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Dadaji: Thakur PrtapSingh
Age 80 years hai healthy hai Gaanv mai sab ijjat karte because gaanv ke Thakur hai and dayavaan hai.
Dadiji: MayaSingh
Age 77 hai Ye bi healthy hai husband se and unke baccho se bahoot pyar karte hai. Dyyalu hai and kisi se nafrt nai karte.
Prtapsingh and Mayadevi ke 4 Bacche hai 1 lardki and 3 ladke
1) Bade papa : Thakur ArvindSingh
Age 48 hai but abi bi healthy hai lalchi kism ke inssn hai . Paiso ke Lover hai. Bade businessman hai india Ke top 10 ameer mai enka name hai.
.Bade Mummy : NitaSingh Ye ArvindSingh Ke patni hai.
Age 40 hai abi bi koi deke to Bol nai sakta Ye 40 age Ke hai
Apne pati se pyaar karti unke jese lalchi kism ke hai.
Inke 4 bacche hai 2 larki and 2 beta
1) Bada Beta : AmitSingh
Age 25 hai Ammer baap ki bigdi hui aulaad hai. Paiso ka gmand hai . Baki age deknge hai.
2) Dusri Beti : NainaSingh
Age 23 hai. Iss be paiso ka gmand hai. Hamesa party and friends mai rehti hai dusro ko kuch bi nai samjti. Dusra age deknge.
3) Dusra Beta : RohanSingh
Age 22 hai Ye bi Apne badi behen and bhai ke tarh hai.
4) Dusri Beti : RiyaSingh
Age 22 Ye Rohan and Riya dono Judwa hai. But Riya baki sabse alg hai. Sabko pyar and respect deti hai paiso ka gmand nai hai.
Ye sabi abi college Mai hai. Delhi ke and Des ke sabse no1 college mai hai.
College name M.V. College (Iss Story mai jo bi name and dusri jagh ke name Bas kalpnik hai)
2) Dusre Bade Papa : KamalSingh
Age 45 Hai Ye bi bade BHAI ke tarh lalchi insaan hai apne bibi baccho se pyaar karte hai Apne bade bhai ke saath company chalte hai.
2) Bade mummy : NainaSingh
Age 40 hai Kamal SINGH ke patni hai Ye Achi and Melissa aurat hai apne bacho se pyar karti hai.
Inke 2 bacche hai 2 larki hai
PyalSingh And PriyaSingh Dono Judwa hai. Age 21 hai right now Abi apne bade bhai behen Ke saath college mai hai
3) Papa: SherSingh Age 40 hai but abi 25 lagte hai
Gar Mai sabse Chote hai but hosiyar hai sabse jyaada sabse pyaar karte hai but Ek se nfrt jo age pata chelga
inki Ek alg company hai jo india top 10 mai hai.
3) Mummy : NehaSingh Age 35 hai
Sabi se pyar karti sivya Ek. Baki ache aurt hai koi lalch nai man Mai.
Inke 3 bace hai 2 larki 1 ladka
1) Badi Beti : NishaSingh
Age 20 hai abse pyaar karte hai sivya Ek () jo age pata chelga.
2) Hero(Killer) : VikramSingh
Age 19 hai six pack body hai baki age pta chelga
3)Choti Behen : TiyaSingh
Hero ki jaan hai. isko pta nai ki iska Ek saga bada bhai hai buhoot cute hai and natkat hai sabki ladli hai
Dono bade papa ki company ka name hai "SINGH GROUPS OF COMPANY "
Mere papa ki company ka name hai TSS GROUPS OF COMPANY (TSS= THAKUR SHER SINGH)
4) Bua : Smita Roy
Age 40 hai Achi aurat hai apne sab ko pyar karti hai.
Fufa : Vilas Roy
Age 45 Hai india Ke jaane maane Doctor hai.
Enki 1 larki hai
name hai Khushi Roy hero Ke age ki hai. Delhi Mai rehte hai Apne cousins Ke saath college mai hai.
Ye Sab abhi Delhi mai rehte hai sivya Dada and Dadi With Joint family
Fantasy MANHOOS (REVANGE BY KILLER )
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nice updateIss story pe jo bi jagh Ke name hoge sabh kalpnik hai.
Update 2
Thakur Pratap SINGH Rajasthan ke Rampur gaanv ke Thakur hai. Unke pardada raja mahraja ke vanshaj The Isliye unke pass kafi paisa and kafi Jamin hai. Gaanv Mai sabi log dadaji ke ijjat karte hai vo hamesa sabki madad karte hai.
Baad mai Prtap Singh ki Shadi MayaDevi se ho gai jiss mai Baad mai unko 3 bete or 1 beti paida Hui.
Name and baki sab introduction mai dekh liye hain.
sab bade hone Ke baad sabki shadi karva di gai
jismai sab business karne lage so iske chalte Pratap SINGH and Maya SINGH ke siva tino bhai delhi sift ho gye
Teno bhaio me delhi mai Ek bada bunglo Ya fir yu kahu ke mahal because mahal jesa ta.
yaha par samay Age badta gaya jis mai teno bhai ke bache ka janm bi Ho gya ta dono bade chacha and meri badi bahn ka bi janm ho chuka ta. Ye sab bade hote gay sab mai bahoot pyar ta.
yaha par dono bade chacha and papa ka business bi achi tarh chal raha ta.
Dadaji and dadi bi sabhi baccho ko milne aaya karte Te sabi bacche bhi gaanv bhi jaaya karte The.
lekin iss samay papa ka business dono chacha Ke business se bi bahoot adik aage nikl gaya ta jiss se unko thodi jalan bhi Ho rahi ti.
Thode samay baad.....
Raat Ke samay ek bade hospital Ke Ek room mai Ek aurat chik rahi thi bo aurat pregnant thi
baahr Ek admi chakkar kaat raha tha bahoot tension mai tha
Bahar mousam bi bahoot bayanak tha Andhrei raat thi bahut tezi se baaris Ho rahi thi
Thode samay baad aurat ek bahoot hi Pyaare bachche ko janm deti hai jiski aankhe ek dam nili thi and bahoot hi massom dikh raha.
bachche ke rone Ke avaj sunne Ke baad bhar vala admi bahoot kush ho jata hai
thodi der baad doctor bahr aate hai and bolte hai congratulations Thakur SherSingh apko beta hua hai. Itna sunne Ke baad Vo noto ki gaadi niklte hai Dr ko dete hai and bolte mithaiyan baanto pure hospital mai Ye bolte hue vo room mai enter karte hai and bolte hai Neha aaj Tumne hamko bahoot kusiya di hai kitna pyaara beta hai.
(ji haa dosto Ye dono or koi nai balki mere mummy or papa hai )
Jiss smay bacche ka janm hua usi samy kai dur swarg mai Ek Sevak God se bolta hai akir kaar uska janm ho hi gya. Uski baat sunte hi God muskrate hai.
Chaliye chalte hai dhrti pe wapas....
Mere janam hone Ke baad mummy papa dono ghar aa jaate hai
(Ab third person ki jubaani)
SherSingh And NehaSingh Apne bacche ko leke ghar Mai aate jaha unka swagat hota hai.
bachche ki janam ki khabar gaanv bi paoonch gai thi vo bji delhi ke liye nikl jaate hai.
ab wapis delhi chalte hai....
waha gar pe Ek larki hoti hai jo bacche ko Dek rahi ti and bahoot kush ho rahi thi...
ab donon ladki donon bacche ko ek ladki ka Hath Mein Dete Hain Jo ladke ko dekh kar kahati hai ki mamma yah Mera Bhai hai na
Aurat use ladki se kahati hai ki han beta yah Tera Bhai hai
Ladki kahati Hai mai isse bahoot pyar karongi mera bhai...
uski baat sunne Ke baad sabi haste hai
sab bachche and bade bi bahoot kush the
dada and Dadi bi dusre din aa gye
unke guruji ko inform kar diya gya ta naamkarn Ke liye
dusre din naamkaran ka program rakha jaata hai.
(So guys ab story mere yani hero Ke point of view se chelgi and sabi charcter Ke name or usse rista ki hissab se chalge <Apko lag raha hoga itna chota bachcha gai to kese but iss point of view se story acchi tarah samajh aayega)
Naamkaran ke din.....
Didi mere saath so rahi ti mere haath pakd ke jese muje koi uthake le jaaye
fir mummy usko uthati and vo mujhe dekte hi bolti hai
Nisha Didi : kitna pyaara betu hai na mummy
mummy : ha beta Tera betu bahoot pyaara hai.
Fir sab tyar hote hai hall Mai aate hall bhi bahoot bada tha dada, Dadi, dono bade mummy and papa and mere saare bade BHAI behen sab tyaar The and dusri aur aur bhi bahoot memhan aaye hue the
mere sare bhai behen mere saath khel rehe the
(Guys yaha Mai dono bade mummy, papa ko name likunga)
NitaSingh : kitna pyaara bacha hai
NainaSingh : Ha sahi kaha apne bahoot hi pyaara hai.
Thodi der Me guruji bhi aa jaate hai
tab guruji bolte hai bacche ke mummy papa idar aa Ke beth jaaye
Mom merko unki goad Mai leke beti hai and dad unke pass Mai
fir pooja start hoti hai bahoot lambe smay ke Baad pooja smapt hoti hai
Tabhi guruji bolte
Guruji : bachche ko mujhe dijiye
guruji bachche ko lene ke baad usko dekhte hai and usme h kho jaate hai
Baad mai guruji dhyan lagate hai
and bahoot achambit hote hai unko paseena aa jaata hai.
Ye dek Ke sabi ko jatka lagta hai
thodi der baad guruji bolte hai
Guruji : Ye bachcha bahoot hi baagysali hoga and jo bi karya karega usme vijay hoga Jo bi isse dushmani karega uska Ye sarvanaas karega Isliye iska naam hoga VikramSingh
so guys mera name hai VIKRAMSINGH
uske baad guruji dada, Dadi and mom, dad ko ek dusre room mai bulate hai and bolte hai
Guruji : aap sabko ek mathva purn baat batani hai
sab ko unki baat sunne Ke baad shok laga
(Aisa kya bta diya guruji NE Ye next update mai dekte hai)
Update 8
Mere upar nanhisi janvi soi thi lekin mere dimag se mere family ke diye hue sare julam ka scene chal raha tha
mere ankho se nind koso dur the
dad ke sare trophies dekh mujhme ab wo junoon chha gaya tha
ki me bhi dad ki tarah har ek yudh kala me mahir banunga aur sare julam ka *BADLA* lunga .
I will take "REVENGE "
MY DEAR FAMILY MEMBERS I WILL BE BACK VERY SOON WITH ALL INTREST OF YOUR DEEDS
Dad me apki baton par jarur Amal karunga lekin me mere life ke jo sabse haseen pal hone wala tha jin logon ne mujhse wo hasin pal ke sukh aur chaen loote hain unko to me kabhi bhi nahi chhodunga
iss ke liye aap mujhe maaf karna
lekin me wo din kabhi nahi bhulunga
me jarur badla lunga
I will take my "REVENGE"
itni sare soch ko mere dimag me rakhte hue me kab nind ke aghosh me chala gaya pata nahi chala
Agli subh meri nind 6 baje kuli janvi mujse chipk ke so rahi thi mai usse uthaye bina fresh hone chala gaya fir Garden mai gaya vaha dad exercise kar rehe the
me: good morning dad
dad: good morning beta
Dad: chalo exercise karne lag jao
me: ji dad
fir dad ne bhi muje kuch exercise dikhaye mai bhi unki tarah karne laga
1 hour tak exercise kiya
dad: beta tumne jo sab kuch sikhna hai uske liye Maine do logo bulaya hai sham tak aa jaayenge
me: Ohk,and thanks dad
dad: it's Ohk
Fir ghar aa gaye mom kitchen mai thi
me: good morning mom
mom: good morning beta
mom: jaldi se apni sweetie ko utha do mai nasta lagati hun
me:Ohk
baad mai room mai aaya janvi so rahi thi
Maine usko forehead pe kiss kiya
me: chalo my angel ab jaldi se uth jao and fresh ho jao
vo bi uth gai and gaal pe Ek kiss kiya
janvi : good morning bhai
me: good morning my angel
fir vo apne room mai chali gai and mai bhi fresh hone Ke baad dining table pe agaya
fir breakfast karne ke Baad School jaane Ke tayari karne lage because aaj School me mere aur janvi ka first day tha
Mom: school ke liye ready dono
hum dono: yes mom
Mom: chalo ab main driver ko bol deti hu tumko school chhod de
fir Mai and janvi car me baith gaye and school ke liye nikal gaye
janvi bahoot kush lag rahi thi
Fir school aa gya school bahoot bada tha
fir maine janvi ko uske class me chhoda and Mai apne class ko dhunda and bahut jaldi mujhe bhi mere class room mil gaya ,me class room ke andar chala gaya and last bench per beth gaya
thodi der baad ek teacher aye
teacher : students to ajj humare class mai ek new student aaya please stand up Vikram and say about you
me bi apna name sun ke khada ho gya
me: Hlo friends my name is Vikram and my father's name is Ranvir Roy and my hobbie is reading and playing cricket
(hobbies to Maine isse hi bolte diya kuch yaad nai aaya to ) aur Mai beth gaya
mai class mai kissi se baat nai kiya and teachers aaye and padhate gaye iss tarh recess Ho gayi
mai janvi ka pass gya and usko leke canteen Mai aa gya humne kuch khaya piya and wapis byy Bol Ke class mai chale gaye
iss tarah school time finish ho gya mai to Chup chap betha raha tha class mai teacher aate gye padhte gaye
ese hi din ke sare class khatam ho gaye
class khatam hone ke baad me mai and janvi car mai beth ke ghar aa gaye
3 baje ke aspass
ghar aake pahunch gaye
mom: so bachho school kesa gaya
hum dono : acha gya
mom : chalo acha hai abhi jaldi se fresh ho jao fir kuch khaa lo
Fir hum fresh hue and thoda bahoot khana khaaya janvi bahoot kush thi
janvi NE jo bhi school mai kiya vo sab kuch batane lagi mai and mom sunn rehe the and has rehe the
iss tarah time nikal gya dad 6 baje ghar aa gye The
gar aane Ke baad
mom: aaj aap jaldi aa gye
dad: ha bas aa gya
dad: Vikram chal hum log aate hai Garden jaake thoda bahoot running bi kar lenge
me: ohk dad
mom: are aap bhi kya bacche ke piche pade hai
dad: ye iske liye bi aacha hai
mom: ha ha pata hai
janvi to TV dek rahi thi
fir hum log bahar nikle and garden ki taraf jaane lage
mai dad se aage tha
dad: are mere saath chalo kuch batana hai
me: hmm. Ohk
fir mai unke piche chlne laga vo hamre gar ke baju Mai jo gar ta usme gye mai bi unke piche chl diya
bell bajne ke Baad Ek admi NE gate khola
Fir hum andar chale gye vaha par ek aurat bi bethi hui ti
dad: beta Ye dono vahi hai jo tumko fighting and computer vagara sikyannge
dad: Ye hai Jack and ye hai Maria
Maine unko handshake kiya
(intro
Jack: age 35 body segments Ek dum fit hai
USA army mai best hai and special forces ka part bi tha ab nai hai
Sabhi fighting style janta hai ninja vagre ka bhi janta hai
Maria: age 33
Ye ek FBI agent reh chuki hai and fighting bhi janti hai but computer knowledge mai inka jesa koi nai )
( yaha bate English mai hogi but hindi mai likunga )
Dad : and ye hai Mera beta Vikram
Jack and Maria : ohk sir hum inki traning kal se start karte hai
dad: ohk.
jack : kal tum subh morning mai 4 baje idr aa jana
me: ohk uncle
Fir hum log gar aa gye and dinner karke Sone gye janvi mere pass so gayi
Maine alarm laga diya ta 3:30ka
subh alarm bajne se meri nind khuli maine jaldi se alarm band kar diya kahi janvi na uth jaaye
mai fresh hone Ke baad Jack ke vaha chal gya vaha Jack and Maria running kar rahe the
uske ghar bhi hamara jese hi tha but aaspaas ka area bahoot bada ta
Mai bhi gaya vaha pe
me: good morning uncle and and auntie
dono: good morning vikram
Jack : vikram abhi tum hum dono ko hamre name se bulana
me: Ohk uncle sorry Jack
jack : Ohk ab traning Start karte hai sab se Pehle 10 round lagao iss maidan ke 5 minutes me
mai to dekte hi chonk gya because maidan bahoot bada tha
iss tarh 7 baje training puri hue
3 hours mai muje bahoot kuch sikhaya tha and baad mai kuch pilaya jo bahoot kadva tha but Badan ka thakan jese gyab Ho gye
Jack : Vikram sham ko School ke Baad aa jana maria bi tumko jo sikhana hai vo sikha degi
me: Ohk. Jack
me:byy Jack and Maria
jack&maria : byy
Fir mai ghar aa gya vaha dad garden Mai bethe hue the
me: good morning dad
dad: good morning beta kesa raha Pehla din
me: good. But dad Apne mom ko kyu nai batya iss bare me
dad: usko bataya to vo mana karti and tension bhi rehti Isliye
me: Ohk. Dad
fir hum ghar Mai aa gye and Maine room mai jake janvi ko uthaya and fresh hone ko chala gya
baad mai break fast hone Ke baad dad office chle gye and hum dono school aa gye
Mai Scl Mai chup chap rehta tha sirf janvi ke sath baat kiya karta tha koi baat karne ke liye aye to jyda kuch bolta nai tha so koi mujse baat karne nai ata tha
iss tarh aaj ka din bhi school Jaana samapt hua
ghar pe aa Ke kuch khana Khaya
me: mom mai apne pass vala jo ghar vaha pe jaa raha hu
mom: kyu vaha pe kya kaam hai
me: mom vaha pe uncle auntie rehte hai jisko Mai morning mai Mila tha so auntie computer knowledge bahoot hai so unhone bola tha ki sikhna ho to sham ko aa jana so mai jaa raha hu
mom: Ohk. Jao
baate sun ke janvi boli mai bi sikhun sath mai
me: sweetie tu vaha kya karegi usse acha to idhar TV dek ya homework karle hai vaha pe Tu bore Ho jaayge
janvi : ha Ye bi sahi baat hai
me: Ohk. Byy mom and sweetie
dono: byyy
fir mai Jack and Maria ke gar aa gya bell bajaya
Maria ne gate khola
me: Good afternoon Maria
Maria : good afternoon vikram
me: Jack kahi dik nai raha
maria : ha vo kuch kaam he bahr gya hai. Chalo hum Apni traning Start karte hai
me: ohk
fir 7 baje tak traning chali muje bi computer mai bahoot interest tha
fir mai unko byy Bol Ke ghar aa gya dad bi aa gye The
Fir Sabne milke dinner kiya and mai room mai jaake homework finish kiya and computer leke jo sikha tha usko ajmane laga
sweetie bi niche TV dekhne Ke baad room mai agayi .humne kuch masti kiya and so gye
baki next update mai.............
Mere upar nanhisi janvi soi thi lekin mere dimag se mere family ke diye hue sare julam ka scene chal raha tha
mere ankho se nind koso dur the
dad ke sare trophies dekh mujhme ab wo junoon chha gaya tha
ki me bhi dad ki tarah har ek yudh kala me mahir banunga aur sare julam ka *BADLA* lunga .
I will take "REVENGE "
MY DEAR FAMILY MEMBERS I WILL BE BACK VERY SOON WITH ALL INTREST OF YOUR DEEDS
Dad me apki baton par jarur Amal karunga lekin me mere life ke jo sabse haseen pal hone wala tha jin logon ne mujhse wo hasin pal ke sukh aur chaen loote hain unko to me kabhi bhi nahi chhodunga
iss ke liye aap mujhe maaf karna
lekin me wo din kabhi nahi bhulunga
me jarur badla lunga
I will take my "REVENGE"
itni sare soch ko mere dimag me rakhte hue me kab nind ke aghosh me chala gaya pata nahi chala
Agli subh meri nind 6 baje kuli janvi mujse chipk ke so rahi thi mai usse uthaye bina fresh hone chala gaya fir Garden mai gaya vaha dad exercise kar rehe the
me: good morning dad
dad: good morning beta
Dad: chalo exercise karne lag jao
me: ji dad
fir dad ne bhi muje kuch exercise dikhaye mai bhi unki tarah karne laga
1 hour tak exercise kiya
dad: beta tumne jo sab kuch sikhna hai uske liye Maine do logo bulaya hai sham tak aa jaayenge
me: Ohk,and thanks dad
dad: it's Ohk
Fir ghar aa gaye mom kitchen mai thi
me: good morning mom
mom: good morning beta
mom: jaldi se apni sweetie ko utha do mai nasta lagati hun
me:Ohk
baad mai room mai aaya janvi so rahi thi
Maine usko forehead pe kiss kiya
me: chalo my angel ab jaldi se uth jao and fresh ho jao
vo bi uth gai and gaal pe Ek kiss kiya
janvi : good morning bhai
me: good morning my angel
fir vo apne room mai chali gai and mai bhi fresh hone Ke baad dining table pe agaya
fir breakfast karne ke Baad School jaane Ke tayari karne lage because aaj School me mere aur janvi ka first day tha
Mom: school ke liye ready dono
hum dono: yes mom
Mom: chalo ab main driver ko bol deti hu tumko school chhod de
fir Mai and janvi car me baith gaye and school ke liye nikal gaye
janvi bahoot kush lag rahi thi
Fir school aa gya school bahoot bada tha
fir maine janvi ko uske class me chhoda and Mai apne class ko dhunda and bahut jaldi mujhe bhi mere class room mil gaya ,me class room ke andar chala gaya and last bench per beth gaya
thodi der baad ek teacher aye
teacher : students to ajj humare class mai ek new student aaya please stand up Vikram and say about you
me bi apna name sun ke khada ho gya
me: Hlo friends my name is Vikram and my father's name is Ranvir Roy and my hobbie is reading and playing cricket
(hobbies to Maine isse hi bolte diya kuch yaad nai aaya to ) aur Mai beth gaya
mai class mai kissi se baat nai kiya and teachers aaye and padhate gaye iss tarh recess Ho gayi
mai janvi ka pass gya and usko leke canteen Mai aa gya humne kuch khaya piya and wapis byy Bol Ke class mai chale gaye
iss tarah school time finish ho gya mai to Chup chap betha raha tha class mai teacher aate gye padhte gaye
ese hi din ke sare class khatam ho gaye
class khatam hone ke baad me mai and janvi car mai beth ke ghar aa gaye
3 baje ke aspass
ghar aake pahunch gaye
mom: so bachho school kesa gaya
hum dono : acha gya
mom : chalo acha hai abhi jaldi se fresh ho jao fir kuch khaa lo
Fir hum fresh hue and thoda bahoot khana khaaya janvi bahoot kush thi
janvi NE jo bhi school mai kiya vo sab kuch batane lagi mai and mom sunn rehe the and has rehe the
iss tarah time nikal gya dad 6 baje ghar aa gye The
gar aane Ke baad
mom: aaj aap jaldi aa gye
dad: ha bas aa gya
dad: Vikram chal hum log aate hai Garden jaake thoda bahoot running bi kar lenge
me: ohk dad
mom: are aap bhi kya bacche ke piche pade hai
dad: ye iske liye bi aacha hai
mom: ha ha pata hai
janvi to TV dek rahi thi
fir hum log bahar nikle and garden ki taraf jaane lage
mai dad se aage tha
dad: are mere saath chalo kuch batana hai
me: hmm. Ohk
fir mai unke piche chlne laga vo hamre gar ke baju Mai jo gar ta usme gye mai bi unke piche chl diya
bell bajne ke Baad Ek admi NE gate khola
Fir hum andar chale gye vaha par ek aurat bi bethi hui ti
dad: beta Ye dono vahi hai jo tumko fighting and computer vagara sikyannge
dad: Ye hai Jack and ye hai Maria
Maine unko handshake kiya
(intro
Jack: age 35 body segments Ek dum fit hai
USA army mai best hai and special forces ka part bi tha ab nai hai
Sabhi fighting style janta hai ninja vagre ka bhi janta hai
Maria: age 33
Ye ek FBI agent reh chuki hai and fighting bhi janti hai but computer knowledge mai inka jesa koi nai )
( yaha bate English mai hogi but hindi mai likunga )
Dad : and ye hai Mera beta Vikram
Jack and Maria : ohk sir hum inki traning kal se start karte hai
dad: ohk.
jack : kal tum subh morning mai 4 baje idr aa jana
me: ohk uncle
Fir hum log gar aa gye and dinner karke Sone gye janvi mere pass so gayi
Maine alarm laga diya ta 3:30ka
subh alarm bajne se meri nind khuli maine jaldi se alarm band kar diya kahi janvi na uth jaaye
mai fresh hone Ke baad Jack ke vaha chal gya vaha Jack and Maria running kar rahe the
uske ghar bhi hamara jese hi tha but aaspaas ka area bahoot bada ta
Mai bhi gaya vaha pe
me: good morning uncle and and auntie
dono: good morning vikram
Jack : vikram abhi tum hum dono ko hamre name se bulana
me: Ohk uncle sorry Jack
jack : Ohk ab traning Start karte hai sab se Pehle 10 round lagao iss maidan ke 5 minutes me
mai to dekte hi chonk gya because maidan bahoot bada tha
iss tarh 7 baje training puri hue
3 hours mai muje bahoot kuch sikhaya tha and baad mai kuch pilaya jo bahoot kadva tha but Badan ka thakan jese gyab Ho gye
Jack : Vikram sham ko School ke Baad aa jana maria bi tumko jo sikhana hai vo sikha degi
me: Ohk. Jack
me:byy Jack and Maria
jack&maria : byy
Fir mai ghar aa gya vaha dad garden Mai bethe hue the
me: good morning dad
dad: good morning beta kesa raha Pehla din
me: good. But dad Apne mom ko kyu nai batya iss bare me
dad: usko bataya to vo mana karti and tension bhi rehti Isliye
me: Ohk. Dad
fir hum ghar Mai aa gye and Maine room mai jake janvi ko uthaya and fresh hone ko chala gya
baad mai break fast hone Ke baad dad office chle gye and hum dono school aa gye
Mai Scl Mai chup chap rehta tha sirf janvi ke sath baat kiya karta tha koi baat karne ke liye aye to jyda kuch bolta nai tha so koi mujse baat karne nai ata tha
iss tarh aaj ka din bhi school Jaana samapt hua
ghar pe aa Ke kuch khana Khaya
me: mom mai apne pass vala jo ghar vaha pe jaa raha hu
mom: kyu vaha pe kya kaam hai
me: mom vaha pe uncle auntie rehte hai jisko Mai morning mai Mila tha so auntie computer knowledge bahoot hai so unhone bola tha ki sikhna ho to sham ko aa jana so mai jaa raha hu
mom: Ohk. Jao
baate sun ke janvi boli mai bi sikhun sath mai
me: sweetie tu vaha kya karegi usse acha to idhar TV dek ya homework karle hai vaha pe Tu bore Ho jaayge
janvi : ha Ye bi sahi baat hai
me: Ohk. Byy mom and sweetie
dono: byyy
fir mai Jack and Maria ke gar aa gya bell bajaya
Maria ne gate khola
me: Good afternoon Maria
Maria : good afternoon vikram
me: Jack kahi dik nai raha
maria : ha vo kuch kaam he bahr gya hai. Chalo hum Apni traning Start karte hai
me: ohk
fir 7 baje tak traning chali muje bi computer mai bahoot interest tha
fir mai unko byy Bol Ke ghar aa gya dad bi aa gye The
Fir Sabne milke dinner kiya and mai room mai jaake homework finish kiya and computer leke jo sikha tha usko ajmane laga
sweetie bi niche TV dekhne Ke baad room mai agayi .humne kuch masti kiya and so gye
baki next update mai.............
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Update 17 tak honge uske baad story band ho jayegi ya compleet ho jaaygei
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bhai kya apko story as it is copy lag raha hai ya fir kahin kahin par changes lag rahe hai
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Badhiya h tow Vikram ki training Chalu ho gayi or saath school bhi
