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Fantasy Manhoos - Part 2 (completed)

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To Dosto m a new writer on xf xp ka purana writer hu xp gayi baat gayi
Yeh sirf meri ek koshish hai to plz sath dena aasha karta hu apko pasand ayegi yeh story
Ismein thoda sa powers ka use hoga thoda sa romance aur incest bhi ho sakta hai
to plz kisi ki agar incest vajha se bhavnao ko thes pohanchti ho plz ignore kar dena story ko
Iss kahani ke sare patar kalpnik hai agar kisi se mel khate hai to kripya panic mat hona woh sab ek itefak hai

Main Pehle kisi vajha se is story ko pura nahi kar paya pura karne ki Koshish karunga

Iss kahani mein sex bagera ko shayad hi mahatab diya jaye to yeh baat bhi note kar lena
Ek aur baat story shayad kisi aur story se thoda bohat matching ho sakti hai to plz isse pehle padhna fir us bare mein baat karna
Note:- updates ka locha rahega week mein 3 updates shayad daily bhi ho jaye so plz be co-orporative
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Main - didi khubsurat bohat aap aaj mann kar raha hai kacha kha jau aapko

Didi - to bhai kha le na pura mujhe ab se sirf main teri hu bs tu nafrat mat karna mujh se

Main - agar us waqt pariwar wale samjhdar hote to yeh sab hota hi nahi didi aur baki main apni is hawas pe kabu rakh hi nahi sakta kyu ki yeh hamesha mere sath hi rahegi

Didi - koi nahi bhai ab hum tujhe sambhal lenge par mujhe yeh bata ki Komal kaha hai

Main - woh mere dusre ghar mein hai

Didi - kya woh vahan akeli hai

Main - nahi woh vahan meri dusri biwion ke sath hai

Didi - biwiyan matlab

Main - woh ab tak meri 4 shadi ho chuki hai 4th wife Komal hai aur 2 abhay mama ki betiyan hai

Didi - kya

Main - han didi

Didi - lekin tumne apni behno se hi shadi kyu ki

Main - yeh sab likha hua hai meri kismat mein meri shadi meri behno se hi hogi koi rok ni sakta is sab ko

Didi - to kya..

Main - woh apki choice hogi shadi karna na karna

Didi - main shadi ke liye ready hu kyu ki tujhe bhi mujhe pehli hi nazar mein pasand aa gya tha par galat fehmi ke chalte main woh sab bolti rahi

Main - koi ni didi chalo khel shuru karein

Didi ne kuch bola nahi bs mujh pe toot padi aur bhukhi billi ki tarha mere hotho ko chusne lagi main bhi uske hotho ko chusne aur katne laga jis pe uske muh se ssiiii nikal jati aur mere muh mein hi dab jati main berehmi se uski chuchiya masalne laga jo ki ek dam thos thi

Main - didi tumhari chuchiya bohat hi kadak hai

Didi - bhai inhe aaj tak mere ilawa kisi ne chua hi nahi

Main - kyu koi bf ni banaya kya

Didi - propose to kayi hai the par koi sacha pyar karne wala nahi mila tha uunnhhhhh thoda dheere shayad tere liye hi sambhal ke rakha tha yeh sab

Maine kuch nhi bola bs uski chuchi ko muh mein leke chusne laga

Didi - aahhhh chus bhai ache se chus pura rass nichod daal inmein se aahhhhh dheere dawa jalim unnhhhhhh

Main unki chuchiyan chus chus ke aur dawa ke laal kar di fir maine use bed pe laita ke uske upar aakar uski chuchiyon ko vapis se muh mein bhar kiya aur chusne laga sath mein kaat bhi raha tha

Didi - aahhhh sssiiiii kaaat kyu raha hai bhai aahhhhhh mat kar ahhhh ssiiiiij jalim hai tu pura ek dam ahhhhhhh

Maine unki ek nahi suni bs chusta raha fir main uski gardan pe chumne laga fir maine uski gardan pe bhi katna shuru kar diya

Didi - aaahhhhh sssiiiii bhai kyu itna jalim bane hue ho Aarti aur Diya ke sath to itna normal the

Main - tumhare husan mujhe pagal kar diya hai didi aur Aarti se puchna uske sath pehli baar kya hua tha

Didi - jo bhi kiya ho par plz dheere kaat na aaahhhhh siiii jalim

Maine uske baad niche ki taraf badha aur chumte kaatte main uski nabhi tak aa gya kuch der nabhi ke sath khelne ke baad main uski choot pe aa gya aur choot ko chatne se pehle hi ek baar kaat liya woh fir se cheekhi

Didi - aaahhhhhhh haye re jalim araam se bhagi thodi ja rahi hu main subha sab jab yeh nishan dekhenge to kya kahenge aahhhh ese hi chus bada sakoon mil raha hai aur jaldi se daal de apna yeh lund ab bardasht nahi hota

Maine bhi dekha woh jhadne wali hai main uth ke uski tangon ke vich aa gya aur usko dekh bola

Main - koi kuch nahi bolega sab samjh jayenge ki tumhari ache se thukayi hui hai

Yeh bolte bolte maine apna lund choot pe set kiya aur dhakka mara
Shayad didi pehle fingring karti rahi hai issi liye thodi si loose hai uski choot usne bs aaahhhh ki siski li
Fir maine thoda aur jor lagaya to mera lund seal sa ja laga

Didi ke chehre pe abki bar dard dikha maine lund thoda sa bahar nikala aur taqat laga ke jhatka mara jis se mera lund uski seal ko todte hue jad tak ja ghusa


Didi - aaaahhhhhhhh mummmyyyyy bohat dard ho raha hai babar nikal lo plz aahhhhhhh mar gayyyiiii aaahhhhh thoda ruk to jao ahhhhhh bohat dard ho raha hai

Par main nahi ruka main dheere dheere jhatke lagane laga jis se didi jhadne ke kareeb pohanch gayi aur jhad gayi
Jhadne ki vajha se unki choot chikni ho gayi aur lund asani se ander bahar hone laga main tez tez jhatke marne laga unki cheekhe ab siski mein badal chuki thi

Didi - aahhhhh sssiíiiii tez aur tez karo bhai pura ghus jao aaj mere ander aahhhhh harder harder main fir se ane wali hu aaahhhhhh


Uske jhadne ke baad maine lund uski choot se nikala aur uski muh mein de diya woh maze leke chusne lagi

Fir maine thodi der lund chuswane ke baad use ghodi bana liya aur ek hi jhatke mein lund ghusa ke use pelne laga tez tez jhatko ke sath abki baar hum dono sath mein jhade

Uske baad subha ke 3 vaje tak main 2 bar use aue choda alag alag pose mein woh bhi kafi baar jhadi

Fir maine uske sone ke baad magic se uski choot saaf ki aur sujan bhi theak kar di uski thakkan bhi door ho gayi subha 7 vaje uth ke hum sath mein nahaye

Jab hum room se bahar jane lage to didi sharma rahi thi nayi naveli dulhan ki tarha kyu ki uski puri body pe hi love bites thi

Jese hi hum haal mein aye maa aur papa dinning table pe khana laga rahe the unke sath Aru bhi thi maa aur papa didi ki halat dekh ke statue se ho gaye the un logo ko nahi laga tha ki main itni jaldi didi ko chodh dunga

Aaru - haayee kitni khili khili aur mast lag rahi ho didi yagha yagha love bites bhaiya that's not fare apne mujhe to itni jaldi theak kar diya tha dawa laga ke aur didi ko ese hi le aye mujhe bhi love bites chahiye


Aur akar mujh se lipat gayi aur mujhe kiss karne lagi sath mein ek dath se lund pakad ke hilane lagi

Maine kiss ko todke uske gardan pe love bite diya fir chucho pe

Aru - ssiiiiiii aaur jor se baby u r amazing ahhhhh

Maine fir use mummy papa ke sahmne love bites diye yahan tak ki choot pe bhi fir Diya ne bhi deemand ki to usko bhi love bites di

Main - (papa se) aap jaldi se nashta karke bahar pool ki safayi karo aaj hum vahan humra pyar dikhayenge ek dusre ko

Papa aur maa ander rasoi mein chale gaye maine un teeno ke sath dinning table pe nashta kiya humare nashta karte karte papa bahar chale gaye aur pool ki safayi shuru kar di

Main - tum teeno jaldi se nashta karke maa ko nangi karke yahan lekar aao

Didi - kyu mummy ko bhi chodhoge ab

Main - didi apko yaad hai iss ghar mein 7 saal pehle ek Sashi naam ki ladki kaam karti thi

Aru - han bhaiya par woh ek din achanak se yahan se kaam chorh ke chali gayi thi

(Sashi ke bare mein mujhe in logo ka past pata karne ke baad hi pata chala tha)

Main - woh iss liye ki maa aur papa ne uska rape kiya tha

Didi/Aru - kya...?

Main - han Sashi ko paiso ki jarurat thi to usne in logo se mange badle mein maa ne use apni aur papa ki hawas mein dhakel diya kyu ki 2 saal pehle tak yeh dono hawas mein bilkul andhe the kitni hi ladkio aur aurton ke sath threesome aur four some kiya hai in logo ne kuch to apni marzi se shamil ho gayi thi inke sath kuch ke sath Sashi ki tarha rape kiya jinke sath rape hua unmein se 10 ladkiyo ne suicide kar liya tha jinmein se ek Sashi thi paise khila kar in logo sare mamle rafa dafa kar diye the

Didi - (gusse se) ghar mein itna kuch hota raha aur hume pata tak nahi chala kitne ghatiya hai mummy papa

Aru - bhaiya aap dekho ab inko kya sabak sikhate hai bhaiya aapse ek req hai

Main - bolo Aru

Aru - bhaiya main chahti hu badi maa aur bade papa ko bhi maar dena

Main - yeh faisla main didi pe chorh raha hu

Didi - bhai main bhi yahi chahti hu mana hum ne bado ki baton mein akar Komal ke sath bura kiya but itna to humne bhi nahi kiya tha jitna un logo ne kiya hai kitne hi masumo ke gunehgar hai woh log aap pehle unko sabak sikahna fir unko maar dena ho sake to yeh main apne hatho se karna chahungi

Main - jesi aap log ki icha

(Note - Readers i think yeh aap logo ko over lage jese ki maa baap se itni nafrat ki unko maar hi do ya maa ke sath bhi vahi karo jo unho ne un ladkio ke sath kiya bohat se writers yeh chah rahe honge ki unko maaf kar du main but fir vahi nafrat ke khatam hone ka melodrama jo har story mein hota hai woh hota aur story ka end same ho jata last story ki tarha so aap ko chahe bura lage but main yeh point change nahi kar sakta maa papa ko saza milegi jo abi hogi woh bhi aur unki maut bhi hogi)


Un teeno ne nashta khatam kiya jaldi jaldi aur kitchen mein ghus gayi maine itne mein haal mein sab side kar diya aur ek kind size bed laga diya vicho vich mein tabhi maine dekha woh teeno maa ko ghaseet ke laa rahi thi

Maa - Prachi beta mujhe chorh yeh kya kar rahi hai main maa hu teri yeh konsa tareeka hai

Didi - maa aur aap are aap to ek aurar hone ke name pe kalank hai aaj apko apke kiyr har gunah ki saza milegi

Aru - aaj apko pata chalega jab kisi pe julm hota hai to kya hota hai

Maa - beta main tumse maafi mangti hu mujhe maaf kardo beta

Didi - apko kya lagta hai apke maafi magne se un ladkio aur aurto ki atma ko shanti mil jayegi jinki zindgiyan apne barbaad ki hai jo ladkia apki vajha se mar gayi nahi na to kis muh se naafi mang rahi ho aaj har baat ka hisab hoga aap se

Raste mein hi un logo ne maa ko nanga karna shuru kar diya kapde fadne shuru kar diye un logo ne

Maa - beta mujhe itni bhi jilatt mat do main tumhare aage hath jodti hu

Didi - khud ko bade shonk se yeh sab karti thi dusro ke sath khud ke time yeh sab jilatt hk gayi

Un logo ne use lakar bed pe patak diya teeno ne ek ek kohda utha liya aur peetne lagi unhe fir didi ne uske baal pakad ke mujhe bola

Didi - bhai le daal iske muh mein apna lund vahi hoga aaj iske sath

Main uski baat sun ke bed pe uske muh ke paas jaakar baith gya aur apna lund uske muh mein ghusa diya woh gunn guun kar rahi thi bs maine jhatke laga ke lund uske gale tak utarne lag gya

Uske muh se kaar tapakne lagi jab maine muh se land nikala to woh khasne lagi

Maa - khuu khhuuu khuu (rote hue) mujhe chorh do beta main tumahri maa hu esa mat karo khuuu khhuuu khhhuuu

Tabhi papa piche se bole

Papa - tum logo ka deemag kharab ho gya hai kya chorho use maine kaha chorho use aaahhhh aaahhhhhh

Uski baat puri hone se pehle hi didi ne uspe khode barsane jari rakhi idhar Aru aur Diya maa pe chucho pe aur muh pe marne lagi Un dono ne use ulta laita diya aur didi papa ko pakad ke bed pe dhakel di

Didi - lo papa aab apne bete ka lund apne hatho se pakad ke apni biwi ki kuwari gand mein lagao

Tab tak maine papa ko bhi nanga kar diya jadu se unka lund bilkul chota kar diya maine magic se Apni halat dekh woh rone lage

Papa - mujh se yeh nahi hoga beta mujhe maaf kardo

Aaru - aaj apko un sabhi ladkio aur aurton ki takleef mehsus ho rahi hogi haina ab jesa kaha hai vesa hi kijiye nahi to yeh jo kohda hai na apki gand mein ghusa dungi

Fir Diya aur Aru ne maa ko ghodi bana diya maa machal rahi thi

Didi - dekh kya rahe ho papa jaldi se lund pakad ke apni biwi ki gand pe lagao

Papa nahi to didi ne apna chabuk unki gand pe de mara jese hi woh thoda sa bend hue unke gand mein ghusa diya chabuk ka pichla hissa

Papa - (rote hue) aahhhh karta hu karta hu bahar nikalo ise

Maa - (rote hue) nahi nahi plz chorh do hume plz


Didi ne chabuk papa ki gaand se nikal diya papa ne kanpte hatho se mera lund pakad ke maa ki gand ke surakh pe lagya to maine ek jordar jhatka mara thodi taqat se pehle hi jhatke mein lund adhe se jyada gand mein ghus gya maa ki jor ki cheekh nikal gayi

Maa - (rote hue) mujhe maar do par yeh sab mat karo Main jath jodti hu tumhare aage


Fir maine ansuna karke dusra jhatka mara aur lund pura utar diya gand mein jis se woh behosh ho gayi Aaru ne uske muh pe pani dala

Woh hosh mein aake rone lagi

Maa - (rote hue) aaahhhhh maaaa bachao koi mujhe plz chorh do mujhe aahh ruk jao plz aahhhhh

Didi - aaj tumhe bhi un ladkio ki cheekho mein jo takleef thi mehsoos rahi hogi vese papa itne saalo tak kuwari kese reh gayi apki biwi itne bade hawasi hone ke baad bhi batao... jaldi batao.... Suna nahi

Yeh bolke didi ne ek chabuk mara unko

Papa - aaahhhhh kyu ki woh apne gand na marne ke badle mujhe dusri ladkiya laa deti thi use pasand nahi tha gand marwana

Aru - par aaj to gand khul gayi inki hahahahah

Uski baat pe hum teeno hasss diye
Fir maine maaa ki gand aur choot 2 baaar aur mari jab mein 3rd time unko chodh ke hata to maine dekha didi ne papa ke mathe pe gun lagayi hui hai aur shoot kar diya papa vahi dher ho gaye

Fir Aru ne vahi gun lekar maa ko shoot kar diya



(Han to dosto yeh tha 2nd last update story ka janta hu ap logo mein se bohat se logo ko yeh update acha nahi laga hoga but mujhe jo sahi laga maine likha rapists ko unke hi tareeke se saza di hai maine khair iske baad ek last happy ending update ayega sath bane rahiyega)
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Last update


Us din ke baad sab kuch ab badal gya maa aur papa ko marne ke baad Aru aur Didi ne ek bund bhi ansun nahi bahaya

Fir maine dono bodies thikane lagwa diya uske baad 3 4 din hum charon ne masti ki pure ghar mein yahan mann kiya vahan sex kiya

5th day maine Raghav ko bula kar use sara such bataya aur company uske name kar di jo dada ji ki thi

Use apna such bhi bataya fir uski shadi karwayi uske baad didi Aru aur Diya ko lekar main vapis apni biwiyon ke paas aa gya

Yahan pe Didi aur Aru ne Komal se apne kiye ki maafi mangi Komal ne unhe maaf kar diya uske agle din meri aur Komal ki suhagraat hui

Main thode din baad Diya ke parenta se mila unko apna such bataya aur Diya se shadi ka bola woh log pehle se nahi mane par Diya ke baar baar kehne pe un logo ne han keh di

Uske baad Meri Diya Aru aur Didi ke sath shadi ho gayi

Fir hum log mere Planet pe aa gaye vahan Kajri mera intezaar kar rahi thi uske sath bhi shadi ki

Apni 8 biwiyon ke sath main araam se rehne laga

Ek saal baad Komal ne ek ladke ko janam diya Meera ne bhi ek ladke ko janam diya

Didi Aru Diya Megha aur Kajri ne bhi ek ek ladki ko janam diya Pihu ne bhu ek ladke ko janam diya

Ese hi hum log khushal zindgi jeene lage thodi bohat ladayiyan hui meri jo ki ek raja ke jeevan mein hoti hai baki sab sahi tha main har din apni biwiyon ko khush kar deta tha Komal ko chorh ke baki sab ke sath group sex bhi kayi baar kiya

Ritu bhi apne chote bhai ke sath hassi khushi zindgi beeta rahi thi par usi apni galti ehsas hamesha raha

ESha ke sath bhi masti ho jati thi kabhi kabhi


So yahan pe humari kahani ka End hota hai
Hope ki aap sab ko kahani achi lagi hogi

Yeh kahani mere sari kahaniyon de jyada latki hai 2 saal se latak rahi thi yeh kahani bohat se reader sath jude bohat se tutte par yeh kahani end tak pohanch hi gayi

Main un sabhi readers ka dhanyawaad karta hu jinho ne shuruwat se end tak mera sath diya

So ab agar mann kiya koi kahani likhne ka to aap sab ke sahmne jarur hazir ho jaunga
Tab tak liye khudahaafiz
Raab tuhanu sab nu salamat rakhe
May god brings all happiness in your lives

Jai hind



The End........
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(Kishan ki jubani)

Idhar main behoshi mein apni pichli zindgi mein chala gya kese kya hua sab vapis meri yaddon mein ghumne laga

# Flashback

Chattaakkk

Sahmne Megha didi gusse mein khadi thi aur nain apne gaal pe hath rakh ke khada tha meri akhon mein nami thi
Pass mein unki dost khadi thi jo ki rone ka natak kar rahi thi

Hua esa tha ki woh mujh se apne jism ki aag bujhwana chahti thi par maine kiya
Fir usne jaan bujh ke school ke chatt pe bulaya aur jabardasti mujhe seduce karne ki koshish karne lagi

Maine thappad mar diya aur vaha se aa gha
Fir usne aur uski ek chamchi ne niche ake meri didi ke kan bhar diye "ki maine uski chatt pe izzat lootne ki koshish ki aur meri thappad ka nishan bhi dikhaya aur boli ki kisi ke ane ki ahat hote main usko vahi chodh ke bhag gya"

Didi uski baat sun ke meri class mein aa gayi aur ate hi ek chanta mara mujhe chaaattaakkkk

Didi - mujhe nahi pata tha tum itna gir jaoge aur esi harkat karoge sharam aa rahi hai mujhe tumhe apna bhai kehe hue

Main - didi meri baat to suno

Didi - chup ek dum aur mujh se baat karne ki koshish bhi mat karna

Aur yeh bol ke vahan se chali gay unho ne meri ek bhi nahi suni unki friend ne jate hue mujhe ek katilana smile di aur chali gayi

Mujh se ab vahan aur nahi baitha gya aur main bag utha ke nikal gya school se
Main ek yagha ake baith gya jo ki shehar se bahar thi

Main yahan baitha bs ansu baha raha tha ki meri behan ne meri ek baat tak ni suni bs kisi ki baton mein ake mujhe thappad mar diya
Kam se kam mujh se ek bar puchti to sahi ki maine esa kiya ya nahi main unka bhai hu koi gair to nahi
Kya unko mujh pe itna bhi bishwash nahi hai

Aur main sham tak vahi baitha raha kab tak mujhe Meera ka phone nahi aya

Meera - bhaiyu kaha ho school mein bhi nahi the aap aur ghar pe bhi nahi aye abi tak

Main - woh betu meko kam tha thoda sa to vahi aya hu

Meera - par gadi school mein hi khadi thi to aap kese gaye

Main - woh maine tum dono ke liye hi chodhi thi main dost ke sath aa gya tha
Tum dono ghar pohanch gayi ho na

Meera - han bhaiyu par aap jaldi aao ghar mera mann ni lagra apke bina
Aur han Rohit bhaiya aye hai jaldi aao aap

Main - ok betu main aa raha hu

Fir main phone cut karke ghar ki aur chal diya ek Megha di thi jo mujh pe bishwash nahi karti thi aur dusri yeh Meera hai jiske liye baki sab galat hai bs sirf uska bhai hi sahi hai

Main jaldi hi ghar pohanch gya aur apne room mein jane laga tabhi maine dekha dekha mere room ka darwaza ek dum se band hua tha maine jyada dhayan nahi diya aur jese hi main apme room mein ghusne wala tha ki kisi ne piche se meri hairs pakad ke mujhe piche ghumaya aur mere chehre pe ek thappad pada

Yeh thappad megha di ne mara tha

Di - chiii ghin ari hai mujhe teri shakkal se ki tu mera bhai hai tujhe akhiri moka de rahi hu sudhar ja nahi to teri kartoote ghar mein sab ko bata dungi

Yeh bolke woh gusse mein vahan se chali gayi main nam ankhein leke apne room mein ghus gya

Sahmne dekha to taya ji ka beta Rahul aya hua tha main uske chehre ki aur dekha uska chehra padha to mujhe samjh aa gya ki mujhe thappad kyu pada

Mujhe gussa aya aur maine turant uske gaal pe do thappad raseed diye bs bola kuch nahi

Par main isse kya bolu jab meri khud ki behan hi mujh pe bishwash nahi karti yahi sochte hue main bathroom mein ghus gya aur naha ke kapde change kiye

(Story by third person)

Kuch der pehle hua yun tha ki Megha apne room mein kapde change kar rahi thi aur Rahul darwaze ke keyhole se ander jhank raha tha

Itne mein galti se usse halchal ho gayi jo ki megha ne sun li aur usne turant apna kapde pehne aur drawaze ki aur ane lagi itne mein Rahul bhaag ke Kishan ke room mein ghus gya

Usi waqt pe Kishan upar aya aur Rahul ki harkat ki saza Kishan ko mil gayi

Thappad khane ke baad Rahul Kishan ke bathroom mein ghuste hi apne aap se batein karne laga

Rahul - in thappdo ka badla to tujh se leke hi rahunga Kishan bohat bhari padeinge tujhe yeh thappad sari Zindgi yaad rakhega in thappdo ko

Aur woh room se bahar nikal gya Kishan bhi ready hoke bahar aya dekha to Rahul nahi tha fir woh Meera ke room mein chala gya Meera bed pe baithi thi aur packing kar rahi thi

Kishan - are meri gudiya ka kidhar jane ka plan hai

Meera - bhaiyu woh kal na hamari class study tour ke liye jaa rahi hai uski oi packing ho rahi hai

Kishan - ohh acha..... han mam ne bataya tha meko

Meera - yeh lo ho gayi packing abi apko late ane ki saza bhugatni hai to ready ho na aap

Kishan - are kyu bhai saza kyu maine bataya na kam se gya tha

Meera - par meko bina bataye to gaye na usi baat ki saza hai

Kishan - acha.... to chalo fir batao kya saza hai sunati hai hume hamari shehzadi

Meera - jyada kuch nahi bs meko abi ice cream khani hai aur bahar hi dinner karna hai ghumna hai

Kishan - theak hai to chalo shehzadi sahiba

Fir dono ghar mein bata ke nikal gaye ghumne yahi anter tha Megha aur Meera mein
Ki Megha deemag se sochti thi deemag se samjhti thi
Lekin Meera dil se sab kuch karti thi shayad yahi vajha thi ki Meera aur Kishan mein bonding achi thi

Aur Idhar Rahul apni planing mein laga hua tha ki kese badla le woh Kishan se aur usne sab kuch tai bhi kar liya tha
Yaha last main Megha ko ye dikhana chaheyea ki woh logon ki baton main asani se ajayi hay nahi ki dimag se sochne wali....kyunki jo dimag se sochte hay woh behad Chatur hote hay nahi bewakoof...or is duniya main dimag ki takat kya hay sab jante hay.
 

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At first thought it was just a fantasy story.
Actually there is another story inside the story.
There are many surprising dramatic twists in the story which are absolutely shocking.
Kahani mein kaafi mod aaye joh kahani ko dilchasp banaye huye the.. ek achhe writer ke gun, lakshan yeh ki kahani ki jariye, kahani ke kirdaaro ke jariye kahani ke naam ko sarthak kar de.... jisme aap pure tarike se kamyab rahe...

Really badhte update ke sath sath kahani aur bhi zyada interesting hoti jaa rahin thi..
Har ek pehlu ko aapne dhyan dete huye kahani ko aage badha rahe hai..
romance ke sath sath fantasy, thrill aur suspense ki bhi anokhi sangam hai kahani mein ...jarurat ke mutabik kuch raaz ki baaton se dhire dhire parde hate .. aur kuch kirdaaro ki asli roop bhi samne aa aaya. toh kayi naye kirdaar bhi dekhne ko mila.. joh apni bhumika sathik roop se nibha rahe the kahani ki har ek pehlu mein....

yeh bhi ek sach hai ki aapki is kahani mein har ek kirdaar ki mahattva purn hai.. I mean to say ek kirdaar bhi hata diya jaye toh kahani adhuri hai...
Hum hamesha hero heroine pe hi zyada dhyaan Kendrit karte hain... lekin yeh yaad rakhna chahiye ki baaki kirdaaro bin mul kirdaar kuch bhi nahin.... aur aap kahani mein sabhi kirdaaro ke sath ek justify karte hain... Isliye aapki yeh kahani meri favorites kahaniyo mein se ek ho gayi hai....

Shayad writer sahab story ke jariye ye batana chahte hai ki chaahe dukh ki ghadi ya muskilein kitne bhi ho par haar nahi maanna chahiye aur na hi gumsum hoke baithna hai... balki is story positive kirdaaro ki hi tarah muskurahaton aur positiveness ko lana hai apne jivan mein aur apne utshah ki kirano se hume sampurn vatavaran ko sajib aur mukhorit banana hai... taaki isse na keval aap balki aapke aas paas walo ko ek nayi ummid ek nayi utshah mile har sukh dukh aur muskil ke ghadi mein ..
aur sabse jaruri baat kisi ke upor vishvas karne se pehle ek baar hi sahi soch vichar kar leni chahiye sath hi jaanch parakh bhi kar leni chahiye....
Khair....
aise hi likhte rahiye aur humari manoranjan karte rahiye :bow: :bow:

Btw Every word of the story like the first rain drops. While reading, I started to feel that I am connected with every character. Perhaps it is the magic of your writing. Keep writing like this and keep us entertained through your stylus. :thumbup:
Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills Lovingheart sahab :applause: :applause:
 

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At first thought it was just a fantasy story.
Actually there is another story inside the story.
There are many surprising dramatic twists in the story which are absolutely shocking.
Kahani mein kaafi mod aaye joh kahani ko dilchasp banaye huye the.. ek achhe writer ke gun, lakshan yeh ki kahani ki jariye, kahani ke kirdaaro ke jariye kahani ke naam ko sarthak kar de.... jisme aap pure tarike se kamyab rahe...

Really badhte update ke sath sath kahani aur bhi zyada interesting hoti jaa rahin thi..
Har ek pehlu ko aapne dhyan dete huye kahani ko aage badha rahe hai..
romance ke sath sath fantasy, thrill aur suspense ki bhi anokhi sangam hai kahani mein ...jarurat ke mutabik kuch raaz ki baaton se dhire dhire parde hate .. aur kuch kirdaaro ki asli roop bhi samne aa aaya. toh kayi naye kirdaar bhi dekhne ko mila.. joh apni bhumika sathik roop se nibha rahe the kahani ki har ek pehlu mein....

yeh bhi ek sach hai ki aapki is kahani mein har ek kirdaar ki mahattva purn hai.. I mean to say ek kirdaar bhi hata diya jaye toh kahani adhuri hai...
Hum hamesha hero heroine pe hi zyada dhyaan Kendrit karte hain... lekin yeh yaad rakhna chahiye ki baaki kirdaaro bin mul kirdaar kuch bhi nahin.... aur aap kahani mein sabhi kirdaaro ke sath ek justify karte hain... Isliye aapki yeh kahani meri favorites kahaniyo mein se ek ho gayi hai....

Shayad writer sahab story ke jariye ye batana chahte hai ki chaahe dukh ki ghadi ya muskilein kitne bhi ho par haar nahi maanna chahiye aur na hi gumsum hoke baithna hai... balki is story positive kirdaaro ki hi tarah muskurahaton aur positiveness ko lana hai apne jivan mein aur apne utshah ki kirano se hume sampurn vatavaran ko sajib aur mukhorit banana hai... taaki isse na keval aap balki aapke aas paas walo ko ek nayi ummid ek nayi utshah mile har sukh dukh aur muskil ke ghadi mein ..
aur sabse jaruri baat kisi ke upor vishvas karne se pehle ek baar hi sahi soch vichar kar leni chahiye sath hi jaanch parakh bhi kar leni chahiye....
Khair....
aise hi likhte rahiye aur humari manoranjan karte rahiye :bow: :bow:

Btw Every word of the story like the first rain drops. While reading, I started to feel that I am connected with every character. Perhaps it is the magic of your writing. Keep writing like this and keep us entertained through your stylus. :thumbup:
Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills Lovingheart sahab :applause: :applause:

Itni achi tareef matlab ki mera likhna sarthak ho gya

:thank_you: for thi appritiation
Apke liye jarur ek achi kahani launga 👑 👸
 
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To Dosto m a new writer on xf xp ka purana writer hu xp gayi baat gayi
Yeh sirf meri ek koshish hai to plz sath dena aasha karta hu apko pasand ayegi yeh story
Ismein thoda sa powers ka use hoga thoda sa romance aur incest bhi ho sakta hai
to plz kisi ki agar incest vajha se bhavnao ko thes pohanchti ho plz ignore kar dena story ko
Iss kahani ke sare patar kalpnik hai agar kisi se mel khate hai to kripya panic mat hona woh sab ek itefak hai

Main Pehle kisi vajha se is story ko pura nahi kar paya pura karne ki Koshish karunga

Iss kahani mein sex bagera ko shayad hi mahatab diya jaye to yeh baat bhi note kar lena
Ek aur baat story shayad kisi aur story se thoda bohat matching ho sakti hai to plz isse pehle padhna fir us bare mein baat karna
Note:- updates ka locha rahega week mein 3 updates shayad daily bhi ho jaye so plz be co-orporative
Ur Heartless urf Loving Heart
Update raat ko start ho jayenge


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Thank you bhai aap new story likh rahe ho. We are waiting eagerly. Aap jaldi jaldi likho. Congratulations for new story . Best of luck.
 
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Lovingheart bhai aap ki new story kab tak aayegi
At first thought it was just a fantasy story.
Actually there is another story inside the story.
There are many surprising dramatic twists in the story which are absolutely shocking.
Kahani mein kaafi mod aaye joh kahani ko dilchasp banaye huye the.. ek achhe writer ke gun, lakshan yeh ki kahani ki jariye, kahani ke kirdaaro ke jariye kahani ke naam ko sarthak kar de.... jisme aap pure tarike se kamyab rahe...

Really badhte update ke sath sath kahani aur bhi zyada interesting hoti jaa rahin thi..
Har ek pehlu ko aapne dhyan dete huye kahani ko aage badha rahe hai..
romance ke sath sath fantasy, thrill aur suspense ki bhi anokhi sangam hai kahani mein ...jarurat ke mutabik kuch raaz ki baaton se dhire dhire parde hate .. aur kuch kirdaaro ki asli roop bhi samne aa aaya. toh kayi naye kirdaar bhi dekhne ko mila.. joh apni bhumika sathik roop se nibha rahe the kahani ki har ek pehlu mein....

yeh bhi ek sach hai ki aapki is kahani mein har ek kirdaar ki mahattva purn hai.. I mean to say ek kirdaar bhi hata diya jaye toh kahani adhuri hai...
Hum hamesha hero heroine pe hi zyada dhyaan Kendrit karte hain... lekin yeh yaad rakhna chahiye ki baaki kirdaaro bin mul kirdaar kuch bhi nahin.... aur aap kahani mein sabhi kirdaaro ke sath ek justify karte hain... Isliye aapki yeh kahani meri favorites kahaniyo mein se ek ho gayi hai....

Shayad writer sahab story ke jariye ye batana chahte hai ki chaahe dukh ki ghadi ya muskilein kitne bhi ho par haar nahi maanna chahiye aur na hi gumsum hoke baithna hai... balki is story positive kirdaaro ki hi tarah muskurahaton aur positiveness ko lana hai apne jivan mein aur apne utshah ki kirano se hume sampurn vatavaran ko sajib aur mukhorit banana hai... taaki isse na keval aap balki aapke aas paas walo ko ek nayi ummid ek nayi utshah mile har sukh dukh aur muskil ke ghadi mein ..
aur sabse jaruri baat kisi ke upor vishvas karne se pehle ek baar hi sahi soch vichar kar leni chahiye sath hi jaanch parakh bhi kar leni chahiye....
Khair....
aise hi likhte rahiye aur humari manoranjan karte rahiye :bow: :bow:

Btw Every word of the story like the first rain drops. While reading, I started to feel that I am connected with every character. Perhaps it is the magic of your writing. Keep writing like this and keep us entertained through your stylus. :thumbup:
Brilliant story line with awesome writing skills Lovingheart sahab :applause: :applause:


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bhai kya manhoos part 1 se related hain kya part 2
 
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