Fantasy Manhoos - Part 2 (completed)

[Lovingheart]

Intro


To Dosto m a new writer on xf xp ka purana writer hu xp gayi baat gayi
Yeh sirf meri ek koshish hai to plz sath dena aasha karta hu apko pasand ayegi yeh story
Ismein thoda sa powers ka use hoga thoda sa romance aur incest bhi ho sakta hai
to plz kisi ki agar incest vajha se bhavnao ko thes pohanchti ho plz ignore kar dena story ko
Iss kahani ke sare patar kalpnik hai agar kisi se mel khate hai to kripya panic mat hona woh sab ek itefak hai

Main Pehle kisi vajha se is story ko pura nahi kar paya pura karne ki Koshish karunga

Iss kahani mein sex bagera ko shayad hi mahatab diya jaye to yeh baat bhi note kar lena
Ek aur baat story shayad kisi aur story se thoda bohat matching ho sakti hai to plz isse pehle padhna fir us bare mein baat karna
Note:- updates ka locha rahega week mein 3 updates shayad daily bhi ho jaye so plz be co-orporative
Ur Heartless urf Loving Heart
Update raat ko start ho jayenge


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[Lovingheart]

bhai kya manhoos part 1 se related hain kya part 2

Related to nahi hai but story usi ke jesi hai read karo achi lagegi shayad bhai tumhe aur nayi story bhi read kar lena

 

[Lovekillsyou]

Nice

 

[+BOSS-8055]

Bhai Apki Kahani 1li aisi Kahani hai
Jo manhoos Naam Ki Complete Hui hai
Nahi To Kuch Writers Yaha Ese Moujud hai
jo kahani Start To kar dete Hai lekin Adhuri chodh dete
Or Update mango To Kuch Bahana Banate Hai
Nice Story Bhai
Apne is Kahani me Sex se Jyada Story line ko Jyada Importance Diya ye accha laga
Ummid hai age bhi aap acchi Kahaniyan likho
Or ese hi apni writing skills se logo ka manoranjan Karo
Take Care Bhai

 

[The_Punisher]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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As you all know, in previous week we announced USC and also opened Rules and Queries thread after some time. Before all this, chit-chat thread already opened in Hindi section.

Well, Just want to inform that it is a Short story contest, in this you can post post story under any prefix. with minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words . That is why, i want to invite you so that you can portray your thoughts using your words into a story which whole xforum would watch. This is a great step for you and for your stories cause USC's stories are read by every reader of Xforum. You are one of the best writers of Xforum, and your story is also going very well. That is why We whole heatedly request you to write a short story For USC. We know that you do not have time to spare but even after that we also know that you are capable of doing everything and bound to no limits.

And the readers who does not want to write they can also participate for the "Best Readers Award" .. You just have to give your reviews on the Posted stories in USC

"Winning Writer's will be awarded with Cash prizes and another awards "and along with that they get a chance to sticky their thread in their section so their thread remains on the top. That is why This is a fantastic chance for you all to make a great image on the mind of all reader and stretch your reach to the mark. This is a golden chance for all of you to portrait your thoughts into words to show us here in USC. So, bring it on and show us all your ideas, show it to the world.

Entry thread will be opened on 7th February, meaning you can start submission of your stories from 7th of feb and that will be opened till 25th of feb. During this you can post your story, so it is better for you to start writing your story in the given time.

And one more thing! Story is to be posted in one post only, cause this is a short story contest that means we can only hope for short stories. So you are not permitted to post your story in many post/parts. If you have any query regarding this, you can contact any staff member.


To chat or ask any doubt on a story, Use this thread — Chit Chat Thread

To Give review on USC's stories, Use this thread — Review Thread

To Chit Chat regarding the contest, Use this thread— Rules & Queries Thread

To post your story, use this thread — Entry Thread

Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	1500 Rupees + Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	500 Rupees + Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
2nd Runner-UP	5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership
Best Supporting Reader	Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff

 

[Pal bhai]

Update 1st

Ek ladki bohat gusse mein thi aur sahmne khade ladke ko dant rahi thi
Woh kafi unche sawar mein chilla rahi thi
Esa lagta hai ki koi ghar mein nahi hai

Ladki - mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum itna gir jaoge aur itni ghatiya harkat karoge

Ladka -(rote hue) meri baat suno plz maine esa kuch nahi kiya

Ladki - mujhe kuch nahi sunna mujhe nahi pata tha tum mujhe mere pyar ka yeh sila doge ghinn ati hai mujhe tum per itni neech harkat karte hue tumhe jara c bhi sharam nahi ayi

Ladka - lekin maine esa kuch nahi kiya di

Tabhi chaaaatttaaakkkkk ki awaz ayi


Us ladki ne ladke khich ke tamacha mara

Ladki - mat keh mujhe apni gandi juban se di mar gya aaj se tu mere liye samjha

Aur isi ke sath woh us room se nikal gayi aur woh ladka use rokne ke liye uske piche gya par tab tak woh ladki apne room mein jake darwaza band kar chuki thi

Ladka bahar se use pukarta raha

Ladka - di meri baat suno plz
Di ek bar meri baat sunlo plz

Aur isi ke sath uski sanse ukhadne lagi
Aur woh lambi lambi sanse lene laga aur uski ankhen band hone lagi par pata nahi kaha se ek dam uske chehre pe pani ki bunde girne lagi aur uski band hoti ankhen khul gayi
Aur woh ek dam se uth ke baith gya

Woh is waqt apne room mein apne bed par tha
Tabhi uski nazar sahmne khadi ladki par padti hai

Ladki pyar se uske sar pe hath pherne lagi
Aur use gale laga liya

Ladki - phir se woh sapna aya tum bhul kyu ni jate woh sab woh sab beeti hui batein hai

(Note:- sapne wali ladki aur yeh hakikat wali ladki dono alag alag hai inke characters waqt ane pe pata chalenge)

Ladka - didi kya karu woh sab bhula hi ni jata di ki woh batein aaj bhi yaad ati hai aur mera dil cheer deti hai jab ki meri koi galti bhi nahi thi

Aur woh ladka rone laga

Ladki - betu chup hoja dekh rote nahi hai aur tune apni begunahi sabit kar di thi na fir kyu un sab baton ko yaad karte ho

Ladka - didi un logo ne ek bar bhi meri baat nahi suni thi aur jo jo batein unho ne kahi woh sab aaj bhi iss dil ko tar tar kar deti hai

Ladki - (baat badlte hue) chal chodh ready hoja mujhe bhi der ho rahi hai office jana hai

Ladka - ok di

Ladki - acha yeh bata aaj college jaoge ya office ana hai

Ladka - di aaj college jaunga do din ho gaye hai

Ladki ne pyar se uske hotho pe halke se chuma aur usse alag ho gayi

Ladka -(chidte hue) di apko kitni bar bola hai yahan pe kissi mat kiya karo

Ladki - kyu main karungi akhir mera itna cute sa bhai jo hai

Aur ek baar aur ek hotho ko pyar se chum liya
Is baar ladka ek takiya utha ke use marne hi wala tha ki woh ladki vahan se haste hue bhag gayi aur woh ladka bhi muskurate hue bathroom mein ghuss gya

Woh ladki niche jake kitchen mein ghus gayi aur nashte ki tyari karne lagi kuch der mein woh ladka bhi ready hoke aa gya Aur dinnig table ke pass ake chair pe baith gya

Kuch der mein woh ladki khana leke aa gayi ek plate mein khana serve karke woh us ladke ki goad mein hi baith gayi

Yeh inka roz ka tha phir woh apne hatho se us ladke ko khilane lagi aur woh ladka bhi kuch der mein un dono ka khana finish ho gya

Ladka - didi aap itni badi ho gayi ho fir bhi meri goad mein baith jati ho

Ladki - to kya hua meri marzi main chahe yahan bhi baithu tumhe isse kya

Ladka - plz ese mat kiya karo azeeb sa feel hota hai

Ladki uske face ke kreeb apna face lekar jate hue in sexy voice

Ladki - kya ajeeb sa feel hota hai jara mujhe bhi batao

Aur yeh bolke usne apne hoth kate jisse us ladke ki hawa tight ho gayi

Ladka - d..d..di...didi p.p..plz hame der ho ri hai

Aur woh jaldi se apni didi ko side karke bahar ki aur bhagne laga aur woh ladki vahan khade hoke jor se hasne lagi

Fir kuch der baad muskurate hue boli apne aap se

Ladki - bhai yahi vajha hai ki mere dil mein tumhare liye pyar din wa din badhta ja raha hai itni line dene ke baad bhi tumne ab tak mujh se esi vesi harkat karne ki sochi bhi nahi I Love You bhai I really Very Love you i will wait for you for my whole life

Aur yeh bolke woh bhi office ke liye nikal gayi
Aur in dono ke jane ke baad piche se nokar ake ghar ki saaf safayi bagera karne lage
Yeh unka roz ka routine tha raat ko sara kam nipta ke sare nokar servent quatars mein chale jate the aur subha in dono ke jane ke baad aa jate the

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Door kisi shehar mein 4 log dinnig table pe baithe the sab log shanti se khana kha rahe the in mein ek mard tha ek aurat aur do ladkia thi

Itne mein Aurat boli

Aurat - Meera beta Kishan se baat hui kya tumhari

Meera - han hui thi na kal raat ko hi hui thi aur aap ke liye ek buri khabar hai ki woh zinda hai

Dusri ladki - Meera badon se baat karne ka tareeka bhul gayi ho kya

Meera - ufffff haye dar gayi main to darasal baat yeh hai miss Megha Singhania main badon se baat ni kar rahi balki main to apne bhai ke gunhegaro se baat kar rahi hu

Megha - (gusse mein) bs bohat hua tumhara manti hu ki woh hamari galti thi par

Meera - (bhadkte hue uski baat vich mein katte hue) par kya? han par kya? Aap ko aaj bhi apni galti ka ehsas nahi hai ab to aap logo se mujhe baat karne ka bhi mann ni karta padhe likhe gawar

Aur itna bol ke woh vahan se uth gayi aur bahar nikal gayi vahan baithe bakki teeno Megha, aurat aur woh mard bs nam akhen liye baithe the Meera ki baaton ne unhe dard pohanchaya tha

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Intro time

Abhay Singhania - yeh india ke ek jane mane bussinessman hai hero Kishan ke papa

Avantika Singhania - yeh hero ko maa hai aur housewife hai

Megha Singhania - yeh Hero ki badi behan hai nature ki thodi se garam hai par aaj kal yeh apni ki gayi galti ki vajha se akeli si rehne lagi hai yeh is waqt M.B.A. last year mein hai

Kishan Singhania - yeh Hero shant subhaw ka par jab gussa ata hai out of control ho jata hai aur Aaj kal Yeh dusre city mein rehta hai ghar walo se naraz hai bas apni choti behan ko chodh ke aur woh iski jaan hai dono mein bohat pyar hai

Meera - yeh Hero ki choti behan hai ek dam cute aur natkhat par jab se Hero ne ghar chodha hai tab se isne shararate band kardi hai bas tab hi masti karti hai jab iska bhai iske pass hota hai

One more main character

Pihu Gupta - yeh vahi ladki hai jise Kishan didi bula raha tha yeh Kishan ki muh boli behan hai iska Kishan ke ilava duniya mein aur koi bhi nahi hai kuch saal pehle iske papa aur mummy ki death ho gayi thi tab Kishan ne hi ise sambhala tha han kuch rishtedar hai Pihu ke jo samay pe ayenge par Pihu ke bure waqt mein unho ne uska sath nahi diya tha bas ek cousin ko chodh ke




Bakki aur bohat se character hai jo age ayenge to sath bane rahe an give me support

Nice story

 

[Lovingheart]

Bhai Apki Kahani 1li aisi Kahani hai
Jo manhoos Naam Ki Complete Hui hai
Nahi To Kuch Writers Yaha Ese Moujud hai
jo kahani Start To kar dete Hai lekin Adhuri chodh dete
Or Update mango To Kuch Bahana Banate Hai
Nice Story Bhai
Apne is Kahani me Sex se Jyada Story line ko Jyada Importance Diya ye accha laga
Ummid hai age bhi aap acchi Kahaniyan likho
Or ese hi apni writing skills se logo ka manoranjan Karo
Take Care Bhai

Shukriya dost hope mera mood ban jye story likhne ka

 

[Lovingheart]

Nice

Thanks

 

[Lovingheart]

Nice story

Thanks dost

 

[Vk248517]

Bro 3rd part kb shuru hoga

 

[Xabhi]

Manhoos : ek aise ladke ki kahani Jisne apne jivan me hajaro Dukh jhele pr sath hi sath uske khushiyo ne bhi sahara diya ek or jaha use dhokhe mile Vahi dusri or nye dost ke roop me log bhi mile is kahani ne hame hasya rulaya pr sath hi sath mauj masti bhi karvai chhal kapat or lalach me jaha uske pariwar ne use marna chaha Vahi niyati ne apna khel khela or uske jivan me saitan ko bhi bheja jo apni shaitaniyo ko khatm kar acchaiyo ki or agrasar hua... Aapne jis tarah se is kahani ko pesh kiya hai vo dilchasp hai mujhe bas ek jagah dikkat Hui Ek santanse ke khatm hone ke baad jo dusra suru hota hai Vaha, Yadi Mai flow me padh rha hu tb to Thik hai or thoda sa bhi bich me ruk gya or pichhla sabd padh kr agla sabd pdha to us sentanse ka meaning hi badal gya ho aisa pratit hota hai... Baki puri story fadu thi bhai...
Superb story bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab