
Ab waqt aa gya tha.....
Mera bhagwan se kiya vaada poora karne ka......
Mam ki family se door rehne ka vaada........
Yahi sab sochte hue main chair se khada hua aur chal diya bahar......
Main bahar aa ke.....
Hospital ke bahar uske bagal mein ek park tha.....
Main usme ja ke baith gya......
Aur apni jindgi ke bare mein sochne laga........
Kya jindgi hai meri.....
Na khud kisi ke kareeb ja sakta hun aur na hi kisi ko apne kareeb ane de sakta hun........
Akhir mera kasoor kya tha bhagwan.......
Is se acha to mujhe janam hi nahi deta bhagwan.........
Kisi ke sath kuch bura to na hota........
Main yahin sab soch raha tha ki kisi ne mere kandhe pe hath rakha.......
Mene palat le dekha to mam thi......
Kavita mam - kya hua yahan kyu baith gaye aa ke........
Main - bas unhin.......
Apne ghar jane ka waqt ho gya......
Kavita mam - kyu mera ghar tumhara ghar nahi hai.........
Kya ham log tumhare apne nahi hai.........
Main - esi baat nahi hai mam.......
Bas main khud apke pass rehne ke layak nahi hun.......
Kavita mam - kyu esa kya hua.......
Jo tum hamare sath rehne ke layak nahi ho........
Main - hai koi vajha......
Bas aap mujhe jane dijiye.......
Kavita mam - bina vajha bataye to main tumhe hane bhi nahi dungi........
Main - to theak hai suniye......
Main manhoos hun......
Meri hi vajha se gudiya ko itni chot lagi......
Meri manhoosiyat ke vajha se meri maa mujhe chod ke chali gayi......
Meri hi manhoosiyat ke vajha se mene apne ekloute dost ko kho diya......
Ab mujh mein kisi ko khone ki takat nahi hai........
Shayad yahi meri kismat hai....
Sab se alag rehna......
Aur na hi meri kismat mein pyar hai....
Itna bolte bolte meri akhon se ansun aa gaye.......
Aur main uth ke jane laga......
Par mam ne mera hath pakad liya......
Kavita mam - kis ne kaha ki tum manhoos ho......
Jo sab hua woh hadse the........
Tum unki vajha nahi ho.......
Sab apni apni kismat hoti hai.......
Kisi ki kismat mein kuch likha hota hai......
Aur kisi ki kismat mein kuch.......
Jaroori nahi hai ki ham khud ko uska karan mane.......
Main - mam aap isliye keh rahi ho ki aap mujh se pyar karti ho.......
Par mujhe pata hai ki yeh sab meri manhoosiyat ki vajha se hua hai......
Aur fikar mat kijiye main vich vich mein gudiya se milta rahunga.......
Uske vaad mein main jane laga to.fir se mam me mera hath pakad liya.......
Main - mam plz mujhe jane dijiye.......
Apko meri kasam......
Mujhe bhagwan se kiya vaada bhi pura karna hai......
Nahi to meri gudiya par fir se koi musibat aa jayegi.........
Kavita mam - agar tum chake gaye to main gudiya ko kya jabab dungi.....
Ki uska bhai kahan hai......
Main - gudiya ko bol dijiyega ki main kisi kam se bahar gya hun.....
Aur main us se milne ata rahunga......
Chalta hun mam......
Mujhe maff kar dijiyega.....
Agar koi galti ho gayi ho to......
Uske baad main vahan se nikla aur apne ghar ki aur chal diya.........
Mam bhi uth ke mere piche ayiaur hospital ki aur chal di.......
Main jaldi hi ghar pohanch gya......
Ghar pohanch ke maine darwaza band kiya......
Aur charpai pe baith le fut fut ke rone laga.....
Jab dil gubar thoda halka ho gya to main utha aur cofee shop ka dress pehan ke nikal pada apne kam pe.......
COFFE SHOP....
Cofee shop pe pohanch ke mene apni hajri lagvai.......
Itne mein manager mere pass aya.......
Manager - kyu be kamchor teen din se kahan tha.......
Main - sir mere sar pe chot lag gayi thi.....
Khoon kafi beh gya tha.......
Jis ki vajha se kamjori aa gayi thi.......
Is liye kam pe nahi aa paya.......
Manager - to kahabar tera baap karta.......
Kam se kam kahabar to karni chahiye........
Kam na dham hai koi.....
Bas kam chori ke bahane hai......
Main - dekhiye sir mere pita ji ko kuch mat kehna.......
Mujhe chahe kuch bhi ke lo.........
Varna acha nahi hoga.......
Manger - dekho bhai log.....
Ek to kamchori upar se dhamki bhi deta hai......
Haram khor......
Karle jo karna main to ese hi boluga.......
Tere baap ko kya tere pure khandan ko boluga......
Gande khoon ke gandi pedaish.......
Manager ki bato ne mere ander gusse ki ek chingari jaga di......
Main ek punch banaya.....
Aur us manager ke muh pe de mara........
Manager upar uchala aur ek pass pade ek table pe ja gira.......
Manager ki chodi chingari usi pe bhari padi........
Main - sun be manager......
Agar age se kisi ki family ke bare mein esa vesa kuch bola to mein tera woh hal karunga ki teri saat puchate yaad rakhengi......
Uske baad main vahan se nikal ke vapis ghar aa gaya.......
Cofee shop mein koi tha jo yeh sab dekh raha tha......
Aur uski ankhon mein ansun the........
Fir main ghar mein aya....
Kapde change kiye aur charpai pe baith gya......
Mere hath mein meri maa ki tasvir thi.........
Aur akhon mein asun the.........
Main - maa main kya karu........
Kyu mera esa naseeb likha gya.......
Mene kisi ka kya bigada hai........
Main ese hi rota raha.........
Aur kab meri aakh lag gayi......
Pata hi nahi chala......
Uske baad meri aakh subha hi khuli........
Main utha aur joging ke liye park mein aa gya........
Kuch der tak joging ki......
Uske baad thodu bohat exercise ki......
Uske baad maine karate class ko dhayan se dekha.....
Aaj fir gate se tin logo ki entry hui.......
Aaj bhi unki bate mere dil ko chubi......
Ldki1 - yeh manhoos aaj fir yahan.......
Acha bhala do din se gayab tha........
Aaj fir apni manhoos shakal dikhane aa gya......
Admi - kou baat nahi beta.....
Kisi ke liye apna mood kharab nahi karte.......
Par aaj ek kamal ki baat thi.....
Ldki2 shant thi.....
Fir main vapis ghar aa gya.......
Ghar aake main ne dress change kiya.......
Aur apne liye chaye nashta banaya......
Fir gudiya se milne chal diya hospital......
CONTINUED................
King Aryan
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